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« Reply #400 on: November 15, 2006, 06:48:11 AM »
^ well.. the 'curious Nono' thing wasn't intentional at first... I just realized after writing it XDXD

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« Reply #401 on: November 15, 2006, 06:54:36 PM »
Right now I'm really rooting for Shicchin (haha I love this word, it's so cute - just like them XD)

Great chapter!

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« Reply #402 on: November 16, 2006, 04:16:59 PM »
well.. from next sunday I'll be out for a whole week so maybe this will be the last chapter until I come back


***53***


Even after spending all night awake, her body didn’t reflex any sign of being tired. Maybe it was because of the decision she had took that she was walking with so much strength. It was her last opportunity and she wasn’t going to give up. She’d already left once the desperation take control of her and she just got to make things worst. It couldn’t happen again.

She saw her objective some meters away, talking with Nono, Risa and Aya in the hall. It wasn’t exactly the best moment but she didn’t care about it.

Without warning, she took Miki by the arm and, without giving her any time to react; she kissed her, of course, with the other three girls as audience.  

“I love you and I’m not going to give up so easily”

Yossi had ready a whole speech to convince Miki why they should be together even if it wasn’t going to be easy, but the older didn’t let her even start to speak. She surrounded Yocchan’s neck with her arms and hugged her strongly.

“That means that you forgive me?” asked a surprised Yossi.
“Baka… I don’t care about what happened. I reacted that way ‘cause I wasn’t ready to hear something like that, not because I didn’t want to be with you” Fujimoto’s voice was almost cracking, as if she was going to start crying at any moment “I tried to tell you but you keep running away from me…”

The younger moved away a little and looked at the girl in her arms. There was still one more thing to do.

“Come with me”

Suddenly, Miki felt Yossi’s hand taking her own and the younger started to run.

The three girls remaining in the hall looked at each other. They had been feeling invisible until then.

“Anybody knows what happened right now?”
“They… patch up things? Dunno…You know something?” asked Gaki-san turning to Aya.

But, when they realized, the soloist wasn’t there anymore.


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“I still can’t believe it”
“You can’t believe it? Imagine how I was feeling when she told me that she was doing all that because of me!” Gocchin raised her voice.
“Sshhhh, someone can hear you” said Ayumi taking her to the couch “So…, she’s taking some kind of revenge on Yossi because she thinks that you hate her for leaving you for Rika-chan?”
“Sort of...”
“See? To be irresistible sometimes isn’t so good” joked the older.

As a reply, Maki punched her in the shoulder. It wasn’t a right comment to do at that moment.

“What are you going to do now?” asked Shibata more seriously.
“Of course I’ll tell Yocchan and Ishikawa. The have the right to know everything. Even if it’s hard to accept, Rika wasn’t guilt of anything and isn’t fair that things end like that”
“But you don’t seem happy to know the truth”
“It was better to thing about Rika-chan as the villain of the movie. It was easier to hate her”

Shibata looked at the younger, who had leant back into the couch and had her eyes closed. Then she understood something. Maki wasn’t the playgirl that she’d always thought, she just don’t wanna be hurt again.

“Shiba-chan, don’t fall in love, never. Love sucks”

What if it’s too late for that?

Then, after some seconds of silence, they heard voices approaching quickly and Maki opened her eyes.

“Yocchan, wait!” complaint Miki trying to keep Yossi’s rhythm “Why the hell are you running?!”

Gocchin and Shibata saw how the two Morning Musume members passed running in front of them. After that, they looked at each other.

“I have a bad feeling” said Maki.

Ayumi was going to say something too, but she was interrupted by an unexpected and fast soloist running after the other two girls.

Imagining that there was something really big going on, Gottsan took Ayumi by the hand and, without saying anything, began to run too.

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« Reply #403 on: November 16, 2006, 05:38:53 PM »
It's a marathon~! With Gatas (and ex-gatas :]) members~! O___O;

RUN LIKE HELL YOMIKI~! RUN LIKE THE WIIIND O-O

Though, Shicchin basically had no point in running, other than to prevent the future confrontation? D:...

If that is the case... -gives Yomiki hardhats, and Shicchin hardhats- Good luck facing Aya o_o;

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« Reply #404 on: November 16, 2006, 06:54:04 PM »
So we have to wait a week to know what does Yossi wants to tell Miki??? T_T
XDDD

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« Reply #405 on: November 16, 2006, 07:34:07 PM »
Sasupensu~ And I never thought I'd ever say this, but, damn Erika!

