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« Reply #60 on: May 20, 2014, 06:10:56 AM »
help her yuuchan help her

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Re: [AtsuMina] ZENPEN: When the Time Stops Ch.5 05/19/2014 Update!
« Reply #61 on: May 22, 2014, 07:37:26 AM »
@Feat: honestly, i was worried if the previous chapter still didn't answer the pending questions.. so now i'm glad
@ubulubulbilu: thanks for loving my plot!
@ayudewi6: yeah, acchan liked her already even before minami did
@Keisthename: it's an honor to have you as my reader, now i'm even more pressured lol! so when will you update Contract? hehe
@Kirozoro, Haruko: yuko's a good friend, i believe she has her own ways
@Justqle: aachan's pov is like explaining the events all over again hehe, so now we're back to minami's
@Archer1992: i like drama too! but not too heavy hehe
@cisda: you got that right! i think minami spent her time answering the questions mentally, then wrote them when aachan returned her pencil :)

thanks again to all my readers! :bow:
so here's the next chapter...

When the Time Stops
Chapter 6


What's that noise all about? I can hear some male students chatting outside the student council room, including some of our male members.

"She's here? Man, she's really cute!"

"I wonder who she's waiting for."

"Maybe she's here to answer my love letter!"

What's happening outside? Who are they talking about? The student council task for today has ended and so I took my things and decided to go home. I went out the room and was surprised to see the person who's causing all the commotion.

"Hi, Minami." Now I see an angel smiling at me.

Atsuko. Why is she here?

"A-Ano... do you mind if we walk home together?" She asked in her usual sweet voice.

So she's waiting for me? Now I feel sorry for all these boys around us, I bet they're all disappointed. Lucky me.

"Sure." I answered.

We started to walk together, heading out the school. It was too silent, I guess we're both waiting for one another to speak up first. I wonder why she wanted to walk home with me today.

"Atsuko/Minami!" We both call each other's name at the same time.

"You go first." She said.

"No, you go first." I insisted.

"Okay.. uhm.. I met Oshima-san earlier while I'm waiting for you outside the student council room. She told me she's worry about you because you seem down lately."

Ah Yuko, so she noticed. But why does she have to pass the message to her? Why not tell it straight to me instead?

"Is that all you guys talked about?" I asked.

"U-Uhm.. Y-Yes.. That's all." Atsuko's voice wasn't confident when she answered.

"You and Oshima-san are really close, ne?" She continued.

"Yes, we've known each other since like forever." I responded.

We continue to walk until we reached the school outside grounds. I looked up the sky, it was so clear. It really feels good that Atsuko and I are back being close again.

"Minami.. it's been a while since the last time we talk like this." Atsuko spoke.

"Yeah.. I was.. a bit busy in the student council lately. By the way, congratulations on the drama club. I heard a lot of praises about your performance. You guys did a great job."

"Thanks.. I saw you watched."

"Well, I didn't see the whole play, just the last part."

"Uhm.. about the ending scene.. it was the first time that we made the kissing scene real. I hope you didn't think that I lied to you."

"Oh.. now I know. If you still worry about the kiss we did during the rehearsal, I clearly understand it's only a practice for the real thing on stage." I paused.
"But you know what.. it made me happy that it's me you chose to give your first kiss."

There I said it, I've been wanting to tell her that for a while.

"Minami, there is something I..." Atsuko was about to say something but she was then interrupted.

"Aachan! Takamina!" I turned around and saw Tomochin running to our direction.

"Hi, Tomochin! Are you on your way home, too?" I asked.

"I'm going straight to my auntie's restaurant, I work part time there. It's just walking distance from our school. Do you guys want to check it out?"

"Well, I'm sort of hungry now since I didn't take lunch earlier. Do you have katsudon there?"

"Aru yo! It's actually one of our specialties."

"Ii ne! I'm craving for one lately. Atsuko come with us! Tomochin said it's just nearby and I think it's still early." I requested her to come and she just nodded.

