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« Reply #120 on: October 31, 2006, 10:21:23 AM »
I'm not like Captain.

I don't save my money for later. When my Grandpa gives me money, I spend it right away. Just like earlier, my Grandpa gave me some money again. I asked Chinami-chan to go shopping with me. I know she collects coins too but of course she said she'd go. There are only a few people who refuse me when I ask them to do something.

We met at a cake shop near my school. She told me that someone told her about a new store that sells accessories. She sent a message to her contact, asking for directions. As soon as she got the directions, Chinami-chan dragged me off.

As we headed to the store she asked me something.
"So how are you doing with the guy you told me about?"
"What guy?"
"You know, the one with the girlfriend."
"Ah, him. I'm thinking of giving up already."
"That's not like you, Yurina-chan."
"I tried to, but I can't break them apart."
"Maybe I can help you with that." she said with a sly grin.

If I told her that I was talking about Risako-chan's classmate, would she still have offered me help? I just shook my head and changed the topic.

"So what's that news I heard about you and Akanishi-san?" I asked her.
"That's just a product of their wild imagination."
"I thought so."

Good thing that news died out quickly. Akanishi-san is handsome and Chinami-chan is pretty and they'd be quite a pair. I know that there's a huge age difference but if it were true, I'd be so jealous. Now when did I become the jealous type? Oh. I remember.

We arrived at the store and we saw that there were a lot of other people inside, most of them were girls our age. Of course, Chinami and I had to wear disguises so that nobody would recognize us.

The stuff they were selling at the store was amazing. No wonder a lot of people go here. A lady then approached me.
"You're Kumai Yurina, aren't you?" she asked. I guess my height was a dead giveaway. My sunglasses and cap were useless. Maybe I should cut my hair. I was thinking about that for a long time. That's what other girls do when they're depressed.
"Please keep it down ma'am. Someone might hear you." I said.
"No problem. Finally, someone famous goes to my shop. I'm so happy"
"Huh?" So she's the owner of the store. She's tall too. She's like a model or something when she was younger.
"I was telling this boy that went here a few weeks ago that I put up this shop hoping that one day someone from your group would go here. My kids and I are fans of yours, you see."
"Really? Thank you very much!" I said as I bowed to her.
"That boy was real nice. I think he's as tall as you. He bought something for one of you, I think it was for..."
"Risako-chan."  I know. How? Two words: tall boy.
"How'd you know?"
"I saw her wearing a bracelet last time we met."
"Really? So they really are classmates. Do you know this boy too?"
"I think so."
"So do you like anything? Just tell me and I'll give you a discount."
"Thank you. I think I'll get one of these." I said as I pointed to a pair of earrings. Chinami-chan approached us and the owner couldn't believe that there was another Berryz Koubou in her store.
"Just tell me anything you want girls. I'll give you a really special discount."
'If we bring the others too, will we get stuff for free?" Chinami-chan asked her.
"I'll think about it. Okay, you got a deal." the owner said.

We laughed at her decision. But hey, it would be easy to bring the other girls along, as long as we have really good disguises. I'm sure Momo-chan and Miyabi-chan will like this store.

"You two are so pretty in person. I really would like to have a picture with you but I know it's not allowed."
"Thanks for understanding ma'am." I said.
"My kids will be so jealous if I told them that you two went here."
"Just tell them that we appreciate your support." Chinami-chan said.
"We will be in your next concert."
"Thank you ma'am. We will do our best." We told her as we bowed.

Because of the discount she gave us, I ended up not just buying the earrings. I also bought other stuff like rings, a bracelet and a necklace. Chinami-chan bought a lot of stuff too.We decided to eat at a nearby cafe.

"Hey did you hear about Risako-chan's classmate getting beat up by some older guys?" she asked me as she tried her bracelet on.
"Really? I didn't know about that." I realized that I haven't spoken to him or even sent him a message since my birthday.
"Poor kid. Maasa-chan said his hand was broken."
"I hope that doesn't affect his handwriting. I love his handwriting."
"Are you sure that's the only thing you love about him?" Chinami-chan asked. I just raised my eyebrow and smiled back at her.

When I got home, I sent him a message, after all this time. After he refused what I told him to do. On my birthday. The nerve.
- Hey I heard that you died.
I got an answer after a few seconds.
- That's what I heard too.
- But you're not right? I'm not talking to a ghost, am I?
- Of course not.
- So, how are you? How's your hand?
- I'm fine and my hand's getting better too.
- How are you and Risako-chan doing?
- We're fine.
- Have you kissed her already?
I asked him the same question the first day I met him. I think that I'll be keeping on asking him that question just to make myself jealous. I had a feeling that they already did kiss each other. I just wanted to find out what his reaction would be but he didn't answer that question so I asked him another one.
- You bought her photobook, didn't you?
- Nope. She gave me a copy.
- Really? Hey, if I had a photobook, would you buy it or would you like it more if I gave you a copy?
- You're going to have a photobook too?
- Not yet. But what if I had one? Will you accept it if I gave you one?
- Of course.
- Promise?
- Promise. And Kumai-san, it was nice to hear from you again.
- You too. Get well soon.
- Thanks.

I know that I do have a place in his heart but never will it take the place of Risako-chan. Guess that's what I'm always going to be: the second option. I thought I could get over him but talking to him again made me remember why I fell for him in the first place. Risako-chan already asked me before if I like him. I was honest enough to tell her that I do. I don't know how she handles it but our relationship didn't seem to get affected by it. That's good. That's why I love Risako-chan. She's doesn't let those kinds of things get in the way our friendship.

They say that letting go is one the greatest act you can do for someone you love. But others say that you should fight for what you feel.

I told the Captain about my situation and asked her for advice.

"Looks like we're in the same boat. You should let go and move on. That's what I'm trying to do. It's hard but I know you can do it. There are a lot other guys out there, Yurina-chan. I'm sure there's someone just for you."

I thanked her for giving me advice. But somehow, what she said sounded familiar. Yeah. Someone told me something like that on my birthday.

So Captain's fallen in love with someone too. And with someone who’s already in a relationship. And she's trying to get over him. Looks like we have a lot in common.

But I'm going to make things clear.

