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« Reply #120 on: December 29, 2006, 01:37:10 PM »
Ahh.. Long chapter is great!!

So much information to grab. Man, this dude is so awesome. Turning into a villain is really a waste of talent for him. He could be a good Guardian.

Just my opinion. Btw, it's good you make it unlike what I have in my head. lol

Ichiro, the bastard. Wait until those guardians break your cyborg bones!

I wish Aichan is safe from this two bad guys.

Thanks wordsworth for this new chapter!

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« Reply #121 on: December 29, 2006, 01:39:27 PM »
ahh the things people will do for so called love, Tezuka may not be such a bad guy in the end we'll have to see on that one.


  As for Ichiro I hope M beats him to a bloody pulp before dismantling him, he deserves no less for what he's done.


Awesome chapter, keep up the great work.

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« Reply #122 on: December 29, 2006, 02:54:55 PM »
wow...the origin of Graft did appear in the next chapter, i was joking when i mentioned after the chapter before XD oh well, yay for wordsworth~ :D

it's interesting how everything revolves the idea of love though. Tezuka created Graft because of his love (or obsession) for Takahashi; R's still around because he cares for Takahashi; etc etc. the power of love indeed...

awaiting another great chapter, wordsworth. i'm sure you won't disappoint! :D

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« Reply #123 on: December 30, 2006, 08:01:35 PM »
ChrNo made a new strip again(thanks a bunch!) with a special guest appearance by the E.S.V. herself



We have a bunch of other strips in mind so expect more of them. :P

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« Reply #124 on: December 30, 2006, 11:41:47 PM »
Damn, that's amazing :o

And :lol: at "Meguru stalker".

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« Reply #125 on: January 04, 2007, 08:24:42 AM »
M was loitering around the lobby for he didn't have anything to do. He was not allowed to go out yet because of the injuries he sustained when they encountered Ichiro. He was advised to rest for a while because the upgrades will be conducted in a few days. Since the girls were busy rehearsing for the Kouhaku, it was easier for the other Guardians to watch over them. M got bored and wandered around in the building.

"Dang! Having no girls around makes me feel lonely. I'd be glad even if I could see Hagiwara-san and Okai-san. Even if they call me HG, I'd put up with them. At least I could make someone smile."

M walked towards the elevator to go back to their room. He was surprised when someone was already inside when he went in.

*gulp* Fujimoto-san

Miki had earphones on but she still had that blank look on her face. M bowed but she gave out no reaction. M got scared when he remembered about D's story being trapped in the elevator because of her. He stood at the right corner of the elevator, opposite to where Miki was. M observed her. She was wearing a coat but the tight pants she had showcased her well-toned legs. When M saw her new photobook and the DVD it came with, he drooled.

"Fujimoto-san's really hot." he thought. "I wish I had S's glasses with me right now."

I you watched Neon Genesis Evangelion, you would remember a scene where Shinji and Rei were in an elevator and they didn't talk or move and that particular scene was on for like 4 minutes? It was like that until Miki looked at M.

"You know we're not going to get anywhere unless you press a button here, stupid!" she said as she pressed 9 on the panel. "What floor?"
"Ummm..."
"WHAT FLOOR?!"
"14th floor Ma'am!" M said as he bowed down on the ground, like the way servants bow to their masters for forgiveness. "Please don't hurt me."

Miki pressed 14 and now they could feel that they were moving up. M was still kneeling on the ground. Miki looked at him and chuckled. Then she noticed his bandaged hand.

