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well......i know that i'm not done with the tale, but i'm going to finish it in two more chapters. I want to post this a long time ago but i was still writting the tale, so .....

i hope you guys like the prologue, and please comment on what you guys think the story is going to be.

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You, Me, and My Son
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Prologue
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“Congratulations Mr. and Mrs. Takahashi, you are going to be parents” the doctor shake hands with the two soon to be parents.

Kai and Atsuko were so happy to know the news. After of marriage, they finally were going to be parents. “I’m going to be a father” Kai said happily.

“I’m going to be a mother” Atsuko said also happily.

“I’m so happy, I love you” Kai kiss his wife. “I love you too”

After a few a months, the couple was searching for names for their baby.

“If it is a girl, let’s name her Atsuko” Kai’s head was resting in Atsuko’s lap.

“No, if it is a boy lets name him Mizuki “Atsuko pat Kai’s head.

On the 7th month of the pregnancy, they went to the hospital. That day would change their life.

“Doctor, what’s wrong” Kai asked worried.

“I’m afraid to tell you, but your wife will have to be careful for the last 2 month”

“Why”

“There is a high possibility that either she might die or she might lose the baby”

After that day, the married couple went to other doctors to see if there was a chance to safe both. The day had finally come; it was time for the truth. In an emergency room you can hear a baby cry.

“Atsuko. You did it” Kai was besides his wife.

“Please take care of him” Atsuko said weakly.

“My love, don’t talk like that, everything is going to be okay” Kai kiss Atsuko’s forehead. The future that was uncertain awaits him, but he was scared of losing the
person that he had love since the day he saw her.

“Please promise me”

Kai was crying; he couldn’t stand seeing his wife like this. He felt impotent to do something, if he could only scarify himself to let Atsuko and his son live, he would do it.
With her last strength Atsuko grab Kai’s hand and said, “ no matter what happens, everything is going to be alright, so promise me that you will take care of him” Atsuko weakly smiled.

“I promise” he kissed the hand of his wife.

“Here is your baby” a nurse held the baby in a blanket. Kai reach for his child.

“It’s a healthy boy” the nurse added.

“Look it’s our son” Kai showed Atsuko her son; she was smiling.

“He is beautiful, just like you” Kai was crying; holding Atsuko’s hand, so she can feel her son’s cheeks.

“Please….take care of…him” Atsuko slowly closed her eyes.

“Atsuko”

It hurts doesn’t it? It hurts me that you are not with me. I miss you and I guess you do too. Even if you have missed many things, I stupidly think that you are with me every moment. Our son, Mizuki, he has only seen picture of you and he asks me why aren’t you here, so I tell him that you are in heaven, protecting him. I miss you so much, that sometimes I cried at night. As the sky cries, I cry too. Remembering you is painful. With the joy I have left, I will smile. Time has passed and I haven’t healed; I still love you.


And well thank you for reading. Can any one guess who is the paring???
Well now i have to go back to my life. I will update this in like 3 week from now, so yeah.....

.......until the day comes.....
« Last Edit: October 24, 2017, 02:41:11 PM by sophcaro »

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Re: You, Me, and My Son (guess the paring)
« Reply #1 on: March 04, 2013, 02:26:47 AM »
So Acchan passes on leaving Kai alone with the baby.

Supposedly it'll continue from there :nervous
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Re: You, Me, and My Son (guess the paring)
« Reply #2 on: March 04, 2013, 02:45:53 AM »
yes it will continue from there.

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Re: You, Me, and My Son (guess the paring)
« Reply #3 on: March 04, 2013, 04:03:13 AM »
Nooooooo my atsumina, I hope that ray or someone die ..but atsuko -_____- why.. I guess its gonna be takaharu or takayuu and i dont wanna it -_- gomen ne.. yeah I love my otp so much...

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Re: You, Me, and My Son (guess the paring)
« Reply #4 on: March 04, 2013, 05:36:24 AM »
wao..Atsuko passed away
so it will be Takaharu ,Takayuu, or Takatomo :w00t: :drool:
I cant guess because I love all Takamina's pairing
please update soon :welcome
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Re: You, Me, and My Son (guess the paring)
« Reply #5 on: March 04, 2013, 11:25:49 AM »
OTL While I was reading the sad part, a sad song suddenly played lol. Quite a coincidence~

Update soon~
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Re: You, Me, and My Son (guess the paring)
« Reply #6 on: March 04, 2013, 11:49:44 AM »
Ah... I feel sad for Atsuko....

what's going to happen with Kai.... he is still in love with Atsuko even after all this time...

Who is going to be with Kai after Atsuko....?

Well if there is no possibility for Atsuko to magically revive back... then I would say Haruna is going to be the best bet.

Although I would not mind if Tomomi is also another candidate...

Anyhow... it's your choice....

Can't wait to see what's going to happen

Thank you for this new fic.

