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I was sure that girl is Chiyuu, nee?  :lol: :lol: XD XD
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hmmmm.. Chiyuu? :?

Of course she is haha :lol: :)

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I'm Natsuko Akimoto(夏子秋元).
Kami-Oshi: Maeda Atsuko
Oshimen: Takamina, Miichan, Yuihan, Mayuyu, Kojiharu, Yukirin, Sasshi, Rena, Jurina, Miho.
Oshimen ExMem.: Yuko, Mariko, Sayaka, Chiyuu, Tomochin, Meetan.
OTP: Atsumina
Other/s: wMatsui, Mayuki, KojiYuu and a little bit Atsuyuu (but I really like AtsuHarem


That's all!! Douzo Yoroshiku Onegaishimasu.
[I'm not that really good in English, I'm still in the long long way to get better.]

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Ohhhh~~

Takaman have two beautiful lady after her

I hope Takamina and Acchan can be together and TomoTomo

Update soon

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Re: You Took Me By Surprise:AtsuMina,KojiYuu,MariMii Jan 9, 2015 Chap 14
« Reply #123 on: January 09, 2015, 09:55:20 PM »
Chapter 14
The blasting noise of her alarm clock jolts Takamina awake. Feeling the empty presence beside her, let's out a sigh. Looks like Atsuko had to leave early for work again.

Since the Tomochin and Katsudon incident, Takamina and Atsuko had finally managed to talk and clear any misunderstandings. Although Atsuko is reserved when it comes to talking about her feelings, Takamina understood.  Ever since then, they would spend time at each others places to watch a movie and have dinner together. Their busy work schedules had been a hindrance when trying to plan dates.  And every night, oblivious to the time they miraculously end up having unplanned sleepovers.

"Kya! I overslept again." Grabbing her things, she rushes to prepare to leave for work.

In haste, Takamina finally manages to leave for work.

Fumbling in her purse, Minami searches for her keys only to find a neatly folded piece of paper.

Full of curiosity,  she unfolds the paper to find a message. It seems to have been ripped off a book.

"I always think of you before I fall asleep. The words you say, the way you look. The things we laugh about, the things we share. And when I dream, I'll dream of you. Because its about you. It is and will always be about you."

Looking at the message, Takamina can feel the butterflies fluttering around in her stomach. Biting her lower lip as she smiles. Carefully, tucking the page into her purse Takamina begins her day with an extra bounce to her step.

****

"Takaminaaaaaaa" The ever so energetic Gachapin enters Takamina's office.

Still preoccupied with her thoughts and smiling to herself from the surprise she got this morning, Takamina fails to hear her partner

"Oi! Takamina!" Miichan says waving her hand infront of the smaller girls face.

Snapping back to reality "Eh? Nande?" Minami says looking at the other girl.

"You've got a stupid look on your face" Miichan says laughing as she plunges on the chair on the other side of the CEO's desk.

"You and Yuko say that to me alllll the time" says the defensive Minami

Shaking her head. "Its different today. What's got you so giddy?"

"He he. This." Takamina takes out the page and gently hands it to Miichan

Taking the paper Miichan hears "Oi. Be careful with it"

"Yea Yea" the other CEO says reading the paper

Smiling, Takamina waits till her friend finishes. "Well?"

Miichan releases gagging noises before bursting into laughter.

"Give it back" Takamina says taking the paper and puts it back safely in her purse with a frown

"Gomen. Gomen." Miichan says in between breaths

Finally composing herself. "I'm happy for your Takamina. Like really happy."

"Hai. Arigatou" Minami says to her friend.

"You know what's funny? Miichan asks

" What?" Takamina asks with an arched eyebrow

"Looks like you've found someone as cheesy as you" Miichan says as she sniffles a giggle.

"Shut up" Takamina throws a pen at her friend

"Mariko says Acchan will be out of town for a couple of days for a show. Aren't you sad?" Miichan inquires.

