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Re: Silent Killer update Chapter 14
« Reply #100 on: April 11, 2013, 02:35:16 AM »
Yeah BlackxNezumi ftw!!!!

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Re: Silent Killer update Chapter 14
« Reply #101 on: April 11, 2013, 04:09:17 PM »
What if the seal on Sakura's back is broken in the palace...hell breaking loose!!!   :shocked
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Re: Silent Killer update Chapter 14
« Reply #102 on: April 11, 2013, 06:02:21 PM »
I love it!! Black and Nezumi wouah they are together now!! :inlove: :deco:
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Re: Silent Killer update Chapter 15
« Reply #103 on: April 12, 2013, 01:58:34 AM »
Update! I hope you guys like it!
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Chapter 15

The four walked through the gate and saw the burned remains of the old palace. The Kashiwagi family used to be the second most powerful family in all of Japan but then in one big fire it all came tumbling down. Black and the others walked through the debris searching for anything that could help her remember her past. Black told Center and Sakura to wait at the gate and not leave the area until she got back. Nezumi went with Black and the two walked into the old building. Most of the palace was burned and nothing but ash. However Black felt there was something else that she didn't know about.

Black walked up the stairs and into her parents room. There were still two old blood stains where her parent's bodies were found and the sight made Black sick. Black had to push through though and look for the thing she wanted. Black looked around and then suddenly she saw something strange that she had never seen before. There was a hole in the wall and there was something sticking out of the hole.Black walked over and pulled out the thing and revealed it to be a journal. Black saw it was her father's hand writing which means he must have written it. Black looked at it carefully and began to read.

"Grave news. The Matsui family was slaughtered today and the only survivors are the two daughters Rena and Jurina. The father was indeed a cruel man but when I saw his body in that horrible state I nearly lost it. Oh and the mother as well her corpse was mangled in such a mess it was hard to tell it was her. The palace was burned in a roaring fire and there was nothing but ash. I did not want to see the girls be sent off so I decided to take them in myself. I think the two will make wonderful sisters for my Yuki. I think they'll fit in just fine."

Black couldn't read the rest but she flipped through the pages and found another entry.

"Today the royals from the Rappapa family came for a visit. We had good laughs and fun times however the head of the family pulled me to the side and told me something I thought was a bunch of rubbish. She told me the Matsui sisters were dangerous and should be taken away. She told me I should hand them over to her because they have powers that could kill us all. I simply laughed and told her everything would be fine. Besides Yuki loves them and I could never take away the things Yuki love."

Black smiled a little remembering how much her father would do anything to make her happy. She flipped the page and found another entry.

"Today I realized why Yuko said to be careful of the two. While my wife and Yuki were gone, enemies tried to attack the palace. I was ready to fight but then the Matsui sisters unleashed some kind of horrible hell upon them. Watching all those men being torn limb from limb or burned to a crisp was something that would make even the strongest man cower in fear. I'm starting to think that we should get rid of the Matsui sisters now for I fear they may lash out at us. We'll have to do it tonight though when they are sleeping."

After that there was nothing else she could read. Black set the journal down and felt a wind blow. She turned around and saw Sakura standing behind her smiling. Black thought she had told Sakura to wait out by the gate but she must have gotten to her and left Center. Black looked outside the window and saw Nezumi and Center talking. Black turned to face Sakura and almost screamed. She saw Sakura reading her father's journal. Black walked over and took it out of Sakura's hands but when she did something happened. Sakura was shaking and her left eyes was twitching.

"J-juri...na. R-re...na.."

Black reached out and touched Sakura and when she did there was a bright flash and suddenly Black was seeing something. She saw a man standing over her and felt a pressure on her neck. The man was choking her trying to constrict her of air. Black tried to fight back but the man was too strong. Black looked over and saw Jurina being strangled as well. It was then Black realized she was seeing a memory of Sakura's. She was seeing through Sakura's eyes. It must have been the day her father was trying to get rid of them. The man was about to succeed in strangling her but then her vision turned red and a sudden fire burned inside her. Sakura grabbed the man's arm and tore it right off. The man backed away and to the other side she saw Jurina set the man on fire. The two stood up and ran after her father. Jurina went somewhere else setting fire everywhere and Sakura went after her father.

