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When Love Hurts 48
« Reply #360 on: October 31, 2006, 07:07:04 AM »
sorry for the delay :pen_sorry:
with the end nearer with every chapter is getting more and more difficult to continue...


***48***


Hitomi wasn’t sure about what Miki wanted to talk but she couldn’t stop repeating in her mind that something was wrong. Her girlfriend had stayed in silence while they were looking for a quiet place to talk alone, without any interruption. Finally, they ended at the same place as always, the 4th floor.

When they reached the room, Yossi closed the door and went to hug Miki from behind; trying to release a bit of the awkwardness that she was feeling.

“I have something to ask you and I want the truth” said Miki with a firm tone in her voice.
“Ok”

The older turned to be face to face with her girlfriend, but kept herself inside Yossi’s embrace.

“You went to see Rika-chan the other night?”

Hitomi’s answer was too direct and too sincere. A simple ‘yes’ hit Miki like a hard kick in her guts. But she wouldn’t begin to worry until hear the answer to the next question.

“Why?

This time, the younger moved away from her and took a deep breath before answering.

“I had to finish all this, to make her understand once and for all that it’s over…”
“Well…, I think it didn’t work”

An awkward silence filled the room and Miki cursed herself for starting that conversation. What she should do now? Yossi admitted that she went to see Ishikawa without remorse and the older didn’t know if she should feel relieved or more worried. There was still another question in her mind but she was about the answer.

“Hitomi…”

Hitomi?

Yossi couldn’t remember if Miki had called her by her name before. It sounded so strange…, so serious…

“… I know that you’re hiding something…” continued Fujimoto “…Something big about Rika-chan…”
“There’s nothing about her…” tried to say Yocchan.

Before she could finish the sentence, a slap on her left cheek surprised her.

“I hate people lying to me, Yocchan” said Fujimoto with a cold voice and before Yossi could complain, she continued “I heard you two some days ago talking about a secret…”

The younger caressed her cheek still feeling the contact with Miki’s hand. She felt so stupid… That’s why her girlfriend was acting so weird those days, sometimes distant and thoughtful. First she found about the secret and then the kiss after the earthquake… Miki must felt betrayed and think that she still have something going on with Ishikawa. After what happened with Aya, that’s the last thing she needed.

Now, still feeling the pain in her face, Hitomi understood how much she could hurt the other girl if she kept that secret from her.

Then, she lowered her head a little to find Miki’s eyes and looked at her trying to find some courage.

“I’ll tell you…” she began to say with a voice as much firm as she could “…but then, it will be in your hands to decide if you still wanna be with me”

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« Reply #361 on: October 31, 2006, 07:46:35 AM »
* thunders roar

the big secret will be revealed ! !

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« Reply #362 on: October 31, 2006, 10:32:54 AM »
What is Miki going to do when she knows what Yossi did...
:ONpleeease:  Pleaseeeeee. Give us another chapter soon.
>_< this one is great!. Gracias :D

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« Reply #363 on: October 31, 2006, 12:23:55 PM »
-wears hardhat to prepare-

Go on Yossie! At least she's waiting for an explanation!

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« Reply #364 on: October 31, 2006, 06:21:29 PM »
The shortness kills! XP

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« Reply #365 on: October 31, 2006, 07:01:26 PM »
Need next chapter!!!!!!! Wanna know what will Miki do! But then again.... Hoping it's not anything bad...

Oh yes, this will end one day... :ONgyaaah:


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« Reply #366 on: November 02, 2006, 11:28:45 PM »
yeah.. I know it's short... but that's the way I like it :P XD
Maybe next will be longer.. you know, chapter 50th and all that.. maybe something special?.... I'll have to think about it...


***49***


Come on… It can’t be so difficult…

As she approached her prey, Maki was looking for the best way to begin a conversation without causing the other girl suspect about her intentions. It couldn’t be so difficult. To flirt with the girls it was something that she did continuously, as entertainment or as a way to forget, that didn’t matter, but at least, she did it because she wanted and with whom she wanted. Now it was different. The girl in front of her wasn’t one of her preferences, not even someone she would like to talk with. It was like if the aura around that girl had something able to annoy her just being around.

But she had to do it…

“Miyo-chan?”
“Y-yeah?”

The older turned to see who called her and she seemed surprised to find Gocchin there.

Good start…

“Goto-san?”
“Are you alone?”

