Author Topic: Doki Doki (Read 152436 times)

Mikan · « **Reply #180 on:** July 25, 2006, 10:42:34 AM »

Ishikawa flashed Miki. Once. Twice. Thrice and more time for good measure. Miki smiled slyly and with great care flashed her partner in return. The rest of the party went unaware of the dirty game these two were playing. The plan was to cheat at strip poker. Ensuring that Yasuda Kei kept as much of her clothing on as possible.

"Moment of truth girls" Ayaka laughed menacingly.

Yaguchi lay her cards on the table. "I got nothing"

"Pair of eights" Goto Maki threw her cards down.

The round went by with Iida Kaori emerging as the winner.

Kei swore and refilled Kaori's cup. "Winner gets a drink and chooses the girl that loses"

"GoMaki!!" She sculled the drink and pointed at her victim.

There was cheering and applauses as Maki was finally beaten and forced to remove her shirt. She threw the top in the corner along with every one else’s and called for the next round to begin.

There was a knock at the door.

”Holy crap. Hide”

Half naked bodies scrambled into the bathroom. Yaguchi and Iida hid under the bed while Ishikawa jumped into the closet with the pile of clothes. Yossui put on her jimbei and answered the door. She sighed with relief.

”Oh Mako-chan. Thank god”

Yossui pulled the stunned girl into an embrace. “I thought it was Abe-san…it’s ok everyone”

Makoto watched as topless musume members piled from the corners of Yossui’s room and sat back down in a circle on the floor. Yossui knocked her jaw shut with her finger bringing Makoto out of what ever fantasy she was having.

"Ow...oh..uh, what are you guys doing?"

"Party!" Cried out Yuko wearing her jeans and singlet, holding up her glass.

Yossui stripped back down to her origanal clothing - shirt and trunks while Makoto just watched, gobsmacked.

"Come here you can be my good luck charm" Yuko made a space between her legs and beckonded Makoto to come sit.

Makoto stay had to be cut short when others started to notice that she was getting progressively drunk and the amount of petting she was recieving from Yuko was getting heavier and heavier. Although she was sad to be kick out, each member gave a goodnight kiss which really made her day. By that time most members (including Kei) had been played down to their underwear. Only Ishikawa, Miki, Yaguchi and Yuko were without bra's (nobody could actually remember at what point Yuko lost hers so it was left to assume it was a voluntary act). Nevertheless, they were all inebriated enough not to give a damn.

They all lay across the floor giggling like maniacs when a deafening rumbled sounded below their feet.

Yossui sobered up quickly. "What the - "

A lamp slid of the table and smashed onto the floor as the entire room was shaken back and forth. In a rush they crammed into the bathroom and waited for the earthquake to finish. The rumble faded and they all waited nervously.

From the crowd a voice suggested "I think we should all head back to our rooms"

Yossui and Ishikawa bid goodnight to all their guests and shut the door with a deep sigh. Stumbling lazily over to the kitchen, Yossui poured herself a glass of water. The alcohol had made her head feel like life was moving at a 100 miles an hour and the earthquake didnt really help.

"There is no way you wanna do you I think you wanna do..." Yossui couldnt help break into a smile as Ishikawa's small hands slipped aroudn her waist and inside her shirt. Rika giggled and ran back to jump on the bed gesturing Yossui to follow.

"Oh my god you do..."

-Sorry such a flat ending. Now that I look back its not so long..

Elle_Driver · « **Reply #181 on:** July 25, 2006, 11:06:56 AM »

Ensuring that Yasuda Kei kept as much of her clothing on as possible.
....
nobody could actually remember at what point Yuko lost hers so it was left to assume it was a voluntary act

LMAO!!!

I like that little Rika/Miki thing that is going on. Maybe Miki should join Yossui and Rika

Like always, can't wait to read more of it.

freya86 · « **Reply #182 on:** July 25, 2006, 12:01:04 PM »

Waaaaiiii, that was a fun chapter!!!

Quoting Elle_Driver because she is right .. these parts = ROFL

Quote from: Elle_Driver

Ensuring that Yasuda Kei kept as much of her clothing on as possible.
....
nobody could actually remember at what point Yuko lost hers so it was left to assume it was a voluntary act

Oh, and don't worry about the ending. Sometimes the easy way out is the best way out when it comes to fanfic. People don't seem to care in the end, only the author notices it.

