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Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 6 – The Expelled ( II )
« Reply #60 on: February 24, 2013, 07:04:57 PM »
Omg, Yuki becoming ugly and cursed? And maybe she has to go on a journey to find someone loves her... oh wait I read too many fairytales "orz

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Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 6 – The Expelled ( II )
« Reply #61 on: February 24, 2013, 08:59:07 PM »
What are you doing with Yuki Young Sun J-san??

What Yuki said to Jun?! I want to know! It seems that it is something important!!

Yuki! Yuki! :banghead:

So it have more one parts?? and Then Mayu can appear after... Ya Hurry Mayu Yuki needs you!

You kill me with your story... But I love this story... Am I M??

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Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 6 – The Expelled ( II )
« Reply #62 on: February 24, 2013, 11:36:12 PM »
saeyaka couple you are going down!! just wait til mayu comes :angry: :angry: :angry:
awww wmatsui sweet as ever, porr rena worried about jun a lot  :heart: but also poor jun wants to help yuki :cry:
yuki has marks on her, dont tell me shes sick!!  :cry: :cry:
the witch is interesting  :)
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Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 6 – The Expelled ( II )
« Reply #63 on: February 25, 2013, 03:51:24 AM »
What the hell...

I have no words. I'm just confused on what's happening to Yuki.

And what's the relation to Mayu with all these problems?

Update soon~  :deco:
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Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 6 – The Expelled ( II )
« Reply #64 on: February 25, 2013, 09:04:53 AM »
Ah... Jun is alright... which is good... but he can't tell the truth about Yuki...

Poor Yuki... everyone thought she was at fault for everything that happen in the kingdom and world... soon enough

Eh... the scaring and blacken of Yuki is because of the potion that Sayaka asked from the old lady...

Such a bad sister.... Sayaka is...

What's going to happen to Yuki with the seventh fountain is the one that pouring black water?

Who is going to help Yuki... clear her name...?

What about the other sisters... their fountains also cracked?

Can't wait to find out what's going to happen next

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Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 6 – The Expelled ( II )
« Reply #65 on: February 25, 2013, 03:26:53 PM »
NNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOooo! Yukirin!!

What it is with that fanfic!! poor Yukirin!! Sayaka and Sae you're bad! Bad!!

Mayu must appear!!
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Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 6 – The Expelled ( II )
« Reply #66 on: February 25, 2013, 03:55:29 PM »
This is getting eerie! Witch craft and stuff... Yuki is suffering in silence...poor thing....
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Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 6 – The Expelled ( II )
« Reply #67 on: February 27, 2013, 03:27:44 PM »
isn't Mayu that girl with the witch? but maybe no, if Mayu is a boy in this story... Yuki, hang in there!!!!

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Hello everyone  :) off day. Still could not believe I'm updating this long part, which was like I broke it in half. But when I re-read before posting this, hey hey it turns out I already promised to someone  :tntrm: (Chanaline-san) so I continued to write until the end, until my fingers bloated  :w00t: lol ~

@Yuki88           :  you read a fairy tale from me  ;) now your pocket full of tales~thank ya...
@Chanaline       : Eeh? not me, not meee...the old witch who did  :( Jun keep it dunno why. Sure, I already promised to ya... Gasp! I’m so nervous you love me this story  :nervous thank you...
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@DC2805         : Yes you right, it is uncomfortable when forced to be silent when the pain... :cry:
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Well, are you ready to accept a little surprise? Come here, I present you the last part of the expelled. Arigatou gozaimaz!




The Expelled (III) Oh NO!!



"Oh NO! (queen reaction!) What happened to my face? "Yuki rubbed quickly her forehead and cheeks. "What is this? What is this...I hope this is just a dream... "Yuki continue wiped her face with shirt. Her eyes blinked rapidly, she was very worried and a little nervous about the look on her face that has begun to change colour. "(Sigh)... I'm going to shower. Maybe water will dissolve it. "

Yuki took clothes and went into her private bathroom. She stepped into a tub full of water, sank her body into water. The water was cold. Her eyes were closed, while hands were busy playing water, making small ripples and play. She took a powder scrub next to the tub.

"This body powder scrub ... it's been three days I use it, but ... I forgot when and where I got it."Yuki twirling where scrub it. "I'll use again, maybe this scrub will remove black spots on my face and get back to normal."

Yuki opened the lid, take out all scrubs until exhausted, and spread throughout her body.  Rain came down with swift and loud sound thunderbolt several times. Yuki rushed back to room, as the air becomes colder. She looked at mirror again, ensuring her state. She sighed softly, then rose from chair and lay down on bed. She start worried but deny it and hope it was nothing.

