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Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU >> UPDATED: CHAPTER 13 PART 2~ 13/05/13 NEW!! <<
« Reply #180 on: May 21, 2013, 05:25:47 AM »
Aww,,, how sad for Kai  :(
This story really is full of drama  :bleed eyes:  :)
but it's okay, I really like your fic  :heart:  :cow: its kinda new to me and i luv it!!  XD  :inlove: :inlove: :inlove:
Hope you update soon! :thumbsup  :bow:

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Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU >> UPDATED: CHAPTER 14 - 13/05/30 NEW UPDATE!! <<
« Reply #181 on: May 30, 2013, 06:52:23 PM »
 Hello guys!! Been so long. I’ve been in busy days but now I’m back of course with the NEW UPDATE!!!
Thanks for the comments you left here, I appreciate all your response.
So here’s the new update I made. Sorry if it’s too short. Enjoy!



CHAPTER 14




One day at Rena’s café.

“Look, this boy the power forward player, he has strong body especially his arms, he can shoot in far distance too” a guy said, telling his friends while they sits around the round table in a café. His friends pay attention on him seriously. It seems like they’re planning for something important.

“The, in the small forward there is this boy. He has a fast move, heard that he’s the main shooter“ he continued. “And then the center, he has a good trick in playing basketball, that’s why he’s in center position. He’s the tallest in the team.”

“Another players in the backcourt is not really important, I think we can hendle them” the boy said again while a girl walking approaching them.

“Ano.. excuse me, can I take the order now?” the girl said.
All of them look at her, being amazed of her pretty face, but unfortunately the girl looks like not so friendly.
“Sure, take it miss..” one of them gives the order paper and winks at her.

The girl takes the paper. “Okay, wait for a minute while we prepare the food” she tries to keep polite. Then she turns around, she hears their conversation coincidentally.

“In the game today, our target is the small forward. He’s gonna be the key to turn them down.. His name is Oshima Yuu. But be careful to the center, Matsui Jurina, and the power forward, Takahashi Kai too. Okay?” the boy said.

Rena takes the paper and go to the kitchen to tell her chefs to prepare the foods they ordered. She peeks through the windows to see the boys that sit in the round table in the café. One of them wear a basketball shirt. Rena can see the logo of the shirt. She quickly takes her cellphone and dials a number.

“Good afternoon, my lady!” Jurina answer the phone.

“Umm.. Juri-kun, who is your opponent team for the game today?”

“Uh? Why do you ask about it?”

“Umm, I’m just asking”

“I can’t remember what’s the team name exactly, hehe..” Jurina said innocently. “But as I remembered, they has an eagle in their logo. Eagle with broken wings, hahaha!!” Jurina laughs.

“Eagle?” Rena takes a look at the window to make sure what she saw. Yes, there’s an eagle in the logo of the shirt.
“Juri-kun, where are you now? Can we talk before the game started?”

“Oh, no problem. I’m still at my house, getting ready to go. I’ll visit your café first before the game” Jurina said while ties his shoes.

“See you..”

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Hours later, the team is getting ready for the game. They gathered in the changing room. The coach assistant check the members attendance while the players is preparing themselves.

“Guys, can we make a circle for a while? I need to talk, it’s important, seriously!” Jurina said in low tone so that the coach can’t hear it. All the members go towards him, execpt one person who is busy with his cellphone.

“Yuu, what are you doing there? Get in the circle now!” Jurina call his friend.

“Wait a sec, captain, wait a sec!” Yuu said, smiling while staring at her phone screen. He puts his phone in his bag and then join the rest members in the circle.

“Listen, I got an information that our opponent team has a bad plan, they want to bear us down in rotten way” Jurina said, makes the members frown. “I heard that they want to hurt us or something. I warn you to be careful of them. Stay focus and play it fair, okay?”

The members nod and then the coach call them to get out of the changing room and go to the hall. They enter the basketball hall, there are a lot of people on the tribune watching them. Cheers and applauses are around. Some girls from the cheerleaders team are getting ready to get on the field and show their performance.
Across the field, they can see their opponent members look at them cruelly just like they’re ready to kill them right now. Somehow it makes Kai feels so annoyed to face the opponent like that. He likes fair play game with fair opponent, not the one who just wants to win in rotten way.

