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Re: Too Young
« Reply #200 on: April 19, 2007, 08:02:57 PM »
I DEDICATE THIS 200TH POST TO THE ALMIGHTY WORDSWORTH
BECAUSE WE'RE WORTH IT!

I fell in love with this Fic
I just had to read it again
Thank you WW
 I shall dedicate my fic to you (may seem a bit similar but dont get mad! im sure you'll like it!)
It's called Lovestruck and I'm finished the 2nd chapter! Woo and it's all done by handwriting too!
Can't wait to post it!




Until later!
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Too Young: The Red Thread of Fate
« Reply #201 on: April 20, 2007, 03:16:13 PM »
Yajima-san told me to meet her at 3PM but she said it will be better if I meet her earlier so that we can 'practice'.

- practice for what?
- boy-girl stuff. you know, things that couples do.
- like things I do with Sugaya?
- maybe. but you're just classmates right? >:D
- not amymore :P
- WHAT? NO WAY!!! O_o
- we're friends :D
- right. whew you almost got me there. remind me to give you a punch in the gut later haha. don't be late okay!

Part of me tells me that this was a big mistake. Maybe I should have tried harder to talk her out of this, even if it would be useless, but another part of me wants to find out why she wants me to do this.

Is she trying to avoid someone? Is she going to make someone jealous? Or could she just have made this up just so she can go out with me? 

The first two are feasible but the last one? Absolutely not. It's about time I got back to reality...

I called Sugaya and told her to meet me at 4PM. I gave a one-hour interval because I wasn't sure if Yajima-san was serious with that part about doing 'things that couples do'. And I'm not sure if Sugaya will bring someone along with her. I'm hoping that she won't.

I was about to leave the house but my sister saw me when I was at the door

"Going on a date, Onii-chan?"
"I think so."
"With whom?"
"Ummm...secret."
"Someone aside from Risako-san?"
"Nah. I'm just kidding. I'm going to see her."
"Good. Because if I learn that you went out with someone else, I'm going to disown you as my brother."

Great. Does my sister have E.S.P. or something? If she had, I'd ask her how'd this day would turn out before I actually got. But the thought of standing up someone as pretty as Yajima-san...I can't let her down. Letting her friends down is almost like letting Sugaya down. I don't do that.

I'd understand if she stood me up, but if I did that to her? Now that is unforgivable.

I am going to meet up with Sugaya later anyway, maybe I can ask her to go eat ice cream with me again. Or maybe I can take her to that accessory shop.

I was surprised to see Yajima-san before me. With what she was wearing, she was in 'girly mode' again. I wasn't sure if she had lipstick too. Nope. Her lips were really just like that. Nope. No view of her legs too.

"Hey! You're early too huh?" she said when she saw me.

Then she stood up and threw a punch. I didn't have the time to ask her why. Maybe she saw me looking at her legs? I closed my eyes before her fists hit me but she stopped it just before it landed. "Just kidding." she said as she patted me in the head.

"You're scary, Yajima-san."
"I am? Maybe that's why I can't get boys to like me. Maybe I'm really destined to be a tomboy..."
"That's not true. It's impossible that boys don't like you. You're a pretty girl. And you play sports. And you're sexy. And you have a photobook. And....did I just say something about a photobook."
"...I'm sexy?" she asked me with a dagger look. I should learn how to be careful before I say something that can kill me.
"I mean..."
"Haha. So you know about it too. It's okay. I'm not mad. I just don't know where you got that idea that I'm sexy. I mean, I feel like I'm a twig."
"You're not a twig." Great. Now it looked like I made her feel bad about her figure. I must think of something nice to say..."Only sexy girls get photobooks right?"
"Haha. Yeah. Maybe you're right. Go buy it when it comes out, okay?"
"Ummm...I don't think I..."
"Are you gonna buy it or not?"
"Okay, okay."
"I was just kidding. Hahaha. You're too easy. Don't tell me you act like that in front of Risako-chan."
"Most of the time, yes."
"Aww. That's real cute but don't show him that later okay."
"Him?"
"This guy we're going to meet. He's from our school but I think he's younger than me. He keeps following me around, calling me princess. I don't like it."
"So you asked me to pretend as your boyfriend so he'll leave you alone, right Yajima-san?" I was right. She is trying to avoid someone. She didn't make this up.
"Right. Also, make sure you don't call me Yajima-san in front of him because that will expose our cover."
"What do I call you then?"
"How do you call Risako-chan?"
"Risako."
"Then just call me Maimi."
"Is it really okay?"
"It's fine. Now, we should start practicing before he arrives..."

Yajima-san said that we should work on clinging onto each other's arms and holding each other's hand so that it'd look sweet. Good thing she didn't say anything about kissing...

"Hey, maybe we should practice kissing too."

Oops. I spoke too soon. My mind went blank after she said that.

"Hey, I'm talking to you!" she said as she waved her hand in front of my face.
"Do we really have to? I think holding hands is convincing enough."
"Why, never kissed a girl before?"
"It's because I'm the one who always gets kissed."
"Really? I'm gonna ask Risako-chan about that."
"Go ahead. Ask her."
"Okay, so I'll be the one to kiss you." she said as he moved her face closer to mine. I tried to pull away but it was useless. She kissed me on the cheek. She pulled away then kissed me on the same spot again.
"Yajima-san..." she wasn't finished though. This time however, I was facing her so her lips landed on mine. That was when she stopped.
"Risako-chan doesn't kiss you like that, huh?" she said as she smiled at me.


"Who is that guy, Yajima-hime?!"

We turned around and saw a guy who was wearing a black jacket. His hood was on, even if it was quite sunny outside. He's probably the suitor Yajima-san was trying to get rid of.

"I'm..."
"He's..."
"...your boyfriend? You're kidding me. Are those really your type?"
"What's wrong with my taste?" Yajima-san said as she grabbed my arm and kissed me again and leaned her head at my shoulder.

As much as I enjoyed Yajima-san kissing me, I don't think this is part of the show anymore. She's taking advantage of me!

"There's nothing wrong..."
"Good. So don't keep bugging me anymore, okay. You should go find yourself another girl. I have a boyfriend."
"I thought you were gonna dump him nicely." I whispered to her.
"Shhh. Keep quiet."

The other guy removed the hood and gave me a scary look. He had a plaster strip under his chin. He looked like a gentle person but his facial expression suddenly changed when he looked at me. Then he took off his jacket too.

"I'll leave you alone, Yajima-hime, if he beats me fair and square. Come on, let's fight!" he said as he pointed at me. "And get off your slimy hands off her."

I cheked where my hand was and it was on *gasp* her behind! I took my hand off and placed it in my pocket. Good thing Yajima-san didn't notice. Or did she know that it was there the whole time?

"Come on!"
"Fight? Yajima-san, you didn't tell me that your suitor was a war freak!" I told her.
"Well he did beat up some of the guys in school that talked to me before. I didn't know that he was a jealous guy."
"Talk to him. Tell him we were just pretending. Tell him the truth, that he's not your type."
"No way! If I do that, he'll keep bugging me in school. Please, help we with this one."
"But I can't fight him."
"Okay. Just get hit once then I'll rescue you and scold him. Maybe that'll work."
"What if it doesn't?"
"Well, just hope it does! I don't have any other ideas." she pushed me after she said that and I bumped the guy, who was staring at me all the time. It feels like he wants to destroy me or bury me on the ground, with just my head exposed, then ask Yajima-san to penalty kick my head.

Before I could pull myself together, he put me on a headlock.
"Hey, let go of him!"
"Maimi-chan!!!"
"Hello there Risako-chan! Could you help me tell this brute to let go of my boyfriend! Oh, hello Kuma-chan, Airi-chan..."
"..."
"..."

Yajima-san's suitor suddenly let go of me.

