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« Reply #160 on: October 10, 2006, 04:06:40 AM »
Wow, that is incredible! I love your artz!

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« Reply #161 on: October 10, 2006, 07:57:17 AM »
Whoa! :o

Your art is amazing Yuuyami! Hope to see more of it! :thumbsup

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« Reply #162 on: October 11, 2006, 11:42:22 AM »
SOrry for such a short comment but I love this

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« Reply #163 on: October 13, 2006, 02:27:41 AM »
^ We all do!

xP You have amazing drawings Yuuyami!

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« Reply #164 on: October 13, 2006, 03:19:29 AM »
nice drawing! now I have an idea how the characters look like. It'll be cool if everyone had some kind of illustration from their story. :lol:

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« Reply #165 on: October 13, 2006, 04:36:22 PM »
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nice drawing! now I have an idea how the characters look like. It'll be cool if everyone had some kind of illustration from their story.

I second that! My art's crap so I won't torture everyone's eyes :lol: I shall just admire Yuuyami's talent.

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« Reply #166 on: October 14, 2006, 03:24:06 AM »
Rndmnweird: Haha, yeah, manga style Yossie = love and so is Megumi being cursed XD

JFC: Yeah, the third head of the Orochi, meaning she has 3 wings. And yes, that was my full intent writing that about security XD

Wordsworth: I love that part too~! <3 And yes, my art will be seen more often now.

Tanachan: Yup XD

Goosefish: Glad you finally decided to read my fic~! So happy now~!

DO me DO me: Well, yeah, ever since I saw the futarigoto of them together a year ago, I could only keep wondering XD And reading Doki Doki made me think they're more of a couple XD~!

Miki-Tan: Oh shit indeed XD

Slack: Yes, the contacts fall out, but don't ask me how they never had infection becase their contacts are on the ground or clothes for more than five seconds o-o It's ... book magic? XD Nonetheless, I think it's because they're cursed that their eyes are not as sensitive as normal people's? XD Anywho, I'm glad you really like my fic to the extent of even recommending it <3~!

Youkaichica: XD... And you're correct on thinking you're wrong XD

Mayonnaise: WHEEEEEEE~! XD Thank you~! Actually, Megumi's always been one of my favorite cursed members because of her attitude XD

Jafeijai: I love how she slithered into the wall too XD

Mikan: Yes, this is what I was hoping to acheive with my readers, I wanted to ensnare you all in an alluring and enigmatic "epic" story. And Mikan is number one on the Ensnared list! <3 I won't let you down~!

Chrno: I didn't direct it at you, haha, I only directed it at future readers. XD

KrazyforKamei: Megumi is loved! Mission success! <3

Dj_Jo: Thank you XD

Seeya: :]

Lil_hamz: Aww~! Thank you~!

And thank you all for being nice to my craptacular pictures XD AND AND AND AAAAAAAAAAND thank you for ALL the reviews! Without them, I would be all emo XD

I'm sorry that this chapter came out late, but I had a brain fart XD Anywho, enjoy a rather boring chapter!

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Chapter 14: The Door
« Reply #167 on: October 14, 2006, 03:26:31 AM »
Tee hee :D







Chapter 14: The Door








Reina groggily reached for the obligatory schedule at her door’s floor and looked at it. “Oh. We’re doing a lot of familiar songs for the new tour…” Reina stumbled backwards and landed on her bed. “But do we seriously need dance practice over it? Koharu-chan’s got it all down, and so do we…” She rolled over her bed to relieve herself of boredom. “I wonder when we’ll record the new songs…”

She got up and looked in the mirror to make sure that her appearance was efficient. As a finishing touch, Reina looked at her necklace stand, and picked out her favorite: the black cross outlined with silver metal; in other words, the cross Maki gave her.

“Hm… What to do now… I have until 1PM before rehearsals begin…”

BAM.

“I want… My hair dryer back…” Miki huffed, pulling her foot out of the door that now lay torn from its hinges.

“My door…?” Reina sat up looking at her poor door which now had a hole in it. (( ;_; ))

“So, when do you plan to give my hair dryer back? You’ve had it for a week now!”

“My door…”

“Or should I just go grab it now?” Miki stroked her imaginary mustache.

“…My door…”

“Bah, management could pay for a new one,” Miki waved her hand dismissively.

“…But my door…” ((;________; ))

“…I’ll pay for it.”

“Lately, my room has been destroyed lately. I wonder why the heavens conspire against my room so!” Reina let out a sad sigh.