I'm not like Captain.
« Last Edit: October 31, 2006, 10:35:53 AM by wordsworth »

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« Reply #121 on: October 31, 2006, 11:55:36 AM »
OMG Yurina is going to fight for the guy I know it! And Saki is so nice, she's the kind that will just quietly love him from the side :baa60776:

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« Reply #122 on: October 31, 2006, 11:34:11 PM »
Quote from: wordsworth;225502
I'm not like Captain.
There are only a few people who refuse me when I ask them to do something.

why does she sounds so ...badass XD
your fic made me like risako, but it's strating to make me feel the opposite for yurina hahaha...
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"Maybe I can help you with that." she said with a sly grin.

what the...XD

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If I told her that I was talking about Risako-chan's classmate, would she still have offered me help?
Maybe...............and btw...how can she help her anyway ???? XD
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"So what's that news I heard about you and Akanishi-san?" I asked her.
"That's just a product of their wild imagination."
"I thought so."

hehe, i really like when you put real details in your story

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Good thing that news died out quickly.

yeah i think it's a good thing too...people really didn't believe it heh...except me when i first read it XD hahahah
:evil:

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The stuff they were selling at the store was amazing. No wonder a lot of people go here. A lady then approached me.
"You're Kumai Yurina, aren't you?" she asked. I guess my height was a dead giveaway. My sunglasses and cap were useless.

hahahaha...she is so tall for her age XD and i guess the owner was expecting them to come, thks to Pretty Boy
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Maybe I should cut my hair. I was thinking about that for a long time.

well, as long as you don't dye them like rika did...
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That's what other girls do when they're depressed.
i thought they eat chocolate when they are depressed ? hahaha...or spend money...
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"Risako-chan."  I know. How? Two words: tall boy.

:ROTFLMAO: is that still rare to see a tall boy in all japan XD
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'If we bring the others too, will we get stuff for free?" Chinami-chan asked her.
she just can't help herself making jokes heh :D
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"You two are so pretty in person. I really would like to have a picture with you but I know it's not allowed."
awwwww..
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I realized that I haven't spoken to him or even sent him a message since my birthday.
i understant that...you almost forced him to kiss you XD
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"I hope that doesn't affect his handwriting. I love his handwriting."
"Are you sure that's the only thing you love about him?" Chinami-chan asked.

:ROTFLMAO: :ROTFLMAO: :ROTFLMAO: :ROTFLMAO: :ROTFLMAO:
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I just raised my eyebrow and smiled back at her.
yeeeee evil eyebrow XD XD XD

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- Hey I heard that you died.
I got an answer after a few seconds.
- That's what I heard too.
- But you're not right? I'm not talking to a ghost, am I?
- Of course not.

:lmao: :lmao: :lmao: :lmao: :lmao: :lmao: :lmao: :lmao:
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- Have you kissed her already?
I asked him the same question the first day I met him. I think that I'll be keeping on asking him that question just to make myself jealous.

*dies*
incorrigible
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- Really? Hey, if I had a photobook, would you buy it or would you like it more if I gave you a copy?

hahahahaha....oops sorry...
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Risako-chan already asked me before if I like him. I was honest enough to tell her that I do. I don't know how she handles it but our relationship didn't seem to get affected by it. That's good. That's why I love Risako-chan. She's doesn't let those kinds of things get in the way our friendship.
aaaaa........cute cute cute

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They say that letting go is one the greatest act you can do for someone you love. But others say that you should fight for what you feel.
life is hard isn't it hahaha

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I told the Captain about my situation and asked her for advice.

"Looks like we're in the same boat. You should let go and move on. That's what I'm trying to do. It's hard but I know you can do it. There are a lot other guys out there, Yurina-chan. I'm sure there's someone just for you."

:cry:
captain captain captain:ONluvluv2: :ONluvluv2: :ONluvluv2:
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I thanked her for giving me advice. But somehow, what she said sounded familiar.[..]So Captain's fallen in love with someone too. And with someone who’s already in a relationship. And she's trying to get over him. Looks like we have a lot in common.
uh oh...what will happen if they find out they are in love with the same guy XD

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But I'm going to make things clear.

I'm not like Captain.


looking forward for this :D

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« Reply #123 on: November 01, 2006, 02:26:33 AM »
Yay conflict! :grin: Time to see Yurina and Risako fight over a guy... That would be so cute...! :love:

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« Reply #124 on: November 01, 2006, 07:48:25 PM »
that was one of the cutest chapter I've read then again, all of your chapters are cute!

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« Reply #125 on: November 01, 2006, 10:59:49 PM »
ehhh?! Yurina's gonna fight for her love?!?! ouch..this'll get interesting real fast then.. :pen_eat:

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« Reply #126 on: November 08, 2006, 10:27:26 AM »
I went to the hospital earlier today. The doctor finally removed the bandage and the stitches on the wound. It's almost fully healed and he said that I don't need to put a bandage to cover it anymore, but I have to clean it at least three times a day, just like brushing my teeth. I looked at myself in the mirror. It was the first time I ever saw the wound and I found out that it was almost parallel to my eyebrow so it wasn't really that noticeable.
"The scar won't be that nasty. But you be careful next time." he said.
"I will." I answered him.
"Your hand is getting better too. Just avoid lifting heavy objects or doing strenuous activities that involve it."
"I will."
"Be careful."

***

I dropped by the manga store before I went home to check if a new issue was out and the manager greeted me.
"So how are you today? I see that you finally got rid of that bandage."
"I'm fine sir. Thanks for the concern. Yeah. The bandage was quite bothersome. Can you see the wound?" I asked him as I pointed at it.
"If I look closely, I can see it. But if you didn't tell me, I wouldn't have known."
"I thought the scar it would leave behind would be ugly."
"Nah. Don't worry about that. I'm sure you'll still be able to date a lot of girls even with that."
"I don't plan on dating a lot of girls."
"So you'd rather stick to one. By the way, the girl I was telling you the other time, she went here a while ago."
"Really? She probably bought the manga too."
"Yep. And you were right. She wasn't looking for you. There was this other guy who came here and he was also tall. They went out together."
"I told you so. Umm Sir, do you still have the latest issue of the manga?"
"Of course. I thought you were finally gonna ask me if I still had that photobook for you.."
"Haha. I'm not really into photobooks."

I headed home with the manga in hand but I what the manager told me was still stuck in my head.

So Murakami-san is already seeing somebody. Good for her. That guy's quite lucky too. Murakami-san is a funny and pleasant person. Even if she gets under my skin sometimes, I know she's not like that all the time. I hope they get along well.

I arrived home and found out that my cousin was waiting for me. He was dressed for jogging.
"Hey you're here to return the single aren't you?" I asked him.
"Not really. I came here to ask you if you wanted to jog, just like old times."
"Why not? I guess I need some exercise. And I won't be using my hand."
"Go get dressed then."

