JPHiP Radio (7/200 @ 96 kbs)     Now playing: Beck - Hit in the USA

Author Topic: Doki Doki  (Read 151146 times)

Offline Mikan

  • The Corruptor Extrodinaire
  • ecchi
  • Member+
  • Posts: 947
Doki Doki
« Reply #540 on: October 14, 2006, 06:20:58 PM »
Reina is still not talking to Maki and Maki is in despair.

I was wondering what happened with them too and was going to include them soon :D

Read the complete Doki Doki!!

Offline JFC

  • Miki's Birthday Twin
  • ecchi
  • Member+
  • Posts: 28575
    • jfcantalejo
    • jfcantalejo
Doki Doki
« Reply #541 on: October 15, 2006, 07:21:59 AM »
Quote from: Yuuyami
You nearly gave me a heart attack saying it was a guy o_o...
Same thing for me! :o

The ending was great, Miki's GOTTA get her grope on!

JPH!P :heart:'s kuro808, Fushigidane, ChrNo, Jab & marimari. Always.

Offline rndmnwierd

  • Subleader of Tsunku's Army
  • ecchi
  • Member+
  • Posts: 4824
  • What has been seen cannot be unseen.
Doki Doki
« Reply #542 on: October 15, 2006, 08:13:27 AM »
Quote from: Mikan
Reina is still not talking to Maki and Maki is in despair.

I was wondering what happened with them too and was going to include them soon :D


Lol!

Dackathon, omg! And Miki waking up next to a 'guy'!

Offline whirlywindz

  • Member+
  • Posts: 57
Doki Doki
« Reply #543 on: October 15, 2006, 10:29:26 AM »
Took me ages to finish the whole chapters posted here but it's all worth it!!!
And you've got all the classic pairings here XD
You nearly got me in a heartattack when Miki was with a guy... *waves AyaMiki flag*

Looking forward to the UDD. Gambare~

Offline Mikan

  • The Corruptor Extrodinaire
  • ecchi
  • Member+
  • Posts: 947
Doki Doki 107
« Reply #544 on: October 16, 2006, 08:25:40 AM »
Maki slumped onto her bed. It was good to be home.

Like the rest most of Morning Musume she had two taping sessions followed by a late night briefing with Tsunku to discuss the new direction her career should take. The plans on what image she was to carry were not yet finalised but so far its been a make-it-up-as-we-go-along, and Tsunku is good at those and it hasnt failed them so far.

Maki rolled onto her side while her thoughts turned from work to personal.

"Argh!" She cried out, rubbing her eyes "What am I suppose to do!!"

She caught sight of the book Eri lent her discarded on the floor. There was no answer for matters like this in books. Life doesnt have quick fixes.

But there is always helpful advice.

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

Sayumi banged her head against the window still trying to see the party next door. She was definitely going to have a bruise or something there tomorrow but what did it matter now.

”Do you think they are drunk enough yet?” She asked, breaking contact with the glass.

Eri looked at her watch. “Its been an hour so…yeah maybe”
 
Sayu grabbed a few clothes from the closet, did a superman-speed change and was out the door leaving her fellow six gen. completely by herself.

The sudden change to silence was almost eerie.

Eri put her book aside and reached for the remote.

”Fine. I’ll watch one of my videos then”

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

Yossui looked at the clock. Who would be knocking at her door this late. She immediately feared the worst, assuming another one of Yuko’s parties had caused an injury.

”What is it?” She called out, not bothering to leave the bed.

The door opened a crack and Maki peeked through. “Hey”

”Hey. Come in”

Yossui scooted over to make room for Maki who gratefully climbed in beside her.

”How can I help you?”

"You know that problem with Reina?"

"..Yeah..."

"It went from bad to worse"

"I thought something was up..." Yossui took hold of her friend's hand and gave it a gentle squeeze. "So..what happened?"

"Your advice didnt quite work, Dr Yoshizawa"

The laughter broke the tension.

"So what did she do after you passed out?"

"Left. Never to speak to me again"

Yossui lay quietly until Maki nudged her. "Well, what should I do?"

"I dont know, Im not Reina. You should go ask her what you should do"

Maki thumped Yossui arm. "That's cheating, you copied that from one of those cheesy mid-day Tv dramas"

"But it's true, isnt it"

Yossui turned to face her friend, wrapping her arms loosely around her in a sort of lazy hug. She noted how strange it felt to hold someone different at night.

"Yocchan?"

"Yeah?"

"Can I stay here tonight?"

"Sure"

Maki rested her hands around Yossui's waist and closed her eyes. It was something they had never done before but she was glad they were doing it now.

*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

Aya took hold of Miki's wandering hand and used it to pull herself ontop of her lover. The dull light that illuminated the room cast shadows across there faces and put a glint in their eyes.

Aya leant in closer and closer, planting a hand either side of Miki's head, and pressed her nose firmly against her new captive.

It would be a lie to say Miki didnt feel a little panicked. The dominatrix wasnt a role her girlfriend usually played so well.