Sakura found the father and mother trying to escape but she ran over and slammed the father into the wall. Her father drew his sword and tried to attack but Sakura broke the blade and then slashed his chest. The father fell back and now the mother was trying to attack. However Sakura picked up some wood and threw them at the mother and they punctured her hands. She was pinned against the wall and Sakura decided to have fun. Sakura cut into the mother's stomach and ripped out her organs. While she was doing that the father got up and tried to attack again. Sakura saw this and pushed him back down. Then she dug her hands into the chest wound and tore it open exposing the rib cage. Luckily the father had died but that didn't stop Sakura from tearing him apart. At one point she tore off the head and threw it to the side. It was then she heard a screamed and looked over seeing Black when she was younger. Sakura walked over and was about to attack but someone knocked Yuki out and then dragged her away.

Soon after a woman came in and her friends. Sakura was going to attack but the woman knocked Sakura out in one go. Another woman came in carrying Jurina. They carried them out of the palace and it continued to burn down. After that everything grew dark and quiet.

Black woke up and saw Sakura on the ground still shaking. There was something on her back that was glowing and Black had to lift her shirt to see it. There was a ring glowing on her back and Black watched as the ring faded. Sakura's eyes glowed red and her hands clenched into fists. Sakura looked over at Black and reached out to grab her. She grabbed her neck and began to squeeze her neck tightly.

Black tried to fight back but the grip was too tight. Black struggled to free herself but it didn't look like it was going to work. Then suddenly something hit Sakura and made her pass out. Black looked over and saw the hooded figure from before. The hooded figure leaned down and picked Sakura up. Then she turned around and was about to walk away but then Center came in and saw the hooded figure. Center shot fire but the figure blocked it. Nezumi snuck up behind and was able to tear the hood off revealing a very familiar person. That person was Yuko and Black wondered where she had come from.

"Yuko? What are you doing?"

"I've come to take Rena back." she said.

"Rena?!"

"Oh shoot-"

Center stared at Sakura who was actually Rena her sister. When she realized this Center lashed out and tried to attack Yuko but Yuko threw a seal at her and when it hit it pushed her down to the ground and she couldn't get back up. Yuko turned back to Black and said,

"I told you to come here because I needed Rena to remember who she was. The seal on her shut down everything and erased all her memories so thank you for taking care of her. Now I have to leave and run somewhere far. I would suggest you do the same with Jurina. Torigoya is after them and wants to break the seals on the two and then release them to the outside world. We need to keep the two safe and if they're apart it's going to make it harder for Torigoya."

Black stood there trying to understand what was going on but was having a little trouble since it was going so fast. Yuko just sighed and then walked over to Center and pulled down her shirt.

"Looks like the seal Sado out on you is still there. I have to admit she's still strong even after death."

"Don't you talk about Sado like that!" Center growled.

"I understand you're mad about that but I'm doing this for the good of the both of you. Now I'll be leaving and I'll suggest that you two do the same before Torigoya finds you."

With that Yuko left leaving the others behind and the seal was removed from Center allowing her to move again.

"We have to go after her!"

Center started to run towards the exit but Nezumi stopped her. Center tried to fight her but Nezumi showed her the outside and her outlook changed on the situation. There outside was a group of guards that were looking for Center. They were about to go out a back way but then Black shower them a secret passage that led underground. They were able to escape but now a bigger problem faces them. They have to keep Center hidden if they were going to protect her.

(Over at the palace...)

"Any news about the Matsui sisters?" Torigoya asked.

"No ma'am but we are still looking." the guard said.

"We keep looking!"

"Yes Ojou-san."

The guard left and in came Shibuya.

"You know I have a better way of finding them." Shibuya said.

"Oh and how so?"

"Torigoya please I'm Shibuya. I have connections to every spy and rat in Japan. Just give me the word and I'll send out a target. You'll have results in no time."

"Then do it."

"As you wish."

Shibuya left and Torigoya called in another guard. She was told that the enemy was only four days away before attacking. Torigoya was growing impatient for she knew that if she didn't get the Matsui sisters then she could lose the war. Torigoya hopped that she would be able to find them soon and just as she thought that Shibuya came back in.