Midnight.

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Yuki's pov

My body was shivering. I felt the unusually cold air... but in my body, it feels like a burning, like my skin is peeling slowly, bit by bit. The pain and itching all over my body and become increasingly painful-so. Like a bullet bombarded from all directions. Sick... sick once. I still could breathe, I can still move, but the heat that I felt made my heart almost stop. My legs, my hands were shaking violently. I can’t stand last long. I... I... if I'm going to die?

Yuki was great writhing in pain. She woke up from sleep, set the breath. Stood and looked around. Her eyes blinked slowly, looking down, realizing that her vision blurred, her body is very weak still fell pain. She staggered, with a body that does not stand up straight. She approached mirror, trying to look back at herself in the mirror. Vaguely, she could not see her face clearly in the mirror. She wiped her eyes slowly, and looked into mirror again.

Still not clear, she wiped the glass with layer of clothes. Her eyes narrowed, she lead at the midpoint of the mirror. Slowly, she caught a foreign-looking girl in the mirror. She shook her head to determine who the girl in the mirror. Looking back as she leaned close to the mirror, until her pretty nose touched the glass. Her eyes stared without blinking. Her face became rigid.

"EE-eee-HH, Wh-who ... are ... you ...?"Yuki in pretty shock. Her eyes slowly closed, her body fell limp.

Yuki fell. Her body was thrown back quickly. Her head hit the edge of table behind her. Yuki sprawled on the floor. Her long black hair covered most of her face. Her eyes were closed. The wind coming from window is still open. It makes the hair gently moving backwards, so that her face looks. No. Her face did not look. Black spot block on the forehead and cheeks have disappeared, indeed, has disappeared. That is because Yuki's skin has changed colour as the same colour with that spot block.

Black cloud clustered in the sky, began to spread. They disappear. The sky remains the moon, which is almost a full round. The moonlight came into Yuki room, shining directly on to Yuki face. Unfamiliar faces. The wind blows hard to her face, many times. But still nothing changed.
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In the next morning.

A bird flew low, and landed on the edge of window. His head moves quickly looked around the room. Then ended up he looked towards girl sprawling on floor. The bird was flying again, away from window. After a while, the bird came with two rabbits and a squirrel were seen running toward window. They were trying hard to jump up the wall. They tried to get into the room, through the window.

After trying many times, the trio managed to reach the edge of window. Because of lack caution, a rabbit slipped and fell onto the table. Rabbits and squirrels are still sitting on the edge of window laugh. Rabbit got up, rubbing his ass. Then, he saw the girl was still unconscious. Rabbits were off the table, approached her. The two friends followed.

They walked slowly approached her. A rabbit tapped her gently on the cheek. The others look carefully. They looked at each other. Because not wake up, the squirrel looked around and took a cup sprawling on the floor. He took a cue, and threw it into forehead. Two rabbits were followed. They take the same cup to be thrown repeatedly.

"Auuuch..."The girl said. Not counting the throw. The three animals were little grimace.

The girl frowned. She holds her forehead that ached from throwing a cup. She got up slowly, she rubbed her eyes briefly. Then saw three cute animals in front of her.

"Eeh? You here? You who wake me up? (Saw three small animals in turn) Thank you ... "She smiled. Both rabbits and squirrels smiled and showed their teeth. Then wagging tail, and jumped for joy. The girl chuckled.

She stood up, walked to mirror, heat on body gone, pain caused by scratches on arms and legs missing, only her head was still a little dizzy. The steps stopped in front of mirror. She closed eyes, trying to gather courage, opened eyes slowly. She is very aware of what she saw. Her fingers gently touch the mirror. Repeatedly she gently wiped the mirror. Tears dropped slowly but sure. Her mouth trembled, her nose getting more reds. The more she shook her head, the more she could not endure the fact. She tried to smile...but she could not do that.

“So...You are...Me.”


(In the living room, Otsunegoten)

Five pretty princess ones were gathered and laid to rest. They had finished lunch in the hall with their fiance.

"You sure Yuki want to talk everything?"Said Atsuko.

"Yes. She was still in her room, she soon here."Said Tomomi.

"How about Jun and Rena then?”

“Jun told Rino, if he wanted to hurry back to the palace after night. Don’t know why."Said Yui.

"I hope he is cured. Oh yeah, what's Yuko gave you last night, Kojima? "Atsuko asked, she remembers Yuko laughing with Kai overnight.

"Ah! Sister, why ask such a question..."Kojima blushed.

"What is it? Tell me, I want to make sure he doesn’t cause trouble for you."

