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Offline chiqinna

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Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 22! 18/09/13
« Reply #280 on: September 19, 2013, 05:59:38 AM »
okay i'm using my phone rite now...
and i'm working rite now...
and i'm bored rite now...
poor me~ always lonely~~
so I will just reply randomly...
Ryuuka-san...well, that's happen when my finger moving fast deleting some file and accidently I deleted it..yeah the trouble maker one... but! dont worry...it just a short prologue...ngwheheeeee!
and i'm working on it now!! hehe I have a free time at work! :D
duhhh its hard to reply to all...
qweakb...it would be more better if u send me to somewhere like Majisuka Gakuen place...haha!
anyway I actually already done with the next chapter xD...
I always bad with language...even with my mother tongue! hehe sorry~
                                                      with ♥, Chiqinna..
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Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 22! 18/09/13
« Reply #281 on: September 19, 2013, 06:23:22 AM »
Chiqinna-San

Well if you are bored... You can always make more updates to your stories

We the readers would be happy in getting multiple updates at the same time

Well.. That or you can always ask them for an early leave if the work place is not that strict

Mine can not.. Whether you have something to do or not, you need to stay according to the schedule

Sometimes overtime or emergency extra time or covering someone else shifts

Well enjoy your quite day... I wish I'm like that

Can't wait to see your next update if you have finished it

Thank you... Take care...

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Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 22! 18/09/13
« Reply #282 on: September 19, 2013, 07:45:48 AM »
I do bored cisda-san...and I always want to write for my stories... it just ideas doesn't come always u know.. xD
actually, I feel like i'm the owner of this shop u know.. open it up every morning and close it on the evening... my boss is busy working somewhere else..but I cant do anything I want, I dont want to...this is my very first job after a looong time staying at home... hahaha...
hope to get a better job soon...I love this job but qweakb might really send me to a mental hospital if I get crazy of no entertaintment...no tv here, radio is not enough for me..hahaha kidding...I prefer quiet place like this but the neighbor is too noisy...when they are working... =•=
and I wish this shop is facing a beach lol ridiculous~
kay...I want to talk more but I might get into nonsense talk...
with ♥ Chiqinna~
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Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 22! 18/09/13
« Reply #283 on: September 19, 2013, 09:00:24 AM »
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qweakb...it would be more better if u send me to somewhere like Majisuka Gakuen place...haha!
hmmm... why not send you to prison hope? LOL  :wahaha:

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hope to get a better job soon...I love this job but qweakb might really send me to a mental hospital if I get crazy of no entertaintment...no tv here, radio is not enough for me..hahaha kidding...I prefer quiet place like this but the neighbor is too noisy...when they are working... =•=
and I wish this shop is facing a beach lol ridiculous~
kay...I want to talk more but I might get into nonsense talk...
with ♥ Chiqinna~

Nowadays where can get job so easily one?

LOL.. Human are so complicated!

Then I send you to the Ryuuka's nonsense world  (Might be joining.. Feel like I talking nonsense now... Just that I don't write story..haha)
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Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 22! 18/09/13
« Reply #284 on: September 19, 2013, 09:51:44 AM »
Ah.. So you are taking care someone else shop.

Big responsibility there... Me just come and go accordingly.

No need to open or close.

Sometimes work extra hours from home after finished.

Well yeah.. Nowadays it is very hard to get a job.

So just don't think too much about it..

Just do what you suppose to do then once you finish try not to think about it.

As what Ryuuka said try to enjoy if you like it... If not just do the job as long as its enough.

If you really really like it... You can put some efforts.., you might get promote... You never know

If you are bored... Play computer or Internet games from your iPhone or smartphone

Try to take it easy... If u busy yourself... The time go quickly.

Just put a post here... Even if u just want to chat or complain

Pretty sure people don't mind... Better than getting stress.

Anyway... Take care...

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Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 22! 18/09/13
« Reply #285 on: September 19, 2013, 11:41:42 AM »

Chapter 23


Acchan and Minami were at the toy stall.

“Minami, here, one for you and one for me!” Acchan said smiling as she
put on the bracelet on Minami’s wrist.
 It was a couple bracelets.
“It’s beautiful!” Minami said cheerfully.

After that,
Acchan was trying to shoot a small balloon to get the big prizes.
Minami was looking at her happily while cheer her up.

Then a mascot comes near her and makes Minami turns around.

“Smurf!!!” she screamed happily when she saw a smurf mascot.

The mascot also jumps while making Minami to jump as well.

Then the smurf took Minami’s hand and taking her away from Acchan who was still oblivious of the situation.

Minami was calling Acchan but it was so crowded that Acchan did not hear her.






Mayu was thinking about something.

“Wait, why would they wear a mascot?
 I don’t like smurf.” Mayu said as she stops walking and looking at Black.

“Takamina likes smurf.” Mayu added.





Meanwhile Acchan who was finally get the smurf toy turns around to see Minami was nowhere to be seen.

“Minami?” Acchan was searching for her.
Acchan started to get worried.

She walks around searching for Minami.
Then she saw Minami was walking with a mascot.

“Minami!!!” Acchan called her.
 Minami turns around smiling and was about to call Acchan back
when someone suddenly put a handkerchief on her mouth making her
unconscious then a men quickly carry her away.


Acchan running after them but the mascot suddenly
 hug her tight making her hard to move.

Then Acchan really got mad that she slammed the mascot down.

That action gained people’s attention as they look at the mascot.