I saw that Atsuko's facial expression again. Are all actresses have such complex expression like hers? It's really hard to read. She's been silent since her classmate joined us.

"So where's Yuko?" Tomochin asked as she leads us the way.

"I don't know, she's been disappearing during breaks lately. It's sad to eat alone without her. I actually thought she already joined your club."

"No, she still doesn't want to. She usually visits our club only to have some free taste of our cooking."

Hmm, Yuko.. maybe she already found a place where no one can disturb her. I can already imagine her wearing her most precious headphones and listening to music alone somewhere in school.

We finally arrived at the restaurant. Tomochin's right, it's so near from our school. We went inside, the place isn't that huge. The ambience is somewhat in between japanese and fast-food style.

"Please take your seat. I'll just change to my working clothes. You may look on our menu while waiting." Tomochin said before she left.

"Their katsudon looks delicious on this picture!" I said as I open the menu.

"Is that your favorite dish?" Atsuko asked.

"Yup. I remember the last time my mom cooked one for dinner, I wasn't able to eat because my stomach felt weird that time. No wonder why I'm craving for it now. Anyway, what will you order?"

"I'm not so hungry, I'll just have a drink." Atsuko answered.

"May I take your orders now?" Tomochin came back in her working clothes.

"Tomochin, you look good on those clothes. I was actually expecting to see you in your maid costume." I teased.

"The cooking club just made us wear those costumes!" She blushed.

"Ehem..." Atsuko interrupted.
"Tomochin, I'll just have a melon juice please." She ordered.

"Katsudon for me. Ah, make it two bowls, onegaishimasu!"

"You sure are hungry, ne?" Tomochin giggled.
"Two bowls of katsudon and a glass of melon juice coming up!" She left again.

"Tomochin is really kawaii, isn't she?"

"Un.. she is.." Atsuko answered in a dull tone. Is she bored or something?

"I wonder if she has a boyfriend.." I said.

"Why are you so interested?"

"I'm just curious, any guy is lucky to have her. She's cute, hardworking and cooks really good." I explained.

I think this is my chance to know if Atsuko has a boyfriend, too.

"Now that I mention it, do you.. uhm.. have one?" I finally ask her.

"No, I don't."

"Eh? But why? Are you aware of just how many guys in school are going crazy over you?"

"I'm just not interested." She answered.

"Here's your order! Enjoy your food. Just call me when you need anything else." Tomochin said as she placed our orders on the table.

"Thanks, Tomochin!"

Oh, this is heaven. Atsuko and katsudon both infront of me. I feel like I'm the happiest person on earth now. Wait, is this a date? There's no way this can be called a date! But it's the first time we eat together. It's starting to get quiet between us again so I opened up a topic.

"So how's Shinoda-san?" I asked.

"Mariko-senpai? She's busy studying lately, she's very much focused preparing for her college entrance exams."

So that's how it is... maybe Atsuko's lonely without Shinoda-san, that's why she's now here with me. I'm her second option after all.

"Our club members of lower years are actually planning to have a play dedicated for the seniors, they will be the audience this time." She continued.

"Ah, that's a sweet idea. Your senior club members will surely like it, especially Shinoda-san." I said.

"So, how's the food?" Tomochin returned to our table to check on us.

"Kono katsudon wa oishii desu!" I complimented.

"Yokatta ne! My aunt thought me the recipe, I'm the one who prepared it."

"Wow, your katsudon's better than my mom's! I guess I'll be a frequent customer here from now on."

"Thanks, I actually have a dream of having my own cafe someday. But I prefer cakes and pastries, since it's my specialty." Tomochin said.

"I think you're good on making any food. I'm pretty sure you'll have your dream cafe someday."

"Excuse me, Tomochin... but I think you have a new customer just arrived." Atsuko interrupted again.

"Oh! You're right. Thanks, Aachan!" Tomochin went to the new customer.

What's with this atmosphere between us? Atsuko's just drinking her melon juice quietly. I must say something. Anything.

"So Atsuko.. about what we're talking about earlier.. Did you give answers to those guys who confessed to you? Have you chosen one already?"

