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Hello everyone. My first fiction XD


Prologue
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At the beginning Heian Period.

There used to be a just and wise king Akimoto Yashusi name. He was a wise and prudent king in Kyoto Kingdom (Kyoto Gosho). During the reign of Yashusi, Gosho people never lack anything. Their life is guaranteed, both in terms of food, clothing, and security. The kingdom sheltered and blessed by the gods in the sky at Araoniwa. Because the king led the people justly and wisely.

Akimoto Yashusi was awarded seven daughters. Respectively they are Sayaka, Kojima, Atsuko, Tomomi, Yui, Rena, and the youngest Yuki. Sixth daughter had been engaged as a teenager except the youngest. The most beautiful and sweetest is Yuki. She was a baby all the people of the Gosho Palace. Sayaka the eldest daughter is engaged to the son of a minister of the kingdom. To Sayaka and should her fiance, the Yashusi King may entrust the kingdom. However, despite his advanced age, and it was time to step down, he was not free to give up the crown. Because, whether Sayaka or her fiance, he can not trust completely.

The King was thought that the eldest daughter, Sayaka’s temperament not as expected from a leader of the kingdom. Sayaka has a proud and ruthless nature, while her fiance was a dandy. That young nobleman would think more about themselves, the clothes and jewelry rather than to take care of the safety and welfare of the people of the kingdom.

One day In the dream, the king got the inspiration from the celestial ruler Araoniwa. The youngest daughter is the next leader. But before that, the youngest daughter will get a big big and serious problem. Happiness and fear come together in his mind.
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Now, his children have grown up. It was time for them to get engaged. And the prospective husbands they have been prepared by experts in the empire. The future husband is in the select of the whole nobility and his ministers in Kyoto corners to find the best.



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Re: Dearest in The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] Prologue
« Reply #1 on: January 06, 2013, 01:25:47 PM »
Oh yessss! More MaYuki~

Woah, never expected someone to make a plot like this! So, thank you ;~;

And I bet Yuki is going to be engaged to Mayu fufufu >:3

Update soon  :deco:
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Re: Dearest in The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] Prologue
« Reply #2 on: January 06, 2013, 01:45:03 PM »
IT...IT IS REALLY INTERESTING!!!!

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Re: Dearest in The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] Prologue
« Reply #3 on: January 06, 2013, 02:06:13 PM »
I'm not a huge MaYuki fan (I even prefer wWatanabe) but I enjoy the little plot we got so far. I'll be waiting for your update~

And...  :welcome
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Re: Dearest in The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] Prologue
« Reply #4 on: January 06, 2013, 02:16:52 PM »
Will mayu be a guy?

Anyway, I dun mind a cute boy mayu!  XD
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Re: Dearest in The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] Prologue
« Reply #5 on: January 06, 2013, 02:24:51 PM »
it is rare to find this kind of story. :D
I wonder how the little Yuki will meet Mayu XD
update soon please :)

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Dearest in The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 1 – The Fiancés
« Reply #6 on: January 08, 2013, 12:18:04 AM »
Hello you all
@ChuuuPuffss  : thanks back..let we see ^^
@Chanaline         : a bit strive hard for it  :nervous
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@DC2805            : aa, keep read..let we see, whether we will meet or not?  :D
@mo-chan       : lets imagine first.. 0^^0




CHAPTER 1 – The Fiancés


For two months, the kingdom held a strict selection in order to filter out hundreds of nobles in the country. Complacency is upon the hearts of the king's counselor after winning candidate with the highest value. Six young noblemen were elected. They are all son of the ministers chosen royal who has a background as the son of wealthy and educated.

"Yuko, Kai, Sae, Jun, Rino, and Minegishi"Said a royal escort to the six young nobleman, call to go to the Shishinden main hall to attend the annual party of the palace.

In the Shishinden was ongoing party that was very festive. Besides the fiance, Yashusi was inviting dignitaries from around the country. All the guests were invited to meet the daughters. This party intends to bring the fiancés to the princesses. Because even though the men were selected from hundreds of the best nobles, the king still wants the natural selection of the personality of each.

The six young noblemen who chosen were already entered the hall, they chatting with the advisors. Young nobleman was informed of all matters relating to the party. Then advisers lead them walked toward the main place to the king Yashusi. There King Yashusi sits together at the hall guests of honor. The girls, who will be introduced to the young nobleman, had gathered at the second table near on the main table where the king sat.

