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Re: KumiYuri Fanfic -chapter 11 25/11/12
« Reply #80 on: November 24, 2012, 08:21:31 PM »
kumi and yuria are so cute  :love:
love this fanfic looking forward to next update  :cow:
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Re: KumiYuri Fanfic -chapter 11 25/11/12
« Reply #81 on: November 24, 2012, 10:38:51 PM »
nhyooooo They are so cute *.*

I love scenes like the bathroom ones :heart:

hauahuahua Just too curious about what Takamina's troupe will do xD

I can't wait chapter 12!!!! I want to know about that talk ><

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« Reply #82 on: November 25, 2012, 05:22:25 PM »
I love this fanfic is the best.
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Re: KumiYuri Fanfic -chapter 11 25/11/12
« Reply #83 on: November 25, 2012, 09:50:59 PM »
oh my god! you are the best!!! i love KumiYuri :heart: :heart:

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Re: KumiYuri Fanfic -chapter 11 25/11/12
« Reply #84 on: December 03, 2012, 03:45:49 PM »
kumi and yuria are so cute  :love:
love this fanfic looking forward to next update  :cow:


Thanks for the comment! and im glad u liked the fanfic! :D


nhyooooo They are so cute *.*

I love scenes like the bathroom ones :heart:

hauahuahua Just too curious about what Takamina's troupe will do xD

I can't wait chapter 12!!!! I want to know about that talk ><

BAthroom scenes are always  :wub: but like i said, it will be a very cliche story hahahh~ You will know what is the conversation about soon! :D


I love this fanfic is the best.
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Thanks for the comment!! and i am really happy that u love this fanfic! :D


oh my god! you are the best!!! i love KumiYuri :heart: :heart:


(Y) yay hehehhe kumiyuri is so cuteeee~ thanks for commenting!! ;D


To all,

thank you for your patience. I am sorry to tell you that you will have to wait for another 2 to 3 more days before i will update because i am currently working and i have fallen ill T_T sorry for the delay~

But good news is~ chapter 12 will be a longgggggggg chapter! To make up for the time you all waited, i will definitely reveal the meaning of that phone call and takamina's and the groups plans!

Once again, thanks for all the comments and have a nice day!! :D



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Re: KumiYuri Fanfic -REPLIES 03/12/12
« Reply #85 on: December 04, 2012, 02:57:40 AM »
I WILL BE WAITING FOR CHAPTER 12! haha.

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Re: KumiYuri Fanfic -REPLIES 03/12/12
« Reply #86 on: December 04, 2012, 04:12:51 PM »
Everynight i come here to check if it had update because i enjoy reading your fic. I love it, i'll wait~~~~~

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Re: KumiYuri Fanfic -REPLIES 03/12/12
« Reply #87 on: December 07, 2012, 12:37:39 AM »
me too really I want read the next chapter ...  :panic: :panic:

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Re: KumiYuri Fanfic -REPLIES 03/12/12
« Reply #88 on: December 09, 2012, 06:18:32 AM »
JEHO??? I miss kumixyuria
Get well soon!
And update soon!

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Re: KumiYuri Fanfic -REPLIES 03/12/12
« Reply #89 on: December 09, 2012, 10:41:45 AM »
JEHO??? I miss kumixyuria
Get well soon!
And update soon!

Hi Hi Sorry the chapter is getting longer as i type lOLS i promise to update it tonight! It's 3/4 done :D See you tonight!

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Re: KumiYuri Fanfic -Chapter 12 10/12/12
« Reply #90 on: December 09, 2012, 06:22:50 PM »
Hi guys~ As promised~ Here is a super long kumiyuri chapter 12.
 This chapter is really long so hold on tight because you will have to read this till the end hahah!


Chapter 12

Takamina and group’s POV*

“Hello? Mii-chan? Where are you guy’s?! It’s almost time to meet kumi. We need to hurry up!” Takamina said as she paced up and down the pavement while waiting for miichan and the others.

“Ok, Ok we got it, we are on the way! 5 more seconds! Anddd…” Takamina waited for a reply when miichan suddenly remained silent.

“We are here!” A door to a posh car open and miichan stepped out, shouting to takamina. 

“Mou, takamina you are here way to early, there is still 1 more hour to go before kumi arrives.” Yuko yawned as she stepped out of the car.

“Takamina, you have to chill.” Haruna pouted as she stepped out of the car.

“Oh guys come on break it up. We were supposed to be here 15 mins ago. So it’s our fault for being late!” Mariko stepped out of the car and locked it.

“See~ you guys were supposed to be here 15 mins ago!” Takamina pouted.

“Minami~ chill chill, it’s too early to pout~” Atsuko wrapped her arms around takamina’s neck and smiled.

