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My not-sofirst fanfic here  XD I hope you'll like. So the main pairings will be : AtsuMina and Kojiyuu. Then other pairings just might show-up. I'm open for suggestions, comments, criticisms that can make the story improve  :cow: So, here's Chapter 1



There's More Into Friendship
Chapter 1

A short haired girl with an above average look stands infront of Akihabara Gakuen, thinking whether or not she'll go in. It's the first day of her Senior high. She had made the list of things she wanted to do before leaving highschool, but neither of the written things included the word Akihabara Gakuen. Well, not necessarily Akihabara Gakuen, but Tokyo. She lived in Osaka and studied in AG there, but because of sudden happenings, Akihabara Gakuen (Osaka) transferred her in Tokyo. With of course, the consent of her parents.

She continued walking along the gates of AG while looking around. The scenery of AG (Tokyo) is the same as Osaka's that she almost thought that she's still in the latter place. If only Harugon, her bestfriend is here, then she would've believed that she didn't transffered at all.

"mi-miss, are you okay ?" asked a short girl with a pink ribbon on top of her hair who's sweeping the leaves of Sakura that just fell.

Atsuko looked at the midget girl, examining her face and height making the short girl feel bad.

"i-i guess not," the short girl said, turning her back at Atsuko and continued sweeping the leaves. Atsuko, realizing what she just did immediately called out the somewhat 'good samaritan' who asked her if she was okay.

"chotto,"

"w-what ?" Asked the midget girl who's still nervous without understanding why.

"I-i think i'm lost." Atsuko lied, She was thankful that somebody have approached her even though it looked like, base from the height, a sophomore or a junior. Friendship starts with a small conversation after all.

"You must be new then," The midget girl smiled, "I can lead the way for you. What class are you in ?"

"eto.." Atsuko said playing with her fingers cutely, "I actually just transfferred here from Osaka Akihabara Gakuen..."

"ahhhhhh !" The midget girl exclaimed, "You must be the one they're talking about then, Atsa.. Atsi.. Atsuki.. "

"Atsuko, Maeda Atsuko."

"Ah right," The midget looked away from embarrasment,

Suddenly, the bell rang. It's only 6:25 am, and classes would start at 6:48 which Atsuko knew with all her heart since she was always late back then at Osaka. Atsuko wondered what's happening, for after the bell, girls flooded at the front door (after the gate) looking like a massive group of fangirls waiting for idols to come.

Then, the gate opened widely, revealing six beautiful girls who walked on the clean gatehall in where Atsuko and the midget girl was the only one left behind. In Atsuko's view, they were like goddesses who descended into the earth with their beauty. Even though she wanted to give way to the beautiful girls coming, her feet wouldn't move.

"kyaaah," a girl screamed at the top of her lungs, "it's the kami seven!!!!" then she fainted.

Immediately after that, all the girls formed a line side by side and bowed as the girls walked pass them.

"kami seven ?" Atsuko whispered to herself,

"yeah," the midget girl answered, "Kami 7 is a group of seven girls who have 'it' - looks, brain and money. They're the most popular bunch here in Akihabara Gakuen."

"but they're only six,"

But the midget didn't answer, instead, she continued sweeping the leaves and waited for the Kami 7 (tho only 6) walk pass them.

Now, everything in her world is new. Never in her life in Osaka Akihabara Gakuen did she encounter such things as Kami 7. Hell with that, what will you get anyway if you happen to be in there ? admiration ? popularity ? Atsuko knew that she didn't care about that one bit. But the only thing that she can see is that those Kami 7, even though they're just six, are stunning beautiful.

The first one on the right side looked like an angel, if that girl will tell her that she's an idol, Atsuko will definitely believe it. Next to her was a girl who's face looked perfect, so perfect that she might be mistaken for a cyborg, she is cute but her smile is scary. Then, next is the tallest girl who looked like a model. She have this matching sun glasses with the other girl on her left which also, by the way looked like a model too. After the two model like girl is a small girl, though higher (she thinks) than the midget girl beside her. The small girl (from Kami 7) looked like a squirrel and has the most fans, because of the loud yelling Atsuko heard when the squirrel-like girl waved her hand to the crowd of girls at the front door. And oh, the small squirrel girl kept on touching the model like girl beside her. Last is the girl who looked like a famous singer, Amuro Namie ? Though a lot more younger. She also have this cute fang which is bigger than usual fangs are.

