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Maeda Atsuko, a famous author for different genre. She has the beauty, brains, talents, body and the money. And I’m her student-girlfriend-slave and so on…
It all started because of my stupidity...and arrogance.It all started with a stupid arguement with my editor. I' m a reknowned author of many horror novels; some were even adapted in movies. Who would thought that my life will change because of it. Because of this I met the person who made me feel a strange feeling…
A ceratin feeling…that I never thought that exist.

"Takamina..." my editor stared at me sternly.Then she sighed, "Tell me what is this...?"
“ My manuscript?" I stated.
"Of course I know that idiot.”
“So?” I dead-panned eventhough I knew what she was trying to imply.
My manuscript was just a pile of papers with some crap written on it.
The glasses-wearing editor sighed for how many times I wonder?
“Takamina…” She gave me her infamous but as effective as ever cute squirrel-like eyes. Usually even I can’t ressist that look but this time I’m desperate.
“Do you really need to do this? I was just joking that time…”
“I’m serious squirrel.”
My editor is Oshima Yuko. And believe it or not, despite of her childish behavior…and pervertness, she is a sucessful person. She was the one who discovered me and since then she became my editor. I won’t be in this industry if it weren’t because if her. I’m really thankful to her.
“Why can’t you just give up on the romance genre and go back to horror….” She whined.
“Honestly…how old are you?” I sighed, “…And besides it was you who provoked me.” I reminded her.
“That’s why I’m telling you…I’M SORRY!!! Please go back to the horror genre…the fans are missing you already!!! I just received a complaint from the management that your fans were bothering them, always asking your return!!!” she begged.
I sighed feeling a little bit guilty about my fans. But I’m desperate.
“I just need to take a break from that genre for a while...”
“…and try writing ROMANCE!?”
I nodded, “I’m free to write whatever I want…”
She massaged her temples, “Indeed. However can’t you choose a genre that is AT LEAST CLOSER TO YOUR SPECIALTY? Or IN your comfort zone? For example…mystery, thrillers..suspense…” her aura turned serious, “…Takamina. Have you been in love before?”
I looked away. I can’t say anything to contradict that.
I’ve never been in love before. I never believe in love afterall. For me, love is just a silly crap that only gives you pain and sadness. For me tragic endings are far more realistic than those happy endings. When I was young my grandma loves to tell horror and supernatural stories. Get the picture? Maybe that is the reason behind my talents on that genre.
To make the story short, ROMANCE IS NOT MY THING.
But my dream is to become a reknowned author in the world…For writing different genre. I already tried comedy,and as far as Yuko’s review, it was good. And my fans started loving it too. But they want the horror more.
Yuko sighed, “…Anyways, revise your manuscript and send it to me again.”
I just nodded at her and went straight to my aparment.

Have you ever thought of writing a love story? Those stories that can make you blush or maybe go screaming because of its overloading sweetness?
Apparently, the thought of writing a love story never crossed the mind of our midget protagonist.
The midget author has been staring at her laptop for three hours. The midget sighed. Then she continued staring at her laptop for another minute. The she sighed again. It has been like that for three hours now. Staring at her computer, as if her stare can help her to type something.
‘That squirell got me.’ The midget thought annoyed.
Her train of thoughts was cut as her cellphone beside her started to vibrate. She picked it up and pressed the answer button.
“How is the story going Takamidget?”
“How dare you call me like that when your height is just a FEW centimeters more than mine.”
“Hmm…I see…lemme guess…you haven’t type a single letter?” the squirell-like author stated like a fact and not as a question.
“…I have typed…” she stated firmly. ‘…it’s just that I’ve erased it.’ She added in her mind.
The person on the other line sighed, “Anyways…just sent your manuscript to me.” After that she hanged-up.
The midget author sighed.
“Honestly…can someone show me how to write a love story?”
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Re: How to Write A Love Story
« Reply #1 on: August 06, 2013, 03:22:47 PM »
I can relate to Takamina!  :ding:

liike it!  :nya:

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Re: How to Write A Love Story
« Reply #2 on: August 06, 2013, 03:25:39 PM »
Nice :twothumbs

So interesting! . . . . I'm looking forward to your next chapter :D

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Re: How to Write A Love Story
« Reply #3 on: August 06, 2013, 04:05:55 PM »
yeay :3
intresting prologue  :thumbsup
looking forward for next update  :cathappy:

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Re: How to Write A Love Story
« Reply #4 on: August 06, 2013, 04:41:08 PM »
Yah!!Atsumina story
Takamina and love story
Interesting
Please continue
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Re: How to Write A Love Story
« Reply #5 on: August 06, 2013, 06:36:27 PM »
Well looks like Takamina has her work cut out for her
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Re: How to Write A Love Story
« Reply #6 on: August 06, 2013, 07:14:34 PM »
hahahaha funny now takamina needs some experience in love....

update soon...

