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Re: Heart Shaped Virus (MaYuki,CanNyan + Others) [Chapter 25 Updated]
« Reply #160 on: August 10, 2013, 02:21:09 AM »
@affiber - I'm having my doubts in writing a longer chapter because some others might get bored reading it.
So as much as possible I try to limit every chapter by two pages on the MS Word
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@leEwẬy - there will be another love triangle XD  :glasses:

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Chapter 25

A Certain Day for an Otaku (Mayu’s POV)



Tomorrow is the day that I’ve been waiting for
School Festival!
Last year,I didn’t enjoy the festival because I was all alone roaming around the campus
If not, playing my PSP in the courtyard
But this year..
I’m gonna enjoy it to the fullest because she’s here with me now
I’m not alone anymore..

“dum bee dum~”

“Watanabe-kun” Kaichou called me up

“yea?”

“are you heading home now? If so please do buy an extra cloth for tomorrow”

“leave it to me~”

“jaa, I’m counting on you”

Today, I will be heading home alone because Yuki and the others will go to the karaoke
They insisted that I should come but..
It’s kinda unpleasant to do that..
As much as possible I want Yuki to enjoy for herself
Of couse I want to enjoy myself too..
And I know just where to go..

“Irashaimasen” the clerk greeted me

“Dang. So many new anime releases~” my eyes widened

“ahh! This anime figurine is so cute~” I added

Tokisaki Kurumi..
Itsuka Kotori..
Yatogami Tohka..

I can’t choose which figurine should I buy!!!
The horror of it!!!

“oh well, might as well buy the three..”

Shopping for Anime...DONE
Bought the cloth...DONE
Eroge...NOT YET
Hue hue hue

As I went to the eroge shop to buy some Visual Novel
I passed through a dark alley way
I saw a girl being crowded by some thugs
Then..
I heard a scream of help
As I thought..
Without a second..
I immediately dashed to help the girl
A girl from Akiba All-Girls School
It took me just a minute to beat up those scumbag thugs

“you okay?” I asked the girl as I offer my hand

“thank you for saving me!” she then hugged me

“it’s okay” I smiled to her

“I’m Ono Erena”

“Watanabe Mayu”

“Watanabe Mayu? Is Watanabe Miyuki your sister?”

“how did you know?”

“well uhmm..Miyuki-chan is well known in our school of having a brother complex. Rumour has it that her brother’s name is Watanabe Mayu and he’s attending Akiba High” she put her index finger on her chin

“haha she does have a brother complex” I just laugh

“but recently..Miyuki-chan claimed that she will do anything to make a girl named..uhmm Kashiwagi Yuki to stay a from you and she plans on jinxing the play the she was involved in”

“Kashiwagi Yuki?...” it took me seconds to realize that she was referring to Yuki

“that’s right” she struck her fist

My eyes widened
What the hell!?
First Ota-san..now my sister!?
How the heck things turned that way!?
What’s with the sudden plan of Miyuki?
Damn. I better keep an eye on Yuki.
I have a very bad feeling about this


TBC
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Re: Heart Shaped Virus (MaYuki,CanNyan + Others) [Chapter 25 Updated]
« Reply #161 on: August 10, 2013, 02:28:39 AM »
is Pyon a comrade?? I hope she is.
hehe~ now that I think about it, Mayu, Erena, and Rabu-tan used to be kind of like the loli trio back then when AKB48 was relatively less popular - not really related

Hrm, I doubt I would get bored because of a shorter chapter... Rather, the readers sometimes lose momentum if things are too short... Since it's going to happen anyways... Sometimes ppl want things faster... for me, the main reason to end a chapter is because the span of time the chapter takes place in kind of ends or something... I see that you tend to change the POV every chap basically, but mrm~ your choice~ long chapters are always welcome with me~ there's a feeling of satisfaction after reading them~ limiting the pg number is sometimes limiting the possibilities~ just write at your own pace~ (personally, I find that rather than pg count, word count might be better since dialogue takes up a lot of space)

I think I wrote too much here on this... well~ longest comment on this topic by me so far!