"Your boyfriend?" Sugaya asked.
"I mean, 'your' boyfriend." Yajima-san replied.
"Maimi-chan! You never showed that dress of yours to me before. That's so cute!" said the girl they called Airi-chan.
"You? What are you doing here?" Kumai-san said. I didn't know whom she was talking to.
"Kumai...Yurina? Is that you?"  I couldn't believe it, but he was blushing.
"Hah! So you still call me by my whole name."
"You're..."
"I'm what?" Kumai-san said as she placed her hands on her hips.
"You're tall."
"Of course. I wanted to catch up with you."
"You know each other, Kuma-chan?" Yajima-san asked.
"Kinda. He used to go to our school and he used to beat up a lot of people there. And he used to write some letters for me."
"You mean those letters you showed me before?" Sugaya asked.
"Yeah."
"He wrote them?"
"He did."
"Hey they're both pretty cute. My name is Suzuki Airi. Nice to meet you." the other girl said as she bowed. We bowed to her too. "I'm hungry. Let's go eat, Maimi-chan."

***
We went to a nearby cafe. All of us, including Yajima-san's suitor/Kumai-san's secret admirer.

"Risako, I can explain. Yajima-san asked for some help and...."
"Don't bother. I don't want to hear it. I'm disappointed with you.."
"But..."
"I just have one question..."

Uh-oh. Here it comes.

Will she ask me if I'm serious with our relationship? Will she ask me if it's okay if we 'cool down' for a while?

But whatever she says, I know it's my fault. I should have told her what kind of help Yajima-san was asking for. I brought this upon myself. Now I have to prepare for her wrath. Or worse...

"...how come you're not wearing Maimi-chan's clothes? I thought you were gonna wear them?" she said as she laughed.
"What?!"
"I came here, expecting to see you wear a girly dress. Maimi-chan has the best girly dresses, only she doesn't like wearing them much."
"Huh, I don't get it?"

Then she explained it to me. Apparently, Yajima-san DID ask Kumai-san and Suzuki-san to help her and asked them to pretend to be her girlfriends. She already knew about it even before I told her that I'll be helping Yajima-san out, that's why she wanted to bring Kumai-san along today. They thought that she asked me to do the same thing, but unfortunately, I didn't want to pretend to be a girl.

"That's it? You just want to see me wearing girly clothes?"
"What? There's nothing wrong with that, is it? I think that would be cute."
"Umm. Okay. But did Kumai-san tell you why she refused?"
"Nope."
"What about Suzuki-san? Did she tell you why?"
"I told Maimi-chan that I don't like pretending to be what I already am." Suzuki-san said before she sipped at her glass. She blushed and smiled as she looked at Yajima-san.
"Cut it out, Airi-chan. Not in front of other people." Yajima-san told her.
"So what have you been up to? Still beating the crap out of other kids?" Kumai-san asked the other guy who was sitting across her.
"Most of the time, yeah. But I do it because I hear them say bad things about Yajima-san."
"What happened to Yajima-hime?" Yajima-san asked him.
*sigh* "Don't worry, I won't bother you from now on. But I'll still beat up people if I hear them talk behind your back."
"So you found someone new to bother, huh?" Yajima-san said as she looked at Kumai-san.
"No way!"
"Kumai Yurina-hime. I'll be seeing you around." he said as he stood up and left.
"..."
"..."
"...Hey, he didn't pay his bill!"

***
Kumai-san went ahead. She said she was gonna go to Tokunaga-san's place and tell her what happened today. Yajima-san said she'll be the one to take Suzuki-san home.

"Sorry for the trouble, Pretty Boy. But thanks a lot for showing up. I didn't think you'd help me. Thanks for letting me borrow him, Risako-chan." she said as she hugged Sugaya.
"No problem."
"What? You mean you knew about this all along?"
"Yeah. Maimi-chan told me about it."
"You girls are crazy!"

They just laughed at me. They are crazy.

"Make sure you take Risako-chan home, Pretty Boy."
"I will, Yajima-san."
"But you better watch out, Risako-chan. Pretty Boy likes to touch butts."
"I do not!!!"
"Yeah. I know, Maimi-chan. He touches my butt all the time too."
"I do not!!!"
"Is his name really Pretty Boy?" Suzuki-chan asked them.

They laughed at me again. The crazy girls. Then Yajima-san and Suzuki-san waved goodbye and went ahead.

"Do you want to get some ice cream?" I asked her.
"Why not.?" she said as she held my hand. "Let's go!"

***
As we walked towards her house, I felt that I had to tell her that Yajima-san kissed me. I wouldn't be able to sleep unless I tell her the truth.

We stopped in front of their gate.

"Ummm, there's something I have to tell you."
"I know. Maimi-chan kissed you, didn't she?"
"How'd you know?"
"There's some lipstick on your cheek."

I took out my handkerchief and wiped that part of my face which Yajima-san kissed but when I looked at it, there was no lipstick.

"Gotcha!"
"That's not funny."
"Yes it is."
"If you say so."
"Haha. Sorry."
"It's okay with you that she kissed me?"
"That's normal. Yajima-san's always like that. She kisses everyone backstage, anytime she wants and everytime she wants."
"I see."
"But you know why I really don't mind her kissing you?"
"Why?"

She moved closer to me and placed one of her fingers at the side of my lips. She stared at me.

Then she closed her eyes.

Then she kissed me.

For ten seconds.

"Because I can kiss a lot better than her. See you in school." she said as she went inside.

Yep.

She's crazy.

But I'm in love with this crazy girl.
« Last Edit: May 18, 2007, 01:19:39 AM by wordsworth »

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Re: Too Young
« Reply #202 on: April 20, 2007, 04:35:03 PM »
Quote from: wordsworth
- practice for what?
- boy-girl stuff. you know, things that couples do.
- like things I do with Sugaya?
- maybe. but you're just classmates right? Evil
- not amymore Tongue
- WHAT? NO WAY!!! O_o
- we're friends Cheesy
- right. whew you almost got me there. remind me to give you a punch in the gut later haha. don't be late okay!

I can't believe my eyes O_O Maimi trying to be an evil girl too!

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I was surprised to see Yajima-san before me. With what she was wearing, she was in 'girly mode' again. I wasn't sure if she had lipstick too. Nope. Her lips were really just like that. Nope. No view of her legs too.

Nice eyes, pretty boy..

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"That's not true. It's impossible that boys don't like you. You're a pretty girl. And you play sports. And you're sexy. And you have a photobook. And....did I just say something about a photobook."

WTF, lol..

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"Okay, so I'll be the one to kiss you." she said as he moved her face closer to mine. I tried to pull away but it was useless. She kissed me on the cheek. She pulled away then kissed me on the same spot again.

WTF! O_O

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"I'll leave you alone, Yajima-hime, if he beats me fair and square. Come on, let's fight!" he said as he pointed at me. "And get off your slimy hands off her."

Ready.... Gggooo!

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It feels like he wants to destroy me or bury me on the ground, with just my head exposed, then ask Yajima-san to penalty kick my head.

Penalty kick!!! XDDDD

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"Kinda. He used to go to our school and he used to beat up a lot of people there. And he used to write some letters for me."

WORDS!!!!!! Damn... this already feel likes a happy ending for me.. Yurina lover :heart:

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"I told Maimi-chan that I don't like pretending to be what I already am." Suzuki-san said before she sipped at her glass. She blushed and smiled as she looked at Yajima-san.

CUTE!!!! I'm dying..  :frustrated: Wow, she's in love with Maimi... So, the rumour is true..

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"Kumai Yurina-hime. I'll be seeing you around." he said as he stood up and left.

Oh, shit.. I nearly fall of my chair reading this XDDDDD

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"Yeah. Maimi-chan told me about it."
"You girls are crazy!"

Pretty boy is innocent :3 haha

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"But you better watch out, Risako-chan. Pretty Boy likes to touch butts."
"I do not!!!"
"Yeah. I know, Maimi-chan. He touches my butt all the time too."
"I do not!!!"

