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« Reply #320 on: November 11, 2006, 02:20:39 AM »
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Love how you made it book-coverish, I've been having trouble with an idea of how to make the cover without making it spoilerific or something. But now I have an idea, thanks to you. Though the thing is... May I kinda use your idea of Maki and Reina in flight? ; ;?

lol, go right ahead; fundamentally it was your idea to begin with XD

happy birthday btw! :-P

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« Reply #321 on: November 11, 2006, 02:24:04 AM »
Happy Birthday Yuuyami!!!! Legal to drink now...uh oh XD. I hope yah have a super day and that ur birthday wishes come true...unless you wished for a pony cuz thats lame and unoriginal :P

PS: Ur story still pwnz

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« Reply #322 on: November 11, 2006, 08:52:50 AM »
HaPPY BiRTHDaY!!
 Muahahhahahah!!! Did you get any cool presents?

Read the complete Doki Doki!!

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« Reply #323 on: November 12, 2006, 01:08:01 AM »
Happy B-day! :D

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« Reply #324 on: November 12, 2006, 04:02:50 AM »
^ *quotes* Happy B-day!:D*unquote*

Hope you enjoy yours! =P

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« Reply #325 on: November 12, 2006, 05:45:36 AM »
Oh, yeah, mine is coming up soon too. Yay!

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« Reply #326 on: November 12, 2006, 08:15:19 AM »
Happy birthday Yuu :D

And thanks for explaining everything since Im so stupid XD


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« Reply #327 on: November 12, 2006, 10:52:22 AM »
HAPPY BIRTHDAY :D
Hope you had a nice birthday

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« Reply #328 on: November 12, 2006, 09:29:36 PM »
waaa sorry i'm late
Happy birthday Yuuyami !:cheers

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« Reply #329 on: November 12, 2006, 09:34:26 PM »
Yeah, I think I'm kind of late as well but oh well! Happy birthday!! Hope everything goes well and that you don't get in to too much trouble....

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« Reply #330 on: November 13, 2006, 05:01:40 AM »
I just read this whole thing in about 2-3 hours *fast reader*

You made Yuko Ayame. That alone makes you awesome.

Oh, I kinda had a feeling Rika was the head. At first I thought it was Aya, but then I was all "waitaminute, it's totally Rika" XD

Also, Kaori/Ruru? WTF? It works, but.. :huh:

Reina/Eri would have been awesome :P

Yuko/who? Yossie? Miki? Maki?
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« Reply #331 on: November 13, 2006, 04:39:28 PM »
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Yuko/who? Yossie? Miki? Maki?


Yuko/anyone she can get her hands on XD

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« Reply #332 on: November 14, 2006, 05:35:59 AM »
Wordsworth: Thanks XD

Lil_Hamz: Haha! <3

JFC: I like soysauce too >:] As for the reason why she dumped her... We have yet to find out, yes? :]

Slave: Now, you know there's absolutely no romance behind that XD That's not a crazy hold o_o I guess I worded it weirdly. All there is is Reina straddling Maki's legs :] The Yossie and Ai confrontation... What happens in it is a secret for now :]

Mayonnaise: Thanks m'dear <3

Jafeijai: Yes, expect that often >:] I am a tricky bitch like that <3~! Thank you for the compliment on my drawings too XD

Chrno: Because you are special, m'dear <3~! Yeah, Yossie is apparently far-sighted. It seems that she needs glasses to read close things. Evidence is in one of her Hello! Yossie journal thingies XD Yes, they have been calling her Ms. Brat all this time XD So yes, next chapter's here <3

Coachie: <3~!

KrazyforKamei: Thank you~! <3

Youkaichica: Sorry for the long wait, and once again, I AM a tricky bitch :]

Rndmnweird: Wait's over. Shame the chapter's short XD

Goosefish: Thank you~! <3 Who knows what Yossie's up to :]

Cheesesticks: I repeat. I freaking love you.

Kazitakato: Hey, like I said XD Nothing could change my plans XD

Shoko: Yes, I realize that Kaorin x Ruru is total crack, but for her role, it had to work :]

To everyone: Thank you for the birthday wishes! I find it funny how I got more regards here than I did in my private birthday thread in the Joint, haha. Presents? My friends and I screwed around with a pinata one friend got me, and we beat the crap out of it, and ooooh the candy <3~! <3~! I feel like a kid again XD

ONWARDS TO STORY >3

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Chapter 22: Prime Numbers
« Reply #333 on: November 14, 2006, 05:42:46 AM »
Short and boring chapter D:






Chapter 22: Prime Numbers





And so, the true journey begins…

“Huh? You too?” Reina raised a brow.

“You were called too?” Maki also raised a brow.

“Good, you’re both here…” Megumi walked in.

