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Re: A Stupid Feelings [Atsumina]
« Reply #20 on: February 19, 2015, 02:04:17 PM »
TakaHaru sugoi!
What would happen to Atsumina now?  :grin:
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Re: A Stupid Feelings [Atsumina]
« Reply #21 on: February 19, 2015, 05:33:42 PM »
Ah... Minami and Haruna next....????

Is there going to be something there...?

What about Atsuko?

Can't wait to find out

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Re: A Stupid Feelings [Atsumina]
« Reply #22 on: February 19, 2015, 07:40:26 PM »
I somehow want, that Minami will start go a dates with Haruna, and Atsuko will see it.. result - jealous Atsuko!  :D
....But it's only my imagination!  XD


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Re: A Stupid Feelings (Atsumina)
« Reply #23 on: February 21, 2015, 10:28:18 AM »
ch 4.5

I saw a woman named Kojima Haruna smiled at me, I do not know why but I feel my face started to heat up

"Haruna, it is a family Takahashi" Ryou-san introduced us to her daughter.

"Ah haruna-chan Doumo, Minami-chan introduce yourself to her" my mother smiled at her and looked at me

"Takahashi Minami desu" I smiled at her showing my dimples to her I could see even if only briefly because she suddenly turned her gaze from me with a red cheeks ..

"K-Kojima Haruna d-desu" why with her? Is she sick? Why is she down?

"Haruna, do not bow your head when introducing themselves to others" I saw Ryou-san chide her daughter

"Gomen Otou-san" she lifted his face had returned to normal

Now I can clearly see the face of the model basin, big eyes, sexy lips, funny cheeks . argh for a moment I really can forget Atsuko! Is this what is called love at first sight? But it is not possible! just a few hours ago I want to express love in Atsuko and now I fell in love with someone else? I'm not someone like that!

finally we ordering food, we ate in silence  oh why ?  come on why this atmospehere very awkward ? Who talked only my mother and Ryou-san, I just shut up and answer the question if there is a question for me

"Minami-chan" I turned toward Ryou-san

"Hai?"

"I want to leave my daughter to you because she's going to school with you" the man said quietly

"HAI ?!" I almost spitting out my food, WHAT? i'm misheard right ? WOMEN LIKE A MODEL WILL go to school with me ?!

"Hahahaha, you really like your mother when you were surprised to like it and it looks like your mother has not told you" I felt my face heat up again, and i looked at my mother she just continued eating calmly and peacefully. Damn no bad defeat had mothers who did not have the feeling like my mother's

"Well I'll explain it, my daughter will be attending the same school with you because I believe in you even though I knowing you from your mother stories , meanwhile I get a job abroad for a few months, and therefore my daughter will stay with you because I do not want happen to her "

I was stunned, my mouth open, I'm speechless, I'm confused. and when I saw her again she was smiling evilly at me, I see Kojima-san stifle a laugh when they see me, I'm willing to bet how my face looks silly now

"Ahem .. and I really ask for your help to keep my daughter in my absence, I heard you always get a championship medal when competation" Ryou-san went on to say that made me even more confused

"s-so I'm going to be her bodyguard?" I asked while in control of the scene embarrass myself

"Hmm if the ballpark arguably language like that, but I'm going to calm your salary every month, and I do not want you to consider yourself as a bodyguard, I want to call you a her first friend" Ryou-san smiled at me and his daughter also smiled at me that made me even more awkward

***
Atsuko POV's

It's been one week I spent my time for my boyfriend, I had a little bit guilty feel to my best friend minami, already one week I did not see he coming to my class . I do not mean selfish but this was her habit when she knew we were different class for our second school year. Minami who is smart she first entered the excellent class and I only able to enter the third grade.

"Hey! Acchaaan ?! Did you hear me ??? !! "I was shocked shocked look towards miichan


"Ah nani miichan? Gomenne I daydream "I smiled at her

"Oooh! Did you miss your midget? I have news for you "

"Urusai miichan! she was not my midget! And what new cheapo news you that? 10 seconds as usual "I glared at her

"This about the causes your midget not come here lately!" Smiled miichan proud of me. huh? The cause? I do not understand

"Cause what? Miichan? Explain properly baka! "I hit her head

"Eh? You do not know that at the midget class have a new student? The most severe and again is that midget always with the beautiful new students! You must see yourself Acchan !"

