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Re: [AtsuMina] ZENPEN: When the Time Stops Ch.14 07/06/2014 KojiYuu Special
« Reply #140 on: July 08, 2014, 01:14:12 PM »
Sugoi ! Loved this chapter. I really hope that Kojiharu stays.

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Re: [AtsuMina] ZENPEN: When the Time Stops Ch.14 07/06/2014 KojiYuu Special
« Reply #141 on: July 09, 2014, 05:33:22 AM »
Hi author-san!
New reader coming  :onioncheer:
I want say thank for this great fanfic,u give me wonderful fanfic exactly when i miss this pairing too much.
Please continue author-san :)

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Re: [AtsuMina] ZENPEN: When the Time Stops Ch.14 07/06/2014 KojiYuu Special
« Reply #142 on: July 18, 2014, 08:29:49 PM »
minna gomen for the super late update! :bow:
i said that this chapter was already ready before, but lots of things happened lately
that's why I didn't have much time to finalize and post this...
but don't worry, i promise to finish the story no matter what :thumbsup

@IamNot_Glad: i agree, it's nice to have someone who'll push you and help you on your weakness
@ChibiRine, teru_fi: kojiharu well, i think it doesn't matter if she leaves as long as she comes back hehe
@Ruka Kikuchi: actually i'm not sure if the last chapter will include their lives after highschool.. so we'll see :?
@atsukojiyuu_C, Justqle: senior year means little time left before everyone goes, it makes me a little sad though
@cisda83: yuuchan stole a kiss.. sorry for the confusion hehe
@ryu201: new reader yay! thanks for reading :)

When the Time Stops
Chapter 15

Time indeed flies so fast when you're having fun with friends and spending it with your someone special. Seems like yesterday I was just a freshman of this school and now I am already a senior student. Many things had happened with the last two years and most of them were happy things.

Happy things. When I think of them, Atsuko's angelic face and beautiful smile comes first in my mind. It's true that you can fly when you think of happy things. That's how I feel like whenever I think of her. It's like her wings were lifting me up and making me reach heaven by her side.

I wanted to go and see Atsuko already after class, but today is the student council's first meeting of the school year so I can't just leave. And guess what? I'm the new student council president now and this definitely adds up to the pressure. I'm not in the right mood to talk to these people infront of me, if only there's a way to escape... Then I noticed that not all members are present.

"Where is first year and second year representative?" I asked before I start our meeting.

"We heard that the freshman had a minor accident earlier. Second year representative Watanabe-san brought her to the infirmary." One of the members answered.

Great... an excuse finally! God just answered my prayer.

"We can't have our meeting without them because they have important roles as members of the student council. Let's reschedule this tomorrow, I'll go then to the infirmary to check up on them."

I cancelled the meeting and hurriedly went out the room.

"Oh, there's our new Seito Kaichou!" Yuko shouted as she saw me, she's with Kojiharu. She then handed me a piece of paper.

"Yuko, nani kore?" I read what's written on it.

"It's a club proposal. I wanted to open my own club!" She answered excitedly.

"Is this another Go-home club or something like that?" I'm not quite convinced with this idea of hers.

"It's called the Rooftop club! You've been nagging me before to join a club, right? So this is it! And besides, I wanted to experience having a club too before I graduate highschool." She explained.

"So, what will this club do? I see that there are only two members written on here..."

"Yup! I'd be the club president and Nyannyan's the vice-president! We will maintain the peace and order of our
school rooftop!"

Huh?? I grabbed Kojiharu to the side.

"Hey Kojiharu... did you actually agree on this?" I asked in a low voice.

"I never agreed on anything, Yuuchan just dragged me..."

"So, what's with Yuko all of a sudden?"

"It started when some freshman barged in the rooftop for a dance practice... making Yuuchan bothered and pissed lately."

I see... so that explains why. I turned around to face Yuko again.

"Yuko, you need at least five members to create a club. Wait, do you even plan to add members?" I doubt she wanted that.

"Ofcourse not! Rooftop club is only for Nyannyan and me!"

