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A Stupid Feelings [Atsumina]
« on: January 18, 2015, 01:30:52 PM »
Domoo! i'm new here :D  , but i alwaaaaaaaays read in here hehe  XD . okay this my first fanfic i hope you like it , i really nervous you know >__< . sorry if my english bad :( but i'll do my best! .  8)

prologue

I sit here as usual, I'm waiting for someone who is very important for me in this cruel world and also the most loved wholeheartedly .. maybe my love for her is very restricted and probably everyone would consider me disgusting .. But trust me my feelings for her not only a feeling for best friend .. this has developed into a feeling of 'Love'. I know my love may not be reciprocated, indeed I am? Of course I can not force her to love me back but .. it seems the feeling is not impossible to know ..
I know it .. and I dare to hurt .. here I am Takahashi Minami.



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Re: A Stupid Feelings [Atsumina]
« Reply #1 on: January 18, 2015, 01:43:34 PM »
One-sided love is so   :smhid :smhid :banghead: :banghead:   XD XD

Good luck to your fic   :on GJ: :on GJ:
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Re: A Stupid Feelings [Atsumina]
« Reply #2 on: January 18, 2015, 01:55:32 PM »
Yeay! Atsumina new ff. Since others ff of Atsumina have no update, i'm counting on u Author San. Good luck :cow:

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Re: A Stupid Feelings [Atsumina]
« Reply #3 on: January 18, 2015, 03:01:17 PM »
Oh.. New story!  :w00t:  Good luck with writing and can't wait first chapter..  8)


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Re: A Stupid Feelings [Atsumina]
« Reply #4 on: January 18, 2015, 03:10:07 PM »
Can't wait... ^^

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Re: A Stupid Feelings [Atsumina]
« Reply #5 on: January 18, 2015, 11:10:48 PM »
Yeah... Atsumina...

AH... Love between girls is disgusting huh????

Interesting concept and idea there...

Can't wait to find out how the story is going to develop

Thank you for the new story

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Re: A Stupid Feelings [Atsumina]
« Reply #6 on: January 19, 2015, 01:40:49 PM »
Waa my sory can make some people intersted huh?  :hehehe: , sorry if this is not what you want but I'm trying  :sweat: . ANDD PLEASEE COMMENT HEHE

and sorry if this chapter too short  :mon whimper:



Chapter 1

"Minami!"

I snapped out of my reverie, it turns out she has been here, beside me.

"Atsuko w-what? Don't surprise me like that!, maybe I could die young if you always like that! "I pinched the adorable cheeks , and i can see she pouted me cutely but soon after that she smile again.

"Eeeh ~? If you die I'll follow you Mi-na-mi~ " she answered with a teasing tone and maybe able to make my heart beat twice faster than a normal human , that adorable face makes me want a quick hug her and would not let go again NEVER, argh! Atsuko you really drives me crazy!

"How was school today? Is it fun? "I changed the subject immediately before I killed a heart attack because of her.

"Hmm .., today I get 20 love latters and its contents boring" she said as she walked beside me.

I thought for sure she would answer like that, because she is a Maeda Atsuko, a girlfriend who really dreamed by every man on this earth, cute-looking,very intelligent brain, perfect body, soul soothing voice, the smile that makes your day bright, kindness scaled by her father as an angel and natural beauty was revealed by her mother who will probably make you fall in love at first sight ..
and I was one of those who fell in love with her ..

without me realize I'm dreaming again

"Minami ~! , What do you think? From the earlier you always daydreaming if there is something wrong? "Asked atsuko with a worried voice .

"Ah um I'm not just thinking about my grades are down lately" okay I lied , for salvation to be asked to the death by her.

"Hmm so, if you want me to teach you I would be happy to receive you know ~" Atsuko looked at me and we kept walking

"No need .. anyway you've stayed with me and it was enough for me .." I said quietly as possible that I could

"Eh? What are you talking about? " Thankfully she did not hear it ..

