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(Takayuu) Comrade in arms, chapter 3-The Outcome (28/05/2013) UPDATE!
« Reply #20 on: May 28, 2013, 02:58:32 PM »
Chapter 3 - The outcome

Yuko and Minami both took off in opposite directions and each stood to one side of their attacker. The two of them knew their only advantage was that they outnumbered him since he had age, size and most likely power over them. However, he was also drunk, and hopefully that’d give the two idols a lead as well. Their attacker darted his gaze back and forth looking between the two girls, unsure who to go after first. Eventually he turned to Minami and advanced.

The leader was alright with this, she wanted to keep his attention away from Yuko, and the ace could maybe find an opening to take the guy down. That’s it; just keep making your way forward. Minami kept backing up slowly, honestly if I can kill time without having to fight for the police to come, that’d be great. She kept sidestepping back and forth, avoiding his advances, but not moving too far away so he wouldn’t change targets. Yuko kept close behind him in case he’d make any sudden movements, but also attempted to stay clear for the moment to go along with the leaders plan.

The attacker was however growing frustrated, out of nowhere he sprinted and leaped at the younger girl who was caught off guard but managed to duck the fist he threw. He gave her no chance to move back and he threw another punch that came so close to the leaders face that it caused her bangs to flutter. That was too close! Before he could advance again, he and the leader both heard a loud whistle. The assailant turned to the sound and saw Yuko waving. Minami took the chance to attack from behind. Well, it always works on TV...Were her thoughts as she slid her right leg behind her, then threw it forward in a kicking motion and nailed the guy right where it hurt. The drunk yelled out in pain and fell on his knees.

The ace decided to take this opportunity for herself. “He pal, now I can reach your face.” When he looked up as she spoke, she nailed him with a right hook to the face that made both him and her cry out in pain. “Damn! Punching someone really hurts!” she said as she waved the hand she socked him with in the air. Just when the two thought they could relax for a bit, the attacker angrily stood up, facing the actress.

“Yuko watch out!” Minami called taking a step forward, although the attacker instantly whirled around at her and threw a kick. The leader hadn’t seen it coming, she believed he was advancing on Yuko and got too close. His shoe made painful contact on the right side of her ribs that literally sent her flying off her feet and to the ground. Before she could recover, he threw another kick to her stomach while she was on the floor. “Ugh!” she cried out, trying to block her stomach before he could strike again. He didn’t get the chance as Yuko charge him, ignoring the immense pain from her sprained ankle and slammed her shoulder into the guy, pushing him away from Minami and into the near wall.

The attacker recovered, reached out and grabbed Yuko by the collar. “I don’t want to hu..rt you. But if you keep resisting, I will.” He thrust his knee into Yuko’s stomach, making her cough up saliva and lose her breath. He then threw her to the floor beside where Minami lay.

Yuko opened her eyes after making contact with the floor and turned her head to look at Minami who looked back at her, still trying to catch her breath. “I thought you weren’t going to channel the part of Minami from Majisuka that got her butt kicked,” Yuko jokingly scolded.

“Yah... well she gets more credit, she never fought back, but we are and we’re still getting our butts kicked.” Minami pointed out.
“Well you know whose butt I really want to kick. The cops. Remind me to file a complaint once this is over on how slow their service is” Yuko grinned.
Minami tried smiling as well and said, “Noted.” This was what the two of them needed. They’d keep making remarks like these that promised that they’d get through this just fine.

Minami saw a hand reach down and grab Yuko by her collar again, lifting her back up on her feet. Their attacker began to drag the actress once again to his car, attempting to flee. The leader quickly lifted herself from the ground, noting that breathing was becoming painful and so was moving. She touched her ribs where the drunk landed a kick and felt pain. Not wanting to focus on that at the moment, she ran towards him before he could get further. Don’t go counting me out you bastard! Hearing her approach, the drunk harshly threw the ace against the wall and struck Minami directly on the face with his fist. The world exploded in colors for a second in the leaders eyes. She staggered backwards trying to get her vision back but was too dizzy. She kept backing up until she hit the wall behind her and slowly slid down to be seated on the floor. No...No...Not the time to lose consciousness Minami. The leaders’ vision was flickering on and off. First she’d see black, and then she’d see the guys’ feet slowly approaching her.