"My daughters, there will be the nobleman who will be accompanying you each"

"Who they are, Dad?" asked Atsuko curious.

"The great king, the young nobles together facing this, my king," said one of the advisers of the king.

"Ah, they've come," said the king.

The young nobles invited to sit in the same table with the daughters. Royal advisors introduced one by one the young nobles to the king and others.

"Kai. Son of the minister of domestic affairs"

"Yuko. Son of the minister of justice"

"Sae. Son of the minister of finance"

"Minegishi. Son of the minister of commerce"

“Rino.  Son of minister of communication”

"Jun son of the minister of transportation"

One by one they stood to greet and honor to king, queen, princesses and guests around them. For an hour they sat and chatted with the royal family. Yashusi felt the harmonious between young noblemen with their daughters. Some of them began flirting with the girls. There are those who are friends, some are merely known. Knowing the situation, then the king gladly said.

"To draw the attention of my daughter, then I allow you to introduce them" said the king, very wide open arms, a sign that he welcomed the guests.

Headlights suddenly go out the hall, and interestingly, the lights of a smaller set in the walls of the hall lit massage. The royal musicians who have lined up neatly on the stage smiling friendly to all guests. They started playing zither, violin and others with agile and elegant. Creating the atmosphere inside the hall became more romantic. The guests were impressed with the atmosphere has been neatly arranged in such a way. They smiled happily and continue enjoying the party.

"Glorious time for a dance party" a guest said.

Elected nobles stood and walked to the middle. Followed by the other nobles who smiled and enjoying the atmosphere. Some of them began to dance to the rhythm of the music.

"Very pretty lady, if lady kept silent like that, then all the flowers will wilt  ... let me water the flowers were missing...” Kai approached Atsuko who is silent waiting for someone to ask her to dance.

"Aah  ... Of course I'm not going to let you watering flowers alone  ..." Atsuko smiled and reached cheerfully Kai’s hand. Her body reflexes follow the movement Kai, stepped up and they started dancing together. They joined the other nobles who had already been dancing and enjoying the music.

"How about there? You are sexy, you are beautiful, makes me  ..." no time to finish his words, Kojima jump toward Yuko.

"You, my Yuko!"Kojima hugged tightly.

"Princess Kojima...!w-what you say..." said Yuko shocked and blushed.

"Let’s dance with me, my prince" said Kojima fun and exciting. She grabs Yuko’s hands into the middle. Yuko blushing, and did what she wants without defence. Yuko still did not aware that she is his childhood friend. Kojima was.

The other four did not want to lose to follow them. Tomomi dancing with Minegishi, Yui dancing with Rino, Rena chose to go out with her Jun.  While Sayaka chose to sit enjoy the company with Sae.


(Walking in walkway, Seiryoden)

"The selection has been completed my king, all went perfectly" said Ochano, the supreme minister.

“Yes Ochano. You know.., I will always do all my best for my daughters.”

“Yes my lord”

“Furthermore, what about my youngest daughter, Ochano?”Yashusi stopped, turned around and saw Ochano eyes questioningly.

“Princess Yuki is a very special daughter, my lord. We dare not careless  ...”

“You’re right Ochano.” Yashusi was overlooking the beautiful garden in front of him, and then closed his eyes for a moment toward the sky.


(Near a cherry blossom tree)

A beautiful girl was playing around with two rabbits and a squirrel around the park near the cherry blossom trees. She was running here and there, playing chase with them. She laughed when she saw the squirrel jumped and collided with one of the rabbits. The squirrel slumped, his eyes spinning. Rabbits were stuck out his tongue and running again. The girl continued to laugh because of the small animal behavior was very funny.

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Even now you still haven't noticed this quiet sky
I am always thinking of it, but I can no longer return to there
And I will always be awake in my heart, gently taking notice
That someday I will be able to see kindness
And every time I look, I thought you were there,
But it was just my imagination
I don't see it anymore cause I see thru you now


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Re: Dearest in The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 1 – The Fiancés
« Reply #7 on: January 08, 2013, 01:04:15 PM »
I kinda dont understand who is talking at the end but I ll continue :)

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Re: Dearest in The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 1 – The Fiancés
« Reply #8 on: January 08, 2013, 01:10:47 PM »
Ummm.. don't know what to say.

