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« Reply #360 on: August 14, 2006, 01:49:19 PM »
"URAAAAAAAAA!" Reina pushed Maki's limp body aside.

A trickle of blood oozed from her nose and lingered on her lip. She wiped it on the back of her hand as she cursed Maki's name.

"I cant believe this!"

She slipped back into her clothes, fighting her yankee urges to hit something (or someone) and headed for the door.

"I'll see you around Goto"

~*~*~*~*~*~

Takahashi screamed horrifically. She thrashed in the bed, keeping away the invisible intruder. The noise got the attention of the whole apartment especially Niigaki a few doors down. She came running in, busting the door door as she came to the rescue.

"what what what what what?!?!"

The room was clean and empty apart from the bed covers that were on a ball on the floor and Takahashi who was trembling beside them.

"I had a bad dream" She announced weakly.

Niigaki sighed with relief and proceeded to remake the bed. "What were you doing asleep? Did you change your mind about the Beauty Palour?"

It took a while before it sank into Takahashi. She slapped her forehead and groaned. "Argh! I knew there was something I was going to do today"

She stood up to help her friend make the bed, still a little shakey from her nightmare.

"What was the dream about?"

Images of the nightmare flooded back along with the sounds and the fear. It wasnt as terrifing as when it was happening. Now that Risa was here, she felt a little stupid.

"The woman"

Niigaki blinked a few times and wondered if that was the end of Takahashi's reply.

"...."

Obviously it was.

"The woman?" Niigaki repeated. Ai nodded in affirmation.

"Ok..Im sorry. Can you give me more detail?"

"Oh right...umm....it was that woman"

The most annoying conversations were the ones had after Takahashi woke up. Her brain was yet to function like everyone elses. She took a hint and elaborated a bit more.

"The woman with her mouth cut..."

It was enough to strike a light in Risa's head. "Kuchisake onna? Slit-mouthed woman!"

They laughed together breifly. Feeling happy that they had made progress. Risa rested her head in her hands. "Im gonna do something for you.."

Tears of joy welled up in Takahashi's eyes. She had a true friend. Someone that cared deeply for her well-being.

"...Im gonna take ALL your horror novels because they are having too much of an effect on you"

Ai made a note to herself: Retract previous statement.

"But but but.." She stuttered, her Fukui accent spilling out. "There is something creepy going on! You saw it the other day in the bathrooms!"

Niigaki shook her head calmly. "Yeah, I saw something but that doesnt mean the place is haunted and our lives are in serious danger-"

"HAUNTED? YOU THINK WE'RE IN DANGER? really?!? We got to warn Yossui!"

Takahashi jumped right over her bed and scrambled for her phone, flipping it open and running through her address book. She was tackled from behind and the mobile thrown across the floor out of her reach.

"No!" Risa commanded firmly, tapping Ai's nose like she was a dog. A very adorable yet easily spooked dog. "Nooooooooo! Stay. Dont call anyone. You are over reacting. Got it?"

Takahashi whimpered as Risa stood up and gathered her collection of scary novels starting with the box under the bed. Then the 2 on the bed side table, the one in the bathroom and finally the pile in the closet. She dragged the large horde over the door and struggled holding it. Her eyebrows were the only thing visible over the cardboard box.

"I believe in science...Because there's no such thing as ghosts"

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~


Well there you have it. :D         yay~ im sorry it has been taking so long. Personal issues have prevented both Bluekinoko and myself from writing
« Last Edit: August 17, 2006, 02:17:20 AM by Mikan »

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« Reply #361 on: August 14, 2006, 06:44:27 PM »
Awww. And they were getting along so well....

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« Reply #362 on: August 14, 2006, 08:11:27 PM »
It's kinda wierd that at first Maki was the one to pursue Reina, and now that they're together Maki's the one who can't seem to handle it. :confused:

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« Reply #363 on: August 15, 2006, 02:26:56 AM »
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It's kinda wierd that at first Maki was the one to pursue Reina, and now that they're together Maki's the one who can't seem to handle it. :confused:


I know a lot of people that chase girls then cant deal with the physical side :D hahaha!

Sorry, thats the kind of direction I was heading. Damn it. Im really no good at making a good deep story!

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« Reply #364 on: August 15, 2006, 05:53:36 AM »
I hope they work things out. *waits for next update*

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« Reply #365 on: August 15, 2006, 01:02:29 PM »
I don't know if I should laugh at Maki or pity Reina or both XD

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« Reply #366 on: August 15, 2006, 01:14:39 PM »
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Actually this is based on TRUE scary story that happened to bluekinoko

One day after school she was sitting infront of the heater in her room. Someone suddenly appeared in the corner of the room and walked over to her. Long black hair and dark uniform and the medical mask. Yuki (bluekinoko) was shocked. She didnt know who the girl was. Suddenly the girl spoke in Japanese to her. "Watashi tte Kirei?"
And the girl took off her mask. Her mouth was all gray and disgusting and her mouth was cut wide.

I told her that girl was Kuchisake onna. We couldnt believe it! She visited Yuki in Australia. haha!

So...Well yes. The girl is Kuchisake Onna but also the girl that visited Yuki because apparently that girl who visited was a young girl about 17


:panda_omg2: I just realized the scary chapter was based on true story that happened to bluekinoko in Australia.....which part of Australia?!?!?!