Damn.. hahahaha.. haaa... *cough* *cough* need.. air.. *cough*

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"That's normal. Yajima-san's always like that. She kisses everyone backstage, anytime she wants and everytime she wants."

O_O Damn, words..

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"Because I can kiss a lot better than her. See you in school." she said as she went inside.

Yep.

She's crazy.

But I'm in love with this crazy girl.

Heh, a happily fluffy ever after ending.. :3 ARGH!!!! O_O I'm going to be crazy too... Too much sugar.. You're awesome as always words. *salute*  :kneelbow:





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Re: Too Young
« Reply #203 on: April 21, 2007, 01:23:51 AM »
wow! my favorite chapter so far. Love the part where Maimi is discussing what her and prettyboy should do.And MaimiXAiri!!?!  :nya:
« Last Edit: April 21, 2007, 01:30:10 AM by modesta107 »

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Re: Too Young
« Reply #204 on: April 25, 2007, 06:13:47 PM »
happy jph!p anniv wordsworth :p

here have some candies


i'll edit later and post a comment ^^

edit :

AAA you know how much i like your story when you put different POV :D


He would tell me how many times her sister played Very Beauty from her room.
lol

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But all of a sudden, it stopped. He wasn't answering my calls. He doesn't even reply to my messages.
oh oh oh oh oh :D

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I'm hoping that it was just the first reason. He's too busy. But he's too busy doing what?
[..]

Looking at gravure photobooks? I don't think so.
hahahaha...how are you so sure about that :p ?
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Going out with someone else? No.
Going out with someone else...

Maybe.
wth "maybe" ?!
oh yeah right he did do that...by accident XD but...

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And if he would, he'd probably tell it to me first.
i dodn't know why it sounds a bit stupid but ...XD
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But getting jealous is normal, isn't it?
i guess so...
especially if he is a pretty boy :p

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That when your birthday is approaching, that's the time when your family and your friends decide to keep secrets from you. It's not just me right?
you should be happy at least they remember your bday XD

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Yurina-chan was scaring me, telling me that he's probably seeing someone else behind my back. I just laughed at her. I know she only said that to cheer me up. Yurina-chan told me before that she likes him too. I don't know if she still does, but that's the least of my worries.
he he he he...aaaa....

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They were right. Even if we haven't talked, he's still with me. He's always with me.
awww.... XD

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Different emotions rushed into me when I saw him. Part of me wanted to embrace him and never let go. Part of wanted to push him out of our house because he wasn't answering my calls.
he he he hehow cute

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"I was waiting for you. I was in front of your house for hours. I tried knocking and using the doorbell but no one was answering. I thought no one was home so I just sat down in front of the gate.
i want to slap him, sounds like he didn't even know about the SSA concert ! tssssss
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Your mom called some policemen because she thought I was a stalker
lol ... that would have been funny...

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Now I felt really stupid for thinking about him going out with someone else.
he he he he

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"I know. You always leave your phone at home when you go somewhere important. Shimi-chan told me that boys are like that."
"Captain told you that? Haha, she probably experienced it before too. I wonder who did that to her hehe.
just wonder if it was a half joke lol Hey PrettyBoy it was you !

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"Wow, these are heavy. How many sets of clothes do you have inside?"
"Guess. If you guess it right I'll give you something."
"Well I think there are..."

I didn't wait for him to answer. I hugged him.
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaa..... ><

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"I'm here now." he said as he patted my head and stroked my hair. "I'm here."
"I know. You never left."
sorry but i had to lol XD

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I dialed his number and waited. I waited for him to answer. It took him five seconds.

"Yes?"
"Nothing. I... I just wanted to ask you if I'm starting to bother you."
(...)
"I missed you too, Risako. I missed you."

Those were the only words I wanted to hear from him tonight.

And he said them.

awwwwwwww.......


I tried asking the other girls if they knew what she wanted for her birthday.

"I remember her telling me that she wants a little sister..."
OMFG
XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD
i don't know how much i laughed here XD
CHINAMIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII
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"Can I have this one?" I asked my sister."
"Why?"
"I'm going to make a scrapbook for Sugaya."
"You're going to rip that apart? No way!" she said as she grabbed it from me. "Why don't you buy your own copy? You have money don't you? You're such a cheapskate, Onee-chan!"
"Hey! My allowance is not as big as yours, you know?"
"Why don't you just download it then print them out?"
"Okay. That's a nice idea. Now why didn't I think of that?"
"Because you we're thinking how much buying ink and photo paper would cost you. Nyaa~!!!"
his sis is a killer XD

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And speaking of photobooks...

"Hey, do you remember that girl who came with that other girl who was looking for you?"
"Yajima-san?"
(...)
"I heard that she'll be having her own photobook in a few months."
you had to mention it don't you XD
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I started packing my things and called my cousin.

"Yo, can I ask you a favor?"
"Sure. What is it?"
"I want you to give something to Momo-san. I placed a note on it so she'll know what to do with it."

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Momo-chan told not to think so much about it. She said that maybe he went on a vacation with his family. Maybe she's right. But he could have told me that he was going somewhere.
So that's how she knew...
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I was so in a hurry that, I didn't notice that my phone was still plugged in to the charger and failed to pick it up. I only realized that I forgot it halfway through the trip. I wanted to call Sugaya but I haven't memorized her number. My sister wouldn't let me borrow her phone so I could tell my cousin to tell Tsugunaga-san to tell Sugaya that I went on a vacation.
lol....should i pity him...

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Momo is complaining why you used that picture of her for the scrap book hehe.
LOL

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"What picture was Momo-san talking about?" I asked my cousin.
"I dunno. I didn't take a peek at that."
"Okay. Maybe it was the pouty faced pic after all."
"Pouty faced pic?" my cousin asked. "Where?"
"This one." I said as I showed him the page where that pic was in.
"Haha. That's cute. She never showed that face to me before."
"I bet she'll show you that face when she finds out that you're going to buy Yajima-san's photobook."
"Hey!"
XD XD XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD awesome !
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I could see her reading what the other girls wrote
he he he he

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"Why are there skulls?" I asked her.
"Why? Miyabi-san drew some skulls too. Why don't you ask her that?"
i also want to know :D

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Tsugunaga-san approached and pinched me at the cheek
pinch me please ? XD

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"He made Risako-chan cry again. We should beat him up." Kumai-san told them.
"Yeah. Maybe we should shave his head for doing that." added Natsuyaki-san.
rofl
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"Yeah. And I thought my suggestion of getting you a little sister would work." Tokunaga-san added.

Then they laughed.
no kidding XD

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Oh yeah, I wasn't able to ask them about the skulls anymore.

you failed :(

I received a weird message in my phone earlier.

- hey is this Sugaya-chan's classmate?
woooot ?
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I was afraid to answer it. What if it was some kind of stalker or one of Sugaya's admirers from another class?
how he would get your number ? -_-
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It could be Tsugunaga-san, who was still not over the pouty-faced pic of her I used for the scrapbook.
he he he he he
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It could be Tokunaga-san, or Sudou-san or...
but they wouldn't have to ask if it's pretty boy or not ? :o

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- pretty boy? it's really you huh. it's me, Maimi. I need to talk to you. let's meet later. i'll tell you the place. don't make me wait
zomg...

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Maybe about her photobook?
hey ! XD
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A pretty girl whose kick can probably send me to another planet. I got the chills when my sister showed me that clip of Yajima-san's penalty kick.
yeah right XD
damn i was impressed too XD

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I don't think Yajima-san would do the same. I think she'll ask me to run fifty laps around the park if I did. Run fifty laps. With my hands.
XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD
AAAAAAAAAAAA hahahahaa XD

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No good view of her legs this time. What am I thinking?
rofl...what a little perv this PrettyBoy...
but it's funny heh it's like an innocent perv XD can perv be innocent....
hum...
ok nvm XD

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"Hey, I'm talking to you." She said.
"You look..."
"I look what?"
"Pretty?"
"Right. Thanks. No need to flatter me. I'm going to make this quick. I have to go some place after this."
so bossy XD

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"I want you to pretend that you're my boyfriend."
"Okay."
OKAY ? ! ? ! WTH ??
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"What? You want me to what?" My mind was too slow in processing what she said she wanted me to do.
"I want you to pretend that you're my boyfriend. And you agreed."
"Wait!"
rofl... so slow...
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"Why? Will Risako-chan mind if I borrow you for a while? You're just classmates, right?"