"That was fast."

"I told you you'd get results in no time."

"What did you find?"

"One of them is with Yuko. It's Rena and it looks like Yuko is the only one. They're still looking for the other one."

"Alright then I'll go and get and get her myself. Obviously sending grunts to do your work isn't a good idea."

(Over to Yuko...)

Yuko was taking a break from carrying Rena and decided to reinforce the seal on Rena. She saw how two rings were broken and if the last one broke then things would be bad. Yuko reinforced the seal and then laid down to relax. She looked up at the sky and started to drift off and then suddenly Yuko heard a noise and looked up. She saw Torigoya and suddenly got up.

"What are you doing Torigoya?"

"I've come to take Rena. Hand her over Yuko."

"Torigoya you know I can't do that." Yuko said.

"I need her Yuko to win the war." Torigoya said.

"You're endangering thousands of lives! Do you have any idea what would happen if you unleashed the two? The whole island of Japan would sink! The reason why Sado didn't want you to take power is because you can't handle it. Now that she's gone you've become power crazy and I'm not going to let you take over. I don't know what happened to you but this isn't the Haruna I knew. The one I love."

Torigoya was silent for a while. Then she smiled and said,

"Yuko I do what I do to survive. To survive you need power. I have it but I still need more and I will take down anything that gets in my way of taking that power. Even you."

After saying that something shot at Yuko knocking her out. Torigoya then grabbed Rena and then looked back at Yuko.

"I do love you Yuko... But you don't love me I mean... You left anyways so that must mean something..."

(Back to Black and Nezumi....)

Black, Nezumi, and Center were walking along a path when suddenly Center stopped. Her body started shaking and her eyes widened.

"Center what's wrong?"

In Center she was seeing Yuko, Rena and Torigoya. She saw Yuko get knocked out and  Torigoya take Rena and leave. When she came back she looked back at Black and Nezumi and said,

"They took Rena!"

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Minna! I have important news! I'm going on a trip for a week and I don't know I the hotel will have wifi or not so this will be my last update for a while. Don't worry I'll be back and when I do I hope to see lots of comments! For the meantime I hope you guys like the update and it may or may not be a while before we see another so in the meantime have fun and hopefully I'll have wifi!
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Re: Silent Killer update Chapter 15
« Reply #104 on: April 12, 2013, 07:25:48 AM »
Ara... both Rena and Center identities were revealed...

Yuko asked for the Matsui sisters not to kill them but to secure them...

They have the powers to seal their true natures

Matsui sisters were just helping Black's father in defending his castle that they used their powers

He was just scared of the powers that he had no control off.

And he said he loved them as his own daughters... so because of that he killed them that night...

They were still so young... Poor them...

The death of Yuki's parents were just self-defense mechanism... they lost controlled of their powers.

So I think Black's father deserved what he got.

What's going to happen next to Matsui sisters... with Rena being with Torigoya and Jurina being with Black and Nezumi?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the lovely update

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Re: Silent Killer update Chapter 15
« Reply #105 on: April 12, 2013, 07:44:09 AM »
Great update I can't wait for more! \(^o\) (/o^)/ 
My mind in school...(´Д゜)/゜⌒。I started to imagine and think of stories lol.
I get home and read your fanfic this is me lol ---->ε=┌( ≧▽)┘
(*/□\*) reading your fanfics take me some time to calm down. (゚Д゚≡゚Д゚) ヽ(゚Д゚)ノ 
I really can't wait for your next update!

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Re: Silent Killer update Chapter 15
« Reply #106 on: April 12, 2013, 10:28:56 AM »
Yeah there is some Kojiyuu!!!

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Re: Silent Killer update Chapter 15
« Reply #107 on: April 12, 2013, 10:13:41 PM »
drools......
I read it actually nearly a day ago, well, 18 hrs ago.....
but it was so epic!!! <3 <3
Tori-san!!How dare you!!!
GAH!!! What will Center do???
Yuki-san(Black) do your best!!! >.<

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Re: Silent Killer update Chapter 16
« Reply #108 on: April 13, 2013, 04:55:43 AM »
Wifi works! Wah I'm so happy which means more updates! However it maybe a while since I'll be out on the beach! Anyways enjoy the update~
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Chapter 16

"They got Rena!"