In the end, who is the beautiful girl? Yuki? Yes! Because she is beautiful! Mouuhahahahahahahaha!!

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Re: Dearest in The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 1 – The Fiancés
« Reply #9 on: January 08, 2013, 03:01:43 PM »
At last! We get to see a SHY Yuko! haha!  XD XD XD

Want to see more interaction between the princesses and the  :theking noblemen, more actions, please!!!   :otomerika: :yossi:
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Re: Dearest in The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 1 – The Fiancés
« Reply #10 on: January 08, 2013, 04:32:40 PM »
Oh, I wanna know how Mayu will appear in this~~ And Yuko-sama here was just so cute~~  :inlove: :inlove: :inlove:
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Re: Dearest in The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 1 – The Fiancés
« Reply #11 on: January 08, 2013, 05:11:12 PM »
Mayu was the girl at the end right lol

Great update cant wait till you update next

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Re: Dearest in The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 1 – The Fiancés
« Reply #12 on: January 08, 2013, 11:30:24 PM »
please update soon i want to know where mayu

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Re: Dearest in The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 1 – The Fiancés
« Reply #13 on: January 09, 2013, 09:04:16 AM »
Well... that's perfect match between all the first six princesses with the noble youngsters.

What's going to happen with Yuki... I hope the partner is Mayu as a male like the one in danso (doctor Watanabe or the one in perfect match)

The Mayu there very very cute... it seems to be Yuki's type.

Well thank you for this Dearest in The Gosho Palace fic.

Can't wait to see the next one

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Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 2 – The Youngest Daughter
« Reply #14 on: January 11, 2013, 12:18:47 AM »
Hello there again, everyone  XD

@mo-chan   : you will know it.. o^^o
@Chanaline         : haha, yes you got a name...bit busy here  :nervous
@DC2805    : yes..Yuko is a shy one  :D
@sakura_drop_   : hmm, seems we should wait for that... :roll:
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@steven_0809     : lets we see...^^
@cisda83     : last..someone care about what happen to Yuki   :thumbsup 



CHAPTER 2 – The Youngest Daughter


Her eyes were shining brightly. She has rosy lips. Her face was bright and shining like sparkling clear river water. Her shiny black hair so gently. Pretty perfect slim body. And her soft hands with a cheerful tone of her foot. Really incredible beauty is, very charming, beautiful, and unbearable.

One month after the annual feast.

Yuki turned the same page quickly. She was looking through the two facing pages. In reading sentence by sentence, and then she gave the bottom line thicker in some sentences that she considers important. A servant approached and put a cup of cool green tea at the table. She did not say anything because she saw the princess Yuki being seriously. Yuki put her pen on the table, took a glass of green tea that served for her. She only drank a sip, and return to continue reading lines.

"Your skills are really similar to king Yashusi." a voice came from the entrance to the den. Yuki woke up from its seriousness. She put the book on the table and stood up.

"Ojisan, you praise too much... "Said Yuki smiled and sat back down.

"You are always humble. How I justify everything that people say about you, "said the minister Yama who was sitting in a chair, faced with Yuki. She smiled at the compliment from his uncle.

"You're right my husband, she was the daughter who was tireless. Two week she accompanied me to visit a nursing home in southern Kyoto. She helped me much and stays there too. And no complained."Said Yama's wife, who had been accompanied Yuki. She explained with enthusiasm, and saw Yuki, smiling proudly.

"(Chuckle) I never knew a princess want to go to the field for this... (Smiles) but remember your childhood past, I've been convinced by what I see from you." Yama explained, seems to think and try to remember.  “Well, that book? How was that?”Yama asked curious.

"Really what you are saying. We must immediately cordon off the area and to the workers, I leave it entirely to you. My father allowed me to command the closure that place."Yuki said formally.

"Yes. I will execute immediately. They've gone too far." said Yama regrets.

Yama is a minister of security, he's taking care of the problem of crime and other criminal acts. Yama is a brother of Yashusi’s wife. Yuki, was commanded by her father to complete the cases, fraud and doubling of history books. This case was handled by Yama about six months. And development stages of completion now. Although Yuki is in the young age, but the ministers who have ever been worked with her have always been satisfied with what Yuki gave.

"Now I have to get going to pack up, my uncle, because tomorrow is father’s birthday. I had arrived at the palace tonight.” Yuki said.

