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Re: Blank face ( chapter 12) season one ending
« Reply #120 on: June 07, 2013, 04:25:37 PM »
SOME PEOPLE MAY THINK THAT YUKI DOESN'T DESERVED MAYU'S LOVE,WELL ITS TRUE,BUT IN ONE CONDITION
YUKI DON'T DESERVED MAYU IF~ SHE GET ALL MAYUYU LOVE AND ATTENTION EASILY
AFTER ALL,MAYU SUFFERS A LOT BECAUSE OF HER,SO ITS MORE SQUARE IF SHE SUFFERS A LOT TOO,TO GET MAYUYU
MAYBE AFTER THAT ACCIDENT MAYUYU CHANGE...MAYBE BECAME MORE COLD OR WHATEVER YEAH,ABOUT THE AMNESIA THING UH,IF THAT POSSIBLE THEN...IT GOOD IF SHE JUST FORGET ABOUT YUKI AND THE OTHER,EXCEPT JURINA YEAH...TAHT SO DRAMATIC

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Re: Blank face ( chapter 12) season one ending
« Reply #121 on: June 07, 2013, 04:34:54 PM »
nooooooooo mayuuuu what happened

it is so sad she saw the video of yuki with that a**hole

I hope it will be better

I cant wait for the season 2 ^^
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Re: Blank face ( chapter 12) season one ending
« Reply #122 on: June 08, 2013, 02:41:42 AM »
Mayuyu!!!! NO!!!!!! Why does she alway encounter those kind of situation?! Mayuyu!!!

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Re: Blank face ( chapter 12) season one ending
« Reply #123 on: June 08, 2013, 06:36:01 AM »
I can't wait for season 2!!!


I just finished reading everything


-gibson-mayulover-san GOOD JOB!!  :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

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Re: Blank face ( chapter 12) season one ending
« Reply #124 on: June 08, 2013, 04:35:33 PM »
Prologue


I’m fool, I’m an idiot, I’m stupid, I’m a sinner, and a liar. I lived all my life in this beautiful lies, but once I found out all the truth, it crush my world. And I can’t do anything about it. I hurt all of my friends, I hurt my lover, and I hurt you, Mayuyu.. But I guess, I just have to face it, and accept it, accept this hurtful truth.



(gomen minna i'm still shock about the senbatsu result ehh....)
and thank's for all the comment's

and congratulations Sasshi for being the new center in AKB48 I hope for the best on you

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Re: Blank face ( Yuki's POV ) season two Prologue
« Reply #125 on: June 08, 2013, 04:38:14 PM »
great prologue  ;)
I'm kinda shocked too about the results :shocked
but I'm happy because my oshimen is the 6th :D

Mayuki&WMatsui
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Re: Blank face ( Yuki's POV ) season two Prologue
« Reply #126 on: June 08, 2013, 05:04:15 PM »
OMG!! Season 2 is coming!!!  :w00t:

Is this gonna be Yuki's POV or still Mayu's ?  :huhuh

Well, any one of them will do  ;)  :lol: :twothumbs
Can't wait for Chapter 1 !!  :bow:  :bow:


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Re: Blank face ( Yuki's POV ) season two Prologue
« Reply #127 on: June 08, 2013, 05:34:42 PM »
wohoow seanson 2... please please please please update soon  :w00t:
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Re: Blank face ( Yuki's POV ) season two Prologue
« Reply #128 on: June 08, 2013, 05:52:36 PM »
Oh.. Yuki at last she knew the white lies that everyone had been hiding from her these whole time...

What's going to happen to Mayu and Yuki?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

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Re: Blank face ( Yuki's POV ) season two Prologue
« Reply #129 on: June 08, 2013, 05:57:40 PM »
Yeah im shock too,but im happy,even though sasshi is not my òshimen,but but its fantastic when sasshi became center,its kind something really new could happen and in a good way!


Ok! Wow season 2 coming soon!

Ah yeah its hurtful yuki

But you have to face it,ganbaree fighthing!! Be strong for mayuyu yeah
RENA-SAMA!!!

YUKI-SAMA!!!

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Re: Blank face ( Yuki's POV ) season two Prologue
« Reply #130 on: June 08, 2013, 10:09:23 PM »
Yeah I'm still upset over Mayu's 3rd rank.
But I hope more MaYuki would help me get over that.
Please don't take too long to update. I know this sounds selfish but your fic would really cheer me up (even though it's not all lovey-dovey) *sighs*


Now I wonder what will happen. It'd be nice to hear from Yuki's POV too.
« Last Edit: June 08, 2013, 10:47:56 PM by jell_o_jello »

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Re: Blank face ( Yuki's POV ) season two Prologue
« Reply #131 on: June 09, 2013, 04:38:05 AM »
SASSHI~


YAY PROLOGUE SEASON II
YUKI SEEM REALLY SHOCK,HER PERFECT WORLD UPSIDE DOWN WHEN SHE KNOW THE TRUTH
WHO TOLD HER? ACCHAN? OR YUKO?
TAKE YOUR TIME TO UPDATE IT,YEAH ITS SHOCKING NEWS,I DONT AGAINST SASSHI WINNING,BUT ITS NEW AND FRESH
AKB ALWAYS MAKE ME SURPRISE,AWESOME.IF MAYU OR YUKO WIN,I THINK THE IMPACT ITS NOT THIS BIG.
SO ITS AWESOME,.

