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Re: KumiYuri Fanfic - Chapter 3 14/10/12
« Reply #20 on: October 14, 2012, 01:14:35 AM »
Hi all! I AM BACK! I couldn't resist typing the idea down LOLS! so i'm BACK!!! Sorry if the chapter's are short~

@JuRikki - Lols~ Thanks for waiting! and! Sorry for the wait! :P IM BACK!!
 
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Chapter 3


The class has finally ended and yuria realized the amount of study that she would have to work on because she almost didn’t understand anything that the teacher was talking about. Well, no one could blame her, she had been bullied since young and that was probably the reason why she didn’t like to study. Especially not in that kind of harsh environment.

“haaaa… finally over…” Yuria said with a sigh and laid her head on the table.

“Yuria, see you tomorrow~ we are going home now.” Takamina and the group said as they waved goodbye to yuria.

“Ah, by the way, yuria, if you have anything you don’t understand you can text us. We will always help whenever we can.” Takamina said as she waved her phone before saying another goodbye and walked out of class.

Yuria smiled, as she was glad that there was finally someone in her class that cares about her. Takamina and her friends were nice people.

Yuria packed her bag and sent a text message to her mother saying that she would be staying behind in school for a while. She wanted to start studying as soon as possible.

“Yosh.” Yuria picked up her bag and noticed that kumi was asleep again.

“ehhh…” Yuria looked around. No one was around. Everyone had gone home. It was just her and kumi.

Yuria put down her bag and watched kumi’s sleeping face.

“so cute…” Yuria thought to herself. She was happy just to see kumi in her life again. The kumi that helped her back then. They were teenagers now, and kumi had turned into a beautiful young girl. Yuria wanted so much to touch kumi’s cheek but she controlled herself. She didn’t want kumi to freak out.

Yuria continued watching kumi until her phone rang and startled her.

“M-mum?” Yuria whispered.

“Yuri, I will be going overseas for awhile, it’s a sudden decision that was made by the company. Dinner is in the fridge and I left money for you on the table. I gotta go now, Love ya dear~” Yuria’s mum said before hanging up.

“E-eh?! O-overseas… I will be alone…” Yuria said as she looked at her phone and sighed.

“Alone?” Kumi spoke suddenly and startled yuria. Her phone almost drops to the floor because of the shock.

“Y-yagami-san?!” Yuria said as she hugs her phone close to her.

“Yo.” Kumi said as she ruffled her hair and stood up.

“Eh?? Everyone is gone again?! Seriously, nobody ever wakes me up…” Kumi said as she took her bag and slanged it over her shoulders before giving a small yawn.

“Aren't you going home yet?” Kumi said as she looked at yuria.

“E-erm, I was thinking of going to the library before I go home…” Yuria said and blushed.

“Library at this hour?” Kumi raised an eyebrow.

“Y-yea, my mum went overseas today… I might as well study in school since I will be alone at home anyway…” Yuria said as she clutched her phone.

Yuria was afraid to be alone. She didn't like the feeling of loneliness. She would think of the times where people will bully her when she is alone. She had become reliant on her mother.

“hmmm…” Kumi gave a simple respond before continuing:” See you then.” Kumi said a short goodbye before walking out of the classroom, leaving yuria alone.

“… Kumi… do you really not remember me?...” Yuria said and clutched at her phone again before heading towards the library.

Yuria was amused by how big the library was in this school. There were variety of books for her and she didn't know where to start.

“ehhh… I don’t know where to start…ah, maybe this will help…but… this will help too… ehhhhh….” Yuria pouted and looked around.

The library was quiet and there was nobody in sight. It was no surprise. Everyone in this school had above average grades and personal home tutor, therefore, they didn't need to study in school at all. The library was just a place for leisure reading.

“… alone again…” Yuria flipped open her phone and saw that it was already 7pm.

“eh? Time flies by so fast…” Yuria closed her phone and decided to just head back home. The quiet atmosphere was starting to creep her out.

There were only a few students left in school, mostly waiting for their butlers to come and pick them up. Even so, yuria felt relief that there were still people in school. She did not really like the dark. Especially when she is out alone.
Yuria made her way out of school and walked towards the bus stop. As expected, nobody was around. Yuria took a sit while waiting for the bus. The next bus was scheduled at 730pm and that was 15 mins more to go. Yuria took out her hand-phone and started browsing on random webpages. It was something that she would usually do to keep herself occupied when she is alone.