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« Reply #406 on: November 16, 2006, 09:36:08 PM »
Do we really have to wait a whole week? O_o

Any way:kgreat:

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« Reply #407 on: November 18, 2006, 08:46:10 PM »
I wonder what Aya's going to do when she catches up with them? I hope it ends something like this= :masa:

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« Reply #408 on: November 18, 2006, 10:43:41 PM »
O_O! Because of Gocchin!?

Shicchin (XD) is looking good here, if they don't seriously get together then :ONangry1:

Urgh, and you had to leave it at a spot like this too :ONfrustrated:

Aya's not gonna like, beat Yossi up, right? :\ I doubt she can anyway :P I hope everyone can end up happy (except for the evil ppl) >_<.

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« Reply #409 on: November 19, 2006, 09:29:36 PM »
:ONomg::ONomg::ONomg::ONomg::ONomg::ONomg::ONomg:
ohcrap!ohcrap!ohcrap!ohcrap!ohcrap!ohcrap!ohcrap!ohcrap!ohcrap!ohcrap!
Don't hurt my Ayaya....i'm begging you, Yossi.....NOOOOOOO :ONpleeease:

must....save.....love....Henshin!

/me runs after Ayaya in Kickhopper Rider form just in case.....
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spreading the usa-chan love....i mean darkness(thanks to JFC)

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« Reply #410 on: November 29, 2006, 06:49:22 PM »
aah~ finally I'm back...
I's should been posted this two days ago but I had to go back to work earlier than expected and I couldn't finish the chapter before.


***54***


Ishikawa was restless and she didn’t know why. She should be happy, she should be enjoying her victory. Rika found the day before that Yossi and Miki didn’t talk to each other. That could just mean one thing, a big fight, probably a break up. Then, why was she feeling so defeated? What she was expecting? She thought that Yocchan would run to her as if nothing happened? What a silly dream…

Besides, in addition to her worries, her fellow Biyuuden members were acting weird lately, like out of character. Yui, usually happy, always with a smile in her face and something to talk about was now serious and silent. And Erika.., well, they hadn’t been ‘alone’ in a few days but Rika could see clearly that something was going on with the girl. She was happy, too happy for someone like her…

She’d liked to ask her about the reason of that happiness, but suddenly, her train of thoughts was interrupted by the hurricane Hitomi.

Miki was there too, holding the younger’s hand and trying to recover her breath.

“Rika-chan?” said Yossi with a soft and suspicious tone in her voice.
“Yes?”

The older was a little offended by the way that Yossi said her name. She didn’t use to call her by her first name since their break up, at least, not usually, and the way she did it now was like another way to hurt her. But she hadn’t time to process that, when Yossi turned to the girl holding her hand and kissed her in front of the astonished Biyuuden members. The smile on Erika’s face disappeared; Yui’s eyes went wide opened and Ishikawa was too surprised to think straight.

But they weren’t the only ones wondering what was going on. While she was trying to breathe normally again, Yossi’s lips reached hers without warning. At first, she tried to find out what was on her Yocchan’s mind but after a few seconds she didn’t care anymore.

That was what Aya, Maki and Shibata found when they reached the place.

“Eh…by any chance… do you know what’s going on here?” whispered Gocchin to Aya.
“I don’t have idea”

The soloist wasn’t so surprised with that situation ‘cause it happened the same some minutes ago before their run, but that doesn’t mean that she wanted to see it again. The fact of see Miki’s arms around Yossi’s neck, attracting her closer and kissing her deeper within every second.., it made Aya feel sick. Then she turned to Maki, who was looking at the couple with a sad expression on her face and she wondered if that’s how Gocchin always felt, if that’s how she was going to feel from now on.

“That’s enough” said an already pissed off Ishikawa.
“I don’t think so” Miki replied with a satisfied smile before kissing again her girl.

But Yocchan should think otherwise because she left Miki’s lips and, holding her hand again, turned to Ishikawa.

“That was to make you understand once and for all that there’s nothing you can do. I love her and any of your twisted plans are going to work anymore”
“If that’s true, maybe it’s time for…”
“She knows” Yossi cut Ishikawa’s sentence before she could say anything more. Then she turned to her girlfriend and looked at her tenderly caressing her cheek “She knows and understand it. Game over, Rika-chan”

That was something that Rika wasn’t expecting. How dared Yocchan to tell something so personal? It was their secret, something just between the two of them, the only thing that kept them together…

“Why are you so hurt?” asked Yossi with a serious tone “Maybe because I’ve told her before you could use it to hurt her?”
“Ok, maybe you’ve win this time” she said turning to Miki “Enjoy your happiness while you can”
“What do you mean with that?” asked Fujimoto.

