Eri Kamei vs. Morning Musume

[meowchi]

I thought this'll be fun;
 
The 1st one who correctly guesses the killer AND provides the intent/motive/why you think it's based from the fic, get's a free prize!
 
This Kamei agency card!
 

 
I accidently bought 2 of these, so I'm giving away my extra card to one of my lucky readers!
 

Hmm, smoke was the killer, I see...

Actually, Risa just passed out! But will she die in the plane crash, or at the hands of a killer? Kamei perhaps? Miki? Ai?
 

If the killer's already been mentioned, has to be one of them.. does Konkon and Makoto still count here? I remember them being mentioned in some chapter

This fic is all about current MM only; so sorry (to the mako and konno fans), they aren't in this story...

[Blu-Cherri]

Eri - because she's tired of Miki and everyone being rude and mean.  PLus her dream shows she was thinking about it.^^

[meowchi]

Eri - because she's tired of Miki and everyone being rude and mean. PLus her dream shows she was thinking about it.^^

That wasn't a dream! The 1st entry happens 3 days after the 2nd entry... Is it Eri? Is it Miki? The killer will be announced when this fic ends, along with the " winner " !

[Blu-Cherri]

oooh riight!
Don't worry about me, I just miss a lot of the obvious things lol.

ok so i change the dream bit to -it shows that the others thought she did it.

[Owaranai_sLaVe]

I re-read my first post, and I think even I thought it was unclear.

I think Yossui is the killer not only because of Eri's dream buuttt : Yossui and Miki are always viewed as the couple (that they are ), so if Gaki dies like in the dream, theres only one motive for Yossui. Since Eri is so mad at Miki, Eri probably killed her (accidentaly or intenetionaly) initially becoming a killer herself. And since Eri and Risa have been spending lotsa time together, Yossui probably found an oppurtunity to kill Risa, which in turn would affect Eri. So thus, Yossui becomes a killer too, but hers would be more intentional...

-Owaranai_sLaVe

[Sukoshi]

That wasn't a dream! The 1st entry happens 3 days after the 2nd entry... Is it Eri? Is it Miki? The killer will be announced when this fic ends, along with the " winner " !

Hehe I find this amusing how all of us readers are saying it's a dream while meowchi san keeps saying it isn't =D  Hehe before you have to repeat yourself  again I'll just tell you we keep saying it's a dream because we are in denial

Now in the first chapter of the story crazy knife welding Yossie clearly stated that Eri killed Risa...so Eri would be the killer but that's got to be too obvious (or is it...)  

at this point I would say that Yossie is the most suspicious because she's was asleep on the plane all this time...which is hard to believe since everyone else was awake...and she does disappear to the cockpit leaving the rest of them behind but as for her motive I have no idea...

hum...no one is mad at Risa at this point but Miki is mad at Eri...and Miki definietly has a big role in this story...

argh...hard...I'll go back to thinking now....and guess later...:pen_what:

[nederay]

is meowchi staying in singapore?

[ferrar1]

I would guess Reina.

Ai + Gaki =

Reina Ai, so must kill Gaki to get Ai

ok im just bull shitting around :tfr9a7wg:

Real Guess

1. You mentioned tears on Yossi's face while chasing Eri. Meaning Yossi must have lost some1 dear. Though Risa doesnt fulfill that condition, Miki does.

2. One more point, Eri didnt know who was chasing after her till she saw yossi's face. This means she didnt know why she was chased after, so she must not have done anything wrong. This means she must have been framed of a murder she did not commit.

3. Gaki saying bye to Ai on the plane seems to mean she knows she will die.. hmm

linking all the above points, Risa killed Miki, which in turn led to Yossi killing Risa and then Yossi had to kill everyone to shut their mouth up.

[meowchi]

BGM: To the Cockpit! (4.64 MB)

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Miki Fujimoto
Flight 707
October 8, 11: 57 AM



Miki runs.

With her chest inward, she struggles to balance herself on the unstable floor. Lights violently flicker on and off.
The smoke isn’t as bad up here, Miki thought. Better hurry before it gets worse.

