Eri Kamei vs. Morning Musume

[Owaranai_sLaVe]

Ebil is another way of saying Evil. It can be used when you wanna sound sorta childish
I say it when Im talking to my Filipino friends as a joke though because Filipinos tend to mix up their V's and B's and their F's and P's.

-Owaranai_sLaVe

[JFC]

I say it when Im talking to my Filipino friends as a joke though because Filipinos tend to mix up their V's and B's and their F's and P's.

Yeah, we say them bice bersa.

[Sukoshi]

LOL I always use the word Ebil  (Instead of it being childish I find it's more like it's the cute way of saying Evil)

and Koharu being ebil is pretty funny cause that makes her cute and evil  you would never use the word ebil if you were referring to something really dreadful or scary but you would use it in a playful way on something that's not 100% evil

[kazitakato]

fufufufu(insert intelligent laugh here)........:ONcool1:i've taken the past 10 minutes to review this story and sum of the recent concerts/h!m etc.....

and i've come to this conclusion:ONglasses:

The killer is Yossi. The motive.....Yossi actually wants to kill Miki coz she blames Miki for Mako-chan(her beloved kouhai), hence becoming the gun wielding pilot and offs one in Miki's forehead. However, to cover up her crime, she'll use her position as leader to manipulate the others into believing that Eri killed Miki n Risa to cover her tracks. Why Mame? Maybe she'll become a scapegoat coz she became a witness to Yossi's crime or trying to erase any evidence...thus killing Mame to shut her up for good and blame Eri for both their murders.....(insert Madlock Theme here)

:ONfarofflook:yatta, now Eri will be mine......huhuhu:ONwahaha:
gtg now, too sleepy.....:ONtemper:....need to get a girlfriend......

[meowchi]

Eri Kamei
Flight 707
October 8, 12:10 PM

   

A gunshot.
A gunshot muffles through the cabin walls. Despite being unconscious, the faint sound suddenly wakes Eri up.

“Eh..?”
She groggily rubs the back of her head. The smoke somewhat cleared up, but it was quiet.
Too quiet.

The engines once roaring, were now dead silent. Her short breaths echo within the cabin. Something wasn’t right.
Am… Am I dead? Eri thought as she hesitantly glances to her side.

Sayumi, sat on Eri’s right, with her eyes closed. Her head rested gently against the seat. She seemed to be at some sort of peace… Or at least, a peace away from what is happening now. Kusumi, on the other hand…

K-Kusumi??
Kusumi was gone.
Undoing her seatbelt as fast as possible, she abruptly stands.
“Kusumi!!” Eri shouts.

No response.
Frantic, she glances around the room. The room eerily stared back.
Eri didn’t know what to do. She never really was the leader type. She’d always take orders from older members, especially Miki. ‘Be a role mo~del!’ Miki would say. ‘Be aggressive!’. Eri would just keep her head down, reluctant to reply. She always did that. She hated it. If there was one more thing Eri could add on to herself after her evident change in Morning Musume, it would be exactly that. Be a leader.
Take charge.

I’m gonna do it… Eri thought. I’m gonna go look for her myself!
With her hand cupped against her nose to combat the light smoke, Eri staggers forward. Her legs tremble against her will, almost as if it knew what she was going to do. She cursed herself for being so timid.

About to venture into the unknown, questions bombard her mind. Just thinking about it made her nauseous. Where is Hitomi? Miki? Kusumi? And what about the gunshot? Eri wasn’t quite sure what to make out of it.
She clenches her fist. At this point in time, she just ignores all the possible dangers. It didn’t matter. All she could do, is just go forward.
Find a way.
Find an answer.

“Eri…”
A voice interrupts her building focus. She stops in her tracks and glances back.
Sayumi!
“Where are you going?” Sayumi struggled to talk. Her eyes, although one closed and the other open, focused directly on Eri.
“You were... awake the whole time?" Eri asks.