Everyone was gathered in a random shopping district; more specifically, a more desolate shopping district, in disguise. Reina was in a pair of sunglasses, as usual. Maki had a beanie, and tied her hair in pigtails in the back, and wore that four-buttoned coat again. Megumi had her hair in a high ponytail, and wore a classy jacket, one that is similar to Maki’s, only it ended at her waist rather than her feet.

“I understand why you have us here…” Maki began, “but why the hell did you bring her here too?!” she raised her voice, pointing to other girl clad in a simple sweat-shirt and padded vest.

“Why the hell not?!” Miki had her arms crossed. Apparently, she decided to wear her colored contacts with un-corrected vision, and wore glasses.

“Ah…The more opinions, the better, yes?” Megumi looked at the sky, having a bored face.

“Opinions of what exactly?” the three said at once.

“Masae-kun recently asked me to find good colors for her hair.”

“I thought Ootani-san said she was getting too old for coloring her hair?” Maki scratched the back of her head.

“Old habits are hard to break,” Megumi said in a straight voice.

“And she says that, looking at me…” Miki went shifty-eyed.

“You’re like a pedophile too, really. I’ve seen you grope some of the kids,” Maki sighed.

“And I’ve seen you smack some of the kindergarteners’ butts in that Haromoni episode too!” Reina gripped her arms, and shivered, “it was creepy to look at!”

“Ah… Now that I think of it… your group of children was very rowdy… Your influence probably played a part…”

“Shut up~!” Miki glared.

“Ah…Corruption of youth…” Megumi looked up at the sky again and sighed.

“I said shut up~!” Miki gave Megumi a playful smack.

“Back to the matter at hand… You said Ootani-san wants a new hair color? Why’d she ask you? She’s the one who usually comes up with her own hair, yes?” Maki asked.

“Ah… She wanted to try something new, and wants me to come up with it…”

“What’s a color she hasn’t tried yet?” Reina closed her eyes in a drone-like manner. “I don’t think there’s a color she hasn’t tried on…”

“Well…What did she have?” Miki raised her hand to count, “Blue...Green…Pink…Blonde…Brown…Red…White…Black…Purple…”

“It’s impossible, she’s had every color…” Maki looked at the floor gloomily.

“Maybe we should mix them together, like she did with everything else?” Miki raised a hand.

“Ah… True, what are two colors she hasn’t combined?” Megumi readjusted her glasses.

“You know what? Let’s just buy everything and put it all in a bucket, and we’ll stick her head in,” Miki crossed her arms, already bored.

“Ah… I think she’s done that once… with the white and blue and red during her short spikey hair era…”

“Murata-san, she didn’t say it’s not okay to choose colors she’s had before, right?”

“Ah…Reina, I guess she did not… In that case, we do have our freedoms…”

“Instead of standing around gawking and talking, we should go in the store and look…” Miki said in an annoyed voice as she walked into the store.

Everyone else also went into the store and immediately headed for the shelf containing all the hair dyes.

“Ah… She also cut her hair… It is the same hair she sported in Sukeban Deka…” Megumi looked blank again, “Ah…those three minutes of blonde glory before blowing up…”

“Don’t act like you’re so proud of it…You weren’t the one in the movie…” Miki said as she was looking at the back of two random hair-dye boxes.


“Hmm… This kind of purple with blonde looks nice…” Megumi looked at the two boxes.

“Haven’t seen that shade of color on Ootani yet…” Miki briefly glanced. Indeed, it was obvious that she was bored.

“It would look really nice…” Reina went into critiquing-artist mode, placing her thumb and index finger on her chin.

“I agree,” Maki said as she looked over Megumi’s shoulder.

“Ah… Then it’s settled…”

“Yay, we wasted a simple 5 minutes,” Miki lazily threw her arms up in the air. “May I go home now? There’s movies waiting to be watched~!” After receiving a nod, Miki left everyone immediately.

“Ah… Oh well… A small Orochi reunion does not hurt…” Megumi sighed.

- - - - - - - - - - - - - - Next day >:]

Maki wiped the sweat off her face with the towel around her neck, “Nothing like a good morning run…” She walked briskly to the couch and laid on it, fanning herself with her hand.

“Ah…Good morning…”

“Kya~! You scared the spirit out of me!” Maki clung to the sofa, but let go.

“I seem to do that a lot lately,” Megumi chuckled.

“So…” Maki sat down formally, “What did Ootani-san think?”

“Ah…She was happy…She was full of expression…And also… Her boobs grew…” Megumi said, plainly.

“Are you here to thank us, to boast, or sexual harassment?!”

“…All three?” Megumi tilted her head, still holding her expressionless face.

“Anywho…” Maki wiped her face with the towel again, “What brings you here in the morning?”

“Waiting.”