Pumping her arms, she elegantly leaps over piles of debris. Sweat drifts down her neck, giving her a glossy glow. Her eyes focus forward. She’s about halfway through the cabin.

God, I hate flying.

Suddenly, the plane tilts forward, violently throwing Miki into the air. She slams against the cabin wall. Miki gasps in pain, struggling to regain herself.

I really, hate flying.

A seat slams next to her, nearly smashing her head.
“ S-shit! “
Another follows. And then another. Another. Her arms cover her head as more debris plummets around her.

I’m on the wall, Miki thought. We’re free falling.

Slithering on her elbows, she crawls across the wall, towards the exit. Gravity still pulled debris toward her, but she didn’t care. Getting to the cockpit is her only priority.
At least, for now.

Finally reaching the exit, she carefully peers into it. Just below her, a seventy foot drop. The other exit, gracefully sat at the bottom.
She pauses. “ You’ve picked a hell of a day to be a front-girl. “

Miki knew she didn’t have much time. Her only two choices would be:

- A) Jump, grab hold of something, anything, to break her fall and eventually land safely. Or,

- B) Carefully climb down and hope the plane doesn’t crash before she reaches the cockpit.

Taking a second glance, she makes up her mind.
Jump.

Miki takes a deep breath and slowly brings herself to a kneel. Her hair hangs from her head as she gazes at the drop.

On the count of three, She thought. One… Two…

With no second thoughts, Miki jumps, her arms crossed against her chest. Light smoke rips past her as her body gains speed. The air screams through her ears.

Falling… too fast.

She looks to her side. The row of seats, visible only a second ago, is now one entire blur.

Grab one! Miki screamed in her head. On the right!

She braces herself and expands her arms. Various seats, burn across her hands as she speeds past. A sharp pain engulfs her fingers. It happens too fast. Before she could think, her hands graze another. This time however, Miki holds on.
Her body abruptly stops in mid-air.

“ Nngh! “ Miki cringes.

Her underarm muscles cramped as they forcefully stretched. She clenches her teeth, hoping to reduce the pain. With her legs dangling like a flimsy doll, Miki looks down.

She stopped at about ten feet, prior to the bottom.

A little too close for comfort, Miki thought as she let herself go. That can’t happen again.

She lands and eventually kneels to gaze down the second exit. Miki focuses. Something catches her eye.

“ There! “ Miki exclaims. The cockpit doors are in view. Along with another seventy foot drop.
She clenches her fists in preparation for the next jump, but a raw sensation stabs her fingers. Miki flinches. She slowly unclenches her hands. Most of her fingers exposed raw flesh; blood slowly seeped out the outlines of her fingerprints.

Must’ve burned them back there, Miki thought. Ignore it.

As Miki readied, the plane slowly regains itself, allowing Miki back onto the floor.

Somebody is in the cockpit. My lucky day, after all.

Sprinting with a slight limp, her legs continue forward.
The doors are shut. Nothing I can’t handle.

Miki speeds up and braces for impact.

Now!

With her eyes shut, she bursts through with her right shoulder, leaving debris scathed everywhere as she falls. A violent pop afflicts her shoulder. Miki quickly clutches it in pain.
She’d dislocated it.

Having the wind literally, knocked out of her, she slowly opens her eyes.
A blur.

Nothing but a blur. Miki squints, hoping to regain herself. As the blur fades away, something cold touches her forehead.

A pistol.

A pistol comes into view.
A pistol, pointed between her eyes.

[rndmnwierd]

Poor Miki, going through all that trouble just to have a gun pointed at her head.

[ferrar1]

Grr whoever points a gun at Miki is gonna get it bad

Back to the story, you made Miki sounds like she is some super woman eh lol.

What i'm surprised is how the girls manage to survive the plane crash.. hmm...

[Sukoshi]

Ah!  Okay so I'm voting for the person with the gun because frankly that can't be good!

seeing as how all the other girls are still suffering in the smoke pit back there and the only other person not there is Hitomi....hum....can it be?

and as for the crash...seeing as how someone is in control in the cockpit (gun person)  I guess that's how they make it to the island alive.

