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« Reply #380 on: August 21, 2006, 01:53:19 PM »
The bus came to a gentle stop by the sidewalk letting it's passenegrs pile out. They stretched in the warming sunlight exchanging words of thanks before heading off to what ever business they had.

"Oi!" Yuuko called out. "Where do you think you're going?"

Several girls stopped and turned.

"You - you - you and you ...come here"

Eri, Yossui, Miki and Makoto were singled out of the bunch. Yuko stood with authority by the 4WD as the kids hearded themselves in front of her. When all was settled she walked to the boot of the car and pulled out a bucket and a packet of sponges from the glove compartment.

"Wash the car"

The girls stood in disbelief while Miki stepped forward to argue.

"Why should we?"

Miki's intimidating glare was met by Yuuko's with equal force. The selected girls watched on, unsure whether to fold and comply or to stand their ground.

Yuko crossed her arms and smirked. "As the winner of the competition your service is mine for a whole week, is that right?"

All eyes were on Yossui. "Well..uh...yeah..but -"

"So wash the car"

Eri, not wanting to make a fuss, made a dash for the bucket and sponge followed by Makoto who knew from one fateful experience in particular, it doesnt pay to mess with Nakazawa. Miki grabbed the two by the collar and held them in place.

"You werent even a legitimate participant!"

The tension grew thicker as the silence stretched out. Everyone wondered in a mixture of hope and fear if the queen of cold, Nakazawa Yuuko, had been out argued but the wanna-be-yankee Fujimoto Miki. Miki sneered, stepping closer to administer her final attack.

"So as far as Im concerned you can kiss.my.a-"

"WASH THE GODDAMN CAR!" Yuuko spat, a vein threatening to pop.

The stand off was shattered immediately as all 4 including Miki ran off to prepare the soppy water. Yuuko smiled to herself, she still had it. As Miki ran past her on the way to the car, a bucket in one hand and a cloth in the other, she leant over and gave her bum a good squeeze.

"You still have a lot to learn my young padowan"


~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

The first word that came out of Maki's mouth when she came to was a bad word. A swear word so dirty that it even surprised her. It was proof that hanging out with yankee's can have a negative influence on you. But she loved that yankee and didnt care how many new words she learnt, she just wanted her.

After standing up and sitting down a few times, trying to get the circulation flowing to her head properl, she worked her way to the door and into the hall.

"Reina!!" She thumped her fist on the young girl's door. "Reina, Im sorry. Im really sorry!"

Nothing stirred in the room.

"Reina, you there?"

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They girls finished washing the car a little later than expected. Miki thought it to be exceptionally funny to throw a wet sponge at Makoto. Who, in turn, threw it back. Having such bad aim though, meant the sponge went renagade and hit Yossui. With Yossui now involved the game esculated to a new level. She threw the sponge carefully to Makoto (not at her) and while she was busy concentrating on catching, Yossui threw the whole bucket of soapy water at her. Eri was in a totally different world and missed all of this while Miki took the chance to run over and attach the hose, holding them all at water-gun point.

"Reach for the sky, gals"

Yossui let the bucket go so that it landed snug on Makoto's head. Both girls put their hands up while Eri still stayed in her little world.

"Oi!"

Miki gave the trigger on the hose a squeeze, sending off a warning shot at Eri's feet. It was ignored.

"Oh, the hell with it"

She pulled the trigger and soaked Kamei head to toe. The dripping wet Eri blinked a few times and shivered, looking up at the sky to see if there was a freak rain storm. Still unable to figure out what exactly had happened, Miki shot her directly in the face to give her a clue. Her aim was perfect, making sure a majority of the water went inside the ears. She laughed menacingly at her victims squeals.

In the meantime, Yossui escaped to the safety of the apartment by using Makoto as a shield. Once inside the two had a mighty job getting the bucket off.

"How about if you stand on your head and I pull it down...then we have the work of gravity to help"

Like gravity ever helps but so far this was the best idea Yossui had. Makoto let out a frustrated cry and banged her bucket-ed head against the wall.

