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Re: You can't run away everytime (Atsumina) chapter 1/2/3/4 (HOT update^^)
« Reply #21 on: October 04, 2012, 04:29:20 PM »
nice updated~!!
So AtsuMina having a kiss~!!
how about Rena did she come?
Jurina is waiting for Rena...
Takamina dont worry because Acchan drunk only kiss you~!!

Looking forward for the next update.

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Re: You can't run away everytime (Atsumina) chapter 1/2/3/4 (HOT update^^)
« Reply #22 on: October 04, 2012, 09:24:10 PM »
@Moonchild: actually Jurina meant that she was waiting for Rena to be okay to do nasty things, but it's my bad, it wasn't so clear, sorry :nervous
Thank you everybody, I will update as sson as possible! :thumbup

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Re: You can't run away everytime (Atsumina) chapter 1/2/3/4 (HOT update^^)
« Reply #23 on: October 05, 2012, 07:40:39 AM »
Oooh, I liked this update a lot! That was a hot kiss! I can't wait to see how Acchan is going to act once she's sober and realizes what she's done.  :rofl:

And Takamina! Don't you run away from Acchan because you're confused! Time for more  :heart: !
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Re: You can't run away everytime (Atsumina) chapter 1/2/3/4 /5 update
« Reply #24 on: October 05, 2012, 03:38:21 PM »
Next part, things are getting complicated!!!  :( I wanted to say that maybe it's a silly idea, but I liked the idea that Minami is a little poet, that's why she's writting in her notebook. Anyway, let's go!

Chapter 5
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The day after, in a cab

Atsuko POV


A bright smile was on her lips.
This morning, she had woke up in a really good mood.

This is such a great day...Everything seems to be brighter!

She had made a decision on her way. She was going to tell Minami the truth. What she truely felt.
It was risky and unconscious, but she couldn't hold it anymore.

Your lips meeting mine...It was more than I've expected. My body was burning...

She was scared, as death.but the leader hadn't reject her during their kiss, she was even asking for more, didn't it mean that she was loving it? Maybe the captain had realized that she was in love with her...

At the theater

The Ace sighed at the entrance of the theater. It was really a big deal. The biggest of her life.

Gambatte. You can do it!

Everyone was already in the dancing room, Atsuko thought that it would be better to wait for the end of the practice to declare herself.

Be patient. You will have your all life to be next to her.

Minami POV

She's here. What should I do? I dunno...God, I feel like an idiot. She has probably forget about this.


The leader decided to ignored those facts and act as usual.
"Hey Aachan!" She said with a really sweet voice.
"Ah Minami, ohayo!"
The midget wanted to continue the discussion, talk with her more,  but they were already late so she began the training.

End of POV


The « Beginner » choregraphy was hard to do, and they spend three hours trying again. Minami was not giving up, doing the same movement again and again so everyone could understand and try to do it perfectly.
Seeing that the team was tired, and feeling that even herself was breathless, she decided to give them a break, to eat.
"All right, thank you everyone! Lunch time!"
Everyone approved and soon, little groups were formed on the floor, sharing the food and talking.
Minami wiped the sweat from her brow, took her lunch out of her bag and looked in the room. She noticed the Ace, sat alone in a corner, bending over a sheaf of papers.
"Aachan, what are you doing?" She asked as she sat next to her.
"Ah, I'm trying to learn my lines, the first drama scene is in one week!"
"...Are you saying that you're leaving in one week?" She said, frowing sadly.
"Hm...the set is in Tokyo, but I will not be here so often... I thought you knew."
"No...you didn't tell me that...How could I know..."
Atsuko looked at the leader, she seemed really sad.
"Anyway, do you want me to help you with this?" Asked the midget, showing the papers.
"Really?Great! It's annoying when I do it alone. See, you have to read the lines in red."
"Okay, what's the story?"
"Hm, this scene is between my character and her boyfriend. He's wondering why she acts so weird, and obviously, she can't tell him it's because she spend the night rescuing people with a weapon!^^"
"You enjoy that, right^^"
""Yes!!The story is funny^^"
""Okay, let's go! « Yukiko, did you sleep well? I think I saw you up last night... »"
"« Oh, I'm okay, I was just starving, so I got up to eat something! »"
Minami was looking at Aachan, this one had a cute serious air, really focus on her role.
"« Hm, I could swear I've seen something metal, and you in a black suit...strange. Anyway, you seem distant for few days. Is everything okay? »"
"« Really? I don't think so, I'm just tired. »"
"« Okay, then kiss me right now! »"
Minami suddenly realized what she had just said and blushed like crazy. Atsuko looked at her with a strange look, where the repetition had to end...? Because she seemed to want to kiss the captain.
"I'm sorry, I was just reading and..."
"It's okay Minami, I knew it would come", she smiled.
"Yaa, embarrassing!"
"Thank you anyway", said Aachan, putting the papers back in her bad, you helped me a lot!
"Etoo...now you have to eat!" She said opening her bento and already feeding Atsuko.
"Aaaah, okay good. You have to eat at least half of the box. You need to be strong for this!"
"Hay! Minami..." the tall girl pouted
"Yes?"
"I...need to tell you something after practice, you could walk me home."
"Sure! Are you okay?"
"Yeah, no worries",she smiled, a little nervous.
She ate half of the box while Minami was looking at her.
"Are you gonna kiss that boy? I mean, for the scene...?"
Atsuko stopped her movement, this was a really unexpected question.
"...Yes, I think so. Why are you asking?"
"For no-nothing."
She stood up, red as a tomatoe.
"Everyone! Let's back to work!"