Her heart thumped fast as the 6 gorgeous girls became more and more nearer in their location. Something about them made her feel insecure ? no. Intimidated ? no. She can't explain, there's something in them that she admired but also hated - something that the fangirls (schoolmates) are probably feeling too. She won't be surprised if one day, she'll join in the crowd and spazz over the beauty of the kami 7 while wanting to be one of them too. wait - did she said 'wanting to be one of them' ?

The moment have came, Atsuko - a mere human came in contact with the goddesses of Akihabara Gakuen.

"ohayou," The girl with cute fangs greeted, Atsuko was about to respond shyly when she realized that the 'good morning' was not for her, but for the midget girl beside her.

"ohayou,"

"beautiful girl you got there eh ?" the squirrel-like girl said as she winked at Atsuko, making Atsuko blush. The squirrel-girl have this aura in which you want to surrender yourself totally, No doubt that she have the most number of fans.

The midget said nothing and continued sweeping like it is her job, the Kami 7 continued walking.

After all the commotion has ended, the midget girl too stopped sweeping and looked at Atsuko who's still on a daze over what happened.

"you look like you want to build a church for them,  Atsuki" the midget teased,

"n-not really," Atsuko fighted. "and it's Atsu-ko not Atsu-ki,"

"but that doesn't change the fact that you already admire them on the first day of class, Atsuki err Atsuko "

"h-hey stop that ! I'm a senior you know, even though i only transferred here i can say that you're only a junior or sophomore. "

"it's because of my height huh," With that said the midget became red, not because of love but because of something more fatal in her feelings. Her height. She's always being mistaken as a junior or sophomore , worse is a elementary kid. She promised herself not to be called like that in her senior year, but on the first day of class, with her first encounter with Atsuko, she was already called as such.

"S-senpai, ohayou" a girl called, looking like a sophomore. She have this cute dimples making her round face cuter.

Wait- Senpai ?

"ah, Rabutan. ohayou," The midget greeted back. "You guys are late,"

"Gomenasai." Suddenly, the one rabutan became five.

"This is Atsuko, Maeda Atsu-ko. And not Atsuki" The midget said as she introduced Atsuko to her 'friends', emphasizing Atsu-ko.Atsuko just smiled at the weird bunch calling the midget a senpai when they seemed to be taller than the midget.

"Let us continue your work Takamina-senpai," They all bowed, showing their sweeping materials.

"Okay then," Takamina said as she patted the girl's head. "Do your this school year, watarirouka."

She looked at Atsuko and winked making the other girl blush,  "let's go now ? we're on the same class." Then Takamina started walking.

"w-wait," Atsuko said, trying to walk at the same pace at the midget girl. "s-same class ?"

"yeah, quite a shock huh." Takamina said with a slight sense of pride in her voice making Atsuko look embarrassed more than she already is.

"g-gomenasai." Atsuko bowed her head. 

"w-what for ?" Takamina feined.

"about earlier.. i thought.."

"It's okay, everybody mistakes me as one during the first meeting. Besides, it's nothing big, the worse thing i have encountered is having a teacher mistake me for an elementary." Takamina said as she putted her hand on Atsuko's shoulders - a sign that what she said is somewhat sincere. "but you know, i told myself that i won't let anyone tell me that i look like an elementary school girl at my senior year. And you broke it on my first day."

"g-gomenasai," Atsuko said, still embarassed.

"daijoubou. but of course you have to compensate for it. You have to treat me a katsudon ~" Takamina smiled at the other girl.

"e-eh ?"

The bell rang again, this time signaling that the students must be inside their respective classroom because 5 minutes after that, classes would start.

"let's go now, we might be late."

"w-wait." Atsuko stopped.

"i told you everything is okay. you don't have to-"

"no, i mean you haven't introduced yourself yet."

"Ah, Gomen. Everybody here calls me Takamina.  You can call me that too,"

"Just call me Acchan then, everybody back at osaka calls me that too. And it's Atsuko not Atsuki."

END of CHAPTER 1



Yup, as i said awhile ago, I'm open for comments, suggestions, and criticisms. I'll post chapter 2 later.. or not  XD
« Last Edit: April 23, 2014, 08:38:56 AM by atsuki »

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-Hello.

-Nice chapter!

-I love AtsuMina and KojiYuu

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Nice chapter! I want to see AtsuMina and KojiYuu moments!!  :mon fyeah:
Takamina mistook Acchan 'Atsuki' XD really funny!  :mon evillaff:
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Nice chapter! I want to see AtsuMina and KojiYuu moments!!  :mon fyeah:
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Chapter 2

"I respectfully nominate Maeda Atsuko-san as the second class representative." The girl with a short hair, who Atsuko recalled to be a member of Kami 7 said with a serious face.
Atsuko looked at the girl in wonder. How did this mighty being notice her ? Is it because she's a transferee ? And more on, this Kami 7 gal is also nominated as a class representative. Just, What's going on ?

