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« Reply #40 on: September 12, 2006, 06:39:49 AM »
This fic is really good, I love it :D

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« Reply #41 on: September 12, 2006, 01:48:47 PM »
Thank you for your coments!^^:D :heart:
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“Yossie I must do another PV with Aya. I will be back soon.”Miki said on the telephone.
“Yes ok. I must got with Ai, Risa and Reina to a special greeting, so I wont be here too.”
“Ok.Well I must go now… someone wantso to take sizes for the dresses.”
“Uhn yeah I must go too. Well see you on Monday Miki. Love you.”
“Love you too” Miki said and hang up the phone.

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“Buuuuuh!” Reina screamed.
“Waaah! Reina you shocked me!” Risa screamed and jumped back.
“Hey you two! Don’t play around!” Ai shouted.
“Gomen…Ai” Both said.
“You two are no kids anymore…” Ai said but couldn’t finish the sentence.


CRASH!

Ai walked against a opened door.
“Uhaa!” Ai said and she saw little stars.
Risa and Reina laughed about that.
Ai had a red face and left.
“Ah how embarrassing !” Ai thought.


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Maki was eating 4 plates of food.
“Sugoi! You must be very hungry!” Yumiko said with wide opened eyes.
“mhhh yesh… itsh delicioushhhh…” She answered.
“Ah you got some rice on your cheek.” Yumiko came close to maki and ate it.
“Delicious!” Yumiko laughed.
“ehhm Yumiko could you do me a favour?”
“Yeah shure.”
“I have some clothes at my mum’s house. Could you go and get them?”
“Yeah shure.”
“Thanks! They are in a pink cupboard”
“ Yep I will go and get them I will be back soon.” Yumiko gave maki a little kiss on the cheek and left.

At Maki’s mum’s house.

“Sumimasen…can I come in?” Yumiko asked when she arrived there.
“Yeees the door is open!”
“Hello I want to get something for Maki. Where is Maki’s bedroom?”
“Upstairs and then the last door.” Maki’s mum said.
“Thank you.”
Yumiko entered Maki’s bedroom.
“Wow…”
The walls were pink and everywhere on the wall were little pictures of family and friends.
Yumiko opened the pink cupboard and grabbed a bag with clothes. When she wanted to go out the room she saw a picture of Maki’s family.
“Hmm there is Maki, Maki’s mum, her brother Yuki and a other man….could that be her father?” Yumiko whispered.


After 20 minutes.

“Maki I’m back!”
“Ah and did you get it?”
“Yes here.”
“Thank you!”
“Eh maki… I saw a picture of your family at the door. The man in the blue shirt is that your father?”
“Yes he was.”
“Ah I see…he was?!”
“Yeah he died at a climbing accident.”
“Oh…I’m sorry…”
“Nah it’s ok I get over it.” Maki smiled.

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« Reply #42 on: September 12, 2006, 09:56:28 PM »
I had to write somethin about maki and yumiko again^^
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Today it snowed. Outside it was really cold.
Yumiko looked outside. From the new Apartment Yumiko and Maki bought 1 week ago they had a beautiful view. It was very quiet were they live. No press no photographs except yumiko.

“Morning…” Maki said.
“Morning. How do you feel today?”
“My head hurts a little bit…and my back feels not so good…”
“Come here” Yumiko said and kneeled on the sofa.
“I will give you a massage”
“That’s nice” Maki smiled.
“Can i..?”yumiko asked and pointed at her shirt.
“Yes do what you want…I just try to relax…”

Yumiko took of Maki’s shirt and opened her bra.
She started to give Maki a softly massage.

“mhhhh that’s very nice….mhhhh…brrrrr your hands are getting cold..”
“Ah I’m sorry!”
“mhhh.. well I’m relaxed now… thank you…”
Yumiko closed Maki’s bra and helped her to get into her shirt.