 “Wow, it’s our lucky day guys. What a cute girl!” A tall guy with an Afro hair said as he walked towards yuria.

Yuria was engrossed in her phone and didn't hear the hooligans approaching.

“Hey girl, are you alone? Need us to bring you home? Hahahaha!! Or you wanna hang out? Come on let’s go party.” The guy with the Afro hair said.

Yuria did not respond, as she was engrossed with her phone.

“Oi! Lady! Didn't you hear what our boss said?!” Another guy stood out from behind the Afro head and slapped the phone away from yuria’s hand.

Yuria was in shock. This again… why was it always her, she thought to herself.

“W-what do you want…” Yuria said as she started to stand up and back away.

The stench of the guys was making yuria uncomfortable.

“Lady, come on don’t be shy, let’s go party. I bet it will be fun!” The Afro head said as he hiccup. It seems like the group of guys had been drinking and they were looking for trouble.

“S-sorry, I am in a hurry!” Yuria excused herself and wanted to walk away but it didn't go smoothly. She didn't even have time to grab her phone that was on the floor.

“You are not going anywhere! HAHAHA! Come with us, or we will just party here!” The Afro head said again and laughed.

“I-I am not interested!” Yuria said as she tried to push away the guys but they were too strong and drunk. She backed away and ended up tripping on a small pebble.

“Oh no! This is a bad timing to trip, baka!” Yuria thought to herself.

“Come on guys the lady fell, grab her and let’s go!” The Afro head guy was getting impatient and he ordered his man to grab yuria.

“N-no! Let go!” Yuria slapped away the Afro’s head arms and kicked a few of the guys.

“How dare you!” The Afro head reached out his hands and was about to slap yuria.

*Jing. Jing *

Yuria heard a familiar jingle.

“Kumi!” Yuria thought to herself.

Sure enough, just when yuria shouted kumi’s name in her head, the Afro head’s hands were blocked before it could land on yuria’s face.

“...” Kumi was still covering her head with her hoodie and she was still listening to her headphone.

“WHO THE HELL ARE YOU!” The Afro head bellowed.

*Jing. Jing*

“HUH? OUCH!” The Afro head guy was hit right in the stomach.

“BOSS!” The other guys rushed to check on the Afro head’s condition.

“GET HER!” He bellowed in rage and his man surrounded kumi.

Yuria was still sitting on the ground, stunned by what just happened. She couldn't see clearly but she was sure kumi had landed a punch in that Afro head’s stomach, so fast that she couldn't see.

“Yo.” Kumi didn’t bother about the guys who were surrounding her. Instead, she turned to yuria who was still sitting on the ground and she lightly hit yuria on her head.

“Time to go.” Kumi said as she grabbed yuria’s wrist and pulled her up.

“Eh? But, those guys, they are surroun-“ Yuria’s opened her eyes in shock.

The guys who were surrounding kumi were all lying on the ground, every one of them in pain.

“You said something?” Kumi said as she pulled down her headphones.

“N-no, n-nothing…” Yuria said as she looked at the fallen guys and then looked at kumi with an unbelievable look on her face.

“Let’s go.” Kumi was still holding on to yuria’s wrist and this made yuria blushed as kumi led her to a nearby bicycle.

“Hop on.” Kumi said.

“E-eh?!” Yuria blushed again. The thought of holding kumi from behind made her face heat up.

“? What’s wrong?” Kumi said again.

“W-where are we going?” Yuria asked.

“…” Kumi looked at yuria and lightly hit her head again before saying: “Home of course.” And gave a small smile which made yuria fluttered for the nth time of the day.

Yuria hopped on to the bicycle and kumi started peddling.

The journey to yuria’s house was quiet but yuria was more than happy to be able to be this close to kumi.

“I…” Yuria said.

“Hmm?” Kumi answered.

“I-I thought you went home already…” Yuria said. She wanted to know why kumi was still around.

“You thought wrong.” Kumi said as she turned back and smiled to yuria.

Yuria blushed and held on to kumi’s waist when kumi started picking up speed.

Kumi smirked.

“We are here.” Yuria looked up and saw that she was already outside her house.

“T-thank you.” Yuria said as she loosens her grip on kumi’s waist and went down from the bike.

