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« Reply #220 on: October 23, 2006, 06:06:14 PM »
Yossi popping into the most "x-rated" situations cracked me up. Are you sure you're not doing it on purpose Yossi? :lol:

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« Reply #221 on: October 23, 2006, 06:25:23 PM »
haha great last 2 chapters.

Reaction Queen + Maki's pillows + Yuko + Yossi walking in at the wrong times = XD

I liked how you put Risa's "building" thing and I do remember those Zekkyou CM and AFO&OFA clips.

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« Reply #222 on: October 23, 2006, 06:39:12 PM »
XD fun chapter
had a big fat grin plastered on my face the whole time while reading XD

Not really much to say, that hasn't already been said.

For a split second I really wondered what a "dual pillow" might look like... and then it dawned on me :hammerself:

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« Reply #223 on: October 23, 2006, 09:54:25 PM »
Time for speculation!
 
Hmmmm, so far, we have gens 1, 3, 5, 6, and MKB represented in the curse... no 2nd gen or 4th gen, except for the head (kinda confused, is she one of the 8?), so... maybe Kei-chan?  Would make sense with the drinking and such, except she's had kissing scenes on stage... TsujiKago are probably out of the question since they've kissed each other on-screen before...  I don't even want to think about the kids being involved, so maybe a Country Musume member, like Satoda Mai with her long, slender limbs.  She certainly seems kinda snake-y.  Or maybe Yaguchi!  That'd be funny seeing a really really short snake, lol.
 
I guess that leaves Ayaka and.... Nacchi?????
 
...Koha?
 
Lol, speculation.
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« Reply #224 on: October 24, 2006, 12:37:08 AM »
aaah you guys work so fast !
i guess it's a great thing :D

Quote from: Yuuyami

Chrno: I love your commentaries so much XD~! -glomps-

aaaah...this is so sweet of you...:oops: thks

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Chapter 16: Like Ocean Waves
Reina couldn’t get her meeting with Rika out of her mind. Even though the conversation had taken place a few days ago, the head’s words somehow haunted Reina.

hummm maybe it was Rika's objective to haunt you hehehe so you'll be worried...fear what she might do to you...she is the head...remember that...hu hu hu hu...
be prepared !...or maybe you are just thinking about it too much XD
/me ---> [ ]

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The most unforgettable part of the meeting

:lmao: :lmao: :lmao:
sorry XD i have no idea why i laugh here XD

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protect someone’ which lead to Maki looking very terrified; that was a side Reina never saw of her.

little by littel you are discovering more of her...be ...prepared ? XD

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“Who didn’t Maki protect…?”

something i want to know too...Aibon ?
 
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…Damn, I hope she tells me soon, the curiosity is burning…”

Damn, you 're right !

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“Erm…Hello?” Reina said awkwardly to the snake.

lol....now you can tell me if real snake talk ? :D
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I don’t think he’s fond of me, because I seem to be taking Maki from him all the time…

heh...it's not human you know ? XD
oh well but it can be jealous...i guess..
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The snake, Ryoki, turned his head in curiosity, before returning to his lazy bask in the sun.

i have a picture of a snake in my mind...a really cute one...Ayame XD XD XD
/me ---> [ ]

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Is that who I think it is?

you can hear her/his voice...not us ...we are the one who should ask that XD
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Out of the corner of her eye, she saw Ryoki immediately slither towards the aforementioned person. And through another corner of her eye, saw a slightly bigger snake slither near the woman.

wait wait wait... i know she has wonky eyes but...that sounded like she has cameleon eyes XD XD XD maybe it's just me XD

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“No~! Not now! What if I’m seen? Ohgodohgodohgod…”

loooool...i so picture that XD XD XD (thks to news segment in h!m hahaha)

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“Tanakacchi? Good timing! Help me carry my newly bought stuff?”
that sounded more liek an order than a question to me
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Risa looked up at Reina and looked like her eyes were about to fall out of their sockets any minute. “OH NO!”

:ROTFLMAO:
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“Someone knows I’m cursed just by looking!

:lmao: :lmao: :lmao: :lmao: :lmao: :lmao:

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I knew I shouldn’t have cut through this park!” she moved her upper body in different directions, emphasizing her words, “I should have cut through the second park! No wait! That park has even more snakes! What if I tried cutting through the fourth building? No wait, that’ll be too embarrassing, Kyaaa~!”

*dies*
hahahaha...risa 's overreaction is so freaking funny..."Kyaaa~" XD XD XD
wait...there are snkes in tokyo's parks ? :o XD:w00t:
 
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“You know a good place to cut through to reach the seventh building? Or just the sixth?”