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Yuko held on to her left shoulder where he’d slammed her to the wall. She frantically looked around trying to find anything to use as a weapon against the guy to stop him from approaching her friend. A few feet away from her, she saw something with a light shine under the beat up dumpster. As quickly as she could, she made her way there and bent down, reaching for the object with her good arm. Please....Please let it be something useful.

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Minami saw his feet stop directly in front of her. Two hands came down and grabbed her by her collar and lifted her to her feet. She tried to claw at his hands with what energy she had left but his grip wasn’t loosening. Just then, she saw a figure approach the guy from behind, holding something over its head. “You won’t get in my way anymo...Ah!”  Before he could finish, the figure behind him swung the object directly towards his head and hit him on his temple. He freed Minami and fell to the ground; blood trickling where the crowbar, as Minami could tell now, had hit him.

“You know, I’d usually complain about people leaving dangerous things lying around, but in this case...thank god.” Yuko said as she dropped down beside the leader, exhausted. Minami was finally regaining her clear sight and gave Yuko a smile.

“You look like crap,” she let out a little laugh.
Yuko grinned, “That’s my line Takahashi. ...We’re definitely getting lectured once we get back for not taking care of our image as idols...Then again; we always tend to give the word ‘idol’ a new meaning.”

The two girls both laughed, though Minami winced when she did, her ribs still hurting. In the distance, the two of them could hear the faint sound of sirens.

Before the two could let out a sigh of relief, they heard shuffling just across them. Looking, they saw the attacker slowly getting up, staggering as he did so. “You’ve got to be kidding. Were their steroids in that guys drink” Yuko said baffled.

Both her and Minami were panicking, they didn’t have much energy left, and to make it worse, as he stood up, he reached into his pocket and pulled out a switch blade, unleashing the blade.

The leader was definitely scared, after all that, with rescue so close by, they could end up dead. After all their stupid bickering and promises to make it out of this, would it just end here? No. No! I can’t think like that. We can’t give up now. “Yuko. Remember when I helped you get that microphone off the top shelf during rehearsals. You said, ‘there’s nothing we can’t do when we’re together!’ and I honestly believe that. I know it may be stupid to say in this situation, but I wanted you to know I agreed.”

Yuko smiled and grabbed hold of Minami’s hand. “It’s fine. I like that you’re not afraid to say stupid stuff. Like that whole ‘You’ll never lose your light as long as you’re you’ thing you said to cheer me up. Besides...” Yuko said as she stood and directed Minami to stand with her as they stared at the deranged man holding a knife in front of them, waiting for god knows what. “Our scariest challenge it yet to come. General election is around the corner, the members won’t forgive us if we’re not there... And Atsuko won’t forgive you if you skip out on the dinner plans you arranged with her!”

Minami laughed. “I’d be mad at you for most likely going through my phone to find that out, but you don’t need to remind me of all that. I know. So I say...we actually fight the way that we know how right now, since clearly channelling our fictional selves from Majiuska won’t work out against knife guy over there.”

"Yah we're not exactly fighters are we" Yuko agreed.

The leader and ace were both on the same page. Even with a crowbar, they both doubted they could move fast and strong enough to fight the guy, especially when he had a knife. If they messed up, the consequences would be too severe.

“Right, so let’s show him how idols handle things” Yuko said. What they both needed now, was time. A distraction. They could hear the sirens getting closer and just had to make sure the drunk wouldn’t make any moves.

“In your position...set!” Minami shouted, taking their attacker by surprise as he stopped before advancing. Minami left some distance between her and Yuko and both moved away from the wall.

“1! 2! 1, 2, 3, 4!” Yuko shouted. Then the two of them danced and sang together.