Aya veered her head to the side and moved close to Miki's ear as if to whisper a secret but instead made a wet trail from her earlobe upwards.

Miki pouted. "Why do you lick my face. You know I dont like it"

Aya smirked as she wiped the wetness away with her own sleeve. "So...where would you like me to lick you?"




---------------------------

Muahahhahahahah!!!

That Maki, Yossui convo has to be by far the biggest piece of dialouge in the story so far :D
« Last Edit: October 18, 2006, 02:15:08 PM by Mikan »

Read the complete Doki Doki!!

Offline rndmnwierd

  • Subleader of Tsunku's Army
  • ecchi
  • Member+
  • Posts: 4824
  • What has been seen cannot be unseen.
Doki Doki
« Reply #545 on: October 16, 2006, 07:01:58 PM »
Mmm, sexy Maki... Aww, cute fish Maki....

Offline YoukaiChica

  • ecchi
  • Member+
  • Posts: 300
Doki Doki
« Reply #546 on: October 16, 2006, 08:57:49 PM »
Quote from: Mikan
Maki slumped onto her bed. It was good to be home.

Like the rest most of Morning Musume she had two taping sessions followed by a late night briefing with Tsunku to discuss the new direction her career should take. The plans on what image she was to carry were not yet finalised but so far its been a make-it-up-as-we-go-along, and Tsunku is good at those and it hasnt failed.

(finish later)


Oh Mikan, you're such a tease....

Offline Mikan

  • The Corruptor Extrodinaire
  • ecchi
  • Member+
  • Posts: 947
Doki Doki
« Reply #547 on: October 18, 2006, 02:15:50 PM »
107 is now done, hurray!!

Please visit this thread
http://forum.jphip.com/showthread.php?p=216225#post216225
I would love to get a collection going!!

Oh, and can someone please name for me that song by Viyuuden that everyone was talking about because Erika was kinda like humping Rika. I would love any help :D

Thanks!!

Everyones favourite fruit,
Mikan

Read the complete Doki Doki!!

Offline jafeijai

  • Member+
  • Posts: 4661
  • Music is my life ♪
Doki Doki
« Reply #548 on: October 18, 2006, 04:53:29 PM »
[laughs at Sayumi's superhuman speed] XD the randomness never dies down, now does it? XDXD

Offline rndmnwierd

  • Subleader of Tsunku's Army
  • ecchi
  • Member+
  • Posts: 4824
  • What has been seen cannot be unseen.
Doki Doki
« Reply #549 on: October 18, 2006, 07:02:15 PM »
Lol, Sayu and Eri.

Quote
"So...where would you like me to lick you?"

Ha, I die.

Maki and Yossui? Cuddling? Hope Rika doesn't find out.

Offline JFC

  • Miki's Birthday Twin
  • ecchi
  • Member+
  • Posts: 28575
    • jfcantalejo
    • jfcantalejo
Doki Doki
« Reply #550 on: October 18, 2006, 07:15:19 PM »
Quote from: Mikan
Oh, and can someone please name for me that song by Viyuuden that everyone was talking about because Erika was kinda like humping Rika. I would love any help :D
If it's a PV that we're talking about, it's Kaccho Ii Ze! JAPAN I think.

Great job as always on the new chapter BTW. :)

JPH!P :heart:'s kuro808, Fushigidane, ChrNo, Jab & marimari. Always.

Offline Yuuyami

  • Hardhat? ( ¯ロ¯ );;
  • Global Moderator
  • Member+
  • *
  • Posts: 1609
  • Prance. Do it. Now. N.O.W.
Doki Doki
« Reply #551 on: October 18, 2006, 09:13:29 PM »
Oooh, good chapter :]~!

Sayu's Supaawuman XD~!

I wonder how the Maki and Reina confrontation will work out :]~!

Write more~!

-wears hardhat just in case-

Offline Mikan

  • The Corruptor Extrodinaire
  • ecchi
  • Member+
  • Posts: 947
Doki Doki
« Reply #552 on: October 19, 2006, 08:37:41 AM »
Kaccho Ii Ze! JAPAN ?? Damn, I downloaded the dance versiona nd was cheating the humping scene!!! Maaaa!!

Ok, in regards to writing. I'll get around to it.

Read the complete Doki Doki!!

Offline Mikan

  • The Corruptor Extrodinaire
  • ecchi
  • Member+
  • Posts: 947
Doki Doki 108
« Reply #553 on: October 19, 2006, 09:13:18 AM »
Mari jumped up and down on the table waving her arms madly. "All girls with green sticks over 'ere!! That means Kago, Ayaka, Mai, Ayumi and...Oh Masae. Cool. You lot get your butts over here now"

Yasuda preeched at the opposing end of the room. "Tsuji, Johnson, Saito, Megumi and Maeda Yuki. You guys are in red with me"

Nakazawa blew the whislte from the supply box and called an immediate silence.