"What happened to your hand?"
"..."
"Too much wanking?"
"..." She sure does ask weird questions.
"Hey, I'm talking to you!" Miki said as he elbow dropped M on the head.
"Ouch!"
"Stop murmuring and stand up. Unless you want to get hit again."
"Okay."
M stood up and dusted himself. But he still kept Miki at a distance.
"You haven't answered my question."
"About the hand? You're right, it got overworked. And it's all your fault!"
"How did it become my fault?"
"It's because of your cursed photobook. You're evil!"
Miki didn't just chuckle this time. She laughed like the time she heard that Rika went blonde and when she saw Sayu slip on H!M. She tried to cover her laughter with her hand but it was no use. M never saw her laugh like this before. Yeah, she laughed in the DVD making of her PB but it wasn't like this.
"Hahaha!"
"Now I was thinking what it would've been like to be Matsuura-san in your Melodies PV, with her legs rubbing against yours..."
"Hahaha!"
"You look hotter when you're wet..."
"Enough with the flattery, I already knew that a long time ago. And trust me, you wouldn't want to be Ayaya. Really now, what happened to your hand?"
"Wanna know what really happened?"
"Sure. I won't laugh."
"Some men thought that I was the Murakami Megumi stalker and they ganged up on me."
"No sh*t? I did hear a story about that. But that's not enough to get my pity."
"Nah. I had an accident. With a motorcycle."
"I see. You ride bikes? That's cool!"
"..." She's gonna kill me if she finds out that I don't really ride bikes.
That's a nice scarf. Where'd you get it?" Miki asked as she touched the red scarf around M's neck.
"Gaki-san gave it to me."
"That's sweet. But she could have given you that personalized scarf they well selling at the shop. I don't understand her sometimes. Haha."
"It's the thought that counts."
"Right. You're not that bad after all."
"Thanks."
"Haha."
"So, when are you going to apologize to me?"
"Apologize for what?"
"You locked me up in the girl's room and now I don't know if I can still face Tanaka-san and the others. Now they think I'm a perv."
"Hahaha. Serves you right."
"I'm not a perv. You tricked me that time!"
"Hehe. And you fell for it."
"That wasn't funn..."
M was cut short when the elevator jolted, stopped was suddenly filled with darkness.
"Oh crap! What a time for a power failure." Miki said as she sat down on the floor.
"I heard stories before that you trapped someone inside an elevator. Are you sure you're not responsible for this?" M asked as he sat down too.
"Of course not! If I were, I wouldn't be here stuck with you, would I?"
"Yeah. Probably."
"Watch your hands, no one else gropes around here except me, understand? And don't use the darkness as an excuse."
"You shouldn't have given me ideas. I always wanted to touch the Fujimoto Miki."
"Try and die! Crap, my phone doesn't have a signal!" she said as she threw her phone.
"Ouch!"
"Oops! Sorry, I didn't see you."
"Look who made darkness an excuse..."
"Okay, you got me there. You can have that if you want."
"Does it have your pictures?"
"Of course. Me with Rika, me with Yossi, me with Ayaya, me with Ai-chan, me with the Berr.."
"Alright. It's mine now." M said as he started playing around with the phone. Then they heard a tone and the phone shook, okay, it vibrated wildly, in his hand that he dropped it.
"Are you sure that's just a 'phone'?" M said as he tried to feel for the phone on the floor. "Found it!"
"Of course! It's a phone. But it does have some other uses..."
"Hey, you actually look cute in some of these pictures." M was able to see a bunch of pictures before it went blank.
"There goes our last source of light." Miki said as she sighed. Don't worry, it'll still work. It's just out of batteries."
"Sure."
M turned on his night vision. He could see Miki sweating a lot because of the thick coat she was wearing so she took it off. She was wearing a sleeveless top, almost kinda like the costume she had for Ribbon no Kishi.
"Sh*t! Fujimoto-san's really heating things up. Damn! I don't know what I might do to her...or what she might do to me. I better switch my night vision off...Alright, I'll just activate it in my right eye..." he thought.
"If you feel hot, you can take off your shirt. We won't see each other anyway." she said.
"You don't have night vision, do you?" M said jokingly as he turned off the night vision for both his eyes entirely.
"Do you?"
Then he felt Miki's hand on top of his. M tried to pull away but Miki wouldn't let it go.
"Damn, I have a feeling she's playing me again." M thought. I guess I'll just have to play her game then."
"I'll tell you a secret. I'm afraid of the dark."
"That's impossible."
"No, it's true. If you weren't here with me, I would have freaked out already."
"Fujimoto Miki isn't afraid of the dark. The dark is afraid of Fujimoto Miki."
"Are you afraid of me?" Miki asked.
"A bit."
"Why?"
"I don't know. Sometimes it's because of your scary look. But I find it a turn on too."
"Haha. You're not the first one who said that. Hey, you never told me your name." she said.
"Umm, Mitsui. My name is Mitsui."
"Wow. You're not related to Aika, aren't you?"
"Nope. Now it's my turn to ask you a question, Fujimoto-san."
"Yes?"
"I thought you only liked girls?"
"Who told you that?"
"I can't remember who I heard it form but it IS obvious. And it shows especially when you're with Matsuura-san."
"Yeah, yeah I like girls. But I like boys too. It depends on what I'm feeling at the moment. Why'd you ask me that?"
"It's because you're straddling me?"
"You don't like it?" Miki said as she took off her top. M didn't see it but he could feel Miki's body temperature as she pressed herself on him.
"It's uncomfortable..."
"It's because you still have your pants on! Alright, I'll take 'em off for you..."
"I think that's enough, Fujimoto-san."
"You can call me Miki."
"I think that's enough, Miki-san."
"You know, I've never done it inside an elevator before. And being trapped with you suddenly just turned me on."
"Hey, What are you doing? Get your hands off there!"
"This is what would've happened if you didn't faint back then. Ever wondered what my lips tastes like?" Miki whispered as she bit his ear.
"I think you're going too far...."
"Why? Is that scarf around your neck some kind of leash from Risa-chan? Are you her slave or something?"
"No I'm not."
"Then why are you telling me to stop? Wait, is this going to be your first time? Don't tell me you're a..."
"What if I am?"
"Don't worry, I'll be gentle with you. And I won't tell Risa-chan about this."
"That's not it..."
"If that's the case, there's no way I'm letting her be your first..." Miki said as planted her lips on M's. M didn't understand. He wanted to do this a long time ago but part of him felt guilty.He just closed his eyes and savored the moment.It probably won't happen again anyway. And he could just erase her memory, in case things get extreme.
"For a first-timer, you sure are a good kisser."
M opened his eyes and saw a small, circular red light. Like the ones from a laser pointer. He then turned on his night vision.
"Umm, Fujimoto-san, what happened to your eye?"
"What's with my eye?" Miki asked.
"It's...."
Miki placed her hand in front of her face and saw the same red light M saw on her palm.
"Damn, my contacts must have fell off..."
"What are you?" M said
"You don't need to know. I'm gonna make you forget about it anyway. Let's just do it, okay? I'm halfway through..."
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"Check. 98. 92. 80. 75. 69. 68. Ayaya's going home already...Oh well. At least he didn't disappoint me this time."