“Nights, and here.” Kumi passed a piece of paper to yuria.

“It’s my phone number.” Kumi smiled before wearing her headphone and cycled off.

“Eh? How did she know where my house was?” Yuria said as she did not have the chance to ask and kumi was gone like the wind.

“Kumi’s number… I finally got it.” Yuria smiled to herself and blushed. She headed into her house and closed the door.

Kumi cycled out from a corner and shook her head.

“Yuria… Baka da na~ If you looked closely enough, I had given you my number years ago…” Kumi jingled the bell on her hood bell and smiled: “It’s in here.”

She cycled off, knowing that yuria was safe at home.






TBC~

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Re: KumiYuri Fanfic - Chapter 3 14/10/12
« Reply #21 on: October 14, 2012, 03:10:38 AM »
Nhyoooooo Kumi is so awsome *.*

I want a Kumi for me 8D

Nice update o/ thaaanks

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Re: KumiYuri Fanfic - Chapter 3 14/10/12
« Reply #22 on: October 14, 2012, 06:35:47 AM »
Kumi ;__; be mine please...

Aaaah kumi!!! <3

Lucky Yuria!
And, ah, kumi gave her number inside the bell. But Yuria don't notice it..

Great update as always!! ^^

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Re: KumiYuri Fanfic - Chapter 3 14/10/12
« Reply #23 on: October 14, 2012, 09:45:17 AM »
EHYAA?

MN?

HM?!

THAT IS SO CUTE. KUMI HAD ALREADY GIVEN HER HER NUMBER. Aw~ *gushgush* :shy2:

I kind of expected Kuumin to secretly have all of Yuria's stuff moved into her own... house. But then I thought... :mon huh:

...that would be weird if it was just the first day, no? :farofflook: :bigdeal:

 :heart: :heart: I ask myself... why didn't I get a notification for this when it was on my notify list. :dunno:
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Re: KumiYuri Fanfic - Chapter 3 14/10/12
« Reply #24 on: October 14, 2012, 09:49:28 AM »
Kumi is cool!!  :ptam-shy: Super Kumi to the rescue for yuria!!  :cool1: :shy2: haha!
Yuria didnt remember that kumi gave her number before. What a great storyy  :nya: :wriggly: :on bleed:
Thanks for the update!! Really excited for the next chapter  :mon angel: :mon cigar: :gmon bye:



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Re: KumiYuri Fanfic - Chapter 3 14/10/12
« Reply #25 on: October 15, 2012, 05:22:15 AM »
Jehovachiabi Saikou!


I REALLY LOVE YOUR FANFIC. 

YEAH!   :wub:

KUUMIN IS SO COOL!!

But yeah... Yuria didn't notice Kumi's number in the BELL!

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Re: KumiYuri Fanfic - Chapter 3 14/10/12
« Reply #26 on: October 15, 2012, 09:46:27 PM »
Wei update!

 :tama-yeeaah: Kumi was so kakkoi!
Oh so she actually put her phone number in the bell?

Kumi must be from a very rich family...or more like mafia...
I'm suspicious..

Thank you for your update!
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Re: KumiYuri Fanfic - Notice (I am Back) 19/10/12
« Reply #27 on: October 18, 2012, 10:48:56 PM »
@BbSis - Hi thanks for commenting! Be prepared for more cool kumi hoho~
@JuRikki - Thanks for commenting! Kumi is cool isnt she hahhaha~ somehow i just feel like giving her a cool character after watching magical radio 2 the rocker kuumin  LOLOL
@Crossing Crossroads - Well~ its only chapter 3 and its still on the first day LOLS but... NO SPOILERS FOR NOW HAHAHHAHA!!
@Tam_atsu - Thanks for commenting! Kumi is cool in this series LOLS! mysterious and cool~ oho I hope i didnt disappoint you!
@GinkoX -  WOW hmm first time commenting on my fanfic if im not wrong THANK YOU VERY MUCH!!! Comments always makes me motivated to write xD
@Megumi - Lolsss mafia~hahahhaha thats quite a great idea actually LOLS well~ you will see~   :mon sweat:


To ALL - :mon cute: :on woohoo: Thanks for commenting! All the comments made my day! Just wanted to reply all of your comments and tell you guys that YOU ARE AWESOME!! lols~ I hope this series wont disappoint you. :kneelbow: All your comments are my motivation! Sorry for not updating in so long... I had tons of assignment and barely slept at all for the whole week. :err: :fainted: :scared: BUT! I have finally finished my last assignment and before my next assignment start in 2 days time,  i will update this fanfic!  :whistle: :nya:

I hope you all are not disappointed with this fanfic lols~ :bored: If there are any parts that you do not like or do not understand please feel free to tell me! More comments, more improvement! Plus motivation! xD  :bingo:



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Re: KumiYuri Fanfic -Notice (I AM BACK) 14/10/12
« Reply #28 on: October 19, 2012, 06:46:30 AM »
Hohoho! Dont worry you never disappoint  me  :thumbsup i'll wait for the update so goodluck!!  XD



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Re: KumiYuri Fanfic -Chapter 4 22/10/12
« Reply #29 on: October 21, 2012, 08:06:57 PM »
Chapter 4

Yuria was at home, alone and she realized that she didn't have her hand phone with her. She had forgotten about her hand phone when kumi offered to cycle her home.

“… ahhh I better get it back! The bell!” Yuria said as she grabbed her jacket and headed out of her house again.

The cold air hit yuria in her face and she shivered a little. Being the clumsy girl that she was, she forgot her jacket and now she was shivering with the night wind on her skin.

She finally arrived at the bus stop where she dropped her phone. She searched the spot where the phone was supposed to be at but she didn't see it.

“eh… I remembered clearly that it’s here…” Yuria scratched her head and continued searching.

“Hey Hey look who is here!” A guy’s voice could be heard.

Yuria turned around and she felt herself shiver again. This timeit was from fear. It was the afro guy from this evening. He was still hanging around with the group and yuria noticed that her phone was in his hands. 

“Looking for this?” That afro guy held up yuria’s phone and dangled it by the bell that was on the phone.

“S-stop it! You can take the phone! Please! Just give me back that bell!” Yuria’s eyes widened in shock when she saw that the bell in the afro guy’s hand.

“Huhh? The bell… HEH I SEE NOW.” The afro guy smirk and look at his underlings before continuing: “Hey guys, do you hear the lady? She said to return the bell! HAHAHAHAH!”

The underlings laughed as their boss mocked at yuria and disregarded her pleas.

“P-please just give it back! I will do anything!” Yuria clutched on her shirt and her eyes was fixated on the bell in the afro guy’s hand.

“Anything?” The afro guys raised an eyebrow before grinning widely. HE looked at his underlings and smirked before saying: “Get her.”

Yuria regretted her words and started backing away. She panicked and started running away.

“I knew you would run! Get her now!” the afro guy shouted and started chasing her.

It was cold and yuria was still shivering. It really didn't help that she had to run from these guys in this weather. She wished kumi were here now. She pushed the thought out of her mind and focused on running.

“Haa..Haa..” Yuria’s leg started slowing down, as she didn't hear any footsteps behind her. She turned around and sure enough, there was no one in sight.

“eh?... Am I fast or are they just slow?... My bell… I have to get it back!” Yuria turned around and started walking back slowly and cautiously.

“eh? Where have they gone… my bell…” Yuria looked around and did not see any signs of anyone chasing her. She continued walking for a short distance before jumping back in shock.

“Heh! Found you!” The afro guy and his underlings surrounded yuria and forced her into a dead corner.

“W-what do you want from me!” Yuria backed away and leaned against the cold wall. She shivered again at the contact.

“What do we want? Your friend has hurt us and now you are gonna pay for what she did! HAHAHHAA.” The afro guy took of his afro and revealed a disgusting oily head. He licked his lips in a revolting manner and his underlings started laughing too.

“G-get away from me!” Yuria didn't move from her position. She looked around to see if there was any object that she could use. However, nothing could be found.

“Come now, HAHAHA! You are OURS!” The afro guy started to move in and made the first move.

“N-no! Get away!” Yuria used her super kick and kicked the afro guy in his stomach.

“A-ARGH!” The afro guy was in rage and in pain.

“GET HER NOW!” the afro guy ordered his underlings and they went all in on yuria.

The guys one by one throwed a punch but yuria dodged it. She kicked them down but they just stood up again. She was out numbered.

“HA-Ah!” Yuria received a blow on her back and she fainted before she could counter that blow.

“Kumi… Bell…”  Yuria managed to mouth these words before fainting.

