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Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 8 17/12/13
« Reply #80 on: December 17, 2013, 01:49:03 PM »
Mou, Mayuki should stop staring at each other and kiss already! :D

TomoTomo are... at the highest level. :heart:

Takamina acting girly seems to be working! :kekeke: GO TAKAMINA!!! :onioncheer:

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Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 8 17/12/13
« Reply #81 on: December 17, 2013, 03:46:52 PM »
You back!!!

I wait for the next ch for so long

Yes Sae help Takamina to get away from the diva!!

I hope their plan work

Cant wait for the next ch ><

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Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 8 17/12/13
« Reply #82 on: December 18, 2013, 01:57:15 AM »
I can't wait for the Danso!

 Thank you for this.    :)

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Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 8 17/12/13
« Reply #83 on: December 18, 2013, 04:03:45 AM »
Yay you finally updated !!!
hope to get my atsumina fix next time XD

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Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 8 17/12/13
« Reply #84 on: December 18, 2013, 04:37:04 AM »
DANSOOOOOOOOOOO! yeah!

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Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 8 17/12/13
« Reply #85 on: December 18, 2013, 05:36:28 AM »
Mayuki and Wmatsui moment  :wub: :wub:

Thank you :kneelbow:

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“Tsk…I told her not to skip!” Sae whined as they watch Takamina skipping awkwardly.

LOL.. takamina's skip..  :rofl:
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Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 8 17/12/13
« Reply #86 on: December 19, 2013, 04:53:05 PM »
yeah danso can't wait!

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Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 8 17/12/13
« Reply #87 on: December 20, 2013, 05:03:12 AM »
Update please...

Looking forward to see the next chapter

Thank you for the story up until now.

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Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 8 17/12/13
« Reply #88 on: December 21, 2013, 04:23:28 AM »
nice story! :wub:

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Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 8 17/12/13
« Reply #89 on: January 07, 2014, 08:56:19 PM »
hahahahahaha yeah!! Girly

hahahahahaha funny!!!

thanks and continue soon...

SOON!!!

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Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 8 17/12/13
« Reply #90 on: January 10, 2014, 02:24:38 PM »
Thanks for update. I cannot wait to see what happen next. I hope there will be Atsumina moment soon. But don't wanna pressure you, just take your time to update.  :) This fiction story was attracting my eyes. Trouble maker, nice title  ;)

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Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 8 17/12/13
« Reply #91 on: January 12, 2014, 02:55:42 AM »
DANSO~ :heart:

Can't wait for the next chapter  :)2

"Takamina skipping"  :lol:

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Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 8 17/12/13
« Reply #92 on: January 26, 2014, 07:31:42 PM »
kyaaaa.....  :love:

I'm waiting for the dansoooooo!!!! :yossi:

please!  :panic: :panic: :panic: :panic: :panic:

update soon!!!! :bow: :bow: :bow:

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Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina] Chapter 8 17/12/13
« Reply #93 on: January 27, 2014, 06:24:51 PM »
still waiting for danso!!

continue soon!!

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Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui] Chapter 9 14/04/14
« Reply #94 on: April 14, 2014, 02:15:42 PM »
Ho Hello~ Well this is my first update in 2014..  :sweatdrop: hehe~
Firstly, I want to apologizes deeply for not updating for a long time~  :kneelbow:
I was...lazy and unmotivated  XD
and also sorry, for this update, might have lacking something because...it's been long I haven't write anything..but actually I already wrote this update long time ago..I just realized I already finished it when I checked it today hehe..hehe  :smhid
I don't care if I lose a reader or whatever...I'm going to continue writing~!  :bigdeal:
Lastly, pardon my bad English  :kneelbow:




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Chapter 9

“A danso competition?”
“Yep! A danso~ where all the participants presenting their fashion style as an ikemen and grabs all the fans heart~ <3” explained Yuko to Takamina as they are at the library.

