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Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
« Reply #20 on: October 07, 2012, 05:20:33 PM »
Awhh!! it hurt when acchan said like that  :mon ref:
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« Reply #21 on: October 13, 2012, 01:09:59 PM »
Best Friend - Part III


Everyday Atsuko seems so happy torturing me because her and Sato is very sweet to each other and their also kissing in public. The bad thing is, it’s just not a simple kiss but a FRENCH KISS!!!! (What the Hell!!!!) I am very disappointed to her, She is not like that in the past.

FLASHBACK

   In our secret place, we are sitting in the rock along the falls and our feet is in the water playing on it.  “Neh, Minami, if someday, I will have a boyfriend, I promise that I and my boyfriend will not be affectionate in public because I don’t want other people to gossip about our sweetness. “When she said that, my heart hurts because I love her but I can’t confess to her”.
END OF FLASHBACK
   But seeing her right now, She’s totally flirt bitch but I love her so much that I can’t be mad at her. What a poor human I am.

“Takamina” I heard someone call me and I look back at her and I saw Itano Tomomi
“The Fashionista” but I called her “Tomochin” . She is standing near the window signaling me to come to her. The couple beside me seems distracted and walk away. I come to Tomochin and asked her Why you called me? Tomochin?. “You don’t need to see them in awkward situation, you will only hurt yourself” After hearing that to Tomochin, I’m starting to cry as I hug her she hug me back too. After a few minutes, we stared to each other and suddenly she kiss me on the lips. I am very surprised and I feel my heart beat increase at the wild action of my friend.  “I am sorry Takamina, but I can’t hold it anymore. I LOVE YOU!!! More than a friend” but she said it in a whisper tone and tears flowing in her cheek. I wipe her tears using my small hands and I just smiled and I hold her hand and walk away. We didn’t know that someone took a picture of the scene that will ruin their reputation.
   
TBC,...
« Last Edit: October 24, 2012, 04:36:20 AM by Wmatsui22 »
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Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
« Reply #22 on: October 13, 2012, 02:41:58 PM »
takatomo.. eh?! really.. BUT acchan deserves that..

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Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
« Reply #23 on: October 13, 2012, 02:53:41 PM »
YAY!! TakaTomo!!!! For some weird WEIRD reason I LOVE seeing them together and I pray to see more TAKATOMO moments!!!
But.... Acchan.... why are you with him???
UPDATE SOON!!

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Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
« Reply #24 on: October 13, 2012, 06:40:13 PM »
Nooo..acchan..   :banghead:
Takatomo moment..  :inlove:
 Look forward for the next update.. :twothumbs

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« Reply #25 on: October 18, 2012, 12:22:01 PM »
Best friend – Part IV

“Tik-Tok-Tik-Tok” Arghh! It’s noisy! I immediately turned off the damn alarm clock! As I sit in my bed, there’s a little kitten and I smiled patting his small head. His name is “Sky” because of his blue eyes that is like the color of sky and that eyes remained of me of someone although her eyes is not blue but color black is very attractive. I let out a small sighed. Sky is a Siamese Cat that Atsuko gave to me when were in junior high although I have an allergy, I REALLY LOVES CAT.

FLASHBACK

Acchan! I called her “What is it Minami?” The day after tomorrow is my birthday! I said it with a smile that my dimples shown at both side of my cheek. She giggled at that sighted  and slapped me at my arm and she said “Don’t worry, Minami! I have a present to you and she winked at me and I blushed at that time making her laughed at me.


Atsuko is late! Damn! Where is she? Suddenly the door of my house opened revealing the short black haired girl with a small cage in her hand. “Minami! I am very sorry for being late again”. I ignored what she said but what’s that? As I point my index finger at the small cage. “My present to you!” Atsuko said and held me the small cage. Wow! A kitten! Kawaii! “Yeah, this small kitten is a very cute one and her breed is a Siamese, Happy Birthday! Minami! And she hugs me. (It feels good) Thank You! Acchan! I appreciate your gift but I am really happy that  your here with me in my birthday although I know your very busy. I cried at that (I’m such and crybaby). “It’s okay, Minami! Were Best Friend so, it should have a time with you. She smiled sweetly at me and I hug her back.

FLASHBACK END

I sighed heavily in reminisce of the past and well this bedroom have also a good memories of Acchan. In my bedroom, I have a medium sized bed with white and red bed sheet. Next to my bed, there is a bed side table and top of it is a red lamp. In the right to bed, there is a wooden desk and at the top of it is a computer. I also have a musical instrument like guitar and piano. Well, I like to compose a song. Sometimes, to kill boredom, I draw a abstract or I will sketch a picture of Acchan. And that is my story about my room.