End of the practice, in front of the theater.


Atsuko POV

Minami would be here in a minute...I'm so scared!
I have to be brave, and just tell her, like « Minami, you know what?I love you! », no, not like that, like « Minami, I've realized that you were more than a friend for me », no no no! Like...


"Hey, are we going? I don't want you to be cold!"
"Yeah, let's go!she said, blushing."
"Wait, tell me now, I'm so curious to know!!"
Atsuko wanted to walk but actually her legs were too shaking for that. She faced the big door of the theater and sighed.
"Yeah, hum Minami...do you remember last night?" she was looking at shoes, too shy to look at the short one.
"Yes"
That's it! Go!
"Hm...I was drunk but I didn't..."
Don't be confused, say it clearly!
"I just want to..."
She looked at the short girl and saw her frozen, looking behind the Ace, like really shocked.
"Minami?"
No answer. She wasn't moving. Atsuko turned around and saw a girl, standing there, looking at Minami.

What's going on? Who's she...?

Atsuko turned back and touched Minami arm.
"Minami? What is it?!"
The midget seemed to wake up and stepped back. The girl approached them, smiling.
"Long time no see, Taka-chan."

Taka-chan??! But who the fuck is she?? Why Minami is reacting like that??

"Who are you?" Asked Atsuko roughly.
"I'm Kanako Kirijo, an old friend of  Minami."
"Don't call her Minami!"
Atsuko's cheeks were red, she was angry without knowing why. Actually, yes, she knew! It was going to be her confession, and this girl is standing here, disturbing them and being extremely intimate with HER Minami!
"Why?^^" Asked Kanako with an insolent air.
Atsuko was about to reply but she felt Minami's hand on her arm.
"Atsuko, I think you should go home and rest, I will talk to you later", she said to the tall girl, still staring at the girl.
"Are you sure, I mean..."
"Yes, I'm sure, please go."

Minami...What's going on...?I don't like this...


"...Okay, call me. Bye."

She looked one more time at Minami, and then the girl who was still smiling, and she walked away, heart broken.

That's it for today, I need to write the next part!! I hope it's good for you! Anyway, I was wondering the other day, is there guys here or are we just girls?^^ :nervous

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Re: You can't run away everytime (Atsumina) chapter 1/2/3/4 /5 update NEW
« Reply #25 on: October 05, 2012, 05:11:45 PM »
Ah~! Nothing's resolved yet!  :banghead:

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Re: You can't run away everytime (Atsumina) chapter 1/2/3/4 /5 update NEW
« Reply #26 on: October 05, 2012, 07:44:20 PM »
Yes, I agree with you, I was just wondering, for me I love Atsumina and many others pairing, it doesn't mean anything about people sexuality or else, I was just curious, because I thought we were girls but I didn't want to offend anybody  :nervous Thank you for your answers! :thumbup

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Re: You can't run away everytime (Atsumina) chapter 1/2/3/4 /5 update NEW
« Reply #27 on: October 05, 2012, 08:46:17 PM »
O.o,
So that a Acchan having a rival huh~!
Nice... Takamina go for it~
Just make Acchan disappointed...
Taka Ganbate~!

Looking forward for the next update.

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Re: You can't run away everytime (Atsumina) chapter 1/2/3/4 /5 update NEW
« Reply #28 on: October 05, 2012, 11:43:18 PM »
UAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!
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Who is that girl!!?

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Re: You can't run away everytime (Atsumina) chapter 1/2/3/4 /5 update NEW
« Reply #29 on: October 06, 2012, 05:45:19 AM »
yeah! a rival!! come acchan figh for your husband!!

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Re: Re: You can't run away everytime (Atsumina) chapter 1/2/3/4 /5 update NEW
« Reply #30 on: October 07, 2012, 12:57:47 AM »
Eh?! Who is that girl? Don't tell me is Takamina's ex...
Poor Acchan she was finally brave enough to confess

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Re: You can't run away everytime (Atsumina) chapter 6 update NEW
« Reply #31 on: October 10, 2012, 12:51:04 PM »
Hello, I'm a little late but I've been busy with school and work, anyway, this is the chapter 6!!Thank you everyone who is commenting this.

Chapter 6


At Mikoto cafe


"What are you doing here?"
"Buisness, I have an opportunity to work here for couple of weeks. And I wanted to see you", she said, pouring sugar into her cup of tea.
"Why?" Frowned the short captain.
"Don't be so suspicious, it's been a long time, I've missed you."
Minami was sitting in front of her, waiting for something, probably the end of this meeting. She couldn't take her eyes of the girl.
"So, how are you?"continued the blonde girl
"Why, do you care?"
"Of course I care Taka-chan", she smiled brightly, outrageously beautiful.
"Don't call me that way", she said coldly. "I don't know why you're here or what you want, but it's..."
"I want you back", she interrupted her.


At a cafe, in Akihabara.