"It's not. Instead. He didn’t like that, don’t worry..."Kojima shy. She looked down, looked out the window. "I am who messes with Yuko." Kojima smiled getting wider.

Behind entrance, Yuki stood in long with a pounding heart. She was hesitant to meet her sisters. Her hand holding door, but did not move. She drew a breath, take a step back and lean on the wall.


(In the main yard)

The sun was beating down.

“HOO! HAA!”

“YOO! HAA! HAA!”

The voice shouts of the soldiers sounded very loud from a distance. At corners, Yama seen and controls dozens of soldiers who were practicing martial arts.

"Huu huup! Yea, you're ready to accept blows, man? Ha ha, ha! "Minegishi move his body to the right and left like boxing.

"Yoo, fighting style what it is, this isn’t a boxing martial from west. We got some...Um, kungfu maybe." Yuko avoid Minegishi.

"Hahaha. Don’t care about, I'm often doing this man. Hap! "Minegishi catch Yuko, he put his arm around the neck and pulled him to the side.

Yuko grinned, taking his left foot right Minegishi go circling motion, and pulling forward. Minegishi fell and rose. Yuko turned around with a frisky and cast Minegishi, and gave a little hit to the head. Yuko grinned and chase that raced toward Kai, Sae and Rino who has been practicing earlier. Since Jun got attacked from doer, all fiance now more actively practicing martial arts and join other soldiers. Because attackers has not known by anyone, court concerned and do anticipate that happening again incursion. Kai and Sae already had martial arts ability before. Both also often practiced with soldiers before.

"You, want to make any trouble again?"Sae pick-up chin pointing towards Yuko.

"Yoo, someone start talking about trouble."Yuko raised his hand, and threw winds in direction of Sae face.

"Son, you're inexperienced." Sae puff towards the man shorter than him.

"Dare me, uh?"Yuko pushed Sae away.

"Yea, come on! Come on! Fight! "Minegishi soared, provoking both. He stood behind Yuko and holding Yuko shoulders.

"Hey, what you doing, let me." Yuko moved his shoulders. "Oh yeah come on!"He developed a brief smile to Sae, a sign that he is ready to fight.

Sae jumped little, moving his head to the right and to the left. His hands clenched and punching the air several times.

"Wowoo wooo...What the kids doing is this? Come practice. "Kai pulled Yuko shirt.

“Yoo, let me.”Yuko turned.

"Easy man." Minegishi embrace Kai's shoulder and smiled mean. "Come Yuko, get him down!"

Without further ado, Sae hit Yuko make him fell backward. Yuko rose and pushed Sae, up both tumbled to the two soldiers who were training nearby. Yuko wobbled Sae clothes, shaking him bit sharp, then hit Sae's face very hard. Sae grinned, he wiped a few blood coming out from his nose. He cursed, he realized Yuko did that on purpose, without further ado Sae grabbed him and threw him back. Sae-up with a red face. The soldiers did not respond to them, thinking that they are exercising.

"You crazy Yuko! You dare make me bleed. You want to die? Huhh! I'll give you a lesson just like him!"

"Yeah come on! Come! who? Jun?"

"Course! who else? Useless."

"How did you know him, we were never told you about him?"Yuko asked suspiciously, he stopped and stared at Sae who stepped back.

They were face to face. Minegishi and Kai nodded. Sae shocked, he retreated to the back, face turned pale, his eyes turn towards Yuko and others, Rino pulled Sae shirt and lifted it. Sae rid Rino hand and pushed him, and left them.

"Suspicions just correct."Said Rino.

"I didn’t think he's easy stupid like that."Minegishi looked at Sae who has disappeared from view.

Kai patted Yuko. "Are you okay?"

"Do not worry, my brother." Yuko winked coquettish at Kai.

"Oh No...! I don’t need that! Son." Kai ruffled Yuko hair. Minegishi and Rino captured Yuko simultaneously. Yuko tried hard to escape from collaboration of three body of man who was laughing and hugged him tight. Yuko yelled ‘a help’ but no one heard that.


(Otsunegoten)

Yuki sliding door, stepped inside. Kojima turned.

"Oh NO!! Wh-what who... who are you?" Kojima surprised much, she stood up and retreated to the back hit Sayaka and Yui. Kojima rest on Sayaka back, Sayaka pushed Kojima away. Yui pull her layers partially wedged between Sayaka and Kojima. Go board ratcheted up the stones on the board is a mess and falling.

"Oh No! You're out of the way Kojima, you hit me! You think you cotton?"Sayaka pushed her aside. Yui moves away.

"I’m not cotton sis, I’m confectionery." Kojima said with a grin smile. Sayaka frowned.