"Nandemonaiyo ~" I said and ran leaving

"Eeeh ?! Minami! matte !! "Atsuko with a loud shouted and ran after me

"Catch if you can!!" I Challenged her and ran to the playground near our house.

we continue to pursue each other without a clear purpose, it sounds childish but it is fun! i really have fun with her , I can feel I'm alive, to feel pleasure, feeling that my life was not in vain, feeling the warmth, feel the love is growing stronger ..

after we were tired, (actually I'm tired of running because my legs are small like this one) we sat on the porch swing and breathe oxygen so much as possible. Maybe other people think we are two high school students who are playing silly as crazy. but I don't care if it's with her. with me to know everything I do is right and also fun, and her would accompany me forever.. we both enjoyed this silence, we are busy with their own thoughts, I wonder if Atsuko think about me? until the sound was coming ..

"ah ! acchaan!"

we both turned to the source of a very shrill voice I recognize in this world is only one who has such a shrill voice. Yuko.

"ah yuko~"atsuko stand of swing and jogged toward Yuko and finally they embraced, actually I'm a little jealous of that scene, but I know it's just a hug friendship

"what the hell are you doing here? why you alone? where your bakamidget?" Yuko ask to atsuko and still don't realize I'm here.

"as you can see I'm playing here, nope I'm not alone .. uhm you know I'm here to play with Minami" Atsuko replied shyly
soon I saw atsuko give a gap that yuko can see my presence here

"Yo! takamidget! o hisashiburi yoo nee~" i can see yuko came to me with a big smile in her face .

"ha? yuko , you ALWAYS meet me in the workplace" I answered with a mocking tone


"hehe, but I've missed you takamina is a great partner of the day did not see you it feels like a year for me ~" yuko walked up to me with her hands stretched ready to hug me

but never thought Atsuko was behind yuko ..

"yuko! stop talking sweet like that to Minami, if you forward it I do not know what to do Haruna you!" Atsuko pull the collar and threw uniform yuko. Atsuko you stronger.

"Tch, acchaan you do not have to be jealous of the midget, you know you are the most beautiful woman in our school and you're probably the mascot of our school, and not to mention you were always approachable by all students of our school, and you still want to be jealous of the midget and more--"

 i can see Atsuko tried to cover squirrel

"o-oi Atsuko maybe you should release your hand now , if you don't want that squirrel dead" okay i'll try to be nice with yuko here , BUT someday i will ask for pay for this hihi.

atsuko finally releasing his hand from yuko and ran to me with innocent face

"FUAAAH ! , Arigatou midget if you don't say like that maybe i will never see my NyanNyan Body Forever"

"Tch you really pervert yuko"

"Bu-" i can hear my phone ringing when yuko want to answer my mockery .

"sorry , i will go for a minute" I excused myself for a while on their

"Moshi-moshi?" i answered when i know who call me at this time . so rare actually

"ah okaa-chan" (okaa-san = mother)

"minami-chaan where are you now? i'm at home you know , let's have a dinner together tonight , if you want ask atsuko-chan to come too , it will be fun if she want nee.. minami-chaan~"

"Urusai yooo oka-chan!! , ah so rare you home right now kaa-chan , okaay i'll be there , if i'm lucky atsuko will come kaa-chan ////"

"ah hurry okaay? i got many food heree~ . ah my doughter now grow up huh? good luck my musume ! fight!"

tuut...tuuut...tuuuut

and that's.. my lovely mother style

I went back to the last swing and I just saw atsuko were swinging there.

"aah gomeeen, if I'm too long Atsuko, eh? where yuko? what you fight and one you have to go home?" I teased her

"nope , yuko had affairs with her and her leave me alone here" Atsuko pouted cutely , oh god why you create this cute girl? i pinch her cheeks

"hee rude yuko , leave a angel here alone" i see her eyes , thats sparkling.. and her cheeks turn pink.. are she blush?