Atsuko turned her look at Takamina who's sitting at her left, Apparently the midget girl is looking at the person who nominated Atsuko with a confused look visible on her face too.
After realizing that Atsuko is looking at her, she made an encouraging gesture, "Daijoubu. Everything will be fine."

"Un," Acchan mumbled, feeling a little relieved with what the midget's assurance.

"Well then, are there other nominations ?" Their homeroom teacher, Mr. Akizawa said.

"Oh God. This is boring," A gachapin-like girl commented making Mariko's eyes twitch. "Just make Maeda-san and that obaasan the class reps, it's already break time!"

Mariko didn't need to look at the third row to know who said it, the only one who calls her 'obaasan' as well as the ugly voice can only come from a certain Minegeshi Minami - Her ex-best friend turned into mortal enemy.

"Hey, what did you call Shinoda-san you Gachapin ?" An irritated voice yelled who seemed to be more hurt with the Gachapin's comment than Mariko herself. Atsuko looked at her and realized that it was the same girl who fainted when Kami 7 entered the school awhile ago.

"Why would i bother to repeat it ? Go ask that Obaasan." Minegeshi replied, "Oh wait, i bet she didn't hear it well because of old age."

With that said, Mariko stood from her seat, ready to say mean things at the Gachapin, but suddenly the girl who yelled to defend her is already ready to slap her enemy.
"You insolent ---"

At that moment, Takamina who's seating at the last row at the back of the Gachapin decided to act as well, catching the hand of the wota like girl. "Ne, ne, A classroom is meant for studying, not for slapping. Right Sasshihara-san ?"

"b-but,"

Atsuko looked at the midget girl, confused of her actions. Is this the same girl who's sweeping the leaves earlier ? Takamina's aura definitely changed in an instant.

Their teacher who was used to his kind of things happening to Class A of Akihabara Gakuen  faked a cough to stop the commotion. "Okay, so after the interruption of
Sasshihara-san and Minegeshi-san who will be seeing me later before they go home," He paused for awhile as he eyed the two, "let's continue our postponed election."

( ´ ▽ ` )ノ ( ´ ▽ ` )ノ ( ´ ▽ ` )ノ ( ´ ▽ ` )ノ ( ´ ▽ ` )ノ ( ´ ▽ ` )ノ ( ´ ▽ ` )ノ

"Itadakimasu," Takamina and Atsuko said in unison as they started to eat their lunch. They're currently in the rooftop of Akihabara Gakuen's Manatsu building.

"oishi naa, it tasted more delicious, i wonder why." Takamina said, savouring every taste of the katsudon infront of her.

"ofcourse," Acchan said irritatedly, If it's not because of her encounter with Takamina earlier then she could have eaten a lot more. The money she could have used in buying sweets was used as a compensation for somewhat insulting the midget's height.

"are you mad ?" Takamina asked, looking at Acchan who looked both irrated and happy at the same time. Acchan didn't reply and instead continued eating. "h-hey, Acchi."

"Atsuko not Atsuki. Acchan not Acchi."

"Well that doesn't really matter." Takamina said, hiding the embarrassment in her face.

"Actually it does. Takamini."

"H-Hey ! It's Takamina not Taka-" Takamina paused, realizing that 'Takamini' involves her height issues. "We only met today geez.."

"But your the one who started this,"

"Started what ?"

"I don't know, what did i just said ?" Atsuko said, smiling cutely. "Hey, what's that ?" Atsuko pointed at the sky, making Takamina look above too. Atsuko immediately grabbed the last slice of pork in Takamina's chopstick and swallowed it before Takamina notice what she did.

"There's nothing in there," Takamina said innocently.

"Yeah," Acchan giggled.

"stop fooling around."

Takamina was about to eat the last bit of her katsudon when she noticed that there's nothing left, and that Atsuko ate it. She looked at Atsuko who's eating happily infront of her and used her chopstick in getting the other girl's pork. But Atsuko managed to defend it and putted it in her mouth afterwards.

"Uwa ! You're such a glutton," Takamina said,

"Look at the one who's talking. You tried to steal my last pork !" Atsuko demanded,

"Oh god," Takamina shifted her seat and turned her back to Atsuko.