"But who is this girl?"
"I don't know Miichan, I'm telling you", Minami asked me to leave.
"This is so weird...We known Minami for years and she never talked about this girl!"
"Hey girls!" Said Mariko and Jurina has they sat on their table.
"Where were you, you two?" Asked Miichan suspicious.
"Shopping!" Smiled Jurina, showing the five bags full of clothes.
"What's up Atsuko, you seemed sad", asked Mariko.
"She's upset because a girl showed up when she was with Takamina, and Aachan had to leave", answered Miichan, knowing that it would hurt Atsuko more to repeat it.
"Really?! Was it Captain's girlfriend?!" Asked Jurina excited.
"Juri-boy, you need to learn how to be subtle", rebuked Mariko, patting her." Atsuko, I'm sure Takamina has a good reason for this, you should call her tonight."
"Yes..."nodded the Ace sadly.
"How is the girl Aachan?" Asked Jurina with a boyish look.
"Gorgeous..."
"Gorgeous?" Jurina seemed shocked, "but Aachan, I mean, compared to you, how is she?!"
"I don't know Jurina, I think most of people find her really beautiful."
"Wow, I need to see her! If even you say that she's gorgeous..."
"Haha Juri-boy, you're such a player^^" smiled Mariko, proud of her student.

At Mikoto cafe

"You what??!"
"I want you back", repeated the blonde girl.
"You can't have me back, we've never been together..."
"Okay so let's say I want you", said  Kanako with an insolent look. "Come on, you know that we belong together, we were so close!"
"Yeah, maybe before you ran away. I don't want to talk about this, I think it's a bad idea for you to be here. It was long time ago."
"Yet, you didn't seem insensitive earlier..."
"Kanako, I'm tired, I wake up early tomorrow so I'm gonna go", said Minami as she stood up.
"Okay, I'll see you soon, sleep well, Taka-chan."

Minami left the cafe, upset and disturbed. What the fuck was that...? Kanako was back, now. It was a shitty situation. She had to call Atsuko, to apologize.

At a cafe, Akihabara

Atsuko's phone rang, and the girl motioned to everyone to shut up while she put on the loudspeaker.
"Moshi Moshi?"
"Atsuko, it's me. I'm sorry for earlier, are you okay?"
The girls were all listening to the captain.
"Yes, I'm all right, and you?"
"I'm okay, I go home."
"Who was she?" asked Atsuko,unable to avoid the only important question.
"Hm...an old friend...I didn't see her in seven years."
"Oh... "
"Do you know your lines? Have you eat? You should be sleeping right now!"
Atsuko was a little embarrassed to show the members how Minami was concerned all the time.
"It's okay, I'm gonna go Minami"
"Okay, so tomorrow I have meetings for No sleeves, so I'll see you on Thursday, okay?"
"'kay, good night."
"You too, Aachan."
The Ace hang up the phone and looked at her friends.
"Wow, Leader is such a perfect girl! I wish I could be her boyfriend!!" exclaimed Jurina.
She met the icy look of Atsuko and pouted.
"Juri-boy, Takamina is Atsuko's property okay, don't go there!" Said Mariko before smacking her head.
"Well, it's not that..."Atsuko bushed.
"Wifey, we all know that you want to have Takamina..."sighed Miichan.
"How do you know?! said aachan opening wide eyes.
"Hard not to know considering that everyone who touches her is instantly frozen by your killer look, and that you're always all over her..." smiled Mariko.
"If you will be together, I could die because of sexyness overdose!! The Ace with the perfect leader...it's unreal...!!"screamed Jurina, over excited.
"That's why we need to help her, kiddo" said Mariko with a wise tone.


Wednesday, in a dressing room

Minami was sat on a corner of the room, taking a break for the rehersal. She released her notebook and her pen.

The wind is bringing you back to me.
My tears are frozen, lost in the dust.
I've got you, inside me.
I will take you to the other side.
Your fast against mine.
The trees are singing my love song.
I will touch you, easy.



Thursday, at AKB theater

Minami was the first in the theater, as usual. She looked at the stage and smiled, she loved that place, she felt really secure in it. Today she was just passing by to see the beginning of the training, and then she had a meeting with Akimoto-sensei.
"Minami?"
The short one turned around and smiled sweetly.
"Aachan, you're early again^^ How are you?"
"Good. I've missed you", she said as she hugged her.
Minami blushed but hugged her back.
"I don't practice today, I need to see Akimoto-sensei, you know."
"Oh..."pouted Atsuko as she approached her mouth to kiss her on the cheeks, "but we didn't..."
"Captain!!" this was the so lovely screaming voice of Yuko. "There is someone for you here!"
"Eeh?!" Asked the leader, turning back to see Yuko with Kanako.
Minami felt Atsuko tensed, it wasn't good! The girls reached them, and while she killed the pervert one with her eye, she stepped back from Atsuko's embrace.
"Kanako, what are you doing here? This is a private theater..."
"Be cool Captain, she seems nice!" Laugheed Yuko, clueless.
"I needed to speak with you," answered Kanako.
"I'm working" said Minami, frowning.
"It's okay Takamina, you have 30 minutes before your meeting, go, I will replace you", smiled Yuko, proud to do a good action.
"Great! Come Taka-chan, I will order you your favourite tea, like before!" Said Kanako as she grabbed her hand and pulled her out of the theater.
"YUKO!!" Kojima screamed as she smacked her head.
"Itai Nyan-Nyan!!! What is it?"
"You're so stupid!! This is Atsuko's rival, and you're making the thing even easier!"
"What? Wait!! Aachan, who is she?"
"I don't know, but you're not helping me baka!!"
She ran away in the bathroom, hiding her tears. Maybe it was overeacting, but it was honestly breaking her heart. She needed to speak to Minami and she couldn't because of this girl.