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Re: How to Write A Love Story
« Reply #7 on: August 07, 2013, 03:12:12 AM »
This is really interesting.  XD

Please update soon.  :)

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Re: How to Write A Love Story
« Reply #8 on: August 07, 2013, 04:03:44 PM »
Oh!! Hai there~ And nice story you got there~
-Takamina is familiar with the horror genre and whatsoever...
-But honestly, how can Takamina write a romance genre??
-Cos she never did fall in love right?? Demo...Gehehe...
-This is AtsuMina right?? Geheheh!! *creepy laugh*
-lol, anyway, nice and interesting prologue!!!~

>Can't wait to see more of it!!~ Plz update soon!!~

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Re: How to Write A Love Story
« Reply #9 on: August 07, 2013, 10:23:47 PM »
Yeah.... Atsumina story...

Poor Minami unable to write romance genre.

What's going to happen to takamina?

What would Yuko do to Minami?

Can't wait

Thank you for the start of interesting story

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Re: How to Write A Love Story
« Reply #10 on: August 08, 2013, 05:35:54 AM »
yeeeah.... another atsumina storyyyy....
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can't wait the update...

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Re: How to Write A Love Story
« Reply #11 on: August 08, 2013, 07:14:42 AM »
We can relate to each other Takatiny....

I want to write a one-shot love story but I don't know how...  :lol: :lol: :lol:

Waiting for your next update....  :) :) :)
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Re: How to Write A Love Story
« Reply #12 on: August 08, 2013, 09:27:59 PM »
Interesting!!! :w00t:
Looking forward for the next update  :twothumbs

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Re: How to Write A Love Story
« Reply #13 on: August 11, 2013, 10:52:52 PM »
I can't believe that there are persons that will read this!!!! T^T
and since the classes are suspended for...ugh...later. i decided to update as a gratitude~~~ sorry if it sucks...comments and suggestions are welcomed!!

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Chapter 1 : The reason for trouble.
Takahashi Minami
I sighed again. Then I stared at my laptop for a few minutes more.
“Maybe I’ll read some cheesy novels in order to get some inspiration…”
I opened my browser to hoping to get some ideas to form a good story.
“Vampire Lover?” I read the title.
Not that I hate it but…Too twilight-like…and heck vampires doesn’t exist in real life!!! And I’m very sure that if there are any supernatural beings in my supposedly romantic movie…it may turn out to be tragedy…I mean literally.
“Damsel in Distress?”
‘Too…fairy tale-like…’
Hey!!! Even the Prince’s have problems of their own!!! And a strong woman is popular these days…a fragile one is too…Pre-historic. And in fact, even in the pre-historic times, the women were already independent and strong!!!
I have been searching for another hour but still there were no ideas forming in my mind. I combed hair harshly due to frustration. Honestly, I’m not used to stare at my laptop and typing something and erasing it after a few seconds. I’m used to type and even finish a story in one single sit.
I sighed again, “Maybe the perverted squirrel was right…I should just return to my home genre.”
Why did this happen to me in the first place….
-Flashback-
“Oi Squirrel…” I called for my editor’s attention. Unable to nudge her for I’m holding a HUGE trophy as a prize for winning one of the prestigious writing competition in Japan.
“Yo…” she replied boringly as she continued to review other works not even looking at me.
“Is that it?” I asked frustratedly. I mean if your talent won in a PRESTIGIOUS EVENT as an editor…shouln’t you at least be HAPPY!?
“What do you expect me to do takamidget? To kiss the ground because you won…AGAIN…AS USUAL?” she said sarcastically.
“Fine. If you’re like that…bid your most talented horror writer goodbye.” I said just gain my ego a little bit.
“And what are you going to do? Quit writing? That’s impossible takamina…writing is your passion. Writing is your life. And I don’t need to be an editor with a keen eye for talented people just to see the flame in your eyes while writing those stories…” the squirrel said quite confidently.
And I can never disagree with that.
But this time…
“I’m going to do something different…”
She raised her eyebrow. Finally I caught her attention.
“…I’m going to write romance.”
-present-
“Augghhhhh!!!” I yelled in frustration. Luckily I’m living alone or else I won’t be surprised if there will be a flying slipper directed towards me.
“Stupid Bakamina!!!Stupid Midget!!! Stupid mouth!!! Stupid Yuko!!! If you only praised me at that time!!!” I slapped my self.
Oh great. I’m gone insane.
But wait.
A realization suddenly hit me…no matter what the situation is…I’m a calm person… the reason for my very bad temper at that time was…
“STUPID ARROGANT MAEDA ATSUKO!!!!” I yelled on top of my lungs.
Let me tell you what happened…
-flashback-
I’m now at the interview exclusive for the famous writers in different genre.
“Can you tell us the reason why you are so good in writing horror novels, Takahashi-san?” the reporter asked eagerly.
“Maybe because I have many talented ghosts friends…” I responded playfully.
“Hahahahaha…Anyways..is it also true that you are trying to write different genre?”
“Yes. I want to be a versatile writer.”
“How about romance?”
I smiled hiding the uncomfortable feeling about the topic.
What is this feeling…? It is like as if someone is staring at me intently…?
And I’m not wrong. Someone is definetely staring at me. That someone is a very beautiful...not just beautiful…but breath-takingly angel-like girl…with her shoulder-length hair.
Is my soul too tainted with my tragic stories that Kami-sama sent one of her angels to purify my soul?
Or maybe Kami-sama send the wrong one…for the girl staring at me wasn’t an angel…but a goddess. A
Goddes who stole my mind and soul…leaving the body of mine with just a heart beating fastly of its own.