After preparing my things, I dashed out my door and locked it and not far away, I can see Tomochin standing at the front gate of our University but it seemed the pretty face of Tomochin is somewhat bothered.”Ohayoo” She said to me. What’s wrong Tomochin? Do you have a problem? I asked her. “Principal Yamomoto Sato wants you to meet him at his office discussing important matters. I see her tears in the corner of her eyes. It’s okay Tomochin, I smiled to her while holding her hand. “D-Do you know already?” Nope, but I have an idea on what’s going on. Don’t worry, I will be fine.

TBC…
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Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
« Reply #26 on: October 19, 2012, 05:23:21 AM »
eh?! im confusing...

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Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
« Reply #27 on: October 19, 2012, 02:00:05 PM »
My Replies to my readers:


@Haruko-san : Sorry if my chapter is very confusing  :bow:
                       I will make it up in the next chapter.

@Origami-san :  Sorry if my chapter is very confusing  :bow:
                       I will make it up in the next chapter.
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Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
« Reply #28 on: October 20, 2012, 04:41:59 AM »
Best Friend - Part V


After talking to Principal Yamomoto Sato, I walked in the hallway that you will see me like a zombie. It hurts my heart and soul on what Principal told me about the scandal of Tomochin and I.


FLASHBACK AT PRINCIPAL’S OFFICE


I slowly walked to the pathway to the Principal’s room. I have already an idea, why Principal calls me. I will knock the door when it suddenly open revealing this evil guy in front of me, Sato Takeru. Damn! He’s smiling at me or I can say that he is mocking at me. “Takahashi-san, this time I won the game between us” (What is he mean? Yeah! I know, he win’s Acchan’s heart and for sure! I will be kick-out in this university because of the scandal. I hope Tomochin will be alright). And then he leave and bam my shoulder. “There you are Takahashi-san” Principal Yamomoto said smirking at me. “First, I want you to know that even you are the most intelligent in this campus, you are not exempted in a punishment for breaking our dear rules. As far as I am concern, we didn’t allowed the students to be delinquent and you are the first! Takahashi-san! Your disgrace in your family, for being a LESBIAN! God! Help me! And the disgusting things that you do is kissing Itano-san! You don’t have a dignity!” She said with full of angriness. I only do is nod at her, I don’t know what to say or depend myself because I think that all she said was true! But the worst thing that I heard that is breaking my heart and shattered into pieces. “Maeda-san, took a pictures of you and Itano-san kissing at the hallway and she said that she distant herself to you because she sensed that you are LESBIAN and you might be desired your best friend to be your girlfriend”. I was shocked! Acchan! Acchan will not do such thing to me like that. “From now on, I Yamomoto Sato will kicked you out in this University and I for sure that all the University in Tokyo will not accept you! You can leave now!”. She shout at me and then I take a leave.


FLASHBACK ENDS


While I am walking, I see a familiar figure that will go to my direction and that is my best friend. “M-Minami” I slap her face! How dare you to that to me?! “Do what?” Don’t play innocent here Maeda! I shout at her. You’re a traitor! I hate you so much! From now on, were not BEST FRIEND anymore nor schoolmates but a stranger to each other.


OTHER POV


“Damn!, Damn!” A woman with whip in her hand continue to say bad words while the other woman try to calm down the first woman. “I don’t know what to do for creating this damn band! I need a guy or gay or whatever that is very talented in playing musical instrument and have a nice voice!”. Suddenly, he heard a something that is very interesting to hear.
Other side of the bar, a midget is playing a guitar and sing her composed song titled “A Little Not Over You” to release her stress, loneliness and angriness that she feel that she didn’t notice the two figure listened and watching her silently.

Minami Sings playing with her guitar :

E-e-e Ouuh
E-e-e whoooa
E-e-e Ouuh
E-e-e

It never crossed my mind at all
It’s what I tell myself
What we had has come and gone
You’re better off with someone else
It’s for the best, I know it is
But I see you
Sometimes I try to hide
What I feel inside
And I turn around
You’re with him now
I just can’t figure it out

Chorus
Tell me why it’s so hard to forget
Don’t remind me, I’m not over it
Tell me why
I can’t seem to face the truth
I’m just a little too not over you

E-e-e Ouuh
E-e-e Not over you
E-e-e Ouuh
E-e-e

Memories, supposed to fade.
What’s wrong with my heart?
Shake it off, let it go.
Didn’t think it’d be this hard.
Should be strong, movin’ on
But I see you sometimes I try to hide
What I feel inside and I turn around,
You’re with him now
I just can’t figure it out

Chorus
Tell me why it’s so hard to forget
Don’t remind me, I’m not over it
Tell me why I can’t seem to face the truth
I’m just a little too not over you

Bridge
Maybe I regret everything I said
No way to take it all back, yeah
Now I’m on my own
How I let you go, I’ll never understand
I’ll never understand, yeeeeaah, ooh
Ooooh, oohh ooh
Ooh ooooohh, ooh

Chorus
Tell me why it’s so hard to forget.
Don’t remind me, I’m not over it.
Tell me why I can’t seem to face the truth.
I’m just a little too not over you.

