[Chapter #01] Mr. Ikemen's Teasing Kiss (UPDATED)

[Ceej!~]

Hello there... I have this idea on making another fanfic... my other fanfic is still on going but I have this idea on mind since I finished watching a jdorama called "ItaKiss"  . This fanfic idea is somehow related to it. Of course the main pair for this is then again, my kami OTP, MaYuki  I'll try to put some other pairs if I can though. And the story goes this way...

                                                                                                                                                           

A not-so-smart high school girl named Yuki finally tells a guy named Mayu that she has loved him from afar since she saw him on their first day of high school. However, Mayu, a "super-ikemen" who is smart and good at sports, rejects her offhand. Fate intervenes when an accident ruins Yuki's family house. While the house gets rebuilt, Yuki and her dad stay at the home of her dad's childhood best friend...whose son is Mayu. Although he shows a cold attitude, she realizes she cant help but love him. Now that she lives close to him, will their relationship be the same, or will it become greater than it is.

                                                                                                                                                           

shall I continue this? 
                                                                                                                                                           

= Chapter List =

Prologue
Chapter #01: “A Love Along with a Tragedy"

[vivinardisa]

I like the prolog 

I will be interesting to read more 

So please update and countinous this 

[Tiptip]

Interesting prolog 
You should continue this 

[prof.j]

                                                                                                                                   shall I continue this? 

yes. you should continue 
it's interesting

[River1721]

Please Continue this!
Sounds so interesting~

[Ceej!~]

“Dear Watanabe Mayu-sama,
Nice to meet you, Watanabe-kun. My name is Kashiwagi Yuki. I’m from Class F.
You don’t know me… but I know you…
Since you made a speech at the entrance ceremony two years ago, I have been admiring your intelligence and handsome face.
There is no way that I can be in the same class with you. This is why I am writing this letter to you. When I first saw you, I felt like I was hit by a shooting star. I started to have a special feeling for you.
Watanabe-kun, I love you.”

That was what’s written on the letter that I was holding which I will give to Watanabe-kun. I was waiting for him at the school’s entrance and finally he arrived. I approach towards him.

“Uhmm, A-anoo?”
“Who are you?”
“I’m Kashiwagi Yuki from Class F. A-anoo, could you please read this?”
I bring the letter towards him.
“I don’t want it.”

It seems like my first love had ended pretty easily.
But after this, a miracle happens.

= Chapter #01: “A Love Along with a Tragedy” =

At Akiba High School…
I was walking to my class and everyone at school talks about what happen this early morning.

“Look, it’s Kashiwagi from Class F.” said some student.
“I heard she just told Watanabe-kun from Class A that she loved him.”
“Seriously?”
“That Kashiwagi Yuki told Watanabe-kun that she loved him.”
“Are you serious?”
“– To Watanabe-kun?”
Some guys from the school also starts gossiping about it.
“Class F’s Kashiwagi Yuki told Class A’s Watanabe that she loved him!”
“Does she know what place she is in?”
“Poor Girl.”
*people laughs*
“MOUUUU!!! LEAVE ME ALONE!!!”
 
I shouted back at everyone and run away and then suddenly I bumped to my closest friends, Aki and Mocchi.