I wanted to correct her with that and tell her that Sugaya is my girlfriend, but I thought that maybe I was her last resort for this.
i wonder what should i say here lol

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"Why me?" I asked her again
"You're taller than me."
"That's it?"
"That's it."
"Not because of my looks?"
loool....
it's like... when a girl says " oh i don't look good today" and is actually waiting for you to say" you are cute don't worry" just to be sure she does even if she knows she does but...ok offtopic..

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"Have you even tried asking someone else?"
"Like?"
"Like people you really like?"
"Hmmm. Let's see. Airi-chan is shorter than me and she's too girly to pretend to be a guy.
WHAT THE.......
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

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I'm not sure if Kuma-chan is taller, but if we we're seen together, they'd think of her as my girlfriend. I'd look like the guy if I get paired up with her
rofl...
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"Airi-chan?"
"Yes. She's a girl."
"Don't tell me Kuma-chan is..."
"Yurina? Yes. She's too pretty to pose as a guy. Erika-chan's a girl too, by the way."
ok now what kind of conversation was that XD

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"What about getting real guys and not girls to pretend as your boyfriend?"
"I tried that and they backed out."
"You mean I can back out?"
"No! You said yes already and you have to keep your word."
"But you were talking real fast earlier! I wasn't able to think about it!"
*dies*

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She looked at me with one of her eyebrows higher than the other. It was scary!

*gulp* "Don't penalty kick me." I said.
*dies *dies *dies*
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"Do I have a choice?"
"Actually, you do. You can pretend you're a girl and be my girlfriend. I'll let you borrow some of my clothes. You want that?"
OMFG XD
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"Not really. The last time I dumped one, I told him 'I don't like you, leave me alone' and he ran away crying."
xD
my stomach hurts XD
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- that's great! you're going on the weekend right. i'll come with you then. maybe i can ask Miya-chan and Yurina-chan to come along too. :)
uh oh ?

- practice for what?
- boy-girl stuff. you know, things that couples do.
- like things I do with Sugaya?
- maybe. but you're just classmates right? >:D
- not amymore :P
- WHAT? NO WAY!!! O_o
- we're friends :D
damn you lol
and what with the evil tama-sama's smiley wordy XD
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remind me to give you a punch in the gut later haha. don't be late okay!
lol ?

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Is she trying to avoid someone? Is she going to make someone jealous? Or could she just have made this up just so she can go out with me? 

The first two are feasible but the last one? Absolutely not. It's about time I got back to reality...
Well...

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"Going on a date, Onee-chan?"
"I think so."
what kind of answer is that LOL ?
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"With whom?"
"Ummm...secret."
"Someone aside from Risako-san?"
"Nah. I'm just kidding. I'm going to see her."
"Good. Because if I learn that you went out with someone else, I'm going to disown you as my brother."
ok he half lied... but what a killer sis XD

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I wasn't sure if she had lipstick too. Nope. Her lips were really just like that. Nope. No view of her legs too.
HEY XD
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Then she stood up and threw a punch. I didn't have the time to ask her why. Maybe she saw me looking at her legs? I closed my eyes before her fists hit me but she stopped it just before it landed. "Just kidding." she said as she patted me in the head.
rofl...

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And you're sexy. And you have a photobook. And....did I just say something about a photobook."
i seriously pity him now XXD
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Go buy it when it comes out, okay?"
"Ummm...I don't think I..."
"Are you gonna buy it or not?"
"Okay, okay."
"I was just kidding. Hahaha. You're too easy.
lol......
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Good thing she didn't say anything about kissing...

"Hey, maybe we should practice kissing too."
heartattack ?

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"Yajima-san..." she wasn't finished though. This time however, I was facing her so her lips landed on mine. That was when she stopped.
"Risako-chan doesn't kiss you like that, huh?" she said as she smiled at me.
jdklfsldhglqhgkdhfjqdgjgkhk aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa


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"Who is that guy, Yajima-hime?!"
wooooooooooooooot !

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"Good. So don't keep bugging me anymore, okay. You should go find yourself another girl. I have a boyfriend."
"I thought you were gonna dump him nicely."
hahahahahahaha
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"I'll leave you alone, Yajima-hime, if he beats me fair and square. Come on, let's fight!" he said as he pointed at me. "And get off your slimy hands off her."
:o :o :o :o :o

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I cheked where my hand was and it was on *gasp* her behind!
DJGDKHDHFGGSJ y !!!!

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"But I can't fight him."
is that because of the promised you made with Risako ?
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"Hey, let go of him!"
"Maimi-chan!!!"
"Hello there Risako-chan! Could you help me tell this brute to let go of my boyfriend! Oh, hello Kuma-chan, Airi-chan..."
"..."
"..."
LOL ? oh wait ?"lol"??? wait wait she said waht ? XD
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"Your boyfriend?" Sugaya asked.
Problm problm problms ?????
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"I mean, 'your' boyfriend." Yajima-san replied.
"Maimi-chan! You never showed that dress of yours to me before. That's so cute!" said the girl they called Airi-chan.
isn't it supposed to be a dramatic scene ? lol
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"You? What are you doing here?" Kumai-san said. I didn't know whom she was talking to.
"Kumai...Yurina? Is that you?"  I couldn't believe it, but he was blushing.
what ? !
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"Hah! So you still call me by my whole name."
"You're..."
"I'm what?" Kumai-san said as she placed her hands on her hips.
"You're tall."
"Of course. I wanted to catch up with you."
"You know each other, Kuma-chan?" Yajima-san asked.
"Kinda. He used to go to our school and he used to beat up a lot of people there. And he used to write some letters for me."
completly forgot lol....TOtally unexpected XD
i was wondering when those guys would meet...aaaa now that's nice XD
but i just don't like the fact he is completly in love with Maimi...
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"Risako, I can explain. Yajima-san asked for some help and...."
"Don't bother. I don't want to hear it. I'm disappointed with you.."
only dissapointed ??????

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"...how come you're not wearing Maimi-chan's clothes? I thought you were gonna wear them?" she said as she laughed.
"What?!"
WHAT ? XD XD XD
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"I came here, expecting to see you wear a girly dress. Maimi-chan has the best girly dresses, only she doesn't like wearing them much."
"Huh, I don't get it?"
you are not the only one XD

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Then she explained it to me. Apparently, Yajima-san DID ask Kumai-san and Suzuki-san to help her and asked them to pretend to be her girlfriends. She already knew about it even before I told her that I'll be helping Yajima-san out, that's why she wanted to bring Kumai-san along today. They thought that she asked me to do the same thing, but unfortunately, I didn't want to pretend to be a girl.

"That's it? You just want to see me wearing girly clothes?"
LOL WORDYYYY XD XD XD XD D XD

did loser87 gave you some kind of crazy cheesecake lol ?
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"What about Suzuki-san? Did she tell you why?"
"I told Maimi-chan that I don't like pretending to be what I already am." Suzuki-san said before she sipped at her glass. She blushed and smiled as she looked at Yajima-san.
"Cut it out, Airi-chan. Not in front of other people." Yajima-san told her.

slkflsdjgqhgkjfhjtjhtklhtlk aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

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"So what have you been up to? Still beating the crap out of other kids?" Kumai-san asked the other guy who was sitting across her.
"Most of the time, yeah. But I do it because I hear them say bad things about Yajima-san."
"What happened to Yajima-hime?" Yajima-san asked him.
lol...
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"Kumai Yurina-hime. I'll be seeing you around." he said as he stood up and left.
hime lol...
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"..."
"..."
"...Hey, he didn't pay his bill!"
XD XD XD XDDDDDDDDDDDDDD


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"But you better watch out, Risako-chan. Pretty Boy likes to touch butts."
"I do not!!!"
"Yeah. I know, Maimi-chan. He touches my butt all the time too."
"I do not!!!"
"Is his name really Pretty Boy?" Suzuki-chan asked them.
rofl...
*dies*

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"Ummm, there's something I have to tell you."
"I know. Maimi-chan kissed you, didn't she?"
"How'd you know?"
"There's some lipstick on your cheek."