Eh? What is this? Curiosity exploding inside me, the curiosity of someone who has transferred minami view for me, but not this show that I'm selfish? I want to have attention minami and also sho-kun, minami smart and sho-kun popular .. I really selfish.

"Miichan now they where?" I did not realize what I was talking about all I know is I want to meet with that girl

"I've been seeing them back to school, and maybe they are doing things that are very fun acchaaan ~"

BRAK!

I stood up and pushed my desk made me the center of attention in class. I felt my cheeks heat up and I looked fix my desk. profit Sho-kun was playing soccer with his friends.

"Miichan. Take me to them." I held her hands and walked out of the classroom . I know maybe this time I look very creepy and anyone who would stop me i will swallow them alive, but my heart is screaming out loud in order to quickly find the girl who took care minami me!

"Acchan, can you walk slowly?" I saw miichan trying to catch a fast pace

"No"

"that Midget was not going to go anywhere from this school Acchan!" I saw again miichan terilah fatigue but I don't care about her  my goal is to find minami.

I run this may not include ran, I ran, dragging miichan that since from my attitude was always complaining because I'm down behind the school and did nothing. i had a little disappointed feeling in my heart, but I'm still looking for it, by all means. I do not care miichan already exhausted, I even asked our seniors. and the result is the same. nothing.

Where you minami?

"Acchan!" Miichan stop footsteps

"What?" I saw miichan pointing towards me.

I saw minami with the girl, holding hands and laughing together. and they headed towards us, I do not know whether minami saw me or not and whether minami notice me or not in front of her but at the moment I'm really sure minami eyes look at me, and I felt our eyes meet each other but ..? minami back to talk to the girl and 'only' stepping past from me ..
what is this? Did I do something wrong with her? Why do I feel uncomfortable?

Tbc

Aaah sorry this chapter very short  :err: because my idea suddenly disappeared! :fainted: .. GOMENASAI!  :on speedy:

Actually I want to be honest that I was very bad in the writing end of the story, so anyone please help me and give me a little inspiration ne :mon pray2: ?! greetings of peace  :mon squee:

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Re: A Stupid Feelings [Atsumina]
« Reply #24 on: February 21, 2015, 11:34:06 AM »
Yadaa!!  :cry:
But honestly I like the drama xD ..
hmmm TakaHaru huh.. How about AtsuYuu, to make it more complicated hahaha

Joudan dayo :peace: :peace:

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Re: A Stupid Feelings [Atsumina]
« Reply #25 on: February 21, 2015, 12:34:11 PM »
Ara... Minami ignored Atsuko

What... why... Eh...

I guess Minami and Haruna getting closer...

If Haruna in same class as Minami then... Haruna very smart too like Minami

What's going to happen next?

Can't wait to find out

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Re: A Stupid Feelings [Atsumina]
« Reply #26 on: February 21, 2015, 03:58:52 PM »
I somehow want that Minami won't speak with Acchan some while.. and then Acchan start to feel more jealous and understand her true feelings towards Minami..  :D  ..also Acchan could see, that those two are very clingy for each other..  -result - scary Acchan, who is trying to get back hers migdet attention ..  8)  ... or Achan have chance speak with Haruna.. when Minami isn't around.. and tell her to stay away from hers midget..  :lol:  .. or Acchan and Minami start to comparing with lovely moments with their partners and these moments each of them see it..  8)  .. aslo there is some upcoming party!  8)  ..or something will bad happen one of them.  [oh my!]


Ah... my imagination start to work again, sorry.!  :kneelbow:


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Re: A Stupid Feelings [Atsumina]
« Reply #27 on: February 21, 2015, 04:43:37 PM »
Love triangle~

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Re: A Stupid Feelings [Atsumina]
« Reply #28 on: February 23, 2015, 10:32:02 AM »
Oooo...ooo..interesting ~ *grin*

Waaa..suddenly wish for TakaHaru happiness..lol..cause they're cute when together in this story..huhuhu..eventhough this is AtsuMina story.. [emoji6][emoji6][emoji6]

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Re: A Stupid Feelings [Atsumina]
« Reply #29 on: February 23, 2015, 11:09:16 AM »
I guess, Takamina needs to be happy once in awhile.
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Re: A Stupid Feelings [Atsumina]
« Reply #30 on: March 09, 2015, 12:31:44 PM »
Takamina affair with Haruna make Acchan jealous sea drain viewers XD :lol:
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Re: A Stupid Feelings [Atsumina]
« Reply #31 on: March 10, 2015, 08:37:43 AM »
Update soon author-san! :)