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Re: Blank face ( Yuki's POV ) season two Prologue
« Reply #132 on: June 09, 2013, 07:46:12 AM »
yes it's okay just take ur time :thumbsup
and not just u i guess everybody was shocked with the result
but at least my love is finally getting a single digit, yosshaaa!

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Re: Blank face ( Yuki's POV ) season two Prologue
« Reply #133 on: June 09, 2013, 12:06:49 PM »
I'm shocked that Mayu in the 3rd but Yuki in 4th :on cloudeye:
So I'm hope there'll be some Mayuki's moments :prayers:
Sasshi in 1st rank :stoned: She sure has a lot of fans :shock:
She'll be the center of AKB, a new and good way for her :ding:
Season 2 :on gay: Update soon, please :kneelbow:
I wonder what'll happen to Yuki when she knows the truth :on drink:
And also about Mayu after the accident :on cloudeye:
Please update as soon as possible :gyaaah:
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Re: Blank face ( Yuki's POV ) season two Prologue
« Reply #134 on: June 10, 2013, 02:45:13 AM »
Chapter 1


They said highschool is the best time of your life, well for me, it isn’t. Highschool is the time that I lost my boyfriend and my bestfriend. I saw them cheating on me, behind my back, and it hurt me, it feels like my world is ending right in front of me. But I was wrong, it’s just the beginning, I acted like highschool is the most important time of my life, but in reality, It just the start. I ended my highschool life with a broken heart, that time I felt lost, and lonely. But my friends help me, without them I don’t know where I am today.

When I entered college, It feels like something new. With Rena by my side because we took the same course, we face our college life with a determination for a bright future. But still every night I have a nightmare, a man and a woman holding hands and kissing infront of me, I slap the women but she just smirk at me, and said “You’re an idiot, I never cared for you, I just used you, you’re nothing to me” I cried every single night, just because of that nightmare. But my nightmare stopped when I meet Miyazawa Sae. She’s a varsity player from a different school, I meet her at the cinema, she’s the one that approach me, but of course I ignore her.  But she still keep trying, until I finally gave up, she later became my girlfriend. I know, A girl, but why? I want to try something new, and beside Sae does have a charm and kinda cute.

Time flies so fast, now I’m on the age of 23. I’m happy with my life. I have many friends like Acchan, Takamina, Rena and etc. I have a great career, and I have a great lover. I moved in Tokyo when I graduated from college, well nothing really change much. Except that I’m living in a different place now, I found this nice and quite apartment with Rena and Sae’s help. After that, my new life begin.

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“Ahhhh!!!”

I scream when I saw the time on my clock, and to go to the bathroom quickly.

“Crap I’m going to be late !”

I said to myself, while taking a quick bath and rushing to wear my clothes. After that I go to my car and drive away fast to my work places.

“Ohayo!! Yuki-san”

Akicha greeted me, and I look at her and smile

“Oh Aki, I’m not late right?”

I asked her, then she just smiled at me

“No”

she said, I sign in relieve when she said that

“Um, Yuki-san, Sae said she’s gonna talk to you later”

Aki said, then back to her office

Around 10:30 Sae called me, and ask me to have a date with her tomorrow, since we have our day off that day. I just say yes to her, she asked me to wait to this fancy restaurant near her office, she said the food was great and also the ambience is good. I just chuckled when I heard her.

“Okay, I’ll meet you there around 1:00 pm”

I said to her, then she end our call.

After my work finished, I went home and prepare myself for our date. I sleep early because I’m excited for our date tomorrow.

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“Yuki do you love me?”

I just stare at the girl that said that to me, but before I could say anything. I heard a music, right beside me. Then I wake up from my dreams, After that I go to the bathroom and look myself in the mirror.

“Why you suddenly appeared in my dreams?”

I asked myself, and washed my face, and take a bath. After that I prepare myself for my date. Around 11:30 am I drive to the restaurant that Sae told me to meet her up. When I entered the restaurant the waiter approached me

“Welcome maa’m, table for how many?”

he asked me, I just smile at him

“Table for two, please”

I said, then the waiter offered me a, nice seat in middle, but I suddenly saw Yuko and Haruna sitting in the other table, so I came near them.

“Nee Yuko, Nyan Nyan whose this cutie?”