"No, none of them." She took another sip of her melon juice. Somehow, I felt relieved with her answer.

"I guess you must choose one of them already. They're all patiently waiting for your answer, you know?" God, what am I saying just now?

She suddenly stood up. She's glaring at me.

"Atsuko?"

"Minami... Baka!!!" She shouted and then took her things with her.

"Hey, where are you going? Your juice is still half full. Wait!" So Atsuko left the restaurant.

Did I say something wrong? Damn, I can't go after her and just leave the place, our food isn't paid yet.

"Takamina, why did Acchan leave first?" Tomochin came back to our table to ask what happen.

"I don't know either. But don't worry I'll pay for her drinks."

I seated back and finished my katsudon meal. I really can't understand her. I noticed she's already making this a habit! Why does she always walk out on me?!

TBC

aachan so cuuute when jealous!!!
unfortunately, not all genius can figure that out... lol minami

a new character is on her way...

thanks for reading! :)

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Re: [AtsuMina] ZENPEN: When the Time Stops Ch.6 05/21/2014 Update!
« Reply #62 on: May 22, 2014, 09:26:04 AM »
Whoaaa whether that is to say by acchan to takamina? :huhuh
Whether she would tell her feelings to takamina? Unfortunately tomochin interrupted :banghead:
Btw I love how when acchan jealous of the closeness between takamina and tomochin :P
But takamina too slow to realize acchan's feelings to her, come on takamina don't make acchan wait too long!
Geez I'm more curious about the continuation of this story, author-san I love your story so please help quickly update hahaha :mon innocent: :ptam-ok:

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Re: [AtsuMina] ZENPEN: When the Time Stops Ch.6 05/21/2014 Update!
« Reply #63 on: May 22, 2014, 10:31:46 AM »
ahhh acchan jeoulus yayyyy  :twothumbs
plase update soon author-san  :wub:

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Re: [AtsuMina] ZENPEN: When the Time Stops Ch.6 05/21/2014 Update!
« Reply #64 on: May 22, 2014, 03:39:25 PM »
I'm glad they were able to sort things out regarding the kiss. Aachan is really cute when she's jealous! :-* I wonder who the new character is.. Can't wait for the next chapter! Good job! Keep it up.. :)

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Re: [AtsuMina] ZENPEN: When the Time Stops Ch.6 05/21/2014 Update!
« Reply #65 on: May 22, 2014, 03:42:46 PM »
Ahhhh cliffhanger! Why do you have to learn that? lol

Well it's an honor to have you as my reader for Contract. w tbh I'm planning to update that fic on Acchan's birthday, but I guess that's a long wait.. who knows www

As for your fanfic... oh gosh I can't wait to read more on how they'll develop their relationship. Everyone seemed to become stupid when they are in love.

And oh! I really like how they met during exams... it's amazing!


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Re: [AtsuMina] ZENPEN: When the Time Stops Ch.6 05/21/2014 Update!
« Reply #66 on: May 22, 2014, 04:45:41 PM »
yeah you're right, acchan so cute when jealous  XD
minami so clever in school but not in feeling thing, lol minami
tomochin appeared in the wrong time!!  :grr:
btw, where's yuko? already go to meet haruna maybe? lol

yokai waiting for the update  :twothumbs

@Keisthename: it's an honor to have you as my reader, now i'm even more pressured lol! so when will you update Contract? hehe

i just realized that the author of Contract is here. yeah i'm hoping for an update too keisthename-san  :mon squee:

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Re: [AtsuMina] ZENPEN: When the Time Stops Ch.6 05/21/2014 Update!
« Reply #67 on: May 22, 2014, 05:54:09 PM »
acchan  jealous  :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:
forever minami no clue about acchan behavior
minami innocent is too cute  :wub: :inlove:
update soon pls

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« Reply #68 on: May 22, 2014, 07:08:37 PM »
Takamina is so dense