I took out my handkerchief and wiped that part of my face which Yajima-san kissed but when I looked at it, there was no lipstick.

"Gotcha!"
XD what a girl...
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"But you know why I really don't mind her kissing you?"
"Why?"

She moved closer to me and placed one of her fingers at the side of my lips. She stared at me.

Then she closed her eyes.

Then she kissed me.

For ten seconds.

"Because I can kiss a lot better than her. See you in school." she said as she went inside.

*dies*

AAAA.... awesome job !!
so entertaining as always
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Too Young: Something About 1%
« Reply #205 on: May 24, 2007, 11:04:02 AM »
Earlier at school today, before starting the class, our teacher told us that she had an announcement to make.

"Class, I'd like you to meet your new classmate. He's a transferee from...." I forgot what else she said after that but a boy came inside the classroom and wrote his name on the board. After that he faced us and bowed to us. The next thing I remembered hearing from her was "...please take that seat next to Kumai-chan..." since the seat to my right was the only one vacant, and it's a standard that the tall kids are usually seated away from the blackboard. Yeah, He was a tall kid. I took a good look at him when he passed by me. I wasn't looking at him when he was in front, because I was busy trying to remember the lines for our new single but somehow, he looked kinda familiar.

That's when I remembered the conversation Maimi-chan and I had on the phone a few days ago...

***

"Psst. Kuma-chan. Better be careful."
"Huh?"
"I mean, better watch your back."
"For stalkers?"
"Nope."
"I don't get you."
"He transferred to your school. Or so I heard."
"Who?"
"You know..."
"Rii-chan's boyfr...err...classmate?"
"No. Not him."
"You mean..."
"Yeah. Hey. Wait. Don't tell me you have the hots for Risako-chan's classmate?"
"Before, yeah, I did. But not anymore. I almost ruined it for them though."
"Really? Details please."
"I don't want to talk about it."
"Okay."
"Good thing I was able to get back to my senses before I can do anything 'drastic'. Rii-chan's already happy and I don't want to butt into their relationship. It makes me look desperate, which I'm not."
"I understand. I admire you for doing the right thing, Kuma-chan."
"Thanks. Plus, I'm really not in a hurry to get a boyfreind. I can get boys anytime I want anyway. Hahaha."
"Yeah right. Speaking of boys,  Chinami-chan said you have a fetish for boys with good handwriting. Is that true?"
"Hey! It's not a fetish!"
"Hahaha. Whatever. Talk to you later, Kuma-chan. Bye!"

In case you didn't know, she was talking about the boy I was telling you before, who I just found out was going to Maimi-chan's school. I saw him again a few days back, while he was about to beat up Rii-chan's classmate. I know I shouldn't have laughed when I saw Rii-chan's classmate was caught in a headlock but...it was funny. Even the thought of that scene makes me smile.

Anyway, back to the new kid...

***

He was tall. He was kinda cute. He did look kinda familiar...

Wait...

No way!

"Hello, Kumai Yurina-hime."
"YOU?!" I said. I think I shouted because the whole class and the teacher looked at me. I had to say something to bail me out. "You...you dropped something?"
"Do you know her, Kumai-chan." the teacher asked me.
"Kinda."
"Good. Now you have to take him around the school so he can get familiar and help him catch up with our lessons."
"But..."
"No buts."

So that's how I got stuck with him for the day. Yeah. We were schoolmates before but this is a new school. New buildings, new classmates and a whole lot of new stuff. Maybe some new feelings too.

I wasn't really sure with what I should have felt when I saw him again.

30% of me was disappointed because it seemed that he still hasn't given up on beating up other kids. Good thing we arrived on time before he could do anything to Rii-chan's classmate.
45% was quite glad because he's still....cute. His hair wasn't as unkempt as before and his arms were...never mind. We were almost the same height, but he's still a bit taller. And he still remembers me! Although he still calls me by my full name.
20% was jealous because he has a crush on Maimi-chan. But I forgive him. Who can't fall for Maimi-chan anyway? I think even I have a slight crush on her, especially now that she's gotten more sexy.
4% was still angry because he kissed me before. He stole a kiss from me. The nerve!
1% was angry because he didn't kiss me when he said goodbye.

...

What?

It would have been more romantic and dramatic if he did that, right?

Oh.

I forgot to thank him for the letters and the bracelet. But there's always another time. And now that he's here, I can thank him anytime.

During the P.E. class, I saw him break the current record for the 100-meter dash. Know I think I know why Maimi-chan runs fast: to get away from him when he follows her around. Knowing how persistent this guy is, I bet she really needed to improve her running or he'll be able to catch up.

The only time we were separated was during lunchtime. I sat with some of my friends who I usually eat with but there was no sign of him. Maybe he went to the rooftop again.

When the final bell rang, as soon as we were the only ones left in the classroom, he wasted no time...

"Kumai Yurina-hime."
"What? Stop calling me by my full name."
"What do you want me to call you then?"
"Yurina."
"It's okay for me to call you that?"
"Of course."
"Okay. Yurina..."
"See. It’s easier right? My name is only three syllables."
"Right."
"What is it?"
"Can I walk you home?"

I didn't know what to say. It was kinda like of those times when Chii-chan tells a bad pun and I need a bit of time before I understand it. I'm that slow.

I didn't answer him but I nodded.

***

"...Yajima-san said that she likes me, but as a younger brother. And she also said that...umm. Yurina? Are you listening to me? You haven't talked since we left the school."
"Yeah. I'm fine."
"What was I talking about?"
"Let's see...Maimi-chan dumped you but she gave you a copy of her photobook?"
"You weren't listening."
"I'm sorry."
"Is something wrong?"
"No. Really. I'm fine."
"You missed me, didn't you?"
"What?" what he said knocked me from whatever trance I was in. This guy really knows how to make my blood boil. "Hmmp!" I said as I walked faster with the intention of leaving him behind but he grabbed my wrist, just like that time.
"I was just kidding. So you're still a hothead, huh?"
"Let go." I said. He did. "Don't ever touch me again!"
"I'm sorry. Maybe walking you home was a bad idea, wasn't it. Looks like I just made you uncomfortable."
"Right. I'm glad that you know. Why did you have to come back?"
"You think I transferred because of you? What an ego you have."
"W..what are you talking about?"
"We had to move because of my parents' business..."
"Like I'd believe you!"
"Fine. You don't have to believe everything I say, except... "
Yeah, yeah. Whatever..."
"I like you, Yurina."

He's different. He's frank. He goes straight to the point.

"I..."
"I know you don't like me. I'm a person who always gets into trouble and hanging around with me with probably get you into it."
"That's not it..."
"Then what?"
"You're not a troublemaker..."
"..."
"You're right. I missed you..."
"..."
"...and I like you too."

I felt lighter. I felt better. I've been lying to myself the whole time and I've been keeping whatever feelings I have for him for so long. I was afraid to tell it to him before because I was afraid that he didn't feeling the same.

"Are you gonna walk me home or not?"

He did walk me home but we haven't said anything to each other, after saying what we really felt. We stopped in front of my house.