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Re: A Stupid Feelings [Atsumina]
« Reply #32 on: March 17, 2015, 01:30:29 PM »
@Natsuko : nah i’m kinda think about it haha  :lol:

@black_maa : that’s sound great! But i want more drama between them ahaha , thanks for your inspiration , thats make me think a lot what should minami do hehehe . what do you think about i added one character unexpected hehe , i want make minami-kun to be harem kyaa! >_<
@kakeru15 : noo it’s no triangle love but ..  hehe

@Ando : yeah , I actually really want to reproduce scenes Takaharu but I can’t because this is a story about atsuko and minami hahaha

@phoenix1 : yeah i want it too  :monk gboy:

author note's : sorry if you don't understand this chapter , i really say sorry from my heart . i kinda busy lately  :mon cry: and my inspiration is gone :mon cry:


In this it's was still atsuko pov's

Ch 5

She will avoid you

She will not want anymore friends with you

She already has someone because you so busy with you're boyfriend

Everyone will get bored and tired if they were never given a response
Everyone including without permission she would go in your life if you do not stop her
She's been ignoring you and also avoid you because you have made a mistake
Perfect life that you crave will disintegrate slowly atsuko ..

"STOP IT!" I shouted up from my sleep, oh it was only a nightmare it again ..

Indeed, a few days I had the same dream every night, the dream will my friendship with her will end, friendship which has a major role in my life, the role will not be replaced by anyone except herself, I do not understand why I always dreamed like this. and I always call takamina and she too responded as well, as if no matter what happens between us.
But when we met at school as like we do not know each other .., I always ask myself , maybe i make a big mistake and enough to her so that she acted like that to me? , If I had made her angry? But what do I do? ..

"Atsu! Let us breakfast! "I heard my mother scream calling from below

"I'll be right down okee mom!"
I'm getting ready to wear school uniform and I opened my phone, just curious if minami give me an email. note just curious

There emails. bingo

I smiled when I saw the display name of a cell phone, minami.
To: Atsuko
Ohayou Acchan! Have a nice day! 
p.s: I miss you ~

without me knowing I smiled reading a short message from the midget, but why she said she missed me? have we not always met while at school, and if she wants she can to my class, right? Why moments like this makes me want to slap myself? Oh come on atsuko! you should be able to resolve this problem! find out why minami behave like that to you!
but .. I'm really curious .. why minami so cold to me in school yet so warm when sending a message? Ugh! why is this so complicated .. sucks. whether the date is not minami who sent me a message like that? But it's true it is a telephone number minami !! ARGGGHHH REALLY COMPLICATED!

"Atsu! rapid fall down! "I snapped out of my reverie

"Haai mama!"...

**

i don't know why , but my memories when i and minami be friend is coming to my mind ..
"Hey, you! You are the son of an artist, right? "I saw a boy that pushes me

"You must be very happy to have the mother of an artist because you're hoping to get special behavior of all people right?" The other boy also make fun of me ..

"Hah! Do not expect! Do not expect we would like to give a special behavior for you! "I saw there was another girl shove

"we don;t want to be friends with the son of an artist like you!"

"Yes! For what we are friends with you but we were not able to meet your mother ?! "

"Do not hope so!"
I'm speechless .. I just wish there was someone who helped me from the situation, I hate this time, it feels like I'm running as fast as lightning as I could! anyone help me!

"Hey! Can you stop bothering ?!" I saw a little kid short use hat  yelling at us, instead of us but they

"Do you not see that she does not want to play with you? Can you go now? Before I hit you one by one! "I could see the short kid yelled trying to protect me and help me

"Hey! Are you okay? Are you hurt? "The kid ran to me and then look to the rest of my body if I was injured or not. I felt my face heat up

"I-im okay .." I ducked

"Hey are you sick? If not why do you look down? Are they say rude to you? Hey do not worry me! "The kid tried to look at my face, but I was scared when he saw my face he would go like other children ..
I lifted my head ..

"HAAAAAA !!! Y-YOU !! MAEDA ATSUKO?! A CHILDREN FROM MY FAVORITE ARTIST AND MY MOM ?! "the kid was surprised and a little jump from me, but I could not see his face because he was covered with a hat!

