TroubleMaker - Chapter 11 (AtsuMina) 17/02/2015

[MayuxMatsuixMusic]

i don't know why but i'm laughing the whole time while reading this fic xD


yeah!! no danso no mayuyu xD



mayuyu~~ why did you reject yukirin!! baka mayu!!

can't wait to find out the next update 

[Kirozoro]

Ahhh why Mayu why are u reject Yuki!!!

I hope Takamina plant is work

Update son

[Konoe]

“I think…I’m in love…with you” Yuki confessed but Mayu could not hear the last two words clearly as Yuki was mumbling it with low voice.

Mayu was about to say something when the next words comes out of Yuki’s mouth.

“W-Will you be my girlfriend?” Yuki’s face was extremely red as she keeps her eyes on Mayu’s.

Mayu was shocked as hell as dropped her bag to the ground.
They keep on looking at each other.

Yes! Yuki finally made a big step!

“No.”

WHY!?

[ryu201]

DOMO!!!!!!!
silent reader here 
i thought u will not continue this fiction ne but im happy u continue it 
since im  atsumina shipper,can u make more atsumina moment?
onegai 
heheheh....
i really waiting ur next update author-san,ganbatte ne!!!!   

[qweakb]

    

Finally an update! I thought you have stop writing.. LOL 

Wonder what is NyanNyan's POV when she saw yuko's danso? 

AstuMina part is always nice to read.. haha.. chasing here and there.. haha.. 

 
Why Mayu did not accept Yuki's confession? Why WHy WHY?!! 

Looking forward to your next updated

I don't care if I lose a reader or whatever...I'm going to continue writing~! 

That good! 
If not    <-- jk
LOL..

[Justqle]

Yeay update 

Eeh, mayu???? What's wrong?!! 

I can bear the slow update, but please don't take too long like months or years  lol

I've read this story since i was a silent reader, and now you update when i've made an acc already 

But that's cool, I can give my comment 

I'll still be a loyal reader, as long as it's Atsumina 

AND OF COURSE , I'LL WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATEEE ! ~
Don't you dare to feel lazy & unmotivated , I'll find you , and I'll force you to update ! ;Won'tDoThat , ;ImAlsoLazy .

and well, i'll also wait for the next update 

[takeshi77]

lol..its ok as long u still update its 

anyway, great story..i had also read ur OS..its kinda sweet etc..something like that always happen..i mean disturb someone that we like etc
also this story also great with the danso etc

and i wonder wht ray reaction toward takamina after that danso 
also how will takamina and atsuko relationship afterward etc

look forward to its..thank you for the update 

[ainivel]

the last time i read your fic was last year, i wasn't a member here yet back then, just a total lurker lol! you just don't know how you made my day when i saw your update! i didn't notice it was posted a week ago, i read it just now lol

anyways, please continue!
'coz everyone's still waiting y'know!


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[taenylove]

Really good story!!
I laugh a lot with Takamina and Yuko    That wMidgets
Please author-san update soon 

[chiqinna]

Hai! 
Everyone that still waiting for the update, thank you so much for still reading this story. 
Honestly, its not that I'm abandoning this thread again as you can see I'm always around   
I'm just procra- what was the word again ?  forget it 
well, I just want to inform that I'm still writing for the next chapter same goes to You're My Sunshine 
it is just, I hope my lovely readers can bear with my slow update.
I don't know when will I finish but I'm working on it..slowly 
ehehe.. I'm sorry for making you all curious  well I'm curious myself 
stay tuned~ 

[taenylove]

Hai! 
Everyone that still waiting for the update, thank you so much for still reading this story. 
Honestly, its not that I'm abandoning this thread again as you can see I'm always around   
I'm just procra- what was the word again ?  forget it 
well, I just want to inform that I'm still writing for the next chapter same goes to You're My Sunshine 
it is just, I hope my lovely readers can bear with my slow update.
I don't know when will I finish but I'm working on it..slowly 
ehehe.. I'm sorry for making you all curious  well I'm curious myself 
stay tuned~ 

Don‘t worry, I will wait all the time it‘s necessary 
Btw your profile photo is so cute! ~ 

[48matama]

N-NOOO

WHY MAYU DIDN'T ACCEPT???

Update it please ╮(╯_╰")╭

[mizuratpro95]

your fic is great
please update soon 

[sastio13]

i can imagine the danso part scene...

oh no..... why mayu reject yuki? hmm....
ano, would you mind to continue this ff? hehe
arigatou chiqinna-san!

[chiqinna]

I'M BAAAAAAAACK!!!! 
okay..really..really sorry for being slow and late 
told ya already I'm gonna be slow.. 
but here I am finally appear~ 
and..gomen..I'm not use to write anymore so its a short update.. 
I hope anyone enjoy this~ don't worry..I will try my best for the best~ 
yosshhhh!!!