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Re: Heart Shaped Virus (MaYuki,CanNyan + Others) [Chapter 25 Updated]
« Reply #162 on: August 10, 2013, 02:42:51 AM »
is Pyon a comrade?? I hope she is.
hehe~ now that I think about it, Mayu, Erena, and Rabu-tan used to be kind of like the loli trio back then when AKB48 was relatively less popular - not really related

Hrm, I doubt I would get bored because of a shorter chapter... Rather, the readers sometimes lose momentum if things are too short... Since it's going to happen anyways... Sometimes ppl want things faster... for me, the main reason to end a chapter is because the span of time the chapter takes place in kind of ends or something... I see that you tend to change the POV every chap basically, but mrm~ your choice~ long chapters are always welcome with me~ there's a feeling of satisfaction after reading them~ limiting the pg number is sometimes limiting the possibilities~ just write at your own pace~ (personally, I find that rather than pg count, word count might be better since dialogue takes up a lot of space)

I think I wrote too much here on this... well~ longest comment on this topic by me so far!

hmm for now Pyon will be a comrade..but for the next season..she will be uhmm let's just say third party?  :kekeke:

I'm still not used to 3rd Person point of view in writing a chapter and for me (own opinion XD) changing every POV per chapter will be easily understood (I don't know about what others feel about this though)

but maybe I should try writing a longer chapter for a change  :glasses:

hue hue thank you for the advice~ I really appreciate advices  :kneelbow:
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Re: Heart Shaped Virus (MaYuki,CanNyan + Others) [Chapter 25.5 Updated]
« Reply #163 on: August 10, 2013, 03:48:07 AM »
Chapter 25.5

The Plan (Lovetan’s POV)


Started with just a favor to help Sashii-kun with his love problems
Never thought that we will have a mutual interest
Torturing Kashiwagi Yuki that is
Miyuki-chan is such a genius!
Now…
Let the torturing begin!

“Miyuki-chan..for Plan A what shall we do?”

“tomorrow is the School Festival right?”

“yea…”

“before the Carmen play starts. I’ve asked someone from Akiba High to kidnap Kashiwagi Yuki and locked her up in the Janitor’s Closet” she smirked

“bad girl” I smirked too

“I know..” she gave me a sinister smile

“after that? What about her role?”

“as for that..I will pretend to pass by the backstage on coincidence and happened to hear that Kashiwagi Yuki is missing and they can’t find her anywhere”

“and present yourself to act as Micaela in the place of the missing Kashiwagi?”

“Bingo~”

“what about Romeo and Juliet?”

“of course.. you will be the one taking Kashiwagi Yuki’s role as Juliet”

“haha yea!”

“but.. we better be careful with Oniisama”

“why?”

“I don’t know..I just got a feeling that he will make our plan unsuccessful”

“we should probably make a back-up plan”

“I think so too.. we probably ask Rino-kun about this..”
With that said the two of us called up Sashii-kun to come in Poirot Café Shibuya
At first, he was hesitant
But when Miyuki-chan black mailed him..
He eventually agreed on meeting us

“and? What do you need?” he seemed to be annoyed

“I just want you to help us with our plan” Miyuki-chan gave him a sinister smiled

“what plan?”

“Operation: Torture Kashiwagi Yuki” I said

“what do I need to do?”

“should Oniisama found out about this plan, I want you to verify our innocence” Miyuki-chan said with a serious face

“that’s it?”

“you need to prepare a get-away car in case things got pretty bad” I answered him

“will an SUV suffice?”

“much appreciated and oh.. look for some abandon building nearby”

“oi oi.. do you want to get arrested?” Sashii-kun said in worry

“don’t worry the police won’t be involved in this” Miyuki-chan claimed

“better be.. I don’t want to get arrested. That will only make me look bad in the eyes of Miyawaki-san”

“as much as possible I can assure the both of you that the police won’t be involved at this” I said

“Oh God. If you ask me your plans are definitely dangerous”

“it’s harmless” I gave him a sinister smile

“yea..definitely harmless” Miyuki-chan smirked

“God.. I’m sorry that I’m about to help these fools”

Problems fixed
All things are planned and in order
Should the police be involve in this case, I’m immune on being arrested thanks to my father’s honor in the city.
Sorry Sashii-kun and Miyuki-chan but it looks like you two will have to be arrested if things get worst
By the end of all these, I will be the one who’s gonna win this showdown.

TBC
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Re: Heart Shaped Virus (MaYuki,CanNyan + Others) [Chapter 25.5 Updated]
« Reply #164 on: August 10, 2013, 04:00:19 AM »
hehe~ just realized that in my advice thingy I accidently wrote shorter instead of longer... well, whatever

getting arrested for that is a funny idea...

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Re: Heart Shaped Virus (MaYuki,CanNyan + Others) [Chapter 25.5 Updated]
« Reply #165 on: August 10, 2013, 04:26:18 AM »
evil lovetan is evil  :?