“it’s cold isn’t it…oh…I’m a bit tired I didn’t sleep well this night…” yumiko said.
“Why not?”
“Well it was such a good feeling to have the first night together in our own apartment”
“Well I slept well…because… I had this on.” Maki pointed at her shirt and smiled.
“Eh? Wow I have the same shirt!”
“It’s yours!”
“Oh…eeeh?!  I didn’t realised that!”
“Stupid girl huh?” Maki laughed.
“Hey..haha…stupid? Come here! Or I will tickle you!” Yumiko said .
“Catch me if you can!” Maki said and smiled like a bad girl.

“Wow look tere”
“Huh? Where?”

Yumiko grabbed Maki and kissed her. “Gotcha!”

“Hmm…you are right” Maki laughed.

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« Reply #43 on: September 12, 2006, 10:26:38 PM »
Ah love... :)

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« Reply #44 on: September 13, 2006, 08:31:29 PM »
aaaand here it is!^^ Ah and gomen! it's part 22^^

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“Good work everybody!” Miki and Aya said.

They had finished there new PV.
“Miki do you wanna go out and drink something?” Aya asked.
“Hm yeah ok. To be honest I  could have a full glass of cherry now” Miki said and laughed.
“Yeah me too! So let’s go!”

The two went to a nice bar in the middle of yokohama.

“A full glass of cherry please” Miki said to the barkeeper.
“Hai. Wait one sec.”
“Hmm… I think I will try a beer.” Aya said.
“Are you shure? “
“Yeah I think so. It is the first time that I drink some alcohol. And Yuko said that beer tastes very good. So I will try it.”
“Do you want something to?” the barkeeper asked.
“Yes I will have a bottle of beer please.”
“Hai. Here you two. Enjoy your drinks!”
“Arigatou!”both said.
“Kanpai!!”

“Ah that was good!” Miki said after 30 seconds.
“Eeh??? You already finished??!” Aya was really surprised.
“Yes that was just what I needed.”

After 1 hour they walked thru the streets.

“Yeaaaah!! Meccha Holiday!!!....hick…”Miki sang and laughed.
“Kanpaiiiii hick baby!! Hick… hahahahaaaa”
“That was fun! Hick….” Aya said.
“yeah hick…”

They were completely full.

“Let’s go to the hotel hick…”
“Uhn yepp…hick”

When they were in the hotel they sat down and looked at eachother.

“That was pretty fun hick…” Miki said.
“Uh yes it was hick…”

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“I will give miki a call and see if she is ok..” Yossie said and took the cellphone.

Beep………………..Beep……………Beep……   No answer……

“Hm.. maybe she is sleeping. Well I will go in bed now too.” Yossie said and went to sleep.

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« Reply #45 on: September 13, 2006, 09:56:07 PM »
The sun made it to get thru the dark snow clouds and shined directly in Miki’s eyes.
Miki woke up and felt fresh.
She couldn’t remember what happened last night.
“Ah my head hurts…eh?”  Miki was suddenly in tense.
“Miki…whats wrong?..ah my head…” a girl said.
Miki jumped up and grabbed her clothes and hided her naked body.

“Aya what the hell???!!!” Miki shouted.
“Eh?!” Aya looked under the blanked.
“I…I’m naked?”
“I can’t belive it…what happened???!” Miki shouted.
“I don’t know!!”
“OK..first we get dressed and than we think!”

3 minutes later.

“Miki it seems that we have sle…”
“I can see that!!!”
“I can’t remember…what did happen?...”
“ I don’t know it too! We just forget this little mistake and continue on our work ok?! “
“Yes…”Aya said.

What should I do?? I tricked yossie…. I can’t belive it! I’m such a fool!

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“Tonight? Me and you?” Maki asked.
“Yes… I thought I t might be nice…me and you…” Yumiko said
“Hm it sounds great!What have you planed?” Maki asked.
“Yeah well…maybe a dinner?”
“Sounds great! In our apartment?”
“Yes…well I must go now I must buy something..well see you later. Love you.”
“Love you too.”
Yumiko hanged up the phone.