"My god! She's Yuki! "Tomomi was shocked, she spontaneously shut her mouth, do not believe what she saw.

"Sister... it's me... "Yuki did not dare approach them. She just stood still in the middle of the entrance.

"My dear sister! What happen...? "Asked Atsuko in heavy surprised. She approached Yuki and pulled her in, until Yuki sitting in front her. Atsuko glared at Yuki, closely watching. Yui are aware of it, over and gently stroked Yuki cheek.

"Yes ... you're my youngest sister. Yuki..."

"What's happen to you Yuki?"Sayaka asked, pretending to be concerned.

Everyone was surprised and felt weird, they do not stop watching Yuki. Nothing has changed with Yuki, it's just ... her face darkening. Her hands and feet are like a scratch wound was dry. Silence. No one said anything, they freeze up. Their eyes that do not blink saw a girl in front them. The heart seemed to stop them by force.

"I don’t know, sis. Last night, my body felt very itchy. I scratched and scratched, and this is what happened, "Said Yuki.

Sayaka shook her head. She had not expected so soon, she's a bit scared with Yuki. Because a strange look. Inwardly, she was happy because the powder and spells of the witch had turned out to work perfectly.

"This is not good Yuki, this is not good ..."

Atsuko rise. She took her hand and led trot Yuki left the room.

"Sister, sister... wait."

Atsuko ignored Yuki calls. She slowed her pace, but still looking straight ahead. Yuki did not understand, and keep abreast Atsuko. In the alley way to the room where their father currently in, the palace servants and soldiers guard who saw Atsuko, shocked. They wondered who the girl behind Atsuko. Yes, they did not recognize she is.

"Sister, I don’t want to face father like this."

"Just follow me."

"Princess Atsuko, please stop and leave your friend here. And you can enter princess. "A guard stopped Atsuko. They see a girl behind Atsuko suspiciously.

"They did not know me?”Yuki thought. She bit shocked and worried.

"Get off!" Atsuko broke the guards while holding Yuki hands tightly, and made the guards confusion. They follow Atsuko from behind.

Atsuko pushed door quickly. Her father who was reading a letter sheet turned quickly toward Atsuko. Yashusi smiled at her daughter's arrival. The soldiers were trying to capture Yuki, stopped behind.

"Atsuko."

"Father. Look. "Atsuko pulled Yuki and pushed forward. Yashusi stood up from his chair. His eyes widened, his face freeze.

"You know who she is?"

"My-my ... youngest daughter ..."

"Father ..."


(In the doorway)

Yashusi king walked very fast down the aisle. Some ministers followed behind in a hurry. Yashusi gathered all royal physicians. Instructed all of them to cure Yuki and eliminate dry wounds in hands and feet, returns Yuki to normal state. All physicians bowed and saluted. They promised to cure princess Yuki. They are very confident because they have not seen Yuki. Before long, they were gathered in the living room and check on Yuki. They were surprised to see the state of youngest daughter, they had never seen a state like that before from hundreds of patients they had ever handled. Even patients who had have develop severe illness though, never this severe.

The physicians began to worry, their hearts are filled with insecurity could cure Yuki. Without further ado they took drugs and draw on equipment as soon as possible. Various kinds of medicine and natural ingredients that they made, nothing works. Yuki was taking dozens of ingredients which have no bearing at all. Some even make Yuki nausea and want to vomit.

"My goodness, behold, they tried to kill Yuki! Anyone stop this!" Said Tomomi.

"Oh NO! Yuki, hold on..."Kojima holding Tomomi hand.

"Something serious has happened to Yuki."Said Yui.

It was getting late into the night. Finally, the last three reliable physicians surrendered.

"Majesty. My lord, we are very sorry, couldn’t do anything more than this..."

"What is that words! She should be healed! Do whatever it takes!"

"Yes My lord."

These three powerful healer back to the table each and concocting new drugs, combine spices, to obtain a suitable remedy. They are assisted by all the physicians of the palace. The chamber maids back and forth from the living room to room Yuki, deliver drugs.

"Father, please stop all this. Look, Yuki wasn’t able to receive drug again...we'll find some other way, father."Atsuko begged his father.

Yuki ran out of the room and threw up most of the liquid is too much drug reactions.

"Sister, I...I’m fine." Yuki fainted.

Advisory ordered everyone to pray for healing of Yuki. All inhabitants were wondering about the state of Yuki, because they do not know exactly what current happen with their princess.

"Majesty, all physicians fatigue. They really did give up and not continue it all. They argue, princess Yuki doesn’t hurt, it's kind of... "

"Curse."