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"NNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOO!"
"What's wrong with you M?" K asked.
"He probably had a nightmare where he was wearing HG's costume." D said. "Or that he was assigned to be Gatas' practice goalie."
"Since when did you guys come back? How did I get back on our room? I can't remember anything that happened the past two hours!"
"We've been here for almost an hour." S said. "When we came back, you were sleeping on the couch."
"With my clothes on?"
"With your clothes on. Why?"
"I just had this dream about Fujimoto-san. That we got trapped in an elevator, that we did it, and that she was a Guardian too."
"Now that's a scary dream?" said D. "Imagine if she could erase memories..."
"Yeah, but some part of it's probably hot. Too bad we can't save our dreams as ISOs and burn it to DVD." added K. "So we can have a remembrance..."
"At least she didn't pull a prank on you this time." S said.
"Yeah. But that dream felt so real. I'm gonna need a shower." M said as he stood up and headed for the bathroom.

As he was taking his clothes off, he noticed a lump in one of the pockets of his pants. He looked closer and he pulled out a cellular phone. Not just a cellular phone, for it was Miki's phone. His eyes widened as he looked at what he just got from his pants. At first, he hesitated to turn it on. After a few more minutes, he finally did it. The phone didn't have a lot of power left but it was enough for M to browse through some of its directories. He was hoping to see some pictures of Miki but there was only one left in the phone's memory. He looked at it anyway.

It was Miki with a funny face, holding a marker. And it was taken just a few hours ago.

M looked at himself at the mirror to see if he had thicker eyebrows or a mustache drawn but there were none. He took the rest of his clothes off to check if Miki wrote something on him. He was relieved when he didn't find any markings on his body. He was about to turn the shower on when he saw something that was not on his hand before. It wasn't the bandage. It was something on the bandage. Miki did write something on him. But not like the ones a vandal would write on somebody else's property...

Thanks!

M didn't know if he should smile or not.




 








Then he woke up.

Again.

The first thing he saw was the white ceiling, the same thing he first saw the very first time he opened his eyes. He looked around and he was in the clinic. He tried to sit up but someone was pulling down his blanket.
"Gaki-san?"
Risa fell asleep on the chair next to his bed.
"Gosh, Gaki-san's still cute even when she's sleeping." he thought.
"Michii-kun..."
"I can't believe she's saying my name in her sleep. At least I know she dreams about me..."