“Right now, I’m confused as hell…”
[...]
“Please, details, I have no idea what the sixth or seventh building is, Senpai…”
 

same here...:doh:  i guess i have to look for the vid
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“I don’t understand you anymore,” Reina raised a brow.

“Who cares, let’s just get my stuff to my room before it gets too dirty!” Risa exaggerated her face in a text-smile D: manner.

:lol:

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“Now that I think about it, it makes perfect sense,” Reina smirked.

“Lies! How so? Was I seriously that obvious?”

:doh:

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“Well, first off, you don’t want to be kissed. At all.

heeeeeeh ?....XD
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Not even by Takahashi Ai.

:o  :D XD
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“SoIwasobvioussoIwasobvoiussoIwasobvoius…”

:ROFL

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“In case you’re wondering which one I am, I’m the 8th

aaah...you are the younger one then huh
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Ai knows about the curse from me too.

:o mmmm interestring...
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It was a little after the shooting for All for one and One for all, she kept insisting why I wouldn’t let her kiss me, so uh…” Risa fought for the correct word, "attackedme I guess you could say.”

:damnfunny

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“She didn’t believe it at first, because she kept smacking herself with electric appliances

oh my...:ROTFLMAO: :ROTFLMAO: :ROTFLMAO:  
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It was until I transformed back and stopped her from dropping the TV on her head that she finally believed,”

oh god !!!:lmao: :lmao: :lmao: :lmao: :lmao: *dies*
Risa laughed. “Good times.”

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Along the way, she saw Yossie exit Sayumi’s room.

“What brings you in there?” Reina called out.

“Hmm?” [..] “Ooooh, Sayu here drank all of my milk tea without my permission. So I was simply telling her not to do it again,” [..]
“Sayu again? She needs to break that habit,”

:ROTFLMAO: :ROTFLMAO: :ROTFLMAO:
ok...cookies can look good..how about milk tea ? XD XD XD oh wait! it's your fault Yossi to have let them alone ! XD XD XD

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“Wah?

wah ? XD XD XD i love this XD XD

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 I’m going to wake you all up.[..]
“Jeez. Leader is stubborn…”

err...i don't have any probleme with that XD she can wake me up too ! even if i'm a morning person...
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“Oh, you planned to see me when I come home?” Maki mused.

“To steal your souvenirs of course,” [..]
“Ah, be forewarned, I have bodyguards,”

that was cute...sounded like a couple hehe
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since she blatantly refused to lose to the alarm clocks of everyone
lol...
 
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“Yeah… Then again, it’s Yossie. She smiles a lot, so I’m not sure whether something troubles her or not…”

hahaha...
remind me of shigure so much...that protrait sure fits her.:D  

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“Yossie… She’s like ocean waves. No matter how much of it you try to handle, they always end up pulling away from you. Then it teases you by brushing by your feet, but when you try again to handle it, the waves pull back into an ocean of mystery… So in short, Yossie is a person that can’t be caught…

aaaah...that's the meaning of the title...nice !:thumbsup


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“Ah… Sorry, I have to return to work. It sucks that I have work on the last day I’m here…”

what do you think you went there for ? XD

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“Hope I don’t end up falling asleep waiting for you…”[..]Haha, so she really did try to wait for me. Maki smiled.

awww cute cute cute  
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“Whoa, Miki and Nii-nii mean it, she really is a heavy sleeper…” Maki scratched her head, at a loss of what to do.

lol at least she did not acte like jigglypuff hahahhaha
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“What am I supposed to do with you?”

good question :doh:
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Then an idea struck her

please not jigglypuff ? XD XD XD
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she dug her hands underneath her upper back and knees and carried her, bridal style.

aaaa.....
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“You locked the door…”
XD
reina you bad girl...

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Dot. Dot. Dot.

heh ?:doh: ....XD

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“Oh jeez…” Maki searched in Reina’s pockets, and to no success, the key was not in either of them…
Reina !...really bad girl aren't you :P

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“You know, I can probably turn you in for theft, watching you do that.” Yossie, who was kneeling next to Maki, said suddenly. Maki jumped in the air, surprised at the sudden appearance.

“Jeez?! Why are YOU up and about in midnight?”
:ROTFLMAO: :ROTFLMAO: :ROTFLMAO: :ROTFLMAO:

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“Don’t do perverted things to her, Gocchin!” Yossie hugged herself and shivered a bit, “she’s still a minor~”

lol what the...

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“Don’t even joke about that.”
oh ?

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“You. What are you and Ojou-sama planning?” [..]“Answer me.”

yep yep answers please !
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“I mean, when Ai found out years ago, nothing happened to her either…”

heeeeh...