Sighing, "Of course I'll miss her. But it's for her work and as much as we love spending time together, we still need to live our own lives" says Takamina

"You've always been so mature. About work, life and everything" Miichan praises her friend.

Her face turning into a shade of red, Takamina shakes her head.

"Yadda! I'm late! I'm supposed to meet up with Mariko" Miichan gets up to leave.

"Okay. I'll see you tomorrow." Takamina says as she watches her friend leave the office closing the door behind her.

Just as was about to continue her work, the door opens again. Miichan peeks her head in and says "Before I forget, I was told to tell you to check the drawer. See you tomorrow. Quickly closing the door behind her before Takamina could say anything.

Minami opens her drawer only and to her amusement, she find another piece of gently folded paper similar to the one from this morning.

"My mind keeps wandering back to you and I don't know how to stop myself from constantly thinking about you and us and everything. I don't think I want to."


Placing her hand on her chest, Her heart sees to be trying to hammer itself out.

"Yabai" Minami whispers to herself.

****

The day flew by as Minami recalls all the work she did. Probably would have overwhelmed her if it weren't for the pages she received. Atsuko's resonated in her head as she read the messages word for word.

Checking her mail, Takamina comes across another folded piece of paper. This one however was slightly from the other two. It wasn't printed. Unlike the other two that were excerpts off a book, this one is special. It was handwritten.

"I have completely fallen for you. Everything you do, everything you say, everything you are. You are my first thought in the morning, you are my last thought before I fall asleep and you are almost all the thoughts in between.

Love,
Atsuko


PS. I miss you already. I can't wait till my shooting in Osaka is over"


****

"Yatta. I can finally go home and see Minami tomorrow" Atsuko says to herself stretching her arms as she walks to her hotel room.

Opening her room, she stops on her track as she sees a small figure laying on her bed.

"Hmm?" Atsuko let's out a confused sound as she walks over the sleeping girl

A huge smile comes across her face as she sees Minami sleeping peacefully.

Acchan whispers "Kawaii" crouching down near the latter

Brushing a loose strand of hair off her face, Atsuko leans in a kisses the smaller girl.

Atsuko pulls away watching Takamina stir awake.

"Atsuko!" Minami almost shouts seeing the actress as she open her eyes.

"Ohayo Minami" Acchan flashes the wrinkle on her nose.

"Yabai! I was supposed to surprise you!" Takamina sits up on the bed face palming.

Acchan sits on the bed near Takamina's leg. "I am surprised. Plus I like seeing you sleep. Kawaii!" She giggles pinching Minami's cheek.

"Ano..about these.." The smaller girl takes three neatly folded pieces of paper out of her pocket.

Atsuko immediately turns a couple of shades redder at the sight of them. "Hmm?? What about them?" She asks unable to the the embarrassment on her voice

Taking Atsuko's hand Minami looks at the actress and says " I love them. I will treasure them for ever. And I love you. I will love you forever."

Acchan bites her lower lip as she looks at Takamina both leaning in at kisses each other.

"I couldn't wait till tomorrow. I had to see you. So I came straight here after I got the third message" Takamina rubs the back of her neck

"Thank you" was all the actress could say

"There you go. Reserved as always." Laughs Minami

Punching the smaller girl, the actress says "I may not be the perfect girlfriend. I'll yell at you, get jealous and trust i do get jealous, be stubborn, I'll over think and get insecure. But know that I will love you better than anyone."



















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This chapter sound so sweet..  :shy2:
Atsumina - you are meant to be for each other.


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Great updates as always...

Atsuko such a romantic but jealous person...

Yeah.. Atsumina lots more closer now...

What's going to happen next?

Can't wait to find out more

Thank you for the update

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acchan's so sweet aaaahhhhh~~ *pukes rainbow*
it's good that they finally talked things out and be lovey dovey  :nya:  :nya:
wonder if there's still drama coming out though  :dunno:
anyways i'll be looking forward to the next update~!

thanks and update soon !!