Update soon

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Re: [AtsuMina] ZENPEN: When the Time Stops Ch.6 05/21/2014 Update!
« Reply #69 on: May 25, 2014, 10:08:07 AM »
@ayudewi6, liabont: aachan's the dreamgirl of every guy in their school and yet she's still jealous because of minami, that what makes her even cuter!!! >_<
@kristelc: the first new character! finally she arrives!
@Keisthename: your next update is still on july? :( now, who's the real cliffhanger? lol peace! glad you like the exam scene, i enjoy digging up a character's history then connecting to its present to reveal the reasons behind
@Justqle: ah yuko! it's her turn now for her life to change hehe
@triela, Kirozoro: minami's cute too! as what you've said, she's innocent and dense! so i think aachan must do something about that :)

thanks again to my readers! :bow:
my eagerness to update faster is because of you guys... so enjoy!

When the Time Stops
Chapter 7


It's weekend, and I have nowhere to go to but to stay at home. At school, I'm a very busy person but it's different when I'm here. After I finish my homework and help my mom doing household chores, I have nothing else to do anymore. When I open either the TV or the radio, what I see and hear are just the same singers and artists. In short, it's boring when I'm home.

My phone suddenly rang, I looked at it. It's an unknown caller.

"Hello?" I picked up.

"Hi, Minami! It's me, Atsuko." I was surprised to hear her voice. I wasn't expecting her to call me.

"Oh, Atsuko! What's up?"

"I got your number from Yuko, I called her earlier. We actually exchanged numbers the last time we met."

So that means they're close friends now? I wonder what they've been talking about.

"I just called because I want to apologize for leaving you at the restaurant the other day." She said.

"It's okay, I guess you really enjoy walking out on me so suddenly. I'm getting kinda used to it." I giggled.

"I'm serious! By the way, you mentioned that you often eat alone during breaks. So I wonder if we could take our lunch together from now on?"

"Really? Ofcourse, I'd love to!" I smiled eventhough I know she can't see it.

"Great. I'll see you at school then. Bye." She hangs up.

Atsuko just brightened up my day. Since then, we started to call each other and exchange messages over the phone. That girl's amazing, how can she easily change my system in an instant? Because of her, I also started to enjoy my days at home.

We now always eat our lunch together at school. Sometimes Yuko joins us, sometimes she prefers to eat alone somewhere, depending on her mood. But at least even without Yuko, I already have someone to eat with. We oftentimes visit the restaurant where Tomochin works part time after classes. So far, Atsuko doesn't walk out on me anymore but her usual facial expression is still there.

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Time passed so fast and our senior student's graduation came near. As what Atsuko mentioned before, the drama club prepared a surprised presentation for their senior club members. The play was supposedly exclusive for their members only, but they also invited the student council as their thanks for our help last time.

"Takahashi-san, this seat next to me is not taken." It's Shinoda-san who called my name.

"Ah, thanks." I accepted her offer and I sit beside her.

The play started, Atsuko was one of the casts with first appearance. She's stunning, I can't even take my eyes off her.

"Aachan's really good, ne?" Shinoda-san spoke and I just nodded.

"The moment I met her, I already saw a bright future ahead of her." She paused, staring at Atsuko on stage.

"I know you two are close friends now. So I have a little favor to ask of you, Takahashi-san." She said in a sincere voice.

"What is it about her?" I asked.

"You know that I'm about to graduate and leave this school soon. And if there's one person here who I can entrust Aachan to, I'd rather wanted it to be you. So please take care of her."

Me? But why would she choose me? Ofcourse, I'll take care of Atsuko even without her asking.

"And for the record... I like Aachan."

"E-Eh?" I was surprised of the last three words she just said.

"Well, she doesn't have an idea of how I feel for her, but it doesn't matter." She continued.

"B-But why won't you tell her?"

"She already likes someone else, even before we met."

Atsuko likes someone else. I wonder what kind of person that someone is. Why does it hurt when I think of it? I tried to ignore the pain because I know Shinoda-san feels the same, or maybe much more.

"And you'll just leave without telling that to her?" I asked.