The game is about to begin. “Good luck, guys!” Shinoda Mario pats the captain’s shoulder. This tall guy is not in the team, he’s more interested in modelling than sport. He sits on the couch with the coach, team officials, and the reserve players.

The screams, cheers, and applauses are heard so noisy when the both team enter the field. The game is began. The referee of the game throws the ball to the air, players from both of the teams try to catch it. Kai successfully take the ball, he dribbles the ball closer to the opponent’s basket. An opponent’s player runs towards him while he dribbles the ball, he quickly move the ball to Jurina who is vacant. The tall Jurina take the ball, dribbles it a bit then throw the ball to Yuu who is ready near the basket. In a second, Yuu can take the ball and throw it to the basket. Two points for their team.


The game is going more and more hot as the opponent team can race against their points but still, their team has the higher points. Kai gets the ball from the guard player, he dribbles it but suddenly an opponent player comes to ambush him. Kai look around to see who is vacant, he sees Yuu is moving, avoiding the opponent. Kai is about to move the ball to Yuu but then he feels like Yuu is not pay attention to him. Yuu looks at different direction. Kai quickly moves the ball back to Jurina, fortunately, the taller one can shoot the ball from far distance and it gives them three points.

Kai notice that Yuu has lost his focus, he takes a look at the direction of what is Yuu seeing exactly. It’s a girl walking on the tribune try to reach the vacant seat. Kai looks at the girl, then now he can clearly see it’s Acchan. Acchan is here to see the match. He sighs, no wonder Yuu lost his focus.

Jurina pats Yuu’s shoulder. “Dude, keep focus okay!”

“Oh, yeah. I’m sorry” Yuu replies. “She’s here, I can focus now” he thought. They play again, some points are attained, but still the point difference is not to far. After several minutes, time to break.

“Shit, they play well.. It’s really hard to beat them” said a guy in the opponent team while they’re having their break.

“Calm down, after this, let’s do our plan. You know that Oshima guy, he’s our target!”

During the break time, Yuu takes his towel and wipe his sweats. He takes a look at the tribune, he waves his hand when he sees Acchan on the tribune. In the other side, Kai can see it. He looks at Acchan who waves her hand back. Out of his thought, so sudden, Acchan looks at him too, she smiles at him. Kai’s face is going red, luckily he’s sweating so hard that no one can see him blushing. Kai replies the smile, then he looks at Yuu. The boy is talking with the coach, so Kai can ensure that Yuu’s not watching.

The referee blows the whistle, time to continue the game.

“OSH!!” the team shouts in circle and ready to enter the fields. The people start to noisy again as the players enter the field.

This time the opponent team is getting more serious and sometimes they play harshly. Jurina learns how the opponent plays and he feels something wrong. They look like about to chase Yuu and try to make him fall so many times. “Kai, cover him!” Jurina said while he runs across Kai.

A frontcourt player from the opponent team is running closer while Yuu is dribbling the ball. Kan can see something different with that guy. Someone blocks Yuu’s movement so he has to pass the ball and move it to others. It’s Jurina who is ready to catch the ball from Yuu. The time while Yuu is about to move the ball, Kai can see the guy tries to attack Yuu, Kai quickly running and cover him.

BUMMM!!

The referee blows the whistle, the spectators are going quiet, all the players stop moving. The referee runs to the middle of the field where some players are gathered in a little crowd.

“Excuse me!” the referee said, going through the crowd. There, Kai laid down on the floor, fainted. Yuu keeps pat Kai’s cheek to wake him up but failed. The referee call the medic staff to come in immediately and take Kai to the couch.

“He tried to attack me but then Kai cover me and h was the one being bumped. His head hits the ground” Yuu said to the coach while Kai is taken out from the field.

“Shinoda-san, go find a taxi, we have to take him to the hospital!” said the coach. Mario nods and go out from the hall. The coach walks towards the referee to discuss about the match.