Mikan · « **Reply #183 on:** July 25, 2006, 12:41:55 PM »

Miki tossed and turned. Trying to sleep in every possible position but failing.

Hitomi answered the knock at the door in her trunks and losely tied jimbei. She squinted hard into the darkness.

"Who's there?"

"I couldnt sleep" A voice answered.

Yossui took a step back, hid behind the door and hissed. "No!Im not having sex with you every time you have a fall out with Aya and loose sleep!"

Miki stretched out a hand and bonked Hitomi on the head just hard enough to knock some sense into her.

"Not everyone wants to have sex with you Yoshizawa Hitomi. Can I just sleep in here tonight again? Im sorry...Im just a little freaked.."

Yossui sighed and let Miki in. It was hard to tell if she was making up a story or not but then again why would she? On the up-side it would be nice to have some extra body warmth to battle the cold nights. They crawled into bed together careful as to not wake Rika. Yossui slept in the middle with her back to Miki and arm around Rika. She laughed to herself at how weird a situation this was becoming and shut her eyes. A little while later that night three more smaller earthquakes occured to keep them both awake. She clutched onto Rika tightly for the duration while Miki muffled her whimpers with the pillow. Hitomi let one arm go and with it, pulled Miki into a hug.

She puts up a tough front but like everyone else - has a vulnerable side too

Elle_Driver · « **Reply #184 on:** July 25, 2006, 01:00:50 PM »

Aww, that's exactly what I wanted to happen

Mikan · « **Reply #185 on:** July 25, 2006, 01:06:42 PM »

sorry hang around! Im almost finished the next one! Its a little more what you were after!

Mikan · « **Reply #186 on:** July 25, 2006, 01:08:58 PM »

Hitomi looked back at the bed and the two sleeping beautys. Nap time was the only time when Miki's face lost it's fierce shadow and relaxed into the face of an innocent girl. It made Hitomi feel warm inside. She skipped to the bathroom to have her morning shower then she was out for her morning jog.

The sun peeked through the curtains and shone into Rika's eyes. She groaned and flexed her fingers. A foreign hand was pinching her nipple in such a way it gave her goosebumps. It moved from one breast to the other making very little contact. Almost like a tease.

Oh no.. She thought, smirking.

"Mikitty you have some bad sleeping habits!" She complained out loud, removing the girl's hand from under her shirt.

"Who says I was sleeping?" Miki shot back.

Her hand ran down Rika's thigh and up again. With great dexterity the tie on the front of her pyajama pants was undone and pulled down leaving Rika in her underwear and night shirt. She opened her mouth to protest but it was filled with Miki. Their tongues intertwining, chasing, massaging each others. Rika was overcome with a rush of feelings. The most obvious was the one swelling between her legs. Instictivly she found herself grinding against Miki as they kissed. Grinding slowly, fighting herself. She wanted to stop but she wanted Fujimoto to satisfy her just as much, if not more. Miki's fingers ran along the elastic of the underwear before ripping them off and running across Rika's wet ...

"No, stop it"

Rika kneed Miki in the stomach, throwing her onto the floor. Miki merely snickered."What's wrong?"

Rika got of on the opposite side of the bed and scowled at Miki.

"Dont say you weren't enjoying it 'cause I know it's not true" Miki waved her fingers saturated with Rika's wetness infront of her. Rika stood frozen with a mixture of anger and disapointment swirling inside of her. Miki licked her fingers.

Rika groaned and headed for the shower slamming the door behind her. "You're sick"

Mikan · « **Reply #187 on:** July 25, 2006, 01:09:35 PM »

ok, yay! Im off to do homework! I hope you enjoy! Join me next time for the ...
ABE GAMES!

Elle_Driver · « **Reply #188 on:** July 25, 2006, 05:24:16 PM »

Yeah, you're right. Definitely, that's what I was after

Thank you for making me so happy today!!! I really appreciate your hard work and all the effort you make.
Lookin' forward to the next chapter now. Let the ABE GAMES begin!

freya86 · « **Reply #189 on:** July 25, 2006, 09:44:32 PM »

Yay, hot Miki/Rika action!!! I hope there'll be more of it

JFC · « **Reply #190 on:** July 26, 2006, 03:44:05 AM »

Quote from: Mikan

Sorry I didnt want to post this in any other forum.
These are all stories I have heard from people I have met and some are things I read on the net. I'll get the ones I read on Yahoo!Gossip channel out -

*blah blah blah*

Cool story, right?

