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Offline Temodemo

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Lost girl (guess the pairings~)
« on: April 12, 2013, 11:18:38 PM »
Hey there! Temo~ demo~ here! Yoroshiku~~~!  :tama-apeshit:


Temo here~ will try her best to write something interesting but not original!  :tama-groan:  Demo I'll do my best! Please forgive my dull mind and accept me  nee?   :tama-music: 

Temo loves Akb48 and Ske48, demo is kind of slow.... so I'll make my first fic like a cover of a serial I love ok? The name is Lost girl, after the show~ Temodemo will do her best hey-ya!
The first chapter will be posted tomorrow, after I make my schedule... :tama-wakey: Ignore the incorrect things please, I'm not ...well english isn't my first language, I was about to say laugh  :tama-slide:


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I.... I am Yuki, 20 years old , female. I work at a bar ,as a bartender, usually at night. My appearence is one of a gergeous woman which makes man and women deside me. I have a good head on my shoulders, I'm independent and confident. I seduce people very easy, I'm aware of my looks and use them how I want. Everything about me is normal. Well, almost everything.I am actually a monster.

'Hey babe,' A bussines dressed man says as he sits in front of me at the bar 'I want two bears please'

'Right away' I nod and smile, then wring him what he asked . I pour them in glasses at his plead and push them to him

'So...' He smirks at me and puts on a flirtous look ' how about drinking with me? here, this one's for you' He pushes one of the glasses to me

I smile at him and lean on the table 'Sorry but' I push the glass back to him ' Can't accept, the bar's rules'

I turn away and go to another client.

3rd person!

The guy, saw his chances were low enough, but the night was still young. Turning to look at the crowd he drank from his glass.

A young woman, walking thru the crowd , was collecting money pockets from people. A thief you could say, making her way closer, she was spooted by the blond guy.He smirked and, taking the glass in which he had poured some powder, walked thru the small woman.

'Hey there,' he smirked at her

'Hey yourself' the woman said not paying much attention to him

'Would you prephas like a free drink with me? ' he pushed the drink to the woman

' Free drink? Who am I to refuse ' she took the glass and drank all content. The guy smirked as he drank from his glass. The woman finished her drink and started moving away

'Hey, how about we go to a quiet place ? Let's have some fun , how about it?' the guy didn't give up and walked after her. The woman stoped at an elevator and waited for it to come, aware that the man was beside her but not really carring.

She sighed ' I'm not into monkey bussiness, and I don't want to have anything to do with you.' She said calmly but a little frustrated, she stepped in the elevator and the man followed her inside.

'Oh is that so? just a little bit won't hurt!' the man continued as he watched her

'ugh...' the woman suddenly felt weak in her knees, trying to keep herself on her feets while leaning on the elevator ' what....what was in that drink?' she asked as she looked at the man.

'oh nothing, just something that would make you a little more frendly ' he smirked and steping closer, he touched her face

'ugh what....what do you want? ' she asked as she breathed harder

'Nothing, just a little kiss~' he said in a flirty but childish voice .

Right before he could move any closer, the elevator stoped and the bartender he talked to earlier entered. She put herself right between the woman and the blond guy, the guy slowed hard and smirked at her.

The bartender looked at the woman 'You ok?'

'Yeah.. yeah I'm ok' the woman said weakly

' What did you do to her?' she turned to the guy

'Just wanted to have some fun, you know' he smirked nervously

'oh you naughty naughty boy~ ' she smiled sensualy and stepped closer to him

'What, what do you want?' he asked

'You left without saying goodbye' she put her hands around his neck and was about to kiss him ' I just want a little kiss~' she said in the same tone he had said earlier and kissed him.

The woman on the ground, barely keeping herself awake, took out her phone and started recording as the two were kissing

'Oh god, wh....you are practicaly...eating that guy's face' she said in a drunken state , before her happening something she have never seen before. And it wasn't the kiss, but the was the bartender was drinking something blue that come out of the guy's mouth as a smoke, her eyes had transformed from her usual brown godly eyes, to a powerful hungry blue. She drank the blue smoke with a satisfied smirk as the guy fell down with a smile on his now dead face. There were unusual marks around his mouth and a big horror smile on his face. The bartender looked down at him satisfied with her 'feeding' and as the elevator come to the last stop, she started walking away . Only to be stoped be a groan.

'Wahh... that was... sooo cool~' The woman still on the elevator's ground said in her drunken voice as she watche the woman' you just sucked that guy's face...that blue thing....' she watched the woman leave and called her 'hey! how about me? you...you can't leave me here....come back...'

The bartender sighed and stoped. She turned and walking back to the woman, she threw her over one shoulder and carried her away.

Ahh~ it feels so good to live life at max!

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Re: Lost girl (guess the pairings~)
« Reply #1 on: April 12, 2013, 11:27:11 PM »
Welcome to the forum!!!!!

We can help you with certain things that will better you as a storyteller but you gotta be open with certain changes.

Anyways with the story, so Yuki is more of clean-up person and can entice men if she pleases.  The second woman is a lightweight and instant lust comes out between the man and woman :thumbsup
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Re: Lost girl (guess the pairings~)
« Reply #2 on: April 12, 2013, 11:29:40 PM »
 :welcome to  :hipheart:

it's a good start and I agree with kurosawa87, we can help you :)

So it's MaYuki? good, thanks to our mod seigus-san I am a huge fan of that pairing  :roll:
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Re: Lost girl (guess the pairings~)
« Reply #3 on: April 13, 2013, 02:50:50 AM »
i saw some chapthers and i really like it. So i hope your fic will be awesome :3
it'll be a badass Yuki, right? xD ooh i want to see that!!

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Re: Lost girl (guess the pairings~)
« Reply #4 on: April 13, 2013, 03:55:52 AM »
This is based off the show "Lost Girl" from Syfy, isn't it?

I've seen commercials of the show, but I've never watched it.

This seems interesting. Maybe the pair is... Saeyuki~!
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Re: Lost girl (guess the pairings~)
« Reply #5 on: April 13, 2013, 04:27:17 AM »
Ho sounds pretty interesting! I got curious o/

I want more!

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Re: Lost girl (guess the pairings~)
« Reply #6 on: April 13, 2013, 01:44:14 PM »
Ah... AKB x Lost Girl... cross over... It's going to be interesting...

Lost Girl is one of my favorite US drama...

Well if the Bartender is Yuki... then Yuki is playing as Bo

Who is playing as Kenzi...? Mayu...?

I would want Mayu to be Lauren...

Can't wait to find out how the story going to develop....

I hope it's MayuxYuki Pairing...

Thank you for the new fic...

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Re: Lost girl (guess the pairings~)
« Reply #7 on: January 14, 2014, 02:24:20 AM »
Temodemo-san~ Please come back! :heart:

I wonder who the pairing is... Saeyuki? Mayuki? I don't care which~

Please update!
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:heart: l Dropped: Tentomu chu l REBORN l Bite me l NMB Gakuen l YumeToki l Cafe 48 l :heart: l Hiatus/Indefinite: Samurai l Blood Bonds l Night Wind's Deed l PRISM l Time Travelers l :heart:
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