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“I see, then it’s only my suspicion, sorry about that. But if you really are planning something…” Maki glared daggers at Yossie, “I will catch you…”

what does she mean by "catch you" ? XD

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“So what if I am using her…
to use her for what exactly ? :doh:
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“Catch me if you can.”

hum hum hum

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Remember, I still want my ten reviews XD

i bet you easly got them XD

Quote from: Yuuyami
Short but amusing chapter <3

i had so much fun reading the previous one, i guess i'm going to die reading this one heh ? XD
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Chapter 17: Entrance of a flamboyant person

a flamboyant person huh...:doh: /me is thinking...

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There was also a foreign scent lingering in the atmosphere for which she was under.[..]in Maki’s cleavage.

uh oh...:D

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Jeez…

JEEZ ???? JEEZ ?????? you just slept next to your idol and what came up is JEEZ ??? not really the reaction i was expecting XD XD XD
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Must she sleep with the blouse open enough to show her freaking boob crack?

rofl

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Maki was hugging Reina tightly, in which Reina was also hugging the cursed idol back in the same fashion.

awwww...
do girls like hugging stuff while they sleep ? such as pillows ? or Raina heh...:D
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I knew I should not have hummed a song to myself while waiting for her!

wait a minute...are you telling me Maki's songs are boring ? and made you sleep ?XD XD XD
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and rested her head against Maki’s dual ‘pillows,’ It’s…really pleasant…

what the ... hjdhgfimsdhgioqhidfhgqdfh XD XD XD

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Why are your lips so… [..]…kissable?

who knows XD XD XD

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when a knock came at the door, causing the surprised wonky eyed teen to jerk forward, pressing her lips against Maki.

OH MY !!!!!!!:ROTFLMAO: :ROTFLMAO: :ROTFLMAO:

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Maki-hebi also raised her head in question from the collar of her pajama’s. They both looked at each other wide-eyed, before blushing after realizing what had just happened.

i love this scene....:bounce:

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“Not interrupting, am I~?”

it's 5am XD
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“Oh my gahh,” her eyes also widened a bit, “I think fate cursed me into always walking in at the wrong times,”

HA HAHAHAHAHAH HAHA Ha jfkldjgkldjgqldfgj l XD

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“What happened last night?” [..]“You were sleeping on the couch, I tried carrying you into your room, but you locked it, and I couldn’t find the key anywhere on you…”[..]“So you strip-searched me?” [..]“…I couldn’t find the key,” Maki ignored Reina’s last remark, “So I had no choice but to let you sleep in my room…” the 7th snake turned away in embarrassment.

hahahaha...you did have choices...let her sleep at Miki/Yossi/ whoever places...or just let her sleep on the couch XD but you are a nice girl aren't you :D

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“Ah… I see…” Reina also turned away in embarrassment, recalling her heavenly experience in Maki’s boobs to mind.

lol...


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With her tail, Maki traced her reptilian mouth, “Was it involuntary? Or did she really want to…?”

who knows....you wanna know that baaaaaadly don't you ? XD

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“Ugh… My recording sucked…”

:lol:
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“I’m probably not going to have a lead in the song…”

which song are you talking about ? :P

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Leopard. Print.

flamboyant and leopart ....:doh:

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“Now there’s only one person who would wear this kind of clothing…”
an old one ? XD
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Suddenly, something flashed in the blink of an eye, and came up Reina’s body. The unpleasant and grippy feeling forced Reina to scream. Unfortunately, she doubt anyone could hear.

:ROTFLMAO: :ROTFLMAO: :ROTFLMAO: :ROTFLMAO:

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“S…S…” Reina cringed and shivered a bit.

S SSS SS SS SS S S SS S S like snake ? snake sounds ? XD
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“Something’s in my clothes!”

i read someone at the first time XD XD XD

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A snake, bearing the ‘two’ kanji, 二,

ah ha ! an old one !
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“So damn hungry…” Miki complained as she looked at the refrigerator.

what a break XD


oh damn...i don't know how am i going to quote next XD XD XD

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Maki was in a silent furious mode—Miki rubbed her eyes to make sure that psychopathic aura wasn’t there. She held the snake by it’s head and extended her arm outward.

“You want food? Skin this and eat it,” Maki said in a dangerously low voice.

“Huh? Is that…?” Miki was about to confirm, but was interrupted again.

Just burn this then! Buuuurn!” The demonic Maki demanded.

:ROTFLMAO: :ROTFLMAO: :ROTFLMAO: :ROTFLMAO:

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“Now now…” Miki patted Maki, “calm down~!” she chuckled.

Miki saying calm down XD XD

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“Whoever it is, it slithered up my body and clung to my chest!”