Acchan quickly get up and run to chase them.

Yuki and Mayu saw Acchan running and the mascot was lying down on the ground.

They walks towards the mascot and took off the head revealing Sae.

“You again.” Yuki said.
“Hehe…she was so strong...I think my backbone is broken.” Sae groaned in pain.

“Why is Acchan running?” Mayu ask her.
“I think it’s too late now. They took the midget already.
Sorry I was just doing this for money~”Sae said grinning.

“What?! Damn it!” Yuki then get up and call Rena then she call Mariko.

“No wonder you were wearing a smurf mascot…how did you know Takamina loves smurf?!”
Mayu said as she sit on the mascot and pinch Sae’s nose.

“I was just guessing-Oucchhh!!”Sae said as her nose got pinched.





Meanwhile

Acchan was still chasing them until the front gate.

Some men were getting in her way as they try to hit her making Acchan madder.

Then a black car coming and they get in with the unconscious Minami.
The car driving away fast leaving the place.

“NOOOO!!!!!!” Acchan screamed then she feels like someone
hit her head hard until she feels like her body being dragged.







After what happened, Mariko told them to go home while
their people are searching for Minami and Acchan.
The others were bringing back to Miichan’s house since it could danger their life too.

Miichan decided to tell them everything.
About Minami, Acchan, Yuki, Rena and everything that involve mafia.

They were really worried about Minami and Acchan.

Jurina was so shocked when she knows that Rena-Chan is a mafia.

Luckily Rena knows how to calm her down.

Miichan was going to see Mariko.
Mariko looks like she’s also worried.
“You have any idea where they bring them?” Miichan ask her.

Mariko shook her head.

“Did you tell them everything?” Miichan nodded.
“I’m glad that they understand.” Miichan said.

Then Black comes inside the living room.

“I think someone could help us.” She said as she pointed at the front door.
“Who is this?” Mariko asks serious.

“Sae. She’s the one who involved in kidnapping Minami.” Black said.
Sae was being hold by two Rapappa’s underlings so that she would not escape.

Miichan suddenly dashed towards her and punch her on the face.
“How dare you!!” Miichan said mad then kick at her stomach.
Sae was defenseless.

“Let me go!!!” Miichan was being stopped by Black.

Then Mariko slowly walks towards Sae.

“Where are they?” Mariko asks.

“*pant* I don’t know…I just do my job.” Sae said in pain.

Without warning Mariko slapped her hard.

The two underlings release their hold on Sae making her falling on the ground.
“You should know.” Mariko said looking at her.

“Like I said, I don’t know where they bring her.
If I know I would definitely told you.” Answered Sae serious.

“Then you should know where they always go…or their hideout or anything!” Miichan said.

Sae was thinking for a while.

“If I tell you, in exchange you have to give me money.” Sae said looking away.

“Tsk, are you drugs addict or something?
Are you trying to play with us now?!” said Miichan mad.

“I’m serious…I need money.
After this I knew Kato’s group will kick me out.” Sae said looking at them.

“Why do you need money anyway?” Black asks curious.

“I…I need money to pay the debt I have with the loan sharks.
And to buy a medicine…for my friend” Sae said.
 Somehow she looks like she’s blushing. Maybe it’s because of the punch she got earlier.

“What? Then you could have just find a good job rather than working with a mafia!” Miichan scolded her.

“They offered me a big amount of money!” Sae said.

Mariko sighed rubbing her forehead.

“Tell us first then we’ll discuss about you later.” Mariko said.

Sae eventually agreed then told them about their hideout and where their always been.

“And before I forgot, be careful, they probably prepared for your attacks.” Sae says.
“Then we have to prepare more.” Miichan said.











“Ughhh…” Acchan groaned. Her head is really hurt.

They must be really hit her head hard.

She tried to open her eyes and looking at the surrounding.

“Good morning, sweetheart~” A voice sounded.
Then Acchan realized that she’s been surrounded by many black-coat men.

She quickly tried to stand up to prepared herself.

Then she remembers about Minami.

“Minami! Minami where is she?!!” Acchan said furiously looking around.

“Tsk…calm down will you. She’s here, sleeping peacefully~”
Kenzo said showing Minami behind her.

Minami was lying on the ground still unconscious.

Acchan was about to run towards her when they pointing their guns towards her head.

Acchan was mad glaring at Kenzo.

“What? Okkotteru?! You moves a bit, I kill her~”
Kenzo said making Acchan more mad.

“Don’t you dare to touch her!” Acchan gritted her teeth.

“Hahahahahaha!!! Let me give you an option, join my group,
 and I will release her. Or leave this place, I will keep your beloved midget…
I mean her dead body, or….both.” Kenzo said grinning.

“Like I would do both…Let’s have a fight, if I win,
you will release her…safe and sound!” Acchan said serious.

“Hmmm…”Kenzo was thinking as he walks then he looks at the lifeless Minami.

“Fine. You, against all of them, bare hands.” He smirks.

Acchan was feeling confident so she prepared her position as well as the others.

The battle between her and more than a 100 begins as they attack her one by one.

Acchan put all her strength beating them.

It was about Minami that she deals with.
Of course she would not just let this chance to go away like that.


While they were busy fighting, Kenzo was just looking at them with interesting.

“It would be good if she joins our group though.” Mumbled him.

Then he heard a sound coming from the midget.
Looks like she’s waking up now.