M was about to get off the bed when Risa started talking again.

"...wait...that's not...right"
"I wonder what kind of dream she's having. Sounds like a kinky one."
"...don't go there...stop...."
"Oohh, I think I know what's next."
"...that's..."
"That's what? That's what?"
"...that's the ladies room..."
"Damn!" M said as he slapped his forehead "I thought she was having a nice dream with me in it. Oh well."

M got off and stood. Carefully and gently he carried Risa and placed her on the bed. Then he pulled the blanket up to her shoulders. He wanted to kiss her but he didn't. Others would have probably stolen a kiss from her. But not M.

"You weren't able to go to the rooftop today because of me so I'll go up there for you now, Gaki-san. I don't know why you're so kind to me, even if I don't deserve that kind of treatment.Thanks a lot for everything." he said before he went out of the room.










Just as she heard the door close, Risa opened her eyes.
"It's because you’re special to me, Michii-kun..."
« Last Edit: January 04, 2007, 11:47:37 AM by wordsworth »

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« Reply #126 on: January 04, 2007, 08:31:28 AM »
Obviously, I got a COEUR overdose during the weekend...
(I think it's my new favorite foreign word...)

The first ''plan''(coined from makistar) was to write about the girls in Feudal Japan, where they are ninjas and samurai protecting a shogun (imagine Sakura-gumi vs. Otome-gumi with ninja techniques, wearing LOOSE SAMURAI GEAR, hacking at each other.Some of the other H!P girls will get into the fray eventually, H!P kids as trainees, MKB as the hit squad, Coconuts Musume as the import assassins, etc.)but I felt that it was going to need some history,a bit of research and it would be complicated so I switched the setting to sci-fi(if this can be considered sci-fi).

I was supposed to say this after the last chapter of this fic, but during the initial stages of Detonator M, Miki originally was supposed to be the cyborg and the one protecting the girls but she would probably end up frisking the girls every now and then and the fic would end up in the Perv section.

Miki's fun to write about. She's complex and unpredictable. Who knows, maybe someday, someone will make a fic about cyborg Miki or ninja samurai Miki.(or DA MAN Miki)

I had a couple of dreams like that before. Not Miki ones but dreaming and waking(waking, without an 'n') up inside a dream.(I did have Miki ones before though and they were, how should I say it, "struggle-breaking"). Those kinds of dreams where you know that you're dreaming so when you open your eyes, you're on your bed then after you walk around,talk to some people and do some of your daily tasks, then you open your eyes and you're staring at the ceiling. I'm not sure if you guys get those kinds of dreams too.
« Last Edit: January 04, 2007, 04:48:24 PM by wordsworth »

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« Reply #127 on: January 04, 2007, 10:22:50 AM »
ooh story's looking cool!
Miki's funny-ish, I really like this story! ^^ It's really well written!

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« Reply #128 on: January 04, 2007, 06:55:32 PM »


Wow, I though I can't finish it in one read.. *phew*

A nice long chapter! Maybe longer than longcat? XD

Too many hot actions make me sweat. Lol, really like this one. Btw, I though miki is one from the bad guys minion.. How come she has that beam?

Many perverted humour lol. I wonder how miki's COEUR pics looks like. Don't have the urge to grab it yet..

Needs moar kids dose pls.. XD Anyways, thanks wordsworth for providing a good new chapter to read!!


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« Reply #129 on: January 05, 2007, 04:18:34 AM »
Ok, my first thought on the new chapter was that it was going to have a mini-story along the lines of the KR Faiz movie ("paradise lost" XD)

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M walked towards the elevator to go back to their room. He was surprised when someone was already inside when he went in.

*gulp* Fujimoto-san
Just from this you know it's gonna be an interesting chapter. :D



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If you watched Neon Genesis Evangelion, you would remember a scene where Shinji and Rei were in an elevator and they didn't talk or move and that particular scene was on for like 4 minutes? It was like that until Miki looked at M.
I have! I remember that scene! :w00t:



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*Miki flirting with M* section
Dayum that's hot. :o



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"Check. 98. 92. 80. 75. 69. 68. Ayaya's going home already...Oh well. At least he didn't disappoint me this time."