Sayumi giggled. “No silly… You woke me up, like always…”
For a brief moment, Eri smiled. No matter how stressful the situation, Sayumi always seemed to cheer her up. Eri loved that about her. She watched as Sayumi slowly regains herself.
“W-Where’s Kusumi?”

Eri paused. “I don’t… really know.”
Sayumi doesn’t respond. She simply starts to unbuckle her seatbelt.
“Sayumi!” Eri screams as she rushes to stop her friend. Her hand slams down against Sayumi’s buckle, stopping her from continuing.
“What are you doing?” Eri says, trying to sound stern.
Sayumi gazes up. Her eyes were pink from the smoke.

“You’re gonna look for her, right?” Sayumi’s voice trembled. “Let me go with you…”
“N-No!” Eri abruptly replied. “You can’t… You can’t.”
She wanted to say more, but the words just didn’t come out. Her throat choked as she watched Sayumi’s eyes get teary. By reflex, she forces herself to look away.
Stop it Sayumi… Stop it.

Eri, of course, wanted Sayumi to come along, but if the plane were to hit while they were both searching… She can't take the risk.
Sayumi’s palm slowly slid against Eri’s hand, pushing it against her. Somehow, her touch felt soothing to Eri; She didn’t want to lose that touch. Eri cringed as her eyes start to swell up.

“Eri…” Sayumi cooed, probably noticing the evident change in Eri.
No response.

“Eri, look at me…”
Sayumi gently gripped Eri’s hand. The buckle squeaks against the newly applied pressure. Eri still maintains her gaze away from Sayumi.
“Eri look at me!” Sayumi shouts. She stomps her feet, trying to emphasize her request.
This time, Eri gives in. Their eyes meet once again, making time itself come to a complete stop.
“You're so mean!" Sayumi says, sobbingly. “What would you do if you were in my position?”
Eri doesn’t say a word. She just rubs her eyes against her sleeve.

“You won’t answer, but I know what you would do…” Sayumi paused. “You’d be doing the same thing.”
Eri nervously brushed aside her bangs. She was right. Eri would be doing the exact same thing, no questions asked. They loved each other.
They shared a bond.

“I-I don’t care if I die, today, on this stupid plane!” Sayumi stammered. “If these are my last moments, let me spend it with you."
A brief pause. Eri flinches, but still doesn’t reply.
“Please…” Sayumi continued. “It’s my wish.”
Another pause. Eri slowly slides her hand off of Sayumi’s buckle and steps back. She smiles.

“That’s my wish, too.”

Sayumi giggles as she rushes to finish undoing her buckle. It was hard to believe how close they’d gotten since their training camp a few years ago. As she stands, Sayumi throws herself onto Eri, hugging her tightly. Eri happily returns the favor.
“Yoesh! I’ll be brave today too!” Sayumi says, excited, tightening her embrace.

"I-I can't... breathe." Eri wiggles.
"Oh!" Sayumi immediately lets go. Her cheeks turn pink.
“OK, Let’s hurry!” Eri takes Sayumi’s hand as they both rush towards the cabin exit.
They both sheepishly hop over piles of debris. Sayumi clumsily kicks aside loose pillows and blankets, knocking them into Eri; it was like kickbase practice all over again.

“Wait! Is this the right way?” Sayumi asks curiously.
Eri suddenly stops, bumping into Sayumi. After an awkward pause, they both stare at each other.
“I-I forgot!” Eri says bubbly. “…I really forgot!”

Dumbfounded, Sayumi looks around. “I think Miki went this way…” She points towards the other end of the cabin, just past the other members. “…But I’m not sure where Hitomi wen-“
Sayumi immediately stops talking. A blank look of disbelief overwhelms her face.
“What- what?!” Eri says, trying to figure out what she’s looking at.
They both gaze into the distance, when suddenly, Eri realizes what Sayumi is staring at.
An empty seat.