“I want you~ I need you~ I love you~ Atama no naka ~~ Gan-gan natteru music, Hebii~ ro-ta-tion!”

The two were putting everything they had left to sing and dance to one of their most popular songs, and ignored the pain in their muscles. The attacker dropped the knife to his side and stood there...just watching. At first he was confused, but then he looked like a really excited fan watching a concert. “Amazing! I’m watching heavy rotation being performed by two top members of AKB!”

The two kept singing, and once they got to the chorus the 3rd time during the song, they heard people shouting,
“Drop the knife!”
“Put your hands up against the wall”
The cops arrived and tried their best to ignore the two idols performing once they spotted them all. Instead using the distraction to approach them at a closer distance. The attacker was caught off guard and dropped the knife since he had guns aimed at him. Two offices grabbed him and put his hands behind his back as they cuffed him.

The two girls had stopped performing, catching their breath. “Well it’s about time” Yuko huffed as she dropped herself to the floor, no longer able to withstand the pain emitting from her ankle. Minami dropped beside the actress, “do you think we can postpone our plans to grab something to eat. I’m feeling pretty sleepy”
“No objection here leader, I’m also beat. I’m sure the girls won’t mind us missing out on practice in the morning” Yuko said as she and Minami leaned into each other and closed their eyes as a few paramedics made their way over to the two sleeping girls, who held a peaceful smile as they slept regardless of what had just went down.

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Hope you all like the chapter!! Only the epilogue is left after this!

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OMG..
I love ur update...
I can't stop laughing at the last part...
minami and yuko great teamwork XD
I can't wait to ur epilogue :on gay:
Update soon~~

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Oh my stomach! Lol.. Yuko and Minami sang heavyrote! And on that situation..! (^O^) The drunk man started cheering! Watta! (O.o)

Oh man! I can imagine how they look after the beatings they've got.. Ouch..

Ohmygooosh! Almost the end..T^T I really love your fic..

Oh well.. Thank you for the update :)

Update soon :bow:

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exciting... scene when Minami and Yuko trying to fight back and getting away from the drunker...  :inlove:

Minami and Yuko seem to be injured very badly...  :cry:

Did they suffer bad injuries...?  :?

OMG... I thought it would be one of the plot where one of them getting stabbed from protecting the other... when a knife was being pointed to them...  :thumbsup

Interesting way to make the drunker forgot about what he wanted to do...  :sweatdrop:

Singing 'Heavy Rotation' indeed the most popular song... able to disable a violent drunker from committing anymore crime...  :lol:

Can't wait to find out what's going to happen next to them and to the drunker...?

Thank you for the update

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that damn guy i would like to give a punch on his face for doing that! :on kimbo: ! and .. and for the cops  why are they so late... but its good that takayuu managed to hold the guy off. thx for this fic i thought it would be longer but it okay.. that ending was so good ! :nya:  :twothumbs

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Lol this is cool....
And you give a new meaning to heavy rotation  :rofl:
the song that stopped a violent drunk fan  :rofl:
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Improvised version of Heavy Rotation to catch the guy
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seriously...they need to sort out their priority...can't show up at election time is more frightening than being stab to death by some unknown drunkard? *sigh*

and thank god their '0048 mode' saved them after their 'majigaku mode' failed (笑)

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Chichay12: lol thanks :) Great teamwork indeed! I'll upload the epilogue tmrrw
kenjoy12: No one can resist heavy rotation sung by Yuko and Minami!
cisda83: The epilogue will specify what injuries they suffered but they're tough! & the power of heavy rotation is not to be messed with :P
den_takacchan: yah sorry, it was always meant to be a short fic outlining their friendship but thanks for reading :D Glad you also wanna beat that guy for beating them :P
Yuki88: lol thanks
kurosawa87: haha yes it was
bunny_rabbit: lol they do indeed, but their thought process was that they keep talking about promises of doing things in the future as a way to promise themselves that they'd get through this :) Ya majisuka mode was a fail so reverted to singing :P

Thanks for reading! as mentiond, epilogue will be posted tmrrw morning!




