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‘Egao wasureinaiyo’-’don’t forget to smile’  Mayuki fanfic

I decided to make a proper Mayuki fanfic, again inspired by some lyrics, sorry if it's boring, and sorry if it's quite short :nervous so hope you enjoy it  :P.

Plot

Mayu always tries to act strong, put on a fake smile, but is hiding her true feelings. Yuki is Mayu's hope.

Part 1

Yuki's pov

“Mayu…why do I love you this much?”

“Back in that time, there was so much I didn’t understand, there was so much time we lost… Now I can’t say anything”

“That day, deep in your eyes, I saw the loneliness
Are the two of us really alike?
If I’d realized it, you were always by my side”

“Your sweet angelic voice, still rings inside me so much it makes me sad
But there was no such thing as forever”

“It’s okay if you don’t believe me” you whispered

“Were you really my friend?
And I decided then I would protect you”

“Why can't I turn these precious moments we had into memories
You're too far, too near for me to reach
The more I tell myself "I will forget"
The larger you loom in my thoughts”

“Your sweet angelic voice, still rings inside me so much it makes me sad
Just what it was that supported me so much
I realize it now from afar”
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At the amusement park…

“Y-Yuki…” Mayu stuttered, staring at the taller girl in front if her, blushing.

Yuki looking at the younger girl who was wearing a white frilly lacy dress, gently cupped her cheek and gave her a peck on her small plump lips. Hopelessly can’t stop smiling. Took hold of Mayu’s hand and dragged her out of the cafe.

Mayu thought to herself “I’m going to have a heart attack, if she keeps this up”… Looking down trying to avoid eye contact with the older girl.

Yuki couldn’t help but giggle at the smaller girl’s cuteness,
Mayu and Yuki started lining up to ride on the ferries wheel, when they finally got on (surprise, surprise), they kissed again but this time a kiss that was longer and more passionate.
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The ride was finally over, Mayu and Yuki left the amusement park holding hands, that was when Yuki let go,

“Try and catch me”, Yuki teased.

Mayu started chasing her, “hey, wait for me…”,

Yuki ran into the road, that’s when she did not see the car coming.

Beeping loudly, Yuki froze with fear, only cut off when she heard Mayu’s voice… But it was too late…

“Yuki!!” Mayu desperately shouted,
Running to Yuki’s side, Yuki was covered in blood,
Mayu held her in her arms staring at her, then paying attention to the red stains on her hands, tears rolling down her cheeks.

“Y-Yuki… Yuki no!!” Mayu cried out.
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Is Yuki going to survive?  :?

Please free to comment and thank you for reading.  :yep:
« Last Edit: October 21, 2017, 09:35:54 PM by sophcaro »
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Re: ‘Egao wasureinaiyo’-’don’t forget to smile’ Mayuki fanfic
« Reply #1 on: November 24, 2012, 11:06:44 PM »
OH!!! :shocked
just want comment something XD
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Re: ‘Egao wasureinaiyo’-’don’t forget to smile’ Mayuki fanfic
« Reply #2 on: November 24, 2012, 11:55:06 PM »
gomen ne really really sorry if it's too short just came up with it today and really sorry about the cliffhanger thing  :nervous  :(
i will try to update tomarrow but i cannot promise anything
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Re: ‘Egao wasureinaiyo’-’don’t forget to smile’ Mayuki fanfic
« Reply #3 on: November 25, 2012, 01:02:19 PM »
eh  :shocked
what is gonna happen!!!  :angry:
Yuki  :cry:

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Re: ‘Egao wasureinaiyo’-’don’t forget to smile’ Mayuki fanfic
« Reply #4 on: November 25, 2012, 08:11:03 PM »
miina gomen my friend was on my latop and she accidently dropped when she tripped and wanted to me something cuz she was running with it :nervous :angry: i am replying form my neighbours computer, so i also lost my files so i have to type it out again i will try to update when i get myself a new latop maybe this week or through my neighbours computer really really sorry :cry: :( :cry: :(
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Re: ‘Egao wasureinaiyo’-’don’t forget to smile’ Mayuki fanfic
« Reply #5 on: November 26, 2012, 08:55:08 PM »
Nooooo! yukiiiiii ;.;

Sorry about your laptop ><

And now I'll have to wait more to know what is going to happen >< well, at least I know she will live, because if Yuki dies, there is no Mayuki fic ;.;

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Re: ‘Egao wasureinaiyo’-’don’t forget to smile’ Mayuki fanfic
« Reply #6 on: November 27, 2012, 08:37:55 PM »
Here is the last update!
Part 2
Meanwhile in the hospital…
Mayu is staring at the wires, tubes that are hooked onto a machine and attached to Yuki, then turns back to look at Yuki.
“(Yuki no baka… why did you let go? (Sniffles)” Mayu quietly mumbled to herself.
Mayu could hear the doctor and nurse whispering in the background,
“Do you think she’ll make through the night doctor” the nurse asked.
“I don’t know, she seems stabilised for now but all we can do is wait” (sighed) the doctor.
Mayu starts to silently cry, holding Yuki’s hand.

Mayu who was tired but still awake looked at the clock,
“It’s already quarter past 12… (Sigh)”

Mayu didn’t want to sleep, she was scared that Yuki would let go again (lightly tightening her hold to Yuki’s hand… started to loosen) Mayu started drifting off until she finally fell asleep.