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Re: Heart Shaped Virus (MaYuki,CanNyan + Others) [Chapter 25.5 Updated]
« Reply #166 on: August 10, 2013, 08:46:17 AM »
NOOOOOO~~~~ Lovetan and Milky are going to kipnap and be a replacement :stoned:
****** :mon headbang: Sorry, I'm over reacted :mon sweat:
Now Mayu knew about the plan but if he could do if in time, that's the big question :mon beam:
Hope he'll be :prayers: :mon pray:
Anyway, update soon, please :kneelbow:
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Re: Heart Shaped Virus (MaYuki,CanNyan + Others) [Chapter 26 Part A Updated]
« Reply #167 on: August 10, 2013, 11:45:17 AM »
Chapter 26 Part A

Fate like Romeo and Juliet [Part 1] (Mayu’s POV)



I couldn’t stop thinking about what Ono-san has said.
About the plans that my sister has made.
Miyuki is a good girl, but she’s scary when she’s on “Imouto Mode”
I kept thinking negative things throughout the night before I eventually slept

The Next Day..

I woke up early than usual
At last.. it’s the school festival!
I’ve ready all the thing I will bring in the School Festival
All I have to do now is pick up Yuki so that I can keep an eye on her

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“Ma-kun omatase~” she smiled to me

“let’s head to the school” I said

“hai~”

While driving, I couldn’t keep any positive thoughts at all
I’ve asked myself many time on what’s wrong with me..
Yuki is still here..
Nothing bad will happen to her..
I’m sure Miyuki wouldn’t do such thing to her..
She’s exaggerating..
Maybe?
I don’t know..
I’m confused..

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When we arrived at the school..
It was already filled with people
It was to be expected.

“Ma-kun~ the play will start in an hour..can we roam around first?” she said while smiling

“of course” I smiled back

For the meantime..
I should enjoy myself for a while and set aside the problem
Miyuki loves me so much that she wouldn’t bear to see me sad
She knows that doing something bad to Yuki will make me sad
So it’s impossible that she will do such things

“Ma-kun! I want to eat takoyaki!” she smiled like a child

“hai hai~”

After she finished eating the takoyaki..


“I want to eat Taiyaki!”

“hai hai~” I just went with the flow

After she ate Taiyaki

“Ma-kun! Cotton Candy~”

“hai hai~”

After eating the Cotton Candy

“Ma-kun~ I want Fried Yakisoba~” she smiled

“hai hai~”

After that..

“Ma-kun~”

“Yuki? What do you want to eat now?” I smiled

“my stomach hurts!!” she was about to cry

“hah~ that’s what you get from eating so much~” I just smiled

“itaii yo~” she complained

“here, drink this medicine”

“why do you have such medicine with you?” she was confused

“I brought it with me, in case your stomach hurts”

“so you predicted that I was going to eat so much?”

“well, yea” I patted her head



“such considerate boyfriend” she blushed

“now you go on and drink it. Let’s head to the auditorium afterwards. We don’t want to be late in the play right?”

“unn” she nodded in response

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Auditorium [Back Stage]
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“Watanabe-kun~ Kashiwagi-san~ there you are!” Kaichou exclaimed

“now go on and change into your costume..we only have 15 minutes left” Kasai-san explained

“Ma-kun..I’m going to change now~”

“hai..” I said in a weird tone

I want to stop her..
I want to stop her from changing..
I have very bad feeling about this..
Yuki..Please come back ASAP

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After 10 minutes
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“where the heck is Yuki..” I mumbled

“Kashiwagi-san..isn’t she a bit late?” Kuramochi-san was worried

“Kashiwagi Yuki! So unprofessional!” Ota-san exclaimed

“dang. We only have 5 minutes left!” Ishida-san said in frustration

“Kaichou..I’m not gonna act until Act 2 right?” I asked

“yea..each Act will last about 5 minutes..so if you plan on finding her..you only have 10 minutes plus 5 minutes of waiting time..all in all you have 15 minutes to find her..” Kaichou said

“jaa..should I be late..please allow Kasai-san to act in my place” I then dashed

“be careful Watanabe-kun” Kasai-san said

Yuki..
Wait for me..

TBC
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Re: Heart Shaped Virus (MaYuki,CanNyan + Others) [Chapter 26 Part B Updated]
« Reply #168 on: August 10, 2013, 03:23:21 PM »
Chapter 26 Part B

Fate like Romeo and Juliet [Part 2] (Yuki’s POV)


The play was about to start so I was required to change into my costume
As I head towards the dressing room…
A man wearing a black coat suddenly asked for directions..
He was looking for the classroom near the Facility Room
With that said I led him
But..
When I was about to go back to the dressing room..
He suddenly sneaked behind me and covered my face with a handkerchief

The rest of what happened..
I don’t know

“unn…”

“I see you’re awake now, Tenshi-sama” I heard a voice

“M-M-Masaki-san!?”