“Sorry, but we can’t postpone the match, it must go on” the referee said. Sighing, the coach call another reserve player to substitute Kai’s position. “Makio-san, get in!” he said, and a guy named Makio tied his shoes to get ready.

Somewhere on the tribune, a girl jaw dropped looking at this situation. Worries all around her face, she quickly stands up and run down the tribune, he runs toward the crowd. “KAAIIIII!!!” she screams loudly.

~ Yuu’s POV ~

I’m so surprised that Acchan suddenly running to the crowd with such a worried face and hold Kai’s hand who is laid on the couch.

“Oh my God, Kaii!! Please wake up Kai!!” she said, sobbing. Somehow I can see her teary eyes.

“Oshima-san, the match has to be continued. Go back! We will take him to the hospital” the coach suddenly pats my shoulder and ask me to go back on field. I nods and join Jurina to make a circle with the team.

“LISTEN! I told you to be careful of them. Look, now we lost our power forward. But Makio-san, I count it on you to substitute Kai’s position. Let’s do our best! OSH!!” Jurina said in the circle. The game is continued again. The spectators start to cheers again.



~ Meanwhile outside the hall…. ~

“STOP!! Please stop!!” Mario stops a taxi that just pass across the hall. The taxi stops just in front of him. He quickly open the backdoor but at the same time, someone open the door too from inside the cab.

“Ooopss.. Sorry.. Miss. Uh, I thought that the taxi is vacant!” Mario said as a beautiful long haired girl comes out of the taxi.

“Naah, it’s okay. I actually stop here, so the taxi is vacant. You can use it” the girl said.

“Oh, really? Thank you miss” Mario bows at her then tell the driver to move closer to the backdoor of the hall because it’s the nearest way to the team’s room where Kai is.

Just when the taxi is arrived, some of the team staff takes Kai into the taxi, Acchan is there to accompany him. Acchan gets in the backseat and Kai laid there, his head on her lap. Two guys get in the taxi, one team staff sits in the front seat and the other one is a reserve player sit on the backseat and Kai’s feet on his lap.

“Kai.. how could this happened with you??” Acchan mumbled, still sobbing, while she caressing Kai’s head on her lap.

“Don’t worry, I’m sure he’s gonna be fine” the reserve player tells Acchan and try to calm her down.


Mario walks to the hall to go back to the match. He’s about to pack Kai’s things so he can take them to the hospital. In the stadium lobby, the girl he just met earlier, she seems like in a maze. He walks toward her and ask her. “Miss, can I help you?”

The girl turns around. “Oh, I’m looking for the basket ball hall, I’m looking for Oshima Yuu. He’s playing in the match today.”

“Ahh.. Oshima Yuu!! Wait.. you mean.. Oshima Yuu??” Mario looks at the girl from top to the toe.
“Aww man! This hot girl is looking for Yuu??” he thought.

“Yes, do you know him?” the girl said.

“Ah, o-of course I know him. He’s my friend” Mario said. “Follow me, I’ll show you the hall.”

The two walks heading to the basketball hall where tha match is being continued again.

“Hmm.. anyway, why are you looking for Yuu?”

“Huh? Can’t I?” the girl frowns.

“Uh, I mean.. what’s your relationship with him? I never saw you with him before” Mario said.

The girl smiles, “I’m his fiancee”

Mario widened his eyes.. “Fiancee??”

The girl nods and smiles “but I’m living abroad, so maybe that’s why you never saw me before.”

“Ohh, okay…”  they finally reach the hall. “Well, Miss….”

“It’s Kojima Haruna,”

“Okay, Miss Kojima..”

“Just Haruna, it’s okay, really”

“Hmm, fine. Haruna-san, you can find any vacant seat on the tribune” Mario points at the tribune. “And there..” now he pointing at the field where the game is going, “…is Oshima Yuu that you looking for.”

Haruna looks at the field where Yuu is playing basketball. He’s all sweaty and looks great just like usual. She smiles without noticing it.

“So, can I go back to the team official?” Mario said, waving his hand in front of her face, she’s probably spacing out while looking at Yuu.