I called Sugaya and told her that I'll be out jogging with my cousin.
"Hello. I'm going out for a while. My cousin wants to jog at the park."
"Okay. But what about your hand, is it alright already?"
"It's fine. By the way the doctor removed the bandage already."
"Really? So when are you gonna ask me out again, my prince?"
"Prince? When did I become your prince?"
"You don't want me to call you that?"
"Not really. I thought you were gonna call me 'Pretty Boy' too."
"Haha. But you are a pretty boy! Even Goto-senpai said it herself. Plus calling you prince doesn't sound too mushy."
"You have a point. But I guess this scar will take away some of my 'Pretty Boy' points."
"No it won't. I guarantee you."
"If you say so. Now I've got to think of something to call you too..."
"I'd be fine with anything you choose."
"Ummm. My cosuin's waiting for me. I'll call you again later, okay."
"Okay. Have fun jogging."

***

It was already late afternoon but this was the same time we would go out and jog when we were younger. The sun was almost ready to set and the people in the park were starting to go home. After a good hour of jogging, we decide to rest for a while in a nearby bench.
"How are you and Momo-san doing?" I asked him as I wiped away some of my sweat.
"We're fine. She's quite a girl. There are times when she scares me but there are times when she's scared of me. It's quite weird, actually. But I like her. I hope she likes me too."
"Really? I didn't know Momo-san could be scary, scary enough even for someone like you. I'm sure she like you too."
"Umm. I have a question, what kind of gifts do you think girls would like?"
"Have you tried flowers?"
"Not yet. I haven't given her anything yet."
"I know, there's this shop that sells stuff like accessories for girls. Wanna go there?"
"Maybe some other time."

After that, a girl passed us. She looked familiar because I recall someone wearing the same outfit before.
"Yajima-san?"
She looked back. I was right. She went to where we were sitting.
"Oh! So it's you Pretty Boy! I didn't know you liked to jog too." she said before she noticed my cousin. Like the first time we met, she also checked him out. Does she always do that? Anyway, she looked at me after she was done. She didn't say anything but I knew what her look was telling me:

"Didn't you tell us before that you didn't have an older brother?"

"Ah, Yajima-san, this is my cousin." I said as I introduced her. My cousin stood up and bowed to her. Yajima-san bowed to him too.
"I thought he was your brother or something." she said.
"Nope. He's my cousin. Yajima-san here is a member of Hello!Project too. She's in C-ute with Murakam...."
"Megumi-chan's no longer a part of C-ute and Hello!Project." she interrupted.
"What? Since when?"
"Since the start of the month. She left because she wanted to focus on her studies. But I think that there's a different reason. Have you checked the internet lately?"
"No, why?"
"There were some pictures of her with a guy. When I first heard about it, I thought that it was you but when I saw the pictures, it was someone else."
"Who took those pictures?"
"We don't know. Probably a fan or a stalker or a paparazzi."
"How come you thought it was me?"
"They said that he was tall."
"I'm not the only tall person around."
"Right. But if it were you, I would have looked for you and beat you up for your two-timing."
"Why me? I already got beat up a few weeks back."
"Really? So what Captain and Maasa were saying was true. I thought they were just joking."
"You could ask Momo-sa.., I mean Tsugunaga-san. She's a witness. So is my cousin." My cousin just nodded.
"No need. I could see that wound near your eyebrow."
"Aww. I thought you wouldn't notice."
"It made you look more different than wearing your glasses. It makes you look like a violent person."
"I'm not a bad guy."
"I know."
"Just a question, why would you beat that guy up? I mean, Murakami-san said she left because she wanted to continue her studies right? Why blame it on the guy?"
"You're right. I feel that there should be someone to blame but I have no right to point fingers at anyone."
"Well, I wish Murakami-san the best and for your group too. I know you'll be fine."
"Thanks. I have to go now. Nice seeing you again and nice to meet you." she said as she bowed to us and jogged away. "Oh, and be careful!" she added.
"What was her name again?" my cousin asked.
"Yajima Maimi. Why?"
"Nothing."
"She's pretty."
"Right."

***

We arrived at our house at dinnertime. My parents and my sister weren't around but it was fine because my cousin was around, although I'm used to eating alone.
A few minutes after we finished eating, his parents came to pick him up.
"Hey, where's the single?" I asked him before he left.
"Oops. I forgot it at home. I'll bring it next time."
"You use that when your practicing, don't you?"
"How'd you know?"
"I just do."
"You just creeped me out. That's what Momo tells me sometimes."
"Haha. Better watch out. Maybe she'll find out that you were checking out Yajima-san earlier."
"I wasn't checking her out."
"You weren't? It was obvious"
"I...was...Just don't tell Momo about this, okay?"
"Fine. Thanks for dropping by. Next time, I'll drop by your house and the dojo."
"Okay."

I called Sugaya when I reached my room.
"Hello! Were you sleeping already?"
"Nope. I was waiting for your call. So what happened?"
"I missed jogging with my cousin. It was fun."
"Your cousin is a guy right?"
"Of course. Why? Don't tell me your jealous."
"Me jealous? Why should I?"
"I'm just kidding. Also, my cousin and I bumped into Yajima-san."
"Yajima-san?"
"Yajima Maimi. You know her don't you?"
"Yes I do know her. I just thought you were talking about someone else. How'd you know her?"
"She was with Murakami-san at the manga store before and speaking of her, I didn't know that Murakami-san already left Hello!Project."
"Yeah. She left."
"Did she leave because of the pictures?"
"I'm not sure."
"I see. You don't want to talk about it huh?"
"Yeah. Megumi-chan leaving us so sudden made me real sad. "
"Come on. She's still around. It's not like she left the world you know."
"Right."
"Anyway, I still haven't thought of what to call you yet."
"Awww."
"Wait. Would it be okay if I called you 'star'?"
"That's fine. I like it. I like it a lot. Now why didn't I think of that?"
"Maybe because it was meant for me to call you that. "
"Awww. "
"So you're my star."
"And you're my prince."
"We don't sound like old people, don't we?"
"Of course not."

I can't exactly recall what other things we talked about but we tried to avoid talking about Murakami-san. What didn't leave my mind was what the doctor and Yajima-san told me when she was leaving.

Be careful.
« Last Edit: November 14, 2006, 10:36:46 AM by wordsworth »

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« Reply #127 on: November 08, 2006, 01:03:54 PM »
Aaaaah !
i was looking forward to read your version of Megumi's resignation:D
aaaah i'm being kicked out of the compurter room again ><
anyway i'm gong to be late for classes if i don't go XD
comment on it later !

Edit: ok i'm back !

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I dropped by the manga store before I went home to check if a new issue was out and the manager greeted me.

hehe i was expencting he would have met Megu with her friend or something, and she would have told him about her resignation...but as always, you surprised me by a better idea hehehehehe

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"Nah. Don't worry about that. I'm sure you'll still be able to date a lot of girls even with that."

