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    Yo minna!! It's me...I'm trying a new fanfic here~Actually this is the second fanfic and i'm too lazy to make a prologue or somethin' like that...Whahah!! Anyway...pls enjoy it!! :P :lol: XD

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Chapter 1: Misunderstanding?!


-The two midget lean at each other back in front of the lake, laughing with their mouth decorate with their own blood. Far away from them, a group of ladies with a gray coat lying down on the soft grass, being beat by those two midget.


“Alright…I’ll treat you after this, I beat 12 of them…I win.”-Oshima Yuko, the midget said.

“No fair, I’ve sprained my ankle…That’s why I can’t fight properly!!”-Takahashi Minami, said with a pouting tone.

“But I still win…Let’s go, we need to wash our face, let’s use the lake water.”-Yuko suggest to wash their blood from their face.

“Hai...No time to waste, I’m hungry here~”-Takamina said while Yuko grab her hand and help Takamina to stand up.


-They approach the lake and take an amount water with their palms. Yuko suddenly splash the water at Takamina which make her coat and shirt getting a little bit wet, Takamina give Yuko a payback and splash the water to Yuko. Then two figure approach them and both the midget stop whatever what they’re doing.


“You two!! You guys did this to them right!?”-The girl with a long hair and a gray coat shout while pointing at the beaten group.

“Yea!! Who else!? Have a prob?”-Yuko said with a grin and raising her fist.

“Ah!! You got a problem miss!?”-Takamina said with a fight pose.

“Takamina…Stop repeating me you idiot.”-Yuko said while glaring at Takamina, Takamina just ignore Yuko.


-The girl with the long hair then tightening her fist and run toward Takamina and Yuko who is distracted with a full speed, luckily Takamina notice it and catch the fist quickly. The girl than move backward to defend herself but then the other girl with a short hair stop her.


“Ne…We’re not here to fight, calm down…”-The short hair girl trying to calm the other girl down.

“You’re no fun…Let’s collect them, we need to gather everybody.”-The long hair girl said while beginning to carry the beaten group at her back, Takamina and Yuko have their jaw drop.

“I don’t know what’s their problem, but le-“-Soon Takamina stop her talking when Acchan smile to her.

*Wa…What was that!?*-Takamina said in her heart which is already beating faster.

“Aa…L-Let’s just go Yuko, no n-need to bother them.”-Takamina said while her eyes is still contacting with Acchan’s.

“T-Takamina…Are you okay? Anyway, let’s go.”-Said Yuko and force Takamina to walk, ignoring the two girl.


-Ignoring the two girl with the same coat as the group, as Yuko said, she treat Takamina at an open café where almost most of the high school student would hang out to. All eyes watching both the midget with fear because they all know the coat and the badge they’re wearing, an all-girl school but a school full of delinquent, a red flower and two word, M and J combined together as the symbol of Majisuka Gakuen, the fearsome school. Both of them just continue eating ignoring the glare and whispering.


“And really, the girl face after I punch her is li-“-Yuko hold her word after seeing Takamina spacing out while sucking the straw of the ice-blended chocolate to clear her throat from thirstiness.

“Ta~ka~mi~na…What the hell you’re spacing out for?”-Yuko said while waving her hand in front of Takamina’s face.

“Eh? Really you run toward her and what?”-Takamina said trying to catch up Yuko’s story.

“Damn it, that’s way too far from what I’ve told you now…”-Yuko said ending her story and continue eating.


-After fishing their food, Takamina end up paying for it because Yuko trick her and run away only leaving Takamina and her burning heart. Takamina decide to let Yuko go and start to wander around the lack from before. Then she spotted the beautiful smile again, smiling peacefully, letting the wind swaying her short hair but seems to be lonely.


*She’s here!! What should I do!?*-Takamina think as she blush and messing her hair.

*Ah!! Got an idea!! Yosha!! Do your best Minami!!*She encourage herself and holding her blush.

“Thanks whoever you are.”-Takamina said while sitting next to her, the girl seems shock.

“Ah! You’re from before!! And…Why thank me?”-The girl ask.

“Nah…that buddy of mine like to make trouble, just glad you stop her.”-Takamina said smiling to that girl.

