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Offline olive29

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Re: A Sinful Feeling (MaYuki) - Chapter 2 (01/12/2013)
« Reply #20 on: December 01, 2013, 07:25:18 AM »
Thanks for the comment...

I'll reply it later


I have one question to you all...

WHO DO YOU THINK WILL FALL FIRST?
AND WHY?


feel free to answer it...

Thanks again...

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Re: A Sinful Feeling (MaYuki) - Chapter 2 (01/12/2013)
« Reply #21 on: December 01, 2013, 07:44:47 AM »
I don't plan to comment at first since I was lazy but your question motivated me.

I think Mayu will fall in love first and why because Mayu didn't really have friends. Maybe he will take it wrong her sister's gentleness.  :huhuh how to explain.... Just like not used to the sister's love and suddenly she came into his life and gave him the gentleness.  :sweatdrop: sorry I am too stupid to explain well.

Mayu is so cut in the last part  :wub:

Update soon

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Re: A Sinful Feeling (MaYuki) - Chapter 2 (01/12/2013)
« Reply #22 on: December 01, 2013, 07:53:32 AM »
I agree with Haruto. :thumbup

Mayu will definitely misunderstand Yuki's kindness because he never experience it to other people. Why wouldn't you fall in love to the only person who makes you feel you are loved or care deeply for you?

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Re: A Sinful Feeling (MaYuki) - Chapter 2 (01/12/2013)
« Reply #23 on: December 01, 2013, 10:11:05 AM »
I'm almost screamed when I read that last line, that incredible cute.  :)

I think Yuki fall first. She's already have interest to Mayu. Mayu cute, but cold, and difficult to understand. Maybe Yuki curiosity changed into love when she know Mayu better.

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Re: A Sinful Feeling (MaYuki) - Chapter 2 (01/12/2013)
« Reply #24 on: December 01, 2013, 01:02:08 PM »
I think that I missed this update..  :P

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WHO DO YOU THINK WILL FALL FIRST?
AND WHY?
Mayu.
Umm... it's only 2 chapters passed but Mayu already agreed to call Yuki 'onee-chan', so... I guess that he's not that cool.
He even willingly to say sorry to Yuki in a day! (Oh my God, I want Mayu become more cooler than this.)
Yuki will get him easily.

Yuki helped him from being bullied. I wonder when Mayu will fight back if someone try to bully him again.

Speaking of which, Yuki and Hiro.. they're a lovers or not?

Thank you for your update.  :)

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Re: A Sinful Feeling (MaYuki) - Chapter 2 (01/12/2013)
« Reply #25 on: December 01, 2013, 01:57:18 PM »
yuki onechaaaan

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Re: A Sinful Feeling (MaYuki) - Chapter 2 (01/12/2013)
« Reply #26 on: December 01, 2013, 04:51:16 PM »
mayuki are so cute~~  :wriggly:

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Re: A Sinful Feeling (MaYuki) - Chapter 2 (01/12/2013)
« Reply #27 on: December 02, 2013, 03:46:48 PM »
OW C'MON I WANT MORE DEVELOPMENT BETWEEN MAYUKI

SO THE HOT SCENE COULD BE HAPPEN  KEKEKE

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Re: A Sinful Feeling (MaYuki) - Chapter 2 (01/12/2013)
« Reply #28 on: December 09, 2013, 10:43:19 AM »
Time for reply...

I'll update the next chapter after I finish my exam and the next chapter of TDIM. Please wait patiently..  :bow:

@imteedee: It's just Yuki want to know Mayu more, he's her brother after all...
sorry, for making Mayu that weak...  :bow:

@kirozoro: awww...thank you. Yup...yup...Mayu is so cute *faints*. Just wait for the next chapter...

@chichay12: awwww....thanks
I wonder that too..  :?
Please wait for the next update patiently..

@Terragen: Yup...cute Mayu is cute..  :grin:
It's just a boyfriend, they can break up, but who knows??

@mayuki_daisuki: Black Yukirin can easily defeat them in just a mere seconds
Yup...Mayu is so cute  :inlove:
You're welcome anyways..

@FoxKuzan: awww...hello and welcome  :welcome
thank you very much... :bow:
please wait for the next chapter patiently

@Konoe: she's interesting indeed
yeah, with Yuki come to save Mayu, I hope the bullies will be afraid to lay their hands on Mayu too  :angry:

As for your 2nd comment, because the said person is his sister? But, aren't siblings supposed to care for each other?

@Haruto Lee: ahhh...I understand. You mean Mayu will fall for Yuki's kindness, right?
Well, just wait and see..  :grin:

@Kiri-el: Yeah, it's cute right?
She was interested in Mayu because he is her brother
Won't you feel curious too if you suddenly meet again with your long lost brother after separated for many years? And you don't even remember that you have a brother. If it was me, I will definitely try to get close to him, too..