“Ah, yes..” Haruna back to reality. “Thank you….”

“Mario. Shinoda Mario”

“Well, thank you Mario-san.”

Haruna walks to the vacant seat on the tribune while Mario go back to the team official. He keeps looking at Haruna, monitoring her behavior. “Geez, that girl is Yuu’s fiancee?? So how about Acchan? Oh, really, Yuu… you need to give us explanation!” he thought. Mario go to the changing room and pack Kai’s goods to his bag.



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Okay that's all for now. I'll update it later :)
« Last Edit: June 17, 2013, 04:36:19 PM by chemicalstar »

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Yuu is a playboy or is clueless XD

Kai took one for the team and now I wonder about Acchan
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Oh shit hahaha. Interesting. Totally interesting.

Kai and Acchan like each other.  Yuu likes Acchan. Haruna loves Yuu and still his fiancee. Mario (probably) falls for Haruna. XD
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Oh wow. . .  Haruna appeared. . . Now Yuu is gonna have a bad time. . .  XD

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Oh wow. . .  Haruna appeared. . . Now Yuu is gonna have a bad time. . .  XD

yeah!! aww I want kojiyuu and atsumina

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Pretty lucky Rena was there.... such a coincidence

Rena could spy on the opponents strategies... and Help Juri's team win the game...

Poor Kai for being sad all the time... looking at Yuu and Atsuko together...

Still he protected Yuu from the opponent dirty play...

And Kai was injured from it...

Oh... Atsuko was so sad and worry for Kai...

Would Atsuko leave Kai side while he is injured?

Would Yuu demand Atsuko to be with him...if ever Atsuko want to be with Kai taking care of him?

How bad was Kai's injuries?

Eh.. Haruna came to the game...

What's Yuu reaction with the sudden arrival of Haruna?

What's Atsuko do about Haruna and Yuu situation?

What Kai will do to Yuu about lying and two timing Atsuko...?

Would Kai and Atsuko be together then?

What's Haruna reaction from knowing that Yuu was cheating on her... by dating Atsuko?

Would they fight for Yuu... or let Yuu go?

Yeah... Yuu needs to have better answer then saying 'He didn't want the engagement... so he didn't feel he was unavailable'

I would hit the person that said that as the reason for two timing someone.... :angry:

What's Yuu going to do with Mario and others knowing about Haruna's existence as his fiancee....?

Can't wait to find out what's going to happen next

Thank you for the update

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kai and acchan like each other and yuu like acchan
but i think yuu really love haruna and i think haruna
maybe like mario and mario maybe like haruna :lol:
but serously i want kojiyuu and atsumina :love:

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omg It`s getting more and more interesting...

Now Haruna has come to the cage, what will happen to them??? Yuu you flirt!!! go back to your Haruna!!! :on thumbb:

and Haruna meets Mario and Mario might like her and vise versa,, they will fall for each other.  :stoned:

NOOOOOO!!!!!!!  :mon ref: please let this be AtsuMina and KojiYuu  :heart: :heart: :heart:

update soon!!!  :bow:

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Haruna is back!!!
What's gonna happen to Yuu now??
Is he going to reject Haruna and go for Acchan??
I feel like Mario is interested in Haruna
Acchan is so worried about Kai...
I hope he's okay and admits his feelings soon
Thanks for the update!!

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Very cool story----!  :cow:

Nyan is there... so yuu, leave acchan  :angry:

please update soon  :thumbsup

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Thanks for the update! I was so caught up with Sayonara Crawl and the elections, I completely ignored this forum. XD Gomennnasai!

Yay for KojiYuu! :heart:

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Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 15~ 11/06/30 NEW!! <<
« Reply #192 on: June 12, 2013, 06:47:31 AM »
 HELLO EVERYONE!!! Been so long! So sorry to make it so long okay 
I hope you still waiting for this fic to be continued. So, this is the new chapter. Sorry if it’s too short. I’ll update it later.



