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« Reply #320 on: December 28, 2006, 11:37:57 AM »
Chapter 42


[Cafeteria]

She had been glancing at the digital clock hanging on the wall at the far end of the noisy cafeteria for the past 30 minutes. And now Risa wanted to scream. The usually filled gorokkies table was deafeningly quiet. And it was understandable with just her sitting there.

It was two days after KonKon's graduation from Hello! Project with the final Wonderful Hearts Concert that night. Now without her and Makoto who had chosen to move into Asami's newly rented apartment, the number of the younger generations had officially dwindled to five. Not inclusive of Koharu. Sometimes Risa felt bad for not including miracle girl in their group activities but the girl stuck out sorely and seemed more comfortable with Berryz or C-ute anyway.

Pushing herself off the chair with both hands and picking up her tray of half eaten food, Risa had just about given up on waiting for anyone else to appear for breakfast when she caught sight of a pair of familiar figures strolling in.

"Morning Gaki-san!"

Nodding to acknowledge the greeting, Risa quickly observed the pair in front of her. Practically inseparable with their arms tightly wound around each other, they would probably be mistaken for a single person from some distance away.



"You look happy."

Sayumi blushed hard when she realized the person her senior was referring to was her. Reluctantly unlatching herself from Eri's side, the girl turned slightly to face Risa before speaking earnestly.

"I wanna thank you Gaki-san. I don't know what you did but Eririn forgave me that night. Now we're as loving as before."

The glee on Sayumi's face made Risa's voice catch in her throat. Coughing a few times, she thought of something to do.

"If only she knew."

Eager to ease the guilty look that she might have let escape, Risa reached for the glass of orange juice on her tray to appear occupied. But in her hastiness, she accidentally spilled some of the freshly squeezed drink onto the table.

"I'll get some paper towels."

Offered Sayumi and as soon as she was out of earshot, Eri pulled up closer to Risa. Now their faces were only inches apart. Kinda of like how it was two nights ago.

"You don't have to feel so guilty. It's not like we did anything wrong."

"We didn't do anything wrong?!"

But Risa was too mentally exhausted to go through this with Eri again. It was proven futile that night and she doubted it would make any difference today. The Erien had her own way of thinking and clearly she thought their little "experiment" was perfectly logical.

"Let's just make sure the.... ahem... incident stays between the two of us?"

"It's between you, me and Mr Cupboard."

Eri had a straight face and her tone sounded sincere. So much so that Risa was positive the younger girl meant the cabinet/wardrobe/cupboard/whatever as a thinking, living thing.

"........." :MKerr:

"Okay, between the three of us."





[Member's Lounge]


"Did you see the bulletin?"

Koharu's excited voice snapped Risa from her thoughts and pulled her back to reality. Even though she was miles away thinking of what she could do to reconcile Ai and Reina, she felt obliged to answer the youngest member and always did no matter how busy she was. This time was no exception.  

“What bulletin?”

“You know the one about us getting two weeks off?”

Gesturing down the corridor to where the member’s notice board was situated, Koharu jumped around elatedly like a kid with a new toy.

“Two weeks off eh.”

Mumbling to herself, Risa thanked Koharu for that useful bit of information before running off to find Ai and Reina. This could be exactly what she needed.



[Hello! Morning Bus]


The girls had just finished filming another couple of Hakkan CM at various locations around Tokyo. Now as the bus bounded back to the studio, Risa told Eri about her little plan.

“Really? What were their reactions?”

“Spend the two weeks in Yokohama with you?” and ”Yokohama!”

“Let me guess, Reina was the second one.”

Eri said with a small smile. She knew most of her fellow 6th gen reactions like the back of her hand.

“Yup. I’m still surprised I managed to pull it through. I just hope they won’t find out I invited both of them.”

“No problem. I’ll help.”

Puffing up her chest, Eri patted her hand on it and her pose resembled that of a departmental store mannequin.

Laughing and pointing at Kame, Risa’s usual infections laugh sounded throughout the bus with repeated “what?!” protests from Eri.



[Train Station]


“The next train will be arriving in ten minutes.”

Tapping her feet at regular beats, Risa waited impatiently for the due train to arrive. Takahashi was already at her house and now all she had to do was ensure Tanaka arrived too.

In no time, the train from Tokyo pulled into the station and stopped with a loud hissing noise. Scanning the crowd that rushed out onto the platform, Risa caught side of a girl buried in a thick purple jacket with a hat pulled low over her face.