"Do I look like I can stand on my head?"

Yossui grinned as she tapped around the edges of the plastic, trying to find a soft spot. With her other hand she pulled out her phone from her pocket and took a photo.

"What was that flash?"

Yossui stuffed the phone away again after checking out her 'soon to be backdrop'. "Huh what flash?"

Makoto tried to free herself but still no luck.

"We need a lubricant" Yossui annouced scientifically. "I've got some butter back in my -"

"No" Makoto replied flatly, her voice echoing around her new prison. "Im not having a bucket on my head oozing with butter..."

Outside, Miki was still teasing Eri with the hose. She managed to back the girl into a corner, curling up into a ball to protect herself. Every time she poked her head out Miki shot at her. Yossui normally would have called a hold to such an annoying torture but the smile on Kamei's face gave away the fact that she was enjoying it.

"Got any ideas on how we can get her out?"

Yossui knocked on the bucket, much to the annoyance of Makoto, to demonstrate how stuck on it was.

"Hmmm" Miki furrowed her brow, peering up into the inside of the bucket, shooting water around the sides of the stuck girl's face. Makoto spat half the water back out.

"I dont think it's helping"

Miki stopped and stared inquinsitively back at Yossui. "Who said anything about helping?"

Yossui gave an unamused look, bringing Miki back to the seriousness of the situation.

"Ok, so...how about if use some butter to -"

"No butter!!"

Makoto blindly walked herself back to her room. Yossui watched on with amusement.

"I think it suits her"

"Yeah, its certainly an improvement"




Im getting slack and having less and less time to write. Oh gosh, please be gentle. There are a lot of beautiful stories being written around here now so atleast you wont you've wasted time coming.
« Last Edit: August 24, 2006, 03:32:57 PM by Mikan »

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« Reply #381 on: August 21, 2006, 02:34:57 PM »
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As Miki ran past her on the way to the car, a bucket in one hand and a cloth in the other, she leant over and gave her bum a good squeeze.

"You still have a lot to learn my young padowan"


*rofl* Absoutely hilarious!!!!!!

Don't worry about not writing much. It's definitely worth waiting for ^_^

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« Reply #382 on: August 21, 2006, 02:50:09 PM »
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"WASH THE GODDAMN CAR!" Yuuko spat, a vein threatening to pop.

The stand off was shattered immediately as all 4 including Miki ran off to prepare the soppy water. Yuuko smiled to herself, she still had it.


Ah. How I miss Yuuko. That was pretty damn funny.

Don't worry about the length. A paragraph of "Doki Doki" is worth three days of laughs. At least that's how I see it.

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« Reply #383 on: August 21, 2006, 04:25:40 PM »
I had forgot about the game!.
Yuko is sooooooooo cool!!! <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 ...
Thanks for this fic!

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« Reply #384 on: August 21, 2006, 07:51:58 PM »
buahaha Yuko so hilarious, she still had it in her lol ^__^
100% supports YoMiki !~:D

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« Reply #385 on: August 23, 2006, 10:09:28 AM »
I spent hours going through every page. I'm glad I did. :)

The MakixReina shenanigans are hilarious. They're really cute together. Probably my favorite couple along with RisaxTakahashi and MakoxKonno. That's pretty weird considering Yossi and Miki are my usual favorites... don't let the avatar fool you lol. Also, I never really liked Mako or Konno, but they're quite likeable in this fic. Keep up the good work!
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« Reply #386 on: August 24, 2006, 05:32:05 AM »
Thanks Levin. Its great to hear from the new comers. I always wonder how long it takes to read through the whole fic.

Bluekinoko promises to go through and read type all the chapters and fix those errors. She says it but I doubt she will.

Anyway, the real reason Im here is to announce a perv
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Muhaha!

Did anyone ever notice that any time Makoto and Konno make an appearance that Konno is on Makoto's back? Bluekinoko brought that to my attention yesterday. It was a surprise to us! Lol.

Gosh, we are so dumb!