"a-aah yeah! you right! and who calls you minami?" she asked . hee? whether she changed the subject? , Cute ~

"ah my mom asked if you want to come to my place for dinner with her , s-sure if you can't is no problem for me.." ahh why I was nervous ??!

"umm .. it's okay , anyways my parents were away so it's sounds good! let's go minami i'm starving!" she walked ahead of me

"Matte yoo atsukooooo !!" i ran leads to her okaa-chan thanks to pyring for my luck!

tbc~

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Re: A Stupid Feelings [Atsumina]
« Reply #7 on: January 19, 2015, 07:49:05 PM »
I want more..!! :panic:
Its looks like interesting story!
Please continue!  :)



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Re: A Stupid Feelings [Atsumina]
« Reply #8 on: January 19, 2015, 08:37:44 PM »
sweet scene^^
another chapter please~ hahaha :nervous

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Re: A Stupid Feelings [Atsumina] (28-01-2015)
« Reply #9 on: January 28, 2015, 02:15:59 PM »
@black_maa : aaa yokatta~ my favorite writers here >_< thankyouu

oke this next story sorry if this too sort  :fainted: i really thinking how to break readers hurt  :cry:

for silent readers THANKYOUU  :mon kissy:

Chapter 2

On the way home there was silence between us, the silence which is very convenient for me .. I know maybe this time we just shut up with their own thoughts, but I'm trying not to smile happy that does not look like a crazy person by her hehe. I wanted to know what was in it when I think about this, what she thought about the way I always thought of in every second of my life? Did she think of others? ... uh oh I'm very curious!

And we have come to my house, my house is too big for my mother and myself. and so .. quiet and dark.

"Tadaimaaaa ~, okaa-Chaan" I opened my door and atsuko just follow me

"Ojaamashimasu .." (sorry to bother. This sort of manners in Japan when I want to enter someone's house)

"Ah! Minami-chan! At-chan! Okaerii nasai ~

"my mother came from the kitchen, she was only wearing a tank top covered by an apron and a pair of very short for old age! And worse she hugged atsuko not me who plays a daughter!

"Ah obaa-chan! Hisashiburi yo ne? Genki desu ka? " Atsuko asked my mother as she hugged , that should be me ..

"Genki dayo! Acchan you look more beautiful than ever! no wonder Minami-chan increasingly fall on you ~ "AH MY MOTHER ALWAYS LIKE THAT!

"Okaa-Saan ?! Urusaii yoo! then why are you dressed like that? Can you dressed like the other mothers? Ugh okaa-san .."
she looked at me confused and so is Atsuko, did I say something wrong?

"Aaa ~! Minami-chan want me like the other mothers? My heart aches Minami-chan hiks.. ~" my mother ran to the back of the back Atsuko like she wants to ask for protection from someone who I like, okaa-san you're not fair!

"Minami! Don't like that to your mother! Quick to apologize! . NOW!" Heee ?! Why is this like I'm the villain here? I could see my mother laugh behind her back atsuko! shit! okaa-san! can not be allowed if this continues I shall lose it at any time atsuko came to my house ..!

"HEE? Why do I have to apologize atsuko? "I protested Atsuko directly at me with a look of sinister

"Minami .. NOW!" Why this woman could look so sinister ?! Ugh damn you mom! I could see it once again stifle a laugh and this time she showed the finger 'V'!

"Okey ... mom i'm sorry .." okay mom now I give up .. you win ..

"Apology accepted! ~ Nee I'm hungry let's eat! Acchan come here, come eat with us " atsuko and my mother's hand and headed to the kitchen and left me with my failed expression .

I followed those already seated at the dinner table, uwaaaa a lot of food here! Does she buy? not, he may not buy as much food as this. he's probably better to buy a new laptop for the time-consuming job of it!

"Taadaa ~ Minami-chan quickly sit down! We're both hungry !! "my mother told me to quickly sit down at the dinner table, I could see Acchan smiled at me .. okay if you asked me not to eat I would be glad to tell you to take all of this for me one of her smile was enough for me ..