Kenzo quickly took a bat and hit her head hard to make her fainted again.

Acchan saw his action.

“What are you doing?!!!” Acchan yelled at him mad.

Kenzo got startled by her.

They took this advantage to kick Acchan on the stomach making her bend down.

“This is not fair.” Acchan whined then she keeps on fighting them ignoring the pain.










Meanwhile, Mariko and Miichan were on their way to
 find Kato’s group hideout but they got wrong place so they keep on searching at every place.

They even sent some of their people to Kato’s mansion,
Minami and Acchan might be there.






Meanwhile

Acchan was still busy fighting them.
There is still many of them left.
She’s panting hard while keep standing still.
Suddenly one of them use a metal bar then he hit hard on Acchan’s leg.

“Arrrghhh!!!!” Acchan screamed in pain as she fall down.

“Well~ well~ now…you look…such a pain to see…” Kenzo said grinning.

“*pant* Y-you use weapons…” Acchan said holding her legs trying to soothe the pain.

“Whatever!!!” Kenzo said.
“Now, I’m tired to see you guys fighting nonstop.
Let’s get to the point shall we?” Kenzo said as he grip on the metal bar that he took somewhere.

Acchan was glaring at him trying to get up.

Then he walks to Minami and straighten her right leg harshly.

“You know Maeda, she is the one who make my father to walk with a walking stick now, and now she-“

“NOO!!!! Don’t touch her you bastard!!!” Acchan interrupt him knowing what he will do to her.

“Ara? Revenge is revenge!”
Kenzo said mad as he hold up the metal bar and about to crush Minami’s leg.

“NOOOO!!!! I will join your group!!
 Please…let her go!” Acchan said as her tears falling down.

Kenzo put down the metal bar.


“What? Say it again?” Kenzo said.
 He just wants a confirmation.

“I…I will join your group,
and you will release her!” Acchan said closing her eyes.

‘I will do anything for Minami.’ Acchan said to herself.

Kenzo then laugh loudly with his underlings.

“Good.” He said as he walks towards Acchan.
He then bend down and grab Acchan’s hair.

“From now on, you will be in my group, and don’t worry,
your beloved there will be sent back to her house.”
 
Kenzo said then he let go of Acchan’s hair.


“Be sure to report yourself at Kato’s mansion tomorrow
after you officially get out of Rapappa.”
He said grinning then walks away from the place along with his people.

Acchan was just looking at them taking Minami away sorrowfully.

“I’m sorry, Minami *sobs*
 I’m sorry…” Acchan said looking down crying silently.






T.B.C~
Hmmm... okay i will enjoy my time at work~ hahaha  :D
you're right, it's hard to get a job nowadays~
maybe i should join nonsense world~
i don't want to go prison hope!!!
thanks cisda-san,qweakb-san, Ryuuka-san~ you guys spend some time talking nonsense with me~ :heart:
I ter'delete again my post...
click remove..i did not even read i just click yes~ *sighed*
I do that on purpose...except for the trouble maker...



Offline olive29

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Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 23! 19/09/13
« Reply #286 on: September 19, 2013, 01:22:25 PM »
Wow..fast update..

Thanks for the update.. :bow:

Now, I really hope Kojiyuu to come back and help them..

Can't wait for the next chapter..

Update soon please..

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Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 23! 19/09/13
« Reply #287 on: September 19, 2013, 05:04:04 PM »
I was thinking...hmm, Acchan...actually there's no need to keep your promise to join those bad guys...since there were ruthless and used underhand methods to get Minami... :smhid

Can tell that there will be more troubles coming up before getting rid of that villain.  ;)
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Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 23! 19/09/13
« Reply #288 on: September 19, 2013, 05:22:17 PM »
Hmmm... I don't think Kendo will let Minami go easily...

Since his hatred toward her is big.. I guess  :on lol:

Sae's don't be shy.. LOL...

LOL...Smurf!

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Hmmm... okay i will enjoy my time at work~ hahaha  :D
you're right, it's hard to get a job nowadays~
maybe i should join nonsense world~
i don't want to go prison hope!!!
thanks cisda-san,qweakb-san, Ryuuka-san~ you guys spend some time talking nonsense with me~ :heart:
I ter'delete again my post...
click remove..i did not even read i just click yes~ *sighed*
I do that on purpose...except for the trouble maker...

LOL.. haha..

So that mean you rather go to mental hospital? hahaha  :glasses:

Seem like my life is not so busy as I had predicted on past few weeks.. haha 
Please let me be free all the time :prayers: But this wish will never come truth!  :gyaaah:
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Oshimen : Takamina and Mayu
Favorite pair : TakaAstu, Mayukirin, KumiYuria, Wmatsui, JirinaMayu etc.
(After reading the fanfic, my favorite pair just keep increasing :( )

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Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 23! 19/09/13
« Reply #289 on: September 19, 2013, 05:34:58 PM »
yeay update :3 thank you chiqinna-san

btw,good luck and i hope u will get a job soon  :D
ganbatte ne ~  :thumbsup

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Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 23! 19/09/13
« Reply #290 on: September 19, 2013, 10:41:37 PM »
Yeah... An update...

Very interesting... Atsuko joined Kenzo...

Really... Well what's going to happen next?

Will Minami remember her everything due to the hit on her head ?

Well going to be lots of action, drama and twist...

Would kojiyuu come back and help them out?

Will they keep their promise to release Minami?