“yo..” he smiled

“where am I!?”

“you’re in the Facility Room~”

“let me go! I need to go to the Auditorium! The play is about to start!”

“no can do sweetie” he smirked at me

“why!?”

“a certain someone told me not to release you until the two plays are over”

“let me go!!!”

I desperately tried to separate the ropes tied in my hands
But it was tied strong unto my hands
I need to go now!
Ma-kun is waiting for me!

“unn~~”

“hehe you’re so cute when you try to break free but sad to say you won’t break free from those ropes tied like that” he smiled

“just you wait! Ma-kun will come and rescue me!”

“haha probably not! After all the play is starting right now! There’s no way he’ll rescue you!” he gave me a sinister smile

“he’ll rescue me!”

“oh is that so? Then for the mean time..while waiting for him..we don’t we enjoy ourselves?”

“what do you mean?”  I was terrified

“you know what I mean..”

Masaki-san then opened up his zipper
He proceeds to take my panties
Ma-kun..
We’re connected by a feeling in our very heart and soul right?
If you can feel it..
Please rescue me!
Masaki-san is about to rape me!
I need you Ma-kun!

“Ma-kun…!” tears started to fell from eyes

*door slam*

“Yuki!!!!”

I then saw him..
A Hero that is an ally of justice
The person I love the most..

“Ma-kun..!!!”

He then dashed towards Masaki-san and started to beat him up
Even though Masaki-san was already lying on the floor..
Ma-kun still kicked him up
He let loose of the roped that was tied in my hands
Then he noticed that I wasn’t wearing my panties
That prompted him to kick Masaki-san even more
I never seen him so angry like that

“you asshole! How dare you try to rape Yuki!!!” he shouted

“Ma-kun! That’s enough! You’re gonna kill him!”

“I will kill him right now!!!” angered has eaten Ma-kun up

“Ma-kun! Stop! Please! I beg you!” I was hugging him

He then fall unto his feet and was about to cry

“I don’t know what will I do if he raped you..” he was crying

I hold unto his cheeks and kissed him to calm him down
I was about to part from his lips when he pulled me and kiss me even more..
He then proceeds to kiss my neck and my collarbone

“Yuki..I love You..I’ll die if something were to happen to you” he whispered in my ear

“Ma-kun..” I blushed

“I had a bad feeling since last night…that you will be in trouble”

“you predicted another scenario..you’re such an awesome kareshi” I smiled to him

“when you didn’t come back after you said that you will change into your costume..I became even more worried”

“that’s when Masaki-san kidnapped me”

“He’s gotta be working for somebody!”

He then got closer to the lying Masaki-san
He pulled his hair out and asked him a question

“you’re under whom?”

“I won’t tell!” Masaki-san shouted

“want me to kill you?” he gave Masaki-san some death glare

“Sashihara Rino” Masaki-san confessed

“I’ll kill that bitch!”

“Ma-kun! Save that for later! We gotta go and head back to the auditorium!”

“sh*t! I forgot!”

With that said..
I put my panty on again and dashed with him towards the auditorium..
I tightly gripped his hands as the two of us dashed
I don’t want to let go of this warm hand.

TBC
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Re: Heart Shaped Virus (MaYuki,CanNyan + Others) [Chapter 26 Part B Updated]
« Reply #169 on: August 10, 2013, 04:08:36 PM »
ah... sasshi gets the blame

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Re: Heart Shaped Virus (MaYuki,CanNyan + Others) [Chapter 26 Part B Updated]
« Reply #170 on: August 10, 2013, 06:23:46 PM »
That son of the ***** :on voodoo: How dare he trying to rape Yuki :temper:  :mon headbang:
Mayu just saved Yuki in time, I'm feel so relief now :on drink:
Sasshi's the one who did that but actually are Milky and Lovetan told him to do :angry1:
The first play is going well now, I guess :bigdeal: How about the second one :dunno:
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Re: Heart Shaped Virus (MaYuki,CanNyan + Others) [Chapter 26 Part C Updated]
« Reply #171 on: August 10, 2013, 08:22:13 PM »
Chapter 26 Part C

Fate like Romeo and Juliet  [Part 3] (Mayu’s POV)



After I saved Yuki from a bastard, we dashed towards the Auditorium.
We only have 3 minute before the end of Act 2
Just in the nick of time.
I will let the School Festival pass by peaceful before I proceed to hunt the people responsible in kidnapping Yuki.
That Sashihara Rino will not be able to plan this alone, he must be working for someone too.
And if I am correct, he is either working for Miyuki and Ota-san..
But..
I still don’t have proof so I can’t just judge them like that.