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You know what's funny: I just had read this fic again yesterday and boom, you updated it today. How lucky I am :lol:

About this chapter, nothing to say but SWEET. Atsuko is so cheesy that I think I'll have diabetes soon XD

Thanks for that cute chapter and I can't wait for moreeeeeeeeeeeeee

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HI!

BELATED MERRY CHRISTMAS AND HAPPY NEW YEAR TO EVERYONE!!

I hope you enjoyed my extremely brief update on the previous chapter.

I really hope you enjoy this new one.

As Always, PLEASE LEAVE ME YOUR COMMENTS!!!


Chapter 15

Takamina had been busy with work the last couple of weeks. She misses the presence of her best friend. The company had been hectic due to its expansion and the two of them decided it'd be more productive to split the work. Takamina stays in Tokyo, while Miichan is out of town taking care of other matters.  Sighing, Takamina looks the clock in her office. It's already 12pm and she hasn't eaten yet. Not to mention missing breakfast as a punishment for waking up late. But she wouldn’t trade watching late night movies with Atsuko for the world. With their striving careers, the only escape they have from the world is their late night movies and dinners in each other’s homes. Though the actress hasn’t verbally express her feelings for Minami, the small CEO hopes that with the amount of time they’ve been spending together is taking them into the right direction. Ignoring the hungry noises her stomach was making, she continues her work. Only putting her pen down as she hears the office phone ring.

"You know I'm busy Yui-han" she answers the phone frowning at her assistant even though she knows the younger girl can't see.

 "Gomen Takamina-san. But the guards in the lobby said that there's someone looking for you" says the apologetic assistant

"Tell whoever it is to leave a message. I have my hands full” replies the boss sounding a bit irritated.

"erm.. That's the thing. We did. But she insists for you to see her at the lobby. Says it's extremely important" Yuihan informs her boss

"Ugh. Fine. I'll head down "Takamina says hanging up

Minami leaves her office muttering to herself about people just texting her or calling her personal phone if it’s important.
Passing Yui-han’s desk stationed outside her office, she sees the younger girl with an apologetic look on her face.

“Gomen, Takamina-san” says Yui bowing to her boss.

Waving it off, Takamina smiles at her employee “Don’t worry about it Yui. It’s not your fault. In the meantime, you should go grab lunch for yourself. It’s on me. Use the company card.”

“H-hai. Arigatou Takamina-san. I’ll get your favorite for your lunch too.” Yui sounding grateful.

“I’m not hungry. Just treat yourself.” Takamina replies as she closes the elevator door. Reaching the lobby, Takamina feels a familiar arm wrap around hers once setting a step outside the elevator. Looking to her left, "Atsuko?" The smaller girl looks at the actress in confusion.

“Hello. Mi.Na.Mi” the actress greets Takamina teasingly

Blushing at Acchan’s playfulness, “H-hello Atsuko. What are you doing here?” she asks still confused.

“I have some free time so I thought I’d come surprise you. Plus, knowing how busy you are lately and seeing how hungry you are when we have dinner I can only assume that you’ve been missing meals. So I’m here to make sure you get to eat lunch today.” She replies shooting Takamina a knowing look

“He~” Was all Minami could say as she uses her free arm to rub the back of her neck acknowledging her guilt.

Changing the subject Takamina asks “So where do you want to go eat”

“A friend told me there’s a nice restaurant in this area. I’d like to try it.” Acchan replies

Making their way to a nearby restaurant, Atsuko finally releases Minami’s arm as they walk while she animatedly talks about her work. Instantly missing the warmth of the actress, Takamina feels a slight disappointment in her heart.

Knowing that their walk will take another 10 minutes, she watches the actress with a smile listening to every word. Finally mustering up the courage, Minami uses her pinky to catch Atsuko’s. With her heart hammering out of her chest due to nervousness, she finally grabs Atsuko’s hand entwining fingers with her.