Can't wait to see the next chapter

Thank you for the quick update

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Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 23! 19/09/13
« Reply #291 on: September 22, 2013, 11:36:21 AM »
crap...i missed comment 2 chapter already...LOL

nah it's okay...but god!!! acchan now is kenzo underling!!! she's realy betray rapappa just for takamina??????

what the other will do???

so jurina know that rena is mafia now....

RENA-SAMA!!!

YUKI-SAMA!!!

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Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 24 26/09/13
« Reply #292 on: September 26, 2013, 12:47:05 PM »

Chapter 24

Miichan, Mariko and the others quickly goes to Mariko’s place when they
were informed by Mariko’s underling that Takamina is found.

Kenzo’s underlings secretly leave her in front of Mariko’s mansion as they
don’t want Mariko’s underling to know they were there.

When they got there, Miichan quickly goes to Takamina as she was being laid on the couch in the living room.

“Takamina…” Miichan said worried and sad.

“She’s bleeding…her head is bleeding.”
Sasshi said as she saw a little of red color on the couch where Takamina’s head lied.

“Let’s bring her to the hospital.” Miichan said.
With that, they bring Takamina to the hospital.

They forgot about Acchan as they totally worried about Takamina’s condition.
Then Mariko was the one who realized about Acchan.

She told Sasshi to stay at the mansion because Acchan maybe went home.

Mariko is in the hospital along with Miichan, Black and the other underlings.

They were waiting outside the room.

“Black, you go to Miichan’s mansion take care of the others with Rena.” Mariko commands her.

Black went to Miichan’s house as she also worried about Mayu.

Mariko sigh then took a seat next to Miichan who had her head down.

“I wonder where Atsuko is now.” Mariko said serious as she looking at the white floor.

Then the door open revealing a doctor and a nurse as they walk out after checking on Takamina.

Miichan get up and ask the doctor about her condition.

“Doctor, how is Takamina?” Miichan ask worried.
“Looks like she got hit badly on the head but fortunately, her skull are fine.
We just need to wait until she is awake.” The doctor explains.

Miichan and Mariko sigh in relief but they still have a worried expression on their face.
The doctor then excuses himself.
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Miichan spend the night at the hospital while Mariko went to the cafeteria to buy some food for her since they haven’t eats yet.

Inside the room.
They both already finish their dinner.

Miichan was sitting next to the bed where Takamina is.
She’s holding her hand as she looks at Takamina’s sleeping face.

Meanwhile Mariko is standing next to the window looking outside.
The door open showing Sasshi with a trouble looks.

Sasshi then walks towards them.
Mariko something is wrong when Sasshi have that looks.

They both looks at Sasshi.

“M-Maeda…Maeda-san…said she is officially resign as Rapappa member.” Sasshi said serious.

Mariko and Miichan were shocked.

“Where is she now?” Mariko ask her mad.
“I don’t know…she went home just to take her things with her then
she just told me that and goes out with all her belongings without any more explanation.” Sasshi explain.

“This must be something to do with that Kato group.” Miichan said serious.

Mariko just keeps quiet as her mind is still dumbfounded.

She just lost her group’s ace…again.
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Meanwhile at Miichan’s house

The others are all gathering at the living room worried especially Kanon
who is still crying as soon as she hear the news about her older sister.
Lovetan is comforting her right now.

“I want to see Onee-chan~~ *sobs*” Cried Kanon buried her face into Lovetan’s embrace.

“Don’t worry Kanon, Takamina will be fine.” Jurina said patting her shoulder.

“If you want to see your sister, I can bring you to the hospital.” Black offered concern about her.

“Really?” Black nodded to Kanon.

Kanon quickly went to her room to change her clothe.
Mayu woke up and walks towards Yuki.

“I want to go with you.”Mayu said looking at her.

“No, just stay here with the others. I will be back.”
Yuki said giving a warm smile at her as she caressed Mayu’s left cheek.

Mayu smile back. “Be careful.”

After that Black send Kanon to see her sister.

Then she goes back to Miichan’s mansion.
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Wmatsui moment

“I’m sorry Jurina.” Rena said feeling guilty for not telling Jurina that she is a mafia all this time.
“It’s okay Rena-chan. You must have your own reason why you choose this path right?”

Jurina smile at her to convince Rena that she is fine.

“I promised, when you turn 20, I will tell you EVERYTHING.”
Rena said as she embraces her sister.

‘Everything including you and me.’ Rena thought in her mind.

Jurina just stay silent while in her sister’s arms.
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3 days later

It’s been three days Takamina haven’t waked up.

Kanon doesn’t want to leave her sister alone so she stays
with Miichan in the hospital taking care of Takamina.

Jurina, Lovetan and Mayu went to school as usual while Yuki and Rena are guarding them.

It’s been three days also they haven’t heard about Acchan’s whereabouts.





In the hospital

Is seems like Kanon is sleeping while sitting next to her sister.

Miichan is going outside to buy their lunch.

Suddenly, Kanon wake up due to some movement at her hand that was holding Takamina’s right hand.

“O-Onee-chan…” Kanon look up at her sister.

Then Miichan enter bringing some foods.

“What happen Kanon?” she asks when she saw Kanon’s expression.

“Onee-chan…I think her hand just show some movement just now.”
Kanon answered still shocked looking at Takamina’s hand.

“mmmhhhhm” A sound coming out of Takamina’s throat making both of them quickly look at her.