"Are you mad ?" Atsuko asked, feeling a little remorse in her mind. "Hey, I'm sorry."

"I didn't mean to Takamina, It's just that the food is irresistable."

"Are you okay ?"

"Hey,"

"I'm sorry for acting this way." Atsuko said continously waiting for a response.

Instead of hearing a response from the midget girl, Atsuko heared at laugh from Takamina.

"eh ?"

"Don't worry Acchan, I'm not mad." Takamina said, using Atsuko's nickname right for the first time. "It's just cute seeing you go paranoid."

"I'm not." Atsuko said, "It's just that... Your my first friend here."

Takamina felt an unexplainable happiness in her heart upon hearing Acchan say that. For some reasons, she felt proud that she spoke to Acchan awhile ago while cleaning the grounds of Akihabara. It seems like they have known each other for a long time already. Takamina felt comfortable around her, and for sure, Atsuko felt the same way too.

"Ah, Takamina, Can you tell me more about that Shinoda-san ?" Atsuko asked,

"Hmm.. Love Interest?" Takamina teased,

"Hey ! I'm not into that. It's just that, well, we're both elected as the class representatives and i'm quite bothered by the fact that she nominated me herself."

"I don't know what's gotten into her too," Takamina said as if knowing Mariko for a long time already. "It can either be she have a reason or you just appeared to be interesting to her."

"She does what she wants to do anyway, She's the troll one in Kami7" Takamina added,

"Kami 7 huh," Acchan mumbled to herself, "Wouldn't it be trouble if Shinoda-san and Minegeshi-san will be working together ?" Atsuko asked, apparently, Minegeshi was appointed as the secretary of the class.

"Well, they're old friends," Takamina started,

Atsuko raised an eyebrow, "oh ? it doesn't seem like it."

"Ex-Bestfriends actually. They'll manage it, don't worry"

"How about me ? Do you think i can ?"

"Of course Acchan, I'll be here for you."

Atsuko gazed at the midget infront of her, something is not right, why is her face turning heating up ? "t-hanks."

"Midget ! Acchan ! Domo ~ " A certain squirrel said, suddenly popping up into the rooftop, wearing a telescope as a necklace. She immediately went to Takamina and Atsuko who's having a conversation.

"What are you doing here Yuko ?" Takamina asked sounding annoyed, Well she's not annoyed at Yuko but she didn't want the squirrel to be near Atsuko.

"Don't be like that Takamini, You haven't bought the rooftop yet."

"You're only 4 cm taller !"

"At least I'm taller than you, bleh." Yuko showed her tongue to the midget, Atsuko giggled at the sight of the two shorties teasing each other. It didn't look serious after all,
"Domo ~" Yuko said going a little bit closer to Atsuko,

"Domo ?"

"Ah, I haven't introduced myself yet. I thought you  already know me, i'm quite popular here." The squirrel girl said scratching her head. "I'm Oshima Yuko. You can call me Yuko or whatever you want. But Yuuchan is just for NyanNyan so you can't call me that."

"Hajimemashite Yuko-san," Atsuko said, delighted by the girl's action. "I'm Atsuko Maeda, You can call me Acchan, Not Acchi, cause it's wrong." She said, eyeing Takamina.

"No need to be formal, Your beautiful anyway," Yuko said, pinching Atsuko's cheeks. Takamina's eyes twitch seeing Yuko's actions. Yuko saw Takamina and decided to flirt with Acchan more,

"You know, with your beauty, you can rival that of Kami 7's." With Yuko's comment, Atsuko's cheeks turned a bit red.

"Stop joking around Yuko," Takamina said with a hint of irritation in her voice.

"Actually I'm not." Yuko grinned,

"Ah, by the way, Aki-P said that you go to her before your lunch ends, Acchan" Yuko said.

Acchan looked at her wristwatch, "Then i guess, i'll take my leave now."

"Bye Yuko and Takamina, see you later." As Atsuko stood up she felt a hand tap her butt making her scream. "HENTAIIIIII,"

Yuko just chuckled at her action while Takamina's face become red.

"Yuko you idiot," Acchan slapped Yuko so hard leaving hand prints in the squirrel's face. After that, Atsuko ran as fast as she could.

"Itaii ~" Yuko winced in pain,

"It's your fault for being a pervert," Takamina said, "It's a wonder why you're still not on a jail."

"Why are you so mad at me ?" Yuko asked, still rubbing her face. "because of her ?"

"her ?" Takamina asked feining innocence.

"The girl you just met earlier."

"Atsuko ?"