“Ok since all of us are here, let’s proceed with the plan.” Takamina said as she glanced at her watch before saying: “we can grab something to eat after we are done.” She smiled at the group.

It was 7am in the morning and the group woke up early to proceed with this plan.

“Wow, this place is huge. Let’s split up.” Mariko said.

“Indeed, it’s huge! K, I have 3 maps here, let’s each proceed to the assigned area.” Takamina said as she handed out the maps.

“Guys, remember to use that bicycle there to travel around. It would be faster and easier.” Takamina pointed to the bicycles.

“Roger that!” Miichan said as she happily ran towards the bicycle with yuko skipping behind.

Miichan and yuko took a bike each and went to their respective partner.

“May I have this ride?” Miichan laughed cheekily and winked at mariko.

“Of course.” Mariko smiled and hopped onto the bike as miichan sped off to their destination while shouting: “FOODDDD!!!”

The group laughed at miichan’s antics.

“Nyan Nyan, let’s go~” Yuko said and smiled.

Haruna hopped on to the bicycle and blushed as yuko shouted: “WOOOO!!! NYAN NYAN IS HUGGING MEEE!!!!” and cycled off.

“Well, acchan let’s go~” Takamina said and turned around but did not see acchan around.

“Acchan?! Where are you?!” Takamina looked around.

“Minami~ what are you waiting for, let’s go let’s go!” Acchan was on the bicycle, ready to go.

“E-eh?! Do I have to cycle?!” Takamina said as she saw acchan sitting at the passenger seat.

“Mou~ of course you are the one who will be cycling, right m-i-n-a-m-i~” Acchan smiled innocently at takamina.

“… I got it…” Takamina gave a sigh of defeat and hopped onto the bicycle. She felt acchan holding her from behind and she smiled as she cycled off.

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Location 1 & 2
(Miichan and Mariko)

“Mari-chan, we are here~” miichan said as she stopped in front of the haunted house.

“E-eh?! I didn't know we were in charged of this place…” Mariko said as she reluctantly got down the bicycle.

“Hahaha don’t worry! I will be here with you! Let’s go~” Miichan said as she dragged mariko into the haunted house.

“M-miichan w-wait!” Mariko was reluctant to go into the haunted house.

“Oh come on!” Miichan did not stop.

They stepped into the haunted house and mariko felt Goosebumps on her hands. She gripped on miichan’s hand and kept close to her.

“T-this is so creepy.” Mariko said as she had her eyes half closed.

“Hahaha~” Miichan just laughed at mariko’s reaction.

“Ah!” She suddenly said.

“W-what!?” Mariko jumped a little and pulled miichan back.

“No I was just thinking we could add a little more blood to this wall. Hahaha!” Miichan said and continued walking.

“D-don't’s scare me like tha- AHHH!” Mariko screamed as a head suddenly dropped down in their path. Miichan screamed a but because she was shocked by mariko’s scream but she settled down and giggled a little because this was the first time miichan saw mariko’s weakness.

They were finally out of the haunted house with mariko dashing to the exit in a very fast speed.

“Alright! It’s all set, let’s go to the next destination and after that we are done~” Miichan said as she spiritedly walk out from the haunted house.

Mariko was back to her old self as she slaps miichan lightly on her arm when miichan was cycling off towards another location.

“Yosh! Next destination! Ferries wheel!” Miichan said as she cycled towards the location.

“uwahhh mari-chan! Let’s go, let’g go!!!” Miichan said as she excitedly got down from her bike.

“Mou, mii-chan you are like a child!” Mariko said as she looked at miichan who was skipping happily around.

“We have to prepare the things first before we can ride the ferries wheel ok.” Mariko coolly said before walking into the shop and got all the things from there before signaling miichan to follow her.

“Wow, I am sure kumi will like our plan. Hahaha!” Miichan said as she set up the things with mariko.

After they set up the things, they went on a ride in the Ferris wheel.

“The view is awesome, the mood is nice, kumi will be sure to confess today!” Miichan clapped her hands excitedly and daydreamed. Being a fangirl of romance manga, she made sure to set this location up with the best ambience, her years of reading romance manga and the skills she learnt from it was put into good use now.

“Good job miichan.” Mariko said as she smiled at the look of bliss on miichan’s face.

“Nee marichan…” Miichan suddenly said in a very serious tone.

“Y-yea?” Mariko asked as miichan was looking at her intently.

“…”

“…”

“I’m…”

Mariko gulped.

“I’m hungry!” Miichan said as she gave a pained expression while clutching her stomach.

“Hahaha! I knew it!” Mariko laughed as she heard miichan’s stomach growling.

“Come on let’s go meet up with the rest.” Mariko said and laughed at miichan.

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Location 3 & 4
(Yuko & Haruna)

“Nyan nyan! We are here!” Yuko shouted excitedly.