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« Reply #387 on: August 24, 2006, 05:55:22 AM »
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It was proof that hanging out with yankee's can have a negative influence on you. But she loved that yankee and didnt care how many new words she learnt, she just wanted her.


Aw!! That's so freaking cute. I melted when I read that...

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« Reply #388 on: August 24, 2006, 07:01:46 AM »
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Did anyone ever notice that any time Makoto and Konno make an appearance that Konno is on Makoto's back? Bluekinoko brought that to my attention yesterday. It was a surprise to us! Lol.


I like KonKon on Mako-chan's back. I like them doing anything together :lol:
Yuko was soooooooooo funny, scaring the wits out of the 4 girls.

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« Reply #389 on: August 24, 2006, 03:40:31 PM »
*smells the air*

AH, Finally! A finished chapter! (Check 98) haha! Well, we are nearing 100. Wow.

bluekinoko: Man, I read all the chapters again and there are so many mistakes I cant believe it!! So I gotta go back and fix it all up. I promise I will ..even though Mikan says I cant...I will..maybe on the weekend..It'll take a while.

But yeah, the point I was trying to make is...WOW! 100 chapters! its quiet a story! It's so weird looking back and thinking "Oh, I remember writing this!"
I wonder what adventures my mind can think up of course, with the help of my little Mikan :D

Love to you all. More chapters on the way. Number 100 is suppose to be a big one. If I can keep that promise or not - we'll see!!

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« Reply #390 on: August 25, 2006, 09:10:43 AM »
More excitement for updates from me! Poor Maki and Reina... Happiness on the Commanding!Yuko, owning Miki and the others. And holy crap on the perv! Just, wow! I can't believe the D-girl madness got to you too! It's good, of course, it's always good, but the madness will never get me alive! Never!!






....Keep writing!

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« Reply #391 on: August 25, 2006, 02:09:15 PM »
ahaha ogawa buckethead :)


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« Reply #392 on: August 25, 2006, 08:23:06 PM »
holy. that took soo freakin long to read. but still. SOOO CUUUTEEEE. SOOO FREAKING FUNNY. It's a great fic! :tama-mad: I can't believe I came so late.

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« Reply #393 on: August 26, 2006, 08:56:59 AM »
It took me a while to read the story starting from the beginning, but it was worth it... I'll be here, still waiting for your next chapter... CAUSE IT"S SO GOOOODDDDDDDD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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« Reply #394 on: August 26, 2006, 02:30:07 PM »
*cries*

I had a bad day. One of those days when everyone just shits on you and bags everything you do.

ah, it feels so good to hear something positive. *cries some more*

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« Reply #395 on: August 26, 2006, 02:58:08 PM »
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*cries*

I had a bad day. One of those days when everyone just shits on you and bags everything you do.

ah, it feels so good to hear something positive. *cries some more*


Ah, man. Cheer up. The last update was great. Especially the bucket part.
What do you say we go get some shoping carts?

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« Reply #396 on: August 26, 2006, 04:49:56 PM »
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*cries*

I had a bad day. One of those days when everyone just shits on you and bags everything you do.

ah, it feels so good to hear something positive. *cries some more*



Grandfather say it doesn't rain everyday! Tomorrow will be better, so buck up!

Oh and positivepositivepositivepositivepositivepositivepositivepositive.

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« Reply #397 on: August 26, 2006, 06:44:58 PM »
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*cries*

I had a bad day. One of those days when everyone just shits on you and bags everything you do.

ah, it feels so good to hear something positive. *cries some more*


Aw Mikan. I won't shit on you, I promise! You're my hero! And a genius! So screw all the other people who have problems with you. They're just assholes.

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« Reply #398 on: August 26, 2006, 09:12:22 PM »
Konno the cupcakes in the microwave to warm up while she did laps of the kitchen. Since coming home the ball on tension inside of her had started to grow. It wasnt right keeping her graduation secret.

Just then the microwave beep and she almost died from stress.