Sorry just a little one tonight!^^
Must go sleep now^^

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« Reply #46 on: September 13, 2006, 10:17:45 PM »
:o Bad Miki!

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« Reply #47 on: September 14, 2006, 08:55:07 AM »
hahaha, ;) Maki and Yumiko coming out of the closet? haha~ That I'd like to see ^^

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« Reply #48 on: September 15, 2006, 06:27:53 PM »
Here it is!
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At 3pm Tsunku called.
“”What’s up Tsunku?” Maki asked.
“M..Maki can you pleace come to the office?Quick?” Tsunku said nervous.
“I don’t have time Tsunku can I g…”
“No! no no! You must come now and hurry up !” Tsunku shouted nervous.
“Well..yeah ok…but..”
The line was dead.
“Shit…why now? Yumiko wanted to make a present for me..well I think I will leave a letter.”
Maki wrote a note on a peace of paper and left.

After 30 minutes she arrived…no one was there…no h!p members…no staff members…

“Where are they ?” Maki thought
She took 3 steps and then someone grabbed her.
“Hey! What th mhmhmhmhmhm” Maki couldn’t finish because the man holed his hand against Maki’s mouth.
“Don’t say anything!” the man said and pushed her down the caller.

Suddenly Maki’s eyes were wide open.

They are all here?

All the members were there. They were all tied up.
“I want you money! You all have a lot of it!!” HAHA” the man laughed.

Shit….


“Maki I’m back. Do you wnt to have the…dinner now?....Maki?” Yumiko said and searched the apartment.
“Oh man…where is she?...eh? a note?”
Yumiko looked at it.

Yumiko Tsunku wants to see me…I don’t know why but he sounded nervous. So I will check everything out.
Don’t worry I will be back at 4pm.
Love
Maki~

“Ah I see…well than it’s allright…wait! It’s 5:13pm now! There is something wrong!”
Yumiko ran out of the room. She ran as fast as she could.
She arrived the office building. But she didn’t get in…The maindoor was locked.
“Eh? There must be something wrong!”

I call the police first….

Yumiko called police and said what was worrying her.

“Ok stay there were you are we are right there!” the officer said.
“I can’t wait!! I must go and look what’s wrong!”
“Hey no it might be dangerous!”
“I can’t wait sorry! Hurry up!” Yumiko shouted and hang up the phone.
She grabbed a stone and throw it against the glass door . The Glass braked.

“Yes!”

Yumiko ran thru the corridors. But she couldn’t see anybody.
Then there was someone who talked really loud.
Yumiko went down to the caller and stand behind a door.
“Shit! What is going on here?” She whispered.

“No one can stop me and no one will find you! Not even a little girl who is standing behind a door!” The man shouted and took a weapon out of his bag.

BANG

“Umm….” Yumiko sighed. The man got her directly on her shoulder.
“Hahahaha!!” See!” The man laughed. And looked really angry.

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« Reply #49 on: September 15, 2006, 07:12:18 PM »
hoho^^
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“mmmm..y..mmm..u….m…mmmm….i….mmm….k…..mmmm…o…..”Maki tried to say yumiko’s name.

Suddenly thought about the past.

“I think you make wonderfull pictures of me right?”
“Why does you nose bleed?”
“Do you like me?”
“Yes I want to kiss you”
“You are the best what happened to me”
“I Love You”

Yumiko tried to stand up. She put her hand on her bloody shoulder.

“You….you…big MONKEY!!!!!” Yumiko shouted. She was really angry.

“Stupid girl shut up!” the man shouted and shot again.
Maki couldn’t see that again.
This time he didn’t get her. Well only a little scratch on her cheek.