"H-hai ha-hajimemashite Maeda Atsuko desu" I introduce myself
I could see the boy was silent for a moment, there is little sense of regret because I introduced myself to him as soon as this, and now I will soon lose him
But it seems I was wrong .., little boy approached me and shook my hand-with vigor. I'm more curious about this child's face!

"Ano .. Can you let go of your hat? and also introduce yourselves? my mother said that I should not shake hands with a stranger " I want see it ..

"AH! Gomen, WAIT "

little boy screaming at me, let go my hand, he facing backward and take ponytail ribbon from her purse .. a woman? And finally he turned to me I could see her hair as she so cute ponytail.

"I'm ready! , Hajimemashite Takahashi Minami desu! Yoroshiku onegaishimasu! "The girl looked at me and grinned I could see her dimples appeared on her cheeks.

"Nee nee! if you're really a child artist? I never thought my first friend is a child artist! uwaaaaah my mother would envy with me!"
the little girl grinned and proud of her, but do not I have not said that I and her are friends?

"Friends?" I asked confused

"Ah do not you want? sorry I immediately conclude you are my friend .." I saw the little girl replied with a tone of disappointment
Suddenly there was a bad feeling attacked me

"Aah! of course I would!" I smiled stiffly at her

"It's okay if you do not want to be friends with maeda-san, I-.."

"I said I want to be your friend minami!" I yelled at her a little bit .. do not understand what happened to me but I feel that if I let go of this girl I'll regret it later, I could see her face puzzled, and I felt my cheeks start to heat up
Suddenly I saw that beautiful smile back on her face

"Yokatta ah! ~ Arigatou Maeda-san, korekara yoroshiku nee ~!" Minami grinned at me, inevitably something will come smiling hence



"Acchan! This is the third time this morning you daydreaming! what is wrong with you? Yesterday you were pulling me to pursue stupid midget! Now after you throw at her you always daydreaming like that! "I saw in front of me i see mii-chan being alone with my behavior spputer this .., must be very pleasant if minami here with us ..

"ACCHAAAN!"

"MIICHAN WHAT?" I reply shout at damn gachapin ..

"You! what is wrong with you? Did you fight with a midget? What with Matsuda-san? "

"None of your business gachapin"

"AH! THAT! YOU ALWAYS SAY THAT IF YOU PRESSED ACCHAN!"

I was silent for a long time ..

"ARGH! I HAVE ENOUGH Acchan with you! "

"Okay just go away miichan" I smiled at her ignorant

"ALL RIGHT!"

"Acchan... , you are giving that name to me .. minami

okay let's continue my flashback again ..


I always thought that if the day that I do not want to be her friend if I'm going to be myself now? Who have many friends and also popular as it is now? .
if this will not change if no Minami in it? What will be different? I am curious.

I remember that day since I became friends close to her, we were like sisters inseparable twins, we were always together, we always support each other, we laugh, we cry, we fight all our already passed. But lately I've always felt there was something different with Minami, from the way she looked at me, until she treats me. I just felt it was not right, Minami is now very different from the first Minami, whether Minami likes me? Of course I also love her too but I like her as a friend .., could Minami likes of another way? But it is not possible right? We both girls, and it will be considered abhorrent by others ..
Minami change more visible when we entered high school, I felt Minami much more protective of me and who approached me to be honest it was very disturbing because I was not free to associate with whomever I want, but I believe, Minami did it because she was afraid something happen to me.

when our first year, we passed by a very fun believe me if you have minami around you it will feel comfortable, my friend is a friend Minami, Minami is my friend Sunggu funny when I think about it, I remember when we all compact to make Minami cry when her birthday and many very fond memories ..
Until then I started to fall in love with a man, to be honest I was never told this to anyone, even at minami though. Somehow I was just scared and I'm ashamed .. and so I was determined to try his own without the help of my friends and also Minami. I start from want to know his name and I managed yap hehe man named Matsuda Shota he is our football club striker and he has a very sweet smile! Kyaa ~.

We started to become close moments class promotion test, i don't know but then I kept secret from all my friends, including Minami ..
Maybe because I was too busy with Matsuda-kun I became not focus on my studies, Minami had asked me what happened to me, but I just smiled at her and said I was fine. I never thought of this makes me separate my steps with my friends and also Minami .. but I know my time with Matsuda-kun class I re excited, I felt I was the happiest person in this world, maybe it's my fault because I was not paying attention to the possible minami also because it minami so often to my classroom at lunchtime.