“Takamina!” Miichan call her happy that she finally awake.

Takamina looks like she’s having a difficulty to open her eyes at first as she had been sleeping for 3 days.

She slowly opens her eyes and blinks weakly for a few times as her sight is blurry.
“Onee-chan?” Kanon said as her sister looking at her with a blank face.

“Takamina, how do you feel now?” Miichan asks her still worried.

“What happen?” Takamina said as she tried to sit up and Miichan is helping her.

“Thank God you finally awake Onee-chan!” Kanon said happy as she hug her sister.

Takamina still confuse what happen.
She pats Kanon’s head. “What happen?”
She asks again looking at Miichan.

 Miichan’s expression turn from happy to serious one.

“Do you remember your name?” Miichan asks.

“Of course, my name is Takahashi Minami a.k.a Takamina.” Takamina said still confuse.

“But why am I here?” Takamina ask as she looks around the room.

“I…I will call the doctor.” Miichan said as she quickly runs out to find the doctor.

Kanon then part her hug as she also feels strange about her sister.

Then the doctor comes in to check on her.

After several check up, the doctor asks Takamina a few questions.

Miichan and Kanon are standing beside her curious.

“Well, Takahashi-san, tell me what is the last thing you remember you did?”

Takamina try to remember but her head suddenly feel hurt as she put her hands on her head.

“I...can’t…It hurts.” Takamina said as she is in pain.

“Okay, don’t force yourself Takahashi-san.” The doctor said.

“Do you remember what your job is?” The doctor asks this time.
“I was a s-“Before Takamina could answer, Miichan dashed towards her and covered her mouth.

“She’s a still looking for job, doctor, heehee I think Takamina is alright now right?” Miichan said smiling mischievously.
“Y-yeah, she’s fine it just I think maybe she regain her memory back.
Like you explain to me she had lost her memories 5 years ago.”

The doctor said then he has some emergency thing so he left.

“What are you doing?” Takamina glare at her as she put down Miichan’s hand from her mouth.

“Sorry…hehe…here, have some water” Miichan said giving her a glass of water.

“Onee-chan…” Kanon call her as she sits beside her.

“Yes, Kanon?” Takamina respond to her sweetly.

“Do you remember how old I am right now?” Kanon ask looking at her sister.

“Of course I remember! You’re 10 years old!” Takamina said confidently.

Miichan and Kanon look at her silently.

“It is confirmed now the great Takamina is back.” Miichan said looking at her.

“Eh??” Takamina was more confuse.

“Kanon is 10 years old…five years ago Takamina.” Miichan added.

“Wait…what?! So what happen to me?”

“Hmmm…do you remember when we fight those Kato’s group?” Miichan asks her serious.

Again Takamina’s head hurt whenever she tried to remember something.

“*sighed* its fine. Just take a rest for now. You’re still not completely fine.”
Miichan said as she makes her lay on the bed.

“That’s right Onee-chan, we’ll explain to you when you got discharge from the hospital okay?” Kanon said.

“I will tell the others about this.”
Miichan said as she took out her phone then told them that Takamina’s awake...
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At Mariko’s mansion

Mariko is sitting alone in her office room as she just found out
about the news that Acchan is joining Kato’s group.

The only thing she left for her is a note on her desk saying ‘I’m sorry’.

“I won’t forgive you if you do something bad to other people, Atsuko.”
Mariko said as the paper note crumpled in her hand.


OOO

Offline olive29

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Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 24 26/09/13
« Reply #293 on: September 26, 2013, 01:04:14 PM »
Takamina is back..

But she forget about everything that happen when she acted like a kid...

It means she forget about Acchan.. :bleed eyes:

And now Acchan joins Kato's group..

Takamina will hate her for sure..  :bleed eyes:

So much drama ahead..

Can't wait for the next chapter..

Update soon,please.. :bow:

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Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 24 26/09/13
« Reply #294 on: September 27, 2013, 02:04:52 PM »
Takamina memory is back!! YES! getting more excited!

That also mean that she had forgot Acchan  :gyaaah:

Hope that acchan will be alright when she heard the news!

MAYUKI moment  :wub:

(I am hardcore mayuki shipper.. hehe   :mon sweat: )

Become AKB fan after watching AKB0048.
Oshimen : Takamina and Mayu
Favorite pair : TakaAstu, Mayukirin, KumiYuria, Wmatsui, JirinaMayu etc.
(After reading the fanfic, my favorite pair just keep increasing :( )

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Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 24 26/09/13
« Reply #295 on: September 27, 2013, 03:41:13 PM »
Well Minami forgot everything while she was a childlike...

What would that affect Atsumina relationship?

Well if she forgot everything the past 5 years then she would not remember Atsuko

Then, there would be a fight between Kato group and Minami again

Would Minami be fighting against Atsuko?

Would Yuko and Haruna come back to help out?

Would Minami be able to remember and get together with Atsuko?

Can't wait to see what's going to happen next

Thank you for the update

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Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 24 26/09/13
« Reply #296 on: September 28, 2013, 02:59:36 AM »
The great takamina is back!!