“Oh NO!!”


Next day.

All inhabitants of palace were struck by strange events that happened to princess Yuki. During the period of last night, the whole body Yuki changed color to jet black. Yuki did not know what caused that. Everyone is scared to see it. Yuki could not help herself. No one dared to approach her. They fear that if it is an illness that is contagious. Her face has changed, making the people who see it feel frightened, and began to not recognize it. Everyone was whispering.

"Who is she? Is it true that she's the daughter Yuki?"

"I don’t know, strange face. She's black. She's not a princess Yuki."

"She was a girl, got a curse, then she becomes like that."


(In the doorway, Seryioden)

"My majesty, if I may say, of what happened to Princess Yuki. She is the cause of all the strange happenings in the palace."

Yashusi stopped suddenly. He did not flinch. Her eyes look down sharply. Then, he pulled the psychic shirt, prompting him to touch the wall.

"How dare you said like that at all!"

"My lord. Don’t like this. Take control of your emotions."Said Ochano, his hand on the king's arm, and lower king arm slowly. Yashusi flashes quickly, he saw Ochano, sigh. The psychic was fixing his shirt down quickly.

"We have got conclusion of the whole incident in palace, my lord."

"I'll listen."Said Yashusi.

"There is only one shower was broken. One of the seven water fountain was broken it indicates that one of the king's daughter has done something that is not feasible, the daughter Yuki."

"The water changed color to black, the water comes from a broken shower. It means princess Yuki turn black, like the color of water."

"Strange noises are heard is the voice of the evil spirits out of the nest and threatening Gosho, the evil spirit is inside Yuki's daughter with a face that we see today."

"Sixth fountain cracked, it indicates that six other daughters are in danger, if not immediately rescued from the influence of evil spirits that come out of that place."

Everyone was silent. No one dared to say. Their eyes did not blink, they breaths seemed suspended in the middle of the road. As trapped in the ice cave increasingly narrow. King Yashusi wiped the sweat from his forehead with his sleeve. One of adviser trembled. A minister shed tears because the other was too scared and anxious. Ochano not budge, his mind roamed.

"We could not afford to continue this. We sure majesty can decide all of this."

"My lord. It is the will of heaven."

"Collect all! We must save Gosho! "Yashusi harsh ruled. Actually, his heart hurt. He could not think any longer. He would not selfish, if a thought Yuki. For him, safety of all Gosho people is important more than.


Afternoon.

(In the main room, Seiryoden)

All ministers gathered palace. They do a trial against Yuki. The king also ordered all psychic and shamans. The shamans had up to this point did not believes what they see on princess Yuki. Horrors on their faces. They had never seen anything like it before in all stories that happen to a human being, especially a princess.

Yuki entered the great hall room. Everyone has been waiting for her, including her mother who is very worried about her youngest daughter. The sounds of bustling people whispering about messing atmosphere. The king ordered them to be quiet and calm. Yuki sat with her face down limp, not knowing what will happen next. She could not think well, mixed feelings. Between the confusion, anxiety, fear, shame, and so on.

"Yuki, tell me. What have you done? "Said Yashusi. Yuki shocked, spontaneously got up from the chair.

"Father. I did not do anything."Said Yuki.

"You must have done something really awful. You've been punished by the gods! "Said Sayaka frontaly.

"Sister!"Yuki eyes widened, big surprised like hit by truck from behind.

"Yuki!!"Atsuko, Tomomi and Kojima shouted in unison. Yui holding Atsuko's shoulder, led her to sit back.

Everyone looked at each other confused. Atmosphere was abrupt tense and silent with no sound. The wind whirred softly. Muffled voices began to enter the recesses of the human heart falter.

"Nothing happens unless you've done something bad." King said in a tone rather high. His mixed feelings grew.

Yuki shook her head. "I did not do anything that would upset the gods, Father...,"She answered. She hid the fact, that her heart is very hurt to hear his father said that.

People returned to see Yuki. Some of them feel sorry. Yuki beautiful, has turned to black, sometimes they really do not get to see Yuki's face, because the dusky shadows appear around her body.

"Don’t lie anymore...You may fool us, you dodge all the allegations of events yesterday. But now look at you. God knows, Yuki. You better recognize, that God maybe forgive you immediately. "Said Sayaka with hoped her words affects the minds of all those present.

Everyone was silent. They looked at each other and whispering, some began to justify what was Sayaka said, some very confused and almost did not want to see what would happen, it was too horrible. For a moment the ministers discussed briefly, then nodded their head to justify what was Sayaka said.