“…I said I’d pay for it,” Miki raised a brow. “Nonetheless, I’m going to get my hair dryer back, thank you,” she frolicked to Reina’s bathroom and found her dear possession; afterwards, she left the room.

“…My door…” Reina stood next to the fallen door with a hole in it.

Just then, a familiar ring of a FLAMES ringtone came. Reina only had to turn her waist and reach for her cellphone on the counter. Seeing the name on the caller ID, she flipped it open and enthusiastically said, “Hello!”

“I’m going to Korea!” the person on the other line squealed excitedly.

“Seriously?” Reina’s eyes widened, “When?”

“Well, it’s only a four day stay. I’ll be busy all throughout, with photoshoots with the Korean magazines, some show recordings, and recording two songs in Korean for the entire day depending if I nail the pronunciation.”

“And when are you leaving and coming back?” Reina sat on her bed yet again, attempting to ignore her door on the floor.

“I’m leaving in the next two days, but coming back after the full four days, so that means you’ll see me right after.”

“You’re so lucky…” Reina flopped backwards on the bed, “You get to eat yakiniku in its motherland…”

Maki laughed on the other end of the line. “So, want to come down to the cafeteria for breakfast? It’s rice, vegetable, miso soup, fish, nimono and natto.” (Nimono = boiled foods, natto = fermented soybean paste, which is really sticky and stinky)

“All right,” Reina felt herself brighten up, “I’ll meet you at the stairs then?”

“Okay! See you then!” and then Maki hung up. Reina closed her phone and stuck it in her pocket and did one last mirror check before leaving her room.

As Reina walked in the hall, she saw attendants with a new door, probably to replace her broken door. Although they were idols, their apartment had the worst doors ever. Regardless of looking fancier than most casual doors, it was very easy to break a door. Even a simple smack of a hammer could crack the wood severely.

Maki was waiting right at the stairs, just as she had said. She and Reina greeted each other warmly before heading down the stairs into the café of the apartment. They chatted about trivial things (And the fate of Reina’s unfortunate door) as they walked along. When they got to the café, there were already people digging into their breakfast. Nozomi, Masae, Megumi, and pretty much Morning Musume without the leader and sub-leader were seated and eating.

Reina and Maki went over to the main table, picked up a plate, and selected what they wish to eat from the buffet table. They chose to sit at the table with Nozomi for the duration of their breakfast time.

“I hear you’re going to Korea!” Nono said in between bites.

“So, do you intend on bringing any souvenirs?” Reina asked before biting the rice.

“Of course I do,” Maki simply said, before diving in her…banquet of food.

“Jeeez, where does all the food go? You and Nono eat so much!”

“Gomaki’s food goes to her boobs, I bet!” Nozomi laughed, smacking the aforementioned objects with the back of her hand before returning to eat.

“I’m trying to eat!” Maki also laughed.

“But normally, you eat much more than me! So that means one day, they will explode!” Nono narrowed her eyes and smiled a mischievous smile.

“I would laugh if that actually happened!” Reina joined in on the laughter.

“Heeey~! I’m seriously trying to eat!” Maki said, a little more concentrated on the food now.

“My my, what an energetic morning…” Yossie yawned, “why the objections, Maki?”

“My boobs will NOT explode…” Maki went shifty-eyed, continuing to eat her mini-banquet.

“…Okay?” Yossie raised a brow, “So, I’m assuming the food you ate will come out?” Yossie smirked as she sat with them.

“Yeah! It’ll come out and stab you in the eyes if my meal is interrupted further,” Maki smirked back at Yossie.

“Oh my gahh,” Yossie laughed, “My life was threatened by the possibility of Gotou Maki’s boobs exploding!” and the whole table laughed heartily.

Eventually, the majority of the people eating in the café dropped vastly. Even Maki and Reina had already left, probably to do some morning shopping. The only people left were Yossie, Miki (Who came in shortly after almost everyone left), and Megumi, to which they shared a table for sake of conversation.

“Nice job!” Miki laughed, “and to think you’d be wiser just because you’re a few years older…”

“Ah…but at heart, I’m probably younger than you both?” Megumi looked up and sighed, “Oh the wonders of youth…”

“Youth is wonderful, yes, but when you say it like that, I can’t help but think otherwise,” Yossie laughed.

“Ah… Reina-chan knows of my Orochi status now.”

“Really?” Miki became a bit intrigued, “Did you manage to lay your lips upon her like Maki and I did?” Miki’s mouth widened into a sneer.