When Black and Nezumi heard that they knew trouble was coming and they were going to have to act fast. Center was panicking while Nezumi was trying to calm down and Black was trying to think of a plan. After a while she finally decided to go find Yuko and see if she could get anymore information. She knew just barging into the palace was crazy so she needed a better plan to get around all of it.

"Let's go find Yuko."

Center lead them to the place where she saw Yuko being attacked and there she was out cold on the ground. She wasn't waking up with simple pokes and shouts so they decided to take her and stay in a nearby town. They laid Yuko on the bed and told Center to look after her while Nezumi said she was going to leave for a while and get into contact with some old friends. The battle was going to be rough and them alone wouldn't be enough to take on the whole palace. Nezumi left so it was just Black now and she decided to go out into the town and look for anything that could be useful to the battle. While she was out, she didn't notice the masked figure following her.

"I can't believe they got Rena..."

Black was thinking to herself as she was roaming the town searching for supplies and materials. She bought some medical supplies and a little food but nothing more. As she was walking though she felt something behind her. When she turned around though there was nothing there. Black started to wonder if there was someone following her but every time she looked there was no one there. The markets were full of places and people moving about and Black was just one of many. As she made her way through the crowds she stumbled upon some kind of side show event. There was a traveling circus act doing all kinds of tricks and stunts. The crowd cheered as the man in a strange costume flipped through the air and landed on a thin piece of bamboo. Black was impressed as well and continued to watch the show seeing how nostalgic it was. It reminded her of her family when she went to see the shows with her parents. As she was watching it, suddenly a stage performer stood forward and said,

"For our next trick, we will need a volunteer! Anyone wish to step up?"

Many hands raised and many shouts called but none of them were picked. Instead the man walked straight to Black and said,

"Would you kindly step forward miss?"

Black had no choice so she walked into the crowd and the people cheered. The man looked at her and said,

"I see you have a fine sword. Care to prove how well you can use it?"

The man clapped his hands and some other performers brought out some poles. On top of each pole was a fruit and the man said,

"If you can hit all these fruits without touching the ground then you will receive a fabulous reward."

Black nodded her head and then looked at her targets. She pulled out her sword and with one quick movement the fruits were cut down and the crowd cheered more.

"Well done! Now let's see how you handle this."

The man snapped his fingers and five armed men came out. They aimed their swords at Black and prepared to attack. The crowd grew wild as they all thought it was part of an act. However Black saw this as a trap and knew this was no game.

"Let us see how great of a warrior you seem to be."

After he said that the men moved in and tried to cut Black. She dodged it and attacked back with a slash to the arm. As one retreated the others came out and tried to attack all at once. Seeing this was coming Black jumped up and landed on one of the poles. The others followed and soon after it became a midair battle. The four others jumped and were going to slam down on her but Black moved and one of them sliced the pole in half. Black took this chance and slashed one of the men's legs and then another one's back. They fell down and now there were two left. Black decided to finish it off with one big swing so as the two men were going to attack, Black ducked and kicked the two together. Then she swung her sword and impaled both of their legs. The crowd was going crazy demanding more but Black didn't want to stay. She quickly ran into the crowd and got as far away as she could. When she was far enough, Black went back to the hotel they were staying at and found Yuko had awaken.

"How are you feeling?" Black asked.

"A little dizzy but good." Yuko said.

"You should rest then."

"No it's fine. We need to get Rena back before Torigoya breaks the seal."

Yuko tried to stand up but fell down. Luckily Center was there to catch her and help her back up. Center placed Yuko back on the bed and then said,

"What will they do in order to break the seal?"

"They'll torture her mentally..." Yuko said.

"How so?"

"They'll make her remember her past. The past I sealed away and if she remembers the emotional stress will break the seal and release the anger and hate I originally locked up."

"Do you mind telling me about our past? All I remember was Rena being my sister and Sado taking care of me but everything before was a blank."