“Yuki, did you tell Watanabe-kun that you loved him?!” Aki said.
“Aki, don’t say that out loud! Wait, how do you know that?”
“How can you miss it if you tried to give a love letter in front of the school gate? The whole school is talking about it.” Mocchi said.
“Hazukashii...” I said.
“Why did you choose to do it at the school gate? It’s like saying ‘Please talk about it.’” Aki said.
“Plus, it’s Watanabe that you are talking about.” Mocchi added.
“Why did you do such a reckless thing? You knew that you would get rejected, didn’t you?” Aki said.
“By any chance… he might like me.” I said while I slightly laugh and Aki slightly pushed me and laugh.
“Stop that! That’s not going to happen! We are talking about that Watanabe Mayu.” Aki said while laughing.
“You know that the classes are divided by the test scores in our school. Watanabe is the smartest of all the students in Class A which is the smartest class in our grade. On the last national exam, he got the highest score in the nation. I rumour says he has an IQ of 200. He is a genius and good looking. And on top of that, his father is a president of a company.” Mocchi said.
“He speaks English fluently.” Aki added.
“He’s also good in sports. He is like ‘Super Boy’. Compare to him, we are like failures at the bottom of this school. We live in a totally different world than his.” Mocchi added.
“But I did my best too. Each year, I tried so hard to be in Class A with Watanabe-kun.” I said.
The two of them became quite suddenly.
“What is it?” I asked.
“Nee, Yuki… You know the alphabets, don’t you?” Mocchi asked.
“Yes, of course.”
“Then can you count how many letters are in between A and F?” Aki asked.
I started to count the letters…
“That’s right. You’ve been in Class F. It would be a miracle for you to get in to Class A! It’s more difficult that winning a lottery.” Mocchi said.
“Less possible than having a snow falling in the middle of summer! Anyway, you and Watanabe live in totally different worlds. Got it?” Aki added.
“You are right but I just wanted to tell him my feelings for him before my high school life ends.”
“You are too naïve.” Both Aki and Mocchi said in unison.
“Watanabe is so handsome, but he is infamous for having some personality issues. He has no interest in girls. He broke countless girl’s hearts. There is not a single rumour about his love life.” Mocchi said.

Finally the three of them arrived at their classroom.

“Hey, look. It’s Yuki.” Everyone in the class said.
“Shhhh!!! Urusai!” Aki shouted.

They went to their respective seats.

“A boy in his senior year in high school and has no interest in girls? He is not normal.” Mocchi said.
“She’s right, I’m sure there is a normal boy who would be a perfect match for you in this world.” Aki replied.

And suddenly a shout came out of nowhere.

“YUKI!!!! Oii, Yuki!! Oii, Yuki!!!”
“See? The normal guy for you!” Aki said.

And a guy appeared in the class.

“Yuki! Is it true that you told Watanabe that you love him but got rejected? Is it true? Is it true?”
“Sae-chan, you are too close.”
“I didn’t know you liked such a nerd. You have me.” Sae said.
“I’m not yours, Sae-chan.”
“Oh man, I made Takoyaki this morning just for you!”
“I’ll have one!”

*clap clap* and two guys appeared that happened to be, Yuko and Akigori.

“Hurry up!” Sae said.
Yuko and Akigori placed the meal on the table.
“Sae-chan’s Takoyaki!”
“Here you go.” Yuko said.
“Itadakimasu! Oishiii!!”
“Put some seaweed too.” Sae added.
“The only thing you are good at is cooking.” Aki said to Sae.
“The only thing? Nobody loves Yuki more than I love her! Even if he’s in Class A and genius, he can’t beat me at that. How could he turn Yuki down? This is a challenge from him. He thinks he is something.” Sae angrily said.
“It’s okay. As you said I wasn’t thinking right. He didn’t even read my letter. He’s not worth it. I guess I don’t have an eye to find a nice boy. I’m fine now. I’m over him.” Yuki said while yawning.
“How can you yawn right now?” Aki said.
“I stayed up all night last night. I was worried that if there were any mistakes, he would think I’m dumb. I even looked up the kanji characters of my own name.”
“That’s ridiculous.” Aki said.
“That’s how nervous I was. I couldn’t even eat my breakfast. That’s why I am so grateful, Sae-chan! I think I can survive the morning classes thanks to this meal.”
“You look great when you smile. I can make Takoyaki as much as you want. So feel better soon.” Sae said while patting Yuki’s head.
Mocchi and Aki started to eat the Takoyaki as well.
“Hmmm, oishii!” both of them said.
“You guys are eating too much.” Sae said to Mocchi and Aki.
“Oops!” both said while doing a tehee~ pose.