Ittadakimasuu ~

We say it together, let's great fun! Feel there are two people who are very you love in this world, sat together, joked together and laugh together .. maybe I'm the happiest person for this moment, considering my mother was always busy with her work..
My mother was a single parent she raised me alone, my mother gave birth to me when she was fifteen years old is very young, and now knows where my dad was clear I was not going to look for it and also will not care about him.
My mother expelled by a grandmother-grandfather because it is considered shameful family name, but she still tried raising me by renting a small room once, I remember when I could just sleep and watch TV there and nothing else.

But I feel happy, I'm happy because you have a mother who loved me. then she wrote the story of her life and she sends it to the post office, my mother unexpectedly writing is very popular and very best-selling sudden she became a famous novelist, her novels often made into a film by some directors. Knowing this we also improved life, my mother bought me a huge house when asked why she simply answered "I just don't want you to feel embarrassed when you invite your friends to our home" as that is the answer, my mother is very different from people not most mothers she works dead- nail just to support me with abundant riches but in return she always had time for me.

I understand, when the other children being scolded by their parents because get bad grades she just said "Minami-chan, are you mad at me because I did not pay attention to you? Sorry about that I too busy, I will try to find an opportunity to play with you again, I promise" that promises made my mother, since then she always had time for me, although only two times a month but it is worth it to me, sometimes we just going to play in amusement park or something. And when I told her I liked a girl she just smiled at me and said "if you love and love to eat strive to get it, I will always support you Minami-chan" really I was the luckiest kid .. and who knows my mother is just Atsuko , because he who always I tell my mom.

"Minami-chan! , Why did you just say something? Are you sick? "My mother asked me which makes my thoughts disappear

"Minami yeah, why are you silent and not eat? Are you unwell? "I turned towards atsuko seen once in her face worried me

"Ah! No I am not anything okaa-chan, atsuko, I just feel happy just to be with you here" I answer both those questions is different, but the same goal
I could see they were silent for a moment, I saw my mother smile at me

"Minami-chan you know? You are sweet talker like him "
I can only hold my head bowed down with shame do not want in teased by a parent seems if I flushed now!

"Un ~ minami you look very romantic moment, this one is why I want to always be near you ~ that is the nature of your little very soft!"
I glared atsuko sitting opposite me being stuck out her tongue at me, let them both have similarities! : Both liked to make me embarrass!

"Mouu ~ Urusaii yoo okaa-chan! Acchan! "I looked down because I do not want them to see me blush

"Araa ~ Minami-Chaan very red face! Hahaha it's so much fun to tease you should know that, nee Acchan? "She looked at her atsuko who nodded in agreement
Arghh .. !! they both really!

"Okaa-chan! Urusai! . But okaa-chan.. why did you buy and make this much food? whether this is an important day? "I finally could change the subject

"Uuw Minami you always change the subject when you're cornered hehe" What ?! Now atsuko also chimed mocking me? Arghhh why the two of them could be so compact?!?!

"Sou desu nee yoo Acchan you already knew it turns ahahaha" ugh and now they were both laughing at me! damn it!

"You have not answered me okaa-chan" I interrupted their laughter annoying but makes me happy

"Of course this important day! Because I'm going to dinner with my daughter who has grown up! So I bought some food and food ingredients and then cook it enough im smart right? hehehe "I saw my mother with her acting believe it

"Hai hai, you are the smartest of all time mother okaa-chan" I give up if this time you fight her again maybe I will in embrassed again in front atsuko
When I saw atsuko, she was silent and smiling I do not understand what's wrong with that sudden silence like it and it seems she is also aware of

"Atsuko? Why are you silent on that? Is something wrong? "I asked her worried

"Yeah Acchan? Are my food too bad? Sorry if it's not delicious "my moter looks worried, their
Realizing that question atsuko rush to answer

"Ah! not like that obaa-chan! your food always tasty as usual, but it's just that I'm a little jealous of you two .. you look very close .. even you do not look like mother and daughter. not like me are always alone at home hahahaha "
I could feel atsuko bitter tone, I looked at my mother and my mother nodded

"Acchan .. you do not need to feel jealous of us, you know? You're always welcome here, this house is your house too, I know how busy your parents so do not hesitate to stay here, I'm sure Minami-chan happy to share a room with you "I could feel my mouth wide open, damn I should have the to speak!