"So, it's impossible to grant your request then."

"Eh~!!! But you're the student council president now!"

"Yuko, the rooftop is open for all students. You're a senior now and this will be your last year here in school, so be kind to the lower years." I advised her.

"Boo... I hate the school rules!" Yuko yelled and then ranaway from us.

"Takamina, don't worry. I'll talk to her." Kojiharu said.

"Thanks, Kojiharu. I know Yuko very well. It will soon pass. By the way, have you seen Atsuko?" I asked.

"No, but I heard that the drama club has an audition for new members going on today. Maybe you'll find her there." She said before she left me and followed Yuko.

I went to the infirmary first to check my two members. As I arrived there, I saw female students gathered around sneaking behind the door. I excused myself to them and went straight inside.

"You're such a show off, Jurina... You just started going to my school and now look what happened to you!" A girl with long hair on pig tails is scolding another girl with short hair.

"Hey, what did I do now? You know I only wanted to audition to this school's dance club..."

"Yeah and I also know you really got the talent. You're like Park Shin Hye... seems so simple, innocent and naive just by looking at you... But once you start your moves, you transform into a bad girl of the dance floor making all those girls' jaws drop like crazy."

"Teehee~ I didn't know you see me like that, Mayu-chan..."

"Nahh... don't flatter yourself too much..."

"Are you angry because I sprained my ankle? Or because you're jealous of those girls?"

"Whatever... don't forget it's your fault why we missed the first student council meeting."

"So, why did you still follow and watch me dance? I told you to go first since it will be just a quick number before I go to the meeting."

"If I didn't follow you then I won't be able to help you go here in the infirmary. Unless you want those fangirls of yours to bring you here instead..."

"Ahem..." I interrupted their little friendly conversation.

"Seito Kaichou!!!" They were both surprised to see me.

"Hi.. uhm.. I heard one of the student council members was injured, so I went here to visit." I told them.

"We're very sorry we're not able to attend our first meeting." It was second year representative, Watanabe Mayu, who apologized. I know few things about her since she's the former first year representative.

"It's okay, the meeting was actually moved tomorrow." I turned to the other girl lying on bed with bandage on her feet. "So, you must be the new first year representative?"

"Matsui Jurina desu! I'm from class 1-A." She introduced herself.

"Ah, nice to finally meet you, Matsui-san. Is your ankle okay now?"

"It's getting better, thanks to my personal doctor here..." She took a glance of Watanabe-san.

"The two of you seem to get along very well." I said as I noticed the closeness between them.

"We're childhood friends. Well, it's more like I'm her baby-sitter." Watanabe-san laughed a little.

"Oh, that explains it! Anyway, so I guess I'll just expect you both tomorrow at the meeting?"

"We'll be there, Seito Kaichou. Right, Jurina?"

"Hai! Ano~ so it's true that the school council president is really cool..."

"Ah.. hehe thanks. I gotta go now. Get well soon, Matsui-san." That's the last thing I said before I left them.

I went out the infirmary and noticed that the female students are still gathered outside. The school year just started and that freshman is already that popular. She told me I'm cool, but I think she's way cooler than I am.

I went next to drama club to see Atsuko finally. Ah, there she is... so they're still having an audition for new members and she's one of the judges. I think she already noticed that I'm here. She's now heading to my direction.

"Hey... So, how's our new student council president doing?" Atsuko smiled and fixed my red armband.

"Some things happened today. Yuko and I had a small argument earlier. And also I met some freshman who reminds me of your popularity when you're still a freshman back then."

"Sounds a busy day for you. But I'm happy at least you've still thought of me." She holds my hand.

"Ofcourse I do! Actually, I'm wondering if we can walk home together now..."

"Gomen, Minami... the audition for new drama club members isn't finished yet. You may go home first today, I promise to walk home with you tomorrow."

"Zannen desu... I understand but our student council meeting is moved tomorrow so I can't..."

"I see... so how about I sleepover again this weekend to make it up to you?" Now, she's giving me her sexy smile.

I thought my heart skipped a beat there. How can I possibly resist this angel? My Atsuko... was she actually planning on something again?