Tell me why it’s so hard to forget
Don’t remind me, I’m not over it
Tell me why I can’t seem to face the truth
And I really don’t know what to do
I’m just a little too not over you

E-e-e Ouuh
E-e-e Not over you
E-e-e Ouuh
E-e-e



After hearing the midget's voice..


SAEKO’S POV


“This! Finally! The band will be complete!. She smiled evilly and walked towards Minami and slightly tap her shoulder making Minami screamed “kya!!!!!, Monster!!!” after hearing Monster from Minami, Saeko smacked Minami in the head. “ITAI” Saeko also shocked that this talented person is a SHE not HE. “Don’t be rude Midget in front of your sensei!” Midget?! Oi! I am not a midget! “WHATEVER” “I have a deal with you!” A Deal? After that she feels her body weak and she felt dizzy and it went black.


TBC..

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Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
« Reply #29 on: October 20, 2012, 06:47:23 AM »
eh?! minami.. spell.. really?.. atsuko?.. a band...
Im confused -_-

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Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
« Reply #30 on: October 23, 2012, 04:54:06 AM »
Best Friend - Part VI



”Yuko!” Yuko look back at me with annoyed face. “do you know where is Minami right now? I haven’t

see her for almost two weeks?” before Yuko answer my question, Haruna interrupted our conversation
 
by asking me a question. ”Why do you care? Atsuko? Correct me if I was wrong on what I heard from

others that you ruined her life by capturing Minami and Tomochin kissing. Is that what you want,

Atsuko? To ruined your best friend life because she is an “L” It is wrong that she loves you as a

woman?! Answer me, Atsuko!!! I was surprised at the sudden change of attitude of Haruna. Kojima

Haruna is a quiet, sweet and sometimes air headed but have a kind heart and long patience towards

her friends but seeing her right now, she was pissed off.

“I-I do care for her!, I do love her b-but there are things that is forbidden!.” Really?!  There’s

nothing wrong if you love someone that same as your gender as long as you love each other, you can

live happily ever after (LOL). You don’t know how much pain Minami takes when you are with Sato,

she’s crying every night, she takes all the pain by herself so that her friends will not be worried
 
to her situation! Atsuko, do you understand?! Or are you pretending to be dense!! Answer me!! She

suddenly pull my collar, her eyes met mines, I see her tears and I also surprised that my tears

already flowing in my cheeks. I-I am sorry Haruna, Yuko and Minami b-but I don’t know what to do,

I felt an arm hug me and that is Haruna, her anger subsided. I cry so much. I told them that I love

Minami so much I love Minami more than a friend. I love her as a woman but I am 3 months pregnant

and the father of my baby is Sato. And that is the reason why I always push Minami, saying harsh

things to her so that she will hate me and forget her love to me. I betrayed her when I and Sato

have an intense relationship I cried when I said it to them. Haruna and Yuko also cried and

hug me. They understand my situation and they forgiven me but there’s someone I need to ask a

forgiveness. A really important person in my life.

TBC...


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Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
« Reply #31 on: October 23, 2012, 05:15:19 AM »
omg.. a baby? no way!!

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Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
« Reply #32 on: October 23, 2012, 06:20:08 AM »
omo :shocked :shocked
dont get me wrong, i like atsumina, but in this case idt atsuko should get minami back..i mean, she's gna have to work her butt off to have any chance with her (if any chance at all) :smhid

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Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
« Reply #33 on: October 23, 2012, 07:35:26 AM »
WHOOOOOOOOOOOW
Acchan is is is  :shocked:
HAHA..
TakaTomo XD Yieee
I Lurb that
Ur Fic is really interesting
OMG I hate Acchan in this FIC  :angry:
XD
Update soon
ARigatou
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Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
« Reply #34 on: October 23, 2012, 09:07:30 AM »
sounds interesting in your fic
atsuko why you do that to minami.
she love you so much ahhhh :banghead:
pls update soon :bow:
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« Reply #35 on: October 25, 2012, 11:02:57 AM »
Best Friend – Part VII