CHAPTER 15


~Yuu~

During the game, I look at the bench and Mario is already there, so I guess Kai is already hospitalized. I can see Maio give a strange glace at me. His eyes just lke pointing to a direction of the tribune. I follow his eyes direction to the spectators.

BADUMMM BBADUMM BADDUMMM

My heart starts beating fast, so fast. NYAN NYAN??? She’s here??

“Hey hey, dude! Focus!” Jurina suddenly appears in front of me. I quickly get focus on the game again. I do my best for this game, somehow it’s so hard to play the game without Kai here. He’s a great player, but I exactly know even though he’s not here now, we have to win the game. We have to show him the medals.

Minutes later, I can’t believe that our score is equal. But, this time is our last chance to win the game. I have to shoot the ball. People in the whole hall hold their breath as I hold the ball and ready to shoot the ball.

“YUUU CHAAAANN!! I LOVE YOU!!!” I hear someone’s screaming.

I know exactly who is she. I take a glance at her, she gives me her best smile, the smile that I miss so much, she looks good today, looks so different than the last time we met. My heart starts to beat so fast. I reply her smile, then I turn my view to the ring again. I close my eyes, take a breath slowly then shoot the ball to the ring.

“POINTS!!” the referee shouts then he blow the whistle. Game is over, we win. The spectators start to cheers. Jurina runs toward me and hug me tight. We cheer for our victory. I take a glance again to the tribune, there I can see a beauty cheers at me.

I change my clothes and get out of the changing room. Mario appears in front of me, “Your…umm.. fiancee.. is waiting out there” he smirks at me.

“O-Oh? Souka.. okay thanks” I said nervously and walk away but he stops me by taps my shoulder.

“Care to explain me something?” he said.

“A-ah.. that one, umm..” I can’t think of anything.

“Dudes, I’m going to Rena-chan’s place first, let me know if you’re going to the hospital, okay!” Jurina walk across, interrupting us then he walks away. I bet he’s about to celebrate something there.

I pretend to go away and follow Jurina, forgetting the latest conversation with Mario.

“Hey hey! We’re not finished yet!” Mario said.

“*Sigh , fine, I’ll explain everything. But let me meet her first okay!” I promised him the he nods. I walk out of the hall and meet Nyan nyan there. The time when she saw me, she hug me so tight.

“Yuuchaaan!!” she calls my name near my neck while hugging me. “Congratulation!”

“Thank you..” then I release the hug, “Hey, why you didn’t tell me that you will come?”

“Humm.. I miss you so much, and you I couldn’t contact you lately, so I came here” she explains. I remember the last time she called me, I rejected it then we just sent email to each other in the next days.

“Souka… so how long will you here?” I ask her.

“Actually I want to be here for days or even months, hehe… But I think I will go back the day after tomorrow.”

“That’s so fast” I said.

“Yeah, so that’s why you have to take me hang out around the city tonight, okay?”

“Hmm.. fine. But, I have to go to the hospital fist. My friend got injured while the game just now. So I have to visit him”

“Humm, okay then. But accompany me to your house first, I want to visit your new house here and meet your parents, it’s been so long we haven’t met” she asked me.

“Sure, let’s go!”

I take Nyan nyan to my house, she meets my parents and they looks so happy to meet each other. I quickly go to sport hall again where Mario is. I meet him and as I promised, I tell him everything about the engagement, I also tell him that I’m about to decline it because I found Acchan, and Nyan nyan is more like a best friend to me now even though, yes I love her too.

“I don’t know if it’s wrong or not. But I also can’t hold my feeling for Acchan. I also love her…” I said to Mario while we’re walking to Rena’s café.

“Geez, this is so complicated. There’s nothing wrong with falling in love, Dude. Even though if you fall for two, three, or maybe a thousand girls. But the fact, we have to choose one of them so that no one’s get hurt” Mario tells me. “No, nothing’s wrong with falling in love. Don’t blame yourself for loving two persons in the same time.”

“Humm, thanks for understanding me” I smiles at him, lucky me to have a mature friend like him.

“So, are you really sure that you will decline the engagement?”
“Ahh, poor Haruna..” he teases me.