Eri tightens her grip. “Risa… Risa is gone too.”

[kazitakato]

:baa60776::baa60776::baa60776::baa60776::baa60776:its here....the nex chapter, and i'm the first to reply.....

let me finish reading it....:ONsmoke:

:ONshock::ONshock:Kusumi's gone?? watde......and so's Mame:ONshock::ONshock:--->looks like Kusumi has the opportunity since she's the closest n earliest to come to.....mame's going to die so no use mentioning her.....but a pity nontheless

:ONerr:its over....my hypthesis out the door....:ONerr:

wait....they still haven't found Yo-chan.....hmmm....:ONglasses:

but the mystery still remains, stay tuned for the next chapter of "Eri vs. Morning Musume":ONxD:

[Sukoshi]

ahh my theories change with every chapter!!  :ONdunno:

Okay so the people that are missing are Risa, Koharu, Yossie, and Miki

I'm going to have to rule out Miki because she trying to save everyone earlier plus she may have been shot by now... :ONbadluck:

and Risa's going to get killed so I'll rule her out too... :ONbadluck:

so that leaves the ebil little one and Hitomi... I still think it's Hitomi though...since she did have a head start running after Miki but it could still be anyone !:ON@_@:

[Owaranai_sLaVe]

DAmn... Love that ending. where the hell is everyone? Is the murderer on the loose and only took the victims? Or is it that the ones that are missing left the plain safely and left everyone elses ass on their own?

-Oawranai_sLaVe

[KrazyForKamei]

“I-I don’t care if I die, today, on this stupid plane!” Sayumi stammered. “If these are my last moments, let me spend it with you."

^^^^ that was the cutest thing I've ever read! It made this chapter amazing ^_^

As for speculations...I think it's Yossie too...Yossie or MAYBE Risa...but most likely Yossie.  It might be Yuuyami's story influencing me but Yossie seems pretty evil....eviler than Risa.

Did Miki get shot??? Thats what im wondering...I hope not *tear* not the Touching Demon

[rndmnwierd]

Ooo intrigue and romance, i love it.

[lil_hamz]

Let me recall..... I used to think Ai, Reina or Sayumi was the one. But with this chapter, everything's thrown out the window. How could sweet Sayumi be it? She loves Eri :baa60776:
Maybe its Koharu? But she's a kid!! AHHHHHHHHH I can't stand it this is so good it hurts :p

[ferrar1]

Meow: Is the plane still descending?

Anyway my guess from 2 pages ago is still valid eh But now sneaky kusumi enters the pictures...

[00HB]

hum.... I still think it's Reina....
But it's very hard to know, as we don't have any hint on what anyone is actualy doing on the plane, as everything is covered in smoke...
Maybe Eri saw Kaharu, Risa and Yossie missing, but it's actualy more than that.  :panda_shifty:
ok... we need some more clues here! :panda_what:

[jafeijai]

aww...MichiKamei rabu

ooooh...the suspense...Risa, Koharu and Yossie are missing...Miki might have just been shot...but where's Takahashi and Reina?! o.O weren't they next to Risa?! o.O GAH >< the suspense!!!

[TydusArandor]

Urrghh, this fic makes my head dizzy @_@. Had to cool down for a bit (1.5 days :evil: ) after reading it. Can't think properly, but its not like I'll figure out anything anyway <_<.

I'll keep observing and clear my head sometime and start to think seriously about who might be it :ONfrustrated:

The latest chapter was sweet even in a situation like that

[ferrar1]

erm, meowchi we need updates

[Tanachan]

Updates please!

[Blizzard]

I third the "update please" motion.  :baa60776:

[Yuuyami]

-bribes with cookies-

I find it annoying when people start a story but never finish it, especially if it's a suspenseful story, roffle.

So if you don't update soon, don't find it odd that I somehow happen to turn up in your front door with weaponry xD

[jafeijai]

I fifth this motion!