Shinoda-san took a glance of me and smiled. Then she looked back at Atsuko on the stage, and she speaks again.

"Maybe someday you'll understand. A time will come that you'd choose that person's happiness over yours. You'll learn to let go of that one important person even it hurts."

That's the time I was impressed by Shinoda-san, the way she thinks is so mature. Now I understand why many people look up to her and call her 'Mariko-sama'. I wished we also became friends, but there's only a little time left before she leaves the school. I never forgot those words she told me.

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The senior students graduated and so is Shinoda-san. And now where about to enter our second year in highschool.

"Takamina!!!" Yuko shouted my name while she's about to get off her bicycle. We're still on the same class this year, I had a hard time helping her study more than myself. She parked her bike and then ran to my direction.

"Do goddesses exist?" She asked.

"E-Eh? What are you talking about so early in the morning?" I answered.

"I think I saw one yesterday. I was riding my bicycle on my way home from the convenient store when I saw this girl. She's so beautiful! She's tall and has a skin as white as snow. She also has a long beautiful hair. And when I saw her smile, I totally forgot to hit my break and almost crashed my bike."

"Yuko, that's dangerous. I bet you're wearing those headphones again while biking. How many times do I have to warn you?"

"Takamina, listen to me! I'm serious!"

She's calling the girl she saw a goddess?Now that I think of it, I called Atsuko an angel when I saw her. Am I just the same with Yuko? She continued to describe the girl as we walk to our classroom.

"I think she's new in our neighborhood. Their house is just few blocks away from ours. I saw her at their garden feeding her pet cats outside. I can't take that scene off my mind. She's like the goddess of love and beauty."

"You mean Venus?" I asked.

"She's way much prettier and sexier than Ayaka Komatsu!"

"I mean the Roman goddess, not the actress who played the role of sailor venus!"

"Ahh, is that the lady on the painting we studied in art class? Hmm.. I wonder how she'd look if she poses like that.. and wears only that.."

"Yuko, we're in school. Could you please stop imagining perverted things?" I said as we enter our classroom and go to our seats.

Our homeroom teacher has finally arrived.

"Class, please take your seats and we're about to start our lesson for today. But first of all I'd like to announce that we have a new transfer student." Sensei opens the door and speaks to the person waiting there.
"Please come in and introduce yourself to your classmates."

A beautiful, tall girl went inside. She has long hair and has white complexion. My classmates, both boys and girls, got amazed by her beauty. Wait. Her description was exactly what Yuko said earlier about her goddess. So then I looked back at Yuko.

"Y-Yuko?"

Did she has a stroke? She's just staring at the new girl. She's not moving, her mouth is wide open.

"Earth to Yuko?" I poked her cheek.

"AH. MY. GOD. DESS." That's what only came out from her mouth.

So she's the girl Yuko's talking about? What a coincidence, I thought. Looks like our second year in highschool will have lots of fun things to look forward to.

"My name is Kojima Haruna. Yoroshiku onegaishimasu!"

TBC

if kojiharu's an anime, she probably looks like belldandy hehe
so my four main characters are now completed..
second year of highschool! o tanoshimi ni!

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Re: [AtsuMina] ZENPEN: When the Time Stops Ch.7 05/25/2014 Update!
« Reply #70 on: May 25, 2014, 10:48:22 AM »
Yeah!!! Kojima has appeared!!! :D

It's sad that Shinoda has gone without telling her feelings to Acchan...I understand her, but nonetheless... Acchan should know the truth.

thx u for the update! It's been a pleasure as always to read your story. :)

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Re: [AtsuMina] ZENPEN: When the Time Stops Ch.7 05/25/2014 Update!
« Reply #71 on: May 25, 2014, 03:32:09 PM »
Eh... Mariko liked Atsuko and wouldn't confess her feeling

Minami was so dense... Kept misunderstand situation

Goddess Haruna... What would Yuko do to her?

Would Yuko tease and flirt with Haruna?