D-Deal? “Yes, a deal between you and me” she smiled evilly making me shiver. No! I don’t want to deal with you Psycho woman! I shout and struggle in my seat that earned me smack in the head. (Itai) “what aggressive you are, but you can’t escaped here”. She said creepily. Damn this crazy woman. “knock!, knock!” when the door opened revealing two figures, the one is familiar with me because she also one of  the culprit that kidnapped me at the bar and beside her is a d-doctor? Doctor? I think because her coat is like what the real doctor is wearing and her posture seemed professional. “Saeko-san, this is Dr. Yokoyama Yui our doctor in this experiment”. “Good Job!!! Marilyn, you have a surprised gift from me” said the crazy woman to Marilyn with a wink (gross). Wait, E-experiment? What the hell is that?!!! I don’t realized that I said it loud that the three gazed at me saying “IDIOT MIDGET”. “okay, we kidnapped you to become an idol” I-idol? are you serious?! why me? I don’t have any talent that you can you used. “Why you?, great question midget” Don’t call me midget! “Whatever, midget. Anyway, I choose you because of your voice but I am disappointed that you’re a girl”. What’s wrong if I am a girl? “Simple answer to your question, midget. I need only a one BOY to complete my band that composed of 3 boys, unfortunately you’re a GIRL! Not a real girl because you look manly”. Manly? What the fuck is she implying?! “seeing her midget that somewhat trouble on what she said, but our problem will be solved if you agree to take this medicine to become a real man as she handle a black tablet. H-Huh?! The only word I said.[/pre]

Atsuko POV

How pity I am right now as I gripped my skirt and tears flowing in my cheek. I see my tears down to my hand. I regret with my decision that I made.

FLASHBACK

I read some books when someone knocked our door. “knock! Knock!” “Coming!” My mom said while walking towards the door. “Acchan, come here”. I hear my mom call me and I immediately went to the living room and I was surprised that Takeru-kun is there together with his parents. (Does he know that I am pregnant?) I feel my sweat become cold  as I sit in the couch. (I feel there will be bad happened today).  Takeru-kun said to my mom that he is responsible to my pregnancy and he’s willing to marry me. I am speechless (I don’t know what I am feeling right now but one thing is for sure that I feel empty and I don’t know why) and my mom surprised and agree to the proposal of Takeru-kun.

END OF FLASHBACK

I can’t do anything nor undo it because I know this will happened anytime sooner or later. In the first place, It’s wrong to sleep with Takeru-kun, I am only fond of him because he’s gentleman towards me and my friends, he’s also smart and definitely handsome that some girl go gaga to him. I am fooled that I fall easily to his charm and have a one-night stand and this is the effect of it. “You cry too much, Acchan” H-Haruna? She smiled to me and hug me. “don’t cry, she will understand if she knows the reason why you are marrying Sato Takeru”. I hope so, Haruna.

Ceremony at Church

While I am walking to aisle, I feel uncomfortable and my smile is a fake one. When Takeru hold my hand firmly, I gazed at his eyes. You will see that his eyes is  full of happiness and I felt more guilty. The ceremony starts. “Sato Takeru, Do you take Maeda Atsuko to be your legal wife in sickness and in health, by richer or poorer , till death do us part” the priest said. “I do” Takeru said easily with no hesitation in his voice. “Maeda Atsuko, Do you take Sato Takeru to be your legal husband in sickness and in health, by richer or poorer, till death do us part” “…………”  (I suddenly remember all the happy and sad memories of Minami. Her smile, lame jokes and her eyes full of honesty and love) all the audience seemed distract when I didn’t answer the question quickly. I see Takeru somewhat afraid on what will I answer but I think it’s too late if I don’t marry this guy, Minami will also be mad at me. Nothing will change if I choose one. “I-I do” and you may kissed the bride. Takeru at first hesitate to kiss me but he do it smoothly but in the corner of eye, I see someone standing at the door and somewhat familiar because of his height but he is a guy not a girl that I know. Then he left but I see in his eyes the sadness and pain.
“I think this is goodbye and give up my love to her. She’s happy with that guy and I must begin my new life with my new friends and find someone to fixed my broken heart.

TBC…


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Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
« Reply #36 on: October 25, 2012, 12:42:27 PM »
That was really heart breaking :cry:
Don't give up on Acchan, Takamina!!!
Tnx for the update....

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Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
« Reply #37 on: October 25, 2012, 01:13:10 PM »
F*ck Nooooooooo!!!!

What just hppend?
My god!

Update soon! :banghead:

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« Reply #38 on: October 25, 2012, 01:56:00 PM »
yeah~ really broken heart  :on shady:
someone please fix her Taka's heart!!!  :mon pray2:

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Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
« Reply #39 on: October 25, 2012, 04:28:39 PM »
totally heart broken to see Acchan say "I do" to Takeru... Quick heal Taka heart !

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