Cant wait takamina vs atsuko



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Runners, until the race is run
Soldiers, you've got to soldier on
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Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 24 26/09/13
« Reply #297 on: September 28, 2013, 05:49:17 PM »
Takamina's regained her memories back!  :onioncheer: but that means she probably won't remember Acchan?  :badluck:
an exchange for an exchange? Perhaps no? maybe? it's ur decision~  lol  :glasses:
well can't wait to see the update~  :ding:

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Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 24 26/09/13
« Reply #298 on: October 02, 2013, 11:50:05 AM »
ChiqinNa is back!!  :glasses: I got THAT feeling back~  :heart:
Since THAT feeling last just for a while, I make a double update!!  :luvluv2:  :luvluv1:
Let's read it together~ hehe  :lol:







Chapter 25



It’s been a week since Takamina got discharged from the hospital.

When she arrived at Miichan’s home, she was greeted by unknown people.

Of course, she did not remember the others too except for Jurina since she is

the one who brings her home. It just Jurina is now same like Kanon, 15 years old.

They introduced Yuki, Mayu, and Rena to her just like she has met them for the first time.



Then Miichan telling her everything that happened 5 years ago.

What happen to her when they were fighting Kato’s group.

She tells Kato is the one who hit her head when she was beating Kenji and Kato also

the one who hit her head that she regain her memory back now.


Everything has been told except about one person, Acchan.

Miichan thought it’s better if she don’t know.



They were in the living room.

 “Anyway…where is Haruna…now that I remember she is not here since
I was out of the hospital…” Takamina asks her curious.

“Ummm…I don’t know…” Sighed Miichan leaning her back on the couch.

“What?!!” Takamina said.

“Really…she just left without any note or something.
But don’t worry…I think she’s with Yuko…they both disappear on the same time~”

“Why would she leave us?” Takamina is getting mad.

“Takamina~~ I think she felt guilty whenever she saw you.”
Miichan said then get up and walks to the kitchen.

“G-guilty? Why?”
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Acchan’s pov

It’s been weeks since I leave Rapappa.

That stupid Kato told me to live in his mansion…Tsk…why should I?!

I make my decision to live in apartment instead.

I don’t live in the same roof with people who almost kill my Minami.

Sigh…

I miss Minami…

I hope she is fine…that jerk almost break her leg if I did not stop him.

But now I’m in Kato’s group.

I hate that Kenzo…he tried to order me around since I’m under his command now.

Who cares?

Maeda Atsuko does whatever she wants.

He keeps ordering me to beat any of Rapappa’s members.

Now I know why he wants me to be in their group.

To betray my own people…to make Mariko mad.

After they achieve their goal, they will kick me out of their group.

Like I don’t know their plan.

And Sasshi and her people always appear on my way whenever I have business with other group.



~Flashback~

“Sasshi…*sigh* what are you doing here?” Acchan asks while putting her hands inside her pocket.

“What are YOU doing Maeda-san?” Sasshi said mad.

“Just….go away…” Acchan said as she doesn’t want to fight them.

Then the other started to surround her making her cannot walks from them.

Acchan turn around to look at Sasshi who smirk at her.

‘So…you guys really serious huh…’ thought Acchan.

“Don’t regret this! I won’t tolerate.” Acchan said smirk at them.

She had no choice but to fight them because she knows Kato’s people always watching over her.

~End of flashback~






At Kato’s mansion

Kato Kenji now can relax his mind as he is proud of his son’s plan on
making Rapappa’s ace to join them.

“What are you smiling at father?” Kenzo asks his father who sit on the living room.

“You’re doing great job son. *smirk*” smirked his father.

“Don’t worry father, now that we got Maeda, we’ll take down all
your enemies…especially Watanabe Hiroshi~” Smirk his son.

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At Miichan’s bakery

“Takamina!!! Stop laughing at me!” Miichan said mad as Takamina
has been laughing at her once she found out Miichan opened a bakery.

“I thought you are joking when you said your dream is to open a
bakery when we were young.” Takamina said looking around her bakery.

Miichan pouted.

“But it’s nice.” Takamina’s words making Miichan smiles.

“What are you doing walking around? Help us here!”
Miichan shout at her as they were busy preparing to open the bakery.

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At school gate

It looks like Yuki is waiting for Mayu as they finish school.

“Hey Yuki!!!” Lovetan greeted her.

“Yuki?” Black confuses.

“Mayu told me your name! Teehee~” Lovetan said wrapping her arm
around Mayu’s shoulder who avoid Yuki’s eyes.

Yuki just look at Mayu who is totally avoids her gaze.

“Ahh…I have to go to Miichan’s bakery now, see you later~?” Lovetan said grinning at them.

Mayu said walks away then Yuki followed her.

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Mayu and Yuki sitting on a bench at the park.

“Why you told them my real name?” Yuki asks.

“Because it’s a beautiful name to hear. Black doesn’t suit you.”
Yuki unconsciously smiles to herself and blushing.

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“What if I say I want to be a mafia like you?” Mayu suddenly asks her.

Yuki sigh without answering Mayu’s question.

“I’m serious.” Mayu said looking at Yuki.

“Then try to beat me to see if you are qualified enough to become a mafia.” Black said.

Mayu stand up and walks in front of her.

“Fine, let’s do it now.” Mayu said serious.

‘Wow…she’s really serious…’ thought Yuki dumbfounded.

Then Yuki also stand up.

“As you wish…but I warn you…I won’t hold back.” Yuki said serious.

“I won’t too.” Mayu back away to prepare herself.



Mayu is ready with her ‘awkward’ fighting position while

Black is just standing there waiting for Mayu to attack her.

Black is laughing inside her mind seeing Mayu’s weird fighting position.

“I’m going now.” Mayu said.

