Hello, this is my first time commenting this fic. I've been watching though
To me personally the theme of the story is alright. I don't mind OC as long as you can collaborate it well with the 48G members that you have in mind (you know.. Since you're posting in an AKB Fanfiction thread). As Kurosawa said, the POV switches kinda confuse me as a reader. Especially with the small details on the main chara which I understand it is an OC and starts the story with his own POV.
My hopes for further developement of this story are maybe for you to give us readers the image of what the main character actually like mentally. Is he totally barbaric? Does he kill so easily like his friends? How does he feel when he kills? Does he honestly have feelings or he's just the same as everybody as to do things in the name of glory? What makes this main character differ from others of his kind?
Secondly, as I said before I hope that you would start bringing up the correlation between the main chara and the member you have in mind. Because personally the first two chapters was rather dull as to there is no interactions yet between the two, I guess I'm a kind of impatient readers.
Crazy idea is normal as long as again, it can go with the theme and the fact that you are posting in a certain idol group fanfiction thread.
Cheers, I hope you keep developing this story and posts well~
as I also need too.