@anakpanti: well, Mayu is not made by stone, you know..
He may be cold, but he still has heart and it was his fault anyway. Yuki only tried to help him, but he snapped at her, so it's the right thing to do, to apologize.
And, yeah.. Hiro is Yuki's boyfriend.. (for now)  :lol:
Please wait for the next chapter patiently..

@gek geki:  :lol:
just wait for the next chapter...  :grin:

@mo-chan: awww...thank you

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Re: A Sinful Feeling (MaYuki) - Chapter 2 (01/12/2013)
« Reply #29 on: December 09, 2013, 12:01:49 PM »
Just read it
And the plot was interesting

In my eyes
Yuki like seducing mayu LOL

Wonder yuki will regret wanting mayu to called her onechan

Tsk yuki yuki in the future you want mayu call you just yuki LOL
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Re: A Sinful Feeling (MaYuki) - Chapter 2 (01/12/2013)
« Reply #30 on: December 10, 2013, 03:52:59 PM »
It seems Mayu became a punching bag.. Why made him weak.. :cry:.:banghead:

Oooohh~ Yuki made Mayu to call her onee-chan.. This is it~! :fap The start of the sinful feeling.. Or not~ :nervous Hehehe

Hope you update soon.. Thanks for your hardwork.. :bow:

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Re: A Sinful Feeling (MaYuki) - Chapter 2 (01/12/2013)
« Reply #31 on: December 13, 2013, 06:31:30 AM »
 :twothumbs please update it

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Re: A Sinful Feeling (MaYuki) - Chapter 2 (01/12/2013)
« Reply #32 on: December 13, 2013, 11:50:21 AM »
@kurogumi: ahhh...thanks...
we'll just see what happen next, ne???

@kenjoy12: forgive me for making Mayu weak... :bow:
I don't know if it's the start??
Just see what will happen next..

@sidny48: will do

I'm not sure when I can update this fic...
I still have my exam and thesis after all..
And I'll update this fic after I update chapter 5 of The Devil Inside Me
So, please be patient
Thank you all.. :bow:

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Re: A Sinful Feeling (MaYuki) - Chapter 2 (01/12/2013)
« Reply #33 on: December 31, 2013, 05:55:03 PM »
I'm sorry if it's sudden..

But, I'll put this fic in hiatus for a while.

I need time to recover from Yuko-san's graduation announcement..

And I'm planning to make a fanfic for Yuko as a tribute to her.

Sorry... :bow:

HAPPY NEW YEAR ALL !!!!

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Re: A Sinful Feeling (MaYuki) - Chapter 2 (01/12/2013) (HIATUS)
« Reply #34 on: December 31, 2013, 06:24:46 PM »
I know how you feel ...  :panic:

But I'll still wait for an update of this, because I like the seducing Yuki  :heart:
and at least I'll wait until Yuki breaks off with Hiro guy  :yep:
sorry for commenting so late, I just finished reading it:)
It was interesting ~

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Re: A Sinful Feeling (MaYuki) - Chapter 2 (01/12/2013) (HIATUS)
« Reply #35 on: January 13, 2014, 04:59:55 AM »
EH!!??? WHY HIATUS??? THIS BEAUTIFUL FIC??

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Re: A Sinful Feeling (MaYuki) - Chapter 2 (01/12/2013)
« Reply #36 on: February 08, 2014, 02:37:14 PM »
Hello, guys...

It's been a long time since the last time I updated this fic..

I decide to revoke the hiatus status  :grin:

I'm writing chapter 3 now.. and hopefully I can finish it in a couple of days..

Stay tune...  :grin:

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Re: A Sinful Feeling (MaYuki) - Chapter 2 (01/12/2013)
« Reply #37 on: February 08, 2014, 04:02:50 PM »
Hello, guys...

It's been a long time since the last time I updated this fic..

I decide to revoke the hiatus status  :grin:

I'm writing chapter 3 now.. and hopefully I can finish it in a couple of days..

Stay tune...  :grin:

my wincest feels!! :cry: :cry: :twothumbs :twothumbs

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Re: A Sinful Feeling (MaYuki) - Chapter 2 (01/12/2013)
« Reply #38 on: March 30, 2014, 04:57:00 PM »
just check this out and gawdd.. why do I even start to loving this~  :wub:

please update soon  :twothumbs

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Re: A Sinful Feeling (MaYuki) - Chapter 2 (01/12/2013)
« Reply #39 on: March 30, 2014, 05:59:28 PM »
Please updated soon.. I wait until my neck had become long..lol (kidding)
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