“Mou.. but I find that I love Acchan more than her” I said. “You’re the one who said that I have to choose one of them, right?”

“Okay, okay!”

“Oh, one more thing..” I stops him when we’re arrived in front of Rena’s café. “Don’t tell anyone about this, okay? Including Jurina and Kai too..”

“Fine..”

We get in the café and meet Jurina is having a good time with his older girlfriend Rena. After that we go to the hospital to visit Kai.

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~Kai~


“There’s no serious wound, so don’t worry. The bump just made him shocked, he’s gonna be okay. Soon he’ll get his conciousness”

I heard someone’s talking, I still close my eyes. I try to remember what happened lately.
HEY? I FAINTED?? Geez, that’s so lame!

“I hope so, thanks doctor..” I heard a voice of another guy. I bet there’s a lot of people around.

Then, I feel something smooth and warm holding my hand. Still with eyes closed, I try to think and remember the feeling of this soft and warm thing in my hand. It’s her. I slowly open my eyes as my fingers slowly hold her hands in mine. She looks at me, I can see her teary eyes and she slowly show her smile.

“K-Kai??” she said, trembling.

“Hey..” I said in a very soft voice, still so weak.

“Oh my… thanks God, you’re back” she cups my cheek with his other hand. “Kai are you okay? How do you feel?”

“I’m all okay, it’s just a little bit hurt here” I raise my hand and touch a part of my head.

She touch it slowly, “I’ll call the doctor, okay?” then she get up from the bed and go out while a lot of people grins at me, they look so happy seeing me back.

“Yo! Do you know how long did you fainted?” a guy asks me, he’s my junior at school but he is one of the player in the basketball team.

“2 months!” another guy shouts at me.

“WHAT?!” I wide my eyes. “Really??” I look around the room and see a calendar. *Sigh, it’s the same month as the last time I remembered.

They laugh at me. “Hahaha, just kidding man! We glad you’re back. And….”

“And how about the game? We won it, right?” I ask the curiously.

“Umm,sorry Kai,  actually… ” one of them speaks in low voice, he looks down and looks so sad.

“We won!!” someone appears in the door of the room. Everybody look at that person. He smiles widely while his hand shows us a gold medal.

“Jurina!!” I shout at him happily. “Whoaaa!!”  He walks in, that time I realize that Yuu and Mario are behind him. The cheers are around the room. There are a lot of people in my room cheering our victory.

KNOCK KNOCK

“CAN YOU PLEASE BE QUIET?!!?!?!” a man appears in the door, followed by Atsuko. Everyone’s shuts their mouth and look at him.

“Oh, doctor! How are you?” Mario said innocently.

“Can you boys please get out of the room for a while? I need to examine Mr.Takahashi” the doctor said. Everyone is going out of the room while Yuu, Jurina, and Mario still inside.

“Omedetou,” Atsuko said walks in and smiles to Yuu. I can see she moves closer and I guess she’s about to kiss his cheek. The second when she’s about to kiss his cheek, the doctor shoot his lights to my eyes. Everything’s white. Ah, great.

“Everything is fine, Mr.Takahashi” the doctor turn off his lights, now I can see everything’s around clearly. “You can even go home as soon as you want” he smiles at me. I can see those 4 people around me are happy too.

After the doctor go out, everyone is going inside again and the room become so noisy. About an hour later, a lot of people are coming. I know them, they’re from my dad’s office. They come to visit me and make sure that I’m all okay. I bet Atsuko told Uncle Sae about this and he sent those people to go to the hospital. The room is become more full of people, but then my friends from the basketball team excused to go home since it’s already dark.

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“You’re not going home?” Jurina asks Yuu when they’re about to leave the hospital.

“Uhm, no, just go ahead, I need to meet Acchan first” Yuu said.

“Oh, okay. See you” Jurina go with the others leave the hospital. Yuu sits down on a bench outside the room, waiting for Acchan, she went to the toilet earlier.

“Why did Nyan-nyan come so sudden?” Yuu thought while he sits there. “Wait, if Nyan-nyan is here, so.. I think it’s the right time for me to tell my parents about the engagement. Yeah, maybe this is a good chance for me to say it.”