WAIT. Who is that? For a second, I saw a person standing there looking at us. But the person is gone when I tried to look back.

"Minami? What's wrong?" Atsuko asked.

"Nothing, I think I just saw someone watching us."

"Who? Where?"

We both look around us but we saw no one.

"I think.. since you're the student council president now, people here will start to look up to you..."

"Yeah, maybe you're right." Atsuko had a point.

"Maeda-san! We need you here for the final decision!" Their club president called her.

"I gotta go now, Minami... I'll just call you later night, okay?" She then let go of my hand. "Oh, before I forgot! I just wanted to say that I missed you..." She gave me a smile again before she went back inside.

I smiled back, eventhough I know she won't see it anymore. She's busy. I'm busy. What a start of our senior year!

HUH. I noticed there's that someone again! I tried to follow where that person's shadow is coming from but I saw no one there. Maybe, I'm imagining things too much. In the end, I just ignored it and decided to go home.

TBC

i think zenpen has approximately 7 chapters left...
i'll try to update sooner!

thanks for reading! :)

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Re: [AtsuMina] ZENPEN: When the Time Stops Ch.15 07/18/2014 Update!
« Reply #143 on: July 19, 2014, 12:24:29 AM »
thx u! thx u! thx u!!! u update!
what a great story!!! love it!

hope it will be a happy ending for haru and yuko!

I also want to know who the stalker is!!!

thx u again and see u next time!

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Re: [AtsuMina] ZENPEN: When the Time Stops Ch.15 07/18/2014 Update!
« Reply #144 on: July 19, 2014, 02:44:31 AM »
Ah she has a stalker eh...?

.......... Why the heck do I have feeling that stalker is Ray??

Please update!! Cant wait anymore!
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Re: [AtsuMina] ZENPEN: When the Time Stops Ch.15 07/18/2014 Update!
« Reply #145 on: July 19, 2014, 04:09:56 AM »
Yey! An update!
Thank for great update author-san  :kneelbow:

Hee~~
both of them seem so busy,can they have time together?
I hope they still have time for each other  :on spit:

Who is that?
Stalker? Acchan or takamina fans? Or maybe....love rival arrived already?
Whoa! Im curious!
Please update soon author-san!

Hey i saw park shin hye name there!
Are u by any chance also park shin hye fans like me?  :mon star:

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Re: [AtsuMina] ZENPEN: When the Time Stops Ch.15 07/18/2014 Update!
« Reply #146 on: July 19, 2014, 05:24:50 AM »
Eh... a stalker....?

Who is it?

What's going to happen to Atsumina next?

Would there be some troubles heading their way?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

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Re: [AtsuMina] ZENPEN: When the Time Stops Ch.15 07/18/2014 Update!
« Reply #147 on: July 19, 2014, 07:43:34 PM »
woah some jurimayu moment there~
and what's with rooftop club, yuko?? damn hilarious scene  :mon lmao:
takamina and acchan got less time together.. hope the stalker won't bring any chaos to these couples  :smhid
@atsukojiyuu_C, Justqle: senior year means little time left before everyone goes, it makes me a little sad though
yeah, well since we already know what will happen later  :( but no matter what, i'll still enjoy the rest of this zenpen of course  :twothumbs
thankyou author-san! looking forward for the next~  :yep:

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Re: [AtsuMina] ZENPEN: When the Time Stops Ch.15 07/18/2014 Update!
« Reply #148 on: July 19, 2014, 08:06:57 PM »
Damn those/that stalker.  :angry:

I'm going to kill those person who goes to the rooftop. It's for KojiYuu not everyone! :tantrum:

Aww, Acchan and Takamina doesn't have time for each other? :(

No matter what happens, I will read the last 7 chapters. :)

Update sooooon~ :twothumbs
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Re: [AtsuMina] ZENPEN: When the Time Stops Ch.15 07/18/2014 Update!
« Reply #149 on: July 20, 2014, 12:22:16 PM »
If that stalker ruin my atsumina's relationship.. I'm gonna :shifty: :on voodoo:

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Re: [AtsuMina] ZENPEN: When the Time Stops Ch.15 07/18/2014 Update!
« Reply #150 on: July 20, 2014, 08:50:10 PM »
acchan and takamina got their own business  :(
in relationship, that's quite a hard part  :cry:

I hope they still have time for each other  :on spit:
I hope so  :yep:

Thanks for the update, eventhough it's 7 chapter's left but that's the climax point for Zenpen right?  :farofflook:

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Re: [AtsuMina] ZENPEN: When the Time Stops Ch.15 07/18/2014 Update!
« Reply #151 on: July 24, 2014, 12:50:18 PM »
A rival???    :lol: :lol: :lol:

Thanks for the update   :D :D
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« Reply #152 on: July 25, 2014, 02:59:25 AM »
Wehehe, a rival has come.. Who is it?!
Thx for update Author san

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Re: [AtsuMina] ZENPEN: When the Time Stops Ch.15 07/18/2014 Update!
« Reply #153 on: August 03, 2014, 02:43:51 PM »
minna!!! hisashiburi!!! am i late again? gomen... :bow:
before i update twice a week, now becomes only twice a month? :nervous
okay i'll try to get back to my old punctual self hehe

@iLeo221: hello! kojiyuu is such a sweet couple... happy endings suit them well hehe
@korin48: ray!!! she has a huge role indeed! but as much as i want to include her here, i'm afraid she won't appear yet... but she's already written somewhere...
@ryu201: i like park shin hye! i can't imagine a girl so much talented like her...
@cisda83: lots of troubles are on their way!!! this will be fun haha
@atsukojiyuu_C: yes i added jurimayu couple since i'll be needing them... uhm... soon hehe
@ChibiRine: yeah! the rooftop is only for kojiyuu! tanoshii...
@Keisthename: the stalker... uhm, we'll see? hehe
@Justqle: i guess every story has a climax part and since there are few chapters left... it has to be done already! lol
@IamNot_Glad, ubulubulbilu: a rival... well ofcourse there is! it's the main reason why zenpen is here so that i can write about how atsumina started first :)

and to all my readers especially the silent ones...
thank you very much for continuously reading my story!  :heart:

When the Time Stops
Chapter 16

I never thought being the student council president can this be hard. It's not the balancing of my studying and my duties that makes it hard, but how it eats away my time making me not see Atsuko in school more often. She told me not to blame myself since she's also busy on their practices. She's the star of this school's drama club and I'm so proud of her. I know we can't go back to what we used to do anymore, but at least I want to be able to watch her everyday like before. We only talk over the phone during the night and see each other during weekends. Either she comes over my place or I come over hers. I think that would be enough for now... at least.

"Seitou kaichou? Are you okay? You're spacing out again." Mayu-chan spoke to me.

"Ah! I'm sorry! Where were we again?" I came back to my senses.

"We're discussing about the list of the clubs this school year."

"Ah, right..."

It's been weeks since I've started working with Mayu-chan and Jurina-chan  as the student council president. They're my juniors but they're way much focused than I am, with that I admire their dedication. But more than just about the student council thing, I already treated them as my friends. We've shared personal stories and experiences with one another. I somehow see myself and Atsuko in them. I envy them, despite of their year difference, they can still spend time together like this.

"Rooftop club..." Jurina-chan whispered to herself as she read one of the new club requests.

"What is it Jurina?" Mayu-chan asked.

"This proposal... if this is authorized then I won't be able to use the rooftop for my dance practices."

So that means... Jurina-chan is the freshman that Yuko is talking about. And speaking of Yuko, she's just entered the student council room with Kojiharu. Uh-oh... She's now here again... I smell trouble.

"Takamina... I'm wondering if you already change your mind and authorize my..... EEEEHHH~!!?"

Oh, no... Yuko already recognized Jurina-chan and she's now glaring at her.

"YOU!!! You're a student council member?!!" Yuko shouted.

"W-Watashi?" Jurina-chan is confused.

"Jurina! What did you do again?" Mayu-chan is scolding her.