Oh......mah......FUCKING.......GAWD!!! :ON@_@: She's a secret Guardian! More importantly...she's AYA'S GUARDIAN!!! It's gonna be an I vs Miki showdown!!!

/me starts chanting - Miki...Miki...Miki...Miki...Miki...Miki...Miki



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He was about to turn the shower on when he saw something that was not on his hand before. It wasn't the bandage. It was something on the bandage. Miki did write something on him. But not like the ones a vandal would write on somebody else's property...

Thanks!

M didn't know if he should smile or not.


...

 
Then he woke up.

Again.
Sucker. :lol: :lol: :lol:



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"You weren't able to go to the rooftop today because of me so I'll go up there for you now, Gaki-san. I don't know why you're so kind to me, even if I don't deserve that kind of treatment.Thanks a lot for everything." he said before he went out of the room.

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Just as she heard the door close, Risa opened her eyes.
"It's because you’re special to me, Michii-kun..."

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww...sweet Mame-chan. :inlove:

Good job wordy!

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« Reply #130 on: January 05, 2007, 09:15:46 AM »
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Obviously, I got a COEUR overdose during the weekend...
(I think it's my new favorite foreign word...)

The first ''plan''(coined from makistar) was to write about the girls in Feudal Japan, where they are ninjas and samurai protecting a shogun (imagine Sakura-gumi vs. Otome-gumi with ninja techniques, wearing LOOSE SAMURAI GEAR, hacking at each other.Some of the other H!P girls will get into the fray eventually, H!P kids as trainees, MKB as the hit squad, Coconuts Musume as the import assassins, etc.)but I felt that it was going to need some history,a bit of research and it would be complicated so I switched the setting to sci-fi(if this can be considered sci-fi).


OMG!!!!! I had the same idea. But I just wanted to write about Sakura-gumi and Otome-gumi. Later I decided against it cuz my writing sucks anyway and if it were to involve history it would suck more :lol:

But if you were to write it I'll be your #1 fan :yay: Please write it? :baa60776:

And man that strip is the best! ChrNo is pure talent. Would there be a chance of a Risa and M strip?

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« Reply #131 on: January 06, 2007, 02:24:35 AM »
I just realized something as I woke up today...the whole bit about Miki being a Guardian was just part of M's dream, wasn't it? :o After all, he woke up a second time after waking up from the "elevator" incident. :o :o :o

So, she's not really Aya's secret Guardian? We're not going to see her kick some rebel Guardian ass?

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« Reply #132 on: January 06, 2007, 03:40:04 AM »
@ Blu-Cherri - thanks! Yeah Miki's cool and funny. I'll try to involve some of the older girls too next time.

@ Ziggy -  I have something planned for H and the Berryz in the next chapters. About the urge to grab Coeur, Miki-sama will appear in your dreams and tell you that you have to get it. NOW XD

@ JFC - that scene in NGE was the most memorable for me because there was nothing to remember about it at all XD. Yeah, cyborg Miki was a dream. Or maybe it wasn't. Maybe she can just not only erase memories but manipulate them as well..:o more importantly why were you dreaming of cyborg Miki :o :P

@ lil_hamz - I don't know if I can write ninja samurai musume, alone that is. Maybe if we can get a group of other writers together, we can make this fic possible.:D About Risa and M strip, Risa won't be stripping anytime in the fic because that's naughty. But M, maybe in the next chapters he gets to strip. Oh, you were talking about comic strips? :P
« Last Edit: January 06, 2007, 03:46:30 AM by wordsworth »

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« Reply #133 on: January 06, 2007, 08:39:43 AM »
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@ JFC - that scene in NGE was the most memorable for me because there was nothing to remember about it at all XD. Yeah, cyborg Miki was a dream. Or maybe it wasn't. Maybe she can just not only erase memories but manipulate them as well..:o more importantly why were you dreaming of cyborg Miki :o :P

Oh c'mon kumpare...as if you REALLY need to ask me that. :D :ONwahaha:

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« Reply #134 on: January 23, 2007, 07:50:32 AM »
I think i should be in charge of requesting writers to update their fics.

i hereby REQUEST for an update because this is 1 of my favourite fics

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« Reply #135 on: January 23, 2007, 08:00:10 AM »
^ Don't worry, I'm working on not just one, but two chapters right now. If Miki-sama wills it, they will be up later this week :D

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« Reply #136 on: January 24, 2007, 06:41:07 AM »
The Guardians were asked to assemble in the conference room somewhere in the building. M had already recovered but he still had some bandages on so that the girls won't get suspicious. For the first time, he was able to see some of the other Guardians aside from K,S,D and H.