In front of the theater

"Can you take a coffee with me?"
"I don't want to Kanako. Can you please let me work?"
Kanako sighed and for the first time she seemed really sad.
"Why do you reject me like that?"
"I don't mean to be cold, it's just that you showed up like that, expecting me to be happy...It was a long time ago, maybe I'm too sensitive but I didn't forgive you."
"...Okay, maybe I can change that. People make mistake you know, maybe you don't because you're perfect but I'm not. You used to like me, it can be true again."
Minami looked at her, she seemed sad and somewhere she felt sorry. She was still beautiful.
"We can be friends if you want, but you need to stop coming whenever you want to, I have a job..."
"Okay!" Smiled Kanako. "I give you my number and you call me when you have time okay?"
"Okay" she said, not convinced that it was a good idea.
Kanako wrote her number on a piece of paper and gave it to the leader.
"So, see you soon I hope, Taka-chan!"

In the theater

Atsuko left the toilet after five minutes to reached the girls again, trying to hide her recent tears. Yuko seemed really embarrassed.
"Aachan I'm sorry, I have an idea!"
"Why am I worrying right now?"smiled Atsuko.
"No, no no it's genius again! Let me organize another party like before, but I invite Kanako. And you, you just have to seduce our leader, and show the other girl that she has nothing compares to you!"
Yuko was waiting for the Ace answer, so excited about her idea.
"Hm, I don't know, I don't want to force Minami, if she likes her..."
"Minami doesn't like her, she's just clueless..."sighed Yuko.
"Miichan, what do you think?" Asked Atsuko.
"Could be interesting. Let's do it!"
"YES!!! Aaah, okay, but it will be in one week okay, on friday night!!"


Atsuko's room


It was the third day of the set today, and Atsuko was exhausted. She had a martial training everyday for three hours, and her body was crying. It was really difficult, but interesting and exciting. Most of the time, it was helping her not to think about Minami, or she could let off steam on training hours.
Tonight she needed to call the leader, to have news and hear her voice.
"Yep?"
"Minami? It's me."
"Aachan! How are you?!"
Atsuko smiled, it was always the first question.
"I'm tired, and you?"
"How is the set?! Is it hard?! Are you cool with a katana?" Asked Minami excited.
"Haha, it's great! And no, I'm not cool, I suck at it, but I'm trying^^"
"You must be really cool Atsuko, I'm glad that you call."
Atsuko blushed, she was really happy to hear her.
"I'm exhausted, but I wanted to hear your voice."
"Aah, I will massage you next time, it's hard for you!"
Atsuko was smiling but then she heard a voice in the phone, far away.
...Taka-chan, where are the forks?!
"...Is Kanako with you?!"
"Hm, yeah, she wanted to cook something..."
"…"
"Aachan..."
"It's okay, I will see you on Friday. Bye."
She didn't mean to be so cold but it was hurting so bad. Kanako was at her house. With her. Alone. It was so hard to think about it.
She cried for a long time this night.

Atsuko POV

Minami...Am I losing you right now...? I feel like the reason of being happy everyday is gone. You're the one for me, it's never gonna change...
Who's this girl anyway? You seem so different when she's there...
This is so painful...



Almost no POV this time so we don't know what Minami is thinking and feeling...suspense^^  :nervous
 





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Re: You can't run away everytime (Atsumina) chapter 6 update NEW
« Reply #33 on: October 10, 2012, 03:19:32 PM »
acchan should make her move i guess.  ;)

look forward for next update... :bow:

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Re: You can't run away everytime (Atsumina) chapter 6 update NEW
« Reply #34 on: October 10, 2012, 05:44:38 PM »
Nice Update...
So Jurina learn all the bad staff from Mariko huh~
interesting which mean Mariko not a good senpai...
Really Sad for AtsuMina moment,
Kanako was so annoying...
Acchan must make a move,
waiting for the party part,

This update was nice,
it's bring sadness and funny,
looking forward for the next update.

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Re: You can't run away everytime (Atsumina) chapter 6 update NEW
« Reply #35 on: October 11, 2012, 04:43:52 AM »
jajja no no juriboy.. minami is the boyfriend..not the girlfriend..

come on acchan you need to be strong and fight for your husband ok?.. seduce him!!

yuuchan ..yuuchan you are soooo baka... dont hep her..

jejej i love this jealousy story jeje

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Re: You can't run away everytime (Atsumina) chapter 6 update NEW
« Reply #36 on: October 12, 2012, 01:52:14 AM »
love the new atsumina fic  :cow:
aachan needs to hurry up and mark her territory bc takamina is too dense to notice that hanako is going to try to get back with her :panic:
thanks for the update   :)

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Re: Re: You can't run away everytime (Atsumina) chapter 6 update NEW
« Reply #37 on: October 13, 2012, 01:26:41 AM »
Kanako, I feel something bad from this girl...

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Re: You can't run away everytime (Atsumina) chapter 7!!!
« Reply #38 on: October 13, 2012, 12:24:57 PM »
Update, aaaah Atsumina really got me, I hope you won't be disappointed!


Chapter 7


Thursday

"Where is it Mariko-sensei? I have sore feet!"
"Stop complaining Juri-boy, this is right here" said Mariko pointing the nearest building.
"Are you sure we can come?!" Asked Miichan, very excited.
"Yes, Aachan said that we could come today."
They reached the entrance of the building, the three of us were very happy to be able to come on the set of the drama. They followed the indications that Atsuko had left to Mariko by mail, there was a lot of people talking and working, the girls felt a little stressed to be kicked out.
"Okay! Everybody quiet, Maeda-san, are you ready?"
"Yes."
"Okay, and...action!"
The three girls followed the voices and discovered the set. Atsuko was there, all dressed with her black leather suit and her katana, doing a martial art choregraphy.
Jurina dropped her jaw.