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Re: You, Me, and My Son (guess the paring)
« Reply #7 on: March 04, 2013, 04:06:53 PM »
You have killed Atsuko character here. You need to revived Atsuko into Acchan character ~ I demand you to do so ~ i mean request  :kekeke: :hehehe:

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Re: You, Me, and My Son (guess the paring)
« Reply #8 on: March 05, 2013, 12:10:28 AM »
why are people requesting Atsuko to awake  from the death, and recarnate into Acchan. I thought it was the same person. Althought its a good idea.
Yeah some one was close who the paring is going to be but.....no body got it.
Nooooooo my atsumina, I hope that ray or someone die ..but atsuko -_____- why.. I guess its gonna be takaharu or takayuu and i dont wanna it -_- gomen ne.. yeah I love my otp so much...

keep your best!..

don't worry there will be a lot of flashbacks in the story for you to be satisfied with KaixAtsuko stuff.
i want to update tody, but i'm still writting chapter 2 and i usually start written in pencil then in the computer,and besides somethimes i don't have the inspiration to continue. but with story i will.
thank you for the people that read this.



........until the day comes.....

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Re: You, Me, and My Son (answer) not update
« Reply #9 on: March 06, 2013, 01:22:42 PM »
i think ray will come to kai life. it's better for me. i have watch mendol million times, i still think kaixray couple the sweetest couple ever.  :lol:

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Re: You, Me, and My Son (answer) not update
« Reply #10 on: March 12, 2013, 01:02:00 AM »
well hello there. apparently I have a writers block and I just had the idea of updating this story.

I hope you guys like it.

Chapter 1


“Have a good day, and be careful” Kai waved at his son who was in the entrance of the school. “Yes daddy” his son wave at him. It’s been six years since Atsuko died. Kai was strong though out those years, he kept living because of his son. His friends always were there. The years were hard for him especially when Mizuki was only a baby. Luckily Atsuko’s mother and his mother were there for him.

Today was his first day in Sae’s modeling company. He wasn’t exited but he was happy that he could win more money.

“Kai you will make all the contracts with the models” Sae told Kai. They were in Sae’s office. Sae is the owner of the company and he is also happily married to one of
the most famous models in Japan, Kashiwagi Yuki.

“Yes, and thank you for giving me this job” Kai vowed.

“Anything for a friend” Sae smiled and shakes hands with Kai.

“And about Mizuki, you can tell me if you need to go pick him up from school” Sae smile

“Ok thank you”

Later that day

“Mizuki how was school” Kai hugged his son. He pushed him gently to see his son’s face.

“Mizuki, what’s wrong…why are you crying” Kai wiped his son’s tears with his thumb.

“Some kid was making found of me because I don’t have a mom” Mizuki cried.

“Mizuki, you know even if she is not here, she will be in your heart” Kai pointed to Mizuki’s heart. Mizuki try to stop crying, but those words were the same as all this
years.

“I know but…” Mizuki couldn’t finish his words because his dad hugged him.

“Hey that’s the kid who doesn’t have a mom” one of the kids shouted and pointed to Mizuki. Mizuki cried harder, he push his dad and started running.

“Mizuki” Kai yell

“Ma’am can you please tell your son no to be so rude” Kai pointed to the kid that has just said those horrible words. After he said that he started running to find his
son.

“Mizuki”

At some other point, there was a woman who was walking with a lollipop I her mouth. Every guy who was crossing her path looked at her. The tall woman walked without a care in the world…well that what it seemed.
Then she stopped when she saw a kid, about six years old, who was crying in the bench. She moved slowly to the kid.

“Are you okay?” the woman asked.

“No” the boy answer.

“Where is your mom, kid?” the woman asked as she squad to see the boy’s face better.

“My mom is not here anymore” the boy started to cry more. The woman thought about what the bot had said, and then it hit her.

“I’m sorry. Hey do you want a lollipop that always cheers me up” the woman took out a lollipop form her bag.

“My dad says I should not accept candy from strangers” the boy wiped his tears.

“Well how about this, I tell you my name, so I’ll not be stranger” the woman suggested.

“Okay” the boy look at the woman

“My name is Ray and yours?” Ray asked

“My name is Mizuki Takahashi” Mizuki smile. He thought Ray was a good person. Ray gave him the lollipop and he accepted is happily.

“Now Mizuki where is your dad? Ray asked him. She turned to see around if there was someone looking for Mizuki.

“I don’t know, I run away from him” the bot look to his side.

“That young and running away” Ray move her head side-to-side signifying ‘I can’t believe this’.

“Mizuki” a man yell. Ray got up and looked at the blond short guy.

“Is that your father” Ray asked and Mizuki nodded.

“Mizuki, I have been looking for you” the man went running to his son and gave him went running to his son and gave him a hug.

“Daddy I’m okay, my friend cheer me up” Mizuki pointed to Ray.

“Thank you very much for keeping him company” the man vowed

“It was nothing Mr. ….” Ray wanted to say his name, but she didn’t knew his name.

“My name is Takahashi Kai” Ray smile.

“let me take you somewhere if I may, just as a thank you for looking after my son while I was searching for him” Kai smile.

“Can you please” Mizuki plead

“Okay, but only because of you”

After some time, they got to put a place where they had an indoor playground.