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"Yep. And you were right. She wasn't looking for you. There was this other guy who came here and he was also tall. They went out together."
:D
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"I told you so. Umm Sir, do you still have the latest issue of the manga?"
i'm still wondering what is the title of this manga...the fact that he is the only boy who asks for it still stuck in my mind hahaha
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"Of course. I thought you were finally gonna ask me if I still had that photobook for you.."
he wants to sell him that photobook that badly ? hahahaha maybe he wants to share his opinion on it with him....hum...
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So Murakami-san is already seeing somebody. Good for her. That guy's quite lucky too. Murakami-san is a funny and pleasant person. Even if she gets under my skin sometimes, I know she's not like that all the time. I hope they get along well.
aah...

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"Hey you're here to return the single aren't you?" I asked him.
he really wants his single back huh ? XD oh..i almost forgot i was a "gift" by Risako ...maybe he just wants it back because of that...?
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"Really? So when are you gonna ask me out again, my prince?"

oh g...:lmao::lmao::lmao::lmao: "my prince" hahahahaha....that fits him so well XD
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"Prince? When did I become your prince?"
"You don't want me to call you that?"
"Not really. I thought you were gonna call me 'Pretty Boy' too."

hum...ok for the "Not really" but the reason....4 possibilities :
_ he realy thinks he is a pretty boy, but i really doubt that one lol
_ it's a way of keeping in mind Megu...the first time he was called Pretty Boy was when he met her the second time with Maimi
_ He likes it since it was said by Ms. Foxy Fungo
_ the first 3 are wrong and only you know it why ....XD
still...we don't know his real name XD

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[..]I guess this scar will take away some of my 'Pretty Boy' points.
that's why this scar was mentioned so many times in this chapter ? XD hahahaha...
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Now I've got to think of something to call you too...
see? i've said it you will satrt to call her by a nick...so you can still remember how many time you called her Risako right ? haha....
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She's quite a girl. There are times when she scares me but there are times when she's scared of me. It's quite weird, actually.

i don't know why, but what he said made me laugh so hard :ROFL
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"I know, there's this shop that sells stuff like accessories for girls. Wanna go there?"
"Maybe some other time."

why do i feel some ...reticence...here :lol:hahaha....it's like "what ? a guy like me in this kind of store ? no thank you...ok wait... if that can please Momo then.... why not....damn it...so hard to make a girl happy..."

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After that, a girl passed us. She looked familiar because I recall someone wearing the same outfit before.
"Yajima-san?"
waaa, the outfit told you she was Maimi ??? XD
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"Oh! So it's you Pretty Boy! I didn't know you liked to jog too." she said before she noticed my cousin. Like the first time we met, she also checked him out. Does she always do that? Anyway, she looked at me after she was done.

:damnfunny:damnfunny:damnfunny:damnfunny:damnfunny:damnfunny
 
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"Nope. He's my cousin. Yajima-san here is a member of Hello!Project too. She's in C-ute with Murakam...."
"Megumi-chan's no longer a part of C-ute and Hello!Project." she interrupted.

a great way to mention Megu...but does his cousin know her ? XD i don't remember they talked about her in the past chapter...and since he doesn't seem to know Maimi...
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"Since the start of the month. She left because she wanted to focus on her studies. But I think that there's a different reason. Have you checked the internet lately?"
"No, why?"
"There were some pictures of her with a guy. When I first heard about it, I thought that it was you but when I saw the pictures, it was someone else."
[..]
"How come you thought it was me?"
"They said that he was tall."

reading this part was...funny and a bit strange, 'cause it was like you were refering to my stupid post XD
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"I'm not the only tall person around."
"Right. But if it were you, I would have looked for you and beat you up for your two-timing."

i thought she was going to say "because it's all your fault if she quit ! you ruined her life !" hahaha...
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"Why me? I already got beat up a few weeks back."
"Really? So what Captain and Maasa were saying was true. I thought they were just joking."
hum...looks like Pretty Boy is a common subject between the h!pk XD XD ?
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"No need. I could see that wound near your eyebrow."
"Aww. I thought you wouldn't notice."
BAm XD
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"It made you look more different than wearing your glasses. It makes you look like a violent person."
looool
hahahaha :damnfunny:damnfunny:damnfunny
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"Just a question, why would you beat that guy up?

wait...wher did she say that ??? XD
she only said she would have beaten you for the two-timing...:ONdunno:
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"What was her name again?" my cousin asked.
"Yajima Miami. Why?"
"Nothing."
"She's pretty."
"Right."
here again i have no idea why but it made me laugh XD

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"Hey, where's the single?
"Oops. I forgot it at home. I'll bring it next time."" I asked him before he left.
...did his cousin went to his house before they went jogging together ?
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"Haha. Better watch out. Maybe she'll find out that you were checking out Yajima-san earlier."
"I wasn't checking her out."
"You weren't? It was obvious"
"I...was...Just don't tell Momo about this, okay?"

hahahaha...
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I called Sugaya when I reached my room.
"Hello! Were you sleeping already?"
"Nope. I was waiting for your call.

so sweet....

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"I missed jogging with my cousin. It was fun."
"Your cousin is a guy right?"
"Of course. Why? Don't tell me your jealous."

:ROTFLMAO::ROTFLMAO::ROTFLMAO::ROTFLMAO::ROTFLMAO:
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"Come on. She's still around. It's not like she left the world you know."
he got a point here !
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"Anyway, I still haven't thought of what to call you yet."
"Awww."
"Wait. Would it be okay if I called you 'star'?"
"That's fine. I like it. I like it a lot. Now why didn't I think of that?"
"Maybe because it was meant for me to call you that. "
"Awww. "
"So you're my star."
"And you're my prince."
"We don't sound like old people, don't we?"
"Of course not."

i was like :ONluvluv2:
star ? refering to the fact she is an idole and she gives him some light at night ? a beautiful little star who seems to be so far away yet so close ?
and then the last part just make me :ROTFLMAO:

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What didn't leave my mind was what the doctor and Yajima-san told me when she was leaving.