“No problem, by the way, the name is Maeda Atsuko, just call me Acchan.”-The girl said revealing her name.

“Atsuko…nice name, mine is Takahashi Minami, called Takamina and I’m a girl, people always mistake me as a boy when I’m wearing a boyish clothes.”-Takamina introduce herself while thinking *Yosha!! Got her name!! First step complete!!~*

“Wow, you’re from the fearsomething school…What is it again?”-Acchan said while trying to remember the school name.

“What’s with the fearsomething? And I’m impressed that you didn’t know Majisuka Gakuen.”-Takamina said trying to be cool.

“Un…Never heard of it, but there’s a lot of rumor about your school, anyway, I’m from the Akihabara Gakuen…”-Acchan said and for a reason Takamina’s eyes widen.

“Majide!? The smart school but almost of the student is a delinquent!? Sugee!!”-Takamina praise Acchan’s school, but Acchan seems not to care at all.

“Want to talk about ourselves more? Let’s go to my house then…”-Acchan said with a happy tone suggest something that makes Takamina blush.

“Ehh!!??”


-After a few minutes walking, Takamina end up following Acchan all the way to her house, putting that aside, Takamina seems interested with Acchan’s house, a big and complicated house structure but beautiful to watch. The house made of a modern wooden decorate with three samurai sword hanging on the living room, a dojo separating the big house was positioned behind it. A garden and a pool makes the house even livelier. A fence constructed surrounding the big house and between the fences, which is the entrance where Takamina walk before entering the house.


“My god…Are you an ojou-sama?”-Takamina ask while her eyes busy looking around her surrounding but sometime her eyes move to glance at Acchan who is more beautiful from the house.

“Here, come in…My dad is not around in this time, so feel free to do anything.”-Acchan said while still wearing the same smile.
“Acchan…Every word come out from you sounds really weird to me…”-Takamina said while blushing.

“Really? Let me make it even weirder, come to my room…”-Acchan ask.

“What’s so weird about it? But I think…I-it’s okay…”-Takamina said.

“Jya…Let’s go, I wanna know you better too~”-Acchan said leading Takamina to the upstairs.

*Gezz…Every word of you do sounds weird.*-Takamina think while her smile is showing.


-While Acchan leading the way, Takamina feel that she has walk pass a heaven, an interested expression is now display on Takamina’s face, not only because of the way Acchan’s house is decorated, in fact she is interested the way Acchan talk, smile and everything. Only a smile can be express by Takamina on that time until to the destination where Takamina have to hide that smile and act cool.


“Jya…You first Takamina~”-Acchan said while humming a song.

“Um…the first thing I want to say is…I’m not this kind of family!! And you’re awesome!!”-Takamina shout excitedly.

“Ehh~ But I prefer to born from a normal family like you~”-Acchan said still humming the song.

“Majide!? Every one of us want a family like yo-“-Takamina’s words being cut after she hear a quiet snore from Acchan, who is already sleeping.

“Pftt…she’s snoring for real!! Wahh!!”-Takamina laugh then realize that she has to shut her mouth.

“Oyasumi…You’re a fast sleeper eh?”-Takamina said with a low tone, creasing Acchan’s hair.

“Wahh!! I’m sleepy too…think I’ll rest my eyes first.”-Takamina said while lowering her back on the bed.

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*Tweet, tweet, tweet*

“Uwahhh!! Uhh…Eh!?”-Takamina woke up from her sleep and shout after seeing Acchan sleeping beside her, hugging her.

*Morning!? I end up sleeping in her room!!*-Takamina shout in her heart, but then…

“Oii!! You!! What did you do to my daughter Atsuko!?”-The father of Acchan saw Takamina and Acchan hugging, which would SURELY lead to a BIG misunderstanding.

*Y-Yabaiiiiiii!!!!*-Takamina scream at her heart.


TBC…

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« Last Edit: July 07, 2013, 10:24:58 AM by Dieyg48 »
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Re: The Burden To Love You -Chapter 1-Misunderstanding?!- Updated!!
« Reply #1 on: June 09, 2013, 03:59:50 PM »
Wah Atsumina so cute!  :wub:  :wub:

What's gonna happen toTakamina?. . . .