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(Takayuu) Comrade in arms, Epilogue (29/05/2013) UPDATE!
« Reply #29 on: May 29, 2013, 01:50:16 PM »
Thanks for reading this fic everyone! I just had the idea of the two of them fighting side by side so decided to write a fic to focus on their friendship! So I really hope you enjoyed this short fic!

Epilogue

“So let me get this straight. Yuko went alone at evening through a dangerous alley. Minami went after her all alone when she realized something was wrong. You two fight off a drunken crazy fan. Get beat up. Then sing heavy rotation when he holds a knife to you.” Mariko narrowed her eyes at the two girls sitting upright on their hospital beds.

Minami and Yuko exchanged somewhat playful glances before turning back to their friends. “Well when you put it like that, it makes us sound like total idiots” Minami said.

“Yah! Minami’s the one in BKA48, not me” Yuko defended.

Mariko glared at the two girls, “You’re both idiots! Honestly do you know how lucky you two are that nothing worse happened? Which it could’ve. Like being kidnapped or even killed!”

 The two girls lowered their heads, knowing Mariko and the others were just showing concern for them. Yuko recovered quickly and smiled, “well none of that did happen, so no point worrying about it. Minami and I can handle anything together” she said confidently. The leader smiled at her words and spoke up next.

“We’re sorry for worrying you all. We’ll be more careful in the future. But we’re okay. Really.” She gave a reassuring smile.

Mariko sighed, “Honestly you two are idiots”

“They are. But I do think they’re a great duo. It really does seem like they can face off any challenge regardless of their stature” Atsuko stepped in and said.

“Hey!” Both the short girls protested at the former aces compliment yet teasing insult. 

“And what’s important is they’re alright” Haruna added sounding relieved.

After being taken to the hospital that night, the two idols were treated and slept all through the night till morning. They’d awoken to hear about their condition and learned that the fan was charged with assault, attempt at kidnapping and possibly attempt at murder. Either way he was behind bars now. Their friends and family had been waiting outside. They’d spoken to their families and Aki-p sent his wishes as well, telling the girls he’d give them as much rest as they needed. Their friends stayed behind to keep them company.

Yuko’s ankle was badly sprained, however thankfully not broken. She was instructed to take it easy for 2-3 months. Meaning no dancing, although she was allowed to continue whatever activities she felt she could attend after a bit of rest. Her shoulder was also bruised from being slammed to the wall, but it’d heal up soon enough. She had a few scrapes on her hands and knees, but nothing that’d leave a scar. Her hand was also sore from punching the guy, but it’d heal in no time.

As for Minami, she had one broken rib where the drunk struck her directly; the doctor said it’d taken 1-2 months to heal, and a bruised rib just below that, which would only take 3-4 weeks to heal. The leader was also instructed to keep activities to a minimum since the broken rib would restrict her movement. She also had a split lip and bruised area around her right eye, along with cuts and scrapes but like Yuko, no scars would remain.

Miichan stepped past Haruna and Atsuko and said excitedly, “sorry, let’s back up. You guys actually performed heavy rotation!”

“It’s not like we did it for fun you know. We had to buy time and the guy was a fan, so we’d figured that’d distract him. Especially since his oshimen seemed to be Yuko and thus we went for heavy rotation” Minami explained.

When the others just kept blankly staring at them, Yuko added with a sigh, “you had to have been there.”

Everyone began to laugh after that, just thankful this was over. Atsuko walked up to the two and said, “Well I’m really glad you two are okay. Don’t know what I would’ve done without you. What anyone would’ve done actually.”

Everyone nodded their agreement and the two girls on their hospital beds smiled up at them.

“Come on girls. Let’s let the two of them rest, we’ll visit them again later” Tomochin instructed.

“Rest up you two so you can get your energy back and heal up in no time!” Sayaka encouraged.

“Try not to cause any trouble for the nurses or doctors in the meantime” Sae jokingly warned.