"Thanks for walking me home."
"No problem." he said as he took something out of his bag and handed it to me. It was a small envelope.
"What's this?"
"My number."
"I didn't ask for it!"
"I know. That's why I'm giving it to you. See you tomorrow."
"Wait. What's your name again?"
"I already said it back in school. So you weren't really paying attention earlier huh?"
"I was thinking of something else."
"I see. But I don't give away my name easily like my number."
"What are you talking about?"
"I won't give you my name. You'll have to find out what it is by yourself."
"What? You're crazy!"
"See you in class tomorrow, Yurina." he said as he waved his hand and started to walk away.
"Fine, Ryota!"

He stopped and looked back.

"I thought you didn't know my name?"
"Hah. I didn't. But your ID got stuck on the envelope." I said as I showed him his ID.

So his name is Ryota. I didn't know what his name was before. I only knew him by the name they called him. But I like his name.

"Ah. You can keep that too if you want."
"Are you crazy? This is your school ID. You won't be able to enter the school if you don't have it."
"That's why you'll have to wait for me everyday at the gate, so we can enter together."
"Tsss. You serious?"
"Of course I am."
"What if I don't show up tomorrow?"
"If you're absent, I'm absent. If you're late, I'm late. It's that simple."
"You're nuts!"
"And you better not be late tomorrow. Bye!"

Just like that, he turns an almost romantic scene into a disaster. I was thinking of going to school tomorrow so I could get in without him but that's not my style. And how come I have this feeling that I was waiting for him to kiss me? Never mind. I was so mad that I slammed the door of my room as I went in. I looked at the envelope he gave me. I wanted to tear it but I just couldn't I opened it, just to see if his number was really there. But I’m sure I’m not going to use it anytime soon.

His number was there alright.

And so was another handwritten love letter.

Oh.

I forgot to thank him again.

I guess I’ll just give him a call then…

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Re: Too Young
« Reply #206 on: May 24, 2007, 11:29:01 AM »
AWESOMENESS!

Damn, I like this Yurina POV really much ... :heart:

Ryota is whack! Lol. I only hate him because he is a Yurina's classmate T_T (and maybe her lover in next few chapters, damn it!)

I want more of this! ARGHHH!

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Re: Too Young
« Reply #207 on: May 26, 2007, 06:43:07 AM »
jjgttjgadmj!  It's been sooo long ever since I last posted here. My image of Ryota: a boy with an undershirt and a red cap!
that is total win.


whats cool is that the Berryz fall easily in love.. I wish they ALL did that to me..!  mmm<3 :heart: Risako Sugaya ..... :]
                               
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Re: Too Young
« Reply #208 on: May 27, 2007, 02:45:47 AM »
Wow didn't realized I missed so many chapters. Maimi and Airi are funny and cute. I was surprised that Airi likes Maimi, or was she kidding? So Yurina gets a boy too. Now that's 3 down, 4 more to go?

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Too Young: Rendezvous
« Reply #209 on: June 11, 2007, 03:00:15 PM »
My photobook has finally been released. I was really nervous at first but Rii-chan and Airi-chan were right. I enjoyed doing it. It was a good thing that I gave them a call when it was announced that I’d be having a solo PB.

***
"It'll be fine Miya. Just think of this: you'll have the camera all to yourself this time."
"Are you saying that I'm a camwhore?"
"You're not?"
"Well, sometimes. Yeah. So what if I'm a camwhore?"
"You're off topic."
"You're the one who started it, remember?"
"Oh yeah. Anyway, doing a photobook will be great. You'll be nervous at first but you'll get the hang of it."
"I don't know. I'm not like you girls."
"Huh?"
"I can't turn my sad face cute. I'm not a pout machine. Captain and Momo are good at it. Even Maasa can do it.""
"Ah. I thought it's because you didn't have, you know..."
"I don't have what?"
"Umm...boobs?"
"What did you just say?"
"Nothing. Talk to you later Miya!"

===
"Really? You're getting one too? That's great Miya-chan!"
"What's great about dressing in different swimming attire and not actually getting wet?"
"Well, it's fun!"
"And?"
"And you'll get to go to places you haven't been to before."
"And?"
"You get to keep the clothes you wear in it?"
"Oh. Yeah."
"You're pretty, Miya-chan. And take that time to show everyone how pretty you are."
"Thanks."
"You're fourteen right?"
"Yeah. Why?"
"Shouldn't you have grown some boobs by now?
"What?"
"Just kidding. Bye Miya-chan! Enjoy making your photobook!"

====
What's with those two talking about boobs?

I didn't bother asking Maimi-chan how she felt when she made her photobook. I saw some of the pictures and she looked confident and comfortable in them. And she should be. She has a nice body after all. She looked good in a bikini. I don't know if they're going to make me wear something like that. I didn't ask her about photobook stuff but...

"...My sexy body?"
"Yeah. YOUR sexy body. I saw your photobook, Maimi-chan."
"And now you're hitting on me too?"
"Who isn't anyway?"
"Right answer. So, you wanna know what my secret is?"
"Please tell me, Maimi-chan."
"Okay, okay. Listen carefully. My secret is..."
"Yes..."
"it's..."
"It's what, it's what?"
"Pocky!"
"Seriously?"
"Seriously."
"..."
"Nah, I know I can't fool you, Miya-chan. But to tell you the truth, I don't have a secret. I just eat right, sleep right and maybe play a bit of sports."
"I see."
"Hey, we're part of Gatas now remember? That'll help your body get toned."
"You're right. I just hope I don't get bruised when we play."
"Who said you were gonna get some playing time?"
"What?"
"Just kidding, Miya-chan. Anyway, I'm going out. Talk to you later..."

So Maimi-chan's gotten weird too... Photobook effect? Nah...

===
I was riding the train when I heard some boys talking, two of them to be exact. They were almost my age, and in fairness, they were kinda cute. They didn't look like they knew anything about Hello! Project but I overheard what they were talking about...

I wasn't eavesdropping. They were talking real loud and the train wasn't crowded so I could hear them.

"Hey, have you seen Miyabi's photobook?"
"Yeah. She looked great, didn't she?"
"She was beautiful, especially in those yukata pics."


I always thought that only fans and old guys looked at PBs. Maybe I stereotype men too much. To hear guys about my age talk about it, it was kinda cool. Or so I thought...

"But she sure could use some more milk."
"Why'd you say that?"
"Two words: Risako and Airi."
"Hehe. Right. I hope when Yurina gets a PB, she'll have..."

Okay, I was wrong. Hearing that I looked good in it did cool but me need more milk? What's with that? What does Rii-chan and Airi-chan have that I don't? Huh, huh? Do all guys think like that? Do guys talk about girls that way? I wanted to walk to where they were standing and smack them silly but...

"You guys shouldn't talk about girls like that."

It was another boy. He was quite tall, probably taller than Yurina-chan.

"So what if we talk about them like that? You have a problem with it?" said one of them as he grabbed the new boy by the collar.
"Yeah! Who are you anyway?"
"Do you wanna know what happens if you talk like that about them again?"
"No, we don't. So what happens huh? It comes true? Yurina gets boobs, huh?"
"Yurina needs more milk..."

I wasn't sure what happened next. I think that he punched them both in the gut and a few times in the face. "That's what happens…" he said as he got off on the next station. I didn't know why, but I decided to follow him. It was then I remembered it was the station where I had to go off too.

Something inside me was hoping that it was Rii-chan's classmate. I still couldn't get over that story about him getting into a fight just because he heard some people badmouthing Rii-chan. I wish I had someone who'd do that for me. But I wouldn't want him to get into that kind of trouble to show me that he really cares for me.

I followed him but he suddenly vanished when he went to this corner. I gave up and started to go where I was supposed to but someone grabbed me from behind. That person held me like I was a crook or something.

"Ouch! You're hurting me!"
"Why were you following me huh?"
"Let me go! And get your hands off my...my boobs!"
"Boobs? What boobs?"
"I'm a girl. Are you blind or something?"

I wasn't sure if he really didn't know that I was a girl. The skirt I wore should have been a giveaway. Maybe he's just pretending so he can stay on touchie mode longer...