Be careful.

hummm...expecting something ..bad maybe...in the next chapter...
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« Reply #128 on: November 08, 2006, 05:10:07 PM »
wooo~new chapter~! :D i really like how you worked Megumi's resignation into this chapter, was really nicely done :thumbsup

wow...this fic keeps getting mushier and mushier with each chapter o.O now they have little nicknames for each other...expecting more mush in the next chapter =P

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« Reply #129 on: November 09, 2006, 07:59:09 AM »
I just sat here for last hour reading every chapter;  I'm impressed.  Seems like "Pretty boy" has all the girls of BK pinning for him. XD Wasn't sure on what to call him because his name wasn't revealed yet (or maybe I just missed it? :rolleyes: )

Anxiously awaiting your next chapter to this~

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« Reply #130 on: November 09, 2006, 12:56:23 PM »
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wooo~new chapter~! :D i really like how you worked Megumi's resignation into this chapter, was really nicely done :thumbsup

wow...this fic keeps getting mushier and mushier with each chapter o.O now they have little nicknames for each other...expecting more mush in the next chapter =P


No more Megumi :ONcry:
But its brilliant how you wrote it in.
Bad cousin of pretty boy for checking Maimi out when he already has Momoko. Although it was really tempting XD

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« Reply #131 on: November 14, 2006, 11:05:47 AM »
I got a call from Yurina-chan earlier. I thought she was going to ask me out shopping again but she called for a different reason.

"Chinami-chan, you told me that you'll help me right?"
"Help you with what?"
"You know who."
"Oh."
"Don't tell me you forgot already. You told me that you'd help me last time we went out."
"Okay. But I thought you were gonna give up on him?"
"I changed my mind."
"You sure change your mind fast, don't you? What made you change your mind?"
"It's a secret. So, are you gonna help me or not?"
"Okay. Give me a minute."

I had to gather my thoughts first. I've never done this before. I'm not sure if helping her get between a relationship would be a good thing but it sounds like fun so why not? I did volunteer to help her before so I have to keep my word.

"What do you like most about this guy?' I asked her.
"Hmmm. All?"
"Be specific. What was the first thing that got your attention?"
"Hmmm. First thing, first thing. Ah! What got me was his handwriting. Yeah. His handwriting's pretty good."
"One of your fetishes perhaps?"
"Hey, what are you talking about? Guys with good handwriting are hard to find. And a guy who looks good and has good handwriting is a lot harder. Good thing I was able to find one."
"I see. You can talk to him right? I mean, you two get along fine don't you?"
"As friends?"
"As friends."
"Yeah, yeah. I think so."
"Handwriting huh? Let me see. A-ha! This is what you're going to do. Think of a love letter and ask him to write it for you in paper. Tell him that you're going to give it to someone you like. If he asks why, tell him that you want him to write it so the person you'll be giving it to won't know that it came from you. Then if you already have the letter, find a way to show it to his girlfriend. If you can, tell her that you found it inside your locker. Even without telling her, I'm sure she'll recognize the handwriting."
"That....That's brilliant. It sounds like it's actually going to work."
"I'm not really sure."
"We won't know unless we try."
"Was that the kind of help you were looking for?"
"Exactly."
"Thanks but I have a question, why'd you ask me for help? Why not Captain?"
"I asked her already and she already gave me her advice."
"Alright. Why not Momo-chan?"
"She'd give me weird ideas and probably some suggestions that would be impossible to pull off."
"Miyabi-chan?"
"She won't help me. I know. I have a feeling that she doesn't approve trying to force myself into relationships like that."
"Maasa-chan?"
"She'd come up with some crazy stuff and she'll probably laugh at me for trying to do something like this."
"Risako-chan?"
"She's..."
"She's what?"
"She's.....now how would I put it.....she's.....involved?"
"Pardon?"
"I mean, she won't understand this stuff. Yet."
"She's too young for this, don't you mean?"
"Haha.You can say that. And she's busy with you know who."
"Hahaha. I know what you mean. They're probably talking to each other right now. Hey, you're too young for this stuff too!"
"Falling in love doesn't need time or age, you of all should know that."
"Ouch. You got me there. But seriously, why'd you ask me?"
"Because I know that I can count on you. Thanks a lot again Chinami-chan!"

I was flattered by her words. It gave me a good feeling, just like when Miyabi-chan asked me to accompany her to meet Risako-chan's classmate, although I have a feeling that I might regret this later. I hope Yurina-chan doesn't take this seriously and I hope that the guy and the girl she's talking about will forgive me for this if ever she decides to do it.

I wonder what kind of person this boy is to get Yurina-chan to act like this. If he's like Risako-chan's classmate, then that could be understandable. He's cute, he's tall, he's nice, he's smart, he can be funny and he has good handwriting. He has good handwriting. How come it's just now that I remembered that? Wait a minute...

Yurina-chan called me because she needed help with you know who.

She also said that Risako-chan is busy with you know who.

I hope she's talking about different persons here but you know what? I have a feeling that I just started a war.
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« Reply #132 on: November 14, 2006, 12:04:55 PM »
Oh no Chinami, that was an impossibly good plan. But the consequences.... I can't even imagine :ONfainted:

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« Reply #133 on: November 14, 2006, 12:09:57 PM »
wow wordsworth...
this chapter is so ... i don't find the perfect word to describe it :cry:

Looks like Chinami is trusted by every bk ^^

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I've never done this before. I'm not sure if helping her get between a relationship would be a good thing but it sounds like fun so why not?

Sounds fun...how can she say that XD
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"What do you like most about this guy?' I asked her.
"Hmmm. All?"
"Be specific. What was the first thing that got your attention?"
"Hmmm. First thing, first thing. Ah! What got me was his handwriting. Yeah. His handwriting's pretty good."

We obviously make the link here with Pretty Boy, Chinami didn't...but i guess it's understandable...now i'm looking forward to see when she will get it

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"One of your fetishes perhaps?"
"Hey, what are you talking about? Guys with good handwriting are hard to find. And a guy who looks good and has good handwriting is a lot harder."

:ROTFLMAO:
ok...maybe i agree with the last part XD

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"Handwriting huh? Let me see. A-ha! This is what you're going to do. Think of a love letter and ask him to write it for you in paper. Tell him that you're going to give it to someone you like. If he asks why, tell him that you want him to write it so the person you'll be giving it to won't know that it came from you. Then if you already have the letter, find a way to show it to his girlfriend. If you can, tell her that you found it inside your locker. Even without telling her, I'm sure she'll recognize the handwriting."

wow Chinami you are evil :ONstoned: and this sounds amazing XD
wow...
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Why not Momo-chan?"
"She'd give me weird ideas and probably some suggestions that would be impossible to pull off."
[..]"Maasa-chan?"
"She'd come up with some crazy stuff and she'll probably laugh at me for trying to do something like this."
:ROTFLMAO:
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"Miyabi-chan?"
"She won't help me. I know. I have a feeling that she doesn't approve trying to force myself into relationships like that."

YOU ARE THE BEST WORDSWORTH !!!
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"Risako-chan?"
"She's..."
"She's what?"
"She's.....now how would I put it.....she's.....involved?"
"Pardon?"
now if she doesn't see the link...
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I have a feeling that I might regret this later. I hope Yurina-chan doesn't take this seriously and I hope that the guy and the girl she's talking about will forgive me for this if ever she decides to do it.
oh my...this is going to be pretty bad...