“Hey you’re still here?” Acchan just back from the toilet.

Yuu stands up and face her. “Yes, I want to take you for dinner, would you?”

Acchan take a look at Kai’s room fo r a while the look at Yuu again. “I think we can go dinner later. I have to take care of Kai” Acchan said.

“Huh? But there are a lot of people there who can take care of him” Yuu said, pointing at the people inside the room, including some maids.

“Yeha, I know. But I’m pretty sure that I have to stay beside him. We can go later, okay?” Acchan smiles at him. “I suggest you to go home, you must be so tired after the game today. I want you to take some rest.”

Yuu looks down, a little disappointed, but he finally understands what Acchan mean. “Yeah, I shouldn’t be so egoist” he thought.

“Okay, then. I’m going home. Don’t forget to have a dinner, okay? I don’t expect you to get sick” Yuu said. Acchan nods. Then Yuu kiss her forehead and pats her head. “See ya”

The time when Yuu leave the hospital and Acchan is about to get in the room, a man come out.

“Mr.Takahashi wants to go home now. I guess he doesn’t feel comfortable to spend the night in the hospital” he said to Acchan.

“Right now?” Acchan said surprised.

“Yes, I’ll prepare the car” then the man leaves her.

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“Tadaima!” Yuu said while he enters his house. He can feel the different atmosphere of the house, there’s more warmth there.

“Okaeri!” Haruna greets him. “Yuu-chan, I have a surprise for you, close your eyes!” she ask him to close his eyes. “Don’t peek in!” she shouts when Yuu tries to open his eye a bit.

“Sigh, alright then, I’ll close your eyes” Haruna move behind Yuu and close his eyes with her palms. She leads him to  walk to the dining room.

“Tadaaa!!!” she cheers and open his eyes. There are a lot of foods on the table.

“Let’s have a dinner, my champion!” she smiles.

“You cooked it?” Yuu feels so hungry as he looks at the table, full of foods.

“Actually, your mom and the maid helped me to prepare it. I want a little celebration for our champion today”

“Whoa, thank you!!”

“Come on, let’s eat” Nyan Nyan pull a seat for Yuu and she sits beside him, meawhile Yuu’s parents come in and join them in the dining room.

“Mmm… so yummy!” Yuu’s dad said as he chews the food. Yuu can see the warmth and happiness around. Smiles are around. He feels so happy between these people.

“It it the right time?” Yuu thought, looking at his mom, dad, and Haruna having their dinner happily. They talk and laugh together. It seems like Yuu can’t bring himself to ruin this happiness. Finally, Yuu continue to eat and share the happiness with his parents and Haruna.


meanwhile…


“Why do you want to go home so early, you can stay in the hospital for a night and tomorrow you can leave” Acchan said, she sits beside him on the backseat of the car on their way home.

“Hmm, no. I don’t want to stay any longer in the hospital. Actually, I hate to be there”

“Eh?” Acchan look at him. “Why? Are you scared of needle? Doctor? Or… ghost?” Acchan teases him.

Kai chuckled. “Naah, Takahashi doesn’t scared of anything.”

“So what’s that?” Acchan is being more curious.

Kai spacing out, his face becomes serious. “That place reminds me of every bad things that happened in my life.. I always think about my parents when I was there. Being hospitalized makes me think that I’m getting closer to death…” Kai said, looking down. Suddenly he feels something wraps around his body. Acchan hugs him tight.

“Don’t say that again.. You make me feel the same way” Acchan said, leaning her head on Kai’s chest.

That time Kai realizes that Acchan has the same situation with him, he feel so guilty of what he just said.
“I’m sorry..”  he moves his hand and caressing her head, feel the warmth of her body on his embrace. Long in silence, Kai realize that Acchan is falling asleep on his chest.

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So that's it. Please tell me how's that..

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Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 15~ 11/06/30 NEW!! <<
« Reply #193 on: June 12, 2013, 07:19:08 AM »
Thank you for the update!
That Yuu. . . How can he be such a jerk? :smhid

I hope he realizes that Haruna is the one for him. . .