“Uwaaaa it’s been so long since we came here!” Yuko ran towards the arcade.

“Yuu-chan! Wait for me!” Nyan nyan ran after yuko.

“Mou! Yuu-chan! Why didn’t you wait for me!” haruna huffed, tired from running.

Yuko did not respond to haruna’s question. She was beaming at a soft toy, which was hanging in the machine.

“Nyan nyan… That soft toy…” Yuko pointed at the soft toy and looked at haruna.

“I have decided!” Yuko pumped her fist into the air and said: “I will give it to you as a present!” Yuko beamed at haruna and ran towards the machine.

“E-eh?! Yuu-chan!” Haruna followed yuko and saw that she was already playing on the machine.

“Ahhh! Almost!!” Yuko said as she hit her own arm lightly and continued.

“Yuu-chan…” Haruna walked off, leaving yuko behind to play.

10 mins later~

“Yosh! Just a little more to go! Anddddd YES! I GOT IT!” Yuko said and jumped excitedly. “NYAN NYAN I GOT IT I GOT IT!!” Yuko turned around and did not see any sign of haruna.

“N-nyan  nyan?!” Yuko grab the soft toy from the machine and walked around while calling out for haruna.

“Nyan nyan!! Where are you?!” Yuko shouted again.

“Yuu-chan!” Haruna ran towards yuko and saw the soft toy in her hands.

“Wow you did it!” Haruna said.

“Where did you go nyan nyan, I was so worried!” Yuko said.

“Ah! Sorry, you were so engrossed in the game so I decided to check out the place and set up a few things on the way so that you can concentrate.” Haruna said.

“Nyan nyan…” Yuko hugged haruna and gave her the soft toy.

“We are done here, let’s go to the next destination.” Haruna continued: “Thank you for the gift.” And kissed yuko on her cheeks.

Yuko’s eyes opened wide and she stiffened. Haruna had to drag yuko out of the shop before yuko went back to her old self and hugged haruna tightly.

Their next destination was to check the lights at the small fountain located at the center of the square.

“Ok, all done! No problem here.” Yuko smiled and continued: “Let's go meet up with the rest so that we can have our breakfast~” She clanged onto haruna smiled in bliss.

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Location 5
(Acchan & Takamina)

“Acchan, we are here.” Takamina said and slowly got off the bicycle.

Acchan had fallen asleep and woke up when takamina called her name.

“Ah, the guys are all here.” Acchan said as she looked at the others who were cycling back.

“Hey, everything set?” Takamina asked.

Everyone gave a reassuring nod and takamina smiled and said: “Yoshhh, last thing to do, breakfast! This one is on me! Thanks for all the work.”

Takamina and acchan was in charge of double confirming every location that the other four had checked and they were in charged of the resaurant’s menu. Acchan owned the restaurant and she designed all the menu’s so she knew what to add in kumi’s special menu.

“Guys, we will have the food on the special menu for breakfast so that we can check if you are all ok with the choice of food.” Acchan smiled and lead the group into the restaurant.

“Maeda-sama, the table and food are ready.” The manager of the restaurant bowed when he saw acchan.

“You can serve the food now thank you.” Acchan said and gave a small bow too.

The group sat down and waited for the food.

“Acchan, good job in handling this restaurant. It has a nice ambience and the decorations are so classy. As expected of you.” Mariko said.

“Thank you~ I couldn't have done this without the help of minami.” Acchan smiled at takamina and snuggled close to her.

“W-well, it was part of what I was suppose to do.” Takamina said and scratched her head as she smiled.

“Yea, anything for your wife right?” Miichan teased and yuko laughed along.

“Shh, the food is here!” Takamina shifted the attention to the food before anyone could continue the teasing.

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“Acchan! This is brilliant! The food is so delicious!” Miichan said and gave thumbs up.

“Hahaha! I knew you would like it! We have the same taste afterall~” Acchan laughed and ate a mouthful of the food.

“The food is really delicious!” Haruna said.

“Glad you all like it!” Takamina said.

“Yosh, our sets up are complete. It’s almost time to meet kumi. Let’s make sure kumi confesses today!” Miichan said and prayed.

“Kumi is so slow in showing her love for yuria. It’s getting frustrating seeing them look at each other secretly but not openly.” Yuko said.

“Yea! It’s time they know that their feelings are mutual!” mariko said.

“Ok, let’s meet up with kumi now and hope for the best today.” Takamina said and the group high-fived.

END OF Takamina and group’s pov

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“Kumi! Yuria! Here!” Miichan waved enthusiastically at yuria and kumi when she saw them.

Kumi and yuria walked towards the group and kumi noticed the strange atmosphere because every one of them was smiling too happily.

“Hey.” Kumi greeted coolly and yuria looked at kumi.

Kumi was so sweet to yuria and yuria was not used to kumi’s cool side.