“HAHAHA! Now that we have got you! Guys! Carry her and bring her back!” The afro guy commanded.

“Yes boss!” The underlings moved towards yuria.

*JING, JING*

“*sigh* seriously… I thought you guys would have learnt your lessons just now… you leave me no choice…” Kumi appeared behind the afro guy.

“You again! Heh don’t get cocky!- Opf!” The afro guy clutched his stomach and kneeled down.

The underlings were watching and they ran when their boss were defeated. They did not want to go through the same pain again as this afternoon.

“Are you gonna leave her alone or do I have to make you…” Kumi jingled her bell again and kicked the guy again in the stomach.

“OpF! Y-you..Y-you are! K-kumi… YAGAMI KUMI?!” The afro guy widened his eyes.

*jing, jing*

“Y-yagami… kumi! S-sorry I didn't know that girl was your friend!” The afro guy kneeled down and apologized.

“… Scram…” Kumi said with her headphone still on and she snatched yuria’s phone from the afro guy.

The afro guy turned and ran for his life.

*sigh*  Kumi sighed as she did not even bother to watch the pathetic figure of the afro guy and she walked towards yuria who was on the ground.

“Mou… seriously you airhead girl… falling into such an easy trap…” Kumi carried yuria on her back and shook her head.

She walked out of the alley and felt yuria shiver from the wind. Kumi stopped in her tracks and she put yuria down. She took off her precious hoody and covered it on yuria before carrying yuria on her back again.

“I didn't know you could kick like this.” Kumi giggled.

“kumi… bell…” Yuria mumbled as she snuggled to kumi’s back.

“I’ve got it back for you… baka da na~” kumi smiled and patted yuria’s head.

Kumi continued walking towards yuria’s house and she opened the door to yuria’s house with the key that yuria brought with her.

“nice house…it’s… so warm…” Kumi said to herself and brought yuria to her room.

Kumi layed yuria on her bed and looked at yuria. She brushed a strand of hair from yuria’s face and smiled.

“kawai…” Kumi looked at yuria for a few minutes before standing up to look around the room.

“This room is so warm… just like you yuria…” Kumi smiled and looked at yuria again.

“Ah! Almost forgot…” Kumi placed yuria’s phone on the table and took her jacket.

*jing,jing*

“See you tomorrow, yuria-chan.” Kumi smiled for the last time and walked out.

The next morning came and yuria woke up, stretching like a kitten.

“… e-eh?” Yuria looked at the time, it was only 6 in the morning and she tried to  recall what happened the previous night.

“… My phone! The bell!” Yuria jumped up and looked around.

“H-how did I end up in my house!... O-ouch…” Yuria rubbed her back and slowly recalled again what exactly happened.

“I remember going back to the bus stop to get my phone and those guys were there again…and then…we ended up fighting in the alley and… I fainted when they hit my back…” Yuria rubbed her sore back.

“And then… “ Before yuria could recall what had happened, Her phone rang and she looked at the source of the sound.

“M-my phone?!” Yuria stood up and walked towards the table. She received a text from an unknown number.

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Subject: Yo…
By:xxxxxxxxxxx

Hey, be careful next time.
Your phone…

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“e-eh? W-who is thi-… wait a minute!” Yuria took out a piece of paper that kumi had given her and she checked the number with the one on her phone.

“I-it’s kumi! She texted me!” Yuria said as she almost squeeled from excitement.

“W-wait… she knows about my phone… then… it must be!” Yuria finally remembered what happened yesterday night and she smiled and hugged her phone closely to her chest.

“Kumi… you helped me again…” Yuria smiled to herself and looked at the text message. She did not know how to reply to the message. She was afraid that she would sound too excited. Hence, she decided to thank kumi in person.

“Kumi… do you remember me? Why do you keep helping me?” Yuria had questions that she didn't have a answer to. She wanted to know. She needed to know. She decided to just keep these in her heart for now.