What the heck!? What’s with the cheesy lines Takahashi Minami!?
“Takahashi-san?”
“I-I D-Don’t…know anything about l-love…”
“Oh.” After that I wandered around.
Hmm. I wonder where did the goddess went?
Oh fudge.
Takahashi Minami…YOU ARE NOT THINKING ABOUT THAT PERSON!!! NOT THINKING ABOUT THAT PERSON!!!
Takahashi Minami…YOU ARE NOT THINKING ABOUT THAT PERSON!!! NOT THINKING ABOUT THAT PERSON!!!
Takahashi Minami…YOU ARE NOT THINKING ABOUT THAT PERSON!!! NOT THINKING ABOUT THAT PERSON!!!
YOU SHOULD THINK THAT SHE’S CREEPY!!! NOT THAT SHE LOOKS LIKE A GODDESS WHO STOLE YOUR HEA-
“Takamina?” somebody tapped my shoulder.
“ I’M ARE NOT THINKING ABOUT THAT PERSON!!!” I yelled getting some stares.
“G-gomen…” we both bowed really embarassed.
“What’s wrong with you!? thinking about who!?”
“Nobody…”
Yuko sighed, “Fine just stop wandering around and sit at your designated table!!!”
So my designated table is number 13…I sat there…alone…
My eyes,just like a magnet, found my goddess…
I see it was her turn to be interviewed…
“Maeda Atsuko-san is really beautiful…” some girl commented.
Yeah. Goddess is really a Goddess…
Her name is pretty too…Maeda Atsuko…
Based on her interviewer, Goddess is a romance writer… maybe she is the goddess of romance?
After the interview, she walked away. I lost the sight of her. And since it was boring I just decide to sleep.
“Sooner or later, love is gonna get ya
Sooner or later, girl you got to give in
Sooner or later, love is gonna let ya
Sooner or later, love is gonna win

Its just a matter of time
Before you make up your mind
To give all that love that you've been hiding
Its just a question of when
I've told you time and again
I'll get all the love you've been denying

Hmmm…what’s with the music?
“Maeda-san…please dance with me?”
“I’m sorry…”
Eh!? It’s the dance portion already!? Have I slept for too long?
And wait Maeda Atsuko!?
I sat straight only to find the goddess-like face of Atsuko looking at me a little bit amused and…Thankful?
Has the goddess been sitting beside me all the time!? The thougt made me blush a little.
Beside her is a good-looking boy…tch. Who I think is the one asking for Atsuko’s dance. How dare he!?
“I’m sorry Kirito-san…but…Minami and I shall dance.”
Eh!?

Sooner or later, love is gonna get ya
Sooner or later, girl you got to give in
Sooner or later, love is gonna let ya
Sooner or later, love is gonna win

Atsuko took my hand…her hands are smooth…
Eh!?

You say you'll never be mine
But darling they'll come a time
I'll taste all that love that you've been hiding
Its just a question of time
Before you make up your mind
And give all that love you've been denying

 The goddess and I are dancing…with my hand on her waist and her hand on my shoulders…and my heart wants to leap out from my chest….
Eh!?

You've been looking for love
In all the wrong places
You've been looking for love
All the wrong faces
Gotta get ya girl
On this illusion
Gonna save your heart
From all this confusion

“You still have the traces of your…Drool.” She said.
She wiped it away, “Kinda…cute.”
I blushed. Is it because of embarrasment or is it because she called me cute…I really don’t know.
EH!?

Sooner or later, love is gonna get ya
Sooner or later, girl you got to give in
Sooner or later, love is gonna let ya
Sooner or later, love is gonna win
Love is gonna win
“I was watching your interview Minami…and I’ve read your books…in fact you can call me a fan…”
Doki doki doki….
EH!?