“Come now, it wasn’t that bad,”

oh god "it wasn't that bad XD XD XD XD XD

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“Maki-chan, show respect to your old ‘obachan’ leader!”
AAaAAAAAaaaa h ! Yuko XD

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“I knew it was Nakazawa-san…” Reina sighed, “The leopard print gave it away.”
sounds like you know everything already XD XD XD

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“Sorry about that~!” Yuko-hebi waved her tail, “You see, I was following instinct.”

“The hell?” Reina raised a brow.

"the helle" XD XD XD
:ROTFLMAO: :ROTFLMAO: :ROTFLMAO: :ROTFLMAO:

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“Instinct my ass

:lmao: :lmao: :lmao: :lmao: :lmao: :lmao: :lmao:

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“Yuuchan, Maki-chan, I think you should stop now…” Miki hated being peace keeper, since she was normally one of the arguers.

*dies*

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“Er…” Reina honestly had no idea whether or not she had a place in this conversation.

*dies dies dies*
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But earlier, she had Nakazawa Yuko clinging to her body underneath her clothes, so naturally, she had nothing to say.

you mean she has something to say ??? XD XD XD

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“When are the others arriving?”

“Depends when they finish recording,” Reina and Miki said at the same time.

/me is trying to keep on sitting on the chair really hardly

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“Ewww, we’re in sync,” Miki playfully waved a hand at Reina.

/me cannot sit correctly anymore

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“Miki-chan! It’s been forever since I last saw you!” she smiled and reached out her hand slowly.

“Oh come on,  it was only a week and a half?”

/me is completly down...
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“I’m happy that you’re here, but can you let me breath while you’re here?” Risa struggled from Yuko’s grasp.

/me is seeing some light...

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“Obachan’s here, and now all the yankiis unite!”
“What the hell?” Miki, Reina, and Yuko mused.

/me is nearly touching some clouds...

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“Now, shower me with all your loving!”

/me is touching clouds...

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“Yeah, riiiiight, someone with brain damage would do that,” [..] “Alright, there’s three people with brain damage here.”

/me has no idea where the place is now...

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“I don’t get a bow?” Miki pointed to herself in a pout.

/me says ooooh...am i going to die again after i already died  ?

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she unconsciously grabbed Maki’s boob with her other hand.

/me keeps dying...

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“Hey!” Maki raised her hand to swat Yuko’s hand away, but was halted when Miki grabbed her other boob.

/me is no longer a human...

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“Seriously, what did you do to make them so big?” Miki mused.

“Oh my gahh!” Yossie walked in, “I really am cursed to walk in at the wrong times!”

/me is completly speechless...

R.I.P

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« Reply #225 on: October 24, 2006, 01:27:10 AM »
LOL that was one of the funniest chapters so far. I love Miki and Yuko lol. Such a comedy duo they r. They should team up more often. And Reina's situation with Maki's boob crack in bed XD. U r a genius...a pure genius *gives Yuuyami a plushie and candy and fun stuff*

New Philosophy on life: *in deep voice* why bow when you can grope?

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« Reply #226 on: October 24, 2006, 02:54:14 AM »
Considering he practically comments on the whole story (i.e. the details of the story), ChrNo's posts should count for as at least 3 reviews. :lol:


Oh wait...wrong writer. XD

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« Reply #227 on: October 24, 2006, 05:28:44 AM »
Quote from: Yuuyami

Reina tried to stir in her sleep, but to no avail, something was restraining her. There was also a foreign scent lingering in the atmosphere for which she was under. It seemed pretty blurry and hazy when she slowly opened her lazy wonky eyes. In fact, it was as if she was in a crack of darkness…

Or in this case, in Maki’s cleavage.


Ahaha. Maki has cleavage of doom.

That whole chapter was priceless. Yuko groping Reina, Miki and Yuko groping Maki, and Yossi coming in to see it all. Freakin hilarious. I've lost count but I'm sure we know most of the cursed members. But who are the remaining ones....? For some reason, I think Aya is a cursed memeber, just like other people have been speculating. Oh well. I do know that I am anxiously awaiting the next chapter.

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« Reply #228 on: October 25, 2006, 01:15:39 AM »
Yuko! XD

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« Reply #229 on: October 28, 2006, 01:48:24 AM »
I LOVE YOU ALL~! -hugs all-

Tanachan: XD~! Yeah, not sure if I can fulfill you this chapter XD

Saikami: You need your damn internet back, Cuz.

Goosefish: I love Yuko too~! So I tried making sure she was completely in character with her gropeyness, haha.

Mayonnaise: I’m not going to have any other new members appearing for awhile, since that’ll be too convenient for my story, haha. So I’m taking my time developing everyone else.

Wordsworth: -sighs- If only if only XD~! Yeah, Miki would most likely buy them, haha!