The king closed his eyes for a moments, he never expected anything like this before. Remembering Yuki has been known as a good girl, not doing freakish stuff. And now, front him, the youngest daughter, pride who will be a leader of this country, inherited the throne, was turned into a terrible figure in his eyes.

"Then how can you explain what happened to your body? Black?"Said Yashusi, he very curious. He wanted to hear significant explanation from Yuki.

Yuki shook her head, her eyes showed that she really did not know what happened to her. The king frowned. Father and daughter looked at each other with a view equally surprised. They were saying something without sound. But not find anything constant in it.

Yashusi stood. "If you don’t confess, I'll banish you to the woods."He continued sharp.

GASP!

Oh NO!!

All crowd in heavy surprise. They turned towards the king with a sense of wonder and worry. They do not think the king would reveal something like that to her youngest daughter. Yuki was heavy shocked and disappointed, would not thinking anymore.

Yuki took a deep breath. "Like I said before ... I didn’t do anything wrong. And I'd rather be thrown into the woods than to confess to a deed I didn’t commit. "

The wind blew hard against her face. Making her black hair moves to back with beautiful motions.

Some ministers and royal advisers stood up together, they were very surprised to hear Yuki answer. Ochano and her mother did not believe in each other, Ochano leaned slightly forward look towards Yuki full of confusion. Sayaka got winning smile rolling very quickly. Her eyes followed the movement of her lips widened. Sayaka saw towards her fiance, Sae clutching her hands, hinting that something they did successfully. The sisters and brothers no less shocked than they reveal a rigid expression. Yuki, what do you think?

Yashusi king rose from his chair throne, his eyes glared at Yuki full of disbelief and left the great room, the court ministers and advisors followed behind. Yashusi offended, Yuki is very presumptuous for daring to fight like that. Everyone involved disband. They threw a strange look to Yuki, left her alone in the middle of room. Atsuko and others are still standing in the corner, saw Yuki from afar.

"My god! I couldn't believe father said like that? And so it is with Yuki. They really like. "Said Atsuko. She looked at Yuki confusion.

"Yes. Your father is difficult to predict. Just like Yuki."Said Kai.

"So she is..."Kojima want to close Yuki, suddenly stopped. Tomomi pulled her hand back.

"It's all clear now ...You still not trust me?"Said Sayaka quietly.

"Looks like Sayaka's right, I was very upset by this." Yui nodded.

"The shamans and psychic has revealed everything, Yuki couldn’t help anymore, unfortunately all this happened."Said Rino.

"Come on guys. Let's get out of here. "Kai and Atsuko went first.

"We wait for the next decision."Said Tomomi.

Everyone is going to leave Yuki alone. No one does it feel disappointed that night. Disappointment mixed with confusion. Sayaka out from the side of the door, making sure that everyone had left. She approached Yuki is still sitting in the middle of the room. Yuki bowed sluggish, move head and see Sayaka in front her. Yuki smiled softly, Sayaka responded with a mocking smile.

"How does it feel?"

"What do you mean?"

"Being the most beautiful princess, adored by men, loved by all women, liked by everyone, praised the father."

"Sister..."

"Now? Look at you. You're black! "

Yuki did not reply. She came back down and closed her eyes. Her face looked very tired. Sayaka was not releasing cynical gaze to Yuki.

"You are a difficult sister to rid."
Sayaka thought, she walked slowly around Yuki, a moment her eyes fixed on the sparkle thing hanging on Yuki belt. "Hey what's that?" Sayaka was about to take it. Yuki got up from the chair.

"Oh No! Don’t take this. Sister, go. Please don’t bother me more. I need a time. "

"(Small laugh) Well..." Sayaka turned away and left.


The next morning.

(In the main room, Seiryoden)

"You can’t do that, your honor." Said Ochano in a disappointed tone.

"What else Ochano? You remember what the shamans told us? The will of God couldn’t be avoided. Maybe this is the answer to all of these events occurred in recent times. "King insisted.

"Indeed! I don’t believe that shamans."Ochano thought.

"Ochano. We have taken a decision. As long as you know, we do all the calculations based on the natural and instructions from sky. The elders also couldn’t say anything. All this clearly suggested that she should go."A representative from court officer was supporting Yashusi.

"This is the only way. If do this Gosho survived. Do you remember? Yuki herself who asked to be throws into the woods."

"... (Sigh) ... Well if so, I'll follow."Said Ochano quietly. He realized could not do anything for now. "I really hope this is all a mistake. A very very A Damn Big mistake... "

After a long and violent discussion with his advisor, Yashusi king ordered Yuki to be moved to the woods. Yuki was very sad, but she could not do anything to defy her father’s order.