"Who else ? duh," Yuko said, "Don't be so fond of her, people might get jealous,"

"Don't worry I'm not."

"Then is it okay if i ---" Yuko grinned pervertedly but Takamina managed to cut her,

"Don't lay a hand on her." Takamina warned,

Yuko chuckled at the sight of Takamina being serious, she should've bought a camera and not a telescope with her to capture this sight. "Don't worry, She's not my type."

"And besides, I have another person in my sight," Yuko said, as she putted her telescope infront of her eyes and eyed the group of beautiful girls sitting in their respective spot at Akihabara Gakuen's cafeteria, centering the telescope's eye in the face of Kojima Haruna.

( ´ ▽ ` )ノ ( ´ ▽ ` )ノ ( ´ ▽ ` )ノ ( ´ ▽ ` )ノ ( ´ ▽ ` )ノ ( ´ ▽ ` )ノ ( ´ ▽ ` )ノ

"that idiot sensei ate our lunch time, and it's only the first day of class." Tomochin said, opening her bentou.

"chill, at least she didn't ate all the time." Mayu said cooly.

"Just hope she'll get fat." Haruna suggested making everyone on the table look at her, "She ate the time right ?"

The other Kami 7 just faced palm mentally. But she has a point right ?

"It's only the first day and you already have your complaints." Mariko said calmly, "I guess this school year will be exciting."

"our complaints huh ?" Tomochin said, looking at Mariko who's infront of her. "i heard that Minegeshi started a war,"

Kojiharu chuckled, "Yeah, I heard that too Marichan. And it seems like you almost lost your cool."

"That's not funny Nyaro." Mariko commented. "I'm used to it anyway,"

"But aren't the two of you close before ?" Yukirin asked while setting up her bentou along Mayuyu's.

"Past is Past, Yukirin" Mariko answered.

"Speaking of which, where's Minami ?" Haruna asked.

"She's probably with Atsuko."Mariko said, Tomochin eyed her.

"Atsuko ?"

"Yeah, the transferee who's in the middle of our way earlier."

"ah, the girl who's stucked to her feet ?" Mayuyu asked,

"Yeah."

"It's only the first day of school yet she's already clinging to Takamina." Tomochin said, annoyed.

"I don't think she knows." Mariko said, "Besides, Don't get jealous. She's only a transferee.
"
"Transferee huh, I don't like her." Tomochin said, after that they started eating their lunch.

( ´ ▽ ` )ノ ( ´ ▽ ` )ノ ( ´ ▽ ` )ノ ( ´ ▽ ` )ノ ( ´ ▽ ` )ノ ( ´ ▽ ` )ノ ( ´ ▽ ` )ノ

"Ne, Takamina." Yuko said, as she putted down her telescope. "What do you think should we do this year ?"

Takamina looked at the sky, "I've been thinking about that too. Maybe you should help me in sweeping the leaves every morning. For a change ?"

"That will turn the girls off," Yuko answered, "I want to do something big, something grand ! It's our last year after all."

"Hm ?"

"Why don't we," Yuko paused, she putted a very serious face "make all the girls wear super miniskirts every friday ?"

"Shut up, never suggest ever again." Takamina said, "besides, that will include us."

"oh, right. just imagine Atsuko wearing super miniskirts."

"ureseyo."

Their stupid conversation was interrupted when the bell rang, It's time for them to go back to their respective classrooms. They took the stairs and after reaching the hallway that separated the two of them, they bidded good bye to each other.

"Bye Kaichou."

"Yeah."

End of Chapter 2



Once again, I'm open for comments, suggestions and criticisms  XD Aand, i made this fanfic last week, but i only managed to write Chapters 1 and 2. So i think, the future updates will not be that fast.  XD

Offline steftakami

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I like your fic!!

please continue! :D

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Wow!!! I knew it!!! I knew Takamina was one of the Kami 7 (I mean look at her).....
BUT!!! Eh? KAICHOU!!?!?!!? That's my girl!  :hiakhiakhiak:
AND THERE IS TAKATOMO!!!!! Please more TakaTomo moments!!
And please update soon!!

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@WMatsui22- First reply  :wriggly: Thanks for reading my fanficccc

@correnereyes- AtsuMina and KojiYuu moments will be coming soon, please wait for it :on asmo: and btw, It's purely coincidence that my forum name is Atsuki  XD Takamina's Atsuki may have a double meaning though hehe like .... atSUKI

@steftakami- Thanks for reading my fanfic steftakami-san  :on gay:

@TakaminaBG- OMG. Is it really that predictable  :on blackhole: I wonder if Acchan will get to find out too  XD TakaTomo.. hmm, yeah ~ there'll be, but i don't want to get your hopes up since *looks at the pairing*  :cry: but we'll see...