Can't wait to see

Thank you

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Re: [AtsuMina] ZENPEN: When the Time Stops Ch.7 05/25/2014 Update!
« Reply #72 on: May 25, 2014, 04:01:57 PM »
Minami is so dense!!!!!  :frustrated: :frustrated: :frustrated: :frustrated:
KojiYuu is coming!!!!!  :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1:

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Re: [AtsuMina] ZENPEN: When the Time Stops Ch.7 05/25/2014 Update!
« Reply #73 on: May 25, 2014, 04:16:11 PM »
Minami is so dense!!!!!  :frustrated: :frustrated: :frustrated: :frustrated:
KojiYuu is coming!!!!!  :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1:


same feels  :farofflook: :farofflook: :farofflook:
KYAAAAAAAA UPDATE SOON :on gay:

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Re: [AtsuMina] ZENPEN: When the Time Stops Ch.7 05/25/2014 Update!
« Reply #74 on: May 25, 2014, 05:17:19 PM »
oh! it looks like the relationship between acchan and takamina have improved, whether their relationship will be smooth? :inlove:
whether acchan will express her feelings to takamina? :D
kojiharu finally come too! yuko seems to do everything that she can to be always near kojiharu!
wah! I'm more curious about the continuation of the closeness of them XD
Btw thanks for your hard work author-san and please update soon :twothumbs :twothumbs

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Re: [AtsuMina] ZENPEN: When the Time Stops Ch.7 05/25/2014 Update!
« Reply #75 on: May 25, 2014, 07:28:28 PM »
oowh finally takamina and acchan having some progres and getting along well  :wub:
bakamina doesn't realized the fact that acchan taking a like and her --"
great mariko-sama! you did what you should  :twothumbs
yoshaa Atsumina and Kojiyu  :cow:

update soon  XD XD thank you

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Re: [AtsuMina] ZENPEN: When the Time Stops Ch.7 05/25/2014 Update!
« Reply #76 on: May 25, 2014, 08:09:52 PM »
Yeaa~ takamina and acchan get to know more.  Tq for including haruna! Hehe gonna be interesting for now on^^,

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« Reply #77 on: May 25, 2014, 10:47:35 PM »
OMG KOJIYUUUUUUU

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« Reply #78 on: May 26, 2014, 03:03:35 AM »
Dense bakamina is dense..as always~
aa..mariko-samaaaaa~ hope for marimii >.<
wohoo the goddess finally appear~ be nice to her yuko! Or not ckckck
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Re: [AtsuMina] ZENPEN: When the Time Stops Ch.7 05/25/2014 Update!
« Reply #79 on: May 30, 2014, 06:39:46 PM »
@iLeo221: i know you've been waiting for kojiharu, gomen if it took 7 chapters before she appeared hehe
@cisda83: all i can say is, yuko moves faster than minami lol
@chiqinna, Chichay12: i hope minami's denseness will soon subside
@ayudewi6, Justqle: believe me, i really wanted to make their relationship level up a little faster
@noah minami, Haruko: i really like kojiyuu! so maybe i'll make some special chapters for them soon
@deguchi: marimii couple, i'm not sure if  they'll also appear in zenpen so we'll see :)

minna, gomen if i took longer to update than usual :bow:
damn all these meetings and deadlines..
reality sucks, i just want to stay in my world of stories and imagination lol

When the Time Stops
Chapter 8


The morning class of our second year's first day has ended and Yuko suddenly disappeared from my sight again. So I went out of our classroom alone to take a break and saw Atsuko already standing outside our room. She's leaning against the wall, waiting for me. As usual, many male students are still stealing glances of her. At first, they really get into my nerves but eventually I got used to it and just ignore them. We walked side by side heading out to the school grounds where we used to eat lunch together.

"So, how's your first day?" I asked her as I open my bento.

"Nothing new so far, but later the drama club members will be having our first meeting of the year to discuss some arrangements." She said and then she looked at my food.
"Your bento, why is it always meat?"

"Ah, you noticed. Well actually, I'm kinda picky when it comes to food. I prefer to only eat meat." I answered.