"Who's the chubby one?" M asked them as he pointed to the Guardian a few seats away from them. He was a bit bulky and he was eating some of the snacks he brought along.
"That's C, Nozomi Tsuji's Guardian." K answered.
"Really? Is he up to it? I don't think he can run after Wild Fans in that condition."
"Don't be fooled by his appearance. He's the only one who can almost match D's speed." said S.
"Yeah, yeah. He's almost as fast as me. But in terms of looks, I'm twenty laps ahead of him." D boasted.
"Yeah, I think it's like that because you cut off some 'weight' that was dragging you down. Har, har!" M teased him.
"I can give you another beating if you like." D answered.
"Come on boys, stop that. You're not kids anymore."
"Fine." M said. "Hey, there's H. I'll ask him to sit with us."

M dragged H to where they were sitting.

"Hey H, what happened between you and the captain? I heard that you were fighting." K asked.
"I told you kid, she doesn't like your red hair and those earrings. You should change your image." suggested D.
"If he turns out like you D, then the other girls won't like him too." M said.
"Yoshizawa-san told me that I look just fine. Shimi-chan and I aren't fighting. We just had a misunderstanding. And it's M's fault."
"Hey, Ishimura-san told me she was your girlfriend. I didn't know that Captain would get jealous. Anyway, any new news with Kumai-san?"
"What about Kumai-san?" H wondered.
"Is a PB in the works?"
"Do you want me to beat you up again?" H said as he cracked his knuckles.
"Just kidding. I already know that C-ute will get a PB in a few months. Ain't that great?"  
"Don't get too close to M, H. His lewdness is contagious. Look what happened to S." K joked.
"Hey that's not true!" M said defensively. "S was the original perv even before I got here."
"Pardon? I'm not a perv." S said as he fixed his glasses. Then they started laughing.
"I don't see Fujimoto-san around." M said.
"How many times do we have to tell you, she's not a Guardian, M. What you had was just a dream." K said.
"Besides, if she was one of us, S would have known because of his glasses." D added.
"Yeah. I checked before and she was normal. Nothing unusual about her." S answered.
"See! I knew it! You use your glasses to peek on the girls!" exclaimed M.
"I used thermal vision, dumbass!"
"Pfft. No need to make excuses S. And besides, all of us are guys here. So, could you tell us some of the details?"

Just then, the dyed haired man entered the room and proceeded immediately to the podium.

"Ehem. It has been confirmed that our enemy is indeed Ichiro. He is somewhat connected to Graft but we are still uncertain if he is responsible for its distribution or if he has any accomplices. Whatever you do, if ever you encounter him, do not engage him. We cannot afford to lose another one of you. Losing A is enough. I know he did not go down without a fight and he was one of the best we had. But please, do not fight Ichiro until we get all the information we need about him. We do not know if he was still the same as before. You were called here today because you will be installed with a few upgrades."

He turned on a projector then returned back to the podium. Then it played a clip made with flash, similar to the Xiaoxiao clips in the internet, where the characters are stickmen. The clip showed one of the upgrades they were getting.

The first is called 'Active Shield'. This will negate 10,000 points of damage from any kind of attack. However, your offensive capabilities will be cut in half. If it reaches zero, you will take the next damage in full. But don't worry, once the AS is broken, your offense will increase threefold."

M raised his hand.

"Yes M."
"Aside from the fact that you stole this from some kind of Square/Enix RPG or it's a cheap rip-off of an Angel's AT field, are you saying that we have to get beat up first so we can power-up?"
"Actually no. You can break the AS anytime you want. But once it's broken, you won't be able to use it again. You'll have to go back to the lab to have it re-installed. And besides, there will be no need to power up just for Wild Fans, you can dodge their attacks anyway. I advise you to reserve it just incase you bump into Ichiro."
"Does it repair itself of do we have to go to the lab everytime it gets damaged?" S asked.
"As long has the AS has at least 1 point, it will replenish every second. You can even adjust the limit to more than 10,000. But if you do that, the lower your offense will get.  The plus side to that is that the lower your set your offense, the higher it becomes when the AS breaks. Any more questions?"