"Ehem. Are you gonna let go of me now?"
"Oh. Okay."

After he let go of me, he turned around and started to walk away.

"Hey. You should apologize to me!" I shouted.
"For what? You were the one who was stalking me remember? It was just self-defense."
"Self-defense? I can call the police and tell them you tried to harass me."
"It's not my fault I thought you were a guy, you know. I mean, who'd think a girl would dress in something like that?"

He was talking about my outfit. Okay, I was wearing a black tee and a denim jacket with some tears on the sleeves. I had a cap on too, and a pair of shades. But I was wearing a skirt. It's impossible for someone to miss that!

"Oh alright." he said as he started walking towards me.
"..."
"I'm sorry." he said then he bowed. "Please pardon my rudeness, Ma'am."
"Ma'am?"
"I'm not sure if you're older than me, so yeah. I'm sorry Ma'am."
"I'm fourteen!"
"Oh. So we're the same age then."
"You're fourteen? But you look old!" Well not really. In fact, he was quite cute. He had a nice smile.
"Ouch. You hurt my feelings. But you're not the first girl to tell me that hehe."

But he's weird...

"Now that I've apologized, you can tell me why you were following me."
"Umm...I saw what you did at the train...to those two guys."
"Don't tell me... one of them is your boyfriend and he sent you to follow me so they can call for backup and get even."
"None of them is my boyfriend!"
"Have you ever had one before?"
"What does that have to do with this?"
"Nothing. I'm just trying to keep this conversation going to kill time hehe."
"Ugh. You're weird. I'm leaving." I told him as I walked away. "What's your name anyway?"
"I don't give out my name as easy as my number, Ma'am..."
"Ryota! I've been waiting for you for five minutes already!" the voice was familiar. I stopped and looked back. "Oh, so you're here too, Miya-chan! Great, now we can go to the cafe together."

It was Yurina-chan. I was suppossed to meet and go to a cake shop with her, that's why I got off the train on this stop.

"Yuri-chan. Sorry to have kept you waiting. This girl was following me when I got off the train so I tried to lose her first but she was persistent."
"Of course. That's Miya-chan. And she doesn't give up easily on anything."
"Miya-chan? You mean Miyabi? Natsuyaki Miyabi of Berryz Koubou?"
"Yes. I am from Berryz Koubou. And some girls from Berryz Koubou dress like this." I told him.
"I didn't beleive Yuri-chan when she told me that you girls wear shirts with skull designs. But now I do."
"Did he do anything to you Miya-chan?" Yurina-chan asked me.
"Ummm..."

He touched my boobs!

"...nothing...I just...I saw Ryota take care of some trash in the train."
"Really? That's nice to hear!" she said as she grabbed my hand. "Come on, let's get going. It's Ryota's treat today. Just order what you want Miya-chan."
"Hey...I thought it was your treat, Yuri-chan..."

So Yurina-chan's seeing someone too…

I don't see why she likes him though, aside from the fact that he's cute.

He’s weird!











Alright. He wasn't just cute. He isn’t really weird weird.

He's smart and funny.

He's my type…
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Re: Too Young
« Reply #210 on: June 11, 2007, 05:20:31 PM »
oh wow wo we wow. I think i see a triangle coming up

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Re: Too Young
« Reply #211 on: June 12, 2007, 04:47:46 AM »
Ah so Miya likes the kind of guys that talk back to her and challenge her authority. But why am I not surprised? She does look the type XD

Rii, Airi, Maimi and Miya PB talk was hilarious. They all had to go and tease her about her boobs (or lack of) didn't they :P

Is there ever gonna be a girl who doesn't like her friend's BF? Oh wait that is one. Momoko :lol:

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Re: Too Young: Rendezvous
« Reply #212 on: June 12, 2007, 12:11:46 PM »
PIIIIiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiNK !!!!
i was waiting for that one  :farofflook:
damn funny as hell XD

so great wordy so great  :gyaaah:


"I can't turn my sad face cute. I'm not a pout machine."
:rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:
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"You're fourteen right?"
"Yeah. Why?"
"Shouldn't you have grown some boobs by now?
"What?"
:rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:
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"...My sexy body?"
"Yeah. YOUR sexy body. I saw your photobook, Maimi-chan."
"And now you're hitting on me too?"
"Who isn't anyway?"
"Right answer.
[...]
"Hey, we're part of Gatas now remember? That'll help your body get toned."
"You're right. I just hope I don't get bruised when we play."
"Who said you were gonna get some playing time?"
"What?"
*ChrNo is dying...*

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someone grabbed me from behind. That person held me like I was a crook or something.

"Ouch! You're hurting me!"
"Why were you following me huh?"
"Let me go! And get your hands off my...my boobs!"
"Boobs? What boobs?"
"I'm a girl. Are you blind or something?"
XD XD XD XD XD
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He's smart and funny.

He's my type…

again ?!
why do all the boys who is meeting Miya in this fic has some extra...
like Pretty Boy, he gets to see her underweares....and now Ryota gets to touch her chest ?
gnnnnnnn

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Re: Too Young
« Reply #213 on: June 14, 2007, 03:23:53 PM »
I wanna beat up Ryota .... I just don't like him ....

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Re: Too Young
« Reply #214 on: June 23, 2007, 06:15:32 AM »
Loool bewbs! Great chapter WW, now that Chiko's getting another PB, Pretty Boy should be happy lol haha :)

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Too Young: Jeopardy
« Reply #215 on: June 28, 2007, 02:17:38 PM »
Miya-chan's been acting weird since that last time we went out. She keeps calling me at least five times everyday. I don't know, but the last person she did that to was Rii-chan and it came to a point where Rii-chan suspected her to be a stalker. You can call it annoying, but I think that's just how Miya-chan shows how she cares for her friends.

But still, I don't understand her. Was it because of Ryota?

Impossible. Even if she always asks me when I answer if Ryota is with me, I know Miya-chan. And I can picture the type of guys that would pass her standards.

I'm not saying that my taste with boys is that bad, but there's something in Ryota that I can't find in other boys. I saw a hint of it in Rii-chan's classmate, but maybe it's because
I missed Ryota.

But Miya-chan's call today was different...

"Miya-chan?" I knew it was her. I already set a different tone for her number.
"Kuma-chan, I'm going to tell you something, but please stay calm."
"Stay calm? What are you talking about?"
"It's about Ryota."
"What about him?"
"I wanted to tell you this but I was afraid how you'd react once you knew."
"Go on. Tell me."
"I know this sounds crazy, but I saw him with a woman! They were hugging in public! And they even kissed!"
"Miya-chan it's 3 AM, I think we should go back to sleep. It's probably just a dream."
"No, I'm telling you what I saw! And it wasn't just a one time thing! I saw them at least four times already."
"Miya..."
"I'll show you tomorrow. Meet me at 8 AM at the train station."
"It's saturday tomorrow."
"They will be there."
"What makes you so sure?"
"Just meet up with me, okay? See you later."

She didn't give me a choice. I wanted to call Ryota and ask him if all this was true so I didn't have to go out with Miya-chan so I can continue my sleep, but Ryota rarely answers his phone. And to think he even gave me his number when he came back.


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I did meet Miya-chan on the station. Of course, we had to wear our trusty large caps, shades and scarves that cover half or face. You ask me how I recognized her? No, it wasn't because of her chin. She was wearing that striped sweater of hers again. Of course, striped sweaters are common but only Miya-chan wears it with matching denim skirt and boots.

"Tell me why we're here again?" I asked her. "Maybe it's someone who looks like him."
"Ryota's two-timing you. And with an older girl. But that lady does have looks..."
"What if you're wrong? What if it’s not him?"
"I'll tell you that the one who's been munching on your snacks is Momo."
"Momo did what?"
"Sshh. Here they come." she said as she pointed behind me.

I turned around, without any hesitation, because I wanted to prove her wrong. Ryota isn't two-timing me.