They continued to eat…

And after that the class ended and they went home.

“Let’s go home.” Mocchi said to both Yuki and Aki.
“By the way, is your new house finished? Aki asked Yuki.
“Yeah, we are moving on Sunday.”
“Wow, your family is going to own a house!” Aki responded.
“It will definitely cheer me up.”
Yeah, if you change your place to live I’m sure your luck will change. A good thing is going to happen to you.” Mocchi said.
“Right, you’re right. I believe so.”
“I will help your moving.” Aki said.
“Great. Thanks!”
“I will come too.” Mocchi added.
“Thanks, I’m so looking forward to it.”

And the day of moving to our new home finally came.

“Ohayo. We’re here!”
“Paparin, they’re here!”
“Oh. Everyone, thank you for coming to help us!” Dad said.
“Father, I will do anything for Yuki-san. My name is Miyazawa Sae.”
“I’m Akigori and this is Yuko. Please to meet you.”
“You don’t need to introduce yourself.” Sae added.
“Father, tell me anything you want me to do as if I’m your own son.” Sae said.
“Sae-chan, stop promoting yourself and please move the boxes!” Mocchi interrupted.
“Yeah! Let’s move some boxes!”
“Thank you all for coming today!”
“Sae-chan is the one who told everyone to come today. You were hurt by Watanabe, so he wanted to cheer you up.” Aki said.
“I see.”

And everyone moved the boxes to the new house and finally they finished done moving everything.

“Arigato Gozaimasu.”
“I think we finished moving everything.” Paparin said.
“It’s a wonderful house, Father.” Sae said.
“I made my late wife and Yuki suffer so much. Yuki and I worked so hard and finally built our own house.” Paparin starts to cry.
“Paparin, don’t cry in front of everyone.”
“Kotoko is going to have a difficult time when she gets married.” Aki said.
“Don’t worry. I will marry into your family any time. Father, please think of me as your real son. Please call me Sae-chan…” Sae said to Yuki’s father and he got interrupted.
Also he got ignored by Yuki’s father.
“Thank you all for your help today. Thanks to everyone, we could finish it early. Let’s go inside and have some food. I will make some of my best dishes.” Paparin said.
“He’s a professional chef.” Aki said.
“I can’t wait.” Mocchi said.

And suddenly…

“Hold on… Hold on…”
“Do you feel that the ground is shaking?”
“Huh? Nope?” everyone said.
“I have a bad feeling about this.”

And the ground begun to shake very strong. That ruined their new home.
The incident was featured in the news.

“Around noon today, an earthquake occurred on some residence in Tokyo and destroyed some homes.”
Yuki’s dad was also featured and got interviewed in the news.

Meanwhile, they stayed at their restaurant for now.

“Cheer up, Paparin.”
“I’d worked hard every day to get to the point.”
“You can start again from this point.”
“How can I run a business like this? I can’t even rent an apartment. I spent all my savings on that house. I understand if it was a fir or an accident. An earthquake? My insurance doesn’t even cover it. I’m totally out of luck.” Paparin said while drinking his tea.
“That’s not true. You have luck. All of us could be dead now if the earthquake started when we went inside the house. Even if you survived but lost an arm, you wouldn’t be able to work as a chef. If that happened, we would have to close this restaurant. Right? But you are here without a scratch. We should be grateful for that. We can’t be luckier than this. We are extremely lucky, aren’t we?”
Paparin suddenly laugh.
“What is it?”
“I was thinking how much you resembled your Mamarin. Your Mamarin was also excessively hopeful about the future.”
“Excessively? Can you say it in a nicer way?” I said while laughing.
“You really are starting to resemble your Mamarin.”

Suddenly the phone rang.

“Hello, this is Kashiwagi speaking. I’m sorry for your inconvenience… ehh? Nabe-chan? How are you? You’re still alive? Oh that’s a question that you should ask me.” Paparin laugh.
“Nabe-chan?”