The actress suddenly stops talking and walking at the act. Lifting their entwined hands to look at it then at Takamina who is now a deep shade of red. Slightly embarrassed, Acchan who is also showing some redness on her cheeks flashes Takamina her smile showing the ever so famous wrinkle on her nose and continues to walk.

“I’ve been doing all the talking. How’s work going?” Atsuko inquires hoping to ease Minami’s nervousness

“Busier than it’s ever been.” She replies in her professional mode

“That’s good though right? Busy always means good” Acchan asks relieved that Takamina is getting over her nervousness and is comfortable enough to talk about work with her

“It is actually. It’s just I get carried away with work sometimes. I bury myself in it and forget about taking care of myself. If you haven’t come today I probably would have skipped lunch again.” Confesses the CEO

“Ah. It is good thing I did then. So I am NOT sorry for disturbing you at work” Giggles the actress

“I’m glad you did” Takamina laughs

“What’s so funny???” Acchan tilts her head looking at Takamina

“I’m surprised you managed to convince the lobby guards to call up the office. Yui-han thought I was about to kill someone when I picked up the phone” Snorts Minami
Laughing, “I’m stubborn remember? Plus it doesn’t hurt that your guards are Maeda Atsuko fans” Atsuko continues

“Oh I bet they are. Who wouldn’t want to be your fan you’re amazing” Minami replies giving the actress a soft smile making her blush

“Who’s Yui-han?” asks Acchan

“She’s my secretary. Like a little sister more like. She’s worked for Mii-chan and I for a couple of years now. She works really hard and I always have the urge to look over her” Minami says talking about her junior

“You’re always thinking about others. So thoughtful. But..mouuu. Should I be jealous of Yui-han” Acchan pouts at Takamina.
Laughing, Minami lifts their entwined hand to her lips giving the back of Atsuko’s hand a peck. “No Atsuko. She’s like a SISTER remember”

Her pout disappearing, the actress looks into a restaurant. "We're here"

"Eh?" Minami laughs

Looking at the smaller girl "What's so funny?"

"I come here with Miichan and the others all the time" replies Takamina

"Really?? Mariko actually was the one who suggested this place to me" Atsuko informs the other girl

"Speak of the devil" Takamina points at the back corner of the restaurant near a glass window.

Acchan sees Yuko and Nyan Nyan waving excitedly at them while Mariko on the other hand is occupied on her phone.

The couple head to join their friends and sit with them.

"Ohhh Takamina has a girlfriendddddd" the squirrel greets them

A blush appears on both Atsuko and Minami's faces at the comment.

"S-shut it Yuko. What are you guys doing here anyways?" counters the shorter girl

"Well Ms. Work is my life, we your friends would actually like to see if you're alive once in awhile" Mariko says finally putting her phone down.

"Acchan mentioned she was going to bring you here for lunch so we figured why not invite ourselves" giggles Nyan Nyan

Atsuko looking at Minami, "I didn't know they were here. I swear"

"Miichan did say you'd drown yourself with work while she's away" Mariko interjects

"Sorry I haven't been around much lately. And I really do appreciate that you guys worry about me." Apologizes Takamina

"There there Takamidget. At least we know you're okay and taken care of" Yuko says glancing at Atsuko

"Plus we know how you get about work. Just don't forget to take a load off every once in awhile" reassures Nyan Nyan

"Yea. All this work makes all your forehead wrinkles more visible" chirps in Mariko earning a laugh from the others.

Frowning, Takamina covers her forehead with her hand and looks at Acchan "Do I have wrinkles Atsuko?"

Giggling, Acchan removes Takamina's hand and looks at her forehead as if to inspect it. "Just a small line" she says making the others laugh harder

The waiter then comes with their food which they've completely forgotten that they already ordered making them catch their breathes from laughing too hard.