Even from a distance away Risa could tell she was Reina with the familiar knee high boots and huge sunglasses.

“Yo!”

“How did you know it was Reina?”

A surprised Reina asked when Risa tapped her on the shoulder and led her towards the exit by holding her hand.

“I have a good memory and I saw you in this jacket before.”

“You did?”

Pulling the jacket tighter around herself, Reina searched her memory bank for an occasion that she had worn this. But it was impossible since she almost never wore anything twice.



“I was kidding. You mentioned buying a new purple jacket so I figured you’ll be wearing it.”

“What’s that?”

Pointing to the carrier in Risa’s other hand, Reina jumped topics in a flash.

“Oh just groceries. Come on I’ll show you the way to my house.”

 

[#XX Yokohama Lane]


“Woah this is your house? Reina’s impressed.”

Gawking at the rather massive structure that loomed at them even from the gate, Reina let Risa steer her towards the entrance.

“You have a pool! Reina wants to swim!” :MKswim:

“Gaki-san you’re back?”

A head poked out from behind the oak doors and the expression revealed was shock then anger.

“You lied to me Risa.”


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wordsworth: Awww thinking naughty thoughts already? But I’m guilty of that too :MKevil:

stefy: I missed Makoto and now you got me missing Ai-bon too :MKcry1: Where are you both? I need some long overdue W cuteness.

KrazyForKamei:  ....*falls over with swirly anime confused eyes* <--- That really got me laughing hard :MKkekeke:

Saikami: So many cute icons peppered in ya comment. I like :MKgroovin:

Drako60: Reina appears in this chapter. Sorry for the long wait :MKheh:

Sukoshi: I saw that too. And I was :ON@_@: as well

rndmnwierd: It happens with every graduation doesn’t it :MKsigh:

sLaVe: I know what you mean. Recently it’s almost always KameMame every where I look. But in the backstage clips there’s always a little TakaGaki at least :MKlove2:

00HB: I love Risa’s reactions too. AND I love Risa :MKlove1:

Yuuyami: Yep pictures makes things so much clearer don’t they? :MKgrin:

TydusArandor: Approximately 4 feet wide and 2 feet deep. Plenty of space to “move around” in :ONhee:

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« Reply #321 on: December 28, 2006, 04:54:26 PM »
YATTA~~ NEW CHAPTER!!! :yay:

yay~ KameShige is all happy-happy again!! XD
that's right everyone, Mr Closet is a living being, and should be treated as such :pen_nod: XDXD

oh noes...[suspense] the tension between Takahashi Ai and Tanaka Reina builds once more..what will happen at #XX Yokohama Lane? tune in next time to find out..[/suspense]

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jafeijai: Howdy fellow Risa lover. Where have you been? Did you know there’s already a line to marry Gaki-san at her thread? :panda_omg2:


howdy yourself, fellow Risa lover. i lost my internet for a while, so couldn't get on...THERE'S A LINE?!?! HOW THE HELL DID I MISS THAT?!?! :ONfrustrated:

anyways, back on-topic, i'm liking the idea of pictures within the chapters :thumbsup keep it coming!! :D

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« Reply #322 on: December 28, 2006, 05:32:59 PM »
Monkey! *pokes monkey emoticon*

*poke*

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« Reply #323 on: December 28, 2006, 05:55:21 PM »
Woooo update! *jumps for joy* I LOVE the picture idea. Pretty genius if I do say so myself.

There are monkeys invading ur "responding to comments" part at the end of the story XD XD Sorry had to point that out

Why do I have this strange feeling Risa's gonna get beat up? XD Ai-chan and Reina work out their differences for a few minutes to take her down

I'm glad all is well in Kameshige land ^.^

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« Reply #324 on: December 29, 2006, 09:07:28 AM »
KameShige back again. :MKlove2:

Eri doesn't need to worry. It was just practice. And practice makes perfect. :panda_kiss:

I hope a catfight doesn't erupt in Risa's house. :MKrun::MKpassby:

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« Reply #325 on: December 29, 2006, 06:22:58 PM »
Ohhhh. I hope the 3 of them get back together.
They made such a nice trio! :panda_love:
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« Reply #326 on: December 30, 2006, 02:29:40 AM »
YAY NEW CHAPTER!!! :baa60776: :ONluvluv2: Ah Risa with her evil plans. :heart: :ONkekeke: I wonder what will happen. O_O Either they're going to beat eachother into a bloody pulp OR something else. ;D I'm hoping it's option number two. XD
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« Reply #327 on: January 05, 2007, 02:28:31 PM »
wow,,,great story! i really like it,,,i wonder what will risa do,,,