But the time it took me to lunch minami not and never thought I liked the man took me to lunch together! I started to feel my heart strong berdegub we chose the roof of the school and it was pretty quiet day here .. until now ..

"Acchan hey umm .. I want to tell you something .."
My heart seemed berdegub toned it will explode!

"What it sho-kun?" (We started calling recent first name)

"Umm .. do-don't you have a boyfriend? .. Yaa i-if you do not want to answer do not have the force?! // "
Ah kawai ~

"I-I do not have"

"Really?!" I saw sho-kun standing and a wide smile on his face .. like the first face when me and her first met ..

"Yeaah! Why? "I asked innocently

"A-ano .. if you do not mind .. will you be my girlfriend?" He said embarrassed
I felt my cheeks heat up, I never thought my first love avenged like this! but I tried to calm myself

"Oo-of course I do" I smiled sweetly at him

"REALLY?"

"Yeah" I laughed at the question

"Yatta! Now I have a beautiful girlfriend! "I saw him jump for joy like a child .. but somehow I felt something strange in my hear "

"Hey, I want to talk seriously with you, I'm waiting at the school gates okay?"
I get emails from minami, talking seriously? What would he tell me? I am curious!

"Atsuko? Let's go home together hehe "I looked at the sho-kun he smiled at me for a moment I forget that minami want to talk seriously to me and that means there's only two of us .. but I could not let sho-kun home alone right? Anyway we only officially have a relationship .. ah! minami probably would not mind if I invite sho-kun

I walked out of the school building after clearing my job as student council, from a distance I've seen minami standing near the gate, his body that makes me immediately knew that it was him and do not forget! Ribbon in her hair hehe
"Minami!" I shouted and waved to him, for some reason I was so eagerly wanting to bring them both! I walked over to him and of course I and sho-kun holding hand .. and ..


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"Maeda-san!" I heard someone call me

"MAEDA-SAN!" I gasped stood up and looked around, and look towards the teacher who seems to have no wish to see my face in her class

"H-hai? Sensei "I stammered when he saw how long and hard ruler which he held

"You! You do not pay attention to schoolwork ?! Standing outside right now! "I could feel the sho-kun help laughing when I'm instructed to leave the classroom. I feel embarrassed.

**

After that incident I re-entered the classroom during recess, as usual I was eating my lunch box together miichan and also sho-kun on my desk, until I heard the noise

"Hey! Dude! She's really sweet! "

"Shee really has a face like a cat that is really cute!" who is that?

"Damn why she entered in the superior class?"

"Of course, because she's smart, you fool!"

"She came !!"

"Ano, whether in this class there named Maeda Atsuko?" I saw a familiar figure, the latter figure makes me feel annoyed because she is always with minami

"I am" I stood up and answering as calmly as I could

"Ah, can we talk for a while? Both "I could see in her face a serious face, what is it?

We headed to the art room fairly quiet

"What do you want the transfer student?" I asked sarcastically her

"You do not like what she's talking to me" she smiled mockingly

"What do you mean?" I asked confused

"Are you really friends minami?" Ah .. apparently .. wait!? why this girl called her by her first name ?!

"Of course! , We've been friends for a long time "I challenge her

"Ah okay lady friend, so you do not need to bother me again"

"What do you mean, and what do you want?! I do not have much time "I grew impatient with this ridiculous conversation

"I want you to stay away from takahashi minami"

Tbc

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Re: A Stupid Feelings [Atsumina]
« Reply #33 on: March 17, 2015, 02:08:09 PM »
KojiHaru is so blunt here.
What would Atsuko do?
She needs to make her choice.

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Re: A Stupid Feelings [Atsumina]
« Reply #34 on: March 17, 2015, 09:48:31 PM »
Sta...stay away!?!? From... Minami!?!?  :shocked  That was - WOW-  from Haruna!  :O
I can't wait to know what Acchan will do.. what will be hers answer..?!  :w00t:  At first, probably in shock..
But, yeah.. Acchan have to choose.. [hehe.. in the end you turn, that Acchan have to stay away from Minami..that was good XD ]
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Hmm.. about your question... (If I understand it right) Then you meant, that you want to add without Harunas one more character... then go ahead!  :thumbsup  It would be more interesting, if for Minamis attention would fight more then two people. hehe.. :D  - {-or it wasn't what you meant!? :roll: }
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Re: A Stupid Feelings [Atsumina]
« Reply #35 on: March 18, 2015, 01:15:50 AM »
WOW

it seems like the rivalry is getting more and more intense  :shocked
Anyway, cant wait to see Atsuko get her girl back,
or it will be nyanmina?
   :panic:  :?