Short buzzing among themselves then silence

"Okay. The next upgrade is regarding the memory erasing procedure. You won't have to tap your fingers a lot of times anymore. Now you just have to tap it once, think of the number of hours or minutes you want to erase in your mind and it's done. But it doesn't stop there. You will now also be able to manipulate their memories. For instance, you can change certain words in their minds. You can change 'Tokyo' to 'Okinawa' or 'Kyoto','JE' to 'H!P', 'Avex' to 'Zetima', 'Koda Kumi' to 'Goto Maki' and so on. You don't have to make up stories verbally anymore when they wake up. You will be able to implant stories directly in their minds. But please be careful with using this. The slightest mistake could mess up someone's personality. If possible, just use it as a last resort.

M raised his hand.

"Yes M."
"Can I use it to make Hagiwara-san and Okai-san stop calling me HG? Can I replace 'HG' with 'Takuya Kimura' or 'Gackt' or 'Hyde' or any from those guys at Johnny's?
"You can. But I don't advise you to do it. Why not let the kids be kids? It won't hurt if they have fun don't they?"
"Fine. Now, is there a way to restore erased memories in case we accidentally delete them?"
"Good question. As a contingency, you will now be able to save the memories of people before they are truly erased. The retention period is only one month though. You will be able to restore it using the same procedure you use to erase them. But this is the catch. While you have it stored in you, their memories will become part of your memory. This way, we might be able to trace where they get their supply of Graft. Any more questions?"

M raised his hand again.

"Yes M."
"Is someone already assigned to C-ute?"
"Why do you ask?"
"Just curious."
"No. There is still no one assigned to them. But we are already working on it."
"Okay. I'm just concerned with their safety."
"Safety my ass. If I know, you just want to make sure no one bothers you when you lurk around during their PB shoot." D said.

The other Guardians laughed then there was some short buzzing among themselves then silence again

"Alright. You will receive the schedule when you will get upgraded. The first ones will be in an hour. It will take only 30 minutes at most. Those who are not yet scheduled, please continue watching over your assignments. Hopefully, the upgrade for all of you will be finished within the day. We had to cut the winner of the Happy 8 Audition to one just because of this so please use the upgrade effectively and efficiently.  Thank you for understanding."

Then the Guardians received the schedule in their email.

"I'm scheduled after lunch." D said.
"I'm in the afternoon." S said.
"Mine will be in a few hours." K said.
"So is mine." H added.
"Hey, how come I get to be the last? 10PM? What the heck?" M complained.
"Don't look at me. The schedule was done randomly in one of the computers. It won't matter if you're first or if you're last. What's important is that you get the upgrade." the dyed haired man said.
"But I have to do some things."
"Like what? Going to the rooftop with Risa-chan?" the dyed hair man asked.
"That's one of em. Hey, how'd you know about that?"
"None of your business. What do you do up there anyway? Please don't tell me you're following the path R took."
"Of course not. I know the rules and I don't intend to break them. I just go there to keep her company. That's all." M answered.
"Good. Take care of Risa-chan but don't get too close."

***
10:01PM in the Lab

It was empty. The lights were turned off.

"Hello? I'm M and I'm scheduled for the upgrade. Sorry I'm late." he said as he turned on the lights.

No answer. He looked around. There were some high-tech equipment, a few servers, some books and manga, Gundam models, etc. Then he stumbled upon a table with some folders. He saw a folder with his name on it. As he was about to open it, he heard a voice.

"I wouldn't open that if I were you."
A man stepped out. M thought he was an old man but in fact, he was just around his mid twenties. He looked like that science guy from CSI; the type who would explain things in a methodical, well-detailed manner instead of just going straight to the point. The man was even wearing a lab coat and thick glasses, complete with a bunch of pens and a large identification card.
"So you're M." the man said. "I've heard a lot about you."
"What if I am? What's it to you?"
"I heard that you're a perv but Niigaki-san likes you for some reason."
"I'm not a perv. Who are you anyway?"
"Hehe. Just call me Dan. I'm one of the developers of the Guardians. Actually I'm the only one left from the original developers. The others who work here now are quite new."
"You're not old. I always thought the guys who made us would look like old geezers from those super robot shows."
"Of course.  I finished high school and college early. I started here when I was just seventeen. And my typing speed is 500wpm."
"Am I supposed to be impressed?"
"No. But as I said, you wouldn't want to open that folder."
"Why? So I won't know about my past?"
"You are right. Everything about you is in there. Who you were, what your name was, what school you went too, what you do on your spare time, everything."
"Then I have every right to see it."
"So what? So you can go back to your parents? So you can go back to your past? It won't help you in any way. You're a Guardian now. It's no use learning about what you were.
What you have to look forward to now is the future."