Mayu’s dream..

Chasing after Yuki,
“Yuki wait for me… aha got you” Mayu smiled.

Then Mayu blinked for few secs, looked around couldn’t find Yuki until she spotted her up ahead.
“ahh… Yuki wait I’m coming too” Mayu said as she tried to move but it was like she was glued on the spot, suddenly darkness surrounded her.

“hmmm….urrghh… I can’t move…” Mayu struggling.

“ahh Don’t go Yuki!"
“yada, yada!!”

Mayu eyed widened,

“Yuki! Yuki!” Mayu shouted.

Mayu suddenly woke up surprised,
“(panting, panting)…Yuki…” tears rolled down her face.

The next day Mayu goes to visit Yuki in the hospital...

“Eh?! Yuki, she’s gone!”

Mayu runs around the hospital calling out Yuki’s name,

“Yuki! Where are you?”

Mayu then bumps into someone. Hoping it was Yuki but to her disappointment it was a doctor.

“Are you okay?” the doctor worryingly asked.

“ano… sensei, you wouldn’t know where Kashiwagi Yuki-san happened to be?” Mayu impatiently waiting for an answer,
“It’s because she’s not in her bed or in the ward”

“oh Kashiwagi-san, she left the hospital earlier this afternoon, it seemed she was in a hurry to be somewhere though”, the doctor told Mayu.

“ano… did she say where?” Mayu asked again.

“I’m sorry no…” the doctor knew he had just given a disappointing answer.

“Oh…ok, well thank you” Mayu said then quickly ran out of the hospital in search for Yuki.
Meanwhile Yuki is walking by the beach, and then stopped…

“(sigh)… (then stretched)…why can’t I remember her” Yuki softly mumbled to herself.

Yuki’s pov

“That girl she keeps flashing in my head, but why?  Is she someone important, someone I know?”


Mayu is searching all around town for Yuki, looks for her in the amusement park, stops by her house…then starts slowly walking to the beach.

Mayu’s pov
“Yuki where are you? I’m so sorry, it’s my fault I know it is… but please let me find you”, Mayu spacing out, slowly looks up and then stares in shock.

“Wait… is that Yuki? It’s her!” Mayu started walking gradually turning into sprinting towards the person she’s been trying to find for more than 2 hours.

“Yuki!” Mayu shouts wanting her voice to reach.
Yuki turns round and suddenly gets attacked by the smaller girl who starts crying.

“Um... excuse me who are you” Yuki said staring at Mayu with a confued expression on her face,
“Eh? You don’t remember me?” Mayu stepped back with a scared look on her face.

“Your that girl… the girl in my dreams, who are you exactly” Yuki spat out.
Interrogating Mayu.

“I’m your friend?” Mayu quietly says.

“It’s okay if you don’t believe me… actually it’s probably better if you don’t…” Mayu said staring down.

Yuki noticed the sad tone in Mayu’s voice, soon her confusing expression changed to a sad one.

Yuki hearing what Mayu said, hugs her. Shocked by this sudden action Mayu hugs back, feeling each other’s warmth.
Yuki then breaks the hug,
Mayu and Yuki getting lost in each other’s eyes, Mayu suddenly kisses Yuki and Yuki who was surprised, started kissing Mayu back.

Suddenly flashes off the day they webt to the amusement park comes back flooding in Yuki’s mind.
Yuki then breaks the kiss and pushes Mayu back.

Mayu then wonders why Yuki suddenly pushed her, but then sees Yuki with her hands on her head.
“My head… it hurts…ahhh” Yuki exclaims in pain.

“Yuki daijobu? Yuki?” Mayu starts to panick.

Yuki then looks up at Mayu,
“I remember… M-Mayu?” Yuki stuttered.

“Yuki…”

Yuki hugs Mayu again and plants a kiss on her forehead.
“I’m sorry Mayu, I’ll never let go again” Yuki whispers.

Mayu breaks into tears. Yuki cups Mayu’s cin to make her looks at her.
“Mayu…don’t forget to smile” Yuki reassuringly says.

Mayu then gave a small smile while trying to wipe away her tears.
“un!” Mayu says.

The end.
Sorry if it’s quite short I decided not to make chapters in the end as my latop is broken :nervous, writing this from neighbours computer, hope you enjoyed it. :P
« Last Edit: December 18, 2015, 09:26:14 PM by mayuki_daisuki »
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Thank you, I need sometbing to cheer me up after Takoyaki's scandal. The cuteness of the fic reached my heart

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Ah its good one

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Oh it's a good one...

I like this short fic...

Thank you for the update

Can't wait to see more

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This shortfic is so sweet :shy1:
Mayuki :luvluv1:
Although it kinda shocked when I read the part that Yuki got accident and lost her memories :stoned:
But she finally remember everything :on woohoo:
Love this :ding:
Write more Mayuki shortfic please :kneelbow:
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Re: ‘Egao wasureinaiyo’-’don’t forget to smile’ Mayuki fanfic
« Reply #11 on: August 08, 2013, 07:05:44 PM »
Sorry if it’s quite short I decided not to make chapters in the end as my latop is broken :nervous, writing this from neighbours computer, hope you enjoyed it. :P

how considerate of you  :hee: :kneelbow:

I like this fanfic of yours author-san!  :on GJ: :on gay:
my hat is off. saluting.

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