Lol I think this is the most attention this thread has ever gotten. Why am I not surprised it comes at a time when the talk involves OTN?
Sorry if I unveiled a big secret of your gender by the way
, but I really didn't even think about using those pronouns when I was just talking about your writing and even recommending you! (not that you need the publicity I think... *cough* not that my references are a whole lot of publicity in the first place, lol) It seems that so many people I know well online want to keep silly things like that hidden that it's hard for me to keep it straight and not slip up.
Personally I don't care lol, although I did play an online game for a long time in which everybody thought I was a girl the whole time... >.> I guess it's just too natural for me to use generic pronouns if I know the sex of the person I'm talking about.
Ok *clears throat* didn't need to write an essay about that... haha. Although, I actually
did one time if I remember right... Me and my social studies.
But what I actually wanted to say: Thank you rokun for this awesome fic! Loved it from start to end. Though, like someone mentioned before, a few paragraphs here and there would have increased the readability 100% ^^
Hey coachie! Glad to hear from someone else who's read something of mine.
Although I think I saw you post in some story of mine at some point, didn't you? I had a question though to your comment to help me improve my writing... What do you mean by "a few paragraphs here and there"? I try to make complete paragraphs as much as possible, although I claim to be no expert of doing so, but sometimes especially in dialogue-heavy parts there end up being a lot of short ones. I guess I've just always been a proponent of a separate new paragraph each time the speaker changes (that's how I was taught in grammer skewl! at least I think... it's been way too many years now, lol). Was that what you meant? Or did you mean something else that I'm not getting?
Thanks again