"Nothing!!! I don't know!!!" Jurina-chan answered still confused.

"Takamina! So you're in favor of this newbie than your friend!" Yuko turned to me. "Now I understand why you don't approve of my rooftop club! That's clearly unfair!"

"Oh come on, Yuko... I just knew today, okay? Get a hold of yourself. Let's fix the problem here. Why don't you just share the rooftop with Jurina-chan. Don't you agree, Kojiharu?" I asked.

But I didn't hear Kojiharu's answer.

"Kojiharu???" I asked again.

I waited for a response but Kojiharu still didn't answer. So it means, she doesn't agree, too? But why? That's how badly they wanted the rooftop on their own?

"Alright... I'll give way to my seniors." Jurina-chan finally decided. "I kinda get it. I'll just wait for my turn next year to use the rooftop."

This girl's really kind. Kojiharu then comes closer to her, holds her hand and thank her.

"Thank you for your understanding. You see... the rooftop is really a big deal for me and Yuuchan." She gave the freshman a genuine smile.

Jurina blushed hard. She was like star-struck by Kojiharu's smile.

"YAMETE!!!" Yuko and Mayu-chan both shouted.

Kojiharu suddenly let go of Jurina-chan's hand. Yuko and Mayu-chan looked at each other and were also surprised on what they did at the same time.

Why do I get this feeling that these two would get along in the future? The persons they like are both popular in school. Kojiharu is popular among the guys and Jurina-chan is popular among the girls. They could understand each other very well like, uhm, sisters? Perhaps?

Oh, great. My head is now aching because of these people. I need some air. Since their problem is now resolved, I think it's time for me to escape and leave them. And besides, student council meeting is already finished. I left the student council room quietly without them noticing. I wanna see my Atsuko already... hope she's not busy. So then, I head straight to the drama club.

Eh~? There's a commotion outside the club. What's going on?

"I heard she's a former student of this school!"

"Wow! She looks like a celebrity!"

I heard students chatting. I tried to get infront and took a peek inside. I was surprised to see a very familiar person who Atsuko is currently talking to.

S-Shinoda-san?!! What is she doing here?

Atsuko looks so happy talking to her. I noticed myself clasping my fist. There's something heavy inside me. What is this feeling?

Shinoda-san's about to leave the club room. Oh, no! She's coming this way! Should I hide? Too late, she already saw me!

"Hisashiburi, Takahashi-san!" She greeted me.

"H-Hisashiburi..." I greeted her back... in a little hesitated voice.

"You don't look so happy to see me here, ne? By any chance, are you... threatened with me?" She said in an obviously teasing voice.

"Ofcourse, not!" I denied. "So what brings you here?"

"I came here to visit the drama club and check if they're doing well. I heard they'll do a school play this year. I recommended some directors I met back in Tokyo to watch their performance." She explained.

"Are you sure there's no one you tend to visit here in particular?" I asked her.

Shinoda-san laughed at my question.

"It's true that I want to know if Aachan's doing well, too! After all, I'm the one who discovered her talent." She paused.
"I heard from her that the two of you are together now."

E-Eh? A-Atsuko said that to her?

"Finally. I'm happy to hear that. I know you would take care of her. Continue to protect her no matter what, okay?" She tapped my head.

"Hey! I'd do that without you telling me so! And not because you're way taller than me you can already treat me like a kid! I'm now the student council president here!" Damn it, now I sounded like a child.

"Oh, Aachan mentioned about it, too!" Shinoda-san giggled. "Gomen, little seito kaichou! Well, I'm going now. I know we'll meet again someday." With those words, Shinoda-san left.

I stayed where I am and waited there for Atsuko.

"Minami!" Atsuko hugged me from behind.

"You startled me! Are you free to go home now?" I asked her and she nodded.

I'm happy that we can able to walk home together today, since this became a rare chance for us to do.

"Mariko-senpai visited our school today. She became even much prettier! Being a university student sure is a good thing for her." Atsuko brought up about Shinoda-san.

"Yeah, I also saw her earlier. So, what did you talk about?"

