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Re: WMatsui: Great Escape Chapter 5
« Reply #200 on: May 06, 2013, 05:44:09 PM »
@Rukaeru: Oh. Thx for telling me. Then again I don't really read Mayuki unless WMatsui is involve. :cow:


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Re: WMatsui: Great Escape Chapter 5
« Reply #201 on: May 06, 2013, 05:55:40 PM »
wow you update really fast...  :thumbup :twothumbs :bow:

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Re: WMatsui: Great Escape Chapter 5
« Reply #202 on: May 06, 2013, 06:02:26 PM »
Juju is so cute~ and she gets along with the kids~


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Re: WMatsui: Great Escape Chapter 5
« Reply #203 on: May 06, 2013, 06:38:47 PM »
Jurina now can adapt to the people around her without injuring them, although the danger is still around hope she can pull through
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Re: WMatsui: Great Escape Chapter 5
« Reply #204 on: May 06, 2013, 07:12:07 PM »
awww jurina so cute in the nursery   :deco:
i don't wnat jurina to set off on her own, i want her to stay with rena :yep:
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Re: WMatsui: Great Escape Chapter 5
« Reply #205 on: May 06, 2013, 08:27:24 PM »
I don't know what to say. I just don't have any words to describe how fuaqing cute Jurina is  :on GJ:
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Re: WMatsui: Great Escape Chapter 5
« Reply #206 on: May 06, 2013, 10:44:44 PM »
Kawaiii~~~
Jurina is soooo cute~~~
But just wondering, will there possibly be any actual romance between the wmatsui?
I want to see Jurina do the prince act~ kakoiiiii!! <3

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Re: WMatsui: Great Escape Chapter 5
« Reply #207 on: May 07, 2013, 12:10:24 AM »
CUTE CHAPTEEEEER!!
I love it! >3<

but I wanna to see Jurina's Pervy side   :w00t:
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Re: WMatsui: Great Escape Chapter 5
« Reply #208 on: May 07, 2013, 09:34:11 AM »
Ara... Jurina is growing up... in some way...

She is so popular with the children... and even the caretakers...

She is prince-like... as usual...

Jurina drew picture of Rena... ah... so cute...

Poor Rena... being bully again... at work... Now is harassment...

Ah, Jurina able to prepare her own lunch with little helps...

That's good progress...

What's going to happen next

Can't wait to find out

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Re: WMatsui: Great Escape Chapter 5
« Reply #209 on: May 07, 2013, 03:11:15 PM »
Now when i re-read Chapter 4 (yes, I am the type who will read a chapter a few times and tried to decipher the last few scenes...since there is no follow-up smut on Chapter 5, maybe I would like to think of it as a misunderstanding lol. Jurina wasn't really obsessed with the sex scene in the adult video, but rather the food used in the sex scene? haha...that could explain why she's drooling while watching and thinking of strawberries! haha! I will leave it to author-san to decide whether she/he wants Jurina to be that innocent, anyway any smut story is welcome!  :p
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Re: WMatsui: Great Escape Chapter 5
« Reply #210 on: May 08, 2013, 12:03:19 PM »
Btw I just wanted to say thank you and sorry for quoting your story without your permission.

I did an Interpretation speech for my Public Speaking Class based on the first half of Great Escape first chapter. Despite my poor acting, people still laugh. ^^ I'm so glad. Seriously I can't express now grateful I am. You saved my life there. XD

Of cuz ppl asked where I quoted it from and I told them. :3


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Re: WMatsui: Great Escape Chapter 6
« Reply #211 on: May 08, 2013, 04:19:17 PM »
Minna! I hope you like the next update! Lots of stuff happens and lots of new things happen as well. Enjoy!
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Chapter 6

I was working in my office when I got a call from one of my neighbors. She told me that she saw someone break into my apartment and she could hear screaming coming from the inside. I dropped everything and ran out of the office and drove as fast as I could. When I arrived, there was police tape and officers at the scene. I rushed inside and saw an officer talking to Jurina. I quickly ran over to her and hugged her close. Jurina was shaking and tears were running down her face. She was half naked and there were cuts on her wrists and ankles and a bruise on her side where her shirt was torn. What the hell happened to her?

(2 hours earlier...)

Jurina didn't have school today so she was lounging around watching TV and playing with her games. It was around noon so she was sleepy which meant time for a nap. She walked to her room and fell onto the bed sleeping shortly after. About an hour later she woke up to the sound of something breaking. She got up and looked out the door expecting to see Rena but instead she saw someone else. She didn't know who it was but whoever they were, they were taking stuff. Jurina didn't like it and was going to attack the man seeing how he didn't belong. Jurina waited until he turned around and then she attacked and jumped on the man. She started to punch and kick but the man was stronger. He got up and grabbed Jurina by the neck. He leaned in close to her and said,

"What do we have here?"