I'm currently in Australia too.....should I be scared?? :panda_argh:

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« Reply #367 on: August 15, 2006, 05:08:05 PM »
Ow and ouch for poor Reina.
You gotta buck up Maki, pull up ya socks, don't let cutie Reina run away!! :P

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« Reply #368 on: August 17, 2006, 02:18:58 AM »
Sorry yep!
I have edited the last post and stuck a bit more in there..I hope you're ok with it. Im trying to get the next post up ASAP

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« Reply #369 on: August 17, 2006, 02:46:49 AM »
The pool outside was too inviting to resist. Kamei followed Yossui along, together diving in to the warmed waters. Aya floated eerily across the surface, bobbing up and down on the spot with a cheerful, self-satisfied look.

"This is my first time in the deep end!" She annouced happily to the new comers like a child proud that they finally can swim without the aid of a flotation device.

Kamei looked around. There was definately something missing or atleast out of place but neither of them could quiet pick it.

"Where's Miki?"

Aya beamed and pointed down under the water. A tuff of brownish hair was just visible under her feet, keeping her afloat. Aya made a jump and thrashed her way to the side of the pool letting Miki up. She spat and regurgitated a heap of water.

"*cough* Hi..."

Kamei exchanged glances with Yossui. "What the hell were you doing?"

Miki swam over to the side of the pool next to Aya to catch her breath.

"I was...*cough*...teaching her to *cough cough* swim"

Yossui laughed out loud. "You cant swim? How old are you?"

Aya shot her an icy glare - one that had a scary resemblance to Miki's. The teasing was brought to a halt as Erika skipped happily around the edge of the pool in her bright yellow bikini followed by Ishikawa and Yui showing off their matching outfits a size too small, pushing their breasts tight against the fabic. Yossui paddled over to the edge to catch her girl in a forgiving hug while the other two new arrivals showered Eri in the usual affection.

"With that hair cut she's like the next Yossui, dont you think?" Aya laughed.

Miki didnt reply at all so Aya repeated herself without much result. She trailed Miki's fixed stare over to Vi-yuu-den, who were playing a strange version of stuck in the mud with Yossui and Eri. At first she couldnt see why she was so interested but as the girls ran through the rays of light that escaped the shade cloth over head a smile grew on Aya's face. You little pervert, Miki..Are you always like this?

"You know Im naked under these..." Aya stated stupidly, snapping the elastic on the bikini top. The keyword naked thrown in as a hook to drag Miki out of what ever sick fantasy she was having. It worked.

"Huh?" Her attention quickly changed.

Aya smiled, satisfied with the effectiveness of her plan. "I said - dont you think Eri is becoming a lot like Yossui?"

Miki was a little confused, having origanally thought the conversation was on a totally different topic. "Uh, Yeah I guess..."

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

"Can I drive?" Rika skipped merrily up to Kei as she produced a set of keys with a small Kewpie key ring. She held the keys above her head, out of reach while the small innocent faced girl was showered with 'No's.

"We value our lives way too much" Shibata verbalised what they were all thinking.

Yui had driven herself here and was giving the inseperable twins, Saito and Mari a lift back. Everyone agreed it was going to be a noise ride home.

The obachan bus reaved up and rolled through the streets of Tokyo and onto the real Hyujin's. The entire time Aya's head was replaying the moment in the pool with Miki. Ever since the door to a different world was opened, a world where she could be completely in touch with Miki's body and mind, she was all for exploring it. An idea that was at first toying at the back of mind came forward. She would have to wait before she verbalised the idea. It would take some planning but she knew it would be worth it.
« Last Edit: August 20, 2006, 10:04:48 AM by Mikan »

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« Reply #370 on: August 17, 2006, 06:07:20 AM »
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"I was...*cough*...teaching her to *cough cough* swim"

Yossui laughed out loud. "You cant swim?How old are you?"

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

"We value our lives way too much" Shibata verbalised what they were all thinking.


lols these made me laugh :D
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« Reply #371 on: August 17, 2006, 06:20:53 AM »
Yay! Updates! ...They were good... I'm not sure what else to say....

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« Reply #372 on: August 17, 2006, 10:35:52 AM »
Awwww, Miki teaching Aya how to swim, that was so cute!!! :heart:

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« Reply #373 on: August 17, 2006, 03:03:43 PM »
yes.. teaching her to swim.. as if miki wouldnt take advantage of aya in the deep end.. hehehe :P nice work Mikan XD


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« Reply #374 on: August 17, 2006, 04:24:50 PM »
Omg! i was in such a hurry I didnt proof read so behold - TYPOS!!! My gosh its awful! I'll fix it all when I update :D

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« Reply #375 on: August 17, 2006, 07:25:26 PM »
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Omg! i was in such a hurry I didnt proof read so behold - TYPOS!!! My gosh its awful! I'll fix it all when I update :D


I'll help you starting with...

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Yui had driven herself here and was giving the inseperable twins, Saito and Mair a lift back. Everyone agreed it was going to be a noise ride home.


who's Mair? H!P new member? XD

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« Reply #376 on: August 20, 2006, 10:08:55 AM »
*Smell the air*

Ahhhhhh updates...sorry about such a long wait for nothing...but dont worry.

I finished that chapter and I should start a perv one too...hmm...

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« Reply #377 on: August 20, 2006, 03:57:52 PM »
perv ones.... aww man i better buck up on my postings if i wanna read your perv fics!

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« Reply #378 on: August 20, 2006, 07:26:06 PM »
Aw. Me too. A spamming I shall go!!

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« Reply #379 on: August 20, 2006, 07:44:20 PM »
uooh~ new perv chapter? can't wait :heart: :heart:

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