She had over heated the cakes a little. Steam floated out the holes of the packaging and wafted tempting upwards. From haste and worry, Konno took hold of treat and removed it from the microwave. She dropped it like a hot potato as it burnt her hand, letting it splat on the floor. The fact was it was a hot cupcake, not potato. The kind of cupcake that, when heated, can reach higher temperature than that of a cooked potato. And if touched with the bare skin can cause severe burns. Konno learnt all this as she fumbled with the taps to ease her pain with cold water. Tears welled up in her eyes as she said her very first swear word out loud.

"Is that you Konkon? What happened?"

Makoto asked nervously from the door way of the kitchen. Konno inspected her hand. A nice red mark had formed but nothing serious. She put it back under the tap just to be safe and turned to see Makoto - feeling her way from the doorway to the kitchen table to sit down, with a bucket on her head.

"Im fine...more importantly - why do you have a bucket on your head?"

"Well.." The word echoed. "Im not sure...Yossui was there, a bucket full of water was involved... and that's about all I know.."

Konno quickly strapped an ice pack to her hand and helped her temporaryly impaired friend upstairs to the bedroom, forgetting her previous worries.

"We'll see if we can get it off, shall we?"

*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*

Miki returned to her room relatively dry in comparison to her other car washing companions. She sat down on the bed with a cup of coffee in one hand and her script in the other. Yoshizawa had handed out the concert plans only yesterday which left little time for Miki to memorise it all. When ever she recieve important papers concerning work she always wanted to read them a few times through to make she she understood 100%.

She had read through to the 4th page when the door opened a jar and a familiar eye peeped in.

"Oh, you are home!"

Miki looked up at Aya who had let herself in and shut the door firmly behind her, leaning against it, her hands still on the knob.

"I'm reviewing some work..I remembered that I've got a press meeting tomorrow after taping..."

Aya nodded understandingly, she was obviously dispointed about something and what Miki had just said burst the excitement over that something. Feeling a little bad, Miki flipped the papers shut and patted the spot next to her on the bed.

"Did you want to talk to me about something?"

The smile returned to Aya's face as she happily accepted the place next to Miki on the bed. From inside her red puma jacket Aya produced a rather large brown paper envelope. It looked very much like the files that Tsunku keeps in his office. Aya tipped the contense into her lap and filled the 5x7 cards into no particular order with the pictures facing away from Miki.

"Where'd you get those?" Miki asked, trying to look at the small writing in the corner of the envelope.

Aya waved her one free had, busy concentrating on the photos. "Meh, nowhere special...Ready?"

She didnt no exactly what for but she urged Aya to proceed.

"Ok, Im just going to ask you a few questions" At this point she turned the pack of cards around, showing the first photo. One of Niigaki Risa's UFA photos beamed back at Miki.

Aya cleared her throat and glanced down at the picture. "Please tell me what do you think of her"

Miki raised an eyebrow. Somehow she felt this was a psycological test. "Can you tell me what exactly you want me to comment on?"

Aya tilted her head side to side while listing of features. "..does she have sex appeal...is she good looking?..those sort of things.."

Miki shook her head ("Totally not...") and Aya made a mental note - A no for Niigaki. She placed the card on her left and revealed the next girl. Tanaka Reina.

"Good body. Tough exterior. Yeah, I think she is hot"

Miki waited for a harsh look as a reply to her comment but it didnt come. Aya gave a "He~" to show she was deeply interested in Miki's opinion. Something definately wasnt right.

"Ok, how about her?"

Miyoshi Erika.

The game went on for a while longer, repeating the same process and Aya taking mental notes the entire time. Miki had given her thoughts on almost every girl in Hello!Pro when she decided she'd had enough for one day.

"If this is one of your sick ways of seeking compliments then cut the crap you know you're the prettiest..."

Aya scrunched up her nose and giggled. "How vain do you think I am! That's not why Im asking you"

"I wouldnt put it past you!" Miki retorted.

Aya gave her a playful slap on the arm. Deciding this wasnt enough punishmnet she later tackled Miki pinning her to the bed. Instead of a kiss she gave her lover a lick starting from the jawbone and finishing with a flick at the top of her ears. The saliva styled the hair in a strange manor.