Jurina squirmed trying to break free of the man's grip. He only tightened the grip and then slammed her onto the table. He held her arms up tried to hold her legs back but Jurina kicked him and managed to get away. She ran into the bathroom and locked the door behind her. Then she ran to the window and started calling for help hoping someone would hear her. There was loud banging on the door and Jurina knew he was coming. She had to hide somewhere but where could she go? Jurina had to think fast and then quickly got an idea. She opened one of the closets in the bathroom and hid inside. When the man broke the door down, he started looking for Jurina. Jurina waited until be walked past and then jumped out of the closet with a nail file. She stabbed his leg and then ran for the door.

She was almost there but then the man grabbed her hair and pulled her back. Then he pulled out some rope and tied her arms and legs. She tried to move but every time she did the ropes cut her. The man smiled and said,

"No where to run! So lets have some fun!"

The man reached out and tore Jurina's shirt revealing part of her chest and torso. Jurina  started screaming for Rena but the man gagged her and said,

"Is Rena a friend? Well if she is then maybe I'll have fun with her too!"

The man laughed and proceeded to take off his pants. He was about to tear off Jurina's panties but then the doors busted open and police rolled in. They took the guy down and covered Jurina. Shortly after Rena arrived to the whole scene.

(Current time...)

After the cops left, I looked at the damages and see what was going to be fixed. The window was broken and the TV was shot but otherwise everything was ok. Well not everything though because Jurina was mentally dramatized. She was still in that scared state where she was shaking and holding onto me. After today, I realized that Jurina isn't safe on her own. I wasn't here to protect her and she isn't strong enough to protect herself. From now on I'll have to have someone watch her more often. For now though we need to sleep somewhere else because I think Jurina is too scared to stay here. Just then I got a phone call and saw it was from Yuki.

"Rena? Wah thank goodness you're alright! I saw your house on the news so I became worried."

"Oh I'm fine but Jurina is a little shook up."

"Well how about you come and spend the night at my place for a while? Your house is gonna need to be fixed."

"Thanks Yuki we'll be over soon."

I hung up and then carried Jurina to the car. We drove to Yuki's house and when we arrived she came out and welcomed us. However when Yuki saw Jurina there was a look of surprise on her face. I told her I'd explain when we got inside so we walked in and I set Jurina to sleep in her sister's room. Then I walked over with Yuki and we sat down.

"So care to explain?"

"Well...."

"Rena you don't need to be afraid. Just tell me."

I took a deep breath and then explained everything about Jurina from the moment I met her to today. When I finished she was silent for a long time and then she said,

"Based on what I see... How about you move in with me."

"Eh?"

"Rena your home is unsafe, you're never there to watch her and she's too young to be on her own. I think you should sell your apartment and move in with us."

"Yuki I don't know what to say..."

"Just think about it Rena. Do it for Jurina."

"Well..."

My mind was doing a flip turn between guilt and selfishness. I wanted to move in but I was afraid I'd be a burden to Yuki. She already is raising a son and another kid won't help. I was afraid and not sure what to do. Then suddenly the door swung open and a girl walked in. She saw me and stopped and said,

"Nee-chan who is this?"

"Ah Mayu is this my friend Matsui Rena. Rena this is my little sister Mayu."

"Nice to meet you." I said.

"Mayu Rena and her daughter are going to be living with us for a while. You'll be sharing your room with her daughter Jurina."

"What?! No way!"

"Please Mayu be kind. I know you don't like it but Rena is going through a rough time and could use all the help she could get."

"Fine."

Mayu took off her shoes and walked into her room. Soon after she came back out squealing and said,

"You can stay as long as you want!"

Then she ran back inside and shut the door behind her.

"Looks like she likes Jurina already." Rena said.

"See Rena? So how about you stay just for a while. Earn enough money to buy your own place and then you can move out."

"I'll think about it..."

That night I went to bed with a lot on my mind and a bad headache. When I woke up the next day I went to work with Yuki while Mayu stayed with Jurina. I hope the two will be alright. In the meantime though I walked into the office and my boss called me. He told me he heard about the incident and felt sorry. However he was pissed because I left work early so she decides to cut my pay in half. The whole moment there just paused and I was ready to explode. However I managed to keep calm and walk away from it all. I walked to my desk and packed my things. I grabbed all the crap he told me to do and then walked back in. He was talking to the guy who constantly hit on me and I was not in the mood for his cocky attitude. I threw all my papers at him and my said said,

"Matsui! What the hell is this?!"

"I quit."

"What? You can't quit!"

"Oh I can and you can't do anything so screw you I'm going home."