The royal guards keep Atsuko, Kojima, Tomomi, Yui, and Sayaka to not get out of the building in order to meet Yuki. Kai came along with Rino slip in, to see them from the back of the building and get them to go to the Jomei-mon gate. Yuko and the others were waiting at the gate. Actually they are already banned, but they are still forced. The daughter ran fast. Kojima saw Yuko, straight up and hugged him.

Yuki looks was walking alone, accompanied by bodyguards in tow. Her face was not clearly visible, transparent hood covering her face. Her sisters and brothers saw her from afar. Sae took Sayaka hand. He guided her fiancee to behind. They walked to the back, and began to move away from them all.

"Yuki, Yuki, why are you doing this?"

"I still couldn’t believe it, actually... I don’t want to believe it."

"I feel there is something odd. It bothers me."

"Me too, saw that cart, I couldn’t even think clearly. I mean, it’s...hurt."

"Oh No, no, no... I don’t want to end up like this! I never imagined we lost her this way..."

"Is it really like this??? End of story, our dearest in the Gosho palace."

The wind was blowing breeze from mountains to the palace. Sunny afternoon, but not for heart is overwhelmed with anxiety. Winds bring all news and goods, stay away from people who are complacent. The birds flew low marks in mourning. Lovely gardens in the corners of palace was deserted, inhabitants hide behind doors, to inform them that their grief and mourn the departure of someone.

The ox carts start running slowly out of the Kenrei-mon gate. The servants and guards witnessed it at each other strangely. All who witnessed the departure of a girl figure in the cart, feeling the same thing, that sense of loss? As there were missing. Someone had left it all. But who? Who is that?


Midnight.

The Journey to eastern woods takes all day. They had to pass through town from the palace first. Currently, carts are still half way to town. Sayaka and Sae who secretly followed the carts from behind, they fell out of hiding and stop the carts in front of it.

"Stop all of you!" Sae shouted commanding soldiers guarding the carts.

"What? Master, Princess Sayaka? Why you here? "The soldier shocked.

"Put her down."Said Sayaka ruled.

"Bu-but, these midnight. And we haven’t got to the east."Soldier said.

"If you not allow, I make sure the palace wouldn’t see you tomorrow."Sayaka was threatening, Sae move forward getting drew his sword towards. The soldier's eyes widened and straight down quickly, other soldiers walked toward the herd.

Fearful, the soldier ordered guards to lower Yuki on the way, and intend to leave her alone. Sayaka and Sae smiled delightedly. Yuki came out and saw her sister. Her eyes stared endlessly sad to Sayaka. In Yuki's mind, she does not believe on what her sister did to her. She does not want and will never believe it, but now, how did Sayaka treat her for real. There is no sense of affection of a sister she could feel from Sayaka, no. Yuki realized that Sayaka think of it as opposite, not sister, family?

"Now, give me that sparkling thing. Give me!"Sayaka draw Yuki clothes and searched the belt.

"Oh No, sister! No!!"Yuki fend very hard Sayaka hand and pushed it away spontaneous.

"Oh yes! How dare you! You're hurting me! Now, give meee!"

"Sister, you may, you could take everything from me, but not for this one!" Yuki hid her sparkling thing behind her shirt and hugged it tightly.

Sayaka grumbled, she was very interested in it. She did not even know why, since she saw at first time with that sparkling, so heavy wanted to have it. Sayaka trying to win it again, Yuki turned around and avoid Sayaka.

“Oh no...”Sae just shook his head, sighed at the two sisters were wrestling.

With annoyance and not managed to get it, Sayaka walked into the cart, fuming. Yuki breathe relieved. A voice makes Yuki shock.

"Yuki, Yuki. See you dare reject me, now...I'm sure all people reject you. No one wants a girl look like that. Do you understand now? (small laugh)..."Sae widened his eyes. He walked follows Sayaka from behind, boarding the cart in tow.

Yuki did not look back. Her heart was pounding.

Entourage soldiers, Sayaka and Sae have walked away, leaving Yuki alone without any light. The carts began to disappear in the darkness of night. Sounds legs ox was not heard from again, the sound of crickets and owls are now beginning to be heard faintly. Yuki was still standing in middle of road. Her body was limp, she fell limp. Her knees hit the ground hard. Her hair hung forward over her face from side. Her hands touched ground. Yuki uniting her hands, closed eyes and started to say something, prayed. The atmosphere was really quiet and spooky.

