Doki Doki

[Blizzard]

I'm kind of in that frame of mind where I know it's ended, but it just hasn't sunk in yet.  No more anxiously waiting for a new chapter of Doki Doki to brighten my days.     Well, atleast now when I get around to my reread, I won't have to worry about forgetting again.  It definately is a classic though!

So, are you going to start any new lengthy fics?  I saw that you've posted a couple shorter ones, but I haven't read them yet.  I'm getting there though. 

Either way, I'll still be a loyal Mikan follower!   

[JFC]

It's been a great run. Thanks to both writers.

[jenmoshka]

*implodes*  yeah, yeah...I had to change it up this time.   

It's the end of an era as Doki Doki comes to completion!! Well done Mikan, well done!  Since my last comment was incredibly cheap I'll just have to make this one extra-long.  2nd last chapter seemed to wrap things up nicely which I was happy about, however I think I forgot where a couple of the sub-stories were going...that just gives me the excuse (like I really need an excuse...) to go back and reread all of the story again!  Yossui being all sweet and leadah-like with Makoto made me melt (go figure) but for the rest of the chapter I couldn't help but have a huge grin on my face while reading.  And I won't even comment on all the spelling errors...heh..heheh.. 

Anyway! Short and sweet, excellent last chapter, and thanks for the recap on those few little details, forgot about some of those...Like Blizzard, I'm hoping you'll continue writing some lengthy fics, but no matter the length, it's always fun to look forward to something by the Great Mikan!

  ed it!!

[Owaranai_sLaVe]

But...But...WHY?!
My first PTA Approved Fanfic...finished. Done. *sobs*. I enjoyed the Takagaki a lot, and although I dont ship GAM at all, that last part was cute >.>;
Oi Mikan, you happen to have more of those cookies? My friend banned me from cookies >.>;
MILO! holy shizznite! Although I prefer Ovaltine... but those two aren't so big here in the U.S. (Take me back to the PI, someone? ;__;)

PTA cookie...??? Like, Parent-Teacher Association?

I'm glad you asked that, Orange. If you read my siggie, it's TOTALLY not a Parent-Teacher Association, although I (with the help of others from H!O) created it to fool others. It's more known through the internet as PERVY THINKERS ASSOCIATION And Kinoko's/Mikan's great ass fic was the first to be approved. would you like to join?

-Owaranai_sLaVe

[00HB]

Waaaaaa..... It's always a bit sad when great fics end but as Neil Gaiman said:
"Q: Why is Sandman such a great story?
A: Couse it has a beggining, a development and specialy an end."
It's such a great story! And it made me worship Mikan-sama (just like so many of us, here)
Well done Blue_kinoko and Mikan! We had some great time reading this fic!
Now I'm ready for another new stories! xD

[btw, lovelly ending! But you know.... I just LOVE Makoto so that's for granted!]

[katatsumuri]

Thank you both writers for this really great fanfic. I join this forum because of this fic 
I lost count the number of times I LOL while reading the chapters, something I still do when I go back to read at them again. Well, all good things come to an end.  Thanks once again.

[orangesocks]

I'm glad you asked that, Orange. If you read my siggie, it's TOTALLY not a Parent-Teacher Association, although I (with the help of others from H!O) created it to fool others. It's more known through the internet as PERVY THINKERS ASSOCIATION And Kinoko's/Mikan's great ass fic was the first to be approved. would you like to join?

-Owaranai_sLaVe

Yes! Let's all perv over stuff together!! 

And...

I can't believe it's actually over! Thank you Blue Kinoko and Mikan for writing such a funny and fascinating fic.

[stefy]

Its over??? Aww manz... Oh well, Thank you Mikan and bluekinoko so much for such an awsome fic. Many parts were hilarious, and I especially loved every Ishiyoshi moment in this fic. And hope your planning to start a new fic soon!!

*off to page 1~ I'm gonna read it all over again

[rndmnwierd]

Now I'm going to go back and read the whole thing over again. Be right back...

[Mikan]

Hey, for all of you re-reading can you let me know if the perv links are still there and if they still work?

[Sukoshi]

Ah the ending was unexpected and expected at the same time.  Thank you for putting so much time and effort into the story.

Thank you Bluekinoko and Mikan 

[rndmnwierd]

Perv links are down, Oh Great One.

[Mikan]

Oh for f^cks sake...
Well, I redid all the links of Inside the Mikan so I guess Ill get cracking on Doki Doki.

[modesta107]

sad that there wasnt much Eri x Sayu in the later chapters :/

but still nice story

[takagakifan]

i don't know how i came a cross this but im so happy i did first chapter got me hooked and i havent been able to take my eyes off the computer.....i  LOVED it... a bit sad that i couldn't read the pervy sections(not enough post) but when i do thats the first thing im gonna do

[sweeety]

     Same, this was one of the first fics I read on this site and I'm glad someone bumped it cause I totally forgot about it. I forgot most of it so I am totally gonna reread this but I remember that I loved every second of it and it was awesome. And when you read the perv I don't think you will be disapointed....That I think I remember.....It was funny how Aya was a huge nympho after she finally did it with Miki! I loved that part!

     I found it soooo funny and contradictory, especially since the story started with a Miki so horny she couldn't see straight and soo whipped she couldn't move without Aya's aproval! Then the sad bit when they split up. I think I cried..... But then they got back together and they were just funny! Especially how after the first time they did it (u know what it is ... right?) and then Aya just wouldn't stop and wanted to keep doing it all the time and Miki was out of energy and stuff and totally spent all the time I just rofledmao when I read that.

