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« Reply #200 on: October 09, 2006, 03:41:31 AM »
Mame? :cry:

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« Reply #201 on: October 09, 2006, 05:41:17 AM »
What are they doing in the bushes? Looking for the pink bunny perhaps?

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“You’re getting better. So stripping was a good idea after all. Or are you really just a little taken by me?”


Oh! :o

Teach me the 'happy art' too! XD

Risa leaving? I always thought that she'd be the next leader after Yossi,Miki and  Ai-chan graduates. :cry:

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« Reply #202 on: October 09, 2006, 05:46:42 AM »
Mame-hime! Oh what drives you into doing so? D:

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« Reply #203 on: October 10, 2006, 02:14:14 PM »
Chapter 32


“Stuff like what?”

Murmuring so softly in her reply, Ai would not have been able to hear Risa’s respond if not for the quietness of the washroom they were in.

Someone like you. We’re lucky to have you and you know it. You’re beautiful and smart and loyal and funny…. You’re special.”

Fumbling at the roll of paper towels dangling just next to her, Risa tore off a few sections and wiped at the fresh round of tears that Ai’s speech had unleashed.

Tearing off some towels herself, Ai dabbed at the tears that Risa had missed and swept the younger girl’s fringe to one side with her hand. Watching Risa blow her nose noisily, Ai said something else on further thought.

“Okay maybe not so much of the smart part but you know what I mean.”

Lifting her head to look Ai in the eye, Risa didn’t speak. But Ai could tell by the changed expression in her eyes that she had managed to get through to the depressed girl.

“You’re supposed to cheer me up Ai-chan, not take digs at me.”

Risa protested with a pout that was quickly replaced with a genuine smile.

“Well you’re smiling aren’t you?”

Waving Risa’s objection off with a smile of her own, Ai continued rambling on with her unfinished speech.
 
“You don’t have to believe me, but it’s true, and I know you better than anyone. We need you. So don’t go running off and crying by yourself again. Whatever happens, I’ll be here for you.”



[Within the Undergrowth]

“Sorry, I thought I saw some bug near you for a second.”

Grinning sheepishly, Sayumi offered this explanation for her sudden reaction earlier.

“Oh, right.”

Nodding, Reina accepted the reason with little protests although it felt a little too far-fetched even for her.

“I wonder if she’s hiding her affections for me. Maybe she secretly likes me.”

That thought made her laugh out loud but her happy laughter was cut short by Sayumi’s frenzied attempts to drown out any sounds that might escape from the clump of bushes.

“Reina you’re acting stupid, stop letting your imagination run wild.”

The silence that hung in the air as Sayumi returned her concentration to her most chief task at hand was strangely comforting to Reina. It sure beat having to hear some weird confession by Sayumi. Was there going to be any?

“I thought Reina wanted a love confession?”

Reina slapped herself mentally and chased the second wild notion that night out of her mind. Trying to clear her obviously polluted thoughts, Reina let her eyes wonder and unwittingly they came to rest upon Sayumi’s naked form.

Under the moonlit sky, the lanky girl’s pale skin seemed to reflect the moon’s rays beautifully. Her jet-black hair and eyes only added to the exquisiteness of this splendid image.

“Wow, woot woot…..”

Resisting the urge to whistle, Reina bit her tongue and swallowed hard, but doing both actions together only made her choke on her own saliva.

“Gah! I might accidentally kill myself one of these days.”



[Back at the Washroom]

Suddenly sitting straighter up, Risa raised both hands to cover Ai’s eyes. She held them there for a moment as if contemplating her next step. Then closing her eyes, she planted a soft kiss on Ai’s lips.

“Thank you.”

When Ai reopened her eyes to look at the girl sitting in front of her, she felt blissful and guilty all at once. Risa was a wonderful girl, she didn’t deserve having to share a person she loved with anyone.

“I’m so sorry Risa. But I can’t give up Reina either.”

Thinking to herself, Ai was determined to treat sweet Risa much better than before. She remembered seeing the moon hanging high in the sky on her short walk over to the washroom and decided to invite Risa for a nice walk.

“The moon tonight looks really beautiful. Shall we take a walk by the pool?”

Then jumping up in one smooth motion, Ai bent slightly and extended her hand in a gentlemanly pose.

“My gosh Ai-chan, I see all that RNK practice wasn’t lost on you.”

Slipping her slender hand into Ai’s, Risa squeezed it lovingly.

“I’d love too.”