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thank you for the update...
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woah I really love your fic :D The concept is really interesting and loving how the story is playing out :) Nice to see Atsumina again :D Thanks for the update and I really look forward to the next chapter ^^

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Yes!!! Takamina is one of kami 7
It's kinda predictable but i still like it  :wub:

What happen between miichan and mariko?  :?
Any plan in telling their story?

I can wait when acchan know that takamina is one of kami 7
I really like your fic, just imagining about kami 7 already a blast  :inlove:
Thank you and please update soon ^^

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interesting! I want to know as continuous.

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AtsuMina  :heart:

waiting for ur another update  :on gay:

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Just two chapters and already love your fic, because you have atsumina and kojiyuu, but you make troubles into marimii couples. Takatomo sound good for me more trouble

Of course takaboy is a kami7!.. because every group needs a boy!... aww takaboy so jealousy are funny, make more jealousyscene please.. and more yuko trying seduce another girls and nyanyan :B OMG!! im crazy with this fic..

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miniskirt i like it.  :drool:   :w00t:

only two chapter and is a great fanfic    :twothumbs

waiting next chapter.

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I like it!!!
I wonder what happened between Mariko and Miichan

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oooo I like your fic!!  :heart:

I like the whole idea of the kami 7, woo woo ~~

ganbatte :rock:

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@Chichay12- Atsumina eh ? more will come of course :onioncheer:
@arrow27 thank you for that complement  :ptam-cry: i get so touched easily lol. Don't worry, the next chapter will be coming out... soon  :cow:
@takamae Yup, the Kami7 concept if the first thing i thought of  :on cigar: everything is planned but i'm getting confused about some detail  XD and Mariko-Miichan... they'll be... don't worry i have a plan about the two  :kekeke:
@Minami-chan Thanks for reading the story  :cry:  :deco: :deco: :deco:
@Haruko t-thanks for loving my fic  :hee: don't worry about the couples ! they'll end up together soon enough .. or not  :twisted: and ofcourse, more jealousy from this dense takamina and the pimping of Yuko  :sweat:
@stepk I like it too  :kekeke: t-thanks for the complement omg omg omg  :cry:
@kahem Thanks for liking the story  :deco: About that.. we'll find out soon... or not  :twisted:
@vPANDAv Yup Kami7  :luvluv2: thanks !

OMG GUYS, thanks for commenting in my fic i really appreciate it. And i'm getting pressured but i love the feeling ~ I'll do my best to make this fic good enough for you to read  :cow: :cow: :cow:

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I love this. The girls in the school must love Takamina a lot since Yuko said to her not to be so fond of Atsuko lest other people will be jealous. And there's also Takatomo :inlove:. How come Tomochin is always the third wheel in Atsumina's relationship XD? But I believe Chiyuu will make an appearance soon

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@Tanchan Yup, people sure do, It's Takamina after all  :love: Aaand i think it's because tomochin have this aura of being.. the third wheel HAHA !



Chapter 3

It has been exactly three weeks since the school year started and three weeks since Atsuko met Takamina. Everyday have been the same but different. The two of them would eat lunch together, sometimes with Yuko who pops up randomly which makes Acchan and Takamina annoyed (since the butt groping incident). Takamina and Atsuko's friendship became more bonded, that they're mostly together at all times (Takamina would sometimes disappear suddenly), they talk about random things about their-selves and laugh as if there's no tomorrow.

Atsuko smiled at herself, her decision of befriending the first person who talked to her in the school is something she's proud of, and definitely happy about. The baka-midget who loves sweeping and cleaning the school grounds became her frist friend in the school and in the  alienated city.

"haaaaaaaaaaaaa, watch out !"

Atsuko heard a familiar voice and saw Yuko running towards her. After a blink of an eye, the squirrel girl pushed Atsuko to the side making Atsuko fall on the ground.
 
"What are you doing Yuko, you're not even ammended on touching my-"

"yadaaa ~" Yuko winced, trying to clean the mess of flour that fell from the sky. Apparently, Yuko saw that the flour is aimed to Acchan, so she decided to help the other girl. Sadly, After her heroic deed the flour got her instead.

Acchan immediately stood up and went to Yuko to help her clean up. Seeing that the other girl don't have a handkerchief with her, Atsuko pulled out hers and helped Yuko clean up.