“For Ootani-san?”

“Ah… There’s a mind reader among us…”

“No need to go that far,” Maki raised a brow, “I know you’re waiting for her to come down.”

“So, can you tell me when I’ll get good money?” Megumi looked at Maki, clearly sarcastic.

“Yes, when you sell all your glasses to the wota,” Maki smirked.

“Ah…I’ll fare better if I were to sell your bras.”

Maki was silent, Megumi was hard to tsukkomi most of the time, so she best try not to be the boke any further.

“You and Ootani-san… Do you like each other?” Maki raised that question all of a sudden. Megumi looked at her with a blank face, perhaps attempting to think of an answer.

“If I told you that I love you, would you disappear from my life?”

Masae looked up at the sudden question out of the blue. She set aside the book she was reading and smiled, “No, I won’t disappear from you, definitely.”

“Ah…Thank goodness…” Megumi kneeled in front of Masae, who was sitting down. The orochi then rested her arms on the other’s lap, and rested her head on it. “I’m so glad that I wasn’t rejected…”

“Are you afraid of being alone?” Masae asked as she ran her fingers through Megumi’s hair.

“Ah…All I fear means nothing…When you’re around…”

“I’m happy,” she smiled, then brought Megumi up higher so she could lock the glasses-wearing woman into an embrace, “I won’t disappear from you…I want to stay with you…”


“Hmm… I can’t say…” Megumi looked at the ceiling temporarily, before looking at Maki again. “You and Reina-chan don’t have something special?”

“Of course not…”

“Of course not?” Megumi repeated to her amusement, giving a small smile.

Maki lightly blushed at her choice of words, but immediately countered, “Murata… Does Ootani-san know about the curse?”

There was a brief silence.

Megumi looked up at the ceiling again, “Ah…I was thinking they should change the panels of the ceiling… I can not help but feel like my life is under constant threat because of the poor ceiling quality…”

And she dodges the question completely! Maki thought in her mind, twitching her left eye.

“Megumi!” A voice called out from the entrance to the lobby. Maki could have sworn she saw Megumi flicker to life at the voice, something that’s rare to see in the normally stoic woman. “I’m ready to go.”

“Coming,” Megumi got up from the couch, and then said her farewells to Maki, before walking off to meet with Masae.

“Haha…” Maki rested her head on her hand, “So she’s human too.”

Now… Does Ootani-san really know about the curse or what…? Maki’s thoughts were interrupted when a familiar presence called out to her.

“Done your run?” Reina waved a hand in front of Maki’s face. “You said you’re taking me out for breakfast after your run, so here I am.”

“Alright, let me get changed, and we’ll go,” Maki smiled serenely.

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Wherever the journey leads…

“So…” Yossie placed her hands behind her head, laying on the bed, “Maki seems to be a little more mature than she was before…”

“I like to see her pursue that direction…” Rika replied, who was sitting on Yossie’s legs.

“Ojou-sama…” Yossie smirked, “You seem troubled.”

Rika then laid on Yossie’s chest, hugging her tightly, “Whatever you’re scheming, it’s doomed to fail, knowing you…”

“What makes you think I’m planning something?” The Morning Musume leader ran her hand across the head’s tresses.

Whether good or ill shall come of this venture…

“It has something to do with Reina, doesn’t it? You always give off that aura…It concerns me…”

“I don’t think you have to worry about that…”

“I guess it’s only my suspicion?” Rika looked up at Yossie from their embrace.

“I suppose so…” Yossie smiled, caressing Rika’s face.

Even God doesn’t know.








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« Reply #334 on: November 14, 2006, 05:43:16 AM »
Notes:

-The chapter name, Prime Numbers, is relevant to the Orochi who appear in this chapter XD Maki – 7, Megumi – 3, Miki - 5 XD

-Tsukomi and Boke are respectively Kansai duo comedy terms. Boke’s the idiot, and the Tsukomi is the one who corrects the idiot. Or something to that effect, haha.

Actually, I was thinking later on, where the notes are, I would post detailed information about an Orochi, like, why I chose her to be one, and the logical reasons for it and what not XD So look forward to those soon <3
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« Reply #335 on: November 14, 2006, 05:47:36 AM »
Im glad I came here today!!! WHAT WONDERFUL LONG, SEXY CHAPTERS!!!!

Love you Yuuyami, I really do...I LOVE IT~


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« Reply #336 on: November 14, 2006, 05:57:58 AM »
Ah...you just made Megumi my favorite character in the story :D

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“So, can you tell me when I’ll get good money?” Megumi looked at Maki, clearly sarcastic.

“Yes, when you sell all your glasses to the wota,” Maki smirked.

“Ah…I’ll fare better if I were to sell your bras.”