But I was the one who was wrong.

It was indeed Ryota. And he was walking with a woman. They hugged first, before she kissed him. Then she left.

"See. He kissed her. You believe me now? Wait, Kuma-chan. Where are you going?"

I walked towards Ryota. I could hear Miya-chan telling me to calm down and wait up but I was furious. Ryota really knows how to make my blood boil. But I didn't know why or how he could to this to me. I thought he liked me?

"Ryota..."
"What do you want? Oh it's you Yurina. What are you doing here?"
"How could you do this to me?" I said.
"Do what?"
"I had to show her what you've been doing behind her back." Miya-chan said.
"Natsuyaki? You're here too? What are you talking about?"
"You're two-timing Kuma-chan!"
"Two-timing her? With whom?"
"I saw you, Ryota. You kissed that woman." I answered him.
"And that means?"
"I thought...I...You said you liked me..."
"I do like you..."
"But why..."
"Why what?"
"Nevermind. Don't call me again."
"But I rarely call you."
"Whatever. I don't want to see you again."
"But how? We're classmates."
"Stop being a wiseass, will you?" Miya-chan told him.
"I have a feeling you two don't want to hear my side of the story..."
"Come on Kuma-chan. Don't listen to him." Miya -chan said as she dragged me away." Just forget about him. There are a lot of other boys out there who'd know how to take care of you.
"You're not going anywhere." Ryota said as he tried to grab my other arm but he only caught my bracelet, the bracelet he gave me, and the links broke. The bells fell on the floor. Ryota started to pick them up. "I'm sorry, Yurina. I'll get this fixed. I promise."

"You don't have to, Ryota. You can't fix it. You can't...fix...it..."

I didn't know when my tears started to fall. I just felt that my scarf was starting to get wet. Miya-chan was right. Ryoma was two-twiming me. I had to see it with my own eyes.
But I was a bit torn. I should be thanking her for telling me about this but I wished that she didn't tell me about it at all.

"Ryo-chan, I forgot to give you your allowance."

Did I hear that right? We looked at the one who said that, and it was the lady he was with earlier. The lady who hugged and kissed him.

"Mama. You didn't have to come back."

Mama

"Mama?"

"What are you doing on the floor? Oh, isn't that the one you asked me to make before?" the lady asked her.
"Yeah. I broke it."
"I'll take care of it."

I took a good look at the lady. It feels like I've seen her somewhere...

"Wait, you've been to my shop before, haven't you." she said as she looked at me. "Ah, I remember! You're Kumai-san, aren't you? Please tell me that she's a Berryz Koubou too." she added as she looked at Miya-chan.

I was right. She was the owner of the shop that sells accessories I went to with Chinami-chan.

"I didn't know that Ryo-chan knew you. If he would have told me, I would have given you bigger discounts."
"Umm, you're his mom?" Miya-chan asked her.
"Yes. She's my mom." Ryota answered. I saw Miya-chan slap her forehead after she turned around, and whispering something like "not again".
"Come on, I'll treat you guys to coffee, then we'll get that bracelet fixed."
"We don't drink coffee." Ryota objected. "But I think you could treat us to some cake."

Ryota's mom decided to take us to a cake shop not far from the station. After finishing our snacks, Ryota's mom took my broken bracelet and told me that she'll just ask Ryota to give it to me when it's done. I asked how much the repair would cost bus she said that it's on the house. Then she told Ryota to walk us home. She's really nice.

Miya hasn't talked since we left the shop. I know that she thinks that I'm mad at her but I'm not. I understand. I know she was just looking after me. She didn't want me to get hurt. She'd probably do that to any of us. I placed my hand on her shoulder.

"Miya..."
"I'm sorry Kuma-chan. I'm sorry too, Ryota..." Miya-chan said. She was starting to cry.
"Nah. Forget about it. I can't believe you had the balls to do that..."
"Ryota! Watch your language!"
"What I mean is, telling your friend that her boyfriend is seeing someone else is kinda brave..."
"R...really?"
"Hey, who told you that you're my boyfriend?"
"...That just proves how much you care for her. Other friends would rather keep quiet or just pretend that they didn't know anything about it. But you're different. And what you did was admirable."
"Ryota..."
"T...thanks." Miya-chan said as she wiped her tears with her sleeves.
"But I still don't get why cute girls like you have to wear those kinds of clothes though."
"Ryota!"

My house was closer so it was the first stop.

"Bye, Kuma-chan." Miya-chan said.
"Okay. I'll wait for your call later okay. Take Miya-chan home safely will you, Ryota."
"Huh?"
"No need Kuma-chan. I can go home by myself."
"No, no. Ryota will walk you home, right Ryota?"
"Okay. And I thought I was going to see her ride her flying broom... "

I hit Ryota on the shoulder and saw Miya-chan laugh before they walked away.

It was still early but it felt like the day was almost over.

What another weird day.
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Re: Too Young: Jeopardy
« Reply #216 on: June 28, 2007, 02:52:36 PM »
chokkan is so going to hate him more hahahaha
I don't know, but the last person she did that to was Rii-chan and it came to a point where Rii-chan suspected her to be a stalker.
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"I know this sounds crazy, but I saw him with a woman! They were hugging in public! And they even kissed!"
"Miya-chan it's 3 AM, I think we should go back to sleep. It's probably just a dream."
:rofl: :rofl: :rofl: calling at 3am? XD
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You ask me how I recognized her? No, it wasn't because of her chin.[/color]
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"I'll tell you that the one who's been munching on your snacks is Momo."
"Momo did what?"
XD she needs energy to go to gym and ger muscles XD
well actually, brian pointed out that the one who had bad habit with snack is Miya herself XD remember how many times we saw her eating during making of or dvd mag...and looks like she said it in the dvd mag 8 ?
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"You're two-timing Kuma-chan!"
"Two-timing her? With whom?"
"I saw you, Ryota. You kissed that woman." I answered him.
"And that means?"
"I thought...I...You said you liked me..."
"I do like you..."
"But why..."
"Why what?"
"Nevermind. Don't call me again."
"But I rarely call you."
"Whatever. I don't want to see you again."
"But how? We're classmates."
"Stop being a wiseass, will you?" Miya-chan told her.
:rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:
this ryota sure takes it easily XD
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"You're not going anywhere." Ryota said as he tried to grab my other arm but he only caught my bracelet, the bracelet he gave me, and the links broke. The bells fell on the floor. Ryota started to pick them up. "I'm sorry, Yurina. I'll get this fixed. I promise."

"You don't have to, Ryota. You can't fix it. You can't...fix...it..."
awwww....

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"What I mean is, telling your friend that her boyfriend is seeing someone else is kinda brave..."
"R...really?"
"Hey, who told you that you're my boyfriend?"
[...]
"But I still don't get why cute girls like you have to wear those kinds of clothes though."
"Ryota!"
  :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:
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And I thought I was going to see her ride her flying broom... "
what th.... :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:

Ryota walking Miya home hu hu hu hu....

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Re: Too Young
« Reply #217 on: June 29, 2007, 02:35:00 AM »
Hmm, with all those compliments Ryota was giving Miya I'm really curious to see what happens on their walk home...  :D :O

Lol, this has changed from Pretty Boy's story to Ryota's... Well, at least other Berryz are now getting :heart:. ^_^

Oh, and I grrr too about the chin thing!  :angry:
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Re: Too Young
« Reply #218 on: July 01, 2007, 01:02:31 AM »
Lol.

Miya is an official Berryz stalker? haha

Poor Kumai-chan...

Look like somebody mess up again lol.

Ryota and his mom <3

Poor Miya :P

Something interesting gonna happens in the next chapter? :D

Lol, this chapter is so funny and dramatic. Nice words! :D

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Re: Too Young
« Reply #219 on: July 26, 2007, 01:52:10 PM »
i say the next chapter should be about Risako's new PB that just came out

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