“Ma-kun..I’ll go and change now~”

“I’ll for outside of the dressing room”

“unn” my babe nodded

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“there you are!!” Kuramochi-san exclaimed

“come..it’s your scene already Watanabe-kun~” Kasai-san said

“jaa..I’ll see you later Yuki”

“break a leg~” she said with a smile


The acts just passed by in a flash
And without knowing it.
We’re finished.
I can hear applauses and all kinds of cheer.
To think after Yuki’s kidnap scene, I will get to smile like this because of positive feedbacks about the play
With “Carmen” finished, Romeo and Juliet will be up next.. The most awaited part of the School Festival

“Fujie-san..” I called her up

“do you need something Watanabe-kun?”

Yuki’s friend has the right to know what happened to her
If I told them about the incident also, they might able to help me..
But I think I should shrug it to them calmly
With that, I told Fujie-san all about it and asked her a favour.
I asked her to keep an eye on Yuki while I investigate things before the play starts in 20 minutes

“Watanabe-kun.. I’m not judging anyone but don’t you think that Sashihara Rino is working under someone?” she said with a deep voice

“that’s what I thought too”

“I mean, the plan was made too well and as for the motive..don’t you think it involves the play itself?”

“what do you mean?”

“hmm.. like someone doesn’t like Yuki being on the play?”

Doesn’t like Yuki..
Play..
One person matched those traits
Ota Aika-san

“Fujie-san, I’ll investigate thing now. Please do what I said” I bowed down to her

“of course Watanabe-kun.” She patted me on the shoulder


I dashed out of the classroom
I need to find out who the hell is Sashihara Rino and what’s his connection to either Miyuki or Ota-san
I need concrete evidence that will pint point who is the master mind of all of these
I cannot bear to find someone being endangered just because  of some jealousy

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Library
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14 minutes before the play starts.
In this event, I need to race against time.
I’ve went to the library to shorten the time of the investigation since it has the database of  all the students in Akiba Private High
As much as possible I want the help of Kaichou but this case only involves me, Yuki , the play and the culprit so Kaichou has nothing to do with this
And should I need someone’s help I know who I will contact
Sayanii..

“Sashihara Rino…” I murmured his name

There! Found his data!

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Name: Sashihara Rino
Age: 17 yrs. Old
Class: 1-C
Guardian: Sashihara Ryuu
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Sashihara Ryuu..
Ahh! He’s one of the employees in Otousama’s company!!
I get it know..
Everything makes sense..
But..
I still don’t know whether if Miyuki or Ota-san is the culprit behind all of this
But I do know that jealousy is the main cause
I better contact Sayanii now…
I have a super ultimate bad feeling..

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Auditorium
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“Fujie-san did something happened while I was away?” I need to verify things

“so far nothing has happened” she looks worried

“thank you for your help”

“I’m grateful that I could be a help to you Watanabe-kun..”

“Ma-kun~” Yuki called me up

As I turn my head towards her..
I saw Yuki in her costume already..
She’s so beautiful
A real Goddess is right before my eyes

“Ma-kun..please stop staring at me like that..it’s so embarrassing” Yuki blushed

“it’s just that you’re so beautiful right now…” I blushed too

“and you’re so manly in that costume..”

“…” I never said a word and just hugged her instead

“Please stand by~ the play is about to start~” one of my classmate said

“good luck Yuki” I smiled to her

“good luck too” she smiled back

Then..
The curtains rose signalizing that the play will start now..
Nothing so far has happened so I’m slightly relived
At the audience seat..
I can see Okaasan , Otousama ,Sayanii , Yukiteru-ojiisan and Miyuki
They all here to witness the play so I can’t afford to screw up!

Minutes Later…

“nothing has happened” I can see Fujie-san sigh in relief

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Final Scene
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“Thou desperate pilot, now at once run on the dashing rocks thy sea-sick weary bark! Here's to my love!
O true apothecary! Thy drugs are quick. Thus with a kiss I die.”
I acted

*falls down*

“What's here? a cup, closed in my true love's hand? Poison, I see, hath been his timeless end: O churl! drunk all, and left no friendly drop To help me after? I will kiss thy lips; Haply some poison yet doth hang on them, To make die with a restorative.” Yuki acted back

*falls down*

*curtains close*

*applause*

The “Romeo and Juliet” play finished without a hitch
We receive positive feedback from the audiences and the teachers
I’m really happy.
Yuki and I then decided to celebrate alone
As the two of us walk pass the classroom..
I can see some suspicious man..
Then..
The sun shone on him revealing to have a sniper that was aimed at Yuki..
My eyes widened when he pull the trigger

“Yuki!!!!” I shoved her and took the bullet instead

Right now..
I feel no pain.
My visions became blurry and all I can see is pure white
But I still can hear Yuki shout

“Ma-kun?”