I'm looking forward to the next chapter!   :D

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Re: The Burden To Love You -Chapter 1-Misunderstanding?!- Updated!!
« Reply #2 on: June 09, 2013, 04:10:27 PM »
COOOOOOL ~  :shocked

nice chapter  :twothumbs

may i ask ? is this atsumina and kojiyuu ?  :D

btw, thanks for the chapter
im waiting for the update  :twothumbs
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« Last Edit: June 09, 2013, 04:37:47 PM by blakwhite »

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Re: The Burden To Love You -Chapter 1-Misunderstanding?!- Updated!!
« Reply #3 on: June 09, 2013, 04:22:03 PM »
wah ha ha  :lol:
I like it
Acchan'father must thing that minami is a boy.They must marry  :lol: :lol: :lol:
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Re: The Burden To Love You -Chapter 1-Misunderstanding?!- Updated!!
« Reply #4 on: June 09, 2013, 04:27:20 PM »
Woooo so akiba gakuen vs majisuka gakuen interesting


what will minami say to atsukos father

is that the big misunderstanding ???

cant wait to find out !!!!! ^^
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Re: The Burden To Love You -Chapter 1-Misunderstanding?!- Updated!!
« Reply #5 on: June 09, 2013, 04:33:34 PM »
Yeah... MG base with few twists...

Wmidget were fighter from MG...

Who was with Atsuko near the lake?

Akihabara Gakuen is smart school with most of the students are Yankee-like too...

EH... Atsuko's father found Minami and Atsuko in the same room...

I think Atsuko's father mistook Minami as a boy... that's why the reaction was very intense...

What's going to happen with Minami?

Would the father asking Minami to marry Atsuko?

Would Minami be able to explain to the father that nothing happened the night before?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

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Re: The Burden To Love You -Chapter 1-Misunderstanding?!- Updated!!
« Reply #6 on: June 09, 2013, 04:37:12 PM »
Uwaa! LIKE  :thumbup Ahaha

So funny! So cute!  Acchan a fast sleeper! :lol: Uwaa! Takamina's.blushing! Atsumina moment.just so wonderful! I feel love! :wub: :heart:

What will happen to Takamina? Oh no! Ahaha.. :twisted: Can't wait to find out next..

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Re: The Burden To Love You -Chapter 1-Misunderstanding?!- Updated!!
« Reply #7 on: June 09, 2013, 04:55:45 PM »
lol nice! Interesting concept. Everything Atsuko does say it pretty suggestive, so no wonder Minami thinks its a weird way of speaking lol.
And the ending! Def a bad situation to be caught in by Atsukos dad :P

Great fic! Looking forward to the next chapter!

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Re: The Burden To Love You -Chapter 1-Misunderstanding?!- Updated!!
« Reply #8 on: June 09, 2013, 07:15:57 PM »
lol nice! Interesting concept. Everything Atsuko does say it pretty suggestive, so no wonder Minami thinks its a weird way of speaking lol.
And the ending! Def a bad situation to be caught in by Atsukos dad :P

Great fic! Looking forward to the next chapter!

hell yeah!.. but maeda papa would think that minami is a boy.. ohh

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Re: The Burden To Love You -Chapter 1-Misunderstanding?!- Updated!!
« Reply #9 on: June 10, 2013, 01:15:05 AM »
Oh damn! Acchan~ way to to~  hehehe...first day you met u invite her to ur house and best of all to ur room! xD hehehe :hehehe:
Oooo~ Takamina's in trouble~ misunderstanding are always the best...! LOL  :kekeke:
This will be awesome~ :on GJ:  looking forward to what will happen next~  :on gay:

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Re: The Burden To Love You -Chapter 1-Misunderstanding?!- Updated!!
« Reply #10 on: June 10, 2013, 08:38:22 PM »
Acchan had something in mind but in the end caught by the father :nervous
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Re: The Burden To Love You -Chapter 1-Misunderstanding?!- Updated!!
« Reply #11 on: June 11, 2013, 02:33:03 PM »
shiruba_rein: Hnnn~~Tnx for your comment~~Just wait till' i update it~~Eheheh...somethin' gonna happen though~~ :roll:

blakwhite : Bout' your question~Yup...but who knows if i'll add many more other than AtsuMina and Kojiyuu~Tnx for the comment~ :twisted:

nunku: are you an ESP!? LOL...well~~Just wait for it~~ Maybe yes and maybe no~~Tnx anyway!~ XD