Jafeijai: I personally adore two things in this chapter, the Maki x Reina, and of course, the Groping Demons and Yankii reunion! XD Nah, Miki’s always like that, always so frank and brutally honest XD Guess what she said there was feminine, meant to have it be frank.

Lil_Hamz: Actually, it’s a little reflection of me, I always come in at the wrong times as well XD

DO me DO me: Yup! <3 I tried very hard making the characters in character, so I incorporate a lot of actual things in it. Yes, this also includes listening to their radio shows and whatnot XD Hell, I even read Maki’s blog to see if I can place accurate days in it, haha.

Coachie: I was smiling when I wrote that chapter too XD

Slack: Glad to know you’re really into the curse. Unfortunately, I cannot reveal any information, so you’ll have to spectate yourself >:]

Chrno: I think I died laughing reading your commentary! Haha! Though this chapter that’s about to be posted isn’t as funny D:, oh well XD

KrazyforKamei: Mm, kansai standup comedy is kinda what inspired me XD In one of Miki’s radio show, she said that she is like, one of the few people who can be the tsukomi (corrects the idiot) for Yuko, who is a boke(idiot) for Miki and vice versa, though it is rare to see Yuko tsukomi’d, so Miki’s a little proud of it, haha.

JFC: Nah, he counts as one XD Besides, I get a 10+ anyway :]

Youkaichica: Cleavage of doom = <3~!  As I said before, I’m not going to disclose ANY information about the future of this story. Because I am a tricky bitch like that <3~!

Rndmnweird: Obachan! XD

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« Reply #230 on: October 28, 2006, 01:52:49 AM »
Long and has an amusing beginning but it might be boring later on... D: -stabs the nondescriptive writing-





Chapter 18: Flight








Since when…?

The alarm clock rang an aggravating tune. Maki used her sheet to block the noise by pressing it hard to her ears. Even if the alarm clock was on the night-stand to the left of her bed, she didn’t bother turning around to shut it off. She still faced right and tried to sleep through the alarm.

Then, she heard the alarm shut off. Funny… I don’t think the alarm shuts off by itself… Maki turned to her left to see what the supernatural force was.

Why, a sleeping-in Yuko of course.

Maki let out a pretty strained scream, that sounded like she tried to suppress it, but some of it could still be heard.

“Hush~<3” Yuko moved onto Maki, wrapping her leg over Maki’s, a bedspread separating touching of skin, and wrapped her arms around her as well, “I’m still sleeping…” she said lazily, and gave Maki a kiss on the cheek, before trying to sleep.

“GET OFF OF ME!”

BAM.

Meanwhile.

“Eh?” Reina got up immediately, “What was that noise?” and she looked at her balcony door, “Eeeh, a bird must’ve flown into it,” and then she went back to sleep.

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“Well, I wanted to sleep in your room for a change so I invited myself in, at midnight,” Yuko laughed as she picked at her fried egg.

“Why didn’t you sleep in Miki’s room like last night?” Maki dug in her nimono.

“Well, if I did, she would’ve kept me all night~…” Yuko replied in a melodramatic sigh.

“Now now,” Miki smirked, “not in front of the kiddies.”

“Stop it! The touching demons are scaring me~!” Risa laughed.

Just ignore them…ignore them… ignore them… ignore them… Reina trained her mind into saying, hoping that she wouldn’t be swept away by Yuko and Miki’s personalities combined. Her concentration was shattered when Yuko wrapped her arm around her, and used her other hand to pull Reina’s chin towards her face.

“If you’re so pissed off, I might as well sleep with Reina tonight~<3”

“You will not!” Maki and Reina both exclaimed at the same time.

Alright, this is the second day Yuko’s here. And it was true, she slept in Miki’s room yesterday, but they both made so much noise…Thank god Miki’s room is on the other side of the hallway…Then again, my room is two rooms from her…

“Ah… So much noise in the morning…” Megumi stuck her pinky in her ear and rotated it, to hopefully sharpen her hearing senses.

“Morning!” Yuko waved, and motioned for her to sit at the table as well.

Actually, this was a surprisingly early breakfast. Reina, Maki, Risa, Yuko, Miki, and now Megumi, were the first ones to appear for breakfast—at 6 AM.

“Haha, knowing the others, they’ll come seeking breakfast at eight, so we all have two hours to kill,” Yuko sat back in the chair, indicating that she was full.

“Why not kill that groping habit of your’s? An Obachan doing it is creepy,” Maki chuckled.

“Oh, then I’m not me,” Yuko said in a blank face, before smacking Maki in the boob.

Maki growled at Yuko and then held a protective arm extending to her other shoulder as she ate, regretting what she said.

“So, Obachan, how long are you staying here?” Risa simply asked, knowing that she was safe from harm since she was across the table.