“You guys are early,” Yuria said as she looked at the time.

“E-erm, what are we going to do now? Kumi didn't tell me the details…” Yuria said in a soft voice, as she did not know what was happening. Kumi had just dragged her out of the house this morning.

“Ahem, welcome to Akgarden.” Takamina cleared her throat and pointed to the huge park behind them.

“W-wow…” Yuria’s eyes lit up.

Kumi was looking at the group who was looking very suspicious because they were standing in a very straight line.

“Shall we go?” Kumi asked yuria and gave a small smile.

“ウん!” Yuria nodded and followed kumi.

The group looked at each other and smiled sheepishly before following kumi and yuria.

Kumi knew they were up to something at first glance. Years of detective skills had kicked in when she saw the glance that the group was giving to each other.

“Uwaaa this place is huge, I haven’t really been around town since I moved here.” Yuria said in awe as she looked around like a curious little child.

“Yea, I thought so too, that’s why I brought you here.” Kumi said as she held up a map and walked towards yuria.

“We are standing here right now, so…” Kumi paused for a moment.

“W-wow the map is huge…” Yuria said.

“Start here?” Kumi pointed at a location. 

“Eh?! There’s even a arcade here?!” Yuria said as she looked at the map.

“This place is unbelievable!” Yuria continued in a very excited tone.

Yuria looked up to find kumi staring at her.

“I-is there something on my face?” Yuria said as she touched her face.

“A-ah…n-no it’s nothing.” Kumi avoided the question and looked at the map and continued: “Let’s go…”

Yuria blushed when she heard kumi stutter.

“Hey kumi!” Miichan ran towards kumi and yuria and recommended a spot.

“I heard the haunted house is fun why not try that?” Miichan continued as she winked at yuria who gave a very confused look.

“H-haunted h-house?!” Yuria half shouted as her eyes opened wider at the suggestion that miichan gave.

“Are you okay?” Kumi said as she looked at yuria.

“Y-yes…” Yuria said in a small voice.

“…” Kumi didn't say anything.

“Ah! We have to ride a bicycle around this place because it’s too big to be walking around. Let’s go!” Miichan led yuria and kumi to the bicycle stand where 4 bicycles were ready for them.

“Let’s go it’s right up ahead! It will be fun! I promise!” Miichan gave a big smile and looked at mariko.

Kumi smiled at miichan’s excitement and she knew that she had something up to her sleeves. Kumi sat on the bike and motioned yuria to hop on.

“Let’s go yuria.” Kumi smiled and held out her hand.

“O-ok.” Yuria blushed as she thought of the time kumi saved her from the thugs.
“Isn’t this familiar?” Yuria heard kumi asked and she looked up to see kumi smiling at her.

“Y-yes.” Yuria blushed.

“Hold on tight.” Kumi cycled faster to keep up with the group who was speeding deliberately.

“We are here!” Miichan announced.

“W-wow… Is this really a haunted house?... This is like a haunted Mansion…” Yuria said as she clutched her bag.

“Haahaha! Don’t worry it looks big but it’s really just like a normal haunted house. You guys can go on ahead. We will be following behind.” Miichan said as she pushed kumi and yuria to the front line.

There wasn't really a crowd because they were there early. Kumi opened the door and it was almost pitch black. Yuria trembled a little nervously.

They walked in with kumi leading the way and yuria was following closely behind. As they close the door, a creepy music could be heard on the background.

“Don’t worry, if you see anything, just remind your self that it isn’t real, ok?” Kumi looked at yuria and smiled warmly.

“O-ok…” Yuria’s voice trembled.

As they walked through the corridors of the haunted house, there was a sudden green light in the darkness and yuria screamed a little and said: “A-ah!! W-what was that?!”

Kumi, who was in front of yuria continued walking but with a slower pace because yuria was walking slowly.

“K-kumi… I-I’m scared.” Yuria was trembling even more than before.

“It’s ok, you are not alone.” Kumi smiled and yuria was glad that kumi was with her.

Without warning, kumi gently held yuria’s hand and said: “There, you won’t be so scared now.”

“U-un…” Yuria took a deep breath and tightened her grip on kumi’s hand. She felt safer than before.

As they continued through the corridor, there was an opened door and when kumi took a step forward, a doll suddenly flew out from the room and hit the wall with a ‘SPLAT’ sound. Blood could be seen on the wall.

“K-kumi!” Yuria closed her eyes and her grip tightened again on kumi’s hand.

“It’s ok yuria, it’s just a doll. Let’s go.” Kumi smiled and led the way.

They continued down the corridor and when they were supposed to turn, a head dropped down from above causing kumi and yuria to jump back.

“A-ahhh!!” Yuria screamed and fell.