Chapter 10



“No.”
“I don’t love you. I mean, I never loved you since before.” Said the shorter girl.
“But-“The taller girl tries to reach for her arm, “please, Ray, leave me alone, and see…I’m not Kai okay? I’m just a normal girl that you can see now.” Takamina step back quickly avoiding her hands from reaching her.

[No you’re not normal =_=]

“Seriously, Are they making a drama or what?! Seriously boring!!” Whined Yuko as she, Sae and Sayaka peeking at the two girls while munching potato chips. That was their last plan actually. Takamina having a talk with Ray so that Ray could leave her alone after this. And forever.

Ray furrowed her eyebrow looking at Takamina. “You look this ugly to shows me that you’re not Kai?”
Takamina nodded at her. And yes she is still wearing that beggar ikemen looks xDD.

‘Please please please just go away~ I’m bored talking like this already~’ Said Takamina in her mind.

“And look, Sae is more ikemen right? Why don’t you go after her?” Sae who was currently listening to their conversation widen her eyes.

“What if she really chase after me?!” Sae whispered to Sayaka and Yuko with her frightened face.

Meanwhile, the other two just looking at each other then look at Sae and shrugged their shoulders.

“We never thought of that one.” They both said in unison making Sae to face palmed herself.

“Kai, I only look at you, not someone else that is more handsome than you or anything.” Ray said.

“I told you I’m not K-“Before she could continue, Ray made an aggressive action by suddenly kissing her lips.
The trio was also shocked at the sudden action.

Ray put her arms around Takamina’s shoulders still kissing the short girl.

Suddenly the image of Acchan laughing passed the midget’s mind. She quickly pushed Ray and broke their kiss.

“That was the last one from me.” Smiled Ray still blushing from the kiss.

“Huh?” was Takamina’s reaction.
Without giving any more words, Ray walks away from the dumbfounded midget with freaking sad face.

Seeing Ray leaving the scene, the three then comes out of their hiding spot and jumped towards Takamina.


“Wow ~ Takamina, you just got kissed by hot crazy diva!” Yuko said patting Takamina’s back.

“Shut up Yuko.”

“So…that was it??” Sayaka asked rising her eyebrow.

“S-she’s not gonna chase after me right?” Sae suddenly clinging on Sayaka still with frightened face.







The next day

The school started as usual. Except for a certain cyborg that walks through the corridor with her usual blank face.
She looks fine from outside but inside, her brain is still not functioning well after the incident happened yesterday.

Flashback
“Mayu...Mayuyu!!” Long after blankly looking at Yuki who just confessed her feelings towards Mayu, Mayu suddenly fainted.

Gladly Yuki was fast reacting by holding her before the young girl’s body touching the floor.

They were lucky someone passing the place and help her bringing Mayu to the infirmary.

Yuki was so worried that maybe Mayu was too shocked by her sudden confession.

Who would suddenly confessed and asking someone to be their girlfriend when they are not even that close...yet.



*one blink*

*two blinks*

*three blinks*

The cyborg finally opens her eyes as she blinking her eyes adjusting to the room’s light.

She stares at the ceiling when Yuki’s voice made her turn her head towards the side of the bed.

*Mayu…a-are you okay now?” Yuki asked her worried. She also afraid Mayu will reject her but she already prepared for it even before she made that brave action.

Mayu stares at Yuki wondering what she was doing here with her.

‘Wait, where am I?’

Yuki blushed seeing Mayu keep staring at her.

*two blinks*

‘Ah, she must be wondering why she’s here...’ thought Yuki seeing Mayu looks lose though her face still giving no expression.

“Actually, uh...you were suddenly fainted just now... so I bring you here.” Hearing Yuki’s explanation, she finally realized that she was in infirmary room.

“Wait, so...y-you...*Mayuu!!*” Someone suddenly interrupted their moment as Jurina dashed into the room dragging Lovetan with her.

Yuki quickly stand up as both Mayu’s friend made their way towards Mayu.

“Mayu!! Are you okay?? I just heard that you fainted. What happened? Thank God you are okay~” Jurina and Lovetan hugging the cyborg who was a little annoyed by the hugs.

After parting from the bear hug, Mayu let out a small sigh as she sat up on the bed.

“I’m fine.” She answered.

“Uh…since Mayuyu’s friend is here, maybe I should go now.” Jurina and Lovetan almost forgot Yuki’s existence that stood behind them.

“Ah, Yuki-chan~ thank you for taking care of Mayu~” Lovetan said as she nudged Jurina’s arm.

“Yeah~ don’t worry we will take care of Mayu now.” Jurina grinned at Yuki who just smile. Then she looks at Mayu.

“M-Mayu, I’m leaving now.” Without even waiting for their response, Yuki quickly leave the room.