“No, it was the weather,” Megumi sighed, “Ah… the lips of youth…I wonder what they would have taste like…”

“This goes beyond thinking otherwise, you scare me when you talk about it like that,” Miki went shifty-eyed.

“Oh!” Yossie’s face perked up, “Ojou-sama is thinking of introducing herself to Reina today. That or tomorrow.”

“Ah…Seriously?” Megumi looked at Yossie, “Let us hope that Reina-chan does not see the other side of Ojou-sama…”

“Well… Reina at the moment, she’s the kind who seems to view life as a stream that she flows with. She apparently doesn’t care about anything at the moment, only moves on,” Yossie raised a finger, “So maybe she will be alright. I don’t think she gets mad that easily, so even if Ojou-sama gets a little frisky, Reina might be able to let it slide…”

“Some logic you have there,” Miki placed her hands behind her head and leaned back.

“Yes, but I’ve been watching Reina! …As my duty being the leader that is,” Yossie quickly added on.

“Wow, you sound like a stalker,” Miki muffled a giggle.

“Ah…It’s amazing no one has arrested you yet,” Megumi added in.

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“Bah. The new door creaks too much,” the wonky eyed teen twitched as she closed the door. When she got to her beloved bed, she tilted her head towards the digital clock near it reading eight o’clock. “Wow, that late already?” she turned her head yet again to relax her face on the soft fabric. Her rest was interuppted when her cellphone rang with a brief tone, indicating an unread text message.

She flipped it open, and read the message to herself, “Meet at her room?” Reina scratched her head. “Then again… She’s also the one I saw when I was locked out of the balcony door…” Reina tilted her head in the direction.

Reina got up and did a mirror check before exiting her room. There was that enigmatic aura about her that time…

Reina went up the stairs.

This person… who makes the decisions for the Orochi I'm guessing...

She walked down the hallway quietly as to not attract attention.

The head, that’s the one who hurt Iida-san in the past…

She finally reached the end of the hallway, and looked at the door almost contemptuously.

Is there something about her the Orochi can’t go against?


Reina knocked the door, and heard a confirmed voice that welcomed her in, and turned the knob.

Their Ojou-sama…

Before Reina stepped in, she took one last glance at the name plate next to the door: Ishikawa Rika.





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« Reply #168 on: October 14, 2006, 03:53:32 AM »
EEEEEHHHHH!?!?!? THE HEAD IS RIKA?!?!?!? :panda_omg2: :panda_omg2: wow....i didn't expect that at all :o

i've noticed the connection between Reina and Maki seems to be much closer now...influence of other fanfics maybe? XD i laughed so hard when they were joking about Maki's boobs exploding XDXD and the door getting kicked down? priceless XD

once again, AMAZING CHAPTER~~ :thumbsup Yuuyami, you must post another chapter quick, i want to know what Rika will do to Reina in her room!! (that sounded so wrong...)

[quick thought]: confirm my suspiscions about Aya already!!! XDXD
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« Reply #169 on: October 14, 2006, 03:58:12 AM »
No door can withstand the almighty "Fujimoto Kick"!!! XD

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“Gomaki’s food goes to her boobs, I bet!” Nozomi laughed, smacking the aforementioned objects with the back of her hand before returning to eat.

“I’m trying to eat!” Maki also laughed.

“But normally, you eat much more than me! So that means one day, they will explode!” Nono narrowed her eyes and smiled a mischievous smile.

“I would laugh if that actually happened!” Reina joined in on the laughter.

“Heeey~! I’m seriously trying to eat!” Maki said, a little more concentrated on the food now.

“My my, what an energetic morning…” Yossie yawned, “why the objections, Maki?”

“My boobs will NOT explode…” Maki went shifty-eyed, continuing to eat her mini-banquet.

“…Okay?” Yossie raised a brow, “So, I’m assuming the food you ate will come out?” Yossie smirked as she sat with them.

“Yeah! It’ll come out and stab you in the eyes if my meal is interrupted further,” Maki smirked back at Yossie.

“Oh my gahh,” Yossie laughed, “My life was threatened by the possibility of Gotou Maki’s boobs exploding!” and the whole table laughed heartily.


This entire sequence just made my morning better! :lol:
If what Nono said were true, about food going to you know where, how come it doesn't work on her? She eats a lot too, doesn't she? XD

Ishikawa Rika! :o

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« Reply #170 on: October 14, 2006, 03:59:02 AM »
Yuuyami! That chapter was awesome!
 