"Thank you obaa-chan .. I'm very happy .." atsuko see the two of us with a smile that always makes my day-colored ..

"Saaa ~ let's spend this food and went to bed, you do not want to be late to school right?" My mother asked us

"Haaai" I replied in unison I and atsuko

**
After eating my mom told us to quickly go to sleep and as usual atsuko wearing sexy pajamas it .. oh if this happens every day I do not promise that I will be blown every day

"Nee minami" atsuko calling for immediate large to bed it

"Nani?"

"Do you know? You're like a Sister to me "

DEG ..

Sister? ...

Is that what you feel for me atsuko?..

*Tbc

How? i really do the best for this chapter sorry if this chapter no romantic scene  :mon POd: but next chapter i will do my best  :mon study:

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Re: A Stupid Feelings [Atsumina]
« Reply #10 on: January 28, 2015, 04:01:12 PM »
so much fun
update soonp author san  :)

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Re: A Stupid Feelings [Atsumina]
« Reply #11 on: January 28, 2015, 07:19:43 PM »

Them really like to tease Minami.  XD
Acchan only think about Minami like as sister?!? :huhuh  .....You can't do that!!!  :smh
I hope Acchan very often will stay at Minamis place...  :D


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Re: A Stupid Feelings [Atsumina]
« Reply #12 on: January 29, 2015, 02:53:19 AM »
Sisterzone(?)  :shocked :shocked

update soon^^

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Re: A Stupid Feelings [Atsumina]
« Reply #13 on: January 29, 2015, 04:33:54 AM »
Sisterzone(?)  :shocked :shocked

update soon^^

that´s worst than Friendzone...

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Re: A Stupid Feelings [Atsumina]
« Reply #14 on: February 16, 2015, 03:23:13 PM »
@AI712 : yeah like it hehe sorry if you do not understand  :mon sweat:

Chapter 3

I do not know anymore, what's in the thinking girl lying next to me? I could see her face like an angel fell asleep, as she did not have the slightest load, should I sleep and forget her words. I know I'm running problem 'again'. but this is actually Takahashi Minami , a coward girl who fear the painful things but instead challenged destiny to love a girl who is none other than her best friend.

"Yo, Takamina!" I looked back and saw the figure of a handsome woman than myself

"Ah .. Sayaka, Ohayou .." I greeted lazy

"Eh? Doushita Takamina? You look very bad today and probably the worst of all your bad days (?)"

"I'm fine, it's just that I think about how I walked'll love story" I looked out the window, see the cherry trees which I think is wonderful.

"Aaah, young love yea? Relax kiddo, it would not be fun if you know the end of a love story "I looked back at Sayaka a strange look

"What?" This athletic woman saw me confused

"Ah no, you right Sayaka .. should I live there in front of me right? You're really good friends, I'm lucky to be friends with the friendly and kind as yo" I smiled at her

"Nah .. it's okay kiddo, you know? I'm more proud to have great friends like you, you know? You can only know who you are from the judgment of others instead of ourselves" one word longer capable of making me pause, this woman .. absolutely amazing!

I think back, if I atsuko eyes as well as what was said earlier Sayaka? Do atsuko think I just annoy her? Is she going to yell at me "you're disgusting!" Like that? So should I ask her directly later

"Sayaka" I called her

"Yeah?"