“Hmm…When I feel like it,” Yuko said in a smile, then a stern face, “I trust that no one really wants me to leave just because I’m aggravating them, yes?”

“Ah… But is that not the case with Maki?” Megumi replied.

“You’re just asking for your boobs to be popped, aren’t you?” Yuko laughed, looking at Maki.

“You’re just asking for your wellbeing to be seriously burned, aren’t you?” Maki gave the same laugh as Yuko.

- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Night.

“Ha… That was fun,” Yuko laughed as she yawned.

“Fun? All you did was grope us with Miki,” Maki sighed, realizing what she had just said, and quickly raising her hands to the defense of her precious objects.

Now, they were simple killing time in the lobby. Yuko, Miki, Maki, Reina (Who still had no idea why she was dragged along), and Yossie were lounging around in the couches and chairs.

“Miki, you can’t send her home?”

“Why? This is fun!” Yuko and Miki both said.

“You’re killing me here…” Maki slapped a hand to her forehead.

“Well, she couldn’t anyway, the only person who could—” Yossie began, but was interrupted when a hand was placed on her shoulder.

“I apologize for not making my presence known earlier, I was visiting The Head,” the sudden intruder said.

“Oh! Kaorin! To what do we owe the pleasure now?” Yuko looked up lazily.

“Risa. She told me to take you home.”

“Well then, bye bye!” Yuko got up and waved.

“Wah?!” Maki and Reina both were shocked and surprised.

Kaori and Yuko both walked out of the lobby, but their conversation was clearly heard.

“So, did you bring the car?”

“Yes.”

“Can I drive?”

“No.”

“Fine, take me to a bar then~!”

“You’re going to drink in front of someone who’s going to drive?”

And they all heard the main doors close, signifying that they seriously left.

“She came and went… In the blink of an eye,” Reina widened her eyes.

“Yuuchan and Kaorin, they have a good respect for each other, since Yuko passed her leadership role to her and all, so naturally, they’d obey each other,” Miki laid on the couch, her head resting on Yossie’s lap.

“Hmm…That’s good I guess, but it would’ve been better if she had shown some signs of respect for everyone else too…” Maki looked off to the side.

“Well then, night night!” Yossie smiled.

“Leaving already?” Miki looked up from her rest.

“Dance practice for the new song, Aruiteru, is tomorrow morning.”

“Then again, I also have the PV for Melodies to shoot, haha,” Miki chuckled.

“Don’t do anything reckless with Aya, or you’ll transform,” Maki added in.

“Well, as long as we don’t make lip contact in the PV, it should be okay… Though if we are asked to, it will be problematic…” Miki sat upright on the sofa again.

“Wouldn’t want to transform on set, yes?” Reina said, now knowing that Aya is not cursed.

“True…Maybe if I put plastic wrap on my mouth…The camera might be able to make it look like gloss…”

“Don’t come up with weird ideas,” Maki sighed again.

Yossie stood up, “Going to sleep now, had a fun time, but work is work, so Reina, Miki, I’m expecting you both to not be late,” She said, and then she left. Miki left shortly after, leaving Maki and Reina alone in the lobby.

“So…” Reina began, “What’s it like to fly?”

“Hmm? You want to know?” Maki asked in a bland face. Reina nodded, and Maki grinned, “Meet me at the rooftop in ten minutes,” she stood up, and was heading to her room.

“You’re seriously going to take me out to flight?”

“Why not?” Maki looked back, “I won’t drop you. I definitely won’t drop you...”

- - - - - - - - - - - - - -

“This is taking a little more than ten minutes…” Reina looked at her watch multiple times. Even though she has ridden on planes and the latter before, this will definitely be the first open-air flight she will be experiencing.

Though, for some odd reason, the night felt very warm to Reina. Perfect, and still, no zephyrs or any odd aroma in the air. Even the sky had stars partially showing amidst the dark sky. To think that Reina might be able to glide in that very atmosphere… She might’ve been able to steal the stars from the very sky if she dared. Her vivid fantasy was interrupted when she heard the rooftop door open, and out of the darkness, came Maki.

In the plaid alternative outfit for Some boys! Touch nonetheless.

“Why dress up for the occasion?” Reina raised a brow, trying to take in the sight of Maki in that outfit up close.

“My wings can rip anything that’s in the way, so rather than appear in a bra, I thought this outfit should suffice. My designer already saved the dimensions and such, and even has another duplicate of the outfit if this one gets destroyed…”

“Yes, but appearing in your bra would’ve been more convenient, I wouldn’t want you to ruin a…sexy outfit like that…” Reina said, hesitating to say sexy. She thought she saw Maki get slightly flustered, but it must be her eyes imagining it.