Elo: Uhh~~I'll make sure there's a war in this fic~!~! Tnx for reading~~  :thumbsup

cisda83: Glad you like it~~I'll make sure the rest...So just wait kay'? Tnx for da' comment anyway~~  8)

kenjoy12: Cute moment eh? The next one will involve many hatred but in da' same time, there is a CUTE moment~~ :wub:

arrow27: Ahhh~~I'm really worried that you guys would not understand that part where the weird saying things...Tnx for da' comment~~ Appreciate it!!~!~ :twothumbs

Haruko: Is everyone in here an ESP?? Nah...just kiddin'..eheh~~A boy or a girl...Wait for the next chap then!~ Tnx for reading~~ :lol:

FlameHazeKatsu: Yeah~~The best right!? Well, Acchan personalities is a free-caring person so..that's why she let Takaboy in~ Misunderstanding!! Me too..i personally like misunderstanding~~Muahahah~~ :D

kurosawa87: Yupp~~She has been caught by Acchan's papa~~ Tnx for reading !~!~ :oops:


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Re: The Burden To Love You -Chapter 1-Misunderstanding?!- Updated!!
« Reply #12 on: June 11, 2013, 03:36:21 PM »

blakwhite : Bout' your question~Yup...but who knows if i'll add many more other than AtsuMina and Kojiyuu~Tnx for the comment~ :twisted:


hehe sorry  :D im worry if i will misunderstood too lol

i will waiting for you dieyg san :3
have a nice school lol

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It's okay...

I'll wait for your update

Yeah... school is more important...

Just update it if you have time...

Thank you

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Takaboy is meeting the father so soon? LOL XD


Taka...you are in trouble~~


Looking forward to see what will happen next :cow:


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Re: The Burden To Love You Chapter 2-Engagement and War -(13/6/13)
« Reply #15 on: June 13, 2013, 03:12:09 PM »
blakwhite: Mehh...I didn't have a nice school at all!!~Eheh anyway, pls look forward on this chapter~~ :twothumbs
cisda83: Thanks for waiting for it...And here is the next chap...hope u enjoy it~ :thumbsup
Kanata48: I'll surely do my best!! Tnx for commenting!!~ :deco:


~Yosha!! I've updated the 2nd chapter~~Hope you guys like it~~Well, as always...it may be short but i hope you still enjoy it~Ohh!! I forgot to say this, if there is an error in my english or writing, pls forgive me...english is not my mommy's tongue~~ :roll: :lol:
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Chapter 2: Engagement and war

*Y-Yabaiiiiiii!!!!*-Takamina scream in her heart in a REALLY awkward situation.

“Hey boy!! What cha’ doing with my daughter!?”-Acchan’s father shout.

*E-Eh!? He mistake me as a boy!? Crap…I must run!!*-Takamina think as she jump out of the bed and run toward the door.

“You bastard!! My daughter purity!!”-He said mistaking Takamina’s intention.

“Sir!! I didn’t even touch your daughter’s purity!!”-Takamina shout while running.

“I can’t accept a baby from an unknown guy!! So that’s it!! Marry her!!”-He said.

“But sir I’m a gi-“-Again, Takamina word being cut off when he speaks again.

“I’ll call your dad!! Where’s your cellphone!!??”-He then search all over Takamina’s pocket.

 “Huh!! Find it!! And look at you!! Wearing a skirt, a pervert marrying my daughter!!”-He continue.

“Like I said sir, I’m a gir-“-She hold her word when he calls Takamina’s dad.


[Phone conversation]

“MoshiMoshi…My daughter is marrying your son!! Right now!!”

“Ehh!? Since when did I have a male child!?”

“How could I know but your son here already touch my daughter purity!!”

“Really!? Aww…He’s grown up already~ But since when I have a son?”

“Just come here!! Let us settle it!! And I’ve heard your voice before who are you?”

“It’s Takahashi…And you? I’ve hear your voice too!!”

“Ehh!? Takahashi-san from the xxxxxxxx company!? Glad to have you there!”