Engrossed with their food, Mariko breaks the silence and asks "What's got your company so busy anyways Takamina"

Swallowing the food in her mouth Takamina replies "As you guys already all know, Miichan and I own quite a number of properties and hotels in Tokyo and a bit in
other parts of Japan. So we decided to expand our horizons and open a hotel in Hawaii that's why Miichan is there."

The word Hawaii seemed to have caught the attention of all her friends.

"Ahem. So Vacation in your new hotel then???" Blurts out Nyan Nyan with light on her eyes

"Mmm Bikinis" was all the squirrel could say imagining the scene with her eyes closed earning a punch from Haruna

"Itai!" Yuko yelps with tears in her eyes "I meant you in bikini. My Nyan Nyan in a bikini" says Yuko wiping a drool off her face.

"That sounds fun! It's been awhile since I've gone on a vacation" adds Acchan as she laughs at Yuko

"And Miichan haven't told me about this why!?!?" Probes Mariko

"This is exactly why" defends Takamina pointing at the other three. “It’s not ready yet. Not for a couple more months.”

“Aw” the other three say in unison pouting at the news

“Don’t worry. After it’s ready we’ll be the first to go there and try the place out. You’re also all welcome to stay there whenever you want and for as long as you want.

By the way. Enough about me. What have you all been up to?” Takamina asks her friends

“Nothing much really. I’ve just been busy promoting a new line of lingerie for Peach John.” Nyan Nyan replies

“In addition to my clothing line, I am in the process of opening a new store in Shibuya.” Marichan informs Takamina

“Mine is the same as always. Always acquiring promising new talents for our agency. Not to mention more work since Acchan is in high demand and Tomochin too now that she’s back to Japan from her tour.” Yuko states oblivious to the stares she’s receiving from the other three girls for mentioning a certain pop star

Although Atsuko has accepted the past between Tomochin and Minami, she shifts uncomfortably in the seat upon hearing the her name

No longer surprised by their reaction, Minami laughs “It is okay guys. Tomochin and I have put the past behind us. So you don’t need to tippy toe around me when it comes to her” grabbing Atsuko’s hand and squeezing it as if to reassure the actress.

“Oi! Takamina. I almost forgot. Miichan told me to remind you that you have some interview thing to go to tomorrow.” Mariko says looking at her phone

A light bulb turns on in Minami’s head. “YABAI! I completely forgot!”

“BAKAMINA!” Yuko points at Takamina laughing

Haruna hits Yuko on the head with the restaurant menu. “Be nice Yuuchan” she says shaking her head

“Eh?? You have an interview tomorrow?!? What for?” says the surprised Acchan

“Yea Takamina. Who would want to interview you?” the squirrel covers her head in fear of getting hit again by Nyan Nyan

“Tell us Takamina” Nyan Nyan looks at her curiously

“Might as well tell them” Mariko says crossing her arms with a smirk

“It’s nothing big really.” Takamina says with a small smile “Miichan and I won Japan’s Most Successful Entrepreneurs of the Year award by some business magazine”

“That’s amazing!” says the other three in unison

“Why haven’t you said anything?” Atsuko asks

With a clueless look on her face, Takamina replies “Well, it’s not much of a big deal really. Miichan and I just do what we love.”

“Being modest as always” Mariko chimes in

“And also, I completely forgot about it,” Takamina adds with a stupid smile on her face

“EH!?!?” the others say in unison

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"Thank you for joining us tonight Takahashi-san despite your busy schedule" says Asuka as she greets Minami

"Its not bother at all. Its an honor for me to be invited to your show." Takamina replies bowing slightly

Facing the camera, Asuka says "Takahashi-san here was a frequent visitor to my restaurant but haven't seen much of her lately" with a slight frown.

"Shonichi does have great food." Minami smiles at the restauranteur/host. "But lately, I've been indulging in homemade food" smiling brighter knowing that she's been enjoying it with her Atsuko.