"Many thanks for all your help for me during this" I smiled sincerely at her, I could feel the warmth of friendship between us, of course, I only saw her as a friend and nothing more

"Thank you back" Sayaka winked at me and smiling

 I sent an email atsuko vigorously

To: Atsuko
Hey, I want to talk seriously with you, I'm waiting at the school gates okay?

Send ..
After a while I saw my cell phone back and smiling

To: Minami
Okay i'll be there after school. and i wan't to talk you something too! it's happy news!
p.s: I'm curious!

**
I waited at the school gates with confidence, no actually I was nervous I was really nervous! Okay calm Takahashi Minami! confident, you've been with her so long, and today you're going to put it!
and It's weird .. why atsuko so long? What happened? Did something happen to her? Ugh I began to worry with this woman! I ran wanted to enter the building but I stop when I see atsuko out of the building

"Acc-h .." my voice was choked when I saw the figure of a man with thick eyebrows air and holding her hand, I see Acchan laugh with him and look at me .. damn.

"Minami !!" atsuko waved her hand at me and smiled at me, I could see the man who was with her also smiled at me, and they still hold hands. hurt. Damn you heart why you so weak?!.

"Ah Acchan" I greeted her and smiled at her, let misprint I tried to smile at her

"What you've been waiting a long time? Sorry there are some things that I should take care in student council " atsuko arm around my shoulders and smile, smile so bright.

"Oh it's okay I just got here, and it looks like you're not alone Acchan .." I'm trying to find out who he was, even though I knew I would regret ask like this
"Ah ..  let me introduce you minami, this Matsuda Shota-kun, he was my secretary on the student council , my classmates, and he ... is my boyfriend!"
....
I could feel my chest ache
I could feel my breath started to become heavy
I wanted to shout as loud as possible
But I just can ..
"Ah, Takahashi Minami desu, her childhood friend Acchan. yoroshiku. "I bowed my head trying to hold back my tears

"Matsuda Shota desu, yoroshiku" he bent like me then smiled at atsuko
"Okaaaay ~ introductory session has been completed, and by the way does not matter if Sho-kun came home with us right minami?" I have not had time to answer atsuko has continued very word makes me angry "and we can while talking about what you want to say hehe me, you know I'm very curious ~! "

Ah she remembers but .. Does she not understand that I want to talk alone with her? Did she never thought of my feelings? Did she know I’m hurt here? Damn you atsuko.

I had to look for a reason
"Umm I seem to just get a telephone call from my mother to get home, so .. we can talk about it sometime hehe jaa nee atsuko, Matsuda-san!" I ran from them and look they’re surprised with my attitude

I ran as fast as I could, I don’t know where I'm going but what I want is to go as far as possible from them. I entered a small forest near my garden, I ran until I fell over backwards ..

Why so sick?  -It Wounds in the knees
Why so tiring? -Not because you're exhausted running
Why am I so stupid? -It Because not your grades
Why I could fall in love with the wrong person? – you Innocent minami
Why?

Question after question popped into my head, but if there is someone who always answered my question .. but who? .

tbc

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Re: A Stupid Feelings [Atsumina]
« Reply #15 on: February 16, 2015, 07:09:56 PM »
Whaa...  :O ?!
Poor Minami.. her heart already broke..  :cry:


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Re: A Stupid Feelings [Atsumina]
« Reply #16 on: February 17, 2015, 06:25:29 AM »
 :cry: I feel bad for Minami 

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Re: A Stupid Feelings [Atsumina]
« Reply #17 on: February 17, 2015, 01:06:21 PM »
I know your feeling takaboy :')

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Re: A Stupid Feelings [Atsumina]
« Reply #18 on: February 19, 2015, 12:42:04 PM »
hei! gomenne I can not update fast as the others but I tried :mon yeah: and it seems this chapter is slightly longer, sorry if boring :mon sweat: .