Slowly, light was emerging from behind leaves of trees around road. Black clouds which had been over the moon, is now moving away and showed in an almost spherical. No disturbing noise. When Yuki opened eyes, she found small path. The road just looks dim, but visible. She felt moon lighting gave intentionally so she could walk right direction. Momentarily closed eyes again, Yuki tries to remove her fear, began to take steps and leave that place, ran track path. A self she runs in the dark of night. Run, run and run without knowing where she has to stop. It was cold, quiet, and lonely.


(In Soldier lodge, Backyard)

"Oh NO! How dare you all do that to princess Yuki?"Ochano said to the chairman of soldiers who served to bring Yuki.

"Master. I'm really sorry. I realized I’m in big trouble with this. Princess Sayaka ordered it. We couldn’t deny."

Ochano eyes widen, he hard to believe even know for sure what happened. He knew Sayaka does all that. He did not blame the soldiers and guards. Without thinking, Ochano prepare to move out of the palace after Yuki. He did not allow anyone to follow.

While in the world or Kyoto Gosho, happening events the youngest daughter was expulsion and exile into the woods, there are events taking place in another world too.

* * *

Yuki stumbled and fell. The sparkle thing was thrown out from pocket. Yuki murmured, picked it quick. She cleared it with layers shirt. She brushed and blows many. It was started emitting whitish glow blue light flashing alternately and very beautiful. Slowly...without realizing, tears flowed like a broken down dam. It was so wet. It was so silent.

When I was just a little child
Happiness was there awhile
And from me it... it slipped one day

Happiness come back I say...
Cause if you don't come...
I've got to go looking for happiness

Say that...
Say I'm hurt...
And it's no sense
I'm hurt, I'm hurt... Deep inside

Oh hear my cry, hear my cry....

Said I'm
Don't you know I'm?
I'm hurt, hurt inside
Oh It’s hurting...Who cares...Who cares...
   




Next!! You Know Who...You know Who... Yes, someone whose name has always been said by all inhabitants in this world and bring all hopes...someone who we (especially she) have waiting for long...somewhere...far away...oh come on baby :heart:


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UPDATE SOON~ OMG

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Mayu, mayu come to the rescue, quick!
Visit my FFs:
We Love the Hospital! OS (Mayuki + Wmatsui) + Omake
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The Foreigner Husband and The Traditional Wife (Wmatsui)
http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=36090.0

[Short OS] "Puppy" Love (Pairings: JR + YH)
http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=36408.0

My Little Brother Can't Be This Cute!
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Derailed - OS featuring Aya x Nao
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No what happened to yukiiiii

so sad they throw her out to the woods

but one of the soldiers said the truth

what will happen ?

and YES the next chapter will be mayuki

please keep it up
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What did you do to Yuki? Poor her! Rejected by her family... So bad and sad... :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry:
What is the things that Yuki didn't want Sayaka to take?? It is something really important for her. And her mother didn't do anything! :shocked
Ochano is so good! He wanted to go with her. What is the thing that lead her in the wood? :huhuh
Argh... Love this story even if it too bad for Yuki. Oh and last question... or not... I think I ask you this after some chapter. ;)

Don't force yourself even if I want the next update so bad! :lol:

If you want I can love you and the story... I already say that I love you didn't I?

Why are you nervous don't be!!!! :)

Mayuki! Mayuki! Mayuki! It comes! Yeahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! :w00t:
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i just thought the witch was really weird :nervous
yuki stop using that stupid scrub, mou :thumbdown:
i love atsuko, she's so caring and ochano :cathappy:  :heart: :yep:
no!!! they can't banish yuki!! :angry: :cry:
saeyaka!!  :shocked you won't get away with this!!! :angry1:
yes finally!! mayu's coming, i love the video, its so awsome!! :luvluv1: :luvluv1:
thanx for the update, more please  :cow: :bow:
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What is that.... just banish Yuki....

Ochano knew the truth now.... with the soldiers and others as the witness, he can save Yuki... and get Sayaka and Sae to confess

Also... Kai and others knew that Jun was beat up by Sae...

I think.. that would be enough to get them to save Yuki...

But Ochano just left the palace and followed Yuki out to the forest for what?

And also the other good fiances knew the truth but don't want to tell the other princesses... why?

Honestly... the other princesses believed Sayaka more than Yuki... why? How?

I guess Yuki is going to be saved by Mayu soon enough

More questions....

I can't wait to find out more...

Thank you for the update

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Are you here? I want the next :(
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Please update...

Can't wait to see what happen to Yuki and others

Thank you

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Please continue this  :cry:

It's time for Mayu to come  :rofl:

I Will be waiting for the update  :bow:

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*found the trailer on youtube again and reminded me of the fic*  :err: :fainted:
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