The room was quiet as Yuko wasn't sure if it was safe to tell Center. If she was going to have the same reaction as Rena then they didn't want to risk it. However Yuko did want to tell her because she knew that if she could control one and get her to fight with them then they may be able to control Rena as well. Yuko thought long and hard and then finally said,

"Alright I'll tell you..."

To be sure they would be safe though, Yuko tied Center to a chair in the middle of a barrier that would contain her if she snapped. Then she sat down and told about the Matsui sister's past.

"As you know, you two were once royalty. Your mother and father were very powerful people and won many great battles. However they were both cruel and power hungry. Every time get grew angry or agitated they would take it out on you and your sister. However what they didn't know is that you two have a special "gift" so call it that they didn't know you possessed. You and Rena have the Akuma curse which gives you the powers of demons thus leading to the horns on your head. Jurina you took on a fire demon and Rena took on a blood demon. Both of you were extremely powerful but you didn't know how to unlock your powers. However one day your father had gone too far and said  that he was going to kill you and your sister saying you were both worthless. The mother agreed and you two were going to be thrown into a river. At that moment Rena snapped and awakened her powers and soon after you did as well. The two of you killed your parents and destroyed your home. The only reason why I know is because I was there that day."

Black looked at Center and saw she was twitching a little but seemed fine.

"Soon after Yuki's family adopted you and your sister and the threw of you grew very close. However what worried me was that they didn't know of your powers. When I went to warn Yuki's father he told me everything was going to be fine but soon after I heard that you and Rena both attacked an army and I saw the horrible leftovers of the massacre. After that the father sent me a note saying he was going to get rid of you two. I knew this wasn't going to be good so I quickly rushed down there to see if I could stop him however I was too late..."

Black remembers the things she saw through Rena and started to cry a little.

"By the time I got back the palace was on fire. Sado and I ran into the palace and managed to save you two. From there I decided that the two of you together were too dangerous so I sealed away Rena's powers and Sado sealed yours. Now however Torigoya wants to remove the seals and I can't let her do that because she will use your powers to win battles and treat you like animals."

Black could see Center start to shake and grit her teeth. Yuko was about to get up and activate the barrier but instead Center let out a shout and managed to hold it in. She looked at Yuko and said,

"Remove my seal..."

Yuko stared at Center with an "are you crazy" look and immediately said no. However Center managed to convince Yuko after and hour of debating. Yuko decided that she would remove the seal and then go after Rena. She thinks that if she has Jurina at full power and Rena isn't yet then they may be able to win. They decided they would do it tomorrow and for now they would rest. They said their goodnights and then turned in for sleep. However Black couldn't sleep peacefully for there were many things on her mind. She was afraid that if the seal broke then Center will lash out and set everything on fire. She also feared Rena turning and killing everyone. All this fear made Black's mind race but then it all stopped when she heard a strange noise coming from outside the door. Black grabbed her sword and hid it under blankets and waited. Soon after the door slowly opened and she heard people come inside.
Black waited for the right moment and then quickly kicked the attacker in the stomach and then jumped out and pointed her sword right at the person's neck. 

"Hey Black what are you doing?!"

Black soon realized the voice belonged to Nezumi and when Center lit some candles the room lit up and there was Nezumi on the ground looking at Black. Black put her sword away and then said,

"What are you doing trying to get yourself killed?"

"No I was trying to say I was back and I brought some friends."

The door opened and in came some very familiar faces. There was Atsuko, Minami, Gakura, Choukoku, and Shaku. Even Daruma was outside staring through the window. All the people Black helped were here with her now. Black looked at Nezumi with an amazed look and asked,

"How?"

"They all said they wanted to help so they came down here with me."

"It's been a while Black." Choukoku said.

"Hidashiburi!" Atsuko said.

Black couldn't believe all these people were here but she was really happy and hugged Nezumi tightly. Everyone stared and then Shaku said,

"Neechan the rat is stealing your girl!"

Gakuran quickly covered Shaku's mouth.

"What did you say about me?" Nezumi said in an angry tone.

"Ah nothing nothing! You know kids these days saying crazy things. Shaku how about you go play with Acchan?" Gakuran nervously said.