Rika-chan didn’t answer at first. She raised her hand to caress Yossi’s cheek, something that made the taller jump back to avoid the contact.

“Soon you’ll find that our little girl isn’t the loyal kind”
“You know that’s not true” said Yoshizawa obviously offended.
“No? Ask Gocchin, then”
“Eh? What’s up with me?” asked a surprised Maki from the corner.
“Oh, come on, I know you two were sleeping together…”

Then everybody turned to look at Maki who was, obviously, the more surprised there. Looking at her face it was evident that she didn’t know what Ishikawa was talking about.

“I’m going to repeat it one last time” said Yossi “I never, ever, touched another girl while I was with you”
“That’s true, Rika” assured Maki.
“And you think I’m so stupid to believe you?”
“Believe what you want” answered the soloist “But you know I hate you, why I should lie to you with that then?”

Ishikawa didn’t say anything. Her mind was too busy trying to analyze all the new information that came so suddenly.

“The funny thing is…” continued Yossi “…that you were the one who betrayed me, and yet you’re trying to act as the victim”
“What?”
“You played the innocent girl, the one who wasn’t ready, when actually Erika and you were making fun of me”

At that point, Shibata looked at Maki. Both knew the truth about that and it was the right time to tell everything. She made a gesture to the younger and Gocchin replied with a nod. She knew what she had to do.

“Yocchan, that’s…”
“That’s not true!” shouted Rika suddenly interrupting Maki “I wanted to be with you! I wanted to give you everything! But you…” tears began to overflow from her eyes “…you had to ruin it all…”

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« Reply #411 on: November 29, 2006, 07:06:03 PM »
Welcome back!!^^
And greaaatooooo chapter^^:pen_clap:

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« Reply #412 on: November 29, 2006, 09:22:14 PM »
WELCOME BACK!

And thank you so much~!!!! Great chapter again:kgreat:

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« Reply #413 on: November 30, 2006, 12:01:04 AM »
Quote from: len.chan;246308

“That’s enough” said an already pissed off Ishikawa.
“I don’t think so” Miki replied with a satisfied smile before kissing again her girl.



:P :P :P

That's so typical of Rika vs Miki

:heart: :heart:  Love it ! :heart: :heart:

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« Reply #414 on: December 02, 2006, 11:00:20 AM »
Sorry, it's short, but I promise that the next part will be up soon. It's just that I don't have time to finish it now.. Besides... you know I like to tease XDXD


***55***


Two girls where sitting in silence in one of the hall couches, still shocked.

“You know…, that’s…”
“Weird” said Nono ending Risa’s sentence.
“Yeah…”

Both sighed and crossed her arms at the same time. Then Gaki-san closed her eyes and laid her head back in the couch.

“But…” began to say the younger again “In some way.., I envy them. To be loved by someone with so much passion… It has to be great”

Nozomi turned to her friend. She could feel a bit of sadness in the voice of the other girl.

“Aren’t you with Ai-chan?”
“Yeah, but you know how she is” answered Risa returning to a more comfortable position “She lives in her own world and, sometimes, it makes me feel lonely. It’s like if she doesn’t care about if I’m there or not”

Then Gaki-san realized that she was saying her thoughts out loud to someone that maybe wasn’t interested on hearing it.

“Uhm, sorry. I’m bothering you with my silly thoughts…”
“No, it’s ok” answered an understanding Nozomi “But don’t you think that it’s Ai-chan who actually should hear this?”
“What I should hear?” said someone behind them.

Both turned to look at the owner of the voice and Risa suddenly began to feel really awkward. She didn’t want to tell her girlfriend about her worries.

“We were talking about what happened right now” said Nono rescuing her friend. She had seen the restless in the younger when Takahashi appeared and understood that Gaki couldn’t be open with her girl about what they were talking, at least, not at that moment “Yocchan and Miki have made things up just in front of Aya”
“It seems that I’ve missed the fun, uh? Doesn’t matter…” she said smiling and leaning to her girlfriend to kiss her briefly on the lips “I know better ways to have fun, right?”

Risa smiled and nodded as if nothing happened but Nono knew that it was all fake, and then realized how many times she’d seen that same smile, how always Gaki reply Ai-chan with a simple nod, without words, without complaints. A single thought crossed her mind... If Takahashi wasn’t nuts about that girl then life wasn’t fair.