The next day…
While moving towards school, everyone is again talking about what happened yesterday.

“It’s Kashiwagi from Class F.”
“Isn’t her house destroyed?”
“Did you watch the news?”
“It was in the newspaper too.”
“She got rejected by Watanabe not so long ago.”
“Bad things keep coming to her. Maybe she’s possessed by something.”

Good thing Aki and Mocchi bumped into her.

“You are the center of attention every day.” Aki said.
“I just want to disappear.”
“By the way, have you found a place to stay?” Mocchi asked.
“Well, I think we can stay at my father’s best friend’s house for a little bit.”
“Oh really? How long did you find someone like that so soon?” Mocchi asked.
“The person saw us on the news and contacted us right away.”
“What a nice person! I’m so happy for you. I think your luck will change from now on.” Aki said.
“You think so? I want to believe that a luck will hit me this time.”
“That’s the Yuki I know.” Mocchi said.

At the moment. Some guys are on the school entrance shouting something.

“Please donate your money!”
“What is that?”
“Even a little bit would help. Even a 10-yen would help! 5 yen is fine, so please donate your money!”
“For Kashiwagi Yuki who lost her house because of the earthquake yesterday… We are collecting contributions from everyone!” Sae said.
“He’s so baka.” Mocchi said.
“Because he is Sae-chan.” Aki said.
“Sae-chan, please stop this.”
“Yuki is here now! Although she had a horrible day yesterday she is here today with her smile. She is kawaii today as usual. You are making me cry.” Sae shouted.
“Sae-chan, please stop this.”
“Why? I’m doing this for you!” Sae responded.
“I don’t want everyone to talk about me anymore.”
“After all, she is standing out quite a bit.” Aki said.
“People are going to talk about her more now.” Mocchi added.

Suddenly Watanabe Mayu was about to pass the school gate.

“Can I pass by?” he said.
“Watanabe-kun.”
“How could you talk to us like that? Yuki is very hurt. Do you know why?” Sae said.
“Earthquake?” Mayu replied.
“That’s something else. It’s because of you turned her down in such a horrible way. After that, so many bad things have happened to Yuki.” Sae responded.
“The probability of an earthquake to occur one out of ten.” Mayu said.
“The earthquake?” Yuki said.
“That incident was caused by me?” Mayu said.
“That’s right!” Sae said.
“Sae-chan. That doesn’t make any sense.” Yuki said.
“ehh? I didn’t know that I had such a great power.” Mayu responded.
Mayu suddenly took out his wallet and gives the money to Yuki.
“If I donate this money, you won’t argue with me anymore, right?” Mayu added.

Then Yuki slaps the money in Mayu’s hands that gave a little shocked in Mayu’s face.

“Don’t treat me like that! I can’t believe I admired someone like you for two years. I will die before I take your money.”
Mayu puts his wallet back.
“Are you sure you want to tell me that?” Mayu replied.
“Of course I am! Do you have any friends? Look! I have many friends who would come when I need their help. Sae-chan, Aki and Mocchi… that’s why I don’t need your help!”

Mayu just smirked and leave Yuki with everyone.

“Are you looking down on us because we are in Class F? Don’t look down on us just because we are not smart!” Yuki shouted back while Mayu walks away.
“After all, you became so famous again.” Aki said to Yuki.
“You must be the only girl who tried to pick a fight with him.” Mocchi added.
“No way. What should I do? That wasn’t what I had in my mind.”

That scene ended.

Paparin made Yuki to come home early to help him move to their new home.

“This is Nabe-chan’s house.” Paparin said.
“Wow, it’s huge!”
“Nabe-chan is the president of a major company. He graduated from University of Tokyo.”
“He must be so smart.”

At the moment when Yuki was looking around and pointing at the sign.