Its just a matter of time
Before you make up your mind
And give all the love that you've been hiding
Its just a question of when
Told you time and again
I'll get all the love you've been denying

In the middle of the dance, the Kirito jerk still wants Atsuko to dance with him…
Well…can’t blame him. Even I still can’t believe that Atsuko is dancing with me…
EH!?

Sooner or later, love is gonna get ya
Sooner or later, girl you got to give in
Sooner or later, love is gonna let ya
Sooner or later, love is gonna win
Sooner or later, love is gonna get ya
Sooner or later, girl you got to give in
Sooner or later, love is gonna let ya
Sooner or later, love is gonna win
ATSUKO…IS KISSING ME PASSIONATELY….
“But you won’t be successful if you don’t know love…” she gave me a peck before leaving.
Leaving me, the crowd, the jerk…jawless.
EH!?EH!?EH!?
-present-
“Baka!!!!BakAAA!!!!!”
That !!!!! I don’t know anymore!!!!
Suddenly…
Somebody started knocking wildly at my door…
“Wait a minute will y-Haruna!?”
The moment I opened the door, a sobbing Haruna hugged me so tight.
“W-What happened? Wait I can’t breathe!!!”
“Mou…Takamini…”
Honestly… she’s troubled right!? Why can she still comment on my height!?
But at least she released me now. I took a deep breathe.
What happened!?
“H-He Cheated on me…”
That’s why I don’t believe in love…I told you right Haruna…? I want to lecture her…but this time is not the right time.
It will be world war III if the squirrel found out that some jerk cheated on Haruna…knowing how much Yuko loves Haruna…
I sighed. I have too much problems of my own. And Yuko’s out of option. But I’ll do anything for my friend…and honestly..my mind wasn’t thinking at all.
“Let’s go get him…”
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Haruna told me that her jerk ex-boyfriend  will be meeting with his client on this building.
“Haruna…I know that you have a rich ex…but I didn’t think he’s this damned rich!!!”
Haruna and I waited at the parking lot.
“Takamina…” she started to hesitate.
“NO. the jerk deserves a lesson.”  I went out of my car and grabbed my bat.
With all my might…I swung it towards the car’s mirrors. Leaving it all shattered and badly damaged.
Heh. Serves you right...jerk.
Feeling proud and satisfied…I went back tin the car to find Haruna with her eyes bulging out.
“Don’t worry Haruna…he’ll definetely be sorry…”
Haruna just stared at me…
“Takamina….that’s his car…” Haruna pointed to the car…
…next to what I’ve hitted.
“Then whose car did I hit!?”
After a few seconds the owner of the messed up car revealed itself. A goddess appeared with a shocked face.
Haruna drove away quickly.
“What should we do? We got the wrong car!!!”
I smirked.
“…And honestly…I think my effort is not wasted.”
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Re: How to Write A Love Story
« Reply #14 on: August 12, 2013, 01:09:19 AM »
Well... Takamina wanted to write romance coz' of an insult and Atsuko...

What kind of romance would takamina write?

Poor Haruna being cheated on... Yeah be with Yuko... She would treat you well

Did takamina crash into Atsuko's?

What kind of trouble would she get into?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

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Re: How to Write A Love Story
« Reply #15 on: August 12, 2013, 03:11:57 AM »
wah update :3

lol minami broke acchan's window car  :rofl:

go get your love bakamina :3

pls update soon  :D

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Re: How to Write A Love Story
« Reply #16 on: August 12, 2013, 03:49:43 AM »
Thank you for the update...  :bow:

The car that Takamina hit is Acchan's right??

And Haruna is better with Yuko than the jerk that cheating on her..  :angry:

Can't wait for the next chapter..

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Re: How to Write A Love Story
« Reply #17 on: August 12, 2013, 08:05:59 AM »
What?! Takamina? I think that's Atsuko's car...
-O~kay...I don't know why Takamina is so evil in here but...
-I kinda like it~ Hehehe. And still can't write romance??
-Hmm~ I wonder if...Nah...Just let it be first~~
-Oh, this whole mess won't start if Yuko just praise Taka huh? lol
-And that jerk!! Just tell Yuko about it and she'll bring that jerk's head!!
-Phew...Anyway, how will this go on?? Takamina and Atsuko??

>Plz update soon!!~ I can't wait for the next one!!~ Nice chapter by the way!!~

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Re: How to Write A Love Story
« Reply #18 on: August 12, 2013, 08:32:31 AM »
Update!! Thank you!

I can't wait on what will happen next.  :twothumbs

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Re: How to Write A Love Story
« Reply #19 on: August 12, 2013, 04:00:21 PM »
Yeaaah you update!!! :cow:
Atsuko is a big fan of Minami???  :w00t:
from just a fan will soon be turned into lover  :inlove:
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