"Yes princess.  And we will arrive on time tomorrow. "Yama promised.

The soldiers, who escorted Princess Yuki were ready outside at Yama’s residence. The Ox cart is set up at the front door of the residence. Princess Yuki and his entourage went back to the palace. She smiled satisfied has completed the latest single from her duties. She opened the curtain and the window of the cart. The wind was blowing gently hit her pretty face. She saw hills and green trees are lush. It goes evening.

"The youngest daughter.  Was truly blessed by the gods in the sky..." Yama said to his wife as they entered the residence together.

" Our ruler of Araoniwa blesses us all, my husband..."


(In one of the daughter's room, Otsunegoten)

The pretty daughters were sitting together, looking at the pool that has seven beautiful fountains. The fountain is made of the best bamboo imported from China. It is very sturdy. In each bamboo, there are paintings that have meaning for each daughter. While the water that flows through the bamboo comes from the Yura river. Ancestor believed that water is holy water awarded by the ruler of the sky in Araoniwa. Since the water never stops flowing and is always clear.
The sound of water that flows falls into the pond is beautiful. The daughters were resting and playing the game Go (encircling the game). They are fun joking with each other. Soon, Yuki appears, and joined with her sisters. She sat near the edge.

"There you, my beautiful sister...where did you go during a week?" Yui asked gently.

"I went to southern and Visit to Uncle Yama. He gave greetings to you all..." Yuki replied and smiled.

"Father certainly gave the task again, right?" Sayaka asked with a slight tone of envy. Her face became rigid. She did not look at Yuki while said that.

"Hai..." Yuki said softly, smiled at Sayaka.

"Hhh-this is really too much." Sayaka said while slamming hard pieces on a grid. For a moment she was silent with no friendly face. Then she stood up and left her sisters without doubt.

"She's okay?" Ask Yuki worried and feel something inconveniently.

"Never mind, Sayaka always like that. Does not worry much, here, let us talk about our fiancé. God..I miss him..."said Atsuko fondly.

“Me too. You know, I only could meet him two times a week..”Yui griped.

"Wait.. Yuki, have you ever met them? As I recall, you did not exist at that time. "Kojima said while remembered. Her eyes like searching something miss.

“Ah, yes right. I did something urgent.”Yuki answered fast.

"Where were you when it was Yuki?" Rena asked.

"Ogakumonjo. Father asked me to read some page of Chinese calligraphy items.”Yuki answered.

"But you missed the party, Yuki. Dance, handsome noblemen and...Wait...why father did ask for it, while all members of the family were there?"Rena said curious.

"The advisors did not find any fiancé, father wont Yuki came alone." Atsuko assumed.

"Father might think, Yuki was too young to get engaged" Tomomi said, looking up at Yuki.

"Too young? Guess not. Nineteen years... smart, beautiful... and well, she is idol for all noblemen...What man want.”Yui said praising her sister in front of Yuki's face. Yuki looked down, coyly. She let her sister to assume and listen carefully.

"Tomorrow they will come to father’s birthday." Rena informed.


(In Doorway, Seiryoden)

A princess was running quickly in Doorway. Her face looks sour and sharp. Her footsteps are very harsh and hard. She did not turn at all, keep walking and suddenly stopped in front of the prime minister who was in the front living room. She stared hard at that middle-aged men.

"Ochano?! I want to face my father. "Said Sayaka little high pitched.

"Currently he is implementing a prayer ceremony in Omima, princess Sayaka." Said Ochano explained briefly.

"Hhh-Ochano. You must know this. Why Yuki are assigned to go to Yama?! Not me! "She heavy complained.

"Princess..." Ochano surprised and looked down gave a sign that he was reluctant to answer.

"Why? Why Ochano! Do not play dumb, I know you're hiding something!”Sayaka little scream and took a step toward Ochano.

"The answer would be the same, my princess.. You've asked the same question for more than ten times. I’m so sorry... "Ochano moving backwards two steps away.

"Yuki has the ability on it. Always it! Am I not?! What else old men! Answer me, Ochano! "Sayaka's eyes widened. Her hands rise.

Ochano silent and did not dare look at princess Sayaka. Ochano trying not to make princess getting angry, he chose silence. Sayaka who upset went away leaving Ochano. She hates why Yuki always more duty. Envy and resentment make her lose control. She ran to the kitchen. Kitchen servants who was working in the kitchen, was expelled by Sayaka to get out of the kitchen. Sayaka take anything nearby. She threw all the stuff in take it in any direction. She pulled and kicked chairs and kitchen tables, uproar. All servants just keep their mouth and silent. This is not the first time they saw princess Sayaka doing it.