     I was like "Damn, Aya should give Miki a break, she isn't some sort of sex machine!" as a joke and then I laughed so hard when I realised it was true........ I thought she was just tired from a sickness or from ..... I don't know, staying up to watch Aya sleep or something sappy or stupid, but thiss.........this exceeded my funnyness excpectations!

     I first thought it was a YoMako from some comment above, but the more I think of it the more I think maybe Makonkon? I can't remember..... I really should read this again. But I love it, seriously. You guys are awesome!

[Mikan]

Wow. I just read the story from start to finish. Its been such a long time I dont even remember most of the stuff in there. It was nice to see that I find myself amusing. And it also brought back a few memories of the time when I was writing it.

I guess one that spring to mind is a chapter at the very beginning of the story where Konno's friend Yama-something a rather Risa dies. Murdered on the way home from school. And that became the key thing that made Konno leave.. which really is the entire story (subtly!) lol.

That entry was based on true stories. Yes, two.

Bluekinoko's friend was murdered around that time.
Maybe as a way of dealing with she probably wrote about it. Thats just my speculation. I just thought it was a little too convinient.

Oh yeh and the other thing was there was a little girl murdered around that time too. I remember reading the article Blue sent me and I can recall her commenting 'Murdering a young girl. Where is the sense in that'.
Which then became Konno's line

The waxing story with Pookie...also based on truth. I was peer pressured into waxing myself.

And the last thing that I dont expect many people to really pick up or care about but its worth a mention anyway.
Both Blue and I are transgendered. Meaning we were girls but are now physically becoming men. Im getting my medicine very soon which will allow me to start having a male puberty.
How this relates to Doki Doki.... well...
We used Yossui to relate some of our stress and to a lesser extent Maki. Blue and I would both stuff our pants and imagine.

Anyway...

Wow.. a lot has changed since then. Time flies!
I do miss the days of writing this. It made me feel close to you -the readers. We had a odd bond  I miss that.
Gone in a heart beat, eh

[strawb3rrykream]

I had no idea this story was so deep. I really love it and am so glad you guys wrote it! Even though I didn't really get to comment while it was happening, it was probably the first fanfic I read start to finish. Knowing the story behind it is really moving. About the transgendered thing, I'm not sure how to respond to it but.....just want you to know it's cool with me. Might not mean much to you but just thought I'd put my two cents in.
You're writing a new story so maybe the connection can be rekindle?

[sweeety]

    ..................That  explains soooo much..........

     Poor blu, I hope you got over your friend, I kind of know the feeling, I a sooo sory about your friend, are you ok? Poor blu!

     I had forgotten what happened with Konno and stuff and why she left and whatnot. I think she was the one dating Makoto right? I can't remember... Anyway, I really liked the story, it was very funny and sad and emo and stuff. Made me feel a wide variety of feelings.

     I agreegree with Konno and Blue, there is no sense in muurdering a poor child, it is just sick and twisted and a waste of life. I instantly hate the person that did it and there is no excuse for it.



"The waxing story with Pookie...also based on truth. I was peer pressured into waxing myself."

     Pookie? you mean Yoshi and Eri? Lol, that was soooooo funny! But I felt soooo sorry for them. I know the feeling! Even though I've never had to suffer a full body wax or had my legs waxed but I have a hairry upper lippy sooooooooooooooo yeah, every frickkin week I feel that pain..... and no it doesn't stop hurting or hurt less.....my cousin totally lied! lol.

     And whats worse is when you do it yourself and you stuff up so you have to keep doing it over and over again..... untill you are so red you resemble a tomatoe. And even though they say that armpits are one of the worse places I found they hurt less than the legs.....too bad they bleed more though..... anyway, enough with the waxing advice.......no wait I have a few tips.
     After waxing, get a cotton bud covered in oil (normal oil or baby oil)  and dab it on the waxed spot. This gets rid of the wax and makes your face not sticky. Also immediately after waxing or whenever you see your skin starting to get red, I've found that if you put soothing lotion (aloe vera kicks ass) on the spot real quick and then leave it for a bit untill it stops hurting then wipe it off you can avoid redness after waxing. It works all the time.

     By doing the above I can be sure I'd look good (and not red) even a few hours after waxing which is when I usually get really red. So I can put it off untill a few hours before a party or something.
     waxy time~!

   ichi *whimpers* nii~ *more whimpering* niiiiii~ *waaaah* niiiiii and a haalf *oooooohhhh maaaannnn * san! *OOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWW!*

     uhh oh! That can't be good! PS SAY IT LOUD AND SAY IT PROUD! You have the official sweeety seal of approval! Nuthin wrong with you and don't let anyone tell you otherwise, now if you'll excuse me I missed....... Oh crap Ileaned on the other strip and its stuck on my elbow... this is gonna hurt!
     
     

[Mikan]

NG TIME!!
Brought to you by SWEETY



OK: Takahashi shook her head whiping Niigaki with her hair ("Ow")
NG: Takahashi shook her head, wiping Niigaki with her hair ("Ow")

Sweety: lol, I got this mental image of Ai rubbing her hair on Risa's face

OK: Konno chewed the cracker slowly
NG: Konno chewed the cracket slowly

Lol, yeh I dont know what a cracket is either. The thing that springs to mind is the cracken from Pirates That wouldnt be too tasty.

Yeh, I reread it all as I said and I noticed a lot of mistakes and stuff in it. Oh well. It makes it funnier I guess