Jurina POV


WTF...?! Aachan? This is so...hot!
She's fighting in a suit with a katana!! Aaah this is like an old fantasm, a really gorgeous girl holding a dangerous weapon...katana is classic and maybe old-fashionned but so powerful!!!


End of POV

"Juri-boy, you're drooling..."laughed Mariko.

Miichan POV


Wow, she's really beautiful and talented!! I'm very proud of her!! Minami should definitely see that...

End of POV


Mariko POV

Minami should definitively see that...I have to take a picture of this.
She did it, a really nice and sexy picture showing Atsuko focus and holding her katana in front of her as she was attacking an enemy.
I send it to Minami right away, adding my commentary: « isn't she gorgeous? You should see that for real! Come! »
Aaah, I'm satisfied!^^


End of POV

At the same time, resting room, Shin domoto kyoudai

Minami was eating teriyaki when her phone rang. As she took a bite of food, she opened the mail. What she saw made her stifle.

Minami POV

What he hell...??! Is this..? Atsuko... You're so hot!! Mariko, why are you sending me this?! And this comment? But, she's really beautiful! I knew that she would be that cool!

"Takahashi-san, are you ready to continue?"
"Eeh? Ah, yes, of course!" She said as she closed her phone, still thinking about this picture.

The rehearsal is done in 35minutes, I can go and sse Aachan after this, I'm so curious to see her work on the set!!! I can't wait for it!!



In front of the building


To: Mariko
From: Takamina

Meet me at the entrance please, I don't know where is it.


"Guys! Takamina is here!! I have to go meet her to guide her here!"
"Really? But Aachan is gonna have a break, so make it fast so we can talk to her!" Said Miichan as she couldn't take her eyes of Atsuko.

Mariko hurried up and meet Minami at the entrance.
"You've made it!!" she screamed excited.
"Yes, I have feelings that you enjoyed that^^"
"Of course!!"
The leader followed the older girl trhought the staff members and several rooms.
"Here it is..."

Minami POV

The short girl noticed Miichan and Jurina and then she followed their look.

…............................
Geez...!! Atsuko you're so hot!! What is this suit? It suits you very well, it's so sexy... I knoew this girl was beautiful and sexy but that...What?? I'm talking like a guy!! But, I mean, this chick is...gorgeous!!!!


"Haha, look sensei, Takamina is drooling even more than me!!" screamed Jurina.
"That's right, isn't because our leader is noticing the amazing sexiness, right Takamina?" Said Mariko with an evil smile, she was enjoying this so much!
"The leader understood few seconds after that Mariko was talking to her" too troubled by what she was seeing.
"What?"
"Yes, I think this is the reason, Juri-boy^^" said Mariko as Jurina nodded.

She's coming now!! God, I feel embarassed I don't even know why...maybe it's because I'm not supposed to disturb her when she works. I shouldn't have listen to Mariko...

End of POV

Atsuko POV

Minami is here!!!! This is such a nice surprise! But wait, she saw me on the set, she should have think I'm awful, I'm not credible with a katana...I'm so ashamed...


Atsuko reached the girls, already blushing.
"Hi girls, you've made it!! It's nice to see you!"
"Hey wifey! Are you okay?"
"Yes Miichan" she said as she hugged her. "Aren't you too annoyed? I'm sorry it's..."
"Aachan!!! You're so sexy!! It's really hot you know, you, this suit, the katana...!!"
"Haha...Etoo thank you Jurina..."blushing because of the player look that the young woman was giving her.
Sometimes Jurina was reminding her of Minami, when it came to her boyish side.
"You should rest, Aachan, it's nice of you to invite us on the set, it seems really nice!" Said Mariko as she gave her a bottle of water.
"Thank you, yes, it's really cool in here, everyone is really nice to me."
The three girls who had already spoken was now silent, knowing that it was now between Takamina and Atsuko. They pretended to be interested in something and let the two girls alone a moment. Atsuko blushed again, ashamed to be in this kind of suit in front of Minami.
She came to see me! Does it mean something? She's so kakkoi!
"Hello, Minami."
"Hey^^ Here, take a sit, you have to rest you know."
"Wait, Minami..."
"Yes?" Asked the leader as she looked at her.
"Hm" she blushed, "what do you think about that...?"
"About what?"
"What you saw, baka^^"
"Oh...I think...you were really...sexy."
Sexy?? Minami thinks that I am sexy...?!
"Thank you hehe."
"Stop giggling and sit!"
"Hay!" As she obeyed and sat on the nearest chair.
Minami stood behind the chair and began to massage the neck of Aachan.
"Oh Minami, this is so good..."

I've missed her contact so much...I feel so relief when she touches me...