"Yuki...the youngest daughter right?" Her eyes change incisively. Sayaka took the knife on the table and threw the knife into the wall.

Suddenly, sound of loud thunder from the sky out. Then the heavy rain fell, drenching the palace. The inhabitants of the palace that was working in the court yard ran into the building. The rain grew heavy and the sky was really dark.
DRAKK! One of the fountains wrecked.


(The next day)

Today is the birthday of the king Yashusi. The entire population of Kyoto welcomes today. They were revelers celebrating the birthday of the king Yashusi.  Ceremony was used to pray for the king Yashusi being held in Omima. The ceremony was celebrated by members of the royal family.

"Come on Yuki, we immediately went to the dining room together." Said Atsuko quickly.

"Grandma, if that's okay here alone?"Yuki asked softly, want to make sure grandma fine if stay alone.

"Go Yuki. It is your father's birthday. You do not keep with me. I will go to the pond." said the grandma, smiling gently, pushing away Yuki's body slowly. They left grandma in that room alone.

Atsuko and Yuki go to get to where the family gathered. They ran small. In the dining room, all royals are waiting for the two daughters. Atsuko entered first, in one after another Yuki. Atsuko smiled at her Kai. Yuki entered, and all the fiancé looked toward Yuki with amazed. She smiled to them.They were fascinated by the beauty.


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Meanwhile (Otsunegoten)

Grandma was walking around to the pond. There are two guards who accompany her. She intends to rest and enjoy the view of the pond. After a day of watching the work in the kitchen for lunch the royals at his son's birthday. She walked on the rocks and sat in a chair beside the stone and fountain. Sighed for a moment, then she turned and...Surprised.

“Oh goodness!! W-w-whaaat h-happen with...The fountain!! Hhh..The seventh...”grandma was shocked, shortness of breath. Her distress to sound, take breath for a while then ran quickly toward the fountain. Her face turned pale. Her eyes did not blink at all, as if to see something happen, and it's not a good thing.

The guards were shocked with grandma’s scream. They extremely frightened with what they saw.

 “My goodness! This scary...Someone has done something bad.” said one of the ladies fear.

“O-O-Ochano...called Ochano!” said grandma shaking. Her body stood rigid, her hands trembling. She's almost like falling, seeing that the two ladies were hurriedly helped her to get into the room.
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"She's so..beautiful..." said Jun without blinking. The others look at Yuki too.

"Okay, if she is beautiful. So tomorrow I'll have counselors looking for a new one. "Said Rena sharp.

"A-okay..How can you think like that..? I will not allow it. "said Jun bit scared, instantly could not breathe well, if it is really serious Rena.

"Jun, Jun, you should imitate me." Minegishi smiled proudly towards Jun and Rena, and he showed off his hands gripping Tomomi’s hand and kissed it. Tomomi was smiling and blushing embarrassment. They were looked each other, feeling so rollick. Jun and Rena became embarrassed with Minegishi behaviour. Yuko who saw it, immediately thought to imitate.

“Princess Kojima...you mind me to kiss your hands too?” He said softly, looking at Kojima's eyes playfully. He holds Kojima wrist and held her hand gently.

“My Yuko, you think that's enough? If you've started to kiss me, no matter where it is, then I'll ask for more...do you dare? "Kojima smiled full of meaning.

Yuko was immediately frozen in place. His face flushed. Ghhh ~ There Yui, Rino, Atsuko and Kai saw it (laughs).

Yuki noticed her sister's fiancés. Yuki throws a bunch smile to them always.

"Honey, is she your famous daughter?" Minegishi said gently to his girl.

“Yes honey, she is our...she really prefer to go outside the palace, meet peoples and farmers, rather than hanging out with the royals. Therefore many nobles actually have never seen her, some only know her name “said Tomomi smiled softly.

“So, what peoples said is true. Your sister is pretty sincere and humble.. “Minegishi nodded. Tomomi smiled proudly toward Yuki.

"Is she engaged?" Sae whispered softly, moving closer to Tomomi’s ear. Minegishi who saw it, immediately push Sae’s head and keep him away from Tomomi.