"So that's why.. by the way, is Yuko not eating with us today?"

"Maybe she's already eating somewhere alone again. Or, she's stalking that new transfer student in our class. I think Yuko likes that girl a lot."

"Oh. So, do you like her too?" Atsuko asked.

"Me? I just think that girl's really pretty, that's all." We started to eat our food, then Atsuko spoke to me again.

"Ne, Minami.. I was just wondering.. have you ever liked someone?"

I don't know how to answer her question because I don't actually have an idea how it feels to like someone.
"I guess those things never came to my mind yet."
She looks disappointed with my answer.

"Now that you mention it, there's something Shinoda-san told me before she graduated. She mentioned about that someone that you like." I said.

"E-Eh? W-What else did she tell you?"

"She only said you already like that person even before you and Shinoda-san met."

"Ah.. well it's true." She confirmed and this time it's me who felt disappointed.

"So, what kind of person is he?" I asked in an unhappy voice.

She stared at me for a few seconds before she answered.
"The one I like is the kindest person I have ever met. And that person is the only one who can make me love and hate that kindness both at the same time." She giggled.

Eh? That was quite a weird description, and I didn't try to ask her another question about that person again.

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Weeks has passed and there has been an announcement that all classes will be having a 3-day school trip. A day before that trip, Atsuko and I once again went to the restaurant where Tomochin works part time. We are already on our table when Yuko suddenly arrived.

"Hi guys! I brought someone here with me." She greeted us, she's with the new transfer student. It seems like they're friends now.

"Takamina, can you please transfer from your seat? Just sit beside Aachan."

"Why would I..." Yuko grabbed me and forced me to stand up. Then she sat on my spot.

"Sit right here next to me, Nyannyan."

"Nyannyan??"

"Hi, uhm.. I know it's a bit cheesy but since Yuuchan's my first friend here, I had no choice but to let her call me the way she wanted." She explained.

"Yuuchan?!"

What's with their childish terms of endearment now?

"Nyannyan and I met at the rooftop. She still doesn't have friends here yet so I decided to introduce her to you guys." Yuko said.

"Nyannyan, the girl with the shorter hair is Aachan. She's from the drama club. And this one with the shorter height is Takamina, our class president."

"That's a very nice introduction from a person who's merely 1.5 inch taller than me." I glared at Yuko.
"Anyway, how should we call you?"

"I prefer Kojiharu, that's how my old friends used to call me." She requested.

"I'm special! That's why I'm the only one who can call her Nyannyan!" Yuko butts in. She's in her super hyper mode today.

Tomochin went to our table to get our orders. Yuko also introduced Kojiharu to her.

"Takamina, we have some new sushi flavors. Why don't you try them?" She suggested me.

"Sorry Tomochin, but Minami only eats meat so just give her usual katsudon. Anyway, let me try your new sushi." Atsuko ordered food for us.

"Okay desu!" Tomochin got all our orders and left the table.

"Hey Aachan, looks like you already learned many things about Takamina, ne?" Yuko said to Atsuko, but she just ignored her.

While waiting for our orders to arrive, we asked Kojiharu some questions for us to get to know her better.

"I transferred to your school because it's the nearest one from our house. We came to this town because of my mom's nature of work. She was assigned here for I don't know how long." Kojiharu explained.

Our food arrived and we continued our conversation about many things. We also talked about our school trip tomorrow and everyone seems excited about it.

"So the four of us are now officially a group!" Yuko said.

"All of you are from the same class, why am I the only one who's different?" Atsuko complained.

"Then let's invite Tomochin to join our group, too!" I suggested.

"Oh, nevermind." Atsuko immediately took back what she said.

"Huh?" I'm confused. Is there something going on between them?

"I-I mean Tomochin's schedule is always full so maybe she doesn't have time for other things. A-Anyway, will you excuse me? I just need to go the restroom."

"Aachan, wait! I'll go with you. I'll be right back, Nyannyan.."

Yuko followed Atsuko. So Kojiharu and I were left alone on our table.