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Re: KumiYuri Fanfic -Chapter 4 22/10/12
« Reply #30 on: October 21, 2012, 08:34:23 PM »
Ahhh~ For some reason I think this is adorbs~ Now I'm really convinced that Kumi is a daughter of a yakuza family..~ That's fine... EVENBETTERRR... :heart: because for som reason, when I think of yakuza couples, I think of 1 yakuza forced to marry someone else, yakuza or not and... mn... it's complicated to explain.. :huhuh
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Re: KumiYuri Fanfic -Chapter 4 22/10/12
« Reply #31 on: October 21, 2012, 09:34:56 PM »
Ah, omg omg omg omg omg!! Kumi......
You make me fall for Kumi more!! ;__;

This fic is really cute wiwiwi ><

Thanks for the update :twothumbs

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Re: KumiYuri Fanfic -Chapter 4 22/10/12
« Reply #32 on: October 22, 2012, 02:19:22 AM »
WAAHH!!! THIS IS WHAT I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR...((i sneaked in to my pc to check this.))

this really made my day!

I Love how Yuria kicked the Afro's LOL.

Looking forward to your Next Update..  :lol:


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Re: KumiYuri Fanfic -Chapter 4 22/10/12
« Reply #33 on: October 23, 2012, 02:13:49 PM »
The scene where yuria kick the afro was funny!!  :lol: Still kumi is really cool here xD thanks for the update  :D :twothumbs



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Re: KumiYuri Fanfic -Chapter 4 22/10/12
« Reply #34 on: October 23, 2012, 04:19:58 PM »
HELL YEAH!!!!

YURIA KICK!!!!!!  :twothumbs

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Re: KumiYuri Fanfic -Chapter 4 22/10/12
« Reply #35 on: October 23, 2012, 06:57:01 PM »
Nhyoo Kumi so cool and sweet o/

Yuria why you had to be so careless ><

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Re: KumiYuri Fanfic -Chapter 4 22/10/12
« Reply #36 on: October 23, 2012, 07:37:33 PM »
@Crossing Crossroads - Lols!!! mafia's daughter hehe or something scarier than that (JK) LOLS gonna find out next time xD
 
@JuRikki - kumi is cool~ lols in this fanfic LOL! thanks for falling in love with her xD

@GinkoX - Aww!!! Sry for the long wait!! and thanks for commenting! lols sneakily~

@Tam_atsu - Lol i thought of peace when i wrote that scene xD

@aoi_sora - YURIA KICK! taken from peace kick xD

@BbSis - lols yuria the cute but baka girl hehehe she will have more of this moments~



Thanks everyone for commenting. I will start typing chapter 5 soon and upload it as soon as i can xD
Thank you for being so patient with me! :D

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Re: KumiYuri Fanfic -chapter 5 29/10/12
« Reply #37 on: October 28, 2012, 10:01:04 PM »
Hi all sorry for the long wait! Here is chapter 5! xD



Chapter 5

Yuria got ready for school and took a deep breath before leaving the house. Today, she will bring out the courage to thank kumi for saving her.

Yuria arrived in school and it was busy and crowded as usual. Students were rushing to class. Yuria didn't like rushing so she just continued strolling at her own pace. She looked at her phone and opened the message that kumi sent her and smiled to herself.

“o-ouch! S-sorry!” Yuria did not look at where she was going and bumped into someone.

“…”

Yuria did not hear any response and she looked up to see the person whom she had been thinking off was right in front of her.

“Y-yagami-san, s-sorry I wasn't looking at where I was going.” Yuria blushed at their close distance and stepped back.

Kumi just laughed and continued: ”it’s ok,” she continued walking while yuria stood there and watch the back of kumi. After walking a few steps, kumi took her headphone off and turned back and said: “aren’t you coming? Class is starting soon.” She looked at yuria with an amuse expression.

“E-eh, Y-yes!” Yuria looked at kumi and blushed as she ran a few steps to catch up to kumi. She walked behind her and kept looking at kumi’s back view.

Kumi stopped abruptly causing yuria who was behind her to hit her and she almost fell but kumi was just in time to catch yuria by her waist. This action triggered a staring contest where they both stared into the eyes of each other.

“T-thank you…yagami-san…” Yuria said and blushed as she looked away.

“no prob…” Kumi swiftly stood up, still holding yuria’s waist.

“Call me kumi…” Kumi said as she released yuria.

“E-eh?!” Yuria said in shock.

“I mean… I’m not use to someone calling me yagami-san… so, call me kumi.” Kumi said as she smiled at yuria.

“Thank you, k-kumi-san.” Yuria blushed and hugged her bag.

“Welcome, let’s go we’re gonna be late for class.” Kumi smiled again and put on her headphone before starting to walk again.