“How do you read that?”
“Watanabe.” Paparin said.
“I see its Watanabe. Watanabe?!”
“Right. Watanabe. That’s why I call him Nabe-chan.” Paparin said.
“Why Watanabe? Out of all other names…”
“Hmmm? What’s wrong?” Paparin asked.
“Huh? Nothing.”

And suddenly a man went out of the house.

“Wagi-chan, Welcome! What happened? Why did you take so long?”
“Sorry, it took a while to find my stuffs.” Paparin said.
“Really I’m glad you’re here.”

The two man cheerfully greets each other and hugged. Suddenly a woman came out of the house as well.

“Oh my, we were waiting for you.” The woman said.

The man was Uncle Watanabe and the woman is Aunt Watanabe.

“I’m so happy that you are here. Please feel at home.” Uncle said.
“Thank you, Nabe-chan. I really appreciate this. Mrs. Watanabe, Thank you for letting us stay.” Paparin said.
“I’m sorry for what happened to you. Please enjoy staying here.” Aunt said.
“I’m Yuki. Yoroshiko onegaishimasu.”
“I’m happy to have a pretty girl like you here. We only have sons.” Aunt said.
“You have sons?”
“I will introduce them to you later. Please come in.”

Everyone went inside the house.

“This way, please… Ahh, Mitsuo! Please come down and greet them. This is Kashiwagi-san.” Aunt said.
“He is your son? Kawaii.”
“Nice to meet you, I’m Watanabe Mitsuo. I’m in third grade. Yoroshiko onegaishimasu.” The boy said.
“He is a smart boy.” Paparin said.
“Yoroshiko ne, Mitsuo-kun.” Yuki said but the boy just ignored her.
“Um, you two must be tired. This way, please.” Aunt said.
“Thank you for having us.”

At the living room.

“Hai! Douzo! Please have some.” Aunt said.
“Oishii!”
“I’m glad you like them. Please have some more.” Aunt responded.
“But you grew so much, Yuki.” Uncle said.
“You have met me before?”
“When you were a baby, I saw you at the restaurant.” Uncle replied.
“You came to Paparin’s restaurant?”
“Yes, of course.” Uncle said.
“Nabe-chan and I have been very close friends since kindergarten.” Paparin said.
“I used to go to Wagi-chan’s house to eat dinner every day. When I was a university student, I had no money… Wagi-chan was already a chef, so he always gave me something to eat. Well, Wagi-chan always took care of me.” Uncle said.
“What are you talking about? When I opened my restaurant, you recommended it to so many people. Your classmates from University of Tokyo… Your business partners… Even now, many of them come to my restaurant. I could keep my business because you helped me.” Paparin said.
“Oh please. We both got family… and had kids… and we were busy working. We couldn’t see each other for a while. When I saw the news, I was surprised. Well, that was unfortunate, but… I’m so happy that we could see each other again. Right?” Uncle said.
“That’s right. Yuki-chan, please feel like this is your own home.” Aunt said.
“Hai! Arigato Gozaimasu.”

“You and I seem like we are meant to meet by fate. Speaking of the devil… My older one just came home.” Aunt said.
‘Older one. Huh?’

When I saw that Oniichan, it gave me a total shocked that gave everyone a shock as well.


“What’s wrong, Yuki?” Paparin said.
“Yuki-chan’s very energetic.” Uncle said.
“I apologize for the late introduction. I’m the older son, Watanabe Mayu. Douzo Yoroshiko Onegaishimasu.” Mayu said and bows.
“I was told that you and Oniichan go to the same school.” Aunt said.
“I didn’t know that. Yoroshiko onegaishimasu. Yuki greet him too.” Paparin said and bowed.

Yuki was still staring at him just like a shocked statue.

“What are you doing, Yuki?”
“It’s just… I’m just so surprised… Because Uncle and Nabe-kun don’t look like at all.”
“That’s rude.” Paparin said and slap my head.
“Well, well, well. Both of our sons looks like their mother. Do you know that you are lucky?” Uncle said.
“Oh Papa. Oniichan you should sit down too.” Aunt said.