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« Reply #328 on: January 12, 2007, 05:40:21 AM »
Awesome story, your writing had me hooked from post 1!:D :D :D
Now that I'm finally caught up I'd like to share the love! :heart: :heart:  
Keep up the amazing work!:heart: :heart:
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« Reply #329 on: January 12, 2007, 08:41:14 AM »
Chapter 43

Dinner was that night could be summarized in one word. Dreadful. The girls were seated at the round six-seater table eating the curry rice that was just taken out of the microwave. All the groceries bought by Risa during the day sat in the refrigerator untouched. Obviously when the two found out they were tricked into come here, no one had the mood to cook.



"I guess we're all sleeping in separate rooms tonight then?"

Pausing to let out a little sigh, Risa continued while glancing at the other girls.

"I'll take my parent's room then. Ai-chan can sleep in mine and Reina if you don't mind you can have my sister's."

Silent nods were the only reply she received.



"What did I get myself into? Two weeks of mental torture with people who're not gonna talk to me?!"

Risa kept the screaming inside her head. The last thing she needed was to get her friends even more pissed off. It looks like it’s her parent's king-sized bed all to herself tonight then.



[Some Hours Later]

Ai didn't know how long she had been lying on the bed and staring at the ceiling. She never did this unless it was in Risa's room. In fact she never had the habit of doing this until the first time she stayed over. Risa had her ceiling specially decorated with glow-in-the-dark stars just to cheer her up. She still remembered the huge fight she had with her mom that triggered this masterpiece.  

She knew this time was no different, Risa was trying her best to reconcile her relationship with Reina and she deeply appreciated it even though she could not tell her something she had been thinking for awhile. How could she tell someone trying so hard that she had decided to end it? To break off the relatively new relationship they had with Reina. Was it right for her to decide it on her own? But things have come to such a situation that it seemed the most feasible approach.

Pulling a nearby pillow over her head, Ai screamed softly into it. She was so confused right now with her heart and mind telling her different things.



*Knock knock.*

"Come in."

Not thinking that the visitor could possibly be Reina, Ai continued lying on the bed not moving as she waited for Risa to enter. Footsteps made their way over to the bedside and a voice spoke.

"Would Ai-chan go out with Reina?"

Sitting up with a start, Ai looked up at the person standing in front of her. Reina was fully dressed right down to the scarf around her neck.



Seeing the pleading eyes that the younger girl had, Ai decided she would. Maybe she could end it tonight.



[Inside A Cab]

"This is a rather strange place to talk isn't it?"

Looking at the driver from the corner of her eyes, Ai was wary of their speech. She couldn't risk their identities as idols being exposed or worse what they talked about making its way to the tabloids the very next day.

"We should be fine. It's not Tokyo."

Reassuring Ai, Reina pulled down lower the hat she had suggested Ai wear. With the thick scarf Reina had around her own neck, the two of them were difficult to recognize as members of Morning Musume unless someone looked at them very closely

"Ok then. What is this about?"

Finally letting her defenses down, Ai waited for Reina to speak.

"Reina wanted to clear things up. Gaki-san is being stressed out by this and dragging it longer wouldn't do any of us any good."

"I feel the same way. That's why I agreed to come out with you."

"Reina knows it's her fault and I guess... she's sorry."

Slightly taken aback at the apology, Ai turned towards Reina but she failed to see the girl's face. The young yankee was looking out the window presumably staring at the passing night view.

"Reina's sorry for making everyone sad. She didn't mean for things to turn out like this."

"I...."

Even though they had known each other for about 3 years since the first time they met, Ai still couldn't believe Reina was apologizing. It had to be a first. She never apologized to anyone unless it was the dance instructor. Now she had second thoughts about breaking up. But it still seemed the best way out for everyone.

Biting her lower lip, Ai toughened her heart and braced herself for Reina's reaction.

"We should break up."

"WHAT?"

Jerking her lowered head up to look Ai in the eyes, Reina searched her face for the meaning behind those words.

"I said we should break up. We should end this."

"End this?"

The tears brimming in her eyes suddenly fell in huge drops. Ai-chan was breaking up with her?

"I know it isn't right to tell you this after you just apologized but I have been thinking a lot. Maybe.... maybe we just aren't right for each other."