“Boss!? Ahh…I’m honored to speak with you…”

“No, no, no…It’s a honored to speak with you, the best worker I’ve ever had!!”

“Ahhahaa!!! Oh yeah…about the project I’ve finished it boss~”



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“Oiii!! The hell are ya’ guys talkin’ about business!?”-Takamina is irritated as she said that.

 “Bwahahaha!! I’m lucky that you’ve touch my daughter~”-He suddenly said that.

*He change his mind quickly!!!*-She thinks.

“Yohooo!! Boss! I’m here already!!~”-Takamina’s dad show up from nowhere.

“Bwaaaa~ Takahashi-san, allow my daughter to marry your son here~”-Acchan’s papa said with a happy face.

“Auuu…Eh!? Marry!? Eh!? My Takamina want to marry a girl!?”-Takamina’s papa said that.

“Dad!! Help me!! I’m not marrying his daughter plus I’m a GIRL!!”-Takamina at last manage to explain that she is a girl.

“Ehhh!? You’re a girl!?”-Both the father said it with a shock tone.

“The hell you was shock with me being a girl dad?”-Takamina said with a half wide eyes.

“Muahahah!! But yeah…I really can’t let my daughter to marry your dau-“-His word stop when he see Acchan’s face.

“Bwahahaha!! Boss!! It’ll be my pleasure to let your daughter to marry my daughter~”-He said changing his mind.

“Takamina? Daddy? And who?”-Acchan said while rubbing her eyes.

“Ouhh my daughter-in-law…do you have any complaints last night with my daughter here?~”-Takamina’s papa said while a proud smile on his face.

“Unn? Complaints?”-Acchan ask with an innocent face.

“Auu!! You lucky little bastard~ You’re doin’ it with an innocent girl.”-Takamina’s papa said while patting Takamina’s shoulder.

“Atsuko my dear, you’re marrying this girl…His, I mean her father is someone I know…So you’re marrying her.”-Acchan’s papa said.

“Chotto!! I think this is wrong alright I’m a girl and she’s a girl!!”-Takamina trying to convince Acchan’s papa.

“What’s wrong with girl marrying a girl?”-He said.

“Am I still on earth!? Or the Earth itself is upside down!?”-Takamina shouts not believing.

“Engagement? How bout’ that? You guys can take it slowly~”-Acchan’s papa said.


-As Acchan’s papa said, the engagement has been set up and it’s end so fast with Yakuza and Mafia attending the engagement ceremony, the two newly couple has been forced to engaged, in each other eyes, there is hatred in the eyes. The two of them is placed in a room where there is no one, since Acchan’s dad is a rich/yakuza family.


After the ceremony ends...


“......”

“.........”

“....What are we gonna do now?”-Takamina said with a low tone but an angry tone is mixed too.

“....It’s all your fault Takamina!!”-Acchan seems to have a sulky face but still not facing at Takamina.

“Damn, you’re the one who invite me!! It’s your fault!!”-Takamina said with the same angry tone.

“And explain why did you sleep? Whose fault is that!?”-Acchan continues.

“Bla..bla..bla!! I’m going to school!! I would rather see that squirrel face!!”-Takamina said then changes back to her school uniform, and leave.

“I’m really wrong to choose you...”-Acchan said with a low tone, but seems like Takamina notice it.

“Huh? Say what?”-Takamina ask still with the same tone as before.

“Nothing!! Mind your own business!!”-said Acchan with a cold look.

“Damn it...It’s a wrong choice to fall in love with ya’...”-Takamina said with a low tone.

“Ah? Did you say something?”-Acchan ask Takamina.

“Tch...Mind your own business...”-Takamina said and reply her with the cold face as a payback.

“Just damn it!!”-They both said in their burning heart.


-Takamina decides to leave Acchan, who is her fiancée now, and has arrived to her school location that is Majisuka Gakuen. After her arrival, she was greeted by Yuko with a fist, that is a normal way for the dual fang to act like.


“Yuko gomen...I’m in a bad mood right now.”-Takamina said while catching Yuko’s fist.

“Ehh~I got some happy news for ya’, it’s Akihabara Gakuen...they’re declaring war, and Majisuka sent us to defeat all of them, c’mon!! We’re not going to waste this chance right?”-Yuko said.