“W-wow that scared me a little…” Kumi said as she kicked the head away when she calmed down.

“Yuria are you okay?” Kumi asked in concern.

“I-I’m okay…” Yuria said, trembling.

Kumi felt yuria’s trembling hands and she took the headphone that was hanging around her neck and placed it on yuria’s ears.

“I will carry you from here. Hop on.” Kumi said and smiled as she squat in front of yuria.

Yuria did not decline because she was scared out of her wits. The calm music from kumi’s headphone calmed her down a lot.

“This is familiar too.” Kumi smiled and continued: “Hold on tight, I am gonna sprint.”

Yuria blushed as she leaned her head on kumi’s back and wrapped her hands around her neck.

Kumi started running and when she felt yuria’s grip tightening around her neck, she smiled and sprinted in a speed that yuria has never experienced before.

Within seconds, they were at the exit of the haunted house and the group was following behind them.

Kumi turned around to see the group of 6 running out of the haunted house.

“Wooo that was fun!”Miichan said as she banzai-ed. Mariko was rubbing off the goose bumps that were on her hands. Acchan was clinging onto takamina and yuko was laughing loudly. Haruna was smiling weakly.

“Oh? You two…” Yuko eyed kumi and yuria sheepishly.

Kumi put yuria down and smiled while yuria blused at yuko’s comment.

“Wasn't it fun?! Right?! Right?!” Miichan laughed heartily.

“I-it was too scary!” Yuria said and hit miichan’s arm lightly.

“Hahaha! Maa maa~ we had fun right~ Let’s go to the next destination~” Miichan laughed it off and held out the map as she pointed to the arcade.

“Let’s go have some fun in the arcade!” Yuko dragged haruna towards the bicycle.

“Arcade~!!!” Miichan shouted in excitement and takamina shook her head.

The group hopped onto their bike and yuria-tapped kumi’s shoulder.

“Hmm?” Kumi said.

Yuria passed the headphone to kumi and said: “Thank you.” Before blushing deepyly.

“Welcome, can you put it around my neck please?” Kumi smiled.

Yuria nodded and gently put the headphone around kumi’s neck. Kumi was smiling brightly.

They reached the arcade and yuko was still excited even though she had her fun earlier in the morning.

“Yosh! Let the game begin!!”

Thr group separated when yuko and miichan ran off and takamina was dragged off by acchan.

Kumi smiled as yuria ran towards the shooting game corner where they had to pair up to shoot zombies.

“Kumi! Let’s shoot some zombies!!” Yuria said as she took a gun and handed it to kumi.

They started shooting away and were having so much fun. Yuria kept glancing at the smile on kumi’s face and she smiled as she killed the last zombie and ended the game with a new high score from their great teamwork.

“That was so fun!” Yuria jumped up and down like a child and high-fived kumi.

Kumi laughed happily when she saw yuria’s face.

They continued playing and yuria came to a halt when they were walking pass a machine with lots of toy from the anime ‘One Piece’.

Kumi saw yuria staring intently at the machine and she said: “Wanna try?”

“Yes!” Yuria happily ran towards the machine and put a coin into it.

“Uwaahh, this is so difficult!!” Yuria said as she tried again after missing the first one.

“Hahaha! Here, let me try.” Kumi took over and tried.

“Ah! Kumi you can do it! It’s almost dropping!!” Yuria said excitedly.

 “I got this!” Kumi got into the mood and happily shouted a little.

The toy dropped down the machine and kumi picked it up.

“Kumi! You did it!!! That was fun!” Yuria said as she hugged kumi.

Kumi was stun by yuria’s action and when yuria realized what she was doing, she released the hug and blushed.

“H-here,” Kumi gave the toy to yuria.

“E-eh?” Yuria asked.

“I played the game for you so this toy is for you~” Kumi took yuria’s hand and put the toy on her hands.

“T-thank you kumi.” Yuria blushed and looked at the toy lovingly.

Kumi smiled and at the same time, the group came back.

“Hey Kumi, yuria!” Yuko ran towards them.

“I saw a purikura station. Let’s take some purikura’s!” Yuko shouted.

“Ok!” Yuria followed yuko and the others towards the station while kumi followed behind.

They went into the station and got everything set up when suddenly, Miichan said: “Ah! M-my stomach hurts! I think I need to go to the toilet now! You all go ahead without me!” She ran out of the station before anyone could react and mariko followed: “I will go check on her,” and ran after miichan.

“Mou! Miichan…” Yuko said and pouted.

“Yuu-chan! I-I think I lost my handphone!” Haruna panicked while grabbing yuko’s hand.

“W-what?! This is bad! Let’s go find it!” Yuko dragged haruna out of the booth, leaving acchan and takamina behind.

“…” Takamina looked at acchan.