“Ma-kun!!!!”

TBC
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Re: Heart Shaped Virus (MaYuki,CanNyan + Others) [Chapter 26 Part C Updated]
« Reply #172 on: August 10, 2013, 09:57:49 PM »
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Re: Heart Shaped Virus (MaYuki,CanNyan + Others) [Chapter 26 Part C Updated]
« Reply #173 on: August 10, 2013, 10:25:23 PM »
It suddenly got so serious!

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Re: Heart Shaped Virus (MaYuki,CanNyan + Others) [Chapter 26 Part D Updated]
« Reply #174 on: August 11, 2013, 04:17:58 AM »
Chapter 26 Part D

Fate like Romeo and Juliet [Part 4] (Yuki’s POV)


The play finished without a hitch.
We’ve received positive feedbacks and a round of applauses from the audiences
Ma-kun and I intended to celebrate with just the two of us.
As we walk together will holding each other’s hand
He suddenly shoved me and before my eyes..
Ma-kun was shot near the heart…

“Ma-kun?” I said with a little air of idiocy

“Ma-kun!!!”

“somebody help me!!!”

I shout on the top of my lungs which prompted the other student’s to see our situation
and call up for an ambulance..
Reina then passed by and happened to saw the incident along with Ishida-kun, Yagami-kun and Kanon-chan
They were shocked as hell

“oh god! Watanabe-kun!!” Reina’s widened

“Kumi! Help me!” Ishida-kun said while he was about to carry Ma-kun

“got it!” Yagami-kun assisted him and they were on both sides supporting Ma-kun’s arms

“Ma-kun!!!” I couldn’t help but cry

“Yuki..” Reina hugged me

“it will be okay Yuki-senpai..” Kanon-chan comforted me


As the two boys take a flight downstairs..
They met along the way Ma-kun’s parents and Miyuki
Rina-sensei couldn’t  help but cry seeing her one and only son covered with blood and is on a verge of death
Mr. Watanabe called up his driver to get the car ready so they can take Ma-kun to the hospital


“Mayu-kun… please don’t die! Okaasan still wants to bond with you..” Rina-sensei said while crying

“Oniisama!!! Don’t die!!!” Miyuki was crying as hell and looked up to me with a upturned eyes


Seeing the situation..
Some students volunteered to help assist Ma-kun on the car
I couldn’t help but ask myself on why did the culprit shot him anyway..
He didn’t do something wrong..
Is this shooting incident related on what happened earlier?
If that’s the case..
Then I better call the police..

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After a minute of driving..
We arrive at Akiba Private Hospital
The paramedics immediately rushed Ma-kun to the Emergency Room
His vital signs are getting low..
The doctor told us to prepare for the worst case scenario..

On the glass window..
I can see the doctors taking out the bullet in Ma-kun’s body
He was being saved

 “vital signs getting low..blood pressure getting low!” the nurse said

“Ma-kun..please be all right” I’m down on my feet while Reina hugged me all of a sudden

“perform CPR” the doctor said

Then I saw the heart rate monitor from outside

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“Ma-kun….” I was about to go insane

“get the defibrillator!”

“here it is!”

“STAND CLEAR CHARGING! 200 joules!” the Doctor shouted

“clear!” the nurse shouted on response

“Doctor! Still no vital signs!”

“still no vital signs?” the doctor ask

“STAND CLEAR CHARGING!” the Doctor shouted again

“clear!”

“no vital signs!!!”

“dammit..change it in 360 joules”

“last..”

“Ma-kun…” I was crying hard

“STAND CLEAR CHARGING!”

“clear!”

“no response”

“nothing we can do..”

The doctor shake his head..
Kept silent..
Look at his watch
And pronounced the time..
I knew what happened

“Mayu!!!!!!” Rina-sensei rushed to Ma-kun’s body and cried hard

Ma-kun’s dad and Miyuki was on their feet and cried
Otousan couldn’t cry at all but he was about to go insane seeing his little master like that
Ishida-kun and Yagami-kun just kept quiet and bowed down their heads
On the other hand..
Reina hugged my tightly and she too, was crying..
Ota-san suddenly arrived

“Mayu-kun!!!!” she shouted and rushed towards his body

“Yuki..aren’t you gonna go?” Reina asked

“I can’t…I might lose my mind here..” I answered her


I just kept silent while my tears fall from my eyes down to my face
I’m not ready yet..
I’m not ready to face the reality that the person I love is already gone
My good memories with him suddenly flashed inside my mind
Including his promises and our plans for the future
Is our fate the same with Romeo and Juliet?
Is our love gonna end up in tragedy too?
I don’t know what to do now..