I just drink my refreshments while staring at him.

“I’m glad that Yuki-chan already know Oniichan. Could it be that you both are in the same class?” Aunt said.
“Our classes are pretty far apart but recently we met in an unexpected way. Right, Yuki-san?” Mayu said.
“Well, yes.” I said awkwardly.
“That’s good. Now you can get to know each other more. Oniichan is a little unique, don’t you think? Do you think you can be his friend?” Aunt said.
And suddenly Mitsuo appeared.
“Oniichan, I finished today’s homework.” Mitsuo said.
“It that so? Good Job.” Mayu replied.
“But there’s two kanji character that I didn’t know how to read. Today instead of asking you… I will ask Yuki onee-san.” Mitsuo said and looks at Yuki which gave her a shocked.
“That’s a good idea.” Mayu replied with a smirk.
“Yuki onee-san, could you please tell me how to read this kanji character?” Mitsuo asked.
“Sure.” Yuki said awkwardly. ‘This is for 3rd graders. I’m sure I can read it.’ Yuki thought. But then again when I saw the Kanji characters it gave me a big shock.
“Mitsuo-kun, sugoi na… You’re in 3rd grade, but you learn so many difficult kanji characters. And which one can’t you read?”

Mitsuo pointed at these following kanji: 光男.

“This one. You read this ‘mouse’ and ‘giraffe’.” I said awkwardly.
“You are stupid. This is read as ‘Mitsuo’ means ‘shining man’. You are in high school but you can’t even read this?” Mitsuo said.

Mayu just slightly laugh on what he just saw.

“Mitsuo, that is very rude! Apologize to her.” Aunt said.
“Anyway, I hate you.” Mitsuo said.
“Oiii! Mitsuo!” Uncle said.

Mitsuo went out but before that he gave a ‘bleeeh’ face to Yuki.

“I’m sorry for what he said.” Aunt said.
“No, I should have been able to read it.”
“No, he is not used being around a girl. I think he is just being shy. Don’t take it personally.” Uncle said.
“Now I want to show you your room! I was so excited about this Come this way.” Aunt said.

They went to her new bed room.

“Ta-da! What do you think?” I was excited about it and decorate this room. Maybe I got too excited. You know we only have boys but I’ve always wanted a girl. I have dreamt to have a room like this.” Aunt said.
“I am super happy. Since Mamarin passed away when I was little, I never had girlie things like this. You know Paparin is. He gave me clothes that were simple and strong. When I saw my friends wearing dresses with frill. I was so envious. I feel like my dream came true. That’s why…”
“I wanted to go shopping with my daughter and go see a movie… and exchange our clothes… those were my dreams! Please stay with me, okay, Yuki-chan? Aunt said while hugging Yuki.

Suddenly Mayu went to the room and puts all of Yuki’s stuffs down.

“This used to be Mitsuo’s Room. Thanks to you, his school desk came to my room. My room is so untidy.” Mayu said.
“Why do you have to ruin our fun? Please don’t say unnecessary things, Oniichan!” Aunt said to Mayu.
‘That’s why… Mitsuo hates me.’ I thought
“Yuki-chan, don’t worry about anything. Just think as if this is your home, okay? “Aunt said.
“Okay.”
“Oniichan, can you please help her organize her stuff? I’m going to start preparing dinner. We are going to have sukiyaki tonight!” Aunt said to Mayu.
Then Aunt leaves the room leaving Mayu and Yuki in the room.
“Uhmm?”
“So? What should I start with?” Mayu asked and grabbed Yuki’s stuffs.
“That’s okay. I’ll do it myself.” Yuki replied and grabbed her things on Mayu’s hands.
“Oh yeah. That’s right. There is no reason for me to help you. I don’t care if you live here or not. Just don’t disturb my life.” Mayu said and leaves the room.