"You better how she's just saying things... Otherwise I'll use your body as a meat puppet..."

There was a dark aura coming from Nezumi as she was ready to pull out her threads. Black saw this and quickly pulled in Nezumi for another hug and started to stroke her hair. She thought it was cute how Nezumi was so protective of her and liked the fact that Nezumi cared. Yuko and Center introduced themselves to everyone and then Yuko said,

"Well everyone let's call it a night! We have a big day tomorrow."

"Hai!!" everyone shouted.

That night Black fell asleep knowing she was having backup.

(Over at the palace...)

In a dark room with wet floors and cold air, Rena was there chained to a wall. She didn't know what going on but all she was worried about was Yuko. She was scared and confused and didn't know what to do. The door opened and Torigoya walked in with an evil smile on her face. She knelt down to Rena's level and pulled out a picture. She held it in front of Rena and said,

"Do you know who these people are?"

"No I don't." Rena weakly said.

"Well the baby is your little sister Jurina and the two adults are your mother and your father."

"Impossible! Yuko told me I didn't have any siblings and my parents died in a fire!"

"She lies~ Yuko told you lies only to keep you under control. She was a afraid of you."

"No Yuko loves me!"

"You're nothing but a pet to her! You're worthless to her and that's why you're here because she abandoned you thinking you had nothing to offer her."

"Shut you you're lying!"

"Remember Gekikara! Remember your parents? The ones who called you worthless and were going to kill you? Remember how they were going to kill you and your sister?"

"Shut up! I'm not Gekikara I'm Rena!"

"No Rena is your pet name! You are Gekikara! The blood crazed monster that kills people for fun!"

"SHUT UP!!!"

Rena's head started pounding and her breathing quickened. Her body started to shake as she started whispering things to herself. To the side Torigoya was laughing thinking she was going to break her in no time and then left. This was just the beginning to Rena's endless mind torture.

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Wah and so it begins! I hope you liked the update and look forward to more suspenseful action!

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Re: Silent Killer update Chapter 16
« Reply #109 on: April 13, 2013, 07:27:38 AM »
щ(゚Д゚щ) The update was....ヽ(゚Д゚)ノ 
I can't wait to read more!
Keep up the good work! (´∪`*) 

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Re: Silent Killer update Chapter 16
« Reply #110 on: April 13, 2013, 02:06:01 PM »
Ah... Thank you for the small background story on Rena and Jurina... I was waiting for those for a while now...

Yeah... I can see why both their parents and Yuki's parents met the same ending...

So Nezumi went to find help from the people they encountered previously on their road trip.

Ah... Center already had her seal broken...

And Rena is on the process of being broken...

What's going to happen to them...?

And how about the rescue mission?

How about the survival of the kingdom... and Haruna?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the great update

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Re: Silent Killer update Chapter 16
« Reply #111 on: April 13, 2013, 02:36:48 PM »
great update >.<
though I kind of forgot about what exactly happened with the somewhat seemingly minor characters that are showing up now...
(Atsuko, Minami, SHaku, Chokoku, etc)
But awesome >.< <3
Though I think I want to punch Torigoya in the face for being so mean to Rena

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Re: Silent Killer update Chapter 16
« Reply #112 on: April 14, 2013, 04:52:49 PM »
Miyumi-san i like all of your story :twothumbs
all of them are great and has a nice detail explanetion like in those kind of a novel
maybe someday you'll really need to make one

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Re: Silent Killer update Chapter 16
« Reply #113 on: April 14, 2013, 06:20:32 PM »
I'm Totally in love with that story!!

Continue please!
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Re: Silent Killer update Chapter 17
« Reply #114 on: April 15, 2013, 04:06:45 AM »
Minna! Are you ready to see what happens to Rena and Jurina? Well we're about to find out so I hope you enjoy the update!
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Chapter 17

The next day everyone gathered to an open field where they were preparing to break Center's seal. Yuko was preparing the seal break while the others were preparing Center. The process was going to be painful and during that time they were going to have to keep her down so Yuko could break the whole thing. When everything was prepared they placed Center in the middle of the circle and everyone held the chains tied around her. Yuko then walked over and placed her hand over Center's chest where the seal was.

