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« Reply #260 on: November 07, 2006, 12:57:37 PM »
Yup, my hardhat's still on tight~! -weight of a boulder- X_X;

Poor rokkies ; ; Nice job walking in the wrong time Ai... Nice job... >_<...

The future scenarios in my head... I wonder which route you're taking :]

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« Reply #261 on: November 07, 2006, 05:08:02 PM »
YAY FOR REVEALING FOUNTAIN~~:yay: no hell to break loose...for now =]

:shocked: omg...the Rokkies are taking a beating here..first Reina and Sayumi getting lectured by Takahashi..then Kamei FINALLY realizing the truth and running away...x_X will the emotional beating ever end?!

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« Reply #262 on: November 07, 2006, 10:56:06 PM »
Awwww poor Eri! T_T but YAY for having lots of her in this chapter. She's a little slow though...poor dear :P

And the device was a fountain?! I thought it was a....something much more...yeah....shows where my mind is most of the time XD

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« Reply #263 on: November 08, 2006, 12:00:31 AM »
You broke Eri! XDXD

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« Reply #264 on: November 08, 2006, 12:07:20 AM »
I have some catching up to do, but just stoping by to say keep up the good work.

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« Reply #265 on: November 08, 2006, 01:43:26 AM »
you know, Sayu revealed on her radio show that the person who'd look the scariest if they're angry is Eri because it's very rare to see Eri angry. And now look what you've done :P Make sure the next part will be :shocked: hehe

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« Reply #266 on: November 08, 2006, 06:52:15 AM »
Hmmm.... Sayu taking Risa? I dont know, that seems like it can have a deeper meaning.

Heh, this was a really good chapter :)
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« Reply #267 on: November 08, 2006, 11:37:40 AM »
Eri wouldn't be Eri if she wasn't a little boke in the begining! Then now whats gonna happen? Sukoshi kinda makes a point there since nows a days theres more kamegaki on screen, why not? but then again that'll only complicate things even more for Ai... up to you friend (mind if i call you friend? or hamhamz? take a pick) lastly nice job!

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« Reply #268 on: November 08, 2006, 05:19:12 PM »
Wow! I just started reading this fic today,but.... I'm thrilled!:ONomg:
WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT!?!?!?!?:ONtantrum:
aw.... really.... Reina ans Risa together is just... lovelly!:ONluvluv1:
I needed to put al least four letters... ¬¬'

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« Reply #269 on: November 10, 2006, 06:21:41 AM »
Chapter 38

Approaching Konno slowly with cautious steps, Makoto thought of what to say. She knew Asami had a jealous streak and hearing from Eri that they had shared the previous night together over a brand-new chocolate fountain wasn’t going to help matters even if all that happened really was innocent.

“Asami-chan…”

Seeing Makoto coming closer and closer, Konno didn’t know if she could face her. As a result, she did the next best thing. She ran away. Whirling away quickly, Asami knelt down on the floor next to Ai and stroked her back soothingly.

“Are you alright Ai-chan?”

Averting her glazed eyes away from someplace she had been staring at earlier, Ai now focused on Kon Kon’s cubby cheeks instead. Seeing her friend’s concerned expression, Ai knew she could trust her.

“What have I done Kon Kon? What have I done?

Collapsing into Asami’s arms in a fit of sobs, Ai finally let out all the pent up frustration she had been holding in for days. She had been pretending everything was fine ever since the night she and Risa chanced upon the two rokkies in the bushes. But now she could no longer swallow back the tears that were drowning her inside.

The gentle gokkie was the only other person besides Risa that Ai could pour all her woes out to and this time she didn’t hold back. Asami didn’t mind that Ai’s tears were soaking her favorite pink shirt, she just hoped holding Ai tight and rocking her gently was enough to make the miserable girl feel better.

Seeing Konno’s actions, Makoto knew only too well that her soul mate was avoiding her. It was just her character to avoid a confrontation. Makoto gave up trying for now and decided to look Konno up again later that night. She just needed to get her alone for a while. Five minutes was all Makoto needed to prove her innocence.

“Yo, you’re still alive right?”

Strolling over to Reina who had since planted herself in a far corner of the room, Makoto plopped down heavily in front of the yankee.

“Of course I am. Why shouldn’t I be?”



Reina’s reply was indignant but she really was barely alive at all. Her heart was almost dead, bleeding from the fact that her actions had caused such a serious rift between the two generations.

“You know it isn’t entirely your fault right?”

Makoto tried again. After hanging out with Reina much more after their Iroppoi Jirettai single, she knew the girl was hard on herself, even if she never admitted to it.

“Yeah it isn’t. Global warning isn’t my fault. But just about everything else is.”

“Come on Reina. This is blown way out of proportion. I bet things were really simple. Why don’t you just clarify stuff?”

Reina never liked to explain herself. It wasn’t her style she said. But everyone knew that most times things would be a lot easier if she just did. It was hard guessing her thoughts when she constantly kept to herself.

“You don’t understand.”

“Try me.”

Settling into a more comfortable position on the hard floor, Makoto peered intently into Reina’s eyes. Ogawa was here now, and she was ready as she ever will be as the listening ear her junior so desperately needed.



[In a random hallway]


“I didn’t even know this place existed.”

Risa was truly astonished as she looked around the fairly dusty corridor. Sayumi had led her all the way here after refusing to let go of her arm. Practically forcing her to come along as they searched for Eri after she took off.

“We stumbled upon this place when we were exploring the building once.”

Looking at Sayumi with a raised eyebrow, Risa at last had the answer to the question she had wondered about for so long. What the girls did every time they ran off together. And now she knew. Exploring buildings… and each other.