Acchan is really worried. . .
I want her relationship with Kai to be something more. . .

I'm looking forward to the next chapter  :)

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Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 15~ 11/06/30 NEW!! <<
« Reply #194 on: June 12, 2013, 07:23:36 AM »
yuu please don't break haruna heart . it's so sad :(
i wanna slap your head . a jerk boy :banghead:
yuu should let acchan go to kai :smhid
i guess mario and haruna might be a couple at last  :banghead:
but i need atsumina and kojiyuu :rock:
thx for your update
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Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 15~ 11/06/30 NEW!! <<
« Reply #195 on: June 12, 2013, 07:36:11 AM »
OMG. Yuu don´t play with  woman´s heart please.. you need to chose Kojipa..

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Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 15~ 11/06/30 NEW!! <<
« Reply #196 on: June 12, 2013, 11:44:16 AM »
Eh... Yuu's heart doki doki... Was he suddenly have feeling for Haruna...?

I think Yuu just like to chase any pretty girls...

After all the complain about being enganged with Haruna... Now he was attracted to Haruna...

Because Haruna became so beautiful...

Well just break up with Atsuko ASAP... so Atsuko can be with Kai.

What... You can love lots of people but you can only fall in love with ONE....

What is that explanation... you could fall in love with 2-more people at the same time...

He would decline his engagement with Haruna... when???

When it was convenience with him or when Haruna was not there anymore...?

He should have done it before... now he wanted to keep everything from Kai and Jun or even Atsuko from finding out the truth...

Poor Haruna being like a dirty secret like that... And he'd even already forgotten about Haruna being in his house... and he wanted to have a date with Atsuko...

He really was a coward and a selfish person, he always had a lot of reason as to why he did not break the engagement.

Now his reason was that he did not want to ruin the happy atmosphere in his family...

Like Haruna was being the dirty secret between his friends... now Atsuko was being the dirty secret of his family...

And I think Yuu's family would not accept Atsuko anyway... with her being from the lower status and also poor.

Ah... it would be great for Atsuko if Yuu broke up with her... ASAP... to prevent his parents from humiliating Atsuko if ever Yuu introduced her to his parents

As I thought Yuu was selfish... wanting to have dinner with Atsuko... even when Atsuko already said she needed to take care of Kai...

Sure Kai had lots of people around him... but his main maid or care taker was Atsuko... so it was hers to deal with...

Some more... Atsuko and Kai shared lots of common situation and worries... They were also the same type of people...

They able to understand one another.... and able to know what the others thought about most of the time... except about their feeling...

Yeah... Atsuko hug Kai... and trying to comfort Kai... while also trying to comfort herself...

They needed each other... for support...

And Atsuko wanted to take care of Kai not because it was her job because she wanted too... she cared about Kai more than as a friend or her Master

What's Kai going to do with Atsuko sleeping on him...?

Would he let Atsuko sleep on his bed while he used some other place to sleep?

Or would he let Atsuko sleep on his chest?

What's going on with Yuu and Haruna?

What about Yuu and Atsuko?

Also what about Kai and Atsuko?

Can't wait to see the next

Thank you for the great update

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Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 15~ 11/06/30 NEW!! <<
« Reply #197 on: June 12, 2013, 04:31:31 PM »
what gonna happen next mehehe update please ^^
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Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 15~ 11/06/30 NEW!! <<
« Reply #198 on: June 12, 2013, 08:20:43 PM »
I want KojiYuu! Yuu needs to realize Acchan likes Kai more!

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Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 15~ 11/06/30 NEW!! <<
« Reply #199 on: June 12, 2013, 08:26:46 PM »
 :yawn:Yuu-chan..... I think he's confused right now. :(
He said he loves Acchan more than Haruna, but somewhere deep in his heart he still loves Haruna. Even if he doesn't realize that. At least that's how I think.
Acchan clearly likes Kai but she doesn't realize it. Poor Kai :/
But I have a hunch that Yuu will end up being the one who tells Kai about Acchan's love toward him (Kai).
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