"I miss you."
"I miss you too, Aachan. I'm sorry I you feel lonely, I'm not here for you enough lately. But I don't want to disturb you with the set..."
"You never disturb me!! I need you to be next to me all the time, in my life everyday..."
"Haha, it seems like a couple talk^^"
"Yeah, maybe it's what I want..."said Atsuko sighing.
"What??!" asked Minami, shocked by those last words.
"Guys! I think we need to go, the director is getting impatient, I think we don't have the right to be here anyway" said Miichan to the two girls.
"Yes, of course" said Minami as she stepped back from Atsuko shoulders, trying not to blush. "We're going, everybody!"
Atsuko pouted, it was always too short...
You're leaving again...When do I'll have the time to see you properly...?
"So" added the leader, talking to the Ace, "I'll see you tomorrow, at Yuko's!"
"Yeah...you're bringing Kanako right?" Pouted Aachan, already knowing the answer.
"Yes...Yuko asked me too, I don't know why..."
Suddenly out of nowhere, a really good-looking guy interrupted them.
"Aachan, we're doing the first scene again in five minutes, okay?" He smiled.
"Yes, sure. Ah, Kaoru, this is my friends, Miichan, Jurina, Mariko and Minami."
"Very nice to meet you, I'm a fan of AKB48^^"
Miichan smiled in a really girly way, already in love with him, Jurina had no reaction and Minami frowned.
"You're supposed to be Atsuko's boyfriend in the drama?"
"Hm, yeah" he said still smiling.
"Did you kiss her already?"
"Eeh?" Asked Kaoru, red as a tomatoe.
"Hm, give us a sec please Kaoru, I will be right there in 3 minutes" she smiled, embarrassed, as she pulled Minami in a corner.
"Minami, what's wrong?"
"Did you kiss him?" Asked the short one once again, pouting.
Is she jealous?
"No. Why? You don't want me to?"
"Of course not, you don't know him!"
"This is a drama Minami, of course I don't know him!... But it's okay 'coz I know you, and you can't runaway everytime" she smirked as she approached Minami's lips.
"A-Atsuko, what are you doing?!" As she stepped back.
"Right, you prefer Kanako's lips!" She screamed, pouting;
"Eeh?!" Asked Takamina, shocked and surprised by the changing mood of the tall girl.
"I have to go meet my boyfriend, see you tomorrow with your girl" she said as she turned around and go.
Minami joined the three girls, clueless.
"What's with her...?!"
"Takamina, you're a great leader, but sometimes, you're such a dumb person..."sighed Miichan.


Friday, Yuko's house 9pm

"Aachan, relax, it's gonna be okay" said Yuko as she gave her a beer.
"How do you want me to relax?! She's coming with this girl, and I don't know if I'm able to behave right..."
"Don't worry, we're all here for you" she added as she designed all the girls in the room who were talking with each other.
Miichan, Mariko, Kojima, Jurina, Rena, Tomochin.
"Thank you, Yuko" the Ace smiled as she swallowed some liquid. She suddenly felt tight in a denim short and her little black shirt. Kojima had advised her this outfit, and she was trusting her. She was just scared that Minami didn't noticed it, or like it. Kojima had say that it put her legs in value and few detached boutons let people see the beginning of her breast. It was sexy.

Near Yuko's house


"Please be nice with everybody"
"Of course Taka-chan, I can be nice you know."
"Can you stop call me this way? It's weird..."
Minami wasn't feeling very well with this situation.
"Okay, Minami then."
"No...This is just Aachan who call me this way. Use Takamina, like everybody."
"Hm" smirked Kanako, "I have a challenger, I'm gonna fight for my price tonight^^"
The leader didn't answer, she was stressing and had a bad feeling with this party...


Yuko's house 9:30pm

"Aaah welcome leader, and... "she said as she welcomed the girls at the door.
"Kanako" she smiled.
"Kanako, welcome, you're gorgeous!"
"Thank you."
"Come! Come!"
They followed her inside.
"You're not so bad yourself leader" Yuko smirked as she was looking at her clothes, black slim jeans, white tee-shirt and a black jacket. Her hair was seconded, once again.
"Thank you Yuko^^"
They arrived in the evening and everyone looked at them in silent.
"Okay everyone, this is Kanako, a friend of our leader, so be nice^^ Can I get you anything, beer, juice, beer...^^"
"Beer, thank you^^"
Kanako seemed to enjoy this party. The girls had been checked, this was the enemy, but it could be a nice girl so there was no attention in being mean or anything.
Minami greeted everyone and ended up in front of Atsuko, gorgeous as always.
"Hey...Listen, I'm sorry for yesterday, this boy seems nice..."
"No, it's okay" smiled Aachan, "it was funny actually. I had the impression that you didn't want me to..."
"Hello Maeda-san."
"Kanako...welcome."
The blonde girl had joined them and was standing next to Minami, way too close, in Atsuko's opinion.
"It's nice of you to invite me" she smirked, full of irony.
"I didn't actually, but you should thank Yuko, she's always the one with the greatest idea" Atsuko smirked back.
Minami was feeling embarrassed, the two girls were battling, and it was a bad start. She could feel the tension in the air.
"You should go and eat something, ask Mariko, we didn't eat since hours" she said at Kanako's intention.
"Sure...but don't go to far, I'm watching you...^^"
She left and Minami looked at Atsuko again.
"Sorry..."
"She's flirting with you" said the tall girl with a weird face. "I'm gonna go talk with Miichan for a while..."
The leader sighed, something was going on and she had no clue what it was...

10:30pm, corner of the evening.

Rena POV

"Come on Rena, show me!"
"No, why do you want to see it?"
"Could be bad, I'm worried" Jurina smirked.
"It's just a scratch, you just want to be pervert...!"
"Pervert?! Who do you think I am" she said as she came closer to Rena.
"You've been drinking!!" said Rena as she smelled her breath.
"Just two..."whispered Jurina in Rena's neck.

She's too close, I can't let this happen, but she's really kakkoi in this suit...!! She's such a player, but...

"Where is Mariko-sama, she should be watching you and..."
Rena couldn't continue, Jurina had jumped on her lips, kissing her.
"...Jurina!!"
"This is much better this way...let me enjoy my beers and this kiss...You can't runaway everytime Matsui Rena..."she smirked before kissing her again.