"I told her Minami's now my girlfriend!"

"Y-YYOUR G-GGIRLFRIEND???" I didn't see that coming. That's the first time she said that I'm her girlfriend!

"Why? Isn't that true?" Atsuko pouted.

"I was just surprised that you told her about us in that way. And since I saw how you look so happy to see her again..."

Atsuko suddenly became quiet. I noticed we're about to reach the bus stop. She's still quiet, but she's now smiling weird at me.

"Hey, what is it?" I asked to break the silence between us.

"Is my Minami... jealous?"

"E-Ehhh~ Why would I?"

"Minami kawaii..." She hugged me again.

"Stop it! I'm not jealous of her, okay?"

"If you're not then prove it... how about another kiss?" Atsuko leans to me closer waiting for a kiss.

"Atsuko....." I warned her.

"But we've already kissed here before! Fine! Maybe you're really jealous! Or if not, maybe you don't really..... mmm~"

I interrupted her non-stop ranting with a soft kiss on her lips, but not a quick one. It lasted for few more seconds... I guess.

"Okay, now?" I asked breaking off the kiss.

She nodded. She's blushing hard. I think I caught her off guard. She look sooo cute!!! God, my heart is melting by simply staring at her...

Then her bus came. She gets inside and waves me goodbye before it took off.

"Seitou Kaichou!!!" I saw Jurina-chan and Mayu-chan running to my direction.

"Jurina-chan? Mayu-chan? Why are you guys in a hurry?"

"This is important! There's something you should know!" Jurina-chan's voice sounds serious.

"What is it?" I asked.

"We're sorry to say this but....." Mayu-chan paused. "We have a feeling that Maeda-senpai and you... will going to face a big problem."

TBC

ooops! the stalker will be revealed on chapter 17!
i hope i can update fast... i'm always delayed i wanna cry :cry:

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Re: [AtsuMina] ZENPEN: When the Time Stops Ch.16 08/03/2014 Update!
« Reply #154 on: August 03, 2014, 04:51:09 PM »
Eh... trouble...????
 
What trouble????

So you are going to reveal the stalker soon... that's great

Mayu and Yuko are so synchronize

Yeah... both Haruna and Jurina are popular with boys and girls respectively

What's going to happen next?

What kind of effects is this trouble going to bring to their school lives and private lives, also their future?   

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

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Re: [AtsuMina] ZENPEN: When the Time Stops Ch.16 08/03/2014 Update!
« Reply #155 on: August 03, 2014, 05:34:23 PM »
The stalker will be revealed in next chapter.... Majide?! Majide?! What trouble?!?!

Please update fast!! I cant wait!! D:
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Re: [AtsuMina] ZENPEN: When the Time Stops Ch.16 08/03/2014 Update!
« Reply #156 on: August 03, 2014, 06:41:54 PM »
 :bleed eyes: cliffhanger  :smhid

Bring us back your punctual you in updating...  :bleed eyes:

Lol

Anyway, it was a short update but I like reading the events. Quite calm and slowly progressing. I wonder what's ahead for my atsumina,  :doh:

Thanks for the update!

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Re: [AtsuMina] ZENPEN: When the Time Stops Ch.16 08/03/2014 Update!
« Reply #157 on: August 03, 2014, 10:30:21 PM »
Oh No is Ray coming or may be...somenone else ?

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Re: [AtsuMina] ZENPEN: When the Time Stops Ch.16 08/03/2014 Update!
« Reply #158 on: August 04, 2014, 09:39:19 AM »
Welcome back author-san  :welcome
U really gone so long.

Yes! I agree with u!
She so talented yet so beautiful  :mon lovelaff:

T-TROUBLE?!
What trouble that could be come?
I believe yo my atsumina  :mon star:

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Re: [AtsuMina] ZENPEN: When the Time Stops Ch.16 08/03/2014 Update!
« Reply #159 on: August 05, 2014, 02:07:32 PM »
Uwaaahh

I hate troubles.   :smhid :smhid :smhid

Especially in capitaL T....  XD XD :lol: :lol:
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