“O-oh! Minami~ I lost my earring~ Can we go find it now? The earring was the one you gave it to me on my birthday!” Acchan said as she held on to her left ear.

“E-eh?! Let’s go find it now! E-er kumi, yuria, you two go ahead without us. Sorry to spoil the mood.” Takamina apologized before being dragged out of the booth by acchan.

“E-eh?! Them too?...” Yuria looked disappointedly at the the entrance of the booth and looked at kumi before realizing that it was just the two of them left in the enclosed space in the booth.

“S-so…” Yuria stuttered out of nervousness.

“Come here yuria, the machine is starting up soon!” Kumi gestured yuria towards the machine.

Yuria’s face lite up and ran towards kumi. They took the purikura together and laughed at the pictures and weird faces that they had on their faces.

“Kumi you look weird in this!” Yuria laughed at a picture where kumi made a rabbit face. A face that yuria had never expected kumi to make.

“You look round in every photo Hahaha!!” Kumi laughed heartily and yuria blushed as she hit kumi’s arm.

The group was spying them for a while before returning to their side.

“Hey sorry for the wait we found our things!”Acchan and haruna smiled.

“Miichan are you feeling okay?” Yuria asked in concern, oblivious to the fact that miichan and the group did that deliberately just now.

“Yea! I am feeling much better now thanks!” She smiled and looked at kumi who gave her a look that told the group that kumi knew what was going on.

“Let’s go rest outside!” Yuko said and continued: “There is a ice cream vendor just now, let’s have some ice cream before we continue!” Yuko led the group towards the vendor.

They all bought a different flavor each and went towards the fountain in the middle of the square.

“Wow this fountain is so beautiful~” Yuria said as she admired the fountain.

“Yea~ it’s really relaxing here~” Acchan said and took a bite of icecream out of takamina’s cone.

“It’s yummy! Here have some of mine~” Acchan offered her ice cream to takamina who gladly ate it.

“Miichan, this flavor is nice, wanna try it?” Mariko shoved her ice cream towards miichan and miichan took a big bite out of it.

“Niceeeee!!! Here, try mine too!” Miichan shared her ice cream with mariko.

“Nyan nyan!! I want to try yourssss.” Yuko said as she closed in on haruna’s ice cream.

“How is it?” Haruna asked when yuko took a bite out of it.

“It’s Sweet~ Just like you~ hehehe~” Yuko snuggled up with haruna.

“M-mou! Yuu-chan the ice cream is gonna melt!” Haruna took a bite of ice cream from yuko’s cone.

Yuria saw the lovely ness all around her and she glanced at kumi who was eating quietly.

She wished kumi would ask her. She wanted to be like yuko and the others but she was too shy to take the initiative.

“Yuria.”

Yuria looked up when her name was called by a familiar voice.

“wanna try mine? It’s nice~” Kumi asked.

Yuria couldn't believe that her wish just came true.

“O-ok.” Yuria shyly took a bite out of kumi;s ice cream.

“It’s sweet!” Yuria said happily as she smiled in bliss.

“Yea~ yours is sweet too~” Kumi said as she licked her lips.

Kumi had just taken a bite out of yuria’s ice cream.

Yuria was shocked at the sudden close distance and the sudden action of kumi and her mouth opened a little due to the shock.

“Hahah~ you are such a kitten yuria.” Kumi said.

“K-kitten?” Yuria said in confusion.

Kumi stretched her hands out towards yuria and yuria closed her eyes. She felt kumi’s hands on her lips and she blushed as she remembered the kiss from last night.

“There was some ice cream on your lips.” Kumi laughed.

“T-thank you.” Yuria’s face was beat red.

“Oho, I see their progressing successfully, looks like our plan is working.” Yuko whispered to miichan and miichan giggled with the group.

After the ice cream break, the group went towards the Ferris wheel, their last stop for the day before having their dinner.

“Uwaaa, the Ferris wheel is so beautiful… are we really going up there?” Yuria asked.

“yep~ this is a privileged area, we can only ride the ferris wheel when we make a reservation.” Mariko explained.

“Yea, we have made reservations last night. Actually kumi made the reservations.” Haruna said.

“E-eh? Kumi did?” Yuria said as she looked at kumi.

Kumi smiled at yuria and glanced at the group before giving another small smile.

“Let’s go, I heard the view was the best here.” Takamina said.

The group headed up to the highest level where they would board the Ferris wheel there.

Acchan, takamina, yuko, haruna, miichan and mariko took the cabin in front of yuria and kumi while yuria and kumi took the one that was after them.

Yuria and kumi entered the cabin and a surprised waited for them.

“Waaa, it’s so cute!” Yuria said when she saw the teddy on the chair.

“…” Kumi just looked at the teddy and looked at the group’s cabin. They were waving wildly to kumi while the bear distracted yuria. They pointed to their phone, signallng kumi to check her phone.