In the sofa

"Mari-chan, take your camera, Jurina is working!" Laughed Kojima.
Mariko smiled looking at her student.
"She's really good at this, don't you think?^^"
"You do realize that you are bad senpai right? Teaching her you sadistic tric and encouraging her to be a player..."smiled Miichan.
"We are pisces, we understand each other, and she was like this before!"
Atsuko joined them, another beer in the hand. She sat next to Miichan, really calm.
"How is it going wifey? Are you okay?"
"Yes"
"Okay, so it's not going well, but it's only the beginning, you have the night to take what is yours."
She stopped talking about this as Minami and Kanako were joining them on the couch, followed by Yuko. The blonde girl made Miichan move to sat next to Atsuko, right across them was Minami, next to Yuko.

Minami POV

She's so beautiful...


The leader was drinking beer tonight, because she was too stressed to stay sober. The alchohol was already making her dizzy, it was strange an unusual but pleasant. Things were differeent this way.
"So, how do you know each other?" Asked Yuko to Kanako.
"Oh, we grew up together. I know her better than anyone..."
"Do you have a boyfriend?!"Said Jurina, pressing and excited by the drink she had.
"Haha, no, I'm into girls. More into...boyish girls..."she added as she gave a teaser look at Minami, which everyone saw.
"…"
"And you, Maeda-san" said Kanako as she turned at Atsuko, "how do you know Takamina?"
Atsuko seemed lost and hesitant, because of the insolent self-assurance of the blonde.
"She's my best friend Kanako, we always hang out together, she know me very well" said Minami with a bass voice.
Everyone opened wide eyes, including Atsuko who was really surprised. The leader wasn't really the kind of person who exposed her personal life, but she had been really clear on this and Kanako was pouting.
"I go outside, I have a call and a cigarette waiting for me."
"I come with you!" Screamed Jurina, making Rena pouting.
They went outside while Yuko decided to get other beers from the fridge with Kojima.
"So, how was the set today wifey?"
"Oh good, kaoru-chan was really funny, and I had to do another fight scene, it was exciting!!"
"Kaoru-chan...? so, you're friends now or what?" Frowned Minami.
"Well" said Atsuko blushing, "he is funny and nice to me so..."
"Great..."
Aachan felt some jealousy all of the sudden, her cheeks were red from anger.
"And you with Kanako, is it alright, does she sleep at your house? Did she kiss you yet?"
She stood up and went in the kitchen, really upset.

She's really sexy when she's angry! … Where is Kanako...
I don't understand anything, but it's okay tonight...


Mariko laughed, it wa the first time she saw her leader a little drunk.

11:00pm


"Nyan-Nyan, stop being distant, I need our skinship!!"
"Aah Yuko, you've drank too much again, stop touching my brest!!"
The entrance door opened and Jurina came in, followed by Kanako.
"Guys, Kanako had a great idea, let's play bottle game!"
"BOTTLE GAME!!!I love that game!!"screamed Yuko. "Let's dot it!!"
Nobody really grumble, because of the alcohol, even Minami didn't really understand what was going on. They sat on the carpet and Yuko took a bottle of beer.
"Since I had the idea, I start" imposed Kanako, insolent.
She turned the bottle on the ground...she turned and...it stopped in front of Jurina.
The young girl had a big smile, when she was drunk and even when not, she was always loving kissing girls.
"Oh, the young player...Let see if you know how to handle a woman..."
Rena frowned, she didn't like the irrespectious tone of the older girl. Jurina approached the lips of Kanako and kissed her slowly, like a professional. Mariko took a quick picture and smiled. Kanako stepped back.
"Hm, not so bad kid..."
"Jurina is a good kisser, don't treat her like that" pouted Rena. And since you're so young and drunk, you can't kiss anyone else, it's an adult game! She said as she gave the bottle to Kojima. Nyan-Nyan turned the bottle and it went to... Atsuko.
The Ace smiled, relief that it was Haruna, it was okay with her, she didn't want to kiss Yuko!^^ They giggled and in front of everyone had a nice and gentle kiss, like real friends.
It's not the way you kissed me that night...I feel something bad in my heart, I don't like that.
"Aaah Yuko, you missed something!"laughed Atsuko.
"Mou, Nyan-Nyan, give me on!" Pouted Yuko.
"No, follow the rules^^"
The tall girl turned the bottle fastly and wait for the answer. Unfortunately, it was...Kanako.
What??! Atsuko, don't do this!! This is a nightmare, I don't want you to kiss Kanako!!
Atsuko frowned but she saw the insolent smile of Kanako, like a challenge.
"So, I'm gonna kiss the Ace, see what's so unique...^^"
It was being mean, but Atsuko chose to ignore it. She fastly topped Kanako and kissed her roughly, surprising her. She stepped back and looked at her, with an hint of challenge.
"Wow...maybe girls like me after all...^^" said the blonde looking at Minami with a smile.
Those lips...this is definetely heaven, how I could have ignored this before...I was wrong, I want her, I need her, she was right...She's so gorgeous.
"Taka-chan come ouside, I need to talk to you."
It was an order, but before Minami could realize it, she was following the blonde outside.
Atsuko sighed, it was a really bad evening, she couldn't talk to Minami... She walked next to the windows, when she heard the sound of Minami's phone ringing.. Afraid that it was gonna be her mom, she looked for it in the girl's bag. The phone wasn't there, and searching for it, she dropped a notebook who felt, opened on the floor. Atsuko frowned and picked it up.

The wind is bringing you back to me.
My tears are frozen, lost in the dust.
I've got you, inside me.
I will take you to the other side.
Your fast against mine.
The trees are singing my love song.
I will touch you, easy.