*Damn it...Akihabara Gakuen!? That’s where Acchan is...Oh yeah, I’m going to beat her if she can fight!!*-Takamina think while having this fired up face.

“That’s the spirit Takamina!! But Majisuka doesn’t allow us to go yet!!”-Yuko said pouting which makes Takamina annoyed.

“Well...I’m gonna wait for it until I can give her a lesson!!”-Takamina said while smirking by herself.

“Takamina!! This is really rare for you to have a revenge on someone!!”-Yuko said.

“Who cares anyway, I’m just going to wait...”-Takamina said with a low tone still smirking.


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-Meanwhile in the Akihabara Gakuen, all the student council member is having a meeting and surely it’s about the declaring war with Majisuka Gakuen. In the meeting, there is two girl sitting there and they’re not part of the student council, it’s like there are an important person for the Akihabara Gakuen, more less like an ACE.


“Till’ next week, we’ll wait for the Majisuka, that’s all, thank you...”-The girl said.

“Jya...Yoroshiku ne, and you two, it’ll be our pleasure if you cooperate and leave your studies aside, concentrate on this war, because if we were to hold the Majisuka flag...our dream, as the student of Akihabra Gakuen will become true!!”-The other girl said relying the two ace to take care of this war.

“It’ll be our pleasure to be fighting after such a long time after the fall of Akihabara Gakuen...”-The girl with the long hair from before said.

“Ne Acchan, don’t you feel excited? If we were to win!! We can hold the eiko no ranku again!!”-Kojima Haruna, called NyanNyan who have the same position as Acchan, the ace.

“Ahh...I heard that Takahashi Minami is the dual fang, I’m looking forward to fight with her.”-Acchan said with a smirk.

“Guahhh!! It’s really rare for you to be so serious!!”-NyanNyan said as she pat Acchan’s shoulder.


*I’m really looking forward to this war, it is time I show Acchan/Takamina what I’m made off, and our school, our pride!!*-Both the delinquent couple wants to take this ‘eiko no ranku’ tittle, and to show their hatred for each other.
 


TBC...
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Aww...I know, i know...the pace is a little bit fast right? Maybe..but yeah...anyway, pls enjoy this one and comment is welcome~And i haven't insert this war thingy in here..maybe in chapter 3?? Meh..who knows~~About the engagement part...i'm sorry if it is too fast cuz' i have no time to update it..i bring my tablet to school and update it there~I'm such a delinquent~~ :3 anyway, enjoy it~~ :thumbsup :wink:


 

« Last Edit: June 13, 2013, 03:24:25 PM by Dieyg48 »
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Offline Elo

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Re: The Burden To Love You Chapter 2 -Engagement and War- (13/6/13)
« Reply #16 on: June 13, 2013, 03:51:12 PM »
hahaha their fathers are so funny ^^

they are engagement whooooo ^^

I cant wait for the war ........

update soon authore-san ^^
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Re: The Burden To Love You Chapter 2 -Engagement and War- (13/6/13)
« Reply #17 on: June 13, 2013, 04:13:11 PM »
Hahaha.... Takamina and Atsuko were to be married....

Their fathers were so funny...

Poor Takamina and Atsuko... they could not stand each other and kept blaming the other for their situation

MG and AG were declaring war with each other... and they sent Yuko&Minami and Haruna&Atsuko as their representatives...respectively

And both Minami and Atsuko were looking forward to take revenge on each other...

What's going to happen next

Can't wait

Thank you for the update

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Re: The Burden To Love You Chapter 2 -Engagement and War- (13/6/13)
« Reply #18 on: June 13, 2013, 04:27:33 PM »
WAAAAAR~!!  :hiakhiakhiak:

I can't wait for the Atsumina duel....honestly I want Takamidget to win  :shy2:

I totally liked Takabear's father!  :on lol:

He didn't know that he had a son than he was shocked when Takamina said she was a girl  :on lol:

I want a trolldad like him  :on gay:

Update soon I can't wait!  :hee:

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Re: The Burden To Love You Chapter 2 -Engagement and War- (13/6/13)
« Reply #19 on: June 13, 2013, 04:45:11 PM »
lol that dad's conversation  :rofl:

whoa war, akihabara vs majisuka :3
looking forward for next update  ;)

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