“You….You are such a fool!  You are scaring all the girls!!” Yumiko shouted and got  nearer to him.
“Stay there!!!” The man shouted and shot again. “umpf….”Yumiko sighed. Now she had a little hole in the right leg. With the last energy she took a stone and throw it against the door.
The man looked out of the door to see if someone is there.
Yumiko pulled herself in front of maki. Maki had tears in her eyes. She tried t say yumiko’s name but she couldn’t because of the tape on her mouth.
“D…don’t…worry….e..verything w..ill be fine…”Yumiko said and kissed her on the cheek.
Yumiko felled down in Maki’s lap. She wasn’t dead but knocked out.

“Uaahhhh” the man screamed when someone grabbed him. The police was there.
The police wanted to bring him out of the building when he said
“Hey…little girl!”
Maki looked up to him-
“Tell you little friend I will be back soon! HAHAHA”

The police took everyone out of the building. The other members were shocked.
“Yumiko!!” Maki shouted
“unnmmm…M…aki…chan…”Yumiko whispered and tried to stand up but she felled in Maki’s arms. She could realise something wet on her cheek. Maki was crying.
“D…don’t cry…”Yumiko said.
“No! you could have die!”
“Well…but im fine…”
“Yeah but you could have die….” Maki said that 3 times but then

“Would you kiss me?” Yumiko asked red.

Suddenly Maki remembered at the past.

“Would you kiss me?”
“Yes…”

Maki smiled again
“yes…”
Maki kissed her.

“Itaiiiiiii!!!!!” Yumiko shouted.
“Whaaat???”
“Ouch…you hurt my shoulder.”
“Ah I’m sorry!!!”
“I was only joking” Yumiko smiled.

“Ah eh sorry but can we take you to the hospital now?” a police officer said.

“eeh?!” both said.
“Well you have a big injury”
“Nah I don’t need to go see I’m fine!”
“Ouch…well…ok than…”
“I will come with you! And when we are home again we can continue right?” Maki whispered in Yumiko’s ear.

Yumiko went red and was knocked out. Knocked out because of love~

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« Reply #50 on: September 15, 2006, 08:20:50 PM »
Wow, how heroic.

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The Glass braked.


BTW this is so cute!

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« Reply #51 on: September 15, 2006, 08:26:06 PM »
great chapters!!! :D

the man... will return!!!! :pen_shocked:

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« Reply #52 on: September 15, 2006, 08:42:43 PM »
thank you^^ and i must say that i am sorry that i have so much mistakes in the text^^ well I'm sitting here with my dictonary^^ I'm half english but I'm still learning it xD so if you have trouble with some words just say it ^^:D

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« Reply #53 on: September 15, 2006, 08:48:33 PM »
Quote from: Gomaki
thank you^^ and i must say that i am sorry that i have so much mistakes in the text^^ well I'm sitting here with my dictonary^^ I'm half english but I'm still learning it xD so if you have trouble with some words just say it ^^:D


But braked is just so cute. I love how foreigners speak English. Not to be condenscending or anything. Actually, I'm in love with accents.

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« Reply #54 on: September 15, 2006, 09:11:00 PM »
Thanks~^^
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The people were talking about that what happened.

Tsunku said to the Press:

“Well we don’t know why or even how this could happen…the members are all a bit shocked. They need a little bit of time to relax, so hello!project will continue in 5 days.”

“Is someone got hurt?” one reporter said.

“Yes. Kasaki Yumiko san is hurt. She was a real hero. In the next day’s I will think about the idea to take her into the hello!project.”

“How do you feel?” Maki asked.
“My shoulder still hurts a bit but I’m fine”
“You really do care about other ones life but risk your own?” Maki said
“Of course I do… and seeing you on the floor…dirty and helpless makes me mad…”
“….but why did you came nearer and nearer to the man?”
“Well I called the police and I knew that they will come quick so I had to distract him…and then he shot..well it doesn’t matter now…”
“It does…I’m worried..he said he will come back…”
“Don’t worry I will be fine!” Yumiko said and took maki’s hand.
“I hope so..:”

[tock tock]

“hmm…yeah come in”

It was Tsunku

“How do you feel?”
“A bit better..”
“I wanted to say thank you that you saved the girls..”
“No problem Tsunku.”
“I thought about the idea that oyu might can joy Hello!Project too. What do you think?”