“You two are better at buildings than me eh.”

Risa expressed amusement at her joke referencing back to the time they made an appearance on Music Fighter for Osaka Koi No Uta. Not hearing laughing from Sayumi, she gave a cough instead to hide her embarrassment.

“Where’s Eri anyway?”

Being second best at changing subjects and creating atmosphere after Yaguchi, Risa put her carefully honed skills to use now and alerted herself back to the missing turtle.

“In there.”

Following Sayumi’s lifted finger, Risa’s eyes followed the direction it was pointed at and let her eyes fall on top of the object standing a few feet away. Her expression that ensued was something MasterCard couldn’t buy.

“You’re kidding…. She’s in the broom closet?"



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TydusArandor: Haha yeah, I bet spending so much time together made sparks fly. HAKKKANNNN Fusion! :ONluvluv2:

Sukoshi: I won’t comment on that yet. Keep reading to find out :ONkekeke:

wordsworth: Yup definitely poor rokkies :baa60776: When will the trauma end?

Yuuyami: What do you think might happen? I love reading about what readers think :ONglasses:

jafeijai: It will end but I don’t know when :ONwhistle: Keeping the suspense.

KrazyForKamei: Don’t let your mind wonder that far. This story is suitable for all age groups XD

rndmnwierd: Its unfortunate that its Eri but someone has to be ‘broken” right :pen_nod:

erink: Hey you’re back :yay: I'm happy now :)

DO Me DO Me: I just read about Eri getting mad on Sayumi’s radioshow. And omg the similarities :kcrazy:

Owaranai_sLaVe: Glad you liked the chapter. Oh Sayumi taking Risa definitely has meaning to it. Get ready the  :popcorn:

stefy: You can call me anything as long as its not bad :ROFL I toyed with the idea of KameMame but I don’t know if I’ll go through with it. It is complicated enough isn’t it XD

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« Reply #270 on: November 10, 2006, 06:55:44 AM »
First comment <3

At the moment, my fingers are like, numb (Nail polish spilt on my hands X_______X) so I can't feel the sense of touching with my fingers. Hell, I don't think I could finger print anything for a while... X____X;

Anywho... >>;

I can already tell that confrontations are inevitable, but you'd have to write more so I can eliminate scenarios from my head :]...

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« Reply #271 on: November 10, 2006, 07:20:53 AM »
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Her expression that ensued was something MasterCard couldn’t buy.


Lol, XDXD

Ah drama, I love thee.

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« Reply #272 on: November 10, 2006, 07:57:42 AM »
This practically summed up the last chapter :D


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« Reply #273 on: November 10, 2006, 08:19:41 AM »
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“Yeah it isn’t. Global warning isn’t my fault. But just about everything else is.”


You mean she's the reason why Megumi left? :ONomg: j/k

Eri in the broom closet? Great! :ONwahaha:

Hey, I kinda work for MasterCard :ONkekeke:

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« Reply #274 on: November 10, 2006, 09:13:27 AM »
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“Yeah it isn’t. Global warning isn’t my fault. But just about everything else is.”



LOL I love that line....poor Reina...sadly I think she has a little part to do with global warming though XD

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Her expression that ensued was something MasterCard couldn’t buy.



Ah the one thing I love about both Sayu and Gaki san are there expressions...I think Sayu's mastered the innocent surprised look while Gaki has the shocked surprised look down :D

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“You’re kidding…. She’s in the broom closet?"



Why of course Gaki san XD   maybe she was expecting Eri to have grown out of the small spaces by now but we all know she has new uses for such places with sayu :pen_sweat:

great update Hammy san ! :baa60776:

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« Reply #275 on: November 10, 2006, 04:49:12 PM »
The part where konkon consoles Ai and moko consoles Reina... is it still in the studio? which means they can see each other hmmm I mean Reina can see Ai weeping in konkon's shoulders? won't that like make her give in or something still assuming their all in the same room...
Looking forward to next chapter hamhamz!! For some reason I'm looking forward to a KameGaki just alittle bit....

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« Reply #276 on: November 10, 2006, 05:04:17 PM »
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This practically summed up the last chapter :D


I love that cap XD ah, memories of 2003...

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« Reply #277 on: November 12, 2006, 04:46:17 AM »
Very nice chapter indeed! :tfr9a7wg:

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I love that cap XD ah, memories of 2003...


well... she sure was strange....:ONbadluck:

not that she isn't now...:ONbigdeal:

but we sure love her also! :ONwriggly:
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« Reply #278 on: November 12, 2006, 08:20:07 AM »
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{...}Owaranai_sLaVe: Glad you liked the chapter. Oh Sayumi taking Risa definitely has meaning to it. Get ready the  :popcorn:{...}
Heh, of course, but  I love the ending to the latest chapter. haha, when I first found out about Eri liking corneres and everything, I thought I had found the explination for her being shy *then... she cut her hair XD*

W00t~ I knew it. Sigh, Sayu and Risa? Thats the furthest thing from my mind... but Im not saying I wouldnt be open to it!


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« Reply #279 on: November 12, 2006, 09:05:17 AM »
LOL, that cap is priceless XD  I don't know if it's just me, but I do think the pressure of an heavy object pressing on to you would feel pretty nice. I don't know about corners or broom closets though :doh:

I don't know what to stick to anymore, KameGaki or TakaGaki @_@;;;.

Nice chapter as always, I love how there's always something I can look forward to in the next chapter, great job on that & looking really really forward to next chapter :tfr9a7wg:

Now I can sleep happily tonight :ONsleep:

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