“Ohh…just like when I dressed as Kai in a school drama…” Takamina nodded as she understood what Yuko said.
“So…since this our school owner also owning a fashion company, they organized a danso competition every year~ I heard it was started by Mariko-sama’s idea…”Yuko said in a low voice because the librarian already glared at them.

“Mariko-sama? That Acchan’s friend?” Asked Takamina who still not aware of the librarian’s glare.
Yuko nodded while signaling Takamina to low down her voice. Takamina realized that the librarian is watching them.

Takamina then quietly stands up and goes to the random shelf while her eyes randomly looking at the books. That was until she spotted a shoulder-length hair girl trying to reach the book at the top shelf.
Takamina walk towards her. “Need help lady?”

The student turned around and soon after both of them widens their eyes.
Takamina’s eyes widen happily while the other girl widen her eyes in shock, and mad.

“Oh hey it’s you~” smirked Takamina at Acchan.
“Tsk…a midget like you wants to help me?” Mocked Acchan as she crossed her arms sarcastically.

“Heh~ what if I can do it~?” Takamina sounds like she’s challenging the taller girl.
“Well then, proves it to me~” Acchan smirked at Takamina. ‘I bet you can’t reach that book with your short leg, midget~’
‘teehee~ BakAcchan~’ Said Takamina grinning in her mind as she walks somewhere and taking a chair that was used to take a book that usually located at the top shelf.

Acchan did nothing but to watch her when she realized what was the midget going to do with the chair. ‘S-she…’
Poor Acchan…she must be feel so stupid in front of her enemy~

Takamina stand up on the chair and finally grabbed the book and playfully showed it to Acchan as she gave a smirk.
“T-That’s not fair!” Huffed Acchan annoyed. But then an idea pops up in her evil mind she glanced at the chair Takamina was standing on.

Acchan gave an evil smile at Takamina making the short girl confused.
Without giving any warning or thought, Acchan kick the chair making the short girl to losing her balance on the chair.

BakAcchan~

Takamina fall towards Acchan. Acchan could not move fast due to Takamina’s upper body already collided with her body making them both falling on the floor. Hard.

“Ouchh!!” Both of them said as they fell on the floor.

Acchan groaned as she felt pain on her back. And also the weight on top of her.
Then Yuko passed by and saw the scene. Yuko put both her hands on her mouth as her eyes widen in shock and horror when she saw the girl that was below Takamina.

“T-Takamina?” Yuko seeing her midget friend that was on top of the school princess.
Then the librarian comes to check because she heard the noise.

“No making out in the library please.” The librarian said as she fixed her glasses glaring at the two and then to Yuko who quickly pretended like she’s searching for a book.

“M-making out??!!” Yuko silently said with a slightly wide eyes after the librarian walks away from the place. ‘Are they really making out? Damn I should have come earlier!’

Takamina and Acchan did not really pay attention to what librarian said.

As soon as Takamina looks at the girl below her, her mind suddenly went blank.
However it only last for a few second when Acchan opened her eyes looking at Takamina.

Takamina looked at Acchan smiling. “Oh, here is your book~ and you’re welcome~” Takamina said to Acchan as she placed the book that was still in her hand on Acchan’s face then she quickly get off from her.

Takamina knows what will happen next so she quickly walks out of the library without looking at Yuko.
Acchan still holding her temper as she stood up and fix her clothes then look at Yuko.

“Where’s that midget go?” Acchan gritted her teeth looking deathly at the other midget.

‘Takamina is sure dead after this.’ Yuko thought as she can feel a killer aura around the princess.

"Where?!!" Shouted Acchan.
Yuko with trembling hand pointing at the exit door still her eyes on the mad girl.

Without wasting any more time Acchan quickly dashed out of the library to chase after the girl that just ruin her day.
“Takamina will never stopped disturbing her...” sighed Yuko as she relieved for still alive.
‘Should I help Takamina?’ Yuko ask herself as she tilted her head.