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jafeijai: I :heart: Risa, I don't think I can handle it if she leaves :(

ChrNo: I did didn’t I, cubicles 8 times XD

rndmnwierd: Ahhhh Sukeban, that was a pretty interesting film. All that bombing :D

JFC: Mame seems to be a little down in the dumps but luckily Ai is there to get her out of it :)

wordsworth: I like the thought of Risa as leader to the younger girls. I wonder if that’ll happen. Maybe in a few years?

Yuuyami: Mame hime! That has a nice ring to it. All hail Princess Risa :P

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« Reply #204 on: October 10, 2006, 02:44:04 PM »
Ai-chan saves the day!!! :yay:

Reina and Sayu are enjoying themselves under the moon eh? Wonder what would happen if Eri passed by... XD Don't get caught! :P

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« Reply #205 on: October 10, 2006, 04:36:08 PM »
YES!! Takahashi Ai to the rescue!!! :thumbsup [insert hero fanfare here] XD though i have to wonder...if Reina and Sayumi are playing by the pool...and Ai and Risa are going TO the pool...dun dun DUNNN....:P plot twist going to come?!

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« Reply #206 on: October 10, 2006, 05:10:40 PM »
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“The moon tonight looks really beautiful. Shall we take a walk by the pool?”


uh oh...

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« Reply #207 on: October 10, 2006, 06:34:37 PM »
Hmm, I smell confronation. Mmm, strawberries....:D

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« Reply #208 on: October 10, 2006, 09:13:24 PM »
Yes, Mame-hime DOES have a nice ring to it, yes?
 
Uh-oh, Takagaki going near the pool~! O__O
 
-suddenly hops for joy, seeing that Risa will turn 18 on the 20th, and the perv might be filled with Takagaki <3-

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« Reply #209 on: October 10, 2006, 10:47:19 PM »
Uh oh...Reina and Sayu might get caught *insert suspenseful music here till ur next post*. Ill cry if Eri finds them and drama ensures. I sure will.  
The Takagaki is sooo cute in this. One of the best parts for sure ^_^ Ai-chan can heal anyones depression.

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« Reply #210 on: October 10, 2006, 11:52:46 PM »
Hehe I'm starting to think that everyone likes everyone or just everyone likes Reina !

(Eri+Sayu)+Reina
(Risa+Ai)+Reina
(KonKon+Mako)+Reina! (lol just kidding :P )

but yes this formula spells trouble! :doh:

How's Sayu going to save herself! XD   and poor Ai chan!

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« Reply #211 on: October 11, 2006, 05:47:21 PM »
uh oh UH oh UHOHHHH!! and so the drama is about to begin!!...
Reina's gonna be soooo sorry.. cuz if Ai and Risa found em...
Ai+Risa , Sayu+Eri (provided Eri doesn't find out)
but... Reina....?????
maybe they'll form like a... Ai+Risa+Reina+Sayu+Eri
too awkwardddd!!!

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« Reply #212 on: October 14, 2006, 09:21:34 AM »
Chapter 33


[Eri’s Room]

“Jump jump take off shiyouze!
Tenshi no hane wo motte iru
Miagereba  mirai
Boys & Girls! Be Ambitious~~~”

Eri sang the group’s new single in a light-hearted voice as she stepped out of the shower. She had just taken a quick bathe to refresh herself. It was like routine for her as she did it every night before going to bed.

Sliding open the little cupboard where she kept all her toiletries, she took out the pink and white hairdryer and proceeded to plug it into the wall plug.

“Hey hey happy na mainichi
Yashinteki de iin ja nai ka
Minna datte onaji
Hitori ja naize”

However, before she could continue with the next verse, the hairdryer in her hands made a strange sputtering sound and fell silent.

“Eh?”

Shaking and smacking at the appliance, Eri tried to get it working again without success.

Puffing up her cheeks, she set it down on the vanity and left the room in a huff to try and borrow one.

Outside in the hallway, Eri was surprised to not see light under the doors of her fellow rokkies.

“That’s strange, I thought Sayu sleeps with the light on. And Reina doesn’t even sleep till the sun is almost up.”

Shrugging her shoulders, she decided to try her luck on the gokkies level instead. Being a little woozy from the sleepiness she felt, Eri pushed at the lift button even though it was only a floor up.



[Gokkies Storey]

When the elevator doors slid open, she was again astonished to see the darkness below the doors of every room except Makoto’s.

“Knock knock.”

Eri was sure she heard a yep then a rustling of papers before the door opened and she was met with a scowling Makoto.

“Kamei-chan? What’s up.”