Great question Maki… Of course she’s alone… That’s why you’re here…

“I was with Ishikawa-san a minute ago but she left after someone called her” answerd Erika.
“So…, I have you all for me?”

The expression on the older’s face changed from surprise to a playful look that made Gocchin wonder if she was suspecting something already.

“That depends on what you want…”

The girl knows how to play, huh?

Maki hide the mischievous smile that appeared in her lips. Maybe it was going to be funnier than she expected…


***



Miki stayed completely in silence. It had passed more than five minutes since Yossi ended the whole story and since then, none of them had said anything. The younger had narrated the events with so much calm and strength that it seemed almost surrealist.

Yossi’s last words resounded once and again in her head.

Now it’s your turn. You’ll be able to love someone like me?

Could she?

And what about Rika-chan? Miki still wasn’t sure if she was the real victim of what happened. Yes, Yossi raped her…, but it was Ishikawa who played with the younger’s feelings first.

No, there’s no excuse for something like that…

There was so much mess on Fujimoto’s mind that she didn’t realize that her girlfriend was nearer.

“Miki…” said Yocchan raising her hand to caress her.

As a reflex, the older jumped back avoiding the contact. Immediately after, she saw the look on Yossi’s eyes and realized what she had done. But it was too late…

“I… I’m sorry…”
“It’s ok…” Yoshizawa’s voice seemed that it was going to crack at any moment “I understand it”

Before she could say anything more, Yossi had already left and walked away through the corridor. Miki wanted to scream, to run after the other girl and ask her to not leave… But she couldn’t. She only had the strength enough to close the door again and then fell on her knees, crying.

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« Reply #367 on: November 02, 2006, 11:37:58 PM »
And the confrontation ends with a slight misunderstanding~! >< -but was okay, had a hardhat on-

Now Miki, will you seek Yossie again? Or shall the finale end with your final farewell? D:~!

//end narration.

Nonetheless, I hope to see Shicchin's plans working o-o;...

Actually, I nearly spat out my green tea when I saw the update, care to explain your absenses?

Keep writing! I'm rooting for you~! -hugs and gives a free hardhat to you to protect from brain farts-

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« Reply #368 on: November 02, 2006, 11:47:56 PM »
thanks for the hug and the hardhat :ONshy2:

my absenses... well... it's due to a mix between work, stress, less time and not being in a mood to write lately:ONdozing:  
 But don't worry, my loyal readers are always in my mind and I'm not going to give up XD

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« Reply #369 on: November 02, 2006, 11:50:39 PM »
O_O
Great chapter!!!! >_<

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« Reply #370 on: November 03, 2006, 07:35:25 AM »
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Nooooo! Run Miki, run to Yossi!

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« Reply #371 on: November 03, 2006, 06:20:54 PM »
Argh, I can't wait for the next update! This one was so suspensful!

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« Reply #372 on: November 03, 2006, 11:46:23 PM »
i stayed up all night to read this fic from chapter 1 till here.....and the only thing i can say is......OMG WTF dare? nani? demo.....oya oya??

but the best thing was that I finally know wat yossi did....and btw, i'm a Ayamiki fan...huhu :-p

and my Ayaya, first a victim....now an antagonist....God, your good!

p/s: My Ayaya, my hime-ci......don't worry, i'll always be there for you...leave miki for me......anata wa zutto suki dessu....I'll wait for you.....

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« Reply #373 on: November 04, 2006, 09:59:02 AM »
uuh~ an Ayaya fan.. XDXD mm... I don't know if I should say this... but there's still another surprise related to Aya :ONwahaha: (don't worry.. I'm not going to kill her or something like that hahaha)

It's good to know that there's more people reading the fic ^^

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« Reply #374 on: November 04, 2006, 10:11:29 AM »
That laughing cat icon is freaky as mate,
LOVE THE STORY!
LOVE IT TO BITS!!
I WANNA HOLD IT AND MUSH IT INTO MY HEART!!

It just keeps getting more and more angsty with eahc chapter

Ah, Im proud of you. So very proud. I understand the effort you must put in each time to write this.


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« Reply #375 on: November 06, 2006, 07:41:39 AM »
well, finally nothing special came to my mind to commemorate the 50th chapter, but I've made it a little longer :P So enjoy the reading


***50***


“Tan?”

Ishikawa has done something…

That was the first that Ayaya thought when she saw her best friend at the doorway, shaking and with her eyes red from crying. Rika-chan didn’t call her so there’s no way that Aya could know if she had done something already. She just could wait for her friend to explain what had happened but it wasn’t going to be easy ‘cause the only thing that Miki could do at that moment it was cry.

