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Offline len.chan

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« Reply #120 on: August 26, 2006, 12:24:59 AM »
mm.. I was going to write something about Rika's history but it ended being just Maki's part XDXD
I know that Maki's chapters are always sad but it's the way that i fell it has to be her role. I have to find her a love or something XD


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The door of the apartment was closed behind her slowly. She left the bags on the floor and went to the room without even turning on the lights. She wasn’t tired but lately to sleep it seemed the only way to release her mind from the memories. Although she never forgot, it was less painful, but because of all what was happening the feeling of loneliness came back again and stronger than before.

Why are you always alone?

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“Eh?”

Maki was staring at the girl in front of her with a surprised expression on her face.

“So… sorry I… it’s none of my business, sorry” she said babbling.    
“No… it’s just, nobody asked me that before”

She was Hitomi Yoshizawa, one of the new members. They’d never talked before alone and it was a little weird that their first words were that question. Now she was ashamed. Maki could say it because of the red on the other girl’s cheeks. She was only a few months older than Gocchin but this way it seemed just a little scared kid.

“I like to be alone” she answered finally. She was sure that if she didn’t say anything Hitomi would run away and would never dare to talk with her again.

“I like it, too” she said sitting next to Maki.

For a long time, they stayed next to each other in silence.


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When did she become so beautiful?

It was the only thought in Maki’s mind for all night. Yossi had invited her to stay over at her home, like many times before, but now, with all that weird things floating in her mind, to stay the night there it seemed a very bad idea.

“What?” asked Hitomi when she realized that her friend was staring at her.

Maki’s lips acted on her own and reached Yossi’s kissing her for the first time. It was just a few seconds before she realized what she was doing.

“Sorry!”

She tried to move away but Yossi put an arm around her waist and leaned to kiss her again, this time more passionate. Suddenly, the old shy Hitomi Yoshizawa appeared again.

“I’d never done that before” her breath caressed Maki’s lips.
“It’s my first, too”

Gocchin kissed her again, this time without hesitation, and let the sensations take the control of her mind.

That night passed without any other word said.

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“I’m sorry…”
“At least, she loves you?”

Yossi just nodded to answer.

“Then it’s ok” said Maki caressing Hitomi’s cheek with her hand “As long as you’re happy”

 A tear began to roll down the taller girl.

“I don’t want to loose you” she said.
“You’re not gonna loose me. I’ll always be here for you”

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I’ll always be here for you

Gocchin rolled on the bed and buried her face in the pillow. Soon she couldn’t fight the tears.

“Always…”

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« Reply #121 on: August 26, 2006, 12:37:19 AM »
:cry: yes, please find someone for Maki so she can move on

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« Reply #122 on: August 26, 2006, 01:17:45 AM »
You're killing me len.chan! First Rika and Aya, now Maki. And the gokkies and rokkies! Whatever shall happen next!

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« Reply #123 on: August 26, 2006, 01:27:28 AM »
>_<  I'm confused about this fic right now!. I don't know what I like more: YoshiGoto, MikiYoshi, GAM... >_<

The YoshiGoto moment it's so cuteeeeee!

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« Reply #124 on: August 26, 2006, 02:51:14 AM »
Len, you are a GENIUS! :bow:

Although YoMiki is beyond cute, I'm currently in the mood for supporting YoshiGoto and AyaMiki. :heart:
I'll keep my fingers crossed for them.

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« Reply #125 on: August 26, 2006, 03:35:04 AM »
this gets sadder and sadder...poor maki

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« Reply #126 on: August 26, 2006, 08:17:05 AM »
wahhh dont know which couple to go for now >.<"
100% supports YoMiki !~:D

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« Reply #127 on: August 26, 2006, 08:22:39 AM »
sad chapter :cry:, but really good, found someone for Maki, I dont want her to be alone
and like everybody says it's alot of couples now

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« Reply #128 on: August 26, 2006, 10:39:26 AM »
So sad:cry: Now I love this story more than before:heart: (if that's even possible:) )

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« Reply #129 on: August 26, 2006, 10:45:54 AM »
yeah.. there's a lot of couples now, but is funnier that way, don't you think? XD
first was a love triangle with Yossi, Miki and Rika, then Aya joined, we have a square, and now with maki I don't know what is it anymore XDXD

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« Reply #130 on: August 26, 2006, 11:16:18 AM »
Quote from: len.chan
yeah.. there's a lot of couples now, but is funnier that way, don't you think? XD
first was a love triangle with Yossi, Miki and Rika, then Aya joined, we have a square, and now with maki I don't know what is it anymore XDXD


A pentagon! hehehe

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« Reply #131 on: August 26, 2006, 11:19:04 AM »
All because of Yossi!!! XD

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« Reply #132 on: August 26, 2006, 01:04:21 PM »
The more the merrier right?

That thing with Maki is sweet, I love it. Of course I love it. I have this secret thing for Maki but its total secret (shhhhhh!!!)

*kisses len.chan*

who loves you baby?

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« Reply #133 on: August 26, 2006, 01:45:29 PM »
Why did Maki and Yossi break up??  when? how? why? why? why? (bet it's must be for some sad reason again...*sob*)

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« Reply #134 on: August 26, 2006, 02:00:08 PM »
main reason? Rika XDXD
wow, that chapter is getting a lot of comments.. i wonder how it would be when i'll post Rika's part of the history :p

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« Reply #135 on: August 26, 2006, 06:33:52 PM »
I'm so freaking sad now!! Poor Maki!! Yes, yes, she needs someone! len.chan, you're a genius, make it happen!

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« Reply #136 on: August 26, 2006, 07:40:25 PM »
well... that's to compensate the previous sad chapter...:P


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Ai Takahashi was running towards the video room as if the devil went after her. When she opened the door the other girls were waiting already.

“You have it?”
“Yeah…” she said recovering her breath and giving Makoto what she had brought.

Mako just took the tapes and went to the video.

“Hey! At least I deserve a thanks or something!” Ai-chan complained “That security guy was… ew…”
“Come here” said Risa placing her arms around Takahashi’s neck and giving her a sweet kiss “I’ll be your reward”
“That’s disgusting” said Reina, interrupting the girls who looked at her friend with a hurt expression “Not you” she explained “Them”

Then, Tanaka pointed to the screen where the rest of the girls were looking at already.

“That’s Nakazawa-san?” asked Eri confused “What are they doi..., oh…”
“There’s a lot of girls here… it had to be with HER?” said Mako
“Well… maybe Yasuda-san has, you know…, something special…” Konkon’s comment was shy and nobody really paid attention.
“Can’t you just skip that?!”

Ogawa obeyed Reina’s request and changed the tape to the next.

“That’s us!” exclaimed Risa.
“Uhm…, Mako-chan, can you make a copy of that?” asked Ai-chan looking interested at the screen.
“Honey, you’re weird”
“I bet that security guy really loves her job…” joked Eri.

This time was Reina who changed the video searching for what they really wanted to see.

“There!” said freezing the image.

All the girls turned her attention to the screen to see the exactly moment when Miki got mad and punched Rika days ago.

“HA! Finally someone hit her!” shouted Reina happily.
“But why Miki-chan did that?” asked Makoto searching for some signal that could give them some answers.
“Look, there’s Matsuura-san too” said Eri pointing at Aya’s silhouette in the corner.
“Well, she’s been acting weird lately, too” commented Ai-chan.
“Yeah but… how that can be related to Yoshizawa-san?”

Makoto made that question more to herself than to the others. It wasn’t just about Yossi anymore. She could feel that there was something really big happening between her elders and she needed to know what it was.

“Well… maybe it’s because Miki-chan and Yoshizawa-san are so close lately…” said Sayumi shyly.
Everyone turned to look at her because nobody noticed her presence before.

“You know something?” asked Makoto to the younger.
“I’ve seen them this morning… They were really, really close”
“How close, Sayu?”
“They… were… kissing…” answered Sayumi with a tiny voice.
“And why the hell you didn’t tell us before?!” shouted Ogawa almost jumping over Michishige who scared, ran away and hid herself behind Eri.

Risa took Mako from the shoulders and made her to calm down.

“Maybe you didn’t give her the opportunity to say anything ‘cause you’re too obsessed with that…”

Makoto apologized to the younger and then everybody stayed in silence a few seconds. Then Konno began to speak.

“That means Miki and Yossi are dating, right?” the rest of the girls nodded “So… maybe…, Miki-chan was jealous of Ishikawa-san and that’s why she hit her…”
“Well…” said Mako “That’s a start…”

The girls then looked again at the screen. There was a lot to watch yet…

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« Reply #137 on: August 26, 2006, 10:26:44 PM »
huhuhuhuhuhuhuh!!!

Im sorry its too early for a more entertaining comment

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« Reply #138 on: August 26, 2006, 10:37:12 PM »
Suspense! Argh, I can't hold out!

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« Reply #139 on: August 28, 2006, 07:03:45 AM »
I wanna watch the videos too *whines* :lol:

“HA! Finally someone hit her!” shouted Reina happily <--- this was really funny, like really really.

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