“Kumi-san…” Yuria blushed and catch up with kumi.

They arrived in class together and it got the attention of the class.

“See! I told you they would come to school together!” Miichan said in excitement.

“Argh? I lost the bet!?” yuko said as she chewed on her bread.

“e-eh?” Yuria looked at takamina in confusion.

“Hahaha! Don’t mind them they are just messing around.” Takamina said as she laughed at the reaction of miichan.

“…” Kumi was at her seat in a flash and the first thing she did was put her head on the table and slept.

“Ehhh? Kumi-san?” Yuria said, as she looked at kumi who was fast asleep.

“Let her sleep she will wake up when the teacher comes.” Takamina smiled.

“See! I told you she would start calling kumi by her name!” Yuko said as she punched her fist in the air.

“AWW! Why didn't I think that far!” Miichan said and pouted.

Yuria blushed when she heard what miichan and yuko had said. She looked at kumi and smiled a small smile and this did not go unnoticed by mariko as she secretly snapped a photo of yuria’s smiling face.

The teacher walked into class and the classroom became quiet. Kumi woke up as though she could sense the teacher’s presence.

“w-wow…” Yuria thought to herself and wondered why kumi knew when the teacher was coming.

Kumi saw yuria looking at her and smiled at yuria. She pointed towards the teacher and looked in front to concentrate.

Yuria understood what kumi was saying and she concentrated for the class until break finally came.

“YATTA! BREAK TIME!” Miichan and yuko stretched and jumped out of their chair and went to gather around takamina.

“Hey guys settle down!” Takamina said as she signaled to where kumi was. Kumi was staring out the window and listening to the music.

“S-sorry. HAHAH! Let’s go eat, I’m hungry!!” miichan said as she wrapped her arms around yuko and mariko.

“I’m fine actually, it’s you who is hungry right?” Mariko said as she squinted her eyes and stared at miichan.

“Ehhehe~” Miichan stick out her tongue playfully and smiled.

“Ok, ok let’s get something to eat… Kids…” Takamina shook her head and tapped atsuko’s shoulder.

“acchan, let’s go eat.” Takamina smiled. Acchan smiled back and closed her book before taking takamina’s hand.

“Yuria are you coming with us?” Takamina asked.

“Y-yes!” Yuria packed her things and was about to follow takamina but she couldn't resist the urge to look at kumi.

She turned around and suddenly said: “K-kumi-san, do you want to have lunch with us?”

Yuria stood very still on the spot when those words came out of her mouth. She didn't know where she had that sudden surge of courage. She covered her mouth and waited for a reaction. Takamina and the group had heard what yuria said and they held their breath. Even their classmates perked their ears up and were curious about what happenes next.

Kumi was always the mysterious type and no matter how takamina and the group asked her, she would never say yes immediately. They were very curious about what kumi’s answers would be.

Everyone was waiting for kumi’s answer and they looked intensely at kumi who was still looking out of the window.

“I dun think she heard you…” Nyan nyan said air-headedly.

“Nyan Nyan!” Yuko nudged haruna and covered haruna’s mouth with her hands.

Everyone’s attention was turned back to kumi and they held their breath when kumi shifted a little.

Yuria was nervous. She wondered if kumi would accept her invitation.

Kumi sensed that the mood of the classroom was weird and she turned around to find everyone staring at her. She was confused and shocked. She looked at her own shirt, shoe and bag to check if there was anything wrong with her before taking off her headphone and asked: “What’s wrong?”

“K-kumi-san, do you want to have lunch with us?” Yuria asked when no one answered.

“…” Kumi didn't answer. She looked at yuria and touched her own stomach.

“Sure.” Kumi said as she stood up.

Everyone gasped and was all very very shock.

“Ehh? Kumi just agreed to have lunch!”

“Omg?! Kumi-sama just agreed to have lunch! This is the first time!”

The girls were gossiping and wondered who yuria was. To be able to eat lunch with the popular group in class and to be able to have kumi eat lunch with them, this was not anything just anyone could do.

“Good job yuria!” Miichan shouted mischievously.

“Yeah! Good job!” takamina said as she smiled.

“…” Kumi didn't say anything but walked towards the group and yuria blushed.

Kumi walked pass yuria and found it strange that yuria was not moving but before she could turn back to see what yuria was doing,

“Yuria let’s go!” Miichan shouted and yuria snapped out of her trance.