Thanks for the update verlinechan, take your time and i'll surely look out for ur fic :cathappy:
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Re: A Stupid Feelings [Atsumina]
« Reply #36 on: September 14, 2015, 04:47:09 PM »
Hi there ! this is i dont know why i wrote this but i just can share it   :lol:
and this had a song too but i translate it to english and yeah its a atsumina maybe so hope you like it !  :D

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=apqVKaifjSk#action=share (hope you can open it)

*Graduation*

It was an unconfessed love, but…

I know I should tell you my feelings at that time .. that time before that man confessed he feeling to you

The season when the grasses are painted spring,
And the word “graduation” echoes,
Has come


now is the time of graduation,i don’t feel like I have wasted my time with you .. well, you know? It was very fast for me

I burn in my mind
The overflowing cherry blossoms
And my memories with you


it feels like I have to force my brain to forget you, forget our memories with the cherry blossoms are falling here

It was just so beautiful that
I will probably remember it
Even after a lot of years


perhaps it was too beautiful memories for me to forget, memories of which there is only me and you. I will probably always remember this no matter how many years would pass me later

It was an unconfessed love and yet
It stays in the heart like this


Maybe my love never be delivered to you, but this love will continue to be at this heart and also this body

You probably
do not remember
The happy words you said to me


maybe you do not remember the cheesy kind words you said to me atsuko, but the words are always managed to make me smile

But every time I recall those words,
It gives me courage
Thank you


do you know? every word you say to me it always makes me be brave, it's like I feel like I have someone who will always cheer me!

You gave confidence to me
who always looks down


You always forced me to look up, look how beautiful the scenery around me, thank you atsuko  you always take me to your beautiful and marvels world

You taught me
How good it feels
To raise my head high
And look forward


You also taught me about what I can do and show to the world if I lifted my head and no longer looked down , you also taught me about that in this life there is hope that the beautiful

It was an unconfessed love and yet
It stays in the heart like this
Thank you for both the joy and pain
The spring wind pushes my back


This is a love that will never you know atsuko, love you always wanted to tell you but I can only be in this heart alone.
thankyou for giving me both, yes gave me happiness and pain
The wind had pushed my back


I will never forget
I will never forget
The fact that I loved you
Now, let’s walk forward,
Let’s walk on.
Now I have graduated from you.


I will never forget, really I would never forget about this wonderful feeling, wonderful feeling but can not convey to you atsuko. the fact that there is that I love you atsuko
but now, we must walk forward, with no looking back. and now I also have to Graduated from you atsuko



the end?


sorry for bad grammar  :cry:

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Re: A Stupid Feelings [Atsumina]
« Reply #37 on: September 14, 2015, 06:30:33 PM »
It's really some while, when you last time posted something in here.. :roll:
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Re: A Stupid Feelings [Atsumina]
« Reply #38 on: September 15, 2015, 12:49:16 AM »
Domoo! i'm new here :D  , but i alwaaaaaaaays read in here hehe  XD . okay this my first fanfic i hope you like it , i really nervous you know >__< . sorry if my english bad :( but i'll do my best! .  8)

prologue

I sit here as usual, I'm waiting for someone who is very important for me in this cruel world and also the most loved wholeheartedly .. maybe my love for her is very restricted and probably everyone would consider me disgusting .. But trust me my feelings for her not only a feeling for best friend .. this has developed into a feeling of 'Love'. I know my love may not be reciprocated, indeed I am? Of course I can not force her to love me back but .. it seems the feeling is not impossible to know ..
I know it .. and I dare to hurt .. here I am Takahashi Minami.


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Re: A Stupid Feelings [Atsumina]
« Reply #39 on: September 16, 2015, 11:33:46 AM »
Oh... What's going to happen next?

Would Takamina really just keep quiet about her feeling?

Would Atsuko be able to recognize her feeling for Takamina?

What's going to happen?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the updates

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