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If he's like Risako-chan's classmate, then that could be understandable. He's cute, he's tall, he's nice, he's smart, he can be funny and he has good handwriting. He has good handwriting. How come it's just now that I remembered that? Wait a minute...

Chinami got it ! yeah !
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I hope she's talking about different persons here but you know what? I have a feeling that I just started a war.
too bad...too late...for the sake of the story you had to start that war ...i feel bad for you...

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« Reply #134 on: November 20, 2006, 11:30:15 AM »
Sugaya asked me if I could go with her somewhere after school today. I asked her where we were going but she didn't tell me.

"It's a secret."
"Please don't tell me were not going to the parlor again."
"Nope. We're not going there."
"Come on, at least give me a clue."
"We're going to meet someone."
"Someone I know?"
"Nope."

After class, we headed to the train station and rode one. After a few stops, we got off. Of course she still had to wear a disguise but she only wore a cap and a pair of glasses this time. We walked until we reached a school. A lot of its students were on their way home. She told me that we wait near the gate. We looked like stalkers and because of the different uniform we wore; it wasn't surprising why the other students who saw us would whisper to each other when they saw us.

"Do we look suspicious?" I asked her.
"I don't. But you do."
"Hey! You're the one who's wearing a disguise, not me."
"I'm just kidding. I think those girls are talking about you." she said as she pointed at a group of girls that just passed us.
"Really?"
"See, you still have your 'Pretty Boy' points." she said as she giggled.
"I guess so."

We stood there for almost twenty minutes. I recognize their uniforms. I remember seeing those during the time I was getting beaten by those men in the street. The uniforms of the other students that could have helped me or asked others for help. I'm not mad at them. I understand. It was my fault anyway.

"What are we waiting for anyway?"
"Not what but who. Did you know that Berryz Koubou has another member?"
"I thought there were only seven of you?"
"That was after she left."
"Why'd she leave?"
"The same reason as Megumi-chan."
"She has a boyfriend?"
"No silly. She wants to continue her studies. There she is, come on!"

Sugaya ran towards this girl and asked me to follow her. I don't know if she was our age or if she was older but she was cute. She's a former member of Berryz Koubou after all. Honestly, I didn't know that they were eight before.

"Hello!!" she said. The girl looked closer to make sure who she was.
"Risako-chan? Is that you? My, you've really grown. You're taller now. And prettier."
"Happy Birthday Maiha-chan!!!"
"And I thought you forgot." the girl pouted. "You the only one from the kids who hasn't greeted me yet. Thank you!" she said as she hugged Sugaya. Then she pointed at me. "Umm, who's that guy? Your bodyguard?"
"Nice to meet you. " I said as I bowed to her. "Happy Birthday by the way."
"This is Ishimura Maiha and she's a member of Berryz Koubou."
"You mean a former member." she said as after she bowed to me. "Thanks for greeting me."
"What do you mean? Once a Berryz, always a Berryz remember?"
Ishimura-san smiled. "You didn't answer my question. Who is he?"
"He's my friend."
"Just your friend?"
"Why?"
"He's cute."
"Even with that scar?"
"What scar?" she asked her as she looked closer at my face. "Oh that. It looks nasty but it makes him look hotter."
"See I told you so." Sugaya said as she looked at me. "He was afraid that it would make him look bad. Now you have to treat us with some cake."
"W..what?" Did she just say that?
"You're going to take us to a cake shop to celebrate Maiha-chan's birthday right?" she said as she winked at me.
"Oh. I remember." I nodded. I nodded. I nodded. I kept on nodding then I shook my head as soon as she wasn't looking at me anymore.
"What are we waiting for? Let's go." she said as she grabbed Ishimura-san's hand and walked. I walked after them and checked my wallet. I was thinking of buying something for her again but I guess treating them to some cake won't hurt. It was a special occasion after all.

We arrived at the cake shop she was talking about. Good thing it wasn't as expensive as the shop where Murakami-san took me before.The waiter asked them what they would like to have. They both ordered the same kind of cake. I just ordered for a glass of orange juice.
 
"Are you sure you're not gonna eat?" Sugaya asked me.
"Nope. I'm not really hungry." I said as I sipped at my glass of juice.
"Why? Looking at two cute girls already made you full?" Ishimura-san asked.

I almost spat out the juice that was in my mouth when she said that but I kept in inside. The two of them giggled as they watched me try to do it. She's funny. She could be at the same level as Tokunaga-san and Sudou-san. But what she said was partially true. Looking at the two of them was enough for me.

"Are you trying to drown me?" I asked them.
"But you do know how to swim, right?" Ishimura-san said.
"You're still fun, Maiha-chan." Sugaya said.
"You missed that, didn't you?"
"Yeah. But we miss you most of all."
"We haven't talked for a long time, haven't we."
"Yes. That's why I came to see you today."
"Where'd you get that? That's nice." Ishimura-san said as she pointed at the bracelet.
"Oh this. Someone special gave it to me so it's special." was Sugaya's reply. She looked at me and smiled.

I don't know how long they talked to each other. I heard some of the things they were talking about but it didn't really get stuck in my head. I don't know why Sugaya placed me in this situation but I'm not angry at her.It's just a few of the small things I can do for her. Her smile is something I couldn't forget but she smiled differently as she talked with Ishimura-san. I didn't know if they were close before but I could feel that they missed each other a lot. Seeing her being happy with her friends makes me happy as well.

"I have to go now, Risako-chan. It was nice seeing and talking to you again." Ishimura-san said.
Sugaya took out something from her bag and gave it to her.
"Happy Birthday again. I saved my allowance so that I can give something to you, and Captain, whose birthday is also coming."
"You're still as sweet as I remember, Risako-chan.Thank you very much. I really have to go. Get online sometime so we can talk. Nice to meet you. Thanks for the cake." she said as she bowed to me. "And make sure she gets home safe or else." then she gave me a scary glare. But it was still cute because of her puffy cheeks.
"I will." I said as I stood up and bowed to her.
"See you again, Maiha-chan." Sugaya stood up and hugged her one last time before she left. The waiter approached us and gave us the bill.
Sugaya tried to take out her wallet but I stopped her.
"I'm paying. It's my treat right?" I told her as I took out my wallet and gave the waiter the money. Good thing I bought extra money with me. We didn't wait for the change anymore.

We went out of the shop but we haven't said anything to each other until we reached the train station and we were waiting for the train to arrive.
"I was just kidding earlier." she said.
"Don't worry about it. You still have to buy something for the Captain's birthday, right?"
"Thank you." she said as she wiped some tears from her eyes.
"No problem. Why are you crying again?"
"I'm just...happy. I'm glad that you came along with me."
"I'm glad too. Because I met another of your friends."
"It's because you're special to me. You're my prince remember?"
"How could I forget."