"I see. But do visit me soon. I-i mean my restaurant soon" the host winks at Takamina as she reaches to pat her hand.

Takamina pulls her hand away and rubs the back of her neck. "I will definitely visit soon. I'm sure my friends would like to try the delicious food your restaurant serves" she says with an awkward smile on her face.

Oblivious to Takamina awkwardness, Asuka continues "Let get to the real reason why we invited you here today"

"Ah yes." Takamina nods with relief.

"You and your business partner Minegishi Minami-san had recently been awarded the Top Female Entrepreneurs Award here in Japan. Congratulations!" The host claps for her guest.

"Arigatou!" Minami smiles proudly in gratitude

"We've asked for both you and Minegishi-san to come but she couldn't make it today. Is that right?"

"Yes. Miichan would like me to extend her apology for being unable to be here. She is currently away on a business trip. She really is sad. We all know how she loves to get screentime. "  Minami laughs at her last statement

"I guess its what makes you two so successful. The amount of work is divided among you." Observes Asuka

"Yes. You're right. But that's not the only reason so our success."

Tilting her head the restauranteur says "Please enlighten us"

"I think the biggest reason we've gotten this far is because we are friends. We trust each other. Believe it or not, we think so differently that we are constantly butting heads. We have our difference in opinions on how things should be done. But because of our friendship, we've come to compromise on things. And lucky for us, our compromises always end up being better than our individual ideas. We balance each other out. We keep each other in check. Like me who is a workaholic, Miichan always manages to keep me on my toes and balance life with work. Her on the other hand is the opposite. She loves to have fun. So its my job to keep her head in the game so to speak. We will have each others support no matter what. And are not afraid to wake the other up if they're being decisional. Most of all, we are the bestest of friends."

"Amazing" Asuka stares at Minami "I'm sure some of our viewers wishes they could have a friendship like that you two have."

"I am very lucky to have Miichan. She's my oldest friend we've been friends since we were very young. I'm grateful for her" replies Takamina talking fondly of her friend

"With your recent award and success, what is next for you and Minegishi-san?" Asks Asuka

"Well right now, we are in the process of expanding our business" hints Takamina

"That's interesting. What do you two have in mind" the curious host inquiries

"We're still working on it so it'll be a surprise" Takamina flashes a mischievous grin making Asuka blush

"Not even a hint?" Pokes the host

"Nope. My lips are sealed" Takamina says playfully

Giggling, "You're adorable Takahashi-san." Asuka says reaching out to pat Minami's shoulder and continues "We will all definitely be looking forward to what the Minamis venture into next"

"Hai. Arigatou" bows Takamina one more time.



*****



Stepping out of her dressing room, Takamina stretches her arms up relieved that its all over.


Walking down the hall towards the elevator, Takamina's driver is waiting for his boss.
As she passes another dressing room, with the door slightly ajar she hears a familiar voice. Takamina stops in her tracks

"Senpai, What are you doing here?"  Says the girl

"I came to visit you" says a man's voice.

"Is there anything I can help you with" the girl asks

"I just wanted to give you my greeting" says the mans voice sounding malicious

"No! the off me!" Screams the girl as the sound of things falling on the ground fills the room.

Takamina burst into the room, seeing the man holding the small girl down on the table

This sight causes Minami to see red. Rushing to the guy, she pulls him off the struggling girl. And with an unimaginable strength, we punches the man on the face causing him to fall on the floor.

Grabbing the crying girls' hand, Takamina leads her out the door.

They quickly run down the stairs. Arriving in the lobby Takamina spots her ride and they get into the car.

Angry at what just happened, Takamina tells her driver to drive.

Trying to hold in her anger and to stop her from turning around to kill the man she takes a deep breath and looks at the singer with worried and gentle eyes.
Hugging the crying girl, Takamina says "I've got you Tomochin. You're safe now."