I asked them when I saw that they are not alone

“Yuki?”

Yuko said while giving me an awkward look

“Yes?” I replied to her while show them a smile

“You can’t be serious? You know her”

Yuko said, then look at me seriously, I look closer to the girl beside Haruna and when I saw her face, my eyes widen

“Long time no see Yuki”

she said, then show her smile

“You”

I said, I’m shock to see her, then I remember all her doings, I remember her kiss, her smirk and stare that she gave me back then in highschool. I just want to run as far as away from her. While I was running I bump into someone

“ahh Yuki you’re already here”

she said to, then I look it up to see who did I bump, it’s Sae

“Sae let go of me!!”

I scream at her then release my hand from her grip and run, I run as fast as I can.

“YUKI!!!”

somebody scream my name, when I look it up, I saw a car heading towards me. But I felt my body suddenly stopped working, and I can’t moved. But somebody pushed me to the side and save me

“MAYU!!!”

I heard Yuko shout, then I look at the road and saw Mayu’s body lying there cover with blood. I just stared at her with shock and I can’t process anything. I felt time just stop and I can’t hear anything, it feels like the time is moving much slower. I finally snap out when Sae touched me

“Yuki!! Are you alright?”

She asked me with a worried voice and a teary eyes. I just nodded to her, then I saw An ambulance, taking Mayu’s body. Yuko and Haruna also entered the ambulance, while me and Sae just drive to the hospital with Sae’s motorcycle. After that, the doctors rushed in and take Mayu to the Emergency Room. While were waiting Yuko called all of our friends, and Mayu’s family to tell them what happened. After 15 minutes, Acchan, Takamina and Kumi come in, and asked so many question. They just stopped their assault on Yuko’s and Haruna when they saw me, they didn’t asked for more details they just waited quietly. Then suddenly our 34 minutes of quietness, broke when Jurina entered the hallways.

“You!!!”

she said, while crying and glaring at me. I just stared at her, and I could see all the anger in her eyes. It feels like she want kill me.

“PLANKK!!!”

I fall down when she slapped me, and I just stared at her, when I saw her eyes. For the first time, I felt scared like a prey being hunted by a predator..




……………………….TBC…


oh yeah minna  i'm gonna change my lead
it's gonna be Yuki's POV here

and thank you for all the comments
« Last Edit: June 11, 2013, 06:26:53 AM by -gibson-mayulover »

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Re: Blank face ( Yuki's POV ) season 2 Chapter 1
« Reply #135 on: June 10, 2013, 02:57:48 AM »
SOMEHOW I REALLY LOVE IT WHEN JURINA SLAPPED YUKI


AWESOME UPDATE GIBSON SAN!! THANK


AND YUKI POV YEAH ITS GONNE BEEN HURTFUL PAINFUL POV IM GONNA READ MORE THAN MAYU POV HEHE

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Re: Blank face ( Yuki's POV ) season 2 Chapter 1
« Reply #136 on: June 10, 2013, 02:58:50 AM »
short...  but thanks anyway!!!

Hope Yuki will know the reason why Mayu did that!!

Jurina slapped Yuki!!?!?!

I'm expecting some dramas...or maybe not

But it's up to you..hope you update!! I love your fics  :inlove:

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Re: Blank face ( Yuki's POV ) season 2 Chapter 1
« Reply #137 on: June 10, 2013, 03:07:20 AM »
Ouch! That hurt for sure :O

Yuki's pov neh this is going to be interesting.. :fap Lot of painful thoughts will be reveal..

Now, what will happen to Mayu? Mayu!  :bleed eyes: I'm so excited for next update.. Will Mayu survive the accident? What will Yuki feels about why Mayu saved her? Will Yuki finally realize what happened years ago? Yey! :fap Drama~!

Thank you :bow :thumbsup :twothumbs

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Re: Blank face ( Yuki's POV ) season 2 Chapter 1
« Reply #138 on: June 10, 2013, 03:10:18 AM »
SOMEHOW I REALLY LOVE IT WHEN JURINA SLAPPED YUKI


AWESOME UPDATE GIBSON SAN!! THANK


AND YUKI POV YEAH ITS GONNE BEEN HURTFUL PAINFUL POV IM GONNA READ MORE THAN MAYU POV HEHE
Agree somehow im happy that yuki got slapped... XD

I cant wait what is the reaction of yuki if she find out the truth!
update soon :on gay:

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Re: Blank face ( Yuki's POV ) season 2 Chapter 1
« Reply #139 on: June 10, 2013, 03:28:21 AM »
Nice update!

Nice... but sad!!!  :cry:

Mayu got hit by a car, Sae appeared and currently dating Yuki

Jurina slapped Yuki.... WHAT'S GONNA HAPPEN NEXT???  :?

Can't wait for the next update  :twothumbs

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