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“That’s not true!” shouted Rika suddenly interrupting Maki “I wanted to be with you! I wanted to give you everything! But you…” tears began to overflow from her eyes “…you had to ruin it all…”

“That’s something that’s gonna be always with me” answered Yossi “But I’m not going to let that single error to rule my life. The times when I believed you have passed, Ishikawa, long time ago”

Just another girl there aside Rika and Yossi knew about what the girls where talking and the feelings inside her began to be very confusing. She felt proud, very proud of Yocchan for being able to face up the situation with so much determination, but at the same time, she felt sorry for Rika. All that seemed a very big misunderstanding where she didn’t have any blame.

Yoshizawa suddenly felt a hand on her shoulder and turned to see Maki with a worried expression on her face.

“Yocchan, before saying anything more, there’s something you should know”

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« Reply #415 on: December 02, 2006, 11:18:02 AM »
great chapter!!!
I wonder what miki wants to say xDDD:pen_shocked:

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« Reply #416 on: December 02, 2006, 07:49:16 PM »
Cliffhanger! *dies*

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« Reply #417 on: December 02, 2006, 09:08:48 PM »
God, I love this! :ONluvluv1:

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« Reply #418 on: December 02, 2006, 09:12:13 PM »
I can't wait!!!!!!!!!!!!

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« Reply #419 on: December 08, 2006, 05:05:22 PM »
well, here it is. This chapter was harder than I expected and I'm not fully satisfied with it... but well, judge yourself



***56***


After Maki’s words everybody kept silence. After the verbal confrontation between Rika and Yossi, nobody was expecting that Gocchin could take part in the battle. Everybody there knew that she was a huge part of the problem, but interfere in the fight it was something that not even Miki would dare to do.

“She never betrayed you, Yocchan”

Gocchin then turned to Miyoshi and saw that the girl was looking at her with a death glare more typical from Mikitty than from her. Obviously, the girl had tie up everything and now understood the suddenly interest of the younger.

“It was all schemed by Erika” continued Maki “She did it the way that you hurt each other without even know it…”
“Why?” asked Ishikawa looking at her fellow Biyuuden member and fighting the tears that had began to flow from her eyes.

Erika smiled evilly. Even if Gottsan had tricked her to reveal all her plans, she was enjoying the situation.

“Because it was funny to see how you destroyed each other”
“But…, I trusted you…”
“And that’s why it was so easy. You felt so insecure of yourself that you trust me more than your love. It was so easy to use you…”
“How can you be so cold blooded?”

Miki had kept silence until then but with every single word that Erika said her blood boils more and more. But, someway, she managed to control her rage and made that question instead of using her fists as usually.

“They deserve it” answer Erika coldly “They had to feel the same pain that Goto-san was feeling because of them… But then, you had to appear and make things difficult. It took me off guard. You’d supposed to be busy with Ayaya but it seems that our little princess didn’t know how to keep you at her side”
“That’s none of your business!” shouted Aya.
“Yes, it is! It’s your fault that those two ended together. And you are so stupid that didn’t even know how to take advantage of every opportunity that Rika gave to you. Someone smarter had brought Fujimoto to bed at the first chance…”

This time, Miki made honour to her reputation and let her fist crash against Erika’s jaw. Nobody there was surprised. No one can mess with Ayaya without facing Fujimoto’s rage after. But, even with a tiny thread of blood running from her lower lip, Erika didn’t lose her smile.

“There’s no way you can hurt me” she said looking at Miki with a defiant glare and cleaning the mess with her sleeve “This? This will be just a remain of my victory”

Miki was ready to attack again when a strong hand took her by the wrist and stopped her.

“That’s enough, Miki-chan” said a calm voice behind her. Recognizing the voice, Fujimoto relaxed her arm and let the older woman to lower it “I’ll take charge of her”

Nakazawa’s presence was the only thing that made Miyoshi’s smile drop from her face.

“You” said Yuko firmly “Come with me”

If there was something scarier than an angry Yuko Nakazawa it was a calmly angry Yuko Nakazawa. Nobody knew how she could react and that’s why any of the girls said nothing when Erika and she disappeared.

It wasn’t until after a few minutes of silence that Maki dared to look at her friend. Ishikawa had collapsed in the ground crying, but Yossi was there, standing in the same place where she had been from the start with the look lost in the nothing. Gocchin didn’t need to see tears to know how the truth had devastated Hitomi’s soul at the extreme that she didn’t even have strength to cry.

Then she saw Fujimoto, who had begun to walk towards Yossi, and stopped her.

“Not now, Miki” said Maki leaving a hand on the older’s shoulder “They need to be alone”

Miki looked at Yossi and then turned again to Gocchin and nodded. She understood, as the rest of the girls, that they couldn’t do anything to help, just wait.
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