M hesitated to open it. Dan was right. What's the point of knowing about his past? It will only hold him back. M put the folder down and approached the chair beside Dan. The chair resembled a dentist's chair but it was full of buttons, panels and cables.

"Just get this over with, okay." M said as he sat down the chair.
"My, my. What an emotional kid." Dan said as he pushed a lever on M's arm that revealed a SATA port and plugged a cable.
"..."
"You're really different from the rest. Maybe that's the reason why Niigaki-san likes you so much."
"Tell me Dan, what's the reason you joined this project?"
"I like Morning Musume. I've been following them since they started. They change. They get older. They get prettier. Some of them leave and new girls join. It seems like an endless cycle, but it isn't. It will end but until that day, I'll still be cheering for them. I joined this because I want to see them grow and get better. And that won't happen if they keep getting stalked or start becoming tabloid material."
"I don't get it."
"Of course you don't. There are different reasons why people like Morning Musume. My reason seems to be a selfish one. But if you really like something, even the most rational explanation becomes meaningless."
"True. So, can you tell me more about yourself?"
"Are you hitting on me?"
"Hell no! What made you think about that? I was just trying to find out if we have things in common. Maybe you have some of the photobooks I don't have."
"Like what? The old Berryz PBs?"
"You have them? Can you give me a copy?"
"No. I don't have them."
"Damn! Guess I'll have to stop lurking and get 50 quality posts so I can download em."
"Haha. I think I understand now why Niigaki-san likes you. You're quite a funny character."
"Of course. I'm the main character. I should have a personality. I'm tired of those shows with those laconic, whiney, no personality lead characters. Those guys never get the girls, unless they have looks. In my case I have personality and I have looks. It's like Gaki-san won the lottery or something."
"You look like HG."
"That's what they all say but I don't care. Gaki-san doesn't mind that so I'm fine with whatever you call me."
"Haha. "
"Anyway, who's your favorite member Dan?"
"Abe-san has always been my favorite. But I like the new girls as well."
"Abe-san huh. Well, she is pretty and she sings well too."
"Of course. I suggest you better sleep for a while. This will take long."
"What? I thought it only takes 30 minutes at most?"
"That is if you have a basic Frame. But you don’t."
"Basic Frame?"
"I told you M, you're different..."

***
"Hand over the camera. It will make things easier for you and me." M said.
"No way. I have some pretty good pics of Niigaki here. These will be expensive. Come and get it if you want." the man said as he pulled out a capsule containing a green liquid and pressed it on his neck.
"Green? I thought Graft was blue?" M thought.
The man's appearance changed, as expected. But it was different from the transformations M and the others encountered before. He didn't have the stone-like hide. Now the altered form of the Graft user was somewhat sleek and metallic looking. He looked like a silver Quebeley from the Gundam series.
"What the f..."

But before he could finish what he was saying, the Wild Fan attacked. He punched M. Even if he was able to block it, he was still thrown a few meters away.

"Holy sh*t! My shield is cut in half! Looks like we're not the only ones who got an upgrade..."
« Last Edit: January 25, 2007, 04:20:11 AM by wordsworth »

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« Reply #137 on: January 24, 2007, 07:14:46 AM »
New chapter! :pen_whirl:

My LOL parts:

Yurina's PB :heart::heart:

Xiaoxiao clips :D:D

c-ute guardian :lol::lol:

50 quality posts :lol::lol:

M really asks a lot of question!

C resembles chouji XD Looking forward to his fighting scenes! :pen_nod:

The next chapter preview look like it'll be filled with awesome fighting scenes!

Thanks again for this new great chapter :pen_clap:

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« Reply #138 on: January 24, 2007, 07:35:13 AM »
All I can say is "Hot Damn!"

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« Reply #139 on: January 24, 2007, 05:10:12 PM »
Oh man it ended at the most exciting moment :ONfrustrated:
But I'm still happy cuz there were quite a few Risa mentions even though she wasn't really there :yay:

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