“No thanks Tsunku…”
“Eeh why not?”

“Well… that means that I can’t have a relationship with maki anymore..but I love her and wont give her up”
Maki went red.
“Is that so?” Tsunku said and smiled.
“Yes!”
“Well maybe can it change your mind when I set an age in the rule?” Tsunku said.
“Well yes…!” Yumiko said.
“Ok! So the new rule will be like that:  Everyone can date others if they want but only at age 20.”
“That’s nice!”
“Thank you Tsunku!”
“Yeah and welcome to Hello!Project! See you soon” Tsunku left.

“You are a real hero! And my hero !” Maki said and kissed her.

Everything was correct. The next day Yumiko could leave the hospital again.

In the Bathroom.

“Will that be there for your hole life?” Maki asked and pointed at the scar.
“I think soo… but I will look at it and think of you” Yumiko said and smiled.
“Come here!” Maki shouted and hugged Yumiko.

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« Reply #55 on: September 15, 2006, 09:40:17 PM »
The last one for tonight^^ tomorrow i will continue^^
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“Yossie I’m back home again!” Miki said.
Yossie was sitting on the sofa and look t Miki with tears in her eyes.
“Yossie?”
She stood up and stand in front of Miki. Suddenly she hugged her.
“Miki…”
“Yossie what is wrong?”
“I’m so happy that nothing happened to you!”
“What happened yossie?”
“Well while you was in yokohama all the other members and I was kidnapped by a older man…”
“What?! Are you ok?! Do you get hurt?!”
“No I’m fine! Everyone is fine…I only thought that someone was in yokohama and kidnapped you too…”
“Nothing happened to me…”

Miki couldn’t tell Yossie what was going on between her and Aya …not yet… but she wanted.

Miki and Yossie were just talking and talking about what happened with the members.

Rika was sitting in the staffroom. Thinking about yesterday.
“Hi Rika! Are you ok?” Aya said.
“No I’m not…”
“What’s wrong?”
“Well yesterday we all got kidnapped and that bitch safed us…” Rika was looking angry.
“You mean Yumiko? I’ve heard about that in the news…horrible that someone had done this..”
“That is not what I’m talking about!”
“Sorry… anyway how is maki? She was knocked out by something last week right?”

Rika didn’t say anything.

“Oh no don’t tell me you…”
“I didn’t want it!! I didn’t do anything…there was a little bang outside so that the building shacked a bit….and then there was a big box on the shelve… it felled right on Maki’s head…I didn’t know what to do…if I stayed there they all thought it was me…so I took the box and ran away…”
“I see… well I must go now…” Aya left.


In the dressingroom

“Man why age 20?...” Ai said.
“ I don’t know it aichan…unfair…” Risa said.
“Yeah…but we did hide our secret really got…we only must get shure that it will be so in the future”
“Yeah we can try it!”
Risa hugged Ai.

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« Reply #56 on: September 15, 2006, 11:02:56 PM »
Happy birthday to Ai... One day late... Ai and Gaki, yay!

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« Reply #57 on: September 16, 2006, 04:53:15 PM »
it was her birthday? oh well happy bday to her.

Yay for new chapters! and yay to heroic yumiko!!!

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« Reply #58 on: September 16, 2006, 06:55:57 PM »
Ah~ Well happy B day Ai~ i only have maki's b day in my head xD i will post a new chapter later or tomorrow^^

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« Reply #59 on: September 16, 2006, 07:12:17 PM »
yeah! Maki's B'day is near too ^^
mm.. i think i haven't commented here before.. gomen :P
that's what I call a positive fic XDXD

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