"t-thanks," Atsuko said, leading Yuko to the nearest bench.

"I'm just trying to make up for the butt scene i did last week, hehe" Yuko commented, "Besides, I'd do that for any beautiful girl out there."

"You're living out your role."

In Atsuko's three weeks of stay in Akihabara Gakuen, She have heared some rumors about Yuko hitting and pimping up with different girls in and out of the school. But, somewhere in Atsuko's heart, she knew that Yuko is a good one and that she wouldn't dare to touch her. But why ?

"Yeah right, we're even now." Yuko said, "Hey, classes have already ended. What're you doing here anyway ?"

"I have to talk to shinoda-san and Minegeshi-san for our section's thing in school festival." Acchan explained.

"ahh, the school festival has been moved earlier."

"Yeah, damn student council whoever they are," Acchan said,"I'm not even ready for the upcoming exams"

Yuko raised an eyebrow.

"h-hey ! don't you know that i'm the vice president ?!"

"really ?" Atsuko asked, not believing the other girl. But on the other hand, nothing's impossible right. But no- Not Yuko, if she is, then wouldn't be the school rotten with girls wearing super short miniskirts ?

"believe what you want, how bout Takamina ? Where's she ?" Yuko asked, sounding as if it's weird to see Acchan without Takamina.

"I don't know, She disappears suddenly wherever and whenever."

Yuko giggled, so Acchan didn't knew a thing.

"What's so funny ?" Atsuko asked, seeing Yuko's actions.

"Nothing. I think you're already late with your meeting.. war may be going on between Mariko and Miichan."

"Oh my god. I almost forgot,"

"or.. would you rather spend more time with me ?" Yuko said, giving her perverted grin.

"jaaa, and thanks!"  Atsuko rushed off, waving good bye to the squirrel. "You still have a lot of flour in your hair and body !"

As Atsuko went out of Yuko's sight, Yuko started cleaning herself instinctively since she didn't really want to see her self in a mess, especially with flour. If others saw her in this state, her reputation might get wasted. Or maybe not. She can just brag about how she saved Acchan from the flour that fell in the sky (though it's really the 3rd floor, since she saw a group of girls throw it , but she didn't see the face).

Yuko started walking to the comfort room while having an inner debate whether what she did was cool or not. Damn her instincts for beautiful girls !

"nyan ? NYAN NYAAAAAAAAAAAN," Yuko said in happiness, seeing Haruna in sight. She jumped into the beautiful girl but unfortunately, Haruna blocked her with her hands.

"mou, nyan nyaaan, stop resisting my love !" Yuko complained. Of all the girls in Akihabara, with almost everyone liking and falling for her, Kojima seemed to be immune.

"stop NyanNyan-ing me Yuko. and what's with that white thing in your hair ?" Haruna asked, caressing Yuko's hair non maliciously. (A/N: ohhhh that's okay Yuko. You'll have a malicious one soon XD)

"I just saved Acchan from the flour falling to her." Yuko said proudly, boasting her heroic deeds to her target.

"Acchan ? and it got you instead ?"

"Yup. She's the transferee in Takamidget and Marichan's class."

"Ahh, the reason why you and Takamina aren't having lunch with us anymore ?"

"Of course not ! I do hang out with other girls --" Yuko said defensively, "jealous ?"

"W-Why would i ? It's just that, we have always been together since first year, the seven of us."

"ehh nyan nyan, if you want just go out with me and i'll be with you even on the night time !" Yuko said jokingly, though it's half meant. "we should open ourselves for new things," she winked.

"perveeeeeeert. that's why no one's taking you seriously."

"actually, many do. except for you," Yuko said seriously, making Haruna's face heaten.

"ah, i have to go now." Haruna looked away, smiling to herself without knowing why.  "I have to go malling with Marichan,"

"NYAAN NYAAAAAAAAAAN," Yuko said with a sudden change of energy, boob grabbing Haruna. She knows that Haruna is just being tsundere with her. Nobody , No one could resist her. Not even Haruna Kojima. And she'll dedicate this whole school year in making the other girl hers.

"kyaaaaaa!" Haruna said, running away from the perverted squirrel.