It's hearsay. Unless it's someone directly connected to it who has some proof, nothing's true, and nothing's false. It's easy to make up stories (because the stories are based on how we see them act onstage and on TV) and just say "a friend of a friend" or "someone I know saw them but s/he's not a fan".

Pass the salt.

lil_hamz · « **Reply #191 on:** July 26, 2006, 06:46:54 AM »

I can only say one word... INCREDIBLE! Wow you've some awesome writing there Mikan. I'm still dizzy from reading it

TheQuickening · « **Reply #192 on:** July 26, 2006, 08:41:28 AM »

Well, this is a nice way to spend one's coffee break. It's about fuckin' time someone did something like this with Abe.

bluekinoko · « **Reply #193 on:** July 26, 2006, 09:56:47 AM »

Geez, I feel dorky commenting on my own story

I like where this is going Mikan. Lol and you're writiing Abe into the story nicely. Woooah and hot scene at the end there. Is it harder than you thought to find time to update?

huggumwuggums · « **Reply #194 on:** July 26, 2006, 12:29:21 PM »

I missed you, bluekinoko! :pencry:

smoothee · « **Reply #195 on:** July 26, 2006, 01:04:23 PM »

all i have to say is.. WOW...

i just spent like 2 hours reading this whole thing.. damn laggy comp wouldnt load the pages faster.. WOW WOW WOW!! this is SOO addictive.. everytime it gets to a good part it would go to the others.. SOO much suspense!!

hehe im happy to see that bluekinko still visits this thread hehe so she can see that people really appreciate what she has started.. and to Mikan

you really picked up the story well!! though the writing style is different its still just as good!! keep up the good work!!!

hehe i

this!!

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just on a random note.. my favourite quote so far is:

Doki Doki 46 -

"This doesnt make us gay does it?"

Takahashi asked, sliding her hand up and over Niigaki's left nipple.

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WAHAHAHAH so awesome!! HURRAH!! i cheer for you!!

Mikan · « **Reply #196 on:** July 26, 2006, 01:40:21 PM »

Maki made her posed entrance into the hallway early that morning. Each step was taken with attitude, confidence and most importantly suave. Her approach was punk. Dressed in her torn jeans and skull and crossbones shirt she met her rival in the hallway - Yossui. Yossui had gone for her usual look - Boyish. A safe choice as in the past most girls have gone weak at the knees. In unision they checked their watches. It was still a little before showtime. Reina appeared moments later choosing Yankee fashion as her weapon closely followed by Makoto dressed as...well...Makoto and Miki, hair still a little wet wielding an outfit that screamed sexy.

The second hand ticked slowly, finally striking the hour. Each girl darting off into their waiting positions. Maki in the living room thinking she could catch Nacchi there before she visited the kitchen for breakfast where Reina was waiting. Makoto and Yossui both disappeared into different rooms while Miki just waited in the hallway (much to the surprise of the other contestants). Just standing there would definately arouse suspicion but Miki reassured them that it would be fine.

10:10 am

A well rested Abe Natsumi emerges from her room in a sundress and matching handbag. She squeals and pinches Miki's cheeks.

"Oooooh! I didnt mean to keep you waiting! Im sorry!"

Miki linked her through Abe's. "No. I wasnt waiting long"

Abe pinched her cheek again. Breaking a few blood vessels. "Well, Im so gald you called to say you were free today!I really wanted to catch up with you..."

Miki sneered at dumbstuck players on the way out of the apartment. Yossui, who poked her head out from a doorway, caught her eye and mouthed the words - 1 hour.

Miki lips curled into a devious smile. It wasnt even going to take her that long.

Mikan · « **Reply #197 on:** July 26, 2006, 01:46:32 PM »

NG PUMP!

This one comes from bluekinoko's STOP OR I'll SHOOT. Written about Yuko monolouging in her apartment.

O.K SCENE: A thin layer of sweat has stuck my fringe to my face.

NG: A thin layer of sweat has stuck my fridge to my face.

She picked this one up quickly and changed it but let me write it up as an NG.

*rofl at the thought of Yuko with a fridge stuck to her head*

freya86 · « **Reply #198 on:** July 26, 2006, 02:43:26 PM »

Evil Miki!!! Some would call that cheating!!!

Elle_Driver · « **Reply #199 on:** July 26, 2006, 03:48:44 PM »

And I would call that clever!

Maki's outfit sounds kinda sexy...