“Alright…” Maki walked towards Reina, every step she walked caused echoes, seemingly longer each time she moved towards her, “The flight…”

On Maki’s back, seven fleshy sticks poked out of her back. At the tip, looking almost like a sharp black stick, the longest part of the wing slowly protruded out of her, ripping the upper half of the transparent outer wear of her outfit. As it continuously edged its way out, the second longest part of the wing appeared bundled with the longest. Eventually, the third, and shortest stick came, still bundled with the others. After all seven came out, they spread to the side, from Reina’s eyes, looking like spikes coming out of Maki. Then, the sticks suddenly opened, revealing the grey translucent skin between the black wing ‘bones.’

“Well, I’m not sure whether to call them beautiful, or extremely cool…” Reina stared, gawk-eyed.

Maki smiled, and walked forward, each wing angled backwards a few centimeters, “No need to be afraid, I won’t let you fall out of my arms.”

Reina walked forward as well, each step trembling with anticipation.

“Now. Arms around my neck, I’ll carry you, bridal style.”

Reina slowly put her arms around Maki’s warm and soft neck. With this close contact, her olfactory senses picked up the same aroma of the day before, that sweet yet relaxing scent that she always has. Reina looked at Maki’s face, and noticed how the moonlight illuminated her face, seemingly giving her idol’s smile more radiance than daylight.

Since when did you become so…

Maki tilted her head down to look at how cute Reina looked as she placed her arms around her arm with hesitation, yet, had a bit of anticipation in her eyes. “Jump,” and Reina did, thus, Maki caught Reina’s legs and back, holding her bridal style as she did what seemed an eternity ago.

Still clinging to her neck, Reina bowed her head to Maki, signifying that she was ready. With a smile, Maki’s magnificent wings spread out, then she jumped in the air, and her wings flapped softly as to not be so sudden, or too rough, but simply a perfect synchronization of a smooth ascension. Soon, they were both airborne.

Reina was afraid to look at the world below, she kept her head against Maki’s shoulder, looking at the starry skies they were in.

“You know, you should try looking down, don’t worry, I won’t drop you…”

And Reina did as she was told, and looked in awe at the city below her, fascinated at the various lights illuminating it all. “Hold it, wouldn’t people see us? I’m sure most of them really don’t want to point us out as Superman or something…”

“Nah, for some odd reason, when I’m in flight, I think I’m invisible, and probably you too…”

“How so?” Reina looked at Maki again.

“There’s a small body of water there… If I fly over, I don’t think we’ll see our reflections…” and Maki swooped slowly over the water; sure enough, Reina looked to find that their reflections were seriously not showing up at all, no matter how hard she looked.

“Wow…So amazing…” Reina made sure to keep that sight in her head for replay.

“Isn’t it?”

When Reina looked at Maki again, she had a sad look in her eyes. “Maki?”

“I guess it’s a bit nostalgic to carry someone in flight again…”

“Again?”

“Yeah… Unfortunately, I can’t really open that door of my past yet, not now…” her look grew sadder.

“When do you think you can?”

“…I’m not sure… But when the time comes and you listen…I will be very happy.”

I want to believe that there is more beyond that door—that door of darkness to me…Even though the wind spites me… I know there will be something calm… Even though I have this pain… I know there will be something to heal me…A kindness that fulfills me, I want to believe there is light in the darkness of that door…

Without warning, a few tears dropped on Reina’s forehead. As much as she wanted to comfort Maki, she knew she could not do much to console her.

“I’m sorry, I shouldn’t have poured the weakness on you,” Maki tried to smile.

Reina wiped the tears from Maki’s face, to her small shock, “Yeah… That door, it won’t open anytime soon, I think… But you’re the only one who can, since I don’t have the key to it, nonetheless, good luck with opening it.”

“Hmm… Yeah, I’ll keep believing and moving forward, as much as my sappy monologue, haha,” Maki laughed a bit. She looked at Reina again, noting the slight seriousness in her statement, she could only smile, and flew higher in the air. “We can breathe air in a higher place, no need to worry about anything below us, but breathe the air closest to the clouds…”

“And the sadness that seemingly emits from you as you say that?”

Maki could only smile sadly.

Tell me…

“Still a bit conflicted, that’s all… As I said before, when I finally open that door, I hope you will listen. For now, just enjoy the flight,” Maki smiled sincerely.

“Alright,” Reina smiled back, and looked at the cityscape below once again, “this is definitely better than any rollercoaster I’ve been on.”

“Haha, glad to know you enjoy it.”

Tell me, since when did you become so precious to me?









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« Reply #231 on: October 28, 2006, 02:01:54 AM »
AHHH!! So sweet! Reina/Maki is really growing on me.