The train finally arrived and we got in. Good thing there weren't a lot of people aboard. I stared at her. She was wearing glasses that time.
"Can you remove your glasses?" I asked her.
"Why?"
"You told me this before when I was wearing mine. And it's also the reason why I didn't want to wear them again."
"Huh?"
"It gets in the way when I look in your eyes."

She blushed as she removed the glasses. We didn't talk again after that. We just stared at each other until we got off. Her eyes told me that I made her happy today.

We held hands as I walked her home. We stood for a while in front of their house.
"Risako."
"Yes?"
I wasn't really sure I could tell her this but I suddenly had the confidence to do so.
"I...."
"Go on."
"I...love...you."
"You what? I can't hear you."
"I love you."
 I was finally able to say it to her again. I told her that before on the phone but this is the first time I told her personally. We stared at each other for a while. Again. Then she smiled at me, probably because my face turned red.
"What are you waiting for? Aren't you going to kiss me?" she said as she raised her eyebrow.
"Can I?"
"Of course."
I moved closer and gave her a quick kiss on her cheek. Then I moved a few steps away from her.
"Are you scared?" she asked me with a gentle smile as she placed her hands where I kissed her.
"I...actually...don't know. I...think...yeah."
"You're telling me that you're scared of me?"
"A bit."
"Why would you be scared of me?"
"I feel that I might get slapped. Or bitten."
"You're silly."
"Yes. And this silly guy loves you."
"I know."
"It's getting dark. I should get going. Good night."
"I'll see you tomorrow." she said as she walked inside.

I was a few blocks away from her house when my phone rang. I took it out of my pocket and it was her. I answered it.
"Hello." I said.
"I forgot to tell you something."
"What is it?"
"I love you too." she said as she ended the call.

Once again, I couldn't explain what I was feeling inside. I hope someday someone can tell me what it is. I can't wait to see her again tomorrow.
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« Reply #135 on: November 20, 2006, 03:07:46 PM »
I thought of one word when I read this.....SWEET! And Risako in glasses :panda_love: Does she really wear them in real life?

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« Reply #136 on: November 20, 2006, 03:59:10 PM »
aaaaaahh...
you said it lil_hamz...it's so sweet...
what a great chapter to make me forget about the rainning day at school...
Maiha's b-day huh...even if she isn't in bk anymore there are still fans who talked about it awww...oh well as they said it "Once a Berryz, always a Berryz"
i wonder if this was really said by them in real life ?
We can find that in Loser87's fic too so...
@lil_hamz : i don't think Risako wears glasses...but in this fic it was only mentioned as a disguise...but...i wonder if ...if wordsworth meant she  usually wears glasses, maybe Pretty Boy would had said "her pair of glasses" instead of "a pair of glasses" as he can see her everyday in classes with or without...

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Sugaya asked me if I could go with her somewhere after school today. I asked her where we were going but she didn't tell me.

"It's a secret."
[..]
"We're going to meet someone."
"Someone I know?"
"Nope."

hummmmm....:D  

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We looked like stalkers and because of the different uniform we wore; it wasn't surprising why the other students who saw us would whisper to each other when they saw us.

"Do we look suspicious?" I asked her.
"I don't. But you do."

:lol:
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"I'm just kidding. I think those girls are talking about you." she said as she pointed at a group of girls that just passed us.
"Really?"
"See, you still have your 'Pretty Boy' points." she said as she giggled.
"I guess so."

haha, sounds like Risako doesn't feel jealous here, more proud than anything else hehehe

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I recognize their uniforms. I remember seeing those during the time I was getting beaten by those men in the street.
what a coincidence Oo
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"Not what but who. Did you know that Berryz Koubou has another member?"
"I thought there were only seven of you?"
can i say "shame on you!" ? XD
if i were him...same case, don't know anything about BK but is going out with Risako, i would probably had learnt everything about how she got into h!p and all...berryz koubou...oh well...maybe it's a good thing that he doesn't know all the gir...er...the details...:D
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"That was after she left."
"Why'd she leave?"
"The same reason as Megumi-chan."
"She has a boyfriend?"
"No silly. She wants to continue her studies.

:ROTFLMAO:
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or if she was older but she was cute.

i was thinking "oh well who isn't in h!p.." and then
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She's a former member of Berryz Koubou after all.

:lmao:
don't ask me...i'm just stupid...

 
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"Umm, who's that guy? Your bodyguard?"

bodyguard....hahaha...i thought she would have said "your boydriend?"
humm...why...why bodyguard...maybe Maiha has only "studies" in her mind...or she just remembers the "no boyfriend" part of the h!p....hummm....maybe she just think Risako is too young to have one...or the idea didn't hit her at all...

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You didn't answer my question. Who is he?"
aaaa...i feel the curiousity ...maybe she wants to hear "my boyfriend" after all...
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"He's my friend."
"Just your friend?"
"Why?"
"He's cute."

:ROTFLMAO:
i don't know how to explain but there is something in this little part that made me laugh so hard...
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"Oh that. It looks nasty but it makes him look hotter."

maiha likes the bad-guy type ? XD
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Now you have to treat us with some cake.

:lmao: :lmao: :lmao:  what a girl...
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I was thinking of buying something for her again
:D

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Good thing it wasn't as expensive as the shop where Murakami-san took me before.[...]I just ordered for a glass of orange juice.

:ROTFLMAO:
 
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"Why? Looking at two cute girls already made you full?" Ishimura-san asked.

OMHLGKHKGJJGHKSTKRG
*dies*

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"Are you trying to drown me?" I asked them.
"But you do know how to swim, right?" Ishimura-san said.
"You're still fun, Maiha-chan." Sugaya said.
"You missed that, didn't you?"
"Yeah. But we miss you most of all."

aaaa...so sweet...

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Someone special gave it to me so it's special." was Sugaya's reply. She looked at me and smiled.

/me dies...cuteness overload...

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I don't know how long they talked to each other. I heard some of the things they were talking about but it didn't really get stuck in my head.
oh well, girls' talking...don't worry XD
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I don't know why Sugaya placed me in this situation but I'm not angry at her.
i don't see why you would be angry Oo
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"And make sure she gets home safe or else." then she gave me a scary glare. But it was still cute because of her puffy cheeks.