As the singer sobs in Minami's arms, all Takamina could do at this moment is to whisper comforting words.
Driver-san. "Take us to my place please"











 




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Offline Haruko

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oh-oh

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Ah... Atsuko and Minami so close...

What??? So lucky that Minami was just around when that happened to Tomochin

What's going to happen next?

Would Atsuko be jealous of Tomochin?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

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Trouble has come  :mon suspect:

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i didn't think you'd update this fast~ i'm glad though hahaha
so there will be drama coming~!!
aahhh i can't wait for jealous acchan XD

thank you for the update and update when you can~

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Takamina saves the day.
I do hope Atsuko would understand Takamina's situation.

Too curious to know the next event...
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Tomochin come from her tour... yeah come~~~  :dunno: :mon cweepy:

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Takamina is once again being a hero lol

I have feeling that asuka is flirting with Takamina

Uodate soon

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Re: You Took Me By Surprise:AtsuMina,KojiYuu,MariMii Jan 15,2015 Chap 15 ADDED!!!
« Reply #136 on: February 08, 2015, 08:10:45 AM »
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I smell troubles  :(

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It's been awhile guys!

Here's the update. Sorry it's short.

I hope you like it!!



Chapter 16

Stepping out of the kitchen, Takamina hands Tomochin a cup of freshly made hot chocolate. "Here drink this. It'll help you feel better." she says with worried eyes

The blanket wrapped singer sitting on the couch takes a sip of the drink and instantly feels the warmth spread through her body comforting her.  "Arigatou"

Noticing that her friend had finally stopped crying, a small wave of relief flows through Takamina. Though a hint of anger still lingers at the fact that a man tried to take advantage of the singer. Takamina knows that she must stay calm and collected. She can't let her anger take over. She needs to take care of her friend first.

"Are you comfortable? Do you need more blankets?" Takamina asks but before Tomochin could reply Minami continues "Oh I know! You need more pillows. Hugging soft pillows always cheered you up"

Takamina returns from her room with what seemed like all the pillows she had in her apartment. Tomochin watches as Takamina lays of the pillows on the floor patting them one by one. A small smile forms at the corner of her lips at the sight of her former lover.

"Aha! This is the one!" Takamina triumphantly hands Tomochin the said pillow.

The popstar tilts her head in confusion. Noticing this, Takamina says "It's the softest one!"

"Arigatou" Tomochin says hugging the pillow as she buries her face in it. 

"Hai! Don't mention it." The smaller girl says getting off the floor to sit  on the opposite side of the couch.

"No, really. Thank you. For saving me. For taking care of me" Tomochin looks at Takamina

"Really, you don't need to thank me. You are my friend. I will always protect and care for my friends." Takamina replies 

"That man will no longer find work in the entertainment industry again. I'll make sure of it" Takamina says to herself in a whisper unheard by Tomochin

Hugging her pillow tighter, Tomochin repeats "Friends.." with a sigh

The pain in her voice sends a ping into Takamina's heart. "I'm sorry" says the CEO

"No no. Don't be" Tomochin shoots her head up regretting her reply. The feel of regret hitting her for making her savoir feel guilty.

"But you know.. You'll always be one of the most important people in my life" Takamina reassures the popstar.

Hugging the pillow tighter Tomochin says "I know.. And you will always be one of mine. The only regret I have is all the pain I've caused you."

Takamina shakes her head "The past is what makes us who we are. I do remember crying over you and I don't mean just a couple of tears and I'm blue. I'm talking about collapsing and screaming at the moon."

Sighing "What I was most afraid of was that you would hate me forever" Tomochin recalls

"Hate you?" Takamina scoffs "That thought never even crossed my mind. I admired you. You were always the stronger one out of the two of us. You were brave enough to let me go. You weren't a coward. You had the courage to help us both take a new step in our lives. I will always love you. I never stopped. But not the kind of love as before. I love you to the point that I can't see myself not having you in my life. You are a big part of me and who I've become. But now, now I'm in love with someone else. And I am happy."