"Are you sure you want to do this?" she asked.

"Yes..." Center said.

With that said Yuko started chanting words and the circle started to glow. There was a loud crash and the air started to circle around her. Everyone watched as the horns on Center started to glow as Yuko continued to chant. Within Center, her mind was being filled with madness of dark pasts and horrible memories. She saw visions of her parents beating her and Rena killing them. She saw blood and heard screams of people and the cries of children. Center's mind was going through her entire life in seconds. The chains began to tighten and Black had to hold on. Center's eyes glowed blue and she began to levitate off the ground. Everyone had to hold Center low to the ground if they were going to prevent her from flying off. Suddenly a blast of fire was set off and more came soon after. Black and the others had to be careful to avoid the blasts. The process was almost complete but now the most difficult part was next and this one was going to be hard.

Yuko pulled out a small dagger and stabbed it into the seal. Center screamed as she bled onto the ground. When her blood hit the circle, it changed to a white color and rearranged itself into a different pattern. It started to slowly spin around and around glowing brighter until it became too bright to see. There was a loud scream and a beam of light was shot into the air. When the light died all there was left was Center who slowly started to stand back up. She looked different to everyone though for her horns had grown and there were strange marks on her arms. Center looked at Yuko and for a second looked like she was going to kill her but then she reached reached out and pulled her in for a hug.

"Thank you..."

Then after Center collapsed and passed out on the ground. As the others carried her back to the room, Black and Nezumi walked over to Yuko and asked,

"Is she going to be alright?"

"It looks like the seal was broken successfully. She didn't go berserk and once she learns how to control her new powers then we'll be able to go to the palace and get Rena back." Yuko said.

"How long will that take?"

"Probably not that long."

"That's good. Then let's go rest for tomorrow we have a long day for us."

The three headed back to the house where they found Center on the ground shaking. They didn't know what was going on but it wasn't looking good as Center screamed and thrashed rolling on the ground in pain. Something was happening but the question was what? Yuko had Black and Nezumi hold her down as she took a look inside to see what was going on. There Yuko saw the things Center saw and quickly backed away.

"What's happening?" Black asked.

"Rena and Jurina have a spiritual connection. Right now Rena is going through some kind of torture and Jurina is feeling it. The things Torigoya is doing to her are just... horrible." Yuko said.

"What should we do?"

"We'll have to cut the connection between the two."

"How do we do that?"

"Hold her tightly."

(Over at the palace...)

"She doesn't love you...you were just her pet...a dog bounded by a chain..."

"Stop it just stop it!"

Rena covered her ears trying to block out the voices that were speaking in her head but she could still hear them. Rena was looking around frantically trying to figure out what was real and what wasn't. She didn't know how long she had been in the dungeon but she knew she was going to lose it if she didn't get out. Suddenly she heard shuffling in the background and looked over. There standing outside the bars was her father.

"You worthless child. Look at you cowering on the ground.. You nothing but a waste of life!"

"Go away!"

"Your father is right."

Rena looked over and saw her mother leaning against the wall.

"We should've killed you when you were born. I never really wanted kids." she said.

"Stop it stop it! Just die!"

"We already died remember? You killed us!"

Their bodies changed and transformed into the state Rena had left them when she killed them. The mother's top half of her head was gone and there was a gaping hole in her chest. The father's head was completely gone while there were several holes in his body and his limbs torn away. They started to walk towards Rena who was backing away and trying to escape the cell. As they grew closer Rena tried to fight back by pulling out a rock and started to bash her parents. She beat their bodies until they stopped moving and then when it was finally over Rena stepped back. She felt something being lifted from her chest as she stared at the blood on her hands. She started to giggle as she licked it off her fingers tasting how sweet it was.

"Don't think we're done with you yet."

Suddenly Rena was pushed to the ground and her parents hovered over her. Rena started to see flashbacks of when her parents would torture her. One she really really hated was the hot pickers. Her parents would heat up metal rods until they glowed and then they would jab them on whatever part of Rena's body. She watched as her mother took a hot picker and pressed it against Rena's chest while her father touched her stomach. Rena screamed as the smell of her burning flesh filled the air. She tried to escape but her parents held her down forcing her on the ground. They took another rod and stabbed it onto Rena's neck. The pain was so overwhelming that she thought she was going to pass out. Then suddenly an image flashed into her mind. It was Yuko and she was staring at Rena with a disappointed look.