‘How many billion would the probability be that a girl ends up living with a boy who rejected her? Is it the beginning of something special? Or…’

The next day…
They have breakfast and Mayu and Yuki went to school together.

“Can you…”
“Yes?”
“Can you walk far from me?” Mayu asked.
“Why?”
“I don’t want to walk with a girl who has bread crumbs all over her.”
Yuki looked at her uniform and saw the crumbs on it and then cleans it then she walks towards to Mayu.
“Walk at least 2 meters away from me. Follow me and remember the path to school at once. Obviously, don’t tell anyone that we live in the same house, got it? Don’t ever talk to me at school.” Mayu said.
“You don’t have to be that mean…” Yuki replied.
“I don’t want to be involved in those worthless rumours anymore.”
“Worthless?”
“I…. hate girls with no brains.”

And then Mayu walks away.

‘I’m so mad! I can’t believe I was in love with such a jerk for two years! I’m determined to make him feel sorry for what he has said to me!’ Yuki thought.

Chapter End.
                                                                                                                                                                             
That's all for now... Thanks for reading... 
Feel free to comment  I hope I can keep this up  See you next time~ 

[Chanaline]

It remind me about a drama lol but I can't remember the name lol

It is really good (even if I don't like Mayu... ) you should continue 

 

[mo-chan]

It remind me about a drama lol but I can't remember the name lol

itazura no kiss
it is a manga before it being adapted in a drama

[Ceej!~]

It remind me about a drama lol but I can't remember the name lol

I did mention that I use my basis on this fic in a drama series and just like mo-chan said its Itazura no Kiss
I'm still wondering if I'll continue this tho... well if this will have a few readers I'll try to still continue it tho~ 
Have a nice day 

[Konoe]

It remind me about a drama lol but I can't remember the name lol

itazura no kiss
it is a manga before it being adapted in a drama

It has an anime adaptation too. Don't forget the Taiwanese version "It Started with a Kiss" and the Korean version "Mischievous/Playful Kiss".


Ceeji are you are going to put twists on this? You know, scenes not in the manga or drama.

[Ceej!~]

It remind me about a drama lol but I can't remember the name lol

itazura no kiss
it is a manga before it being adapted in a drama

It has an anime adaptation too. Don't forget the Taiwanese version "It Started with a Kiss" and the Korean version "Mischievous/Playful Kiss".


Ceeji are you are going to put twists on this? You know, scenes not in the manga or drama.

yep will do in a couple of chapters~

[kazutoryu]

Gosh I cant wait for the update!! 

[Akblaire48]

Ahhh I love it! 
I'll wait for more
So please update!

[River1721]

Yay Update!!
Mayu! I'm sure you will regret hurting Yuki~
Ah~ Yuki made a huge mistake confessing in front of the school gate
I hope these two will get along!
Can't wait for how Yuki's friends ( especially Sae! ) will react when they find out that Yuki is staying with Mayu!
Update soon~

[Chanaline]

It remind me about a drama lol but I can't remember the name lol

itazura no kiss
it is a manga before it being adapted in a drama

It has an anime adaptation too. Don't forget the Taiwanese version "It Started with a Kiss" and the Korean version "Mischievous/Playful Kiss".


Ceeji are you are going to put twists on this? You know, scenes not in the manga or drama.

Oh you're right I think I saw the korean drama ver.  I didn't saw the full drama because I don't really like people like the guy...

You need to change some things or not ^^

Since it is a Mayuki I will read anyway so keep update please Your other fanfic too!

[prof.j]

I should have commented on since 2 days ago. but
blame this damn internet connection


i just wanna say that i like when you put yukirin's reaction

hehehe

looking forward for next

[MayuxMatsuixMusic]

the scripts in the chapter 1 are like a copy paste in the manga/drama/anime xD


mayuki~~!!!