The part about Maki's boobs exploding had me laughing like mad, and Megumi's "Ah..." at the beginning of everything she says is too funny! XD  
 
Rika is the head?! I wonder what she's gona do to Reina...so I hope to see another chapter soon! :P

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« Reply #171 on: October 14, 2006, 04:12:54 AM »
*gasp* I knew it was Rika all along. :P (The sick thing helped me. As Rika has asthma)

Anyways, great chapter. I didn't think was boring at all. The Megumi/Miki/Yossui conversation was hilarious. As well as the Nono/Maki conversion concerning Maki's boobs. XD

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« Reply #172 on: October 14, 2006, 04:29:38 AM »
Maki: *boobs explode*
Saikami: DAMNIT! NOW I DON'T HAVE ANYTHING TO SHOVE MY FACE IN!!!
^It's always in her away message

Anyways, awesome, great chapter! As usual. *kicks down door for no apparent reason* Yay Miki!
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« Reply #173 on: October 14, 2006, 05:42:35 AM »
Maki and her exploding boobs...riiiight...Lol. I had a good laugh at that.

Wow, Ishikawa Rika? You totally fooled me with that one. I didnt see it coming. Unless your gonna twist the story again and make it that someone else is using Rikas room. I doubt you'll do that...cause...thats just weird.

Hurray for new chapters!!

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« Reply #174 on: October 14, 2006, 05:43:33 AM »
TT___TT;;.... Rika...the head....the horrible person...that hurt Kaorin! Didn't expect that at all. well.... this is an interesting plot twist....or whatever it is....

Great chapter! Good thing you didn't leave it hanging at the knob turning part...I would have died... but wow...Rika...I'm trying to imagine Rika being evil, and you'd be surprised at how easy it is.

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« Reply #175 on: October 15, 2006, 07:49:18 AM »
Okay, I remember distinctly saying that I would cry if Rika was the head.
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 Drown dammit!

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« Reply #176 on: October 15, 2006, 08:05:59 PM »
AH! Glorious!!!!!!!!!!! That was amazing! The whole exploding boobs bit was freaking hilarious. Yuuyami, where do you come up with this stuff??? Anyways, Rika as the head??? I can totally see it. I need to know what's going to happen with Rika and Reina!!

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« Reply #177 on: October 16, 2006, 07:59:26 AM »
Lololol, didn't see it coming, good job!
/me imagines Rika-Ojou-sama in Sukeban Deka bondage outfit...
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« Reply #178 on: October 16, 2006, 09:46:56 AM »
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BAM.

“I want… My hair dryer back…” Miki huffed, pulling her foot out of the door that now lay torn from its hinges.

“My door…?” Reina sat up looking at her poor door which now had a hole in it. (( ;_; ))

“So, when do you plan to give my hair dryer back? You’ve had it for a week now!”

“My door…”

“Or should I just go grab it now?” Miki stroked her imaginary mustache.

“…My door…”

“Bah, management could pay for a new one,” Miki waved her hand dismissively.

“…But my door…” ((;________; ))

“…I’ll pay for it.”

“Lately, my room has been destroyed lately. I wonder why the heavens conspire against my room so!” Reina let out a sad sigh.

“…I said I’d pay for it,” Miki raised a brow. “Nonetheless, I’m going to get my hair dryer back, thank you,” she frolicked to Reina’s bathroom and found her dear possession; afterwards, she left the room.

“…My door…” Reina stood next to the fallen door with a hole in it.


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you devil !
i'm at uni, break time, so i decided to go to the compurter room...and there...
&é"#ù%*µ$¤ !! XD i tried my best not to laugh at loud so i was :D in front of the screen but completly:ROFL  in my mind...

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“Jeeez, where does all the food go? You and Nono eat so much!”

“Gomaki’s food goes to her boobs, I bet!” Nozomi laughed, smacking the aforementioned objects with the back of her hand before returning to eat.

that's is..couldn't help it..i let sounds come out of my mouth...the guy next to me is looking at me...

now i'm trying to calm myself down...it's hard...oh wait i'm going to count..
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Their Ojou-sama…

Before Reina stepped in, she took one last glance at the name plate next to the door: Ishikawa Rika.

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that one sure calmed me...

now to think of it...it does really fit her.
and now we know why Yossie is so familiar with her heh...

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« Reply #179 on: October 16, 2006, 04:32:01 PM »
Lol. Re-reading comment here.

We went from "Oh Rika's the head?"
To - Maki's boobs
Then- Shoving our head in Maki's boobs
Then - bondage...

Ah...how quickly conversation deterirates.

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