:ROFL
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We went out of the shop but we haven't said anything to each other until we reached the train station and we were waiting for the train to arrive.
aaa....still shy to chat ?
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"I was just kidding earlier." she said.
"Don't worry about it. You still have to buy something for the Captain's birthday, right?"
"Thank you." she said as she wiped some tears from her eyes.
"No problem. Why are you crying again?"

aaa... Pretty Boy....
but you made her cry again Oo
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"I'm just...happy. I'm glad that you came along with me."
"I'm glad too. Because I met another of your friends."
"It's because you're special to me. You're my prince remember?"
"How could I forget."

aww....

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"Can you remove your glasses?" I asked her.
"Why?"
[..]
"It gets in the way when I look in your eyes."
She blushed as she removed the glasses. We didn't talk again after that. We just stared at each other until we got off. Her eyes told me that I made her happy today.

/me is dying...heart is melting...

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I wasn't really sure I could tell her this but I suddenly had the confidence to do so.
"I...."
"Go on."
"I...love...you."
"You what? I can't hear you."
"I love you."
 I was finally able to say it to her again. I told her that before on the phone but this is the first time I told her personally.

good job Pretty Boy :pencry:  
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"What are you waiting for? I thought you were gonna kiss me too?" she said as she raised her eyebrow.

XD XD XD XD XD
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"Can I?"
oh god...that reminds my first kiss ...awww...the "can i ?" i will never forget...
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"Why would you be scared?"
"I...actually...don't know."

hum...scared that she doesn't like it ? XD scared that you smell bad ? XD
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"You're silly."
"Yes. And this silly guy loves you."
"I know."

aaa....he said that again ..awww....
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"Hello." I said.
"I forgot to tell you something."
"What is it?"
"I love you too." she said as she ended the call.

aaaa....
/me' s trying to find something else to say...

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Once again, I couldn't explain what I was feeling inside. I hope someday someone can tell me what it is. I can't wait to see her again tomorrow.

oh...if someone can tell me too i would be grateful XD

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« Reply #137 on: November 20, 2006, 04:13:27 PM »
Yes, that chapter was just too sweet. <3 :) I almost couldn't stop going "awwww" throughout the whole thing! Pretty Boy and Risako-chan are so mushy together...

Uh oh though, they just confirmed their love and Yurina is about to begin her plan to steal him away...! Especially since Pretty Boy is scared to kiss Risako...

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« Reply #138 on: November 23, 2006, 03:03:25 AM »
Somehow, I wasn't really conscious of my height before, but lately, I've been wishing that I were taller. I wish I'd grow a few inches this year, but I hope I don't grow as tall as Yurina-chan. If that happens, news might come out that I'm taking drugs or miracle pills to grow. I'd be happy if I'd be as tall as Miyabi-chan or Risako-chan. Yeah, probably, Risako-chan's height.

Oh yeah, today is my birthday.

I got calls from the other girls as soon as I woke up. As usual, Momo-chan was the first to greet me.
"Happy Birthday Shimi-chan!"
"Thank you!"
"So, how does it feel?"
"I feel normal."
"Feel any taller?"
"Hey!"
"Just kidding. I guess I don't have to worry."
"Worry about?"
"About you getting taller than me."
"I'll outgrow you someday!"

Chinami-chan called next.
"So."
"So what?"
"You're ready to have a boyfriend."
"What are you talking about?"
"You're fifteen now, remember?"
"So?"
"Don't tell me you're going to let Yurina-chan and Risako-chan get ahead of you. They already beat you in height. Come on, I'll help you look for one if you like."
"Hey! What are you talking about? I'm not in a hurry to get a boyfriend. I can wait. Whose birthday is it today anyway? "
"Haha. That is so you. Have a nice day!"

The other members of Berryz Koubou and C-ute called me afterwards. Then I got calls and messages from some of my senpais as well. Even Maiha-chan called me. I thanked them for greeting me. I told them to come over to my house on the weekend. I didn't want to celebrate on a weekday because it'll only be cut short because of class the next day. My mom greeted me and kissed me when I got downstairs. She said that I have a special bento today. I hugged her as I prepared to leave. I felt really good as I went to school earlier.

School wasn't that bad either. My classmates greeted me too, good thing they didn't mention anything about my height like the first people who greeted me. We didn't have tests, unlike the previous years where we had at least two tests on my birthday. Mom was right. My bento today was the best. Everything my mom cooks is the best. After a few more hours, I was heading home again.

I was lying in my bed, preparing myself to study and recalling some of the steps for the PV of our new single when I received a message from him. You know, Risako-chan's classmate.

- Hello! I heard it was your birthday today so Happy Birthday Captain!!! :)
- Thanks a lot! :)
- So how was your day?
- It was great! And getting a greeting for you made it a lot better! You're one of the few guys who has greeted me today, aside from my relatives, classmates and Tsunku-san
- Really? That's nice
- So
- So what?
- Have you asked her out again?
- Actually, she asked me out the other day. She introduced me to Ishimura-san and I bought some cake for them
- Maiha-chan? Did she do something to you?
- Not really. But I almost drowned
- You almost drowned? With cake?
- She told me to treat them because it was Ishimura-san's birthday. We ate at a cakeshop, I mean they ate because I only ordered some juice. Ishimura-san told me something when I was drinking that's why I almost drowned.
- Ahahaha! You fell into her trap didn't you? You cannot escape Risako-chan's charm :D
- Haha. I guess you're right
- You must be really special to Risako-chan. She even introduced you to Maiha-chan
- Maybe
- Hey, can I tell you something?
- Yes
- I like you
- I like you too, Captain
- I thought you didn't
- Liking someone like you isn't hard to do. Those who don't like you are probably crazy
- Haha. You sure joke a lot
- But it's not a joke that I like you. I have to study now, nice talking with you again. Hope to see you again too :)
- Yeah. Thanks for the greeting :)

I told him that I like him and he told me that he likes me. My heart felt a lot lighter after telling him that.

I wanted to ask him if he could go here for my party but it would be awkward if he would be the only guy around, although it didn't feel that way when I first met him. It felt awkward when we went out because, must be because I still had feelings for him that time. I still have feelings for him though, but it's different now. I know the boundaries. We can only be friends. The only thing I can do now is wish him and Risako-chan the best.

I got up and stood in front of my room's door. It has some marks. I use those marks to check if I grew taller. I checked if I grew taller today.

I did. Momo-chan better watch out.

I grew again today. But not just in height.

So this is growing up. I'm starting to get the hang of it...

WAR AKARI!!! Infernal Ninjutsu, Hidden Lore...Freedom of Opposites Technique!!! Rest in peace Kyle,Jab,Mom,Tita, ChrNo...

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« Reply #139 on: November 23, 2006, 03:24:56 AM »
ahh how sweet, Saki is a lovely girl.

  Another great chapter wordsworth, I'm enjoying this story alot, Risako being one of my favorites.


  Happy Birth Saki-san

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