Chapter 4

“The SADDEST people always try their hardest to make people Happy , Because they know what it’s like to feel absolutely worthless , and they don’t want anybody to feel like that”

"Minami-Chaan let up! Is not this the day you promised me you'd want to meet my boss family? Quickly get up !! "

I could hear my mother's voice shouting from downstairs of my house, argh! Why it is very noisy old lady ?! After what have I told her, she was still just act normal and not trying to encourage me again! huh basic old woman! But I remember the words that made me speechless words were always ringing in my head when I met with atsuko after the event I run away from her last week

Flashback

"Tadaima .." I entered my house, which was dark, maybe she had gone to bed

"Okaerinasai Minami-chan" I saw my mother sitting at the dinner table waiting

"Eh? Okaa-san? Why are you still awake? "I asked her and looked at my watch has shown that it is now already past midnight

"Hee? Of course I will not be able to sleep knowing my daughter has not come home at midnight "she smiled at me

"Okaa-san .. why are you smiling? .." I asked her, to be honest it was a bit painful ..

"Hmm, you know? I will always be a good listener for you" she smiled again, a smile that made me feel small in the surrounding areas, the same smile as me having dimples

I was silent, the incident was when I met with atsuko back is turned in my brain, the incident made me feel stupid, weak and also earned want to think I scream as loud as possible, let the world know the pain I was feeling.
I felt the tears running down my cheeks, flowing with a very heavy, my knees buckled and I sat on the floor. I don't understand why I was crying and not screaming like crazy, I cry in silence I don't want to look like this in front of my mother.
I felt my mother had hugged me into a hug, hug and strong, makes me cry very loudly in the hug I remember the words of a person in the movie that I watched "there are two places for you to cry, first in the toilet, and the second in the mother's hug"
Now I understand his point

"Minami-chan .. yosh yosh .. wept as satisfied as you, I will not leave you alone," I felt my mother's hands holding my head. calm down. I feel that after a few minutes I decided to tell her

"Okaa-san, why is it so painful? .."

"You have to take the risk to fall in love Minami-chan and you have to accept the fact that the risk of falling in love is hurt" I'm speechless ..

"But .. why do not you ever yell at me "disgusting" like everyone else? You know I love a girl and not a man "

"Love never see who the people we love, what kind of character, what he/she looked like, what we know when we fall in love infatuated with that person no matter she is a woman or a man" I'm speechless. again.

"So the pain was when I saw Acchan with another man is a risk of falling in love?"

"Of course it includes the bitter sweet love, when you're hurt you will learn how to not hurt back, the pain you love it includes a trip" okaa-san ..

"So what should I do when I see her? I don't want to be hurt like this again okaa-san .., you know? It felt like I was suffocating in the sense on Acchan "

"Do not ever give up Minami-chan, you are my daughter, you're strong like me, don't avoid and behave like reasonable, it's your choice. all is your choice "

"Okaa-san .."

"Nani Minami-chan?"

"Itsumo Arigatou ne? Sorry I can not be a daughter as you want "

"All I want is within you Minami-chan"
I feel stronger hugged my mother, oh god I'm grateful to have a mother like this

"Ne Minami-chan"

"Nani?"

"Sundays later, let's meet with one of my boss do you know he has a beautiful daughter hehe"

"Okaa-Saan !!"

"Hai hai, okay let's sleep and get ready for the mother and her child!"

"Yoooossshhh !!!"

End Of flashback

"Minami-chaaaaaan !!!! Wakeeee uuup! Mooouu why you love to sleep ?! "my mother pull the covers I do not know where she's coming but it's pretty creepy

"Mou okaa-san! now still time? It's still early you know it ... "

"Morning ?! Now it is at 11 !! Mou ~ okay if you do not want to buy you a new manga! hmpph! "
"Aaaah HAI HAI SOON I'LL BATH AND STAND BY ME IN THE CAR  okaa-SAMA"
I do not understand but I take a shower as soon as possible, of course you're not going to give up new stuff for free! Hehe

"Omatase kaa-san"

"Hai hai, Minami-chan! Clean up your hair!"