"Y-Yuko...H-Help..."

"You're so weak Rena. I really wonder why I took you in. You're such a pathetic waste. I should've let you burn in the fire with your stupid sister. You shouldn't be alive you should be dead!"

"Yuko... why?"

"You were nothing but a waste of my time and when I find you I'm going to kill you once and for all you hear me? Oh and don't think about seeing your sister again. I've already taken a liking to her. She's way better than you Rena you piece of trash."

Just then Rena felt something being torn inside her and she saw the image of Jurina vanish in her mind. Everything became dark and she felt something crack inside her. Her whole world fell and crashed and there was nothing left. Her heart felt like it was being twisted as her soul was being swallowed by the monster within her. The seal on her back broke instantly and her horns came out sharper than before. Her eyes glowed red as she let out a loud roar.

(Back with Center...)

Center woke up and found Black and Nezumi staring at her. She sat up and hugged Nezumi and started crying. When they asked here what she saw she said she saw Rena being tortured and then her seal breaking. After that though everything went dark and she could no longer feel the connection between her and her sister.

"If what you say is true then we're going to have to get moving quickly. Torigoya has awakened Gekikara and who knows what she's going to do now." Yuko said.

"Then tomorrow we'll all head out and attack." Black said.

"Yes but for now everyone get some rest."

Black and Yuko left to sleep but Nezumi stayed with Center and tried to calm her down. Center cried as Nezumi held her close. She looked at Center and said,

"Everything is going to be ok.. We'll get her back."

"I don't want to fight her... I don't want to hurt my sister..."

"If we're going to get her back we're going to have to."

"No..no..."

Center cried again and Nezumi held her until she fell asleep. She set Center in a bed and then walked into Black's room who had heard the whole conversation.

"I'm worried about her." Nezumi said.

"We'll just have to do our best tomorrow. However don't you dare think about taking on Gekikara." Black said.

"Hai hai I know and the same to you. Be careful."

Black leaned in and kissed Nezumi's lips.

"I always am aren't I?"

Nezumi didn't answer and instead decided to go to sleep for tomorrow was going to be the battle of her life.

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I hope you liked the update! Look forward to the next!

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Re: Silent Killer update Chapter 17
« Reply #115 on: April 15, 2013, 05:25:27 AM »
I wondered by the decision to break the connection between Rena and Jurina was a good idea...

There was a possibility that through the connection that they shared... Rena could be able to withstand the tortured...

Because without the connection... she would have no link at all... she would feel empty

So Rena became Gekikara would be because of the severed connection between the Wmatsui...

The connection was the last link... What do you think?!

I can't wait to see what's going to happen next...

Would Jurina need to fight Gekikara...?

How about the rest of Rappapa especially Torigoya and Shibuya?

Thank you for the lovely update

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Re: Silent Killer update Chapter 17
« Reply #116 on: April 15, 2013, 08:02:24 AM »
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

I do not want to see Center fights against Gekikara
No, no...no ...but Yes! This fight scene will be awsome  :twisted:
Even though they're sisters but can you make a WMatsui kiss in the last chapter? I know but ... :cry:



lol I see a hint of Nezcen  :lol:




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Re: Silent Killer update Chapter 17
« Reply #117 on: April 15, 2013, 02:02:58 PM »
GO CENTER, SAVE GEKIKARA!!!!!!  XD XD XD
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Re: Silent Killer update Chapter 17
« Reply #118 on: April 15, 2013, 10:22:45 PM »
GEKI!!! NOO!!!!
Now that I think about it
Tori is stronger than she is in MajiGaku
the reason Maeda won was because Tori was overcome by the negative emotions....

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Re: Silent Killer update Chapter 17
« Reply #119 on: April 16, 2013, 07:24:20 AM »
Jurina save Rena!!!
bring her back
don't let her getting hurt more than this

but anyway as always nice update miyumi-san :twothumbs

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