[Owaranai_sLaVe]

WOW... that was as suspenseful as a movie! Its like LOST and i havnt even seen the series!

Really suspenseful...

@ferrar.... Hmmm..... It could very well be Yossui for those reasons... nice

-Owaranai_sLaVe

[Yuuyami]

-gives Miki a hardhat-

;_________;...

Do continue.

[lil_hamz]

Ah!  Okay so I'm voting for the person with the gun because frankly that can't be good!

seeing as how all the other girls are still suffering in the smoke pit back there and the only other person not there is Hitomi....hum....can it be?

and as for the crash...seeing as how someone is in control in the cockpit (gun person)  I guess that's how they make it to the island alive.

I'm thinking the gun person isn't Yossi. It could be any of the girls since its such a mess now and anyone be it. Including the girls who supposedly fainted. Hmmmm....
My guess for the killer is *drumroll* between Sayu, Reina and Ai  Lets see if it can be further narrowed down with the next chapter.

[meowchi]

is meowchi staying in singapore?

I think you got the wrong meowchi!
 

Let's see... after that ordeal, Miki ends up with a messed up leg (limp), dislocated shoulder, burnt fingers (ouch!), to say to the least!
 

and as for the crash...seeing as how someone is in control in the cockpit (gun person) I guess that's how they make it to the island alive.

My guess for the killer is *drumroll* between Sayu, Reina and Ai Lets see if it can be further narrowed down with the next chapter.

Interesting analysis guys! Expect the next chapter soon!

[len.chan]

well, finally I've been able to read all the chapters 'til now. Love it!
and now my guess...
I now it's a risky bet... but I'm going to say Koharu... yeah.. I don't think that the little Kusumi is so innocent... and that sentence 'Silent, Kusumi just smiles and rubs the back of her head. She looked a bit nervous.' don't know.. something's wrong with that... maybe I'm just thinking too much.. XDXD

Another point... I don't think that the one with the gun is the killer. That person was at the cockpit from the start (someone has to pilot the airplane, right?) and if the killer is one of the girls.., they were all together in the cabin when the airplane began to fall..

aaah~  my head is a mess..:ONfrustrated:

[00HB]

hum.... god fic your got here!
it's interesting how we cannot discover the killer....
but my guess untill now is: REINA
she's the ony one that havent placed any kind of alibi...
Miki-> gun pointed to her head ¬¬' (good enouth for me)
yossie-> possible as well, but I think there would not be a reason to blame kamei if it was really her
Kame-> our hero, not prepared to the flight beforehand
kusumi & sayumi-> freaked out, and I think they lack the guts to do so... xD
ai-> we can read her toughts, it would be strange to her think these things
risa-> DEAD!!!
reina-> stayed awake all the flight, and could be just pretending to faint

hum... to me this is the cenario if the assassination was planed BEFORE the flight....
we don't know what lead to the murder yet...
it could be suicide (dificult, but... who know? ---beside meowchi)
afterall, anything can happen and change everytinhg I wrote...
in the end... I don't DAMN know! xD~~~~~~~~

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Well, maybe I'm just thinking too much, sorry for that ¬¬ (SH and DN fan, afterall)

[rndmnwierd]

You know what? Kusumi did it! *points* The girl's ebil I tell you, ebil!

[kazitakato]

EBIL?? watsdat?? but my guess is Yossi, she's going to pull the trigger on Miki coz she doesn't want any1 to disturb the "flight", since the plane seems to have a flight path....just awkwardly crazy kind of flight path, then she'll frame it on eri and kill risa but blame it on eri again to make the group go against her.

why??

1- Topic says Eri vs MM, so i'm assuming if any1 survives, they'll make Yossi leader and they'll believe anything she says
2-among all MM, Yossi seems to be the only one to be the most eager to board this flight
3-she slept thru most of it, seems like she's prepared for sumthing

why turn all of MM agains Eri??that i can't figure out....humor us o'wise one