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« Reply #232 on: October 28, 2006, 02:54:40 AM »
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*gasp* I knew it was Rika all along. :P (The sick thing helped me. As Rika has asthma)
Ehhh?!REally?! I never knew that!

"OH MY GAAHH~" XD I love Yossui

I gotta say, AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME. Probably the most creative fanfic here! Ive seen funny, adventurous, and romantic--- but this is definitly the most creative! What a good genre. And I saw the Fabura hints in there too, but you know what, it TOTALY works, and its not entirely too similar, which is a good thing for sure. (I caught on quickly to the Fabura stuff even if I only have read the first 4 volumes XD)

I like the light humor of it, so it isnt too serious, but not too dry. I gotta give it up to myself, for even I was able to read between the lines and figure out everyones questions! Like Yuko with the clothes, Rika being the Head*, Gotou and Reina getting closer, Risa being the 8th-- all but Aya not being part of the curse ;_; (which is awesome, now that I know YoCharMi totaly powers over Aya&Miki )

*Ive always thought of Rika as being a little suspicious lately. Im ALWAYS for her cute self, but Ive read all too many times that underneath that all, shes actually not so cute... more like Bitchy. But even if I dont wanna believe that, also means thers gotta be some rudeness in her (she is human!...). So I sorta guessed that it would be her, also the fact that Yossui is close with her. I hope to see YoCharMi (Yossui, Rika,Miki) in full effect in this fan fic, since I havnt seen them all three together.
THANKS for including an MKB member in here! MKB is my most favorite group other than MoMusu! Boss Saitou and and Megumi are my favorite.
Definitly love the whole naked Gotou and Maki (and Yossui walking in was the BEST part). Definitly love Yossui walking in at the best tmes, my mood goes from shocking to laughing out loud!
Yay for Yuuko <3 and YAY for YANKII LOVE!!! (I like how you didnt really include Reina in the whole Yankii grope thing...seeing as she isnt so yankii antmore ;___;).
I can totaly relate to what you wrote about Reinas situation =_= half the time, my mess in my room, isnt even MY mess.

My only question is : How do they do PBs? Especially ones with bikini shots?!

Keep the great qriting up~ (Sorry for the long post XD it would have been longer if I hadnt forgotten what else I wanted to add!)

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« Reply #233 on: October 28, 2006, 03:05:08 AM »
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“Why didn’t you sleep in Miki’s room like last night?” Maki dug in her nimono.

“Well, if I did, she would’ve kept me all night~…” Yuko replied in a melodramatic sigh.


QFT!:ONhee:

Please tell me that there will be a chapter dedicated to Yuko popping Maki's boobs, either in human form or snake form :ONwriggly:

Nice chapter once again Yuuyami! :thumbsup

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« Reply #234 on: October 28, 2006, 04:56:34 AM »
Love it! I'd gladly fly with Maki over the city, it'd be such a beautiful view, both looking down (at the city) and up (O.O I SEE BOOBS!)
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« Reply #235 on: October 28, 2006, 05:12:49 AM »
Great chapter!
 
I love Yuko still spreading the love all over H!P XD . And slapping Maki's boobs and continually assaulting the poor girl had me laughing like no tomorrow!
 
Maki turning up in Some Boys!Touch outfit had me wondering exactly how Reina's face would have looked at that moment. Btw...did you notice that Maki carrying Reina bridal style has happened in both our fics? :P :P
 
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:cry: That line was just so sweet, it left a huge impression.
 
I'm looking VERY forward to the next chapter. I love how you write. There's always entertainment and humorous parts, and then there's the serious parts. The balance is perfect between the two, and it makes it exciting to read.
 
So until the next part is up, I'll sit and wait (im)patiently. :D

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« Reply #236 on: October 28, 2006, 06:06:25 AM »
SO MUCH LOVE!!!!

I'm now really starting to love Reina/Maki. It's just so sweet!

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« Reply #237 on: October 28, 2006, 08:21:53 AM »
Gah! Yuko! Stay away from Maki's boobs! XD

The scene in the end was simply beautiful and it's inspiring me to do some fan art... teehee <3
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« Reply #238 on: October 28, 2006, 10:41:24 PM »
Once again amazing! Im sad to see Yuko go though. Her and Miki were the bomb diggity. The abuse of Maki's boobs was great. Yuko randomly smacking it XD XD

The flying part was so cute! Reina/Maki FTW! It was so sweet easy to visualize. It was a little sad at the same time though. Im guessing Maki had a past lover or sumthin? Poor dear *tear*

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« Reply #239 on: October 28, 2006, 11:18:52 PM »
Sure! As long as I get to add you on my list :]

Two more reviews to go, and THEN I start writing the next chapter >:3

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