“Just do it.” Black says calmly.

Then Mayu dashed towards her and was about to punch her face

when Yuki quickly catch her arms and trapped them to Mayu’s back.

Mayu groaned in pain as her back is facing Yuki.

“I told you I won’t hold back.” Yuki said still holding Mayu’s arms.

“Yuki, it hurts!” Mayu said then Yuki let go of her arm.

“It’s really hurt!” Mayu said glaring at her while rubbing her arms.

“Let me see…” Yuki was about to hold her hand when Mayu walks away from her mad.

‘Did I do it too hard?’ Yuki asks herself then followed the mad Mayu.

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Meanwhile Jurina and Kanon are walking with Rena as they walk home.

“Ne…Rena-Chan…here I bought you melon pan!!!” Jurina said as she pulls out a melon pan from her bag.


Rena smile at her as she took it happily.

“Thank you Jurina, how did you know I love melon pan?” Rena asks her.

“Black told us.” Jurina said as she gave one to Kanon also.

 “Nee…Rena-Chan…how does it feel being a mafia?” Jurina asks her.

“Yeah…We’re curious.” Kanon added.

“Hmmm…*giggle* its fun~” Rena said as she giggling.

“F-fun?! I thought being a mafia is hard!” Kanon said.

“Hmmm…sometimes it’s hard, sometimes it’s….fun?” Rena said with a confuse face.

“Mmmmm…my melon pan is finished…Rena-Chan can I have some of yours?” Jurina asks her.

“No!” Rena said as she ignores Jurina.

“Eeeh?” Jurina and Kanon said while Rena is walking ahead of them.


“I guess not~” Jurina pout and sighed.

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After a few days, Takamina started to come home late at night.

This made Miichan and the others worried.

One night, Takamina went home late.

Silently, she tiptoed to her room as the light is off.

As she passed the living room, suddenly a voice startled her.

“What are you doing Takamina?” It’s Miichan’s voice.

“Huh? Miichan~ you caught me~ hehe” Takamina said as she walks towards Miichan who sit on the couch.

Looks like Miichan has been waiting for her.

“Sit here.” Miichan pat beside her then Takamina sit beside Miichan.

Takamina sigh.

“You have been out almost all night Takamina."

"I told you don’t go out but you sneak out silently.” Miichan said with a worried tone.

Takamina looks troubled.

“What’s wrong?” Miichan asks looking at her partner who looks like she’s being disturbed by something.

“I don’t know…I feel like…*sigh* I don’t know~” Takamina sigh leaning her back on the couch.

“I want to do this again…” Takamina mumbled.

“Takamina…You still not completely fine!” Miichan said worried.

“But…staying at home is boring…working in your bakery is boring!” Whined Takamina pout at Miichan.

Miichan is laughing at her seeing her pouting like the ‘kid’ Takamina.

“I want to beat the bad mafia! I want to find that Kenzo and kick his butt!”
Takamina said mad while her leg kicking the air.

“You’re alone Takamina…” Miichan narrowed her eyes.

“So what?! I can beat them one by one…silently~~ like a ninja! Woohhoo~” Takamina grinned.

‘Here she goes again~ ‘Miichan face palm.

“Whatever you want, just don’t let your guard down. And train yourself again…” Miichan said as she got up.

“I hope you won’t meet her…”






T.B.C~


































































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Chapter 26



Takamina’s pov

I have been sighing all day as I was walking around the town.

Something felt wrong.

I feel like some part of me is missing.

Did something happen during these 5 years?

Whenever I tried to remember something, my head hurt.

But now I don’t feel hurt since I keep myself from trying so hard to remember anything.

I was walking through the park…

It felt so familiar!

*sigh*

I turn to look at the playground.

Then I close my eyes.

*something flashed inside Takamina’s mind*

*a blur flashback of the innocent Takamina as she play happily at the playground.*

Ughhh!!! My head hurt again!

I sit on the bench nearer as both my hands holding my head.

I close my eyes again.

*then a flashed of someone’s back watching at her playing*

What is this?!

Ughhh!!! Stop!

Takamina breathe in and breathe out as she calm herself down.

Then I open my eyes and look around.

There are not many people at the park currently.

What is really happening here?

When Miichan told me everything happen all those years,

I can feel that there is something more that she did not tell me.

That something must be important…

I need to go to Mariko’s mansion now…


End of Takamina’s pov




At Mariko mansion

Mariko is in her office room when Takamina comes in.

Mariko looks up at her.

“Oh…what brings you here? Takamina-san~” Mariko said smiling as she
gesture Takamina to sit at the chair across her desk.

Takamina looks around the room.

Then a file on the desk attracted her eyes.

At the front file stated the name…Maeda Atsuko.

Takamina extend her hand and was about to take the file when

Mariko react fast taking the file and put it inside the drawer.

“So…?” Mariko looks at her.

“I have a proposal.” Takamina said looking at her.

“Proposal?” Mariko raises her eyebrows.

Takamina nodded.

“Lend me some of your weapon. I will help you bring down some of your rivals.” Takamina said serious.

Mariko looking at her for a while.

“Hmmm…I have lost my group ace now…” Mariko thinking.

Takamina’s lips curved into a smile.

“Well, I can lend you some, but you have to work together with my underlings.”
Mariko said knowing that Takamina is not completely fine if does this job by herself.

“Fine, but if I saw your people mess with innocent people-“

“They won’t.” Mariko said convincing her.