“Oh well~ she’s the one who’s causing trouble~ why should I care~” Shrugged Yuko finally decided to not interfere.
“Hmm…I wonder where is NyanNyan right now~” With that, Yuko started searching for her NyanNyan~

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At the corridor

Acchan was looking around as she gripping the broom stick that she got who knows where searching for her prey.
Then she saw the midget running slowly on the corridor as there were many people around.

“Takahashi!!!” Shouted Acchan not minding the eyes that looking at her.

Takamina turned around only to see Acchan already running with a broom stick behind her.

“Waaaaaa!!!” Takamina also started to fasten her pace.

Acchan chase Takamina with a broom stick ready to beat her to death.
Takamina turned her head to look behind while still running. She sticks her tongue out at Acchan playfully.

Meanwhile Acchan suddenly felt familiar with this kind of thing. Chasing someone.

‘Why am I feeling like I have done this before?’ Acchan thought as she stopped chasing after the midget.

Takamina realized that she’s not being chased anymore looks behind to see Acchan.

Takamina also felt the same. But it’s a hazy memory.
Eventually, Takamina just walk away thinking that maybe Acchan is tired of chasing her.

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“So…what we are planning for the danso?” Asked Takamina. They are inside their dorm room.
“Humm…You and Sae will participate for it.” Yuko said as she sat on Mayu’s bed while looking at some of Mayu’s manga.

“Eh? How about you join too?” Takamina looking at her from the top bunk.
“Me? Well...”

“Who knows, NyanNyan will fall for you~” Takamina grinned to convinces her friend.

Yuko thinking for a while.
“Great idea there~” Yuko said as she started to imagine something. ’Oh this is going to be great~ NyanNyan saw the ikemen Yuko~ Awww~’.

“Yeah~”Nodded Takamina but then she thought of something.
“Wait, if I dressed as a boy, Ray will be more attached to me then!!” Takamina suddenly sat up looking at Yuko with a worried expression.

“That’s why…we’re going to dress you as an…ugly ikemen~ while Sae, a handsome ikemen~” Yuko playfully grinning at her.

‘Ugly ikemen??!! Is that even exist?’

[A/N: It does exist I guess…^^;]

‘Somehow…I don’t like that idea.’ Thought Takamina with a fail expression.

Then the door opened revealing Mayu.

“Hey Mayu~” Greeted both of them as Mayu walks in. Mayu has started to open up to both of her senpai since they always keep on talking to her despite knowing her personality. Such a friendly roommates. And crazy.

“Hey, Mayu, how about you join danso competition!” Takamina suggested to her.
“Danso?” Mayu asked as she took off her bag and put it on her chair.

“Yep~ A competition where you dress like a man~ and grab all the girls’ heart~” Explained Yuko as she moves from Mayu’s bed then sit on her own bed.

Mayu glazed at them. ‘Why should I?’

“Well, it’s up to you~ but I saw you have THAT potential~” Takamina shrugged her shoulders.
“And what is THAT potential?” Asked Mayu while sitting on her bed while taking off her shoes.

Yuko then started to scanning Mayu’s facial and down to her body and look up again at Mayu closely. “You know…the potential to grabbed all the girl’s heart~ Just give it a try Mayu~”

“You should try something new other than reading a manga, and studying~” Yuko frankly said to her.

“But…I’m not good at those kind of things.” Mumbled Mayu as she sits on her chair and started to read her manga.
“Then…we’ll teach you~~~” Both Takamina and Yuko smirked at her.

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‘*sigh* why did I even agreed to them…’ said Mayu in her mind with a slightly frown on her face.

“M-maybe I should not do…this.” Mumbled Mayu as she comes out of the bathroom wearing-

“Kyaaa!!! Ikemen!!!” Squealed Yuko and Takamina as soon as Mayu comes out of the bathroom.

[Ehem...wearing a waiter costume owned by Yuko that she used to work at her aunt’s cafe]

“You’re so cute Mayu~~” Yuko pinched Mayu’s cheeks making Mayu feel uncomfortable.