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By:Takamina

Kumi, this is a gift from us to you.
We have known you for quite some time and although you are always cool and calm, we know that you are actually fun and caring.

Ever since yuria came to this school, you are smiling a lot more. We hope that tonight you will be able to face your feelings and confess to yuria.

We know that you like her a lot and we can tell that she liked you too. This chance is yours to grab! So, all the best! Our courage is with you!

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Kumi looked up from her phone and nodded to the group before giving a smile and mouthing a ‘Thank You’.

“Kumi! This bear is so cuddly~” Yuria said as she hugged the bear.

“Y-yuria…” Kumi said in an unusually nervous tone.

Yuria was nervous when she heard kumi stutter.

“Ahem… e-err…” Kumi looked at yuria with a serious face.

“I…” Kumi looked at yuria intently and yuria gulped, waiting for what kumi wanted to say.

“C-could it be…” Yuria thought to herself and blushed.

“I… I-i…” Kumi pulled down her hood before finally saying: “I-I like you…”

“…”

There was a moment of silence before kumi heard a sobbing sound. Her head shot up and she saw yuria crying.

“Y-yuria?! S-sorry I didn't mean to scare you with this confession… I-i…” Kumi ran towards yuria and immediately hugged her and comforted her.

“I-im sorry…I-it’s ok, I just wanted to tell you that…” Kumi patted yuria’s head while hugging her and she kept apologizing.

“S-say that again?” Yuria whispered.

“E-eh?” Kumi stopped her movement and heard yuria say again: “Can you say that again? That you like me…” Yuria said in a timid voice.

“I-I like you yuria…” Kumi said.

Yuria’s sobbing slowly softened and kumi smiled breightly and in relive when she heard yuria saying: “I like you too!”

The remained in a hug and a blissful smile was plastered upon their face.

They spent the rest of the time in the cabin with kumi explaining everything to yuria. Yuria’s question was answered without her asking kumi. Kumi knew that yuria had a lot of questions and she answered them all, not leaving anything out.

“I have been in love with you since the first time we met.” Kumi said as she held yuria’s hand.

“Un~” Yuria smiled cutely and kumi couldn't resist the urge to pinch yuria’s face before giving her a peck on her cheeks.

The group who was observing from their respective cabins sighed in relieve as they saw the romance unfold before them.

The Ferris wheel ride was soon over and they alighted with a different feeling.

“Waaa~ the view was the best!” Yuko said as she stretched her arms.

“Yea~ best of the best~” Mariko smiled at kumi and yuria.

The mood was just right when suddenly, a loud growl could be heard and they turn towards the sound.

“Ehehee… I’m hungry…” Miichan said as she stick out her tongue playfully.

“HAhaha~ It’s time for dinner, no wonder you are hungry. Let’s go eat at acchan’s restaurant~” Takamina said.

“A-acchan owns a restaurant?!” Yuria said as her eyes went bigger.

“Yea~ Acchan has the best taste ever so you will definitely have a great dinner tonight.” Miichan said as she smiled at yuria.

They went towards the restaurant and praises were heard with every different food that was served on the table.

The sky was getting darker and it was finally time to end the day.

“Thank you guys…” Kumi smiled and bowed to the group.

“We will always be here for you! There is no need to thank us kumi.” Takamina, as the leader of the group said.

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They went their separate ways and kumi accompanied yuria home.

“Haaa… It’s a good feeling to finally be able to openly hold your hand.” Kumi said and smiled at yuria.

“I feel the same way too. Thank you for everything kumi.” Yuria said as she looked at their link hands and smiled sweetly.

“Hehe~ Once again, you’re welcome~” Kumi said and patted yuria’s head.

“Your hands are so warm. I feel so safe with you~” Yuria said.

Kumi gave yuria’s hand a squeeze and smiled cheekily.

“Well, we are here.” They stopped outside yuria’s house.

“Thanks for sending me home again~ See you tomorrow kumi~Goodnight!” Yuria said and reluctantly let go of kumi’s hand.

Kumi smiled and yuria looked at her and blushed when she felt kumi closing in on her lips.

Yuria closed her eyes and felt kumi’s kips on her own. Feelings overflowed with each second that passed by.

“Good night, yuria peace~” Kumi smiled and patted yuria’s head.

“Yuria peace?” Yuria asked.

“I feel peaceful when I am with you~ So, you are yuria plus peace in my heart~” Kumi winked.

“M-mou~” Yuria giggled and slapped kumi’s arms lightly.

“Btw, this is our second kiss… right?” Kumi laughed when she saw yuria’s face lite up.

“H-how did you…” Yuria said as she touched her lips.

“I was half awake~” Kumi patted yuria’s head for the last time and walked off after yuria went into the house.

Yuria received a text message immediately after she stepped into the house.