The image of Ai sitting in front of her started to get blurry with all her tears. Reina didn’t remember crying so hard since she was a couple of years old. And that was a long time ago. Now her heart felt like it was being shredded into a million little pieces. This was the first time she had tried giving her heart to someone she deemed special enough and this was the ending she received?

Watching the never-ending tears falling from Reina's eyes, Ai felt her own heart breaking. Why was she so cold-hearted? Why did she say such hurtful words to a young girl? But she had to maintain her stance. Like what Reina said earlier their relationship was doing nobody any good.  

Then the sound of their hearts shattering was magnified many times louder. In Reina’s mind she thought it was probably due to all the hurt she was feeling at the moment but why did those come accompanied with the sounds of breaking of glass and crushing mental? And why couldn't she see anything all of a sudden? Had she fallen asleep? Except that she didn't remember taking a nap.

And why was Ai calling her name in such a panic-stricken voice? As Ai’s voice became softer and sounded further away, Reina’s whole body just felt so tired....


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jafeijai: So glad to see you back. It's been such a loooooooooong time :cheers

rndmnwierd: Hee hee aren't they just so cute? Me was in happy-clicky-monkey mode :pepper:

KrazyForKamei: Risa getting beaten up? Wow I actually wanna see that. But nope not gonna happen... oh maybe... *gears in head turning* :ONshifty:

wordsworth: If a catfight does erupt I wanna be there. *Gets comfy in chair* Anyone brought the :popcorn:?

00HB: Trios *sign* Who says 3 makes a crowd? :pen_no:

Saikami: And you get OPTION 2!!!!! *in a loud booming voice* Hmmmm I sound like a gameshow announcer don't I :ONhehehe:

chao_88: :yay: I like the sound of that. "Great story." Repeats to self XD

jenmoshka: :panda_kiss: I always love a new reader. :khello:

There I didn't use a monkey emoticon. Not a single one *proud* :p
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« Reply #330 on: January 12, 2007, 11:07:28 AM »
Boom! Car crash. Wonky's dead. Too bad, I was hoping for another three-way

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« Reply #331 on: January 12, 2007, 12:21:12 PM »
Nice choice of pics for the story lil_hamz :MKlove2:
(hah I used a monkey emoticon :lol:)

I thought Risa's plan won't be able to do anything but it was actually able to do something, although it's not what I was expecting :ONpleeease:

Poor Ai.:ONgyaaah:

Poor Reina.:ONgyaaah:

Poor Risa.:ONgyaaah:

At least Eri and Sayu are doing fine.

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« Reply #332 on: January 12, 2007, 12:42:23 PM »
OMG !!!!!  *Freaks out*  :ONscared: :ONscared: :ONscared:

Here I was getting all misty eyed (for real)  :cry: The ending part really pulled me in and I felt so bad for Reina :ONfainted: but then !  wah!  what a way to end the chapter!

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« Reply #333 on: January 12, 2007, 12:51:10 PM »
O______________________O;

-Too shocked to say anything feeling pessimistic about what has happened to Reina. Though, definitely has some traces of hope that she is alive...-

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« Reply #334 on: January 12, 2007, 04:35:39 PM »
This latest chapter was just sad....sad....sad...and more sad :cry:

So I suppose the three-way is over...but that crash..very unexpected..THEY MUST SURVIVE, at least for Gaki-san's sake, they MUST survive..or else she'll be sad... :cry: (funny how I only think of things for the sake of Risa XD)

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« Reply #335 on: January 12, 2007, 06:18:49 PM »
OMG! No!!:o :( :cry:
Seriously hate cliffhangers! But...maybe...just maybe this'll bring ReinaxRisaxAi back together again!! *Hopes*:heart:
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« Reply #336 on: January 12, 2007, 07:00:09 PM »
O____O :cry: You won't kill off Reina, will you? :cry::cry::cry: You can't! :ONtantrum: Maybe this will make things better between Ai and Reina though. :O If Reina dies though I'll cry and then the Wonky Crew will be after you! :tama-mad: but we still love you XD :ROFL Write more!!!
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« Reply #337 on: January 12, 2007, 08:04:25 PM »
I laughed at the irony. Ai surviving, Reina dying, then Ai being eaten by the guilt of breaking up with her.

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« Reply #338 on: January 12, 2007, 11:21:57 PM »
I just finished reading all of the chapters that you posted and I must say that this is a very good story, but that last chapter made me sad :ONgyaaah: WHY?

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« Reply #339 on: January 12, 2007, 11:46:56 PM »
I just hoped that you're not killing off the Reina character in your fic...  :(:cry: :( :cry:

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