They all said their goodbyes to the leader and ace. Atsuko stuck her head back into the room before leaving, “Oh, and I rescheduled our dinner plans Minami so you’d have time to rest first. And Yuko, Haruna said you still owe her lunch from that bet you lost, she hasn’t forgotten. Rest up you two!” she waved and closed the door behind her.

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Yuko stretched, then got up from her bed, and limped over to Minami’s. “Scoot” she said as she lightly pushed the younger girl over and rested beside her.

Minami looked at her questioningly. “You know you have your own bed right” she said, but didn’t really mind Yuko’s close presence.

“It’s easier to talk to you this way. Besides, it’s lonely to sleep alone.... Also, I want to say thanks. For coming after me and staying”

“Of course” Minami said without a second thought. “You’re an idiot for thinking I’d run off without you. Besides, you would’ve done the same if our situations were reversed”

“You kidding!  I would’ve high tailed it out of there!” Yuko loudly said, earning a playful shove from the younger girl. She let out a laugh, “Of course I would’ve done the same. And we would’ve done it for any other member and friend too, because we’re all a family, we look out for one another. And you’re my important comrade.”

The younger girl smiled, “who’s saying cheesy stuff now?”

“You’re a bad influence Takahashi” the ace smirked. “So, what do you say we limp over to the cafeteria? I’m starving”

Minami laughed. “Sure. I’m up for some food too. Don’t think this replaces the katsudon you promised though”

Both girls sat up and left the bed, slowly making their way outside the room with each other’s support.

“I wouldn’t dream of not offering you your celebratory katsudon. Besides, I doubt you’ll ever let me forget it anyway” Yuko joked.

“You got that right Oshima”

                                                          THE END!!!!

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Re: (Takayuu) Comrade in arms, Epilogue (29/05/2013) UPDATE!
« Reply #30 on: May 29, 2013, 01:55:51 PM »
Their weird relationship is seriously funny.

It makes great fics overall for the many readers here who like the complexity of a great pairing :lol:
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Re: (Takayuu) Comrade in arms, Epilogue (29/05/2013) UPDATE!
« Reply #31 on: May 29, 2013, 02:31:37 PM »
I thought so... Minami was more injured than Yuko...

But yeah... I agreed with Mariko and the others....Minami and Yuko were lucky enough to get off with minor injuries...

Yeah... somehow it was very funny... to even think that singing a song in those situation was the right thinking...

But then their reason was quite logic, he was a fan of Yuko so 'Heavy Rotation' was the choice....

Ah... Minami still own Atsuko a date... Yeah...

And Yuko seems to own lots of food to others... one for Haruna and the other for Minami...

Very funny... chapter here...

Thank you for the epilogue

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Re: (Takayuu) Comrade in arms, Epilogue (29/05/2013) UPDATE!
« Reply #32 on: May 29, 2013, 02:59:52 PM »
Great ending!  :fap

I love how they take care of their friendship :) and suppprt each other. :')

Hope there's more story coming from you in the future.. (^_^)

Thank you for the wonderful story you shared :bow:



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Re: (Takayuu) Comrade in arms, Epilogue (29/05/2013) UPDATE!
« Reply #33 on: May 29, 2013, 04:56:08 PM »
I really Like the Friendship Takayuu has...  :yep: :yep:

I wonder AKB would be... without The Captain and Their Ace...  :?

I Hope U could Make more Fics!!

Thanks for zee Awesome Epilouge!!

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Re: (Takayuu) Comrade in arms, Epilogue (29/05/2013) UPDATE!
« Reply #34 on: May 30, 2013, 02:18:58 PM »
kurosawa87: Thank you :D lol ya I love their relationship like this ^^
cisda83: Lol Yuko does indeed owe alot of people food :P Hopefully she'll pay those debts some day :D
kenjoy12: Thank you! Glad you liked it :D Hopefully I'll write another fic when I think of something :P
7sam14: Glad you liked the epilogue, thanks :) & ya, it's always important for the leader and ace to get along ^^

Thanks for reading everyone! Glad you enjoyed the fic :)


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