I turned around and tried to walk away but I felt him grab my arm.

"You're not going anywhere!"

"Oh? Then how about this!"

I turned around and kicked him in the groin. He fell down and cried in pain and I watched him with a smile on my face. I looked at the other guy who didn't do anything but just protect his as well. I giggled and said,

"If you come after me I'll post those pictures of you at the last Christmas party to all the employees and the police."

He didn't say anything be just nodded his head.

"Good then I'll be taking my pay..."

I reached into his pocket and pulled out all his cash.

"It was nice working with you. Bye bye~"

I stepped out and left the office once and for all. I went to my landlord back home and told him I was moving out so a couple hours later I got some neighbors to help me out. Then I drove over to Yuki's house and told Yuki,

"I quit my job and I'm staying."

"Good for you Rena. Let's celebrate with a nice dinner!"

"That would be fabulous."

That night we had a big dinner with all kinds of good food. Turns out Yuki is a really good cook and the food was so good. After a full belly and a relaxing bath, I was ready to go to bed. I walked into the Mayu's room where Jurina was sleeping soundly. I reached out and gently strokes her hair. She opened her eyes and said,

"R-Rena?"

"Go back to sleep Jurina. I won't have to go to the office anymore so tomorrow we can play all day." I said.

"Yay~"

"Now sleep you have a big day tomorrow."

"Hai~"

Jurina fell back asleep and I just covered her with blankets. From now on things are going to change and something tells me it's going to get better.

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Re: WMatsui: Great Escape Chapter 6
« Reply #212 on: May 08, 2013, 04:35:01 PM »
So Rena has reached her boiling point and now can take care of Jurina in the interim

Everyone is against her though except for Yuki
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Re: WMatsui: Great Escape Chapter 6
« Reply #213 on: May 08, 2013, 04:46:20 PM »
I wish I could kill that asdfghjkleqhrihew................


Jurina~ :cry: Dont worry Ju-chan, Rena would protect and be there for you after all

Rena   :twothumbs , kick that old man ass XD


Idk but I just dont want to see Jurina's pervert side yet  ;)
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Re: WMatsui: Great Escape Chapter 6
« Reply #214 on: May 08, 2013, 04:49:33 PM »
I feel sorry for juju :< ne, I like how rena treat her boss! Greats!! XD cant wait another update.. :bow:

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Re: WMatsui: Great Escape Chapter 6
« Reply #215 on: May 08, 2013, 05:17:05 PM »
I like how rena treat her boss! Greats!! XD
that was the best! xD
I wanna to do that with one teacher xD .. but I can't ~~

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Re: WMatsui: Great Escape Chapter 6
« Reply #216 on: May 08, 2013, 06:33:20 PM »
Jurina was about to get rape.  :frustrated: thank god that the cops got there in time  :depressed: :depressed:

I hopes every thing is going to be alright for rena and jurina.

Wait a sec  :stoned: Mayu is Yukis sister,  :kekeke: mhehehehe le me got some feeling that it will be some JuriMayu scene :shy2:

 
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Re: WMatsui: Great Escape Chapter 6
« Reply #217 on: May 08, 2013, 10:05:50 PM »
so i have this habit of eating jelly without spreading it onto bread
jelly is on a spoon and I was reading while eating it.....
and then I was being all happy and I realized that I ran out of jelly
but this was sweeter than jelly even though this was a bit....... dark? not the right word.....
hooray~~ so Mayu is Yuki's lil sis.....
or is she? whatever~~
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Re: WMatsui: Great Escape Chapter 6
« Reply #218 on: May 09, 2013, 08:45:09 AM »
OMG.... Poor Jurina...  :cry: She nearly got raped

How could somebody do that to Jurina... she is a cute and sweet child...  :angry:

Ah... Yuki... you are a life saver... for Rena and Jurina...

Mayu is Yuki's imouto... And she likes Jurina...

What a jerk... the boss....

Good Job there... Rena... kicking and black mailing.... the boss....

At last... It was long over due....

Rena... is going to have fun... with Jurina... What's going to happen during their play?

Can't wait to find out what's going to happen next...

Would Rena be able to find a better job...?

Would Rena be able to find out what's really happen to Jurina?

Can't wait....

Thank you for the update

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Re: WMatsui: Great Escape Chapter 6
« Reply #219 on: May 09, 2013, 12:38:35 PM »
Jurina didn't talk a single line in this chapter...I wonder how far is her education now. Can she attend elementary or high school now?

Just what did Jurina do to get Mayu attention so easily. XD

Ahhh~ I'm senscing some JuriMayu....wait, Rena is an adult, she won't be jealous, will she? >.<

And there's Rena quitting her job...you're not gonna make her miserable about not finding a new job, are you? ^^'


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