After Yuki left the room, the duo turned their heads towards to cyborg girl with a big grin on their face.

“So…mind to share us what happened?” Jurina sit beside Mayu as she wrapped her arm around her shoulders. “Yeah I heard Yuki was with you when you fainted right?” Added Lovetan.

“I thought it was a dream...” Mayu mumbled still thinking whether what happened a few hours ago was a dream where Yuki asking her to be her girlfriend.

“Mayu~ “Jurina shook her shoulder breaking Mayu’s thought.

“I’m fine.” Mayu answered.

“We know you were fine but we want to know what happened actually~?” The two was desperate to know what happened to their friend since it was rare to see Mayu acting like that.

“Nothing happened. I was just fainted and Yuki was with me that time.” Mayu was not lying though. Yuki was indeed there with her. Hell no she would tell her two friends or anyone about what really happen that made her fainted. She would get teased non-stop in she tells them.

“Really??” Both her friend narrowing their eyes at Mayu. Of course they would not believe Mayu that easily.

“Really.”

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.

.

.

“Oooookay~ we’ll ask Yuki then~” Jurina said.

‘I don’t think Yuki will tell the truth...it will be more embarrassing for her.’ Thought Mayu. “Whatever.” Mayu removes the blanket that was still covering half of her body and drink a glass of water near the table before get up and walks towards the door.

“Okay~ I will ask Yuki after this!” Grinned Jurina as they followed Mayu out of the room.









“You sure she’s not going to go after me?” A tall genking girl asks the other tall one as she looks around to see if there’s any sight of a crazy diva.
“I don’t know”. Sayaka only shrugged her shoulders. They were walking towards the school gate.
Sae, who was afraid that Ray will really chase after her after the plan they did before in order to get rid of her from Takamina, clinging onto Sayaka’s arm.

“Sayaka you’re not helping at all!” Whined Sae as she punched her arm lightly.

“Hey!” Laughed Sayaka making Sae pouted. “Don’t worry, if she is going after you, we’ll make you become ugly beggar like Takamina”. Sayaka said as she's holding back a smirk.

“Hell no! I will lose many fans if I do that!” After the danso competition, Sae has regained more fans especially from the first year students.

“Oh...now are you worried more about your fans or...Ray?” Grinned Sayaka.

“Oh…well...b-both?” Sayaka only face-palmed hearing her bestfriend’s answer.

“Hey TwinTowers!!” Yuko suddenly appear behind them while dragging the sleepy Takamina.

“Hey midgets!” Sae said to them.

“Sae...I think you should be careful form now...I heard Ray is going after you...” Takamina said serious. Actually she’s grinning inside her mind. Yuko seeing Takamina’s expression joining her on teasing one of the taller girl.

“Yeah...I just saw she’s asking the other student about you!” Yuko pretended to get worried over her tall friend.

Sae really believed on them. “R-really?” Her face started to change into horror when both Takamina and Yuko nodded their head. And she quickly runs inside the school leaving Sayaka.

“Oi! Sae!!” Sayaka then turned her towards the laughing midgets behind her. “You guys...” She narrowed her eyes at them.

“Oh well...serve her right for calling us midget! Hahahaha!!” Laughed Yuko as she high-five Takamina.

“Yeah...and what if that Ray is still here and she’s still couldn’t get after you?” Sayaka asked her.

Takamina eventually get nervous thinking of it. “Then...” she scratched her head. Her eyes then fell on a certain student walking with her friends as they entered the school. “…then I have many plans ahead to get rid of her~” Smirked Takamina.





T.B.C







hummm...thats all for now..
you know.. I'm happy!! 
 

[cisda83]

Eh... Ray let Kai go...????

That's very easy.... too easy after all the time chasing after Kai...

Yeah... Minami really really liked Atsuko

Ah... Mayu and Yuki...

What's going to happen to them?

Poor Poor Sae... being teased and scared out of her wit about being stalked by Ray...

I don't think Ray would come after Sae...

Would this be the last time Ray is going to appear?

What's going to happen next?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

 

[ryu201]

Author -san!!
I miss you!!!
Hehehe......

Here my comment~
ray let takamina off?
Is that for real?!
I mean i love to see takamina with acchan but...come on,let ray appear again.
It gonna be fun 

Wmidget sure happy to tease sae like that.
Sae!! Run for ur life!!!
 

Please update soon author-san.
Im waiting ^^

[Kirozoro]

Yes update!!!!

Welcome back~~

[Justqle]

you're baaaaaaacccckkkkkk
thank you for the update, glad to see you again author-san 
Wmidget LOL 
what will takamina plan? 

[RenshuChan]

Wahahaha, if Takamina is really funny in real life... LOLies...
Why there's no progress on wMatsui's relationship? Come on Jurina... Kiss her or something!