"Alright, Im referee. I'll be waiting at the Family Mart down the road. You have one hour before game over. Everyone please take one of these"

Yuko threw team leader, Yasuda and Mari a plastic bag each and another envelope. The plastic bag contained one-size-fits-all basketball shirts in appropriate team colours while the envelope had inside a copy of the pants list.

She then set her phone down on the table and made her way over to the door, giving her last instructions. "When the phone rings, the game is on"

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

Yossui lay on her side with Maki still pressed close into her back. It was calming and moreover, it was warm. That was, until, Maki shifted in her sleep moving in a little closer.

What on earth...

Yossui opened her eyes, remaining perfectly still. She could feel something strange against her lower back. Every now and again the pressure would move up before returning to its origanal place. It took a while for Yossui to realise it was moving in unison with her companions breathing.

"Goto?"

"Hfrmm.."

"Goto"

"Whah?.."

"Do you have something in your pocket?"

Maki lazily lifted the sheets to check her pockets on the jeans she forgot to change before getting into bed.

"No"

"Alright then..."

Yossui rested her head back down on the pillow, letting her friend snuggle up behind her once more. It didnt take long for the prodding to return. Trying to ignore it wasnt an option. The tickling was too irriating and the thoughts of what it might be were too disturbing. Instead of asking this time, Yossui decided to investigate by ripping the sheets down, sneaking down Maki's jeans and looking for herself.

"AAAH, WHAT THE HELL IS THAT!!"

Goto, who had fallen asleep again, jumped awake to find her pants by her ankles. "WHAT WHAT?!"

Yossui's screams changed from surprise to amusement as she started to jump up and down on the bed point at her friends crotch. "What..the HELL IS THAT!!!"

Maki followed the excited Yoshizawa's eyes down to between her legs. She was a little confused as to what was so shocking. "It's called a V-"

"Not it isnt" Yossui cut in, kneeling down beside Maki and with a steady hand, poked the small bulge poking up through her Doraemon underwear.

"Ow!! Cut that out" Maki responded by slapping Yossui's hand away which had no real affect as she refused to give up her investigation.

"You have a lump there" Yossui proclaimed a little too happily. "What is it, are you hiding something"

She made an attempt to pull the underwear off but was thwarted by slapping hands.

"Nothing is in there. 100% Goto. GIRL goto"

"No way"

"Yeah way"

"Then what is this?" The bump was tapped to emphasise the point

"Bone. Everyone has it"

"Yeah maybe but not like that!"

Accusations stopped there for the moment as both girls stared at the odd lump.

"Can...can I touch it?"

"No!" Goto replied immediatly, pulling her pants up and rolling over. "G'night Hitomi"

"Night Gocchin"


--------------

I have a picture that kind of inspired this chapter and a friend who kinda has the same hip thingy as Goto..  :D First time I saw it, I thought was Yossui was thinking
« Last Edit: October 20, 2006, 03:56:46 PM by Mikan »

Read the complete Doki Doki!!

Offline A1

  • The Original Caramel Love
  • ecchi
  • Member+
  • Posts: 2557
Doki Doki
« Reply #554 on: October 19, 2006, 09:42:13 AM »
Quote
Yossui opened her eyes, remaining perfectly still. She could feel something strange against her lower back. Every now and again the pressure would move up before returning to its origanal place. It took a while for Yossui to realise it was moving in unison with her companions breathing.


Da Man? XD

Offline Sukoshi

  • Member+
  • Posts: 1243
  • Forever in love with the turtle and the hare
Doki Doki
« Reply #555 on: October 19, 2006, 11:23:07 AM »
lol!  Oh that sayu...i think she's going to be the first one to lose her hotpants!  and rofl at maki XD

Offline Yuuyami

  • Hardhat? ( ¯ロ¯ );;
  • Global Moderator
  • Member+
  • *
  • Posts: 1609
  • Prance. Do it. Now. N.O.W.
Doki Doki
« Reply #556 on: October 19, 2006, 11:28:23 PM »
Is this going where I think it's going? XD

Offline Mikan

  • The Corruptor Extrodinaire
  • ecchi
  • Member+
  • Posts: 947
Doki Doki
« Reply #557 on: October 20, 2006, 03:58:16 PM »
I finished the chapter :D

GO READ to find out the TRUTH :D

Read the complete Doki Doki!!

Offline jafeijai

  • Member+
  • Posts: 4661
  • Music is my life ♪
Doki Doki
« Reply #558 on: October 20, 2006, 05:10:01 PM »
EEHHH?! XD random hip bone sticking out hahahaha XD

Offline JFC

  • Miki's Birthday Twin
  • ecchi
  • Member+
  • Posts: 28575
    • jfcantalejo
    • jfcantalejo
Doki Doki
« Reply #559 on: October 20, 2006, 07:51:50 PM »
Quote from: Anghellic1
Da Man? XD

XD DA MAN!!! XD

JPH!P :heart:'s kuro808, Fushigidane, ChrNo, Jab & marimari. Always.

JPHiP Radio (7/200 @ 96 kbs)     Now playing: Beck - Hit in the USA