"Eeeh? But why? I do not have time smoothed okaa-san"

"Mouu ~! After all you're still women Minami-chan! See the clothes you're wearing jeans and a shirt! You really like men if you're dressed like this! Here let me Clean up your hair!"

"Urusai okaa-san" I scowl at her, uh but did I look like a man .. but let it go! I still have a long hair like hers! It is very troublesome mothers

"driver, please stop at the salon subscription me as usual"

Eh?

"Okaa-san?"

"Shut up and let your mother after finish everything" she winked at me

I feel uneasy.
We stopped at one of the salons in Shibuya, I do not understand but why?

"Welcome to our salon! Oh Takahashi-san? "

"Ah hey! , Please provide a suitable hairstyle for my daughter and I ask that this be completed within 30 minutes "
My mother left me alone here and blinked again, how she could be cruel ?! Damn you oka-san!

"Ah okay with pleasure, Takahashi junior ne?" The clerk asked me with a smile

"Ah yes .. yoroshiku onegaishimasu" I bend bit to him

"Yeah yoroshiku hihi you have charisma like you're mother Takahashi-san" The clerk smiled at me again

"Ah thank you .." and we also ended the conversation because I'm so sleepy .. I fell asleep and when I opened my eyes .. I can see my hair ..

"Haaa? WHY MY HAIR SHORT LIKE THIS? "I shouted hysterically because how could my hair into a short look like this? Damn! It definitely plan that old woman!

"You look charming Takahashi-san" one of the female employees were flushed when I complimented me too, flushed like her ..

"Minami-chan ah! sugoii! You look like me and your father! "

"Urusai okaa-san!" I scowl at her because I knew she vanished when she asked the guard hair tokok what suits me

"Hehe mitee I brought a present for you"

"Heee ?! YATTAAA watashi no manga !!! "I ran over to her and forget that my hair long now no longer

"Saa let's meet with my boss!"

"Okaay!" I shouted and busy towards the car and opened the my new 'gift'

**
I looked around the place was very luxurious at all, from the outside the restaurant was luxurious and elegant European style! Uwaaa she did great! But why do I feel silly wearing jeans like this? We then entered the restaurant

"Takahashi-san" I and my mother turned to the source of the sound

"Kojima-san has been waiting for you in the VVIP" one waiter that looks cool and also great! And again we entered the room very very luxurious VVIP it

"Ah thank you" we also follow up the waitress , as we are the servant tail
Soon we too luxurious to the round table, and of course lots of food! I could see the man wearing beige Tuxedos lift our hands up in order to get there.

"Hisashiburi Takahashi Mei-san" he smiled at her and reached out

"Hisashiburi Kojima Ryou-san" she smiled and shook hands with the manly man

"Please sit down let's talk over dinner" he smiled again, a smile that really got me stunned, he has a face very hard but has a soft heart

"You certainly Takahashi Minami-chan ne?" He view me, I could feel his gaze sharp yet warm it.

"A-ah yes, Hajime Takahashi Minami mashite desu yoroshiku onegaita shimasu" I bowed to him

"May I, heee no wonder why you often boast her daughter really good and also pretty" he smiled at me

"Of course!She was a best Doughter ever! "she winked at me again I felt my face heat up because in such praise

"Hehe you must be acquainted with my daughter Minami-chan! She was in the toilet ah there it is! "
I turned in the same direction as Ryou-san
I saw a tall woman with long hair and well, she's really like a model!

"May my daughter introduced Minami-chan"

"Kojima Haruna, Yoroshiku onegaishimasu" the woman bent down and I could see Breas- ah! Damn!

'Okaa-san thank you! "I turned to my mother who smiled nodded at me

tbc*

aaaaah and it is this chapter :gmon hi:, sorry I added a new character though not boring hehe :mon pray2:, okay I'll do a quick update! :mon yeah:

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Re: A Stupid Feelings [Atsumina]
« Reply #19 on: February 19, 2015, 01:51:06 PM »
TakaNyan~~ ;3

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