"Say Kojiharu, do you already have a club in mind that you want to join?"

"I haven't thought about it yet." She answered.

"I was thinking maybe you can help Yuko join a club." I said.

"Why doesn't she join the music club?"

"Music club? But why?"

"I just heard her sing and she has a very beautiful voice." Kojiharu said.

"Yuko sings?" I was surprised.

"Eh? You don't know?"

"I thought she only likes listening to music wearing those headphones."

"I see.. so that's how it is.. Ne, Takamina?"

"Yes, what is it?" I asked.

"Please don't tell Yuuchan about what I told you. Just don't mind what I said." I just nodded eventhough I don't know her reasons why.

"We're back! Nyannyan did you miss me?" Yuko and Atsuko came back to our table.

"Yuko, you're only gone for less than 5 minutes." I said.

"I'm not talking to you Takamina. Nyannyan, let's go home?" Yuko asked as she clings to Kojiharu's arms.

We went out the restaurant and Yuko's still hugging her Nyannyan. Poor Kojiharu.

"Hey Kojiharu, you can actually file harassment against Yuko in school if you want. And I'd be glad to send that squirrel to detention." I teased.

"Would that be really possible?" Kojiharu giggled.

"Eh? Nyannyan! It's just a simple skinship! Takamina never had one so she wouldn't understand."

I never had one? I suddenly got flashbacks of Atsuko's kiss. Isn't that a type of skinship, too?

"It's just that you never do that to me! Well, it's not like I want that from you either." I told Yuko.

We reached the area where their bicycles are parked.

"Yuuchan? How can we ride our bikes if you're not letting go of my arms?" Kojiharu said.

"Then can we share on your bike instead? I'll hug you from your behind all the way home." Yuko had a smug look on her face.

"Da~me! Abunai."

Kojiharu didn't agree so Yuko had no choice but to obey her. She finally let go of her and they ride their own bikes.

"We're going now. See you guys tomorrow!"

They bid goodbye, so Atsuko and I were then left alone. We started to walk together heading to the bus stop.

"I've never seen Yuko that happy before." I said.

Then suddenly...

"A-Atsuko?!" I was startled. Atsuko slipped her hand to hold mine.

"I was just thinking that somehow you're jealous of Yuko and Kojiharu's sudden closeness." She said.

"I'm not jealous! I'm actually happy for Yuko."

"Well, I just want you to know that you still have me." Atsuko explained. "I understand if you don't want to hold my hand.."

"I want to!!! I mean... it's okay with me." Did I sound too obvious?

We continue to walk ahead holding each other's hands. The atmosphere between us became too quiet again.

"Minami, you're shaking. If you're not comfortable then I'll just let go of your hand." She said.

"Don't! Please..." I begged. Atsuko smiled when I said that.

"Then let's try clasping our fingers, it might stop you from shaking... here... like this..." Our fingers intertwined, I never thought they can fit so perfectly on each other.

TOKI DOKI TOKI DOKI.. my heart.. it's beating so wild again.

We reached the bus stop and there's still few more minutes before her bus comes. We sat down, still holding hands. Then Atsuko speaks again.

"Minami, about our trip tomorrow. I'd be joining my class and be separated from you. Yuko and Kojiharu will surely go together, and I'm worried that you might be left alone. So I was thinking... when the day trip ends, can we see each other right after?"

TOKI DOKI TOKI DOKI.. Oh my God, my heartbeat is making me speechless.. Say something!!!

.....

In the end, nothing came out from my mouth so I just nodded. I'm such an idiot after all. Her bus came and she squeezed my hand softly before she finally let go of it.

"See you tomorrow, ne." She smiled.

Atsuko rode the bus and then she's gone. I put my hand, the one she held, near my mouth. Her fragrance remained on it. It was only less than a minute ago when she left but why do I miss her already? So then I wonder what kind of feeling is this... do I actually... like her?

TBC

i wanted to update already!!!
so i'll try to spare more time... hopefully.

thanks for reading! :)
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