“Okay. I will start tonight.” Takamina said.

‘I wonder what will Acchan react if she saw you tonight…’ Thought Mariko.

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“Mayu…” Yuki said as Mayu turned her back at Yuki.

“Don’t talk to me!” Pout Mayu.

“Are you mad at me?” Yuki asks as she looks at Mayu’s back.

Mayu crossed her arms looking away.

Yuki don’t what to do to this little spoil girl so she just do what her heart says.

Yuki grab Mayu’s arm then make her turn around to face her.

Mayu averted her eyes from looking at Yuki’s.

“I’m sorry.” Yuko said looking at her.

Mayu look at her.

“I will forgive you…in one condition” Mayu smirked.

‘Condition? I have a bad feeling right now…’ thought Yuki.

“w-what?” Yuki asks her.

“Kiss me” Mayu said pointing at her lips.

‘I knew it!’ Yuki thought.

Yuki was still silent. It was always Mayu who does this kind of things, but her?!

Mayu knows that Yuki is still feeling embarrass since it always her who started it.

“*sigh* fine…on the cheek~” Mayu said.

“S-still…” Mumbled Yuki as her face started to glow bright red.

“I won’t forgive you then…” Mayu was about to walk away from Yuki when Yuki grab both her shoulders.

Mayu turn to look at her slightly surprised.

Yuki slowly lean towards Mayu’s face.

Their hearts start to beat faster as their face grew closer.

Yuki tilted her head to lean a kiss on Mayu’s right cheek then…

*CHUU*

Mayu…being playful also tilted her head to the right so that Yuki’s lips landed on hers instead of her cheek.

Yuki who was closing her eyes when she kiss Mayu feeling some movement on her lips.

She opened her eyes only to see she kissed Mayu’s lips!

Her eyes grew wider.

Suddenly Mayu pulling Yuki’s neck closer to her as they deepen the kiss.

Yuki‘s hand that was on Mayu’s shoulder unconsciously move to Mayu’s waist to drew her closer.

Oblivious to the surrounding, the couple still focused on kissing passionately.

While Watanabe Hiroshi's people are taking a picture of them kissing.
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That night, Takamina went ‘hunting’ mafia.

True to her words, Takamina is being accompanied by Mariko’s underlings.

Sasshi and some of her member is with Takamina as they walks along the street that mafia always used.

Then they heard a sound of people screaming as if they got beaten.

Takamina and the others quickly went towards the source of the voices.

Then they saw a group of mafia is beating other people.

“Sasshi, you go first with the others” Takamina said to her. Sasshi nodded.

There is something else attract her attention.

Someone is standing not far from there just watching at them beating those people.

“What is she doing?” mumbled Takamina then she walks towards her.

The mafia who is busy beating people suddenly got disturb when

Sasshi and her people suddenly interfere on their business as they start to fight the other mafia.

Takamina walks towards the girl whose crossing her arms as she watch the fight.

The girl [okay fine! it’s Acchan!  XD] realized someone is walking towards her

so she turn her head to look at the direction.

Acchan’s eyes grew wider when she saw that someone.

Completely different than usual as she looks at her appearance.

‘Minami…’ said Acchan in her mind still stunned.

Meanwhile Takamina also feeling déjà vu as she gazes at her.

‘Why does she look familiar to me?’



“Maeda-san! Help us!” Then one of the bad mafia calls for Acchan’s help.

Acchan was still stunned at the figure in front of her.

“So you’re one of them!” Takamina said mad as she is putting her gloves on.

‘No…Minami…not now….’

Acchan step back as she finally back to her sense.

Takamina dashed towards her and about throw a punch on her face but Acchan dodge her well.

Takamina act quick as she fast kick Acchan on her stomach making Acchan step back several steps.

Takamina dashed towards her again.

Acchan don’t want to let her guard down react fast as she dodge every of her attacks.

She doesn’t want to attack or doing anything to her.

‘What happen to you Minami…?’
Acchan thought as she avoids her punch.

Then Takamina react faster jump onto her making her fall and give her several punch on her face.

“You know…you have a beautiful face…but beating innocent people made you look ugly!”

Takamina said sitting on her stomach as she punch on her face.


Acchan smile when she heard the ‘beautiful’ part even though she got hit by her.

Takamina stop punching her when she saw her smiling.

‘Even your smile is beautiful…’ thought Takamina mesmerized by her smile.


Acchan looks at Takamina who looks like she’s being hypnotized.

Then Acchan took this advantage to turn her around so that now she is on top of Takamina.

Takamina then back to her sense.

She tried to get away but Acchan’s grip hard on her hands on the ground.

Then Acchan’s head move forwards close to Takamina’s.

Takamina started to feel heat on her face.

Acchan stopped then look into her eyes.



“You know…you are beautiful too…and your heart....makes you more beautiful~”

Acchan said smiling playfully as she gives a quick peck on her lips.

She let go of her then get up.

Acchan walks away but before that she turn around...

“Hope we see again~” Acchan wink at Takamina whose still on the ground

then she left the place without even bothering to help her group member.



Takamina was left dumbfounded.




T.B.C~






Okay, that's all~ thanks for reading! See you next time when I got THAT feeling back!  XD XD
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Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 25 & 26 02/10/13
« Reply #299 on: October 02, 2013, 11:59:59 AM »
OMG :w00t:atsumina kiss!!! :wub: :wub: :wub: yaayy hope u update soon

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