"With you, I've learned what love is. With you I know what if feels like to be loved and love unconditionally. You really are an amazing person Takamina. Even the things you say. You don't notice it but your words are the world. Not just to me. But to all of us. Your friends. And I'm sure Acchan knows this very well. I don't see myself living a life that doesn't have you in it either. I'm sorry for all the troubles I've caused since I came back. I was just envious. I guess you could say I was jealous. Now someone else will be spoiled and loved by you.I want to be your friend Takamina. I can see that Acchan is that one person who can and will make you the happiest person in the world. She is lucky and any girl would be jealous. So she better make sure to hold on to such a great catch" Tomochin smiles at Minami with tears in her eyes

Blushing as her last couple of statements, Takamina rubs the back of her neck "Thank you Tomochin. It means the world to me for you to say that. But friends is not something we can do." Minami pauses

The popstar's chest tightens at the last statement.

Takamina flashes a big smile "We'll be the bestest of friends"

"Baka!" Tomochin throws the pillow at the smiling girl letting out a giggle

"You should take a rest. Its been a long day for you. You can use my room and sleep. I'll call Yuko and tell her where you are" Takamina tells the singer.

Yawning "Okay. Thank you." Tomochin says without putting up a fight. Taking the pillow and blanket she heads to the bedroom.

Before entering the room, she looks back at Takamina " Thank you again.. For everything. "

"That's what friends are for" Takamina looks at the girl showing her reassuring smile.

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Deciding to step out of the balcony to get fresh air, Minami calls Yuko.

"Oi! Where is she?!" Yuko answers the phone

"I have her here. She's fine." Replies Takamina leaning on the balcony rubbing her temple

"I know she's fine. She's with you" the other girl replies

Sighing "I could have killed that man" Takamina says expressing her frustration at the incident

"Good thing you didn't. I'll take care of him and his so called career as my part" Yuko replies



"Just the thought of him trying to lay his filthy hands on her makes me want to rip his throat out." Takamina clenches her fist

"She's okay. You made it just in time before anything bad could happen. I understand how you feel. Any of us would feel and would have done the same too. " Yuko trying to calm her friend down.

"I guess you're right" Takamina calming down

"Really though, thanks for taking care of her. I'll send Tomochin's manager there to take her home" Yuko begins to make arrangements

"No, she's just went to sleep. Let her rest here till she's ready to do anything. I'll watch over her and take her home in the morning" Takamina interjects not wanting to disturb Tomochin now that she's finally asleep

"Alright." Yuko heeds to her friends decision. "You're so caring Takamina. No wonder Acchan and Tomochin are gaga over you"

"I'm just taking care of my friends. I wouldn't do different for anyone of you" Takamina rolls her eyes

"You don't see what we see. If I wasn't in love with Nyan Nyan I swear I'd jump your bones." laughs Yuko

"Shut up. Stupid. We'll I have to go now. Just in case Tomochin wakes up and needs anything. I'll update you if anything comes up" Minami brushes off Yuko's comment

After talking to Yuko, Takamina feels slightly relieved.

She looks at her phone to call Atsuko and update her with what's happening as she enters her apartment.

Startled at a noise, she looks up and sees the actress silently close her bedroom door with disappointment and hurt in her eyes.

"Ah! Ano! It's not what you thi--" Takamina blurts out flabbergasted as the latter leaves her place

Chasing after her girlfriend, Takamina finds an empty hallway.






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« Last Edit: March 11, 2015, 04:10:05 PM by 2manyOTP »

Offline phoenix0i

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Here is Atsuko again. Running away without any explanation.
She should how to trust Takamina as here partner.
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I am happy that Tomochin and Takamina are back to being friends again. C:
Atsuko should know by now it's never as it seems.
Either way, it must have been pretty awkward for her to have walked into Minami's bedroom and found Tomochin sleeping on the bed...



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