"don't worry nyannyan i'll be spending more time with you ~" Yuko yelled, making sure that Kojima will hear that one. "SUKIIIIIIIII"

(ノ´▽`)ノ♪(ノ´▽`)ノ♪(ノ´▽`)ノ♪(ノ´▽`)ノ♪(ノ´▽`)ノ♪(ノ´▽`)ノ♪(ノ´▽`)ノ♪(ノ´▽`)ノ♪(ノ´▽`)ノ♪(ノ´▽`)ノ♪(ノ´▽`)ノ♪(ノ´▽`)ノ♪(ノ´▽`)ノ♪

'i had been receiving a lot of badluck recently huh,' Atsuko thought, making her way into the long hallway of the Sakura building of Akihabara Gakuen, where meetings are mostly held. 'Things seems to fall into me, is it because i ate the cake that i'm supposed to give to Takamina ? Yada Yada Yada, But it's so irresistable, and it can't possibly be the reason right ?'

"YOU'RE AN OLD JERK !" 

Atsuko heard a shout from room #37, sure enough it's from Minegeshi Minami. And that it's the room where their meeting will be held. Atsuko opened the door, and saw the two having a fight.

"It's not my fault that your brain is slow enough to notice an eraser full of chalk dust at the top of the door !" Mariko said, defending herself. "And i told you for the 48th time already , I'm not the one who did that !"

"But YOU're the first one who got here !"

"It's already there when I got HERE !"

"How come did it fell into me instead ?"

"It's because your damn brain so slow enough to notice an eraser full of chalk dust at the top of the door !"

"YOU'RE AN OLD JERK !"

Atsuko decided to stop the never ending fight of Mariko and Minami by feining a cough. Good thing, the two noticed her and decided to keep quiet.

"gomenasai," Atsuko lowered her head, "I'm sorry i'm late."

"It's okay, at least you arrived. I don't want to be stucked all day with this .. with this.." Miichan said, lost for words/insults.

"with this what ? continue MIICHAN, this obaasan is waiting." Mariko said, emphasizing the girl's nickname.

"Okay, so let's start our meeting." Atsuko said as she grabbed a seat.

"Maeda-san, i think we can make a Maid Cafe ~ It's popular these days." Miichan said, changing her tone to a lovelier one.

"Actually, i think it would be better if we have a haunted house. This concept always sells out, since school fest is an open house. Lovers would like to go in there,"

"Ts, haunted house.. It's only for old jerks who'll soon be a ghost," Miichan said.

"Well, i'm sure a maid cafe is for people who'll turn into a maid after they graduated a certain Akihabara Gakuen."

"Sto-stop it guys," Atsuko pleaded, not wanting to get these two into a fight again. "Both your ideas are cool but i heard that Class B will be going for a Maid Cafe, and Class K will be having the haunted house."

"So, how about a Danso Cafe ?" Atsuko suggested.

"Danso Cafe ?" Mariko and Miichan asked in unison.

"Yup, We'll dress up into different kind of guys," Atsuko explained, "Since this is an all girl school..."

"You're a genius !" Miichan exclaimed.

"That's a good one Maeda." Mariko said, "So how about..."

Then the three started their planning about the so called 'Danso48 Cafe'. Luckily, with a somewhat peaceful atmosphere.

"Okay so this ends our discussion," Mariko said,

"hai," Atsuko answered, "thanks for cooperating,"

"No problem Maeda-san, as long as it's YOU." Miichan said, Mariko rolled her eyes.

"Bye," Mariko said as she stood up from her seat,

"Obaasan needs to hurry since her feet is slow." Miichan teased,

"FYI, i'm hurrying because i don't want to see you anymore." Mariko said, "AND i have to go somewhere."

"Yeah right, fine with excuses."

"Will you two please stop fighting ?" Acchan said, though it sounded more like a command, Mariko eventually went out leaving Acchan and Miichan alone.

"S-sorry Maeda-san," Miichan said,

"No.. It's just, the two of you are always fighting and all.." Atsuko said, fixing her things.

"Is it Okay if we go home together ?" Miichan asked, "I think we live on the same neighborhood.."

"ehh? really ?"

"Un, i always see you around."

"You should have said it before !" Acchan exclaimed, happy to find a somewhat new friend.

End of Chapter 3


No AtsuMina for this chapter but.. Kojiyuu  :luvluv2: i want to build their relationship sooner since.. they'll suffer a lot  :twisted: and MariMii  XD I Like this pair  :cow:
Sorry if there's more AtsuYuu moments since i want them to build friendship you'll know after some chapters why.., and AtsuMina too ! I think it would be better if they end up being friends first than actual lovers.. since they give that bestfriend vibes  XD

And nowww, once again, I'm forever open for comments, suggestions and criticisms ! Yup, you can suggest things you want to happen in the fic  XD but not really.
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