“How about you use this costume on that competition? I bet all the girls are going to fangirling over you~” Takamina said as she fix a wig on Mayu’s head.

[I wonder where they got that wig...  :? ]

“I never agreed to join in the competition.” Mayu took off her wig and enter the bathroom to change her clothe.
‘Yes you will Mayu~’ Takamina smirked in her mind. Yuko who saw Takamina’s expression know that she must have had an idea in her mind.

“What are you thinking of?” Yuko asked her.
“You will know soon~”
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Poor Mayu, Takamina secretly wrote her name as the participant for the competition.

Mayu could not even do anything because her two friends, Jurina and Lovetan found out about this and was shocked to know but of course they were expecting something from her.
Yeah, they won’t let Mayu quit the competition.

It was time for the competition; every participant was getting ready with their male outfits.
Meanwhile, on the outside, Mariko, Acchan, and Haruna were sitting at the front sits for the audience waiting for the competition to start.

“Hey Haruna, I heard that your squirrel is also joining~” All of her friends started to smirking at her.
“So what?” Pouted Haruna preventing herself from smiling.

Indeed, she was also excited to see an ikemen Yuko.

“Hey guys, sorry for the late~” Tomochin took a sit beside Acchan as she dragged her Tomomi beside her.
“Hey~” Acchan greeted her but she face looks bored.

“Don’t worry Acchan~ someone is going to entertained you soon~” Mariko said seeing her friend’s bored face.
Acchan was confused for a while.

“Let’s see.” ‘I wonder where the midget…is’


Meanwhile, Ray took a sit beside Yuki. Yuki look at her smiling but Ray just ignored her.
‘So arrogant~’ thought Yuki as she turn back to look at the stage.

‘I can’t wait to see Mayuyu danso~ must be cute hehe~’ Yuki let out a light squeal.

“Hey! I know that I should look ugly, but why am I dressing as a beggar?!” Whined Takamina inside the changing room.
Sae, Sayaka, Yuko and the others just holding their laugh seeing her.

Some even goes out of the room because they could not hold it anymore. Then they could hear loud laughters from outside of the room.

“Don’t worry Takamina, it just for a day~” Yuko tries to calm her friend as she patting her back.

“Yeah, besides you do this to stay away from Ray remember?” Sayaka said as she fix Sae’s wig.

“You look Ikemen~~” Whispered Sayaka to Sae’s ear making Sae to giggled at her.

‘Oh yeah…I almost forgot.” Takamina nodded at them.
“Miyazawa Sae it’s your turn next!” The staff said from the door.

Sae quickly got up. “Osu! I’m ready!” She patted her chest confidently.
“You look so handsome…” mumbled Takamina looking at Sae then she looks at her own outfit.

It was Sae’s turn. Everyone was always excited to see ikemen Sae.
As soon as she appeared on the stage, the loud scream can be heard from the audience.

But Sae, for the sake of Takamina, her eyes only darted on Ray.

‘Is she looking at me?’ Yuki thought as Sae’s looking at her direction.

Ray also feeling like Sae is looking at her. Then Sae winks making them scream louder.
From the corner, Mayu could see Sae is winking at Yuki. Or that was what she thought.

“Mayu it’s your turn after this! Good luck!” Yuko said as she suddenly popped out behind Mayu.
After Sae goes back to the backstage, Mayu quickly glance at the handsome Sae.

‘Well, who doesn’t fall for that handsome face…?’ Admitted her mind.

With all the nervousness, Mayu comes out to the stage.
She just stands there with her head down.

She could hear her crazy friends are screaming her name giving her courage.
"Mayu-kun!!! look at me!!" Hearing Jurina's voice Mayu look up looking at the audiences.
Mayu look up to see her friends. They smiled at her. Her attention only on her friends that she doesn’t realized the other audiences were squealing over her.