She red the other pages and dropped the notebook again, frozen.
She needed air, to breath, she felt awful in a second. She ran outside and fell nose to nose with Kanako and Minami.
The Ace looked at her leader with tears in your eyes.
"So this is true?! You have written all this things, this...love things about her...Because she just showed up one week ago, and suddenly you're in love with her...??! Who is xhe? You never talked about it!!!"
"What? Aachan? What is it?!"
"Your notebook Minami! You're writting things that I've been waiting you to tell me all this years, and it's for her...?!" she was crying now.
Shit my book...!! Wait, did she said that...?!
"Listen Aachan, I don't know what you saw, but Taka-chan and I are meant to be. You're pretty but maybe you're not the one for everybody, so be nice and get back with the others, we have things to do without you being in our feet..."
Minami and Atsuko frozed, nobody had noticed that all the girls were at the door, watching at the scene with wide opened eyes.
"Atsuko, wait!!" the leader turned at Kanako and speak with her leader voice." You!... You come in my life like this, after what you've done, I don't care that it was nothing for you, you've hurt me I don't trust you and I don't like you anymore!! And you treat my friends like shit, you think you are the world here but you're wrong! And don't you dare speak to Atsuko like that or call her Aachan!! Respect her, she has the nicest personality that I know, you're nothing compared to her, so now go home, not mine and live your life, I'm done with you!!"
Minami was breathless, fire on her cheeks, she was really angry to the blonde girl.
"Go now."
Kanako didn't answer anything, and left, defeated and not so sure of herself anymore.
Minami looked at Atsuko, still breathing hardly.
"Atsuko...I don't..."
"It's okay, I'm your friend I know it's just that..."
I want to do it...I'm afraid but i want it so much...!
"We could still be friends if you want to, anyway thank you for what you've said and..."
Enought...
Minami moved closer to Atsuko in a leap and grabbed her by the neck to kiss her roughly. Her heart was in fire, she had tingling in her fingers...
This is so good...Fucking good...
"Stop saying stupid things...you're so beautiful tonight..."whispered Minami between two kisses.
"Aah Mi-nami...!"
Minami couldn't stop, searching for Atsuko's tongue, licking it.
I knew it was you...You're the one...You're mine...
"You're mine..."she whispered.
"What?"
"You're mine Atsuko...It was you, in the book, it was you" as she kissed her one last time before taking her breath again.
Atsuko had wide opened eyes, trying to take her breath again, asking if it was real or not.
"Minami...are you...is it real??!"
"Yeah, it's my bottle game and I choose you...^^"
The girls were all amiling at the door.
Holy shit! I'm gonna collapse, this is so hot!!"screamed Yuko
"This is so sexy...I knew I would be in heaven..."sighed Jurina.
"Wifey, you've made it!"
"This is so romantic!!"applauded Kojima.

End of the POV

The two girls blushed when they discovered that they weren't alone, but the happiness was so high...
"Okay, ladies, can we get back inside now? It's freezing here!"
Everyone laughed and they came in once again. They sat on the couch, Atsuko near Minami, just to dot Takapillow, the tall girl was tired and happy. Everything was okay now, Minami had chose her, it was so perfect that she wanted to sleep on her shoulder for the rest of her life. She heard them talk for a bit but she was really numb, and she was holding Minami's hand, because she was afraid that maybe she would go away.

00:30

"Aachan... Aachan, wake up..."
Somewhere in her sleep, Atsuko heard the sweet voice of the leader, she slowly opened her eyes.
"Hm...what is it?"
"I'm taking you home, Aachan, you need to sleep" smiled Minami, she had this responsible look that suited her so well.
"No...I want to go in your home, and sleep with you..."
Minami looked at the really cute girl and giggled.
"So, my home it is!" She said as she lifted her and carried her on her back, Atsuko's arms around her neck.
"Ooh, this is so sweet, Nyan-Nyan, please stay is tonight, and sleep with me too!!"
"Okay pervert, you've won here."
"Yay!!!!"
They all accompanied her to the door.
"Don't do anything wrong to my wife okay midget?"
"Don't call me midget!! And you should stop call her your wife okay..."
"You're jealous!! Anyway, be sure to do some dirty things tonight, it's the night!!" smirked Yuko.
"Shut up hentai! Goodnight you two" smiled Kojima.

Minami was walking slowly, enjoying the moment, she was feeling really good, and she had a really cute Aachan on her back, who was half-sleeping half-speaking.
"Minami, you've made me wait...so long..."
"Gomen."
"I love you so much...you're my boyfriend now...don't you dare leave me alone...ever..."
Aachan, I won't, I promise."
"Minami is such a perfect person..."
She fell asleep on Minami's neck., smelling her scent.

01:00pm

Minami put Atsuko on the bed, and topped her to take off her jacket. She was busy trying to take off
her clothes when Atsuko grabbed her by the neck and kissed her.
"Minami, I want you so bad...you're mine, take me now...!"
They kissed like crazy, Minami was getting excited by her girlfriend lying there and asking here to touch her, it was so good...
"Aachan? Aachan...?"
The leader looked at the Ace face and realized that this one was deeply sleeping now. She smiled and stepped back to cover her with a blanket. Dam it was frustrating but it was okay, tomorrow was Saturday.

You're not gonna run away everytime Atsuko, tomorrow you will be mine!!



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Re: Re: You can't run away everytime (Atsumina) chapter 7!!!
« Reply #39 on: October 13, 2012, 02:40:06 PM »
After this pervy section!!  :on bleed:

yeah!!! we need it :D...

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