"Eww!" Miki cried out in surprise, she wasnt use to being grossed out by Aya.

Using her sleeve Miki wiped the wet trail away. As soon as it was gone Aya put another one down. This time from the tip of nose to the spot between the eyebrows.

"It smells!!" She whinned, much to the enjoyment of Aya. "Now I've got to have a shower!"

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Tsunku rumaged through his draws. Emptying the entire contents onto his bed and searched through it all.

"Where on god's green earth is it!!"

He tossed aside the salmon pillows of the couch (not pink!Salmon) and searched all around. No where in his supurbly decorated house could he find is VIP membership card for the video shop. Sighing with despair he pulled out his phone and was ready to dial his trusty friend Makoto when he remember where else it could be...the office.

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

The sun had set and the reason for the day's madness rose into the air, big and full. Calling out it's victims and making them do what they do every full moon. Go nuts.

Another party for no particular was quickly arranged in the apartment first floor. They loosely based the celebration around Sayumi not having many leading lines in songs recently thus saving the future of Hello!Pro. At first she resented it but a few beers later she couldnt care less. Yuko, who had hung around after the car wash, was responsible for the alcohol provision which she did so in record time. Even the modest, mature, responsible Iida wasnt spared. She sat proudly with underwear draped over her brow, nobody new whether they were hers or not. Either way it was a bit of a worry - she had either gone to the trouble of getting a pair from the chest of drawers...or someone at that point was going commando.

This big mistake of getting drunk so quickly resulted in poor choice of cooks for the big party dinner they decided to have only 4 minutes ago. Three girls went in and half an hour later two girls came running out. The third cook took a little more time coming out, but when she did, she did so with great haste. A flaming Tsuji burst into the living room and did the advised drop, stop and roll. The group fell silent as Nono lay still, face down on the floor. The only sound being heard was from Makoto slurping her beer through a straw up up into her new accessory, as the girls liked to call it.

"Nono?" Her fellow W member called.

Chared Tsuji pull her head up and smiled, her face a little black from the ash of her clothing but miraculously she wasnt burnt.

"Dinner's ready" She annouced.

All was forgotten at the mentioning of food and the party resumed.

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Tomorrow was a full day as usual. Taping, interviews, rehersals, the whole shabang. She excused herself from the party to go to her room. With everyone downstairs being stupid she would be able to have a nice, long, most of all uninterrupted, sleep.

She threw her clothes to the floor and brushed her teeth in her underwear, inspecting herself in the full length mirror that Rika bought. The pink decorations on the frame were undenialably disgusting but buying the mirror was a good idea.

A thought came to Yossui. One that had been asked several times at interviews.

Would I wanna be a guy?

After much thought the answer was no but she still wondered from time to time what she would have looked like if she was. The most convient point of being a guy, she thought, would be your package.

Peeing standing up, no periods...Its all pluses!

Just out of interest, purely experiental she folded 3 pairs of socks into one another then stuff them into her trunks. Standing before the mirror she inspected herself. It looked kinda cool. Just then the door opened.

Ishikawa stopped and blinked a few times. She could see her girlfriend infront of the mirror naked, except for the under which had a lump, much resembling that of what a boy would have.

"Oooook" Was the first thing she said.

Yossui held her hands out in a dont shoot fashion. "Its not what it looks like...well, it is sorta but I wanna explain"

Ishikawa shook her head. "Yossui..." She began, sounding a little sad. "Im completely not bothered I caught you with socks in your underwear pretending to be a guy...That doesnt worry me...What worries me is the fact that Im not worried about it...and that I almost expect it and dont care that you do it"

There was a long pause.

"Sooo...can I keep it in?"





Yay, finially the end of 99
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« Reply #399 on: August 26, 2006, 10:24:25 PM »
Aww, I wanted to know what Miki thought about Erika. *whines*
And WTF is with the licking? It was so unexpected, I actually had to reread the sentence twice, just to be sure I wasn't imagining things. Aya sure is weird...

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