“I haven’t introduced myself, but you probably already know who I am” Ray was drinking a strawberry smoothie.

“Do I know you, you don’t seem familiar” Kai answer as he still kept on watching Mizuki.

“Seriously you don’t who I am?” Ray answered a little shock. She thought all Japan knew her.

“No I really don’t know. What’s your name” Kai turn to look at Ray.

“I’m the top selling diva, Ray” Ray said proudly.

Crickets that’s all you can hear.

“Seriously, I still don’t know who you are” Kai shrugged.

“but I’m everywhere” and like magic, Kai turn around and saw a poster of Ray in the window, a person passing by had a CD of Ray in his hands, then a truck came by
promoting Ray’s new tour.

“I don’t think I have heard of you” Kai shuck his head side to side. This is why Kai never knew of her: Kai was a hard-working man that paid no attention to anything else except his son and his work.

“Okay, well now I know that not all Japan knows me”

“You must be proud” Kai chuckled

“Mr. Takahash-“Ray interrupted by Kai.

“Just call me Kai”

“Okay. Kai if it isn’t too much to ask, but did your wife…..is she in a better place now?” Ray didn’t want to say the word “death”.

“She is, she died after she gave birth to my son” Kai sounded sad.

“I’m very sorry” Ray gave a slight smile.

“It’s okay” Kai  turned to see his son.

Ray saw that shine on Kai’s eyes, and she thought he was a dedicated father.

“Well, would you look at the time? I’m sorry, but I have to leave” Ray look at her cell phone.

“Really, I hope I didn’t make you late for what you are going to do”

“No its okay, but my manager is going to be mad at me, but I’ll put him in his place” Mizuki came and saw that Ray got up.

“Ray, where are you going” Mizuki walked towards Ray. Ray smiled and got to Mizuki’s level.

“I got to go, I have work to do” Ray smiled

“Hey do you want another lollipop?” Ray asked. Mizuki nodded. She got out a grape flavor lollipop and gave it to Mizuki.

“Mizuki, what do you say” Kai said as he got closer to him.

“Thank you ma’am” Mizuki vowed.

“It’s nothing. If you want to I can come by and visit you and give you another lollipop” Ray smile and look at Kai.

“If its okay with your father?” Ray added. She didn’t knew why she said that, but it felt right.

“Yes of course, but aren’t you busy being Japan’s number one diva” he sarcastically asked

“Yeah, but I have time for my friends” Ray patted Mizuki’s head.

“I hope we can see each other too friend” Mizuki smiled. Ray thought his expression was cute.

“Let’s not hope, let’s make it true” Ray got up and gave him a piece of paper, with her information on it.





well if you are asking yourself, where is Ray's bitchy self? well next chapter that side will appeared.

thank you.


.....until the day comes...

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Re: You, Me, and My Son Chapter 1
« Reply #11 on: March 12, 2013, 01:28:41 AM »
I like how the story is played out although...

I wished I didn't know about that last part :nervous
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Re: You, Me, and My Son Chapter 1
« Reply #12 on: March 12, 2013, 01:30:08 AM »
idk. i'm starting to love Ray until you said that you'll reveal her bitchy side. hahahaha

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Re: You, Me, and My Son Chapter 1
« Reply #13 on: March 12, 2013, 04:12:45 AM »
Wah... Ray is such a nice girl.. here

She even give her personal detail to Mizuki...

Although she was arrogant as always.. to Kai and the world

and the selfish self is coming up soon... can't wait to see

Poor Mizuki... being bully for not having a mum... Yeah there are those kind of kids around...

Is Kai going to work with Ray....?

Is Kai going to slap Ray... and then Ray suddenly liking Kai afterward?

so it is KaixRay coupling... it's a good choice too...

This fic is not restricted to AKB only but Mendol too... Great choice

Well.. can't wait to see the next chapter

Thank you for the lovely update

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Re: You, Me, and My Son Chapter 1
« Reply #14 on: March 12, 2013, 10:05:36 AM »
first, I wonder why ray can be nice like that :?
and in the end I understand :twisted:
I just hoped it was Takaharu but KaixRay is good too :thumbsup
It will be interesting :w00t:
please update soon :bow:
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Re: You, Me, and My Son Chapter 1
« Reply #15 on: March 13, 2013, 02:39:29 AM »
 :lol: i just got myself point there. right author? its ok if Ray become bitchy towards bad person. she so nice to Mizuki.  :deco:

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Re: You, Me, and My Son Chapter 1
« Reply #16 on: March 14, 2013, 10:33:35 AM »
Hi....

Please update soon!!!

I really like the pairing and the story!!!!

I love KaiRay...

Thank You
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Re: You, Me, and My Son Chapter 1
« Reply #17 on: March 14, 2013, 02:30:07 PM »
Woah! So it's KaixRay I guess? XD
It's been awhile since I last readed a KaixRay fanfiction!!!
I'm really looking forward to what is going to come next
Please update soon. :)

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Wow another kaixray.. yeah.. I want an update onegaishimassu. .. :cow: :bow:

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Interesting, please continue.  :thumbsup

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