QFT! I wonder how much one would cost.:ONglasses:

Miki groping the kids? I need to watch Haromoni again. :ONkekeke:

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« Reply #337 on: November 14, 2006, 06:11:41 AM »
Masae/Megumi. Hot.
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« Reply #338 on: November 14, 2006, 11:45:03 AM »
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Chrno: Because you are special, m'dear <3~!

awww:baa60776:
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To everyone: Thank you for the birthday wishes! I find it funny how I got more regards here than I did in my private birthday thread in the Joint, haha.

actually, i stick to The PIEHOLE XD  i eventually go to The AME...shame on me ><...

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Chapter 22: Prime Numbers
Everyone was gathered in a random shopping district; more specifically, a more desolate shopping district, in disguise.
i have no idea why i laugh here XD
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“I understand why you have us here…” Maki began, “but why the hell did you bring her here too?!” she raised her voice, pointing to other girl clad in a simple sweat-shirt and padded vest.

“Why the hell not?!” Miki had her arms crossed.

i simply love Maki+Miki relationship in your story :D
still...why do they have to fight anytime they see eachother XD

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“Ah…The more opinions, the better, yes?” Megumi looked at the sky, having a bored face.

bored already ? XD
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“Opinions of what exactly?” the three said at once.
+1 !

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“Masae-kun recently asked me to find good colors for her hair.”
why is she asking those 3 ??? XD XD XD

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“You’re like a pedophile too, really. I’ve seen you grope some of the kids,” Maki sighed.

“And I’ve seen you smack some of the kindergarteners’ butts in that Haromoni episode too!” Reina gripped her arms, and shivered, “it was creepy to look at!”

maybe i should reconsider watching haromoni again XD

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“I don’t think there’s a color she hasn’t tried on…”
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“It’s impossible, she’s had every color…” Maki looked at the floor gloomily.

:lmao: they sound like it's the end of the world...

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“Maybe we should mix them together, like she did with everything else?” Miki raised a hand.[..]
“You know what? Let’s just buy everything and put it all in a bucket, and we’ll stick her head in,” Miki crossed her arms, already bored.

:lmao: actually when i read her saying "mix them together" i understood putting all the color together, but then Megu said it was combin them so i thought i got it wrong...but it realy was what Miki thought XD
Miki looking boring seems so natural to me XD XD XD

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“Ah…those three minutes of blonde glory before blowing up…”
glory...:lmao:

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“Don’t act like you’re so proud of it…You weren’t the one in the movie…” Miki said
awww you are pissed off because you weren't in it too, right ? hahaha
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Indeed, it was obvious that she was bored.

:ROTFLMAO:
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“Yay, we wasted a simple 5 minutes,” Miki lazily threw her arms up in the air. “May I go home now? There’s movies waiting to be watched~!” After receiving a nod, Miki left everyone immediately.

you made me love Miki XD XD XD

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“Ah…She was happy…She was full of expression…And also… Her boobs grew…” Megumi said, plainly.

What th h !! XD XD XD XD

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“Are you here to thank us, to boast, or sexual harassment?!”
i go for last 2

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“…All three?” Megumi tilted her head, still holding her expressionless face.

bam wrong hahaha "All three ?" XD XD XD the "?" made me laugh...don't ask..i'm just stupid XD

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“So, can you tell me when I’ll get good money?” Megumi looked at Maki, clearly sarcastic.

“Yes, when you sell all your glasses to the wota,” Maki smirked.

“Ah…I’ll fare better if I were to sell your bras.”

:ROTFLMAO:
/me dies

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“If I told you that I love you, would you disappear from my life?”
[..]“I won’t disappear from you…I want to stay with you…”


awww...another forbidden couple...

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“You and Reina-chan don’t have something special?”

“Of course not…”
“Of course not?” Megumi repeated to her amusement, giving a small smile.
Maki lightly blushed at her choice of words

why don't i believe what Maki said :doh:

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“Ah…I was thinking they should change the panels of the ceiling… I can not help but feel like my life is under constant threat because of the poor ceiling quality…”

:ROTFLMAO: :ROTFLMAO: :ROTFLMAO:

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Now… Does Ootani-san really know about the curse or what…?
that's a good question !

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Wherever the journey leads…
Whether good or ill shall come of this venture…
Even God doesn’t know.

even God ! haha !

Yossi + Rika awww....
nostalgia, nostalgia...

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« Reply #339 on: November 14, 2006, 01:26:54 PM »
In the beginning where Megumi gathered everyone I thought it was going to be something serious to do with the curse!! Lol, deciding Masae's hair colour for her!! It's sweet coz she wanted opinions on what colours to choose for Masae.
 
Aw, all the cursed and the ones they love. So many complications come along with it :cry: .
 
Looking forward to the next chapter! :lol:

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