Makoto was rubbing her knee with one hand while trying to balance with her other hand leaning against the doorframe. It was evident that she wasn’t happy at being interrupted with whatever she was busy with.

“Sorry Mako-chan but could I borrow your dryer? Mine’s been faulty ever since Sayumi borrowed it.”

Noticing Eri’s damp hair was already soaking the top of her PJs, Makoto made a face and stepped back from the entrance to let her junior in.

“It’s in the bathroom.”

When Eri found the sky blue hairdryer, she observed that the bathroom was filled with toiletries of both colors – pink and blue.

“Mako-chan, do you need so many toiletries? They are almost repetitive except for the colors.”

“The pink ones are Asami-chan’s.”

Makoto replied the question like she’s been asked it a thousand times before. And maybe she was considering how often the gokkies sleep over in each other’s rooms.

“What’s that?”

Pointing to the black wire she had stepped on as she exited the bathroom, Eri saw that it ran from a wall plug to under the bed.

“That’s….. nothing.”

Makoto lied not wanting to tell Eri what the wire was for.

Mako-chan, I won’t tell if it’s a secret. You know I won’t.”

“Oh alright.”

Giving in to Eri’s persistent whining, Makoto knelt down on the floor and lifted the bed sheet that was hiding the space between the bed and the floor. After sometime, she reemerged with a device in her hands.

Staring at the silver shiny gadget in Makoto’s hands, Eri was amazed.

“Cool!”


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Are you all gonna kill me for not having anything about TakaGaki and SayuTanaka in this chapter? But there is a reason for this :D  So please look forward to the next installment for more poolside action :P  

wordsworth: It's back to poolside action in the next chapter :P

jafeijai: ...dun dun DUNNN.... made me laugh out out. Will it be a plot twist? Hmmm I really don't know yet XD

ChrNo: I was wondering if I made it obvious enough that the foursome were going to end up at the same place. I guess I did ;)

rndmnwierd: Strawberries and honey pie XD

Yuuyami: Drumroll for the next chapter please :lol:

KrazyForKamei: Some long awaited Kamei in this chapter~~ Are you happy :D

Sukoshi: Reina is one popular girl eh, and we can all see why :P

stefy: Wow a fivesome, thats gonna be interesting :lol:
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« Reply #213 on: October 14, 2006, 09:43:21 AM »
Omg :evil: I haven't checked for a long time again! :doh: You know how like when a topic has new replies the the title goes bold and stuff in the main forum page, I swear I never saw this one go bold even though it had over a page of new replies T_T. Oh well, at least I finally checked it now... wee, the sad part's (temporarily!?) over!

But now we're gonna have the confrontation (assumption, since it would be weird if TakaGaki just walked past Sayu and Reina without noticing XD)! I don't know if I should be looking forward to an angsty part or a massive-pairing part or not :P Thinking about it, how come Sayu and Reina couldn't do it in one of their rooms or something.. oh wait, then we wouldn't have a story here would we :D


O_O! I see a new chapter right when I was previewing this reply! Gahh! No confrontation yet, but if there's a reason for this I'll be more than willing to wait ^^.

And, Makoto's "device"... it's not what I think it is, right? :o

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« Reply #214 on: October 14, 2006, 09:46:51 AM »
:shock:

"bed" + "device/gadget" + "shiny/silver"

Only one thing comes to my mind... :roll:

Mako-chan's a Kamen Rider!!! XD

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« Reply #215 on: October 14, 2006, 10:50:21 AM »
I think her device is part of her super semi-secert spy kit.

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« Reply #216 on: October 14, 2006, 11:22:02 AM »
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And, Makoto's "device"... it's not what I think it is, right? :o


It's never what we think it is ;)  I bet it's a super telescope thingy with 1000x zoom that Eri will try out and accidently see what's in the bushes!  and just as Eri notices (along with makoto) there will be crying coming from below for Risa and Ai have also seen the bush people !

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« Reply #217 on: October 14, 2006, 02:20:57 PM »
Oh my~! -punts for no Takagaki or Kameishige, but you're okay! You had the hardhat with you-

Write more more more more more moooooooore *-*

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« Reply #218 on: October 14, 2006, 07:45:21 PM »
weee~~ new chapter!! :D hehe, i can easily picture Kamei randomly singing before sleeping XD
silvery object? o.O could it be.....[mumble mumble]?

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« Reply #219 on: October 15, 2006, 07:58:14 AM »
Silver shiny gadget? Mako-chan has a microphone? Honey Pie! I love that song.

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