TBC
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Re: Heart Shaped Virus (MaYuki,CanNyan + Others) [Chapter 26 Omake Updated]
« Reply #175 on: August 11, 2013, 08:08:31 AM »
Chapter 26 Omake

The Plan that Backfired (Lovetan’s POV)


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Earlier..
Before the start of Romeo and Juliet
Courtyard
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“What!? Oniisama rescued Kashiwagi Yuki!?” Miyuki-chan was shocked

“yes…” I said with upturned eyes

“what’ll the two of you do now?” Sashii-kun said

“Plan B” Miyuki-chan said

“Operation: Assassinate Kashiwagi Yuki”

“dang. You’re willing to kill someone just for love!?” Sashii-kun was shocked

“yes!!!” Miyuki-chan and I said

“so? Who’ll be the one to do the killing?”

“Matsumoto Takasu” Miyuki-chan said with a straight face

“the wanted killer” Sashii-kun was shocked

“all he got to do is kill Kashiwagi Yuki when she goes out from  either the Auditorium or the classroom. Good thing there is a nearby building close to these places” Miyuki-chan explained

“I’m sorry..but I won’t help you now. You’re on your own” Sashii-kun left


Who would have thought that this plan..
That started from jealousy
Will eventually end the life of the person I love
Instead of the person I hate
Even I cry blood..
Even I shed litres of tears
Even I commit sepuku
They won’t able to bring Mayu-kun back..
Mayu-kun won’t wake up anymore..

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Re: Heart Shaped Virus (MaYuki,CanNyan + Others) [Chapter 27 Updated]
« Reply #176 on: August 11, 2013, 09:19:10 AM »
I have a confession to make.. :depressed:
When I first planned this fan fic..
I intended to kill Mayu at the end of chapter 25 and shift the paring from MaYuki to SaeYuki :sweat:
but..thinking about it.. MaYuki fans will kill me if I do that.. :imdead:

and with that said, this fic was born~

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Chapter 27

Times I Have to Be Strong (Yuki’s POV)


He does not answer to my callings anymore
He has fallen cold
He has no pulse nor will
He’s gone..
He already gone
I don’t accept the fact the he’s dead already
But…
Why does it that I can’t cry that much?
Am I about to go insane?


“Reina..why is it that life is unfair?” I asked my best friend such question while crying

“Yuki..” she cried too

“All I want is to have a happy ever after with him..”

“I know..please be strong..”

“I don’t know if I can be strong…I can’t go on knowing that he will never wake up..”


Reina then suddenly hugged me tightly
 

“don’t you want to go and see his body for the last time?” she asked

“I better do that..” I smile while crying


Since he’s already 2 hours dead..
He’s body is in the morgue right now..
By the request of his parents..
The staffs in the morgue didn’t touch the body of Ma-kun until they were told so
It seems the Watanabe Family has a tradition on not taking out the blood or internal organs of the dead family member until the last day of the funeral

“Ma-kun..” I caressed his dead body

“Yuki..” Reina looked at me with sad expression

He’s still cute even though he’s dead now..
As expected from the person I love..
While looking through his handsome face
I remember the time when we first met
The times we both enjoy each other’s company
And the time we first kissed
I will not bury that good memories
It will always stay in my heart..
Forever…and ever
For Eternity..

“Ma-kun..you’re such liar…” I was about to cry again

“I thought you wouldn’t leave me…” my tears fell on his face

I got close to his ears and whispered while holding his cold hand

“please don’t leave me..”

I felt his hand move..
OH GOD!
Is this a scenario in a horror movie!!??

“REINA!!” I went away from his body and hugged Reina

“what’s wrong…?” Reina was puzzled

“Just now…I felt Ma-kun’s hand move..” I’m trembling

“what!? Oh no!!!” Reina was frightened too

Then..
We heard some strange noise

“hnnggg..”

“kyaa!!!! Haru-kun!!!!”

*slam*

“Reinyan!! What’s wrong!!??” Ishida-kun heard Reina’s scream from outside

“we heard some strange noise!” I explained

“what? Haha you gotta be joking..” Ishida-kun laughed

In the midst of that
All of a sudden..
The dead body of Ma-kun suddenly got up

“ugh..what time is it?”
“kyaaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!” the three of us squeal In fear

“ugh? Yuki?” he looked at me

“it’s a ghost!!!!!” Ishida-kun dashed all of a sudden

“Haru-kun!!!!” Reina dashed out too

“OH GOD!!!!!” I said in fear

“Yuki…” he was getting close to me..