Mayu just gives her best smile and quickly end her time as she goes off the stage. And she forgot to see Yuki’s reaction.

Takamina was the last one. Wow, she got a loud screamed though. And a loud laugh. Especially from the front sit. The person laughing at the front sit draws Takamina’s attention.

“Yeah…laugh at me~ Laugh as loud as you can~” Takamina grinned.

Somehow looking at the shoulder-length girl at the front laughing making her heart beat faster.

Ray just looks at Takamina with mouth half open. ‘What happen to my Kai?!’
“Oh look at Ray! I think we’ve success this time!” The trio behind the stage was peeking at Ray’s reaction.

After the competition ended, Mayu was about to walk out of the room when Yuki comes in.
“M-Mayu…” Yuki called her with a nervous tone.

“Yes?” Mayu look at her with a blank face.
She can see that Yuki was nervous by the way she’s playing with her fingers.

Yuki took a deep breath and then she look at Mayu in the eyes.
“I…think…”

“What?” Mayu still with her blank face.

“I think…I’m in love…with you” Yuki confessed but Mayu could not hear the last two words clearly as Yuki was mumbling it with low voice.

Mayu was about to say something when the next words comes out of Yuki’s mouth.

“W-Will you be my girlfriend?” Yuki’s face was extremely red as she keeps her eyes on Mayu’s.

Mayu was shocked as hell as dropped her bag to the ground.
They keep on looking at each other.

“No.”


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I know...I know... the danso part is bad isn't it?   :doh: :sweatdrop: :sweatdrop: :sweatdrop:
I'm still bad  at writing hahaha  :lol:
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Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui] Chapter 9 14/04/14
« Reply #95 on: April 14, 2014, 02:19:28 PM »
FINALLY A UPDATE
*SAVE SPOT .


Ma , librarian , just take it as you never see anything is fine too isn't it ?  ;)
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What if both of them remember what they had done as a kid ?
Will they be like .. Chasing around each other again ? XD
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KAII ! Ehem , I mean Takamina .*Cough .
This might really be a chance for for her to get rid of Ray ..
But what if Ray still doesn't let go .. *Sigh , Good luck Takamina .
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MAYUUU , WHY .
WHYYYYYYYYYYYY .
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AND OF COURSE , I'LL WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATEEE ! ~
Don't you dare to feel lazy & unmotivated , I'll find you , and I'll force you to update ! ;Won'tDoThat , ;ImAlsoLazy . XD
« Last Edit: April 14, 2014, 02:31:36 PM by ShipEveryone »
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ll One-shot collection ll"http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=38073.0

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Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui] Chapter 9 14/04/14
« Reply #96 on: April 14, 2014, 03:35:19 PM »
Well it's good that the plan is working to make Ray back away from Kai

But poor Kai being laughed by everyone.... But Kai herself don't care so much about it

EH........ 'NO' why???? Poor Yuki... she is being rejected

What's going to happen next?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

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Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui] Chapter 9 14/04/14
« Reply #97 on: April 14, 2014, 03:55:24 PM »
aaa mayu dont be soo tsun~ tsun~  :depressed:
poor yuki  :on speedy:
« Last Edit: April 14, 2014, 04:53:09 PM by kazutoryu »

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Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui] Chapter 9 14/04/14
« Reply #98 on: April 14, 2014, 03:56:43 PM »
nooooo mayu-chaaann what are you doing :'( :banghead:

by the way author-san thanks for the update. it is a great story. please don't give up on this fic, and update again soon >.<

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Re: Trouble Maker~ [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui] Chapter 9 14/04/14
« Reply #99 on: April 14, 2014, 03:58:28 PM »
Well it's good that the plan is working to make Ray back away from Kai

But poor Kai being laughed by everyone.... But Kai herself don't care so much about it

EH........ 'NO' why???? Poor Yuki... she is being rejected

What's going to happen next?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

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thank you, please update again  :inlove:

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