“O-okay!” She jogged cutely towards the group.

The group headed to the canteen excitedly and they chatted happily.

“Ok! Time for some food!” Miichan said as she clapped her hands and was racing off with acchan.

Yuria laughed and looked at kumi. Kumi was staring at miichan and acchan with wide eyes as they were pushing through the crowd for food.

The group went to their normal table and people noticed the new member in the group.

“I-it's Kumi-sama! Omg! It’s really kumi-sama!” One girl squealed.

“Eh?! Kumi-sama?! T-this is new!” Another girl screamed.

“…” Kumi put on her headphone and closed her yes.

“e-eh? Kumi… sama?” Yuria tilted her head and turned to look at takamina in confusion.

“Kumi is actually very popular with the students here because of her good grades, plus, she is really mysterious and that makes her looks cool.” Takamina laughed and looked at kumi.

Yuria looked at kumi and she could understand why so many people liked kumi. She was cool, mysterious, caring, and there is just her aura that is different from others. She felt safe when she is with kumi.

Yuria was still looking at kumi but kumi caught her looking and she smiled at yuria. Yuria blushed and turned away as miichan and acchan came running back with loads of food. This short moment was once again captured by mariko and she smiled a small smile before showing the photo to takamina. Takamina gave a thumbs up and took out her phone and texted the group.

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Subject: Kumi and yuria
 Seriously guys! Look at this picture! This is just a huge hint for us to get them together right?! But, kumi said to not tell yuria about her! Let's do the usual! We have to do the usual!

By:
Takamina

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The group received the message and shortly after that,

“Lets eat!” Miichan sat down in a flash and started gauging on the food.

“Seriously miichan you should slow down!” Mariko chided but miichan just waved her hands and continued eating. Mariko shook her head.

“Acchan! You should slow down too!” Takamina said but was shutted by the food that acchan feeded her.

“Nee! Nyan Nyan~ I want to do that too! Come say ahhh~” Yuko said as she clinged to haruna.

“S-stop it yuko! This is embarrassing!” Haruna was pushing yuko away but at the same time accepting the food that yuko was feeding her.

Yuria laughed along with the others and kumi was eating her food quietly as usual. She was also secretly watching yuria’s smile and she was smiling a small smile whenever yuria smiled.

Yuria noticed that kumi was eating in silence and she wanted to talk to her.

“K-kumi-san, i-is the food nice?” Yuria said awkwardly.

“hmm? Yes, it's nice. How about yours?” Kumi said as she ate a mouthful of food.

“It’s nice too!” Yuria said as she smiled happily. This was the first time she had the courage to talk to kumi and with every word that she said; she was becoming more and more comfortable with talking with kumi.

“You want some?” Kumi asked suddenly.

The group turned towards kumi when she asked the question and they were all in shock.

“e-eh?!” Yuria’s eyes widened.

“Here, try some of this, it’s nice.” Kumi scooped some of the food to her spoon and she gave it to yuria.

“T-thank you.” Yuria blushed and stared at the spoon. ‘Kumi’s spoon… I-inderect k-kiss?’ Yuria blushed again and pushed the thought out of her mind.

Yuria accepted the spoonful of food and her face lit up when she had a taste of the food. It was really nice. Watching her happy face, kumi smiled and continued eating her food.

The group was speechless and they decided that it was seriously time for the usual plan…







TBC~
« Last Edit: October 28, 2012, 10:11:08 PM by jehovachiabi »

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Re: KumiYuri Fanfic -chapter 5 29/10/12
« Reply #38 on: October 28, 2012, 10:21:49 PM »
Yeaaay!! FINALLY!! \(^^)/ they're so cute!!

And the groups are confused for Kumi's act to Yuria! XD

And the 'feeding' scene, I love it!! <3
Kumi makes me so warm <3

Thanks fo the update Jehovachiabi-san (^^)

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Re: KumiYuri Fanfic -chapter 5 29/10/12
« Reply #39 on: October 29, 2012, 01:09:40 AM »
Finally you updated it!!!!
Wow! This chapter is great specially the last part!!   :wub:
Yuria is really specially to kumi because she accept yuria's invitation to eat with them  XD
The attitude of the group towards the two is funny!!  :thumbsup
Hope you'll update soonnnn!!!  :bow: :wub: :)



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