“don’t come near!!! GHOST!!!”

“I’m no Ghost..” he held my hand and it was really warm

“warm..” I murmured

“I’m alive..” he smiled

I caressed his cheeks to verify if he’s really alive

“I’m not dreaming right?” I said

“no..” he kissed my forehead

“Ma-kun!” I hugged him tightly and tears fell from eyes


After that horror scene..
I called up some doctors and explained on what happened..
They checked his vital signs and blood pressure
All of which are normal
Ma-kun is really alive!
And more over..
He’s okay now!
But..
Reina and Ishida-kun is still trembling on what happened
Ma-kun’s parents arrived at the hospital around 30 minutes after that..
At first they couldn’t believe on what happened..
But eventually the two of them cried because their son is alive..
This is miracle indeed..
A miracle given by the Gods
For the people who loved each other as much as their lives..
A miracle for those who love the most..
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Re: Heart Shaped Virus (MaYuki,CanNyan + Others) [Chapter 27 Updated]
« Reply #177 on: August 11, 2013, 11:48:25 AM »
I've been a silent reader of this fan fiction since it's first release. This fic is really interesting because it features both romance and mystery. Being a super mystery fan, I've enjoyed cracking the codes in Family Feud Arc. You're are really good in writing mystery. I'm looking forward for the Side Stories of this fic as well as the Kashiwagi Family arc.
and oh please do insert some more mystery in this fic~ me want mystery!  :onioncheer:

PS: good thing you didn't kill Mayu at the end of chapter 25 and shifted the couples as SaeYuki  :ding:
one more thing, 24/7 in love is good too  :farofflook:

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Re: Heart Shaped Virus (MaYuki,CanNyan + Others) [Chapter 27 Updated]
« Reply #178 on: August 11, 2013, 03:02:01 PM »
Wise choice~~~ If you shifted Mayuki to Saeyuki , I'd sure that I'm at your home now :shifty:
Everything is back to normal now :on drink:
I wonder what'll Mayu do to Sasshi and the other :dunno:
Update soon, please :kneelbow:
Working on translating an awesome Kojiyuu fanfic, right now ☆〜(ゝ。∂) :mon beam:

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Re: Heart Shaped Virus (MaYuki,CanNyan + Others) [Chapter 27 Omake Updated]
« Reply #179 on: August 12, 2013, 02:25:22 PM »
Chapter 27 Omake [Takes Place Before at the End of Chapter 27]

The Afterlife (Mayu’s POV)


I was shot.
Then my vision became blurry
All I can see is pure white..
Ha..
I’m a goner now..
I want to get married with Yuki but seems that’s impossible now..

I then woke up in a place where there is harmony
A place that it is impossible to have in earth
A manifestation of Utopia itself..

Then..
A woman walked in my way

“it seems you’re arrived already Mayu-kun” the woman smiled

“who are you?”

“Kashiwagi Yuka”

“are you Yuki’s mother?”

“yep” the woman answered me

“what am I doing in this place?” I was puzzled

“you’ve died already” she said with a sad tone

“is that so..if that’s the case then this is the Afterlife..”

“yes”

“then..I could see Megumi-san again!”

I was about to dash when suddenly..

“Mayu-kun”

Megumi-san was standing in front of me already..
Good timing..
I want to ask her all of the question I bear in mind..
I want to know why did she do that..
Why did she hid everything from me
And played the antagonist in my life
“Megumi-san!” I hugged her

“you’ve grown so much” she hugged me back

“you don’t how much I’m happy to see you again”

“good thing you never hated me after all of the revelations” she was worried

“of course not..”

“Mayu-kun.. I want you to know that I did all of those to protect you..”

“I guess so..” I answered

“but Mayu-kun..”

“yea?”

“it’s not the right time for you to be here” She smiled at me

“why?” I was puzzled

“my daughter still needs you..” Yuka-san answered me

“that’s right..after all she will face a big dilemma soon” Megumi-san said with a straight face


Before I could ask what they mean..
They started to fade..
And my consciousness fade too alongsides
I wonder what they meant?
Didn’t we face a dilemma just now?
And now,Yuki will have to face another dilemma?
Life is unfair..

Then..

My consciousness regained again
But this time I didn’t woke up in Utopia..
I woke up in the hospital morgue
Ah..they weren’t kidding..
I was really dead already..
I then get up all of a sudden much to Yuki and the others surprise
The hell..
They think I’m a ghost!
Oh well..
It’s not like that I can blame them~

TBC
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