"Sae. If your fiancée was not here. Do not you try to approach the other’s girl! "Said Minegishi threaten. Sae frowned. Minegishi asked Tomomi to switch places with him.

"What are you doing! You are suspicious of me? " Sae asked surprise. Minegishi was sticking out his tongue, smirked.

The servants came and went bringing food from the kitchen and put on the table. The dining table is rectangular in shape and width. The daughters were sitting next to their fiancés each on the left side. Being on the right, the other royals sat. Yuki sat next to her mother and Ochano. Only Sayaka who did not attend the meal that follows.

During the meal progresses, there secretly one of the six fiancé was constantly sneaking perspective towards Yuki. He could not stop staring at her beautiful face. He was looking for an opportunity when the eyes of all people do not see it. Because he did not want suspected by others. He hopes Yuki saw him and caught his gaze intent. But, Yuki did not see him at all. Yuki did not realize that there was her sister’s fiance who sees in that way.

Until the meal in the cap, he still continue to see Yuki. When everyone were started to leave the dining room, he accidentally plan to come out at the end. He followed Yuki. When he feels safe, no one saw it, he stopped Yuki.

"Princess Yuki, wait..." He asked politely to Yuki.

Yuki who was repairing her sleeve looked back. She knew the man.

"Is there anything left?" Ask Yuki friendly smile, made him more interested. But.

"Hey! I thought you were with your friends there, I'm waiting for you outside of that. "A girl said while approached her fiancé. Seeing her sister came, Yuki smiled and left them alone.

"W-why are you here??" He asked in surprise and a little tense, trying to calm his self.

"That question. Why you're here. With her? The youngest daughter?! "She asked suspiciously.




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Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 2 – The Youngest Daughter
« Reply #15 on: January 11, 2013, 03:41:29 AM »
Hahaha... it's getting more and more interesting. Thank you

The one on the last scene is Sayaka right?

Well Sae is trying to get Yuki attention...?

I don't think Yuki will do anything even if her sisters' fiances making move towards her.

She seems to be a good girl.

However, I think the King is to bias towards Yuki...

I understand that Sayaka would be angry with her father for the unfair treatment.... since she's the oldest, she is supposed to the first in line to replace her father the king... but that was not the case... as the rest I don't think they care....

I mean as a nobles don't they suppose to help and looking after  the citizens, trying to find out what they can do to improve the living conditions of their citizens... but that not the case... they are only playing and gossiping everyday.

How about the noble youngsters are they also like the princesses... only know how to play... and no work?

Anyhow, can't wait to see the next update

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Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 2 – The Youngest Daughter
« Reply #16 on: January 11, 2013, 04:03:21 PM »
Yuki does not like to royals and noblemen, right? She would prefer someone more down-to-earth. Perhaps she could meet a young farmer  XD who is hardworking, smart and kind-hearted! And of course, a handsome one?  :twothumbs
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Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 2 – The Youngest Daughter
« Reply #17 on: January 11, 2013, 04:17:07 PM »
This is so interesting... I wanna read further.. I'll be waiting for your next chapter~
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Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 2 – The Youngest Daughter
« Reply #18 on: January 11, 2013, 06:34:16 PM »
And im gusseing Sae was the one looking at Yuki but he can go away  :angry: :angry: coz she is Mayu's and only Mayu's and im gusseing aswell that Sayaka walked in on Sae trying to talk to Yuki.

Obviously the relastionship between Yuki and Sayaka isnt as close as the others since Sayaka always feels like she loses to her younger sister so if Sae is trying to make a move on Yuki then that will affect Sayaka even more in well her jelousy towards Yuki and may even damage their sister bond.

I love how protective Miichan was to Tomomi-sama when Sae tried to talk to her and how straight foward Miichan is.

I wonder what made the Gradmother act like that over a fountain hmmmmm mabye the seventh whatever stopped giving out water and that represents something.

And ahahahahahaha when Rena said she wanted another Fiance lol

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Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 2 – The Youngest Daughter
« Reply #19 on: January 11, 2013, 09:00:12 PM »
I agree with DC2805-san XD
She doesn't want to become the queen(?). Maybe. I really love how you write!

We don't who are the man? It seems that other think it is Sae but Sayaka wasn't there, or she arrived suddenly??
Oh no... I don't her to get hate by her sisters...It is not her fault if she like that. XD

Really Interesting !!!!
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