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By: Kumi

Good night yuria peace~ See you tomorrow~ <3

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Yuria smiled and replied.

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To: Kumi

Goodnight kumi~ See you tomorrow <3

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Kumi went into the house right beside yuria and called yuria.

“Hello? Yuria? It's kumi~” Kumi said.

“Kumi~ you have not sleep yet?” Yuria asked.

“I am gonna sleep soon~ Just wanted to hear your voice before I sleep hehe~” Kumi said.

“Oh, yuria, if you ever feel lonely, just open your window ok?” Kumi said.

“Eh? Open my window?” Yuria said curiously as she walked towards her window.

“Yes~ If you open your window, your wish will come true~” Kumi said and giggled.

Yuria’s wish was to see kumi’s face right now.

“Mou~ that’s impossible…” Yuria said as she opened the window.

“I told you your wish will come true~” Kumi said as she greeted yuria with a smile.

“K-kumi?!” Yuria said in disbelieve.

The other side of the window was kumi who was standing right beside the window of the other house.

“H-how?!” Yuria asked.

“Well…” Kumi said and laughed.

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FLASHBACK

“Hello?” Kumi said.

“Hai, what can I do for you kumi-sama.” The butler spoke.

“Could you do me a favour? It’s best if you could settle it the earlier the better.” Kumi said.

“Hai, I will get it done.” The butler said.

“I would like you to help me…”

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“And that was how I ended up being your neighbor hehehe~” Kumi giggled.

“T-this is the best thing that could ever happen~” Yuria said.

“Well~ It’s late now, better go to bed early ok? Goodnight Yuria~ See you tomorrow~” Kumi said as she watch yuria close the window before closing the window to her own room.






TBC~


I am so sorry, i used the window part from my kuminon fanfic lols~ didnt have any new idea about a side by side house so i just used the one from the other fanfic but changed the dialogue. The setting is the same. I am really sorry T_T.

Thanks for reading till the end~ Chapter 13 will be next :D
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Re: KumiYuri Fanfic -chapter 11 25/11/12
« Reply #91 on: December 10, 2012, 12:06:37 AM »
Im not reading yet , i just see it and i need to post Thanks    :D  :D  :inlove:


I'm going too read it thanks for UPLOAD   :thumbsup

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Re: KumiYuri Fanfic -Chapter 12 10/12/12
« Reply #92 on: December 10, 2012, 12:57:46 AM »
WOOOH~! This is What I've been Waiting for!~

Hahaha~! KUMI'S CONFESSION!~ I LIKE IT~!

WAWAW!!~

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Re: KumiYuri Fanfic -Chapter 12 10/12/12
« Reply #93 on: December 10, 2012, 01:51:26 AM »
Whoaaaa!!!

Takamina's group,GOOD JOB!

Kumi and Yuria, finally <3
They're so cute, and the window part it's nice xD

Thank you for the update, you're the best

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Re: KumiYuri Fanfic -Chapter 12 10/12/12
« Reply #94 on: December 10, 2012, 07:29:55 PM »
Moooou! What an awesome update o/ I really liked this chapter *.* they finally confessed to each other and it was so cute *.*

I want friends like that too~ nhya~

It's ok to recycle your ideas heueheh and SO, that was the meaning of that strange phone conversation >< glad to know it was such a nice thing :D

Can't wait chapter 13 \o/

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Re: KumiYuri Fanfic -Chapter 12 10/12/12
« Reply #95 on: December 11, 2012, 02:40:29 AM »
finally you had updated the chapter! had been waiting for it! :)

nice chapter! wish for more for the next update :)
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Re: KumiYuri Fanfic -Chapter 12 10/12/12
« Reply #96 on: December 11, 2012, 02:58:52 AM »
so awesome!!  :)

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Re: KumiYuri Fanfic -Chapter 12 10/12/12
« Reply #97 on: December 11, 2012, 07:54:54 PM »
ASDFDSFGFDHGJKFHSDDADDSFGDHJ ><

Thank for update this awesome chapter~

finally kumi and yuria they confessed to each other ><

they are cute couple!! REALLY CUTE!! (repeat again!) LOL

can't wait next chapter what will be make me dokidoki again LOL!
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Re: KumiYuri Fanfic -Chapter 13 22/12/12
« Reply #98 on: December 21, 2012, 09:13:21 PM »
it's been awhile

you upload again.  :)

Is christmas and kumi it's going to do a party.

this sound like a part sweet  XD

thanks for upload  :thumbsup

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Re: KumiYuri Fanfic -Chapter 13 22/12/12
« Reply #99 on: December 22, 2012, 04:36:47 AM »
really curious kumi's identity...haha

i wish that i had the house like kumi but not with the work that she had to clear...  XD

waiting for the next update in progress...
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