It wasn’t until hours later that the younger stop crying and calmed down. The girls where lying down in the bed, Miki with her eyes closed and breathing roughly trying to recover some strength while Aya was caressing her hair to make her friend to know that she was there, no matter what.

“Miki… “said Matsuura “What happened?”

The older didn’t reply.

“Miki, please… I need to know it…”

Silence again. Then Ayaya leant closer and her suspicions were right.

Ah… she fell asleep…

Aya stayed there, inches away from Miki, and let her hand slip down to her friend’s face, caressing slightly the skin under her fingers as if it was the first time she was doing it.

“How I could be so blind?” said in a whisper “I wonder how many nights you stayed awake like this, watching me while I was sleeping…”
“Lots”

Miki’s voice was just a sigh but enough to make the younger’s heart to skip a bit because of the surprise. Wasn’t she asleep a moment ago? Or was Miki just pretending to avoid the questions? Still with her hand on her friend’s cheek, Aya didn’t know what she should say after that. The other girl had her eyes still closed, maybe waiting for her to do or say something more but there was so many things in her mind that nothing was clear enough to have sense. Just one of those thought was more persistent than the others and it was getting stronger within every second. They were so close…

Maybe…

Her fingers make her path along Miki’s jaw and her thumb rested on the soft and exquisite lips before leaning to kiss her.

Maybe she won’t run away this time…

Aya placed her lips slightly on Miki’s and, unexpectedly, the older didn’t reject her. She didn’t return the kiss either but there wasn’t any complain about it, not even when Ayaya’s hand went under her friend’s shirt and caressed the smooth skin.

A shiver was the only reaction that she got from Miki…

What have they done to you?


***



“What are you doing here? She won’t want to see you”

Yossi was in front of her girlfriend’s door, with her index finger just inches away from the bell, thinking if she should press it. What would happen then? What she could say to Miki after what happened? How could she make the older forgive her if she hadn’t forgiven herself yet?

But I need you so much…

Finally, taking a deep breath, she pushed the button and wait… Until she couldn’t keep the air in her lungs and had to breath again. Nobody opened the door, not even when she ringed again.

A few minutes passed and Yocchan was still standing in the doorway thinking what to do next. She took the cell-phone and pressed Miki’s number, but nobody picked up the call.

“Miki….”

Giving up her idea to see Fujimoto, Yocchan began to walk through the dark roads still with the phone in her hand. It was late and she shouldn’t call, but the need to hear a friendly voice it was bigger.

Again, at the other side of the line she just could hear the operator.

“Not even you?” Yossi sighed and kept the phone in her pocket again “That’s what I deserve, huh?”


***



Inside Maki’s bag, the cell-phone was ringing repeatedly, but her owner wasn’t paying attention at all. She was busy with something else.

“I tho..ught… that you were go-oing to… spend the night with her…”
“I’ve had enough Erika for a day” answered Maki making her path along the other girl’s neck.

Shibata found herself again under Maki’s control. When she realized, she took the younger’s hands and stop what Gocchin was doing. What’s going on with her? She can’t appear in her doorway in the middle of the night and expect to spend the night together so easily.

What’s going on with me?

“I though that you were enjoying it…” she said as a reply to what Maki had said before.

What Shiba-chan didn’t realize was the tone in her voice when she said it, not until she saw Maki’s reaction. The younger looked at her and smiled.

“Jealous?”

Before Ayumi could reply, Gocchin sealed her lips with a deep kiss and her hands went back to work before the older could complain about it.

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« Reply #376 on: November 06, 2006, 12:21:04 PM »
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Aya!!!!! Don't touch Miki!! :ONangry1:
Poor Yossi... She should come here, so I could make her feel better XD

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« Reply #377 on: November 06, 2006, 01:07:58 PM »
Poor Yossie~! -punts Ayaya-

The Shicchin is refreshing :3

Write more~!

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« Reply #378 on: November 06, 2006, 01:51:54 PM »
I'm gonna play Devil's Advocate and say that Yossui does deserve it. After all, rape is seriously wrong, no matter who it's done to.

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« Reply #379 on: November 06, 2006, 04:45:40 PM »
poor yossie... then again yea rape is not an easy thing to forgive.. but miki going to aya thats just well i guess predictable